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Horie Yui - True Truly love [Osu|Taiko]

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KinomiCandy

Momochikun wrote:

Hi there ~ Sorry for delay :?
Modding as request, keep in mind that i started modding this a few days ago, so maybe some issues were doubled :o




[Kinomi Hard]
  1. The setting was quite unbalance here because you use quite high SV for 200 BPM song, how about AR + 1 ? if you look it this would be more fit with your pattern. since current Ar was quite low to follow during gameplay compared to the SV and rhytm I'll leave it for now and see what people is going it say about it.
  2. Yet i don't really like the way you skipping 2 - 4 clap rhytm in the music and mapping only the instrument which a "note" and the clap can be really easy to be emphasized by adding a circle, I mean why you didn't add "clapped" circle there 00:10:820 - 00:16:408 - 00:19:937 - 00:57:584 - Because I don't map standard in general and I suck at it. Leaving it like that unless someone else does disagree with me.
  3. 00:05:967 (2,2,2,8) - Some hitsounding suggest here, you can try adding whistles to these slider's head for another emphasize of violin instrument on the music, whistles on downbeat seems not enough to give smooth play at this part imo if you agree pls added so one similiar part at the ending of the song o.< Fixed it.
  4. 00:21:114 (3) - Consider again why you want to stack this on the end, seems weird for a fast rhytm. Stack it with the next 1/2 slider instead would be better pattern to follow imo Okay, why not.
  5. 00:30:231 (1) - Ctrl H this ? flow can be more improved imo, since the current slider's end was pointing the opposite side on which the (2)'s place. Done.
  6. 00:21:996 (2,3) - Try delete the reverse point then adding note with 1/1 slider instead to keep following the vocal smoothly as you did on entire diff
    Done.
  7. 00:26:408 (3,4) - Seems you're using wrong way to stops here, if you want to make a 1/1 blank space, then why didn't you make stop at 00:26:481 - to 00:26:628 - which didn't have any music or vocal on BGm instead of skipping the vocal at 00:26:849 - ? Try this rhytm instead to keep the steady transition and smoother gameplay Done.
  8. 00:34:643 (4) - This slider plays a bit odd without finish hitsound.. Add it on slider's end due to downbeat and to emphasizing that splashing instrument on the music. Strange, I remember I had a finish hitsound there. Oh well, fixed.
  9. 00:35:525 (2,3,4,5) - The placemenf of (3) and (4) was also ruin the flow here because it didn't make any path that give sense against your previous flow, how about arrange them like this for nicer pattern to play ? the small jump for complex vocal and 1/1 stop would really interesting to play imo Done for "now".
  10. 00:52:290 (4) - The rhytm plays a bit awkward here due to the 1/1 stop by a end of 1/2 slider, try change this into a note then 1/1 slider start from 00:52:437 - to keep following the vocals smoothly instead, the transition would be more steady imo It works, but I just wanna keep it like this for now.
  11. 00:56:114 (4) - Try curved this slider downwards so the transition before and after this slider would be more natural. Like this Okay.
  12. 01:01:555 - Add circle here to following the vocal and keep the flow smoothly during gameplay Not needed.
  13. 01:14:864 - The stream were still go on here, so how about add 1 more reverse to 01:14:643 (6) - so it will keep following the drum ? True, but in my opinion I think it's hard to hit the note below after the slider, which is the reason why I did this. Keeping it.

Overall, i think the Insane and Normal is quite enough for rankable state, but i think some flow on Hard can be improved. Also give a look again on your Easy, the diff really needs much more work compared to others, well sorry for my bad mod. I just can't having a proper way to explain you on how to make a good Easy diff, take a look on some easy at recent ranked maps and you'll know how to make good flow and good rhytm.
Anyways sorry i can't mod alternative since it feels really overmapped for my taste, but meh it's your choice :P
Good Luck on the way ~
http://puu.sh/68Fn8.osu
No changes from hoshisorakiseki. Sorry, but thanks for modding!
qoot8123
Hi~ toara and ming~:3/
here is a taiko mod via in-game chat


Red : unrankable issue
Purple : strongly recommend
Black : just suggestion

[General]
  1. remove widescreen support on every diffs

[ Muzukashii]
SPOILER
  1. 00:05:525 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - you follow the instrument here,so i suggest you as follow the previous part on 00:07:437 (15,16,17) - ,00:09:790 (25,26) - ,00:12:143 (36,37) - etc....
  2. 00:14:643 (47) - change to k,sounds better to me
  3. use d d k d to follow the vocal on 00:17:878 (59,60,61) - instead of 00:18:172 (60,61,62,63) -
  4. 00:26:702 (95,96,97,98,99) - try to follow vocal is better
  5. 00:56:702 (38) - move to 00:56:849 - to follow the vocal would be better

Comment
Some part which you follow is not good for me,try to follow vocal or instrument would be better

[ Oni]
SPOILER
  1. 00:34:937 (177,178,179) - i think here could put some note. for example :http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1225340
  2. 01:01:849 (96,97) - reverse these two notes to follow the vocal's stress
  3. 01:07:290 - try to add note,here is a bit empty

Comment
Generally fine to me. but some part is a bit empty. need add some notes.

[ Inner Oni]
SPOILER
  1. 00:27:289 (1,1) - and 00:26:628 (1,1) - reverse to enhance the vocal's stress
  2. 00:35:378 (1,2,1,1,1) - i think the pattern here could change to more challenge pattern like ddkd dk
  3. 00:48:467 - ~ 00:51:408 - how about use this kind of pattern? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1225396 to make this diff more challenge

Comment
Good map in general! Just need more challenge pattern in some part cuz it is inner oni~ 8-)

That's all
Good Luck~ :)
Alternative

hoshisorakiseki wrote:

hello
from PM
taiko difficulty are skipped, sorry.

general:
-->some audio leadin are not same with others.



difficulty:Alternative's Frenzy
00:09:643 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - 9 circles here! try to make a pattern to instead the stack. 
:arrow: Sorry, I intended to use stacking
00:50:231 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the hitsound is like silence.
:arrow: Accept.
01:07:143 (4) - start in 01:07:290.
:arrow: Sorry, I followed vocal section here


good luck.

thanks for modding
http://puu.sh/697tU.osu
mingmichael
qoot8123
Hi~ toara and ming~:3/
here is a taiko mod via in-game chat[/color]

Red : unrankable issue
Purple : strongly recommend
Black : just suggestion

[General]
  1. remove widescreen support on every diffs removed~

[ Inner Oni]
SPOILER
  1. 00:27:289 (1,1) - and 00:26:628 (1,1) - reverse to enhance the vocal's stress okay :3 changed the 5-plets too there with some notes hihii
  2. 00:35:378 (1,2,1,1,1) - i think the pattern here could change to more challenge pattern like ddkd dk yes, but it makes an inconsistent pattern there :c suddenly the 4-plets and 2-plets come at here, and basicly i used triplets for the notes. keep mine here
  3. 00:48:467 - ~ 00:51:408 - how about use this kind of pattern? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1225396 to make this diff more challenge nice idea! changed :3 and i changed 00:51:187 (2,1) - to be kats too for to follow the stream www

Comment
Good map in general! Just need more challenge pattern in some part cuz it is inner oni~ 8-) yeahh :3

That's all
Good Luck~ :)
thanks a lot for your mods, qoot >w<
here's mine~ :3 http://puu.sh/697XR.osu
Alternative
IRC and on calling mod(Easy diff)


SPOILER
04:55 Alternative: 00:04:349 (1) - add finish
04:55 Alternative: 00:06:114 (1) -
04:55 Alternative: clap
04:56 Alternative: 00:12:584 (1) - finish
04:56 Alternative: 00:07:878 (3) - NC?
04:57 Alternative: 00:18:467 (4) - remove slider whistle, and add Normal-hitwhistle
04:59 Alternative: 00:20:231 (2,3) - spacing is not neatly
05:09 Alternative: 00:24:349 (1) - use softsound
05:11 Alternative: 00:26:114 (1) - add whistle on the head
05:14 Alternative: 00:26:114 (1) - move endpoint for 2 grids
05:15 Alternative: 00:26:702 (2) - move headpoint for 1grids left
05:18 Alternative: 00:30:525 (1) -
05:19 Alternative: 00:32:584 (1,2,3) -
05:21 Alternative: 00:36:114 (3,4) -
05:23 Alternative: http://puu.sh/698Kh.jpg
05:30 Alternative: http://puu.sh/698YE.jpg
05:36 toara_fict: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1225588
05:36 Alternative: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1225591
05:41 Alternative: 00:39:643 -
05:44 Alternative: 00:50:231 (2) -
05:45 Alternative: 00:52:584 (2) - Rotate - 21
05:48 Alternative: 00:52:584 (2,1) -
05:54 toara_fict: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/122
05:54 toara_fict: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1225645
05:56 Alternative: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1225649
05:57 Alternative: 00:54:349 (3,2) -
06:00 Alternative: 00:56:114 (2,3) -
06:01 Alternative: 00:57:878 (4,6) -
06:02 Alternative: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1225664
06:04 Alternative: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1225673
06:09 Alternative: 01:01:996 (3) -
06:10 Alternative: 01:05:525 (1) - x256
06:15 Alternative: http://puu.sh/69aA8.jpg
06:17 toara_fict: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1225704
06:22 Alternative: 01:23:172 (3) -
Topic Starter
toara_fict

qoot8123 wrote:

Hi~ toara and ming~:3/
here is a taiko mod via in-game chat


Red : unrankable issue
Purple : strongly recommend
Black : just suggestion

[General]
  1. remove widescreen support on every diffs okay.

[ Muzukashii]
SPOILER
  1. 00:05:525 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - you follow the instrument here,so i suggest you as follow the previous part on 00:07:437 (15,16,17) - ,00:09:790 (25,26) - ,00:12:143 (36,37) - etc.... 00:06:555 (11) - Change d
  2. 00:14:643 (47) - change to k,sounds better to me
  3. use d d k d to follow the vocal on 00:17:878 (59,60,61) - instead of 00:18:172 (60,61,62,63) - Change
  4. 00:26:702 (95,96,97,98,99) - try to follow vocal is better Changee
  5. 00:56:702 (38) - move to 00:56:849 - to follow the vocal would be betterGood :3

Comment
Some part which you follow is not good for me,try to follow vocal or instrument would be better

[ Oni]
SPOILER
  1. 00:34:937 (177,178,179) - i think here could put some note. for example :http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1225340 pertten change
  2. 01:01:849 (96,97) - reverse these two notes to follow the vocal's stress chenge
  3. 01:07:290 - try to add note,here is a bit emptyokay.

Comment
Generally fine to me. but some part is a bit empty. need add some notes.
That's all
Good Luck~ :)
Thanks qoot~ :3

All diff update and standard diff AudioLeadIn: 2000 :3
Kamure
Sorry for very late mod... Procrastination on others things gets me everytime.

Wandering Mod:

General


  • Everyone might as well follow Ts8sz's chorus kiai times:
  1. Kiai #2: Starts on 00:51:408, ends on 00:59:643
  2. Kiai #3: Starts on 01:00:820, ends on 01:07:878
    It feels more exciting that way, compared to leaving it as one whole kiai time or a miniscule break.

    Also figure out a common way to end the final spinner. All, if not most, ended it in different ways. I recommend just silencing the end.

Easy

  1. 00:09:055 (3) - remove the clap at the end of the slider (or add a clap to 00:07:290)
  2. 00:27:878 (3) - add NC
  3. 00:37:290 (4) - add NC
  4. 00:54:937 (1) - remove NC
  5. 00:56:114 (2) - add NC
  6. 00:57:878 (1) - remove NC
  7. 01:05:525 (1,2) - The large jump feels very out of place (especially in an Easy diff). I suggest rotating it counterclockwise (90 degrees) once (Ctrl-<). Then move the last two sliders more or less like this.
  8. 01:07:878 (3) - add NC
  9. 01:24:349 (4) - This slider is in an awkward place (it breaks the flow). Flip the slider (using Ctrl-H) and move to about {x:116, y:176}. Also move the circle to {x:244, y:192}.

Cloud's Normal

  1. No major problems here.

Kinomi's Hard

  1. 00:21:996 (2) - Make this slider curve more around the circle. You are probably going to have to change the whole formation if you want it to more perfect... but this is not as major.
  2. 00:26:702 (4,5,6) - Make the two touching sliders not touch and make (5) parallel to where the ends of the slider would be now be. This is what it would look like.

Alternative's Frenzy

  1. Some cases of overmapping, IMO, but nothing too major.

Ts8zs' Insane

  1. Remove the first and last kiai time. They not as exciting and it doesn't make much sense to have one at the beginning (awkward in general) and the very end (the chorus just passed) of the song.

    Nice use of slider velocity multipliers. I applaud.

Oh and good luck!
Little
Changed my kiai time a bit, silenced spinner end.

Cloud's Normal
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: True truly love.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 51408
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:True Truly love
TitleUnicode:True Truly love
Artist:Horie Yui
ArtistUnicode:堀江由衣
Creator:toara_fict
Version:Cloud's Normal
Source:DIVINA Online
Tags:KinomiCandy CloudSplash16 Alternative mingmichael ts8zs
BeatmapID:335169
BeatmapSetID:123967

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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256,192,46702,12,8,48467,0:0:0:0:
136,104,49055,6,0,P|96:192|144:288,1,200,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,332,50231,1,8,0:0:0:0:
401,261,50525,1,8,0:0:0:0:
331,191,50820,1,8,0:0:0:0:
401,120,51114,1,8,0:0:0:0:
331,50,51408,6,0,P|243:90|147:42,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
83,121,52290,1,8,0:0:0:0:
83,121,52437,2,0,P|104:176|72:272,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
151,331,53172,2,0,L|255:307,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,308,53761,6,0,P|336:260|349:213,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
375,170,54202,2,0,L|215:132,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
131,112,54937,1,0,0:0:0:0:
58,181,55231,1,8,0:0:0:0:
131,250,55525,2,0,P|179:238|226:251,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,304,56114,6,0,L|336:200,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,56996,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,64,57290,2,0,P|206:111|196:159,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
179,204,57731,2,0,P|168:252|183:299,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,344,58172,1,8,0:0:0:0:
307,344,58467,6,0,P|363:298|341:173,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,249,59349,1,8,0:0:0:0:
205,178,59643,1,8,0:0:0:0:
134,249,59937,1,8,0:0:0:0:
63,177,60231,2,0,L|23:137,2,50,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
134,249,60820,6,0,L|173:157,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,143,61408,2,0,L|226:250,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,222,61996,2,0,L|370:130,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
299,59,62584,1,2,0:0:0:0:
199,59,62878,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,129,63172,6,0,P|142:176|132:224,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
122,274,63614,2,0,L|24:295,2,100,0|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
170,261,64349,2,0,P|213:238|240:196,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
286,107,64937,2,0,P|322:140|370:151,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,128,65525,6,0,L|440:232,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
442,324,66114,2,0,L|482:364,2,50,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
355,275,66702,2,0,P|308:261|260:271,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
215,288,67143,2,0,P|167:299|120:284,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,260,67584,1,8,0:0:0:0:
75,159,67878,6,0,L|216:88,1,150,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
350,141,68761,2,0,L|209:212,1,150,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
70,289,69643,1,8,0:0:0:0:
70,289,69937,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,70231,12,0,71996,0:0:0:0:
295,214,72584,5,4,0:0:0:0:
102,163,73172,1,4,0:0:0:0:
244,301,73761,2,0,P|291:314|339:302,2,100,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
102,163,74937,5,4,0:0:0:0:
295,214,75525,1,4,0:0:0:0:
152,76,76114,2,0,P|104:62|56:74,2,100,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,214,77290,5,4,0:0:0:0:
296,313,77584,1,8,0:0:0:0:
250,333,77731,2,0,P|200:339|154:320,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
122,283,78172,1,8,0:0:0:0:
78,193,78467,2,0,P|64:146|75:98,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
111,63,78908,2,0,L|218:48,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
259,41,79349,1,8,0:0:0:0:
330,112,79643,6,0,P|315:158|324:207,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
337,256,80084,2,0,P|347:304|331:351,2,100,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
291,237,80820,2,0,L|175:210,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
146,203,81261,2,0,P|131:155|142:107,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
174,69,81702,1,8,0:0:0:0:
265,26,81996,6,0,P|314:16|361:31,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,66,82437,2,0,P|381:114|392:162,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,200,82878,1,8,0:0:0:0:
354,271,83172,2,0,P|307:285|259:274,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,238,83614,2,0,L|209:131,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
203,89,84055,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,84349,12,0,86114,0:0:0:0:
324,100,86702,5,8,0:0:0:0:
408,148,86996,1,8,0:0:0:0:
434,245,87290,1,8,0:0:0:0:
383,331,87584,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,279,87878,2,0,L|198:304,1,100,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
174,213,88467,2,0,L|270:187,1,100,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,89055,12,0,91408,0:0:0:0:
JUDYDANNY
Hello~ :3
Here's a Taiko Mod.
久しぶりで時間かかったわ。。。。 ><
I am glad if it becomes helpful. :)

My mod is for suggetions. if you dont like, ignore please.
~Taiko~
d is Red Note.
k is Blue Note.
and, D , K is Big Notes .. d,k.
“+ ?” is I like pattern (※example→ add? , remove?
[General]
[Muzukashii]
    1. 00:10:231 (27) - , 01:21:996 (46) – del finish 特に音が大きいわけでもなく小節間を意識させる以外に必要性がない気がしたので。
    2. 01:00:820 (53) – で、ここはfinishでよろしいかと。
    3. 00:14:202 (45) – move 1/2 right. (44) もkでいいと思います。00:13:025 (40) –は音がはっきりしてて00:13:172 (41) – にない2連構成でも違和感はないですが、こちらはそうでもないので 継続パターン作るよりは ドラムにあわせたほうがいいと思いました。
    4. 00:05:525 - ~00:14:937 – remap
      最初は00:05:525 – dから始まるパターンの方が太鼓チックでいいんじゃないかなぁって感じた程度でしたので提案しようか迷いましたがOniのdiffみて構成色が全く違ったので修正しましょう。
      00:05:525 (7) – D
      00:07:584 (16,17) – kd
      00:10:231 (27) – d
      00:10:378 (28) – delete?
      00:12:290 (36,37,38) kdk
    5. 00:21:849 (77) – delete …or move? 00:22:437 (79) -
    6. 00:29:055 (108,109,110) – k * d d . => (109,110) delete or move 1/2 left.
      ボーカルスタートが109でもないので, *の部分に休符を作るなら109.110はなくてもいいとおもいます。
    7. 00:38:761 (141,142,143,144) – 少々個人的な意見になってる気もするので無視してもいいです。
      kd dk はボーカル変化をとっているという意味ではいいパターンですが,dkの部分でかなり違和感あると思いました。 00:38:467 (140) - ~ から1/1で鳴ってる裏音が1小節間だけアクセントになってて強すぎるのと142~143間でドラムも鳴ってることが原因だと思います。なのでここもoo,oo →ooo,oでいいと思います。
    8. 00:54:790 (31,32,33) – ここも31-32間からのベースの音のパターンが代わるのでo,oo> oo,oがいいと思います。
    9. 00:41:702 (10) – k . 00:39:643 (1) -~からのパターン変化形から
    10. 00:53:467 (24,25,26,27,28) - 25move 26~27間. 25で音は鳴ってません。 移動提案部分ではボーカルが伸びてました。 今の提案の代わりに00:53:320 – に移動か 26~27間にmove +53:520に addでもいいと思います。
    11. 00:58:467 (46) – D? 46と47~48で何か違うのかがよくわからなかったです;;
    12. 01:04:937 (73,74) – どちらかにd
    13. 01:04:349 (69,70,71) – 70 delete? 必要ない気がしました。
    14. 01:06:408 (80) – k
[Oni]
  1. 00:06:555 (13,14) - kd or dd ,00:08:908 (26,27) - dk
  2. 00:11:261 (40,41) – kd or dd
  3. 00:14:643 (57) – k?
  4. 00:14:937 (59,60) – swap 00:17:290 (70,71) – を参照して。
  5. 00:31:996 (161,162,163,164,165) – kk ddk k ?
  6. 00:34:349 (170,171,172) – 170 にfinish のみの形の方が音に合ってると思います。
  7. 00:34:643 (173,174,175,176,177) – 音が上下しているわけでもないので kkkkdかddddkを提案します。 D D K ddddkでいいかなって思ってます。
  8. 00:35:231(176) - ~ 00:38:467 (204) - 他のパート00:39:643 (211) - ~ 00:41:702 (223) -と詰まっている量がかなり違う気がします。1つ変更案出します。
  9. 00:36:702 (188) - ~ kdd kdddk dhttp://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1227915
  10. 00:38:025 (199,200) - swap
  11. 00:40:231 (212) - k
  12. 00:41:702 (221) – k
  13. 00:51:922 (25) - move 00:52:217 (27) – のパターンはどうですか
  14. 00:53:614 (38,39) – swap
  15. 00:54:202 (42,43,44,45,46) – ddkkd or ddddk
  16. 00:54:790 (48) – k?
  17. 00:57:217 (62,63,65) – 62 delete, 残りfinish? or 64~65間にadd k 自分はMuzuのこのfinishパターン好きでした。
  18. 00:56:702 (57,58,59,60) – ddd k or ddk k
  19. 01:01:702 (93,94,95,96,97,98) – ooooo,o →o,oooooの方がいいかな。。。? k kddkですね
  20. 01:04:643 (117,118,119,120,121,122,123) – ooo,o,ooo →o,o,oooooはどうですか?
  21. 01:06:481 (133) – delete? 少し強引かなと思います。
  22. 01:06:702 (134) –d
  23. 01:09:422 (154) - add
  24. 01:14:128 (8) – delete 長連打を意識させるなら ここの3連の必要性は薄いかと ただ難易度あげてるだけだと思います。
  25. 01:27:878 (103,104,105,106) – dkdkにして 103~104にadd?
[m1ng's Inner Oni]
  1. 00:06:040 (2) – delete , 00:07:511 (4) – move 00:07:217 (2) - ?
  2. 00:09:569 (2) – delete , 00:09:789 (2) - k[/color?
  3. 00:11:995 (1,2) –delete?
  4. 00:31:555 (1,2,1) – dd or kdk?
  5. 00:39:422 (1,1) – swap. Back sound stopped 00:39:495 - .
  6. 00:41:849 (1) – delete , cause 00:43:908 (2) – no put (vocal cant hear,but backsounds can hear)
  7. 00:58:320 (2) – delete
  8. 00:48:908 (2) – k is playing better, I think.
  9. 01:17:070 (4) – add note hearing drums. and stream is …kkddd?
  10. 01:19:202 (4) – k?
  11. 01:22:731 (3) – k
  12. 01:26:481 (2) – delete is playing better.
Good Luck! :D
Topic Starter
toara_fict

Chamle wrote:

Sorry for very late mod... Procrastination on others things gets me everytime.

Wandering Mod:

General


  • Everyone might as well follow Ts8sz's chorus kiai times:
  1. Kiai #2: Starts on 00:51:408, ends on 00:59:643
  2. Kiai #3: Starts on 01:00:820, ends on 01:07:878
    It feels more exciting that way, compared to leaving it as one whole kiai time or a miniscule break.

    Also figure out a common way to end the final spinner. All, if not most, ended it in different ways. I recommend just silencing the end.

Easy

  1. 00:09:055 (3) - remove the clap at the end of the slider (or add a clap to 00:07:290)
  2. 00:27:878 (3) - add NC
  3. 00:37:290 (4) - add NC
  4. 00:54:937 (1) - remove NC
  5. 00:56:114 (2) - add NC
  6. 00:57:878 (1) - remove NC All Change NC
  7. 01:05:525 (1,2) - The large jump feels very out of place (especially in an Easy diff). I suggest rotating it counterclockwise (90 degrees) once (Ctrl-<). Then move the last two sliders more or less like this. Nice :3
  8. 01:07:878 (3) - add NC
  9. 01:24:349 (4) - This slider is in an awkward place (it breaks the flow). Flip the slider (using Ctrl-H) and move to about {x:116, y:176}. Also move the circle to {x:244, y:192}.okay.
Oh and good luck!

JUDYDANNY wrote:

Hello~ :3
Here's a Taiko Mod.
久しぶりで時間かかったわ。。。。 ><
I am glad if it becomes helpful. :)
tyty~ :3
My mod is for suggetions. if you dont like, ignore please.
~Taiko~
d is Red Note.
k is Blue Note.
and, D , K is Big Notes .. d,k.
“+ ?” is I like pattern (※example→ add? , remove?
[General]
[Muzukashii]
    1. 00:10:231 (27) - , 01:21:996 (46) – del finish 特に音が大きいわけでもなく小節間を意識させる以外に必要性がない気がしたので。okay.
    2. 01:00:820 (53) – で、ここはfinishでよろしいかと。okay.
    3. 00:14:202 (45) – move 1/2 right. (44) もkでいいと思います。00:13:025 (40) –は音がはっきりしてて00:13:172 (41) – にない2連構成でも違和感はないですが、こちらはそうでもないので 継続パターン作るよりは ドラムにあわせたほうがいいと思いました。okay.
    4. 00:05:525 - ~00:14:937 – remap
      最初は00:05:525 – dから始まるパターンの方が太鼓チックでいいんじゃないかなぁって感じた程度でしたので提案しようか迷いましたがOniのdiffみて構成色が全く違ったので修正しましょう。 Nice!
      00:05:525 (7) – D
      00:07:584 (16,17) – kd
      00:10:231 (27) – d
      00:10:378 (28) – delete?
      00:12:290 (36,37,38) kdk
    5. 00:21:849 (77) – delete …or move? 00:22:437 (79) - okay. move and Change color
    6. 00:29:055 (108,109,110) – k * d d . => (109,110) delete or move 1/2 left.
      ボーカルスタートが109でもないので, *の部分に休符を作るなら109.110はなくてもいいとおもいます。 Change pertten
    7. 00:38:761 (141,142,143,144) – 少々個人的な意見になってる気もするので無視してもいいです。okay.
      kd dk はボーカル変化をとっているという意味ではいいパターンですが,dkの部分でかなり違和感あると思いました。 00:38:467 (140) - ~ から1/1で鳴ってる裏音が1小節間だけアクセントになってて強すぎるのと142~143間でドラムも鳴ってることが原因だと思います。なのでここもoo,oo →ooo,oでいいと思います。 okay.Some change
    8. 00:54:790 (31,32,33) – ここも31-32間からのベースの音のパターンが代わるのでo,oo> oo,oがいいと思います。okay.
    9. 00:41:702 (10) – k . 00:39:643 (1) -~からのパターン変化形からokay.
    10. 00:53:467 (24,25,26,27,28) - 25move 26~27間. 25で音は鳴ってません。 移動提案部分ではボーカルが伸びてました。 今の提案の代わりに00:53:320 – に移動か 26~27間にmove +53:520に addでもいいと思います。okay.
    11. 00:58:467 (46) – D? 46と47~48で何か違うのかがよくわからなかったです;; okay.
    12. 01:04:937 (73,74) – どちらかにdokay. 73に
    13. 01:04:349 (69,70,71) – 70 delete? 必要ない気がしました。okay.
    14. 01:06:408 (80) – k
okay.


[Oni]
  1. 00:06:555 (13,14) - kd or dd ,00:08:908 (26,27) - dk  okay. dd
  2. 00:11:261 (40,41) – kd or ddokay. ^
  3. 00:14:643 (57) – k? 保留 少しパターンを見直しておきます
  4. 00:14:937 (59,60) – swap 00:17:290 (70,71) – を参照して。okay.
  5. 00:31:996 (161,162,163,164,165) – kk ddk k ? okay.
  6. 00:34:349 (170,171,172) – 170 にfinish のみの形の方が音に合ってると思います。
  7. 00:34:643 (173,174,175,176,177) – 音が上下しているわけでもないので kkkkdかddddkを提案します。 D D K ddddkでいいかなって思ってます。 okay.
  8. 00:35:231(176) - ~ 00:38:467 (204) - 他のパート00:39:643 (211) - ~ 00:41:702 (223) -と詰まっている量がかなり違う気がします。1つ変更案出します。
  9. 00:36:702 (188) - ~ kdd kdddk dhttp://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1227915
  10. 00:38:025 (199,200) - swap
  11. 00:40:231 (212) - k
  12. 00:41:702 (221) – k サビ前はほとんど変更 少しいじったりもしました
  13. 00:51:922 (25) - move 00:52:217 (27) – のパターンはどうですか
  14. 00:53:614 (38,39) – swap
  15. 00:54:202 (42,43,44,45,46) – ddkkd or ddddk
  16. 00:54:790 (48) – k?
  17. 00:57:217 (62,63,65) – 62 delete, 残りfinish? or 64~65間にadd k 自分はMuzuのこのfinishパターン好きでした。
  18. 00:56:702 (57,58,59,60) – ddd k or ddk k
  19. 01:01:702 (93,94,95,96,97,98) – ooooo,o →o,oooooの方がいいかな。。。? k kddkですね
  20. 01:04:643 (117,118,119,120,121,122,123) – ooo,o,ooo →o,o,oooooはどうですか?
  21. 01:06:481 (133) – delete? 少し強引かなと思います。
  22. 01:06:702 (134) –d
  23. 01:09:422 (154) - add
  24. 01:14:128 (8) – delete 長連打を意識させるなら ここの3連の必要性は薄いかと ただ難易度あげてるだけだと思います。
  25. 01:27:878 (103,104,105,106) – dkdkにして 103~104にadd?

    kiatは全部変更してその前後のパターンをそれに合うように少し変更しました”

Good Luck! :D
Thankss :3

Nice mod :3/

Update Easy Normal Muzu Oni
Rappu
Mod失礼します
Oni

00:08:908 (26,27) - d kk d前の部分のリズムと同じ感じでいいかなっと思いました

00:10:452 (36) - 削除 kkkよりはk kの単発の方が僕は好きです

00:11:408 (40,41,42) -d k dddd k d もし00:10:452を削除したと考えるとリズムが貧しくて単発ばかりなのでここに入れたらいいかなっと

00:50:820 (15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22) - ddkkkkd Kddddkkk D テストプレイしてる時からここが少し気になってました。

01:00:525 (82,83,84,85) - 削除 Oniは簡単めでいいならここはいらないかな・・・?

01:14:349 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - kkddddddkkkk ddddd ここも少し気になりました

まだ全然慣れてなくて余り見つけられませんでした...
お役に立てれば嬉しいです
Topic Starter
toara_fict

Rappu wrote:

Mod失礼します
Oni

00:08:908 (26,27) - d kk d前の部分のリズムと同じ感じでいいかなっと思いました / 00:09:055 (27) - ここで音とってるのでそのままで

00:10:452 (36) - 削除 kkkよりはk kの単発の方が僕は好きです / No change

00:11:408 (40,41,42) -d k dddd k d もし00:10:452を削除したと考えるとリズムが貧しくて単発ばかりなのでここに入れたらいいかなっと / 少し変更

00:50:820 (15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22) - ddkkkkd Kddddkkk D テストプレイしてる時からここが少し気になってました。 うーん..保留で

01:00:525 (82,83,84,85) - 削除 Oniは簡単めでいいならここはいらないかな・・・? 前後の配置から見直しておきます!

01:14:349 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - kkddddddkkkk ddddd ここも少し気になりました それは前に変更したのでとりあえずこのままで・・

まだ全然慣れてなくて余り見つけられませんでした...
お役に立てれば嬉しいです
Thanks Rappo :3
mingmichael
JUDYDANNY
Hello~ :3
Here's a Taiko Mod.
久しぶりで時間かかったわ。。。。 ><
I am glad if it becomes helpful. :)

My mod is for suggetions. if you dont like, ignore please.
~Taiko~
d is Red Note.
k is Blue Note.
and, D , K is Big Notes .. d,k.
“+ ?” is I like pattern (※example→ add? , remove?

[m1ng's Inner Oni]
  1. 00:06:040 (2) – delete , 00:07:511 (4) – move 00:07:217 (2) - ? ugh keep mine >~<
  2. 00:09:569 (2) – delete , 00:09:789 (2) - k? i keep mine here. and didn't change to be kat too, because the belk sound is still low btw there :c
  3. 00:11:995 (1,2) –delete? delete? nope D:
  4. 00:31:555 (1,2,1) – kdd or kdk? keep mine again, btw it's already fit with the vocals
  5. 00:39:422 (1,1) – swap. Back sound stopped 00:39:495 - . okay~
  6. 00:41:849 (1) – delete , cause 00:43:908 (2) – no put (vocal cant hear,but backsounds can hear) okay i added a note then at 00:43:908 - :3 btw it'll make a better sounds too for vocals hehe
  7. 00:58:320 (2) – delete it's an additional note that i wanted to use :c btw i changed it to be don to emphasize more at 00:58:467 - which is big don
  8. 00:48:908 (2) – k is playing better, I think. ahh nope, it's to emphasize more at 00:49:054 - , like above too the reason btw
  9. 01:17:070 (4) – add note hearing drums. and stream is …kkddd? agree here changed. and it will make a mirror 5-plets from 01:14:496 (2,3,1,2,3) - which is ooooo :3
  10. 01:19:202 (4) – k? nope the bell sound is still low D: (even the sound is really really low there)
  11. 01:22:731 (3) – k nope ;w; btw i didn't follow the violin sound there, and almost same like above too i think.. ^
  12. 01:26:481 (2) – delete is playing better. hehee for now i will keep this xD i just wanted to make a crazy stream there wwww
Good Luck! :D
thanks a lot judyyyyyy for your mods :3 hehee
here's mine, toara~ http://puu.sh/6bsQA.osu


*EDIT :
i forget to support my own diff here lol
here ~★
Topic Starter
toara_fict
*EDIT :
i forget to support my own diff here lol
here ~★
Thankss >w<)b

Update :3
Lust
Quick mod because I love this song uguu

Audio leadin inconsistencies. Add +2000 to the audio leadin on the taikos
[Easy]
  1. 00:15:525 (1) - Oops this is a bug. Add NC to the slider manually, since it follows the spinner. (It is currently not on)
  2. 01:12:584 (2) - ^
  3. 00:07:878 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - This pattern seems repetitive, since they are both going and coming back in the same directions. Can also be confusing
  4. 00:24:349 (1) - This spinner is kind of fast. Might be better to not have it at all
  5. 00:36:114 (3) - Maybe move this up in the map and lessen the curve? Does not look nice the way it is.
  6. 01:20:820 (3,2) - Ah this overlap doesn't look very good. Maybe best to stack it and move the pattern down a bit?
  7. 01:23:172 (3) - Doesn't look too good. Perhaps regular 3 point long slider would be best
[Cloud's Normal]
  1. 00:05:967 (1) - Another bugged spinner note. Be sure to NC this manually.

Good luck! Nice map
ts8zs
fixed some samples
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: True truly love.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 51408
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 13467
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8

[Metadata]
Title:True Truly love
TitleUnicode:True Truly love
Artist:Horie Yui
ArtistUnicode:堀江由衣
Creator:toara_fict
Version:Ts8zs' Insane
Source:DIVINA Online
Tags:KinomiCandy CloudSplash16 Alternative mingmichael ts8zs
BeatmapID:325017
BeatmapSetID:123967

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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264,288,44055,2,0,L|192:304,1,60.0000022888184
48,296,44349,6,0,P|112:272|136:184,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
374,189,45525,2,0,P|393:264|464:296,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,46702,12,0,48761,0:0:0:0:
208,320,49055,6,0,L|136:296,2,60.0000022888184,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,208,49496,2,0,L|464:184,2,60.0000022888184,0|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,184,49937,2,0,L|96:160,1,60.0000022888184
32,112,50231,5,0,0:0:0:0:
32,112,50378,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,64,50525,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,64,50672,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,152,50820,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,152,50967,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,104,51114,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,104,51261,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,48,51408,6,0,P|504:88|456:192,1,160,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,240,51849,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,256,51996,2,0,P|224:240|184:248,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,328,52290,2,0,P|304:344|344:336,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,240,52584,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,312,52731,5,0,0:0:0:0:
480,240,52878,2,0,P|488:192|464:136,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,64,53172,2,0,P|328:112|352:168,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,240,53467,6,0,P|440:168|432:96,2,160,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,296,54202,2,0,P|208:304|168:288,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,200,54496,2,0,P|288:192|328:208,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,280,54790,2,0,P|216:288|176:272,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,176,55084,2,0,P|296:168|336:184,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
159,138,55525,6,0,P|152:176|160:216,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,176,56114,6,0,P|248:104|184:48,2,160,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,216,56849,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,176,56996,2,0,P|312:168|352:184,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,208,57290,2,2,P|480:248|488:352,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,240,57731,2,2,P|312:200|384:104,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,64,58172,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,72,58467,6,0,L|192:80,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,144,58761,2,0,L|40:152,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,280,59055,2,0,L|152:272,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,240,59349,2,0,L|336:232,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,224,59643,5,0,0:0:0:0:
464,256,59937,1,0,0:0:0:0:
472,288,60231,2,0,L|488:368,1,80
344,328,60525,2,0,L|304:312,3,40
272,320,60820,6,2,P|232:328|192:320,1,80,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,280,61114,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,240,61261,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,160,61408,2,0,L|131:136,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,280,61702,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,240,61849,2,0,P|288:184|256:88,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,112,62290,1,8,0:0:0:0:
378,162,62437,2,0,P|368:85|424:32,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,200,62878,6,0,P|424:240|400:248,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,336,63172,2,0,P|292:270|307:194,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,128,63614,2,0,P|134:171|58:156,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,64,64055,2,0,P|88:64|120:80,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,128,64349,2,0,P|280:144|344:104,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,0,64790,1,0,0:0:0:0:
427,148,64937,6,0,P|440:110|439:71,1,80
344,104,65525,6,0,P|333:180|385:237,2,160,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,264,66261,6,0,P|128:280|80:248,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,200,66702,2,0,P|320:312|272:360,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,264,67143,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,200,67290,2,2,L|392:160,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,264,67878,6,0,P|128:280|80:248,1,160,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,270,68320,6,0,P|344:238|352:200,1,80,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,120,68761,6,0,P|384:104|432:136,1,160,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
193,113,69202,6,0,P|169:145|160:184,1,80,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,270,69643,6,0,P|344:238|352:200,2,80,8|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,70305,12,0,71996,0:0:0:0:
160,128,72584,5,4,0:0:0:0:
312,256,73025,2,0,L|336:336,1,80,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,152,73761,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,176,73908,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,80,74055,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,256,74202,2,0,L|336:344,1,80,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,128,74643,6,0,L|168:168,4,40,0|0|0|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,256,75378,2,0,L|336:336,1,80,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,152,76114,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,176,76261,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,80,76408,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,256,76555,2,0,L|336:344,1,80,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,208,76849,6,0,L|168:168,5,40,0|0|8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,128,77290,2,0,P|240:104|328:144,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
390,240,77731,6,0,L|312:256,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,144,78172,6,0,L|504:128,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,344,78467,2,0,P|240:304|240:208,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
311,177,78908,6,0,P|319:216|312:256,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,352,79349,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,224,79496,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,80,79643,6,0,P|360:80|408:136,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,231,80084,6,0,P|330:210|312:176,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,152,80525,6,0,L|144:208,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,352,80820,2,0,L|280:232,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,88,81261,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,288,81408,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,208,81555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,144,81702,2,0,P|232:72|248:32,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,160,81996,2,0,P|304:216|216:232,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,176,82437,6,0,L|88:256,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,144,82878,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,224,83025,5,0,0:0:0:0:
321,295,83172,2,0,P|250:327|176:304,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,206,83614,6,0,P|204:207|240:224,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,280,84055,1,8,0:0:0:0:
16,176,84202,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,56,84349,6,0,L|136:48,1,64,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
167,134,84643,2,0,L|112:128,1,55.9999982910157,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,216,84937,2,0,L|184:232,1,47.9999985351563,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,328,85231,2,0,L|144:304,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,344,85525,6,0,L|296:352,1,40,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
351,265,85820,2,0,L|304:272,1,47.9999985351563,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,184,86114,2,0,L|392:168,1,55.9999982910157,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
393,67,86408,2,0,L|336:96,1,64,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,24,86702,6,0,L|296:32,1,64,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,128,86996,2,0,L|186:89,1,71.9999978027344,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
121,131,87290,2,0,L|144:208,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,240,87584,2,0,L|40:152,1,88.000002685547,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
141,130,87878,6,0,L|120:216,1,88.000002685547,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,192,88172,2,0,L|261:107,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
373,122,88467,2,0,L|304:200,1,103.999995239258,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,224,88761,2,0,L|493:161,1,111.999996582031,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,280,89055,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,89128,12,0,91555,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
toara_fict

Lust wrote:

Quick mod because I love this song uguu

Audio leadin inconsistencies. Add +2000 to the audio leadin on the taikos okay.
[Easy]
  1. 00:15:525 (1) - Oops this is a bug. Add NC to the slider manually, since it follows the spinner. (It is currently not on) okay.
  2. 01:12:584 (2) - ^ okay.
  3. 00:07:878 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - This pattern seems repetitive, since they are both going and coming back in the same directions. Can also be confusing
  4. 00:24:349 (1) - This spinner is kind of fast. Might be better to not have it at all
  5. 00:36:114 (3) - Maybe move this up in the map and lessen the curve? Does not look nice the way it is.
  6. 01:20:820 (3,2) - Ah this overlap doesn't look very good. Maybe best to stack it and move the pattern down a bit?
  7. 01:23:172 (3) - Doesn't look too good. Perhaps regular 3 point long slider would be best

[Cloud's Normal]
  1. 00:05:967 (1) - Another bugged spinner note. Be sure to NC this manually.Change by CS16.
[/notice]
Good luck! Nice map
Advice Thanks ! Almost Change :33

Ts8zs diff normal and me diff update
TKS
なるべく今週中には…!(見るとは言ってない)
Topic Starter
toara_fict

TKSalt wrote:

なるべく今週中には…!(見るとは言ってない)
…! (期待しちゃっていいですか?)
Lundlerol
hi
toara's req via my mod queue

[General]
Please add the name to Horie Yui - True Truly love (Short Ver.)

[Muzukashii]
00:08:025 - add to d? d k k dの流れ多いので、ここにd入れても難易度に支障ないので追加の方がいいのでは?約10秒間このパートだとプレイヤーを退屈させますよ。
00:10:378 - same as above.
00:14:055 - k? 00:13:467 - と 00:13:761 - と 00:14:643 - でスネアに沿ってるなら尚更 k でタンタンタンと音に沿うほうが聴いてて綺麗です。
00:28:540 - remove to d? ボーカルに合わせて3連置いたのはわかりますが、無理に沿うと返って違和感出ます。素直にを 00:28:614 - を kに変更して d k dで無理なくボーカルに沿えて綺麗になると思います。
00:29:937 - add to k? 感覚無くなってテンポよくなると思います。ここだけ空いてると浮く様な気がしました。
00:38:908 - remove to d? d k dになる事でBGの音通りに一定のリズムで構成する方がピッタリかと思います。
00:40:084 - add to k? ボーカルの長音に合わせて kを置いてカバー等。
00:40:967 - add to notes? 此方も長音に合わせてノーツを置いてカバー出来ます。ただ此方は^より優先度は低いので好みの問題です。詰めたい場合は支障ないのでお試しを。追加する場合は次いでに 00:40:820 - 此方をkに
01:13:172 - fix to K? シンバルに合わせてKを置くと思います。01:12:584 - ここもシンバルで大音符を置いてるので推奨しておきます。
01:16:114 - ここを始点に画像の通りに変更してみれば 01:16:702 - ここのボーカルと連打をカバー出来ます。

01:19:790 - same as above. 前奏と同じです。
01:22:290 - k d or d k  同じパートでここだけd dなのは個人的に気になりました。
01:25:231 - fix to k
01:27:878 - d d k k d d k k Spin でいいんじゃないですか?感覚開けるとたとえMuzuでも足りない感が否めないです。

[Oni]
00:14:202 - move to 00:14:349 - 一定のリズム優先で移動。
00:28:467 - ddkdkで 00:28:614 - ここにkを加える方が部分的に強調出来てボーカル沿いに合ってるような気がします。もしくはd kdkで置いてあげても違和感はないです。
00:39:937 - 前のパート見る限りボーカルの長音に合わせて3連入れてもいいと思います。
00:41:408 - 此方も長音に合わせて3連等。dddでいいと思います。
00:41:996 - ~ 00:44:349 - のパートが豹変し過ぎて一番難しいかもしれないですね。

空いてる部分に単発のkを置いていくのもいいと思います。
00:52:878 - fix to k? 3連目のkでボーカルフォロー出来ます。
00:54:202 - kkddk? 5連目のkでボーカルもフォロー出来るので推奨しときますね。
00:55:378 - add to d  d追加してから 00:55:525 - Kをkに変更してkkkkdの5連を置いてみては?シンバル音がないんでKより推奨します。
^追加後に 00:55:967 - add to d and 00:56:114 - also change to k
01:03:172 - ddddk? ボーカルの長音に合わせてddkよりddddkのがいいと思います。
01:04:055 - add to d? 空いてた部分に音が取れるのとサビで大音符以外の1/1が続くと個人的に物足りないなと思いました。他のパートはしっかりしてたので尚更物足りなく感じました。

[m1ng's Inner Oni]
00:08:320 - think about ting sound,how about changing k
01:07:511 - add to k? For myself, mix k anywhere makes it better. if this unifies stream with sound, it is fun. Please try it.
01:22:731 - same as above.(ting sound)

ming'diff was very good. so fun!>~<


done~.
Good luck.
mingmichael
Lundlerol
hi
toara's req via my mod queue

[m1ng's Inner Oni]
00:08:320 - think about ting sound,how about changing k sorry didn't change ;w; i followed the violin sounds btw there, same like 00:10:525 (1,1) -
01:07:511 - add to k? For myself, mix k anywhere makes it better. if this unifies stream with sound, it is fun. Please try it. hehee agree~! :3 changed to be ooooooo-plets then~
01:22:731 - same as above.(ting sound) sorry too ;w;

ming'diff was very good. so fun!>~< thanks xD


done~.
Good luck.
thanks for the mods, lundlerol >w<
here's mine, toara-nyan~ http://puu.sh/6dQYO.osu :3
Topic Starter
toara_fict

Lundlerol wrote:

hi
toara's req via my mod queue

[General]
Please add the name to Horie Yui - True Truly love (Short Ver.)

[Muzukashii]
00:08:025 - add to d? d k k dの流れ多いので、ここにd入れても難易度に支障ないので追加の方がいいのでは?約10秒間このパートだとプレイヤーを退屈させますよ。okay.
00:10:378 - same as above.okay.
00:14:055 - k? 00:13:467 - と 00:13:761 - と 00:14:643 - でスネアに沿ってるなら尚更 k でタンタンタンと音に沿うほうが聴いてて綺麗です。okay.
00:28:540 - remove to d? ボーカルに合わせて3連置いたのはわかりますが、無理に沿うと返って違和感出ます。素直にを 00:28:614 - を kに変更して d k dで無理なくボーカルに沿えて綺麗になると思います。 okay.
00:29:937 - add to k? 感覚無くなってテンポよくなると思います。ここだけ空いてると浮く様な気がしました。okay.
00:38:908 - remove to d? d k dになる事でBGの音通りに一定のリズムで構成する方がピッタリかと思います。okay.
00:40:084 - add to k? ボーカルの長音に合わせて kを置いてカバー等。okay.
00:40:967 - add to notes? 此方も長音に合わせてノーツを置いてカバー出来ます。ただ此方は^より優先度は低いので好みの問題です。詰めたい場合は支障ないのでお試しを。追加する場合は次いでに 00:40:820 - 此方をkに / 00:40:967 (152) - add d and next note change k .
01:13:172 - fix to K? シンバルに合わせてKを置くと思います。01:12:584 - ここもシンバルで大音符を置いてるので推奨しておきます。okay.
01:16:114 - ここを始点に画像の通りに変更してみれば 01:16:702 - ここのボーカルと連打をカバー出来ます。okay.

01:19:790 - same as above. 前奏と同じです。okay.
01:22:290 - k d or d k  同じパートでここだけd dなのは個人的に気になりました。okay.
01:25:231 - fix to k okay.
01:27:878 - d d k k d d k k Spin でいいんじゃないですか?感覚開けるとたとえMuzuでも足りない感が否めないです。 / d d k k d k k k spin okay.

[Oni]
00:14:202 - move to 00:14:349 - 一定のリズム優先で移動。okay.
00:28:467 - ddkdkで 00:28:614okay. - ここにkを加える方が部分的に強調出来てボーカル沿いに合ってるような気がします。もしくはd kdkで置いてあげても違和感はないです。
00:39:937 - 前のパート見る限りボーカルの長音に合わせて3連入れてもいいと思います。okay.
00:41:408 - 此方も長音に合わせて3連等。dddでいいと思います。okay.
00:41:996 - ~ 00:44:349 - のパートが豹変し過ぎて一番難しいかもしれないですね。 ここはInnerよりも難しい気がするけど このままで

空いてる部分に単発のkを置いていくのもいいと思います。
00:52:878 - fix to k? 3連目のkでボーカルフォロー出来ます。okay.
00:54:202 - kkddk? 5連目のkでボーカルもフォロー出来るので推奨しときますね。okay.
00:55:378 - add to d  d追加してから 00:55:525 - Kをkに変更してkkkkdの5連を置いてみては?シンバル音がないんでKより推奨します。okay.
^追加後に 00:55:967 - add to d and 00:56:114 - also change to k okay. good
01:03:172 - ddddk? ボーカルの長音に合わせてddkよりddddkのがいいと思います。 okay.
01:04:055 - add to d? 空いてた部分に音が取れるのとサビで大音符以外の1/1が続くと個人的に物足りないなと思いました。他のパートはしっかりしてたので尚更物足りなく感じました。okay.
done~.
Good luck.
殆ど変更ました。が 一応変更箇所の前後をすこしいじったりもしました。
Muzuで指摘されたKFinishをOniも変更したり等

m1ng's diff and me Update
Evil_Twilight
From my Queue

[General]
  1. No custom colours o.O?

[Ts8zs' Insane]
  1. 00:07:878 (3) - 換成slider? 前後這兩段你都在長白線用slider,只有這裡是note
  2. 00:55:525 (1) - 其實我覺得這裡0.5有點慢過頭,可以試試拉長到紅線,聽起來也比較好
  3. 00:58:467 (1,2) - 這兩個改成往上滑的,感覺這樣比較符合音樂
  4. 00:59:643 (1,2,3) - 往上擺一些,這裡音調明顯比前面高不少
  5. 01:02:437 (8) - 頭尾顛倒玩起來順一點,對我來說o.o
  6. 01:04:937 (1) - 同前面
  7. 01:07:878 (1) - 我覺得這放的不太好阿,要就近一點不然遠一點
  8. 01:20:820 (2,3,4,5,6) - 考慮擺個星星
  9. 01:29:128 (1) - 到長白線就夠了,紅線感覺慢了

[Alternative's Frenzy]
  • You can't use ''Frenzy''because the new rule, change it to Insane. o.o
  1. 00:11:849 (4) - Make this ''S'' more better.
  2. 00:12:584 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Same as above :P
  3. 00:18:172 (4) - Ctrl + g? It is a good flow and plays comfortable for me.
  4. 00:37:290 (1,2) - 2 grids left to make 00:37:437 (2,3,4) - them a equilateral triangle.
  5. 00:38:172 (7) - 2 grids left too.
  6. 00:41:996 (1,2,3) - Make these like 00:42:584 (1,2,3) - to keep the regular.
  7. 00:54:643 (3,1) - It isn't a good flow, consider trying this or something else like this?
  8. 01:03:025 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Move these to center to make them symmetrical?

[Kinomi's Hard]
  1. 00:11:261 (5) - Move it to 00:11:114 (x) - to keep the regular?
  2. 01:29:055 (5) - Move it higher than 01:28:761 (3,4) - because the pitch is higher than those.

[Cloud's Normal]
  1. 00:12:584 (1) - End at 00:14:643 (x) - ? These has a drum sound.
  2. 00:27:878 (1,2) - Move down a bit to make 00:26:996 (5,1,2,3) - them a triangle.
  3. 00:43:761 (4) - Move down to make 00:41:996 (1,2,3,4) - them symmetrical?

[Easy]
  1. 00:06:114 (1) - In the easy diff, I recommend you to move this note close to center, it is a little far for new player when spin is over.
  2. 00:11:408 (3) - Add clap?
  3. 00:30:525 (1) - Add whistle on slider's end.
  4. 00:33:761 (3) - Add finish.
  5. 00:31:702 (3) - Add whistle on slider's end.
Little

Evil_Twilight wrote:

From my Queue oh right... i requested this xD because it needs more standard mode mods :P

[General]
  1. No custom colours o.O?

[Cloud's Normal]
  1. 00:12:584 (1) - End at 00:14:643 (x) - ? These has a drum sound. There wouldn't be enough time before the next note for the player to react, since this is Normal diff.
  2. 00:27:878 (1,2) - Move down a bit to make 00:26:996 (5,1,2,3) - them a triangle. Rotated and moved to make triangle.
  3. 00:43:761 (4) - Move down to make 00:41:996 (1,2,3,4) - them symmetrical? It's already rotationally symmetrical.
Thanks

Cloud's Normal
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: True truly love.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 51408
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:True Truly love (Short Ver.)
TitleUnicode:True Truly love (Short Ver.)
Artist:Horie Yui
ArtistUnicode:堀江由衣
Creator:toara_fict
Version:Cloud's Normal
Source:DIVINA Online
Tags:KinomiCandy CloudSplash16 Alternative mingmichael ts8zs
BeatmapID:335169
BeatmapSetID:123967

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Topic Starter
toara_fict

Evil_Twilight wrote:

From my Queue Thanks :3

[General]
  1. No custom colours o.O? yes O.o;

[Easy]
  1. 00:06:114 (1) - In the easy diff, I recommend you to move this note close to center, it is a little far for new player when spin is over. hmmm fix note.
  2. 00:11:408 (3) - Add clap?
  3. 00:30:525 (1) - Add whistle on slider's end.
  4. 00:33:761 (3) - Add finish.
  5. 00:31:702 (3) - Add whistle on slider's end.

    okay.All change :3

Thanks mod and CS16 ! :3
Easy Normal Update
TKS
[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:08:908 (22) - k? 少し前にある 00:06:261 (10,11,12) - の k dkというパターンに合わせて、変えてあげた方が面白いかも知れません。変えると、指摘のノーツの手前にある d とのメリハリも付いて良いと思います。
  2. 00:12:290 (38) - => 00:12:437 - 変化付けの意味で。音楽としてもこちらの方がフィットしてると思います。
  3. 00:14:937 (49,50) - 色を交換してみてください。クラッシュシンバルっぽい音はあるのですが、高音強くないし鳴り始め自体なんかもやもやしてるので、00:17:290 - ここのパターンに合わせてあげるのが流れとしては自然だと感じました。
  4. 00:53:320 - add dk(1/2). 他のパートではボーカルの音にかかわらずノーツを埋めているのに、KIAI中の配置がスカスカなのが少し気になりました。
  5. 00:55:378 - add d. 上記と同じ理由です。
  6. 00:56:114 (37) と 01:05:525 (76) - 特別音の変化に違いがあるわけではないので、finisherは統一しても良いと思います。
  7. 01:25:525 - kkddkkd(1/2)? 寂しすぎるので"忠実な音取り"からは少し外れますがこういうパターンを置いてあげても良いかも知れません。d で終わらせる理由は次にある k を強調するためです。

  8. 曲が曲なので仕方無いかもしれませんが、Oniと比べて大きめの難易度差を感じました。ボーカルメインの音取りは楽で良いのですが、単純にボーカルの声の粒に合わせて置いてしまうと、曲の盛り上がりと関係無くスカスカになったりノーツが増えてしまったりとデメリットもあります。(ドラムはそうでもないですが、同じようなパターンが続く単調な譜面になりやすいので兼ね合いが難しい…)

  9. じゃあ具体的にどういうところにノーツを置くんだという話になりますが、上記の提案を取り入れた場合、00:53:172 - ここがまだ空いてると思うので d を置いてあげることが出来ます(というかddd k(1/4)みたいなパターンでも良いかも知れません)。00:55:820 - ここにもkk(1/2)を置けると思います(後半のパターンは結構ノーツが置かれてる感じだったので)

[ Oni]
  1. 00:05:967 (10) - Muzuと同じように k で良いと思います。
  2. 00:10:231 - ここからのパターンはその前の前半部分と統一しても良い気がしました。現在のパターンだと1/4含めたパターンを一気に叩かせて、休ませて、叩かせてという感じがしてプレイしてると少し違和感を覚えました。
  3. 00:13:614 (52,53) - 入れ替えて、
    00:14:055 (54) - こっちも k にしてみてください。Muzuの音取りが正しいと思います。
  4. 00:19:717 (85) - 消しても良いと思います。
  5. 00:20:084 - ここで3連符を置くなら位置を右にずらしてあげた方が音としては綺麗です。
  6. 00:25:378 (118) - 直前の k にあるボーカルを強調する意味で消して良いと思います。
  7. 00:26:114 - 付近のパターンを見る限りでは、ここから1/2でd d k というパターンに変えてあげる方が自然な流れだと思います。
  8. 00:28:614 (138) - d に変えて、
    00:28:908 (141) - こっちを k にしてあげるのが自然だと思います。また、曲の流れが変わる 00:29:055 (142) - は d を持っているので、それにメリハリを付ける意味でも直前のノーツは逆の色を持っていた方が良いです。
  9. 00:35:378 (173) - 消して、
    00:35:599 (174) - これも消して、
    00:36:702 - ここから1/4で ddd k に変えて、
    00:37:143 (187) - を消してみてください。今のパターンは周辺からみても少しバランスが悪いように感じました。
  10. 00:42:364 (221) - DTプレイヤーを血祭りにあげようとしている感じはわかるのですが、やっぱりMuzuのことを考えるとここらへんに3連符を置く必要は無いと思います。
  11. 00:50:820 (15,16,17,18,19,20,21) - ddddkkdの方が合ってるかな?と思いましたが気のせいかも知れません!
  12. 00:53:614 - 直前のパターンを見るに休符を入れるべきだと感じました。 kkk のおしり2つを消してみてください。
    また、00:53:320 (35) - これもボーカルに合わせて d に変えてみてください。
  13. 00:58:320 (72) - このおしり2つを消して、
    00:59:128 (76) - こっちも削除?これはどっちでも良いと思います。主な理由はbigいっぱいあったところと変わらないのですが、KIAI中なので何とも言えないです。
  14. 01:01:922 (96,97,98) - この5連符の真ん中の3つ消して休符作った方が良いと思います。KIAI前半ではそこそこ休みがあったのに突然忙しくなりすぎて泣きそうです。
    消した場合は01:01:702 (94,95) - の色を入れ替えてください。ボーカルに合わせています。
  15. 01:07:878 - このあたりのパターン(主に1/4)も少し見なおしてみてください。
  16. 01:14:349 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - ddd kkkkd のようなパターンはどうですか?休符はお任せしますが、スネアの音と、その前の「トゥ」の音で d を置いてるのには合わせた方が良いと思います。
  17. 01:24:349 から 01:26:702 - の部分ですが、00:12:584 - から 00:14:937 - のような簡単なパターンで良いと思います。
    また、01:27:878 から 01:28:908 - の部分も1/2メインのシンプルなパターンで良いと思います。自然な流れでスピンに突入出来ます。

  18. Muzuのところでも書いたとおり、難易度差がかなり大きいです。Muzuはほぼ1/2のパターンのみに対して、Oniは1/4のパターンがゴリゴリでなおかつBPMも高いのでこのままだとUra Oni(爆笑)の出現も考慮しなければなりません。よくTaikoBATの方々がdiffspread(難易度差)の事を言うので少し鬱陶しいかも知れませんが、Kantan~Oni間の難易度差がとても重要です。Oni~Inner Oniはそこまで考慮する必要はありません。Inner自体、基本的な難易度の構造におまけで付いてる上級者向けに用意された譜面だと考えているので、先ほど言ったように、その基本的な難易度の構造(Kantan~Oni)での難易度差を最優先で考えてみてください。目安としては、結構極端でアバウトになりますが、このBPMなら「Muzuに1/2ちょっと増やして、1/4もddk kkdみたいなパターンをちょくちょく入れて~」くらいがちょうど良いOniになると思います。某modderのように作りなおせ!とは言いませんが、Muzuに合わせて、もっともっと難易度を落とせると思います。何かわからないことがあれば聞いてください。とにかく頑張って!
gomen nasai ming san!
i want to rest a little ₍₍ (ง ˘ω˘ )ว ⁾⁾
Topic Starter
toara_fict

TKSalt wrote:

[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:08:908 (22) - k? 少し前にある 00:06:261 (10,11,12) - の k dkというパターンに合わせて、変えてあげた方が面白いかも知れません。変えると、指摘のノーツの手前にある d とのメリハリも付いて良いと思います。なろほど・・・!Change!
  2. 00:12:290 (38) - => 00:12:437 - 変化付けの意味で。音楽としてもこちらの方がフィットしてると思います。Change!
  3. 00:14:937 (49,50) - 色を交換してみてください。クラッシュシンバルっぽい音はあるのですが、高音強くないし鳴り始め自体なんかもやもやしてるので、00:17:290 - ここのパターンに合わせてあげるのが流れとしては自然だと感じました。Change => D k
  4. 00:53:320 - add dk(1/2). 他のパートではボーカルの音にかかわらずノーツを埋めているのに、KIAI中の配置がスカスカなのが少し気になりました。Change!
  5. 00:55:378 - add d. 上記と同じ理由です。Change!
  6. 00:56:114 (37) と 01:05:525 (76) - 特別音の変化に違いがあるわけではないので、finisherは統一しても良いと思います。Change Finidh外すか悩んだんですが入れたので00:56:114 (37) finish.
  7. 01:25:525 - kkddkkd(1/2)? 寂しすぎるので"忠実な音取り"からは少し外れますがこういうパターンを置いてあげても良いかも知れません。d で終わらせる理由は次にある k を強調するためです。 fmfm... 最後単発っていうのも悲しいと思っていたのと理由を聞いて納得したので Change kkddkkd !

  8. 曲が曲なので仕方無いかもしれませんが、Oniと比べて大きめの難易度差を感じました。ボーカルメインの音取りは楽で良いのですが、単純にボーカルの声の粒に合わせて置いてしまうと、曲の盛り上がりと関係無くスカスカになったりノーツが増えてしまったりとデメリットもあります。(ドラムはそうでもないですが、同じようなパターンが続く単調な譜面になりやすいので兼ね合いが難しい…)

  9. じゃあ具体的にどういうところにノーツを置くんだという話になりますが、上記の提案を取り入れた場合、00:53:172 - ここがまだ空いてると思うので d を置いてあげることが出来ます(というかddd k(1/4)みたいなパターンでも良いかも知れません)。00:55:820 - ここにもkk(1/2)を置けると思います(後半のパターンは結構ノーツが置かれてる感じだったので)
最後の2つの意見を聞いて譜面としてのバランスを保ちつつkiai中心に少しいじってみました!


[ Oni]
  1. 00:05:967 (10) - Muzuと同じように k で良いと思います。Change
  2. 00:10:231 - ここからのパターンはその前の前半部分と統一しても良い気がしました。現在のパターンだと1/4含めたパターンを一気に叩かせて、休ませて、叩かせてという感じがしてプレイしてると少し違和感を覚えました。なるほど・・・ 前半のパターンに沿った配置に変えました!
  3. 00:13:614 (52,53) - 入れ替えて、
    00:14:055 (54) - こっちも k にしてみてください。Muzuの音取りが正しいと思います。okay.Change
  4. 00:19:717 (85) - 消しても良いと思います。okay.
  5. 00:20:084 - ここで3連符を置くなら位置を右にずらしてあげた方が音としては綺麗です。okay.
  6. 00:25:378 (118) - 直前の k にあるボーカルを強調する意味で消して良いと思います。=> ( 00:25:305 - Delete にしました。)
  7. 00:26:114 - 付近のパターンを見る限りでは、ここから1/2でd d k というパターンに変えてあげる方が自然な流れだと思います。 okay.
  8. 00:28:614 (138) - d に変えて、
    00:28:908 (141) - こっちを k にしてあげるのが自然だと思います。また、曲の流れが変わる 00:29:055 (142) - は d を持っているので、それにメリハリを付ける意味でも直前のノーツは逆の色を持っていた方が良いです。 Change!
  9. 00:35:378 (173) - 消して、
    00:35:599 (174) - これも消して、
    00:36:702 - ここから1/4で ddd k に変えて、
    00:37:143 (187) - を消してみてください。今のパターンは周辺からみても少しバランスが悪いように感じました。 バランスが前よりも断然良くなりました!
  10. 00:42:364 (221) - DTプレイヤーを血祭りにあげようとしている感じはわかるのですが、やっぱりMuzuのことを考えるとここらへんに3連符を置く必要は無いと思います。 最後の分のUra(?)Oniとかのとm1ng Innerを見て3連の調節をしておきました! Fix
  11. 00:50:820 (15,16,17,18,19,20,21) - ddddkkdの方が合ってるかな?と思いましたが気のせいかも知れません! ddddkkk で最初入れてみたりもしたのですがFinishがkなのでここはこのままで;;
  12. 00:53:614 - 直前のパターンを見るに休符を入れるべきだと感じました。 kkk のおしり2つを消してみてください。
    また、00:53:320 (35) - これもボーカルに合わせて d に変えてみてください。
  13. 00:58:320 (72) - このおしり2つを消して、  
    00:59:128 (76) - こっちも削除?これはどっちでも良いと思います。主な理由はbigいっぱいあったところと変わらないのですが、KIAI中なので何とも言えないです。okay.
  14. 01:01:922 (96,97,98) - この5連符の真ん中の3つ消して休符作った方が良いと思います。KIAI前半ではそこそこ休みがあったのに突然忙しくなりすぎて泣きそうです。消した場合は01:01:702 (94,95) - の色を入れ替えてください。ボーカルに合わせています。okay.
  15. 01:07:878 - このあたりのパターン(主に1/4)も少し見なおしてみてください。了解です!
  16. 01:14:349 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - ddd kkkkd のようなパターンはどうですか?休符はお任せしますが、スネアの音と、その前の「トゥ」の音で d を置いてるのには合わせた方が良いと思います。ここのパターンはずっと言われていたので・・・・Change><
  17. 01:24:349 から 01:26:702 - の部分ですが、00:12:584 - から 00:14:937 - のような簡単なパターンで良いと思います。okay.変えておきます!
    また、01:27:878 から 01:28:908 - の部分も1/2メインのシンプルなパターンで良いと思います。自然な流れでスピンに突入出来ます。了解です

  18. Muzuのところでも書いたとおり、難易度差がかなり大きいです。Muzuはほぼ1/2のパターンのみに対して、Oniは1/4のパターンがゴリゴリでなおかつBPMも高いのでこのままだとUra Oni(爆笑)の出現も考慮しなければなりません。よくTaikoBATの方々がdiffspread(難易度差)の事を言うので少し鬱陶しいかも知れませんが、Kantan~Oni間の難易度差がとても重要です。Oni~Inner Oniはそこまで考慮する必要はありません。Inner自体、基本的な難易度の構造におまけで付いてる上級者向けに用意された譜面だと考えているので、先ほど言ったように、その基本的な難易度の構造(Kantan~Oni)での難易度差を最優先で考えてみてください。目安としては、結構極端でアバウトになりますが、このBPMなら「Muzuに1/2ちょっと増やして、1/4もddk kkdみたいなパターンをちょくちょく入れて~」くらいがちょうど良いOniになると思います。某modderのように作りなおせ!とは言いませんが、Muzuに合わせて、もっともっと難易度を落とせると思います。何かわからないことがあれば聞いてください。とにかく頑張って!
gomen nasai ming san!
i want to rest a little ₍₍ (ง ˘ω˘ )ว ⁾⁾
なるほど・・・・いろいろ参考になりました!当初は詰め詰めの譜面だったのですが 'このBPMなら「Muzuに1/2ちょっと増やして、1/4もddk kkdみたいなパターンをちょくちょく入れて~」くらいがちょうど良いOniになると思います' というのを見てOniのあるべき難易度、そのmapsetに今回のmodを兼ねて少し変更等をしてみました! それに今後にこのようなことがあった場合にこの事を忘れないようにしておきます! modとそれ以外のわかりやすいアドバイスありがとうございます! とりあえず頑張ります!;;

Update :3
TKS
no kds.

[ m1ng's Inner Oni]
  1. 00:06:040 (2) - del. because 00:06:040 (2,3) - this part has no sounds. 5-plet is not fit the music imo.
  2. 00:07:952 (1) - del. if started 5-plet from the top of long white line, basically doesnt fit the music.
  3. 00:10:305 (1) - del. same reason as above.
  4. 00:12:584 ~ 00:14:937 - good streams for me. but it is too long. if you cut the that streams, it will make reasonable. how? http://puu.sh/6h16Q.jpg
  5. 00:19:495 (1) => 00:20:378 - can be follow the flow.
  6. 00:25:231 (1) - end of streams here.( del the 00:25:304 (2,1,2) - )
    this point has stonk vocal sound. it will be the key for good flow.
    and 00:25:084 - change to ddk here. so fit the stonk vocal, and can emphasize the next d (change to D? )
  7. 00:29:128 (2,3,4) - del.
    and 00:29:495 (1) - del. please dont use force a harder patterns. please respect the music ;_;
  8. 00:31:995 (1) - k. dkddk is a little weird for me.
  9. 00:41:848 (1) - del. same as 00:37:143 -
  10. 00:48:540 (1) - del.
    00:48:760 (1) - d.
    and 00:48:908 (2) - k. sounds good. and emphasize the next D.
  11. 01:18:981 (2) - del. 5-plet is not fit the music imo.
  12. 01:20:231 - why you made ​​the empty? no empty in this parts... 00:05:525 ~ 00:12:584
  13. 001:24:349 ~ 01:26:555 - please try to make the break of streams :3c
  14. 01:28:761 - kdk here. so good sounds! same as 01:26:408 (1,1,1) -
thats all.
i will re-check the all taiko-diffs at later date.
mingmichael
TKSalt
no kds.

[ m1ng's Inner Oni]
  1. 00:06:040 (2) - del. because 00:06:040 (2,3) - this part has no sounds. 5-plet is not fit the music imo. agree, deleted :3
  2. 00:07:952 (1) - del. if started 5-plet from the top of long white line, basically doesnt fit the music. owh sorry at here. the 5-plets at 00:07:877 (1,1,1,2,1) - will support the string sounds. you can hear that the sound becomes lower at 00:07:877 (1,1,1) - and becomes higher again at 00:08:172 (1) - owo
  3. 00:10:305 (1) - del. same reason as above. same as above too. well i will consider again about these two mods >~<
  4. 00:12:584 ~ 00:14:937 - good streams for me. but it is too long. if you cut the that streams, it will make reasonable. how? http://puu.sh/6h16Q.jpg nice idea >w< but sorry ;w; those notes (i mean stream) will support the violin sound nicely ;w;
  5. 00:19:495 (1) => 00:20:378 - can be follow the flow. okay, i added note there then :3
  6. 00:25:231 (1) - end of streams here.( del the 00:25:304 (2,1,2) - )
    this point has stonk vocal sound. it will be the key for good flow.
    and 00:25:084 - change to ddk here. so fit the stonk vocal, and can emphasize the next d (change to D? )yes all this explanation is right >w< changed all (but i still use kat at 00:25:378 - )
  7. 00:29:128 (2,3,4) - del. sorry ;w; btw 5-plets there are used to suppor the background sound (it's like violin sounds at there)
    and 00:29:495 (1) - del. please dont use force a harder patterns. please respect the music ;_; it becomes weird like a empty part suddenly there D: keep mine sorry ;w; and i think it's not hard ;w; i can play that with 1hand
  8. 00:31:995 (1) - k. dkddk is a little weird for me. agree too. changed :3
  9. 00:41:848 (1) - del. same as 00:37:143 - okay deleted again xD btw i used from another modder mod at there wwww
  10. 00:48:540 (1) - del. good catch! deleted
    00:48:760 (1) - d. changed here also
    and 00:48:908 (2) - k. sounds good. and emphasize the next D. yeahh great~
  11. 01:18:981 (2) - del. 5-plet is not fit the music imo. agree. deleted >w<
  12. 01:20:231 - why you made ​​the empty? no empty in this parts... 00:05:525 ~ 00:12:584 added some notes then >w<
  13. 001:24:349 ~ 01:26:555 - please try to make the break of streams :3c aaahh sorry at here too ;w; xD
  14. 01:28:761 - kdk here. so good sounds! same as 01:26:408 (1,1,1) - hmm in my opinion ooo is much better xD keep mine a while here
thats all.
i will re-check the all taiko-diffs at later date.
thanks a lot takashi-san >w<
here's mine toaranyan~ http://puu.sh/6h34Z.osu
Koiyuki


From your request

  1. Black——My personal suggestions.
  2. Bold——Highly recommended.
  3. Red——Unrankable or maybe unrankable, you had better fix it.




[General]
  1. There is a big jump in difficulty from the Normal to Hard, and the difficulty between Hard and Insane is not very obvious. I recommend to remap the Hard with 1.3~1.4sv.
  2. The song's source is with 'short ver.'? Now you can't add (short ver.) although it's shorter than the whole song.

[Easy]
  1. 00:00:820 - I recommend to use SOFT instead NORMAL sampleset, if you think the volume is low, you can raise it.
  2. 00:06:702 (2) - whistle on the head is better than clap imo
  3. 00:09:055 (3) - 00:11:408 (3) - ^
  4. 00:24:349 (1) - change this to a slider is better imo
  5. 00:29:055 (3,1,2,3) - make the rhythm easier to play is better imo: http://puu.sh/6gTkr.jpg
  6. 00:33:761 (3) - finish on the end
  7. 00:41:996 (1,2) - add finish on the head and the end of the two sliders.
  8. 00:50:231 (2) - this is better imo: http://puu.sh/6h2Vr.jpg , also and finish at 00:51:408 -
  9. 00:57:878 (3,4) - try this? http://puu.sh/6h2YK.jpg

    Need some works on this.

[Cloud's Normal]
  1. 00:05:820 - add a note?

    Nice Normal.

[Kinomi's Hard]
  1. Imo 1.6sv maybe too high for a 204-bpm hard. And Insane is also with 1.6sv.
  2. From 00:05:525 - to 00:14:937 - I recommend to remove the 24clap, which hears weird.
  3. 00:11:408 (6) - NC
  4. 00:22:437 (3) - move this a little higher, seems better
  5. 00:34:643 (4) - use a note at 00:34:937 - instead
  6. 00:35:525 (2,4) - too close blanket looks weird.
  7. 00:56:996 (3,4) - try this rhythm? http://puu.sh/6h3wz.jpg
  8. 01:13:761 (3,4,5) - sounds weird, maybe make 01:14:055 (5) - into 3 notes or make like insane is better
  9. 01:16:408 (6) - ^
  10. Also remove 24clap after 01:17:290 -
  11. 01:26:702 (1,2,3) - the rhythm is wrong, should make it like the rhythm in ts8zs' insane.

    Still need some works on this diff.
    Imo the best way is to remap with 1.4sv.

[Ts8zs' Insane]
  1. 01:16:114 (3,4,5) - 和前面一样的,345不换一下位置么?
  2. 01:29:128 (1) - end at 01:31:408 - as other diffs

    Nice.

[Alternative's Frenzy]
  1. 00:07:731 (6,7,1) - not in a line.
  2. 00:09:717 (5) - delete this and make a better pattern here
  3. 00:12:584 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - overmapped
  4. 00:17:290 (1) - too close with 00:16:996 (6) -
  5. 00:25:672 (2,3) - it's not a good blanket
  6. 00:53:393 (4,5,6,7,8) - I can only hear downbeats on 00:53:467 - and 00:53:614 -
  7. 01:01:849 (1,2,3,4,5) - 234 is weird because it's 3 notes, players will feel weird here, and I can only hear downbears on 01:02:290 -
  8. 01:19:275 (4,5,1) - weird distance
  9. 01:21:482 (5) - same as before

    Need some works.

Good Luck.
Topic Starter
toara_fict

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:



From your request

  1. Black——My personal suggestions.
  2. Bold——Highly recommended.
  3. Red——Unrankable or maybe unrankable, you had better fix it.




[General]
  1. There is a big jump in difficulty from the Normal to Hard, and the difficulty between Hard and Insane is not very obvious. I recommend to remap the Hard with 1.3~1.4sv. ><
  2. The song's source is with 'short ver.'? Now you can't add (short ver.) although it's shorter than the whole song.

http://osu.ppy.sh/b/95921 Is shorter than this one :3

[Easy]
  1. 00:00:820 - I recommend to use SOFT instead NORMAL sampleset, if you think the volume is low, you can raise it. okay,
  2. 00:06:702 (2) - whistle on the head is better than clap imo okay,
  3. 00:09:055 (3) - 00:11:408 (3) - ^ okay,
  4. 00:24:349 (1) - change this to a slider is better imo I thought the pattern of some , but hold ><
  5. 00:29:055 (3,1,2,3) - make the rhythm easier to play is better imo: http://puu.sh/6gTkr.jpg ^
  6. 00:33:761 (3) - finish on the end okay,
  7. 00:41:996 (1,2) - add finish on the head and the end of the two sliders. okay,
  8. 00:50:231 (2) - this is better imo: http://puu.sh/6h2Vr.jpg , also and finish at 00:51:408 - okay, Change :3
  9. 00:57:878 (3,4) - try this? http://puu.sh/6h2YK.jpg Nice ! :3

    Need some works on this.

Good Luck.

Thanks Nice modding >.<!!

m1ng's diff Update
Little
@[Minakami Yuki], I think a circle there will be too soon after the spinner considering this is Normal diff.
Thanks for mod,
no change to my diff.
KinomiCandy

Chamle wrote:

Kinomi's Hard

  1. 00:21:996 (2) - Make this slider curve more around the circle. You are probably going to have to change the whole formation if you want it to more perfect... but this is not as major. Did a little change.
  2. 00:26:702 (4,5,6) - Make the two touching sliders not touch and make (5) parallel to where the ends of the slider would be now be. Done.This is what it would look like.

Evil_Twilight wrote:

[Kinomi's Hard]
  1. 00:11:261 (5) - Move it to 00:11:114 (x) - to keep the regular? Done.
  2. 01:29:055 (5) - Move it higher than 01:28:761 (3,4) - because the pitch is higher than those. Not needed.

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:

[Kinomi's Hard]
  1. Imo 1.6sv maybe too high for a 204-bpm hard. And Insane is also with 1.6sv.
  2. From 00:05:525 - to 00:14:937 - I recommend to remove the 24clap, which hears weird. Not needed.
  3. 00:11:408 (6) - NC Okay.
  4. 00:22:437 (3) - move this a little higher, seems better Removed, so it's not needed.
  5. 00:34:643 (4) - use a note at 00:34:937 - instead Not needed.
  6. 00:35:525 (2,4) - too close blanket looks weird. I guess it's better now.
  7. 00:56:996 (3,4) - try this rhythm? http://puu.sh/6h3wz.jpg Sounds weird, in my opinion. No change.
  8. 01:13:761 (3,4,5) - sounds weird, maybe make 01:14:055 (5) - into 3 notes or make like insane is better Not needed.
  9. 01:16:408 (6) - ^ Not needed.
  10. Also remove 24clap after 01:17:290 - Not needed.
  11. 01:26:702 (1,2,3) - the rhythm is wrong, should make it like the rhythm in ts8zs' insane. Not needed.

    Still need some works on this diff.
    Imo the best way is to remap with 1.4sv. If I necessarily have to remap everything, then I suggest getting another hard from someone else since I can't make it any better no matter how much I try to.
Thanks for modding. http://puu.sh/6i6Mw.osu
TKS
recheck.

[General]
  1. TitleからShort ver.を消してください。Short ver.まで記述されている公式の音源を発見出来ませんでした。その代わりにタグの方にshortとか入れても良いと思います。もし公式の音源でShort ver.と記述しているものがあるならそのままでいいですごめんなさい。
  2. Sourceも「DIVINA」で良いと思います。DIVINA Onlineは米国とかの方での呼称みたいですし、この曲自体も日本のDIVINAの曲なのでそっちに合わせて良いと思います。(本国では幻月之歌という名前らしい…)
[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:01:408 (2,3) - 音に変化が無いし、鳴ってる音もシンプルなものなので、無理に変化を付けずに入れ替えて純粋な音取りにしても良いかも知れません。
  2. 00:44:349 (165) - 微かにクラッシュシンバルっぽい音は聞こえるのですが、finisherじゃない方が直前の D やその後のスピンまでのパターンに合う気がします。一度テストプレイしてみてください。

[ Oni]
  1. 00:00:820 - Muzuでも言ったようにシンプルなパターンで良いと思います。Muzuと差別化するためにも、スライダーまで休符入れずに d k d k ... でも良い気が。(Innerがそんな感じのパターンですが、かぶっても全然大丈夫です)
  2. 00:10:231 (34) - MuzuがfinisherじゃないのでOniも合わせましょう。有るか無いかだと無い方が綺麗だと思います。
  3. 00:12:878 (49) - k. スネアドラムの音です。Muzuは k になってますが、音取りが少し異なってるのでどっちでも良いとは思いますが…こっちの方が個人的には良いと思いました。
  4. 00:28:540 (140) - del. ここらへんのパートはtripletばかりで構成されてるので、ここを5-pletにすると何となく浮いてるような感じでした。
  5. 00:42:290 (222) - これらの k がなんか無理やりくっつけたような感じがしました。そうじゃなかったらごめんなさい;_; これがあってもなくても難易度に変化は無いですし、思い切って全部消した方が D の音がバッチリ決まって良いと思います。
  6. 00:44:349 (232,233,234,235) - Muzuと同じ kdkk が一番音楽に合ってる気がしました。finisherについてもMuzuのmodと同じです。
  7. 00:50:820 - やっぱりここがちょっと気になりました;; たぶん k の音が邪魔してるんだと思うんですが、色々な音が鳴ってて全部あやふやなのでこれが正解!っていうパターンは思いつきませんでした;; 強いて言うならシンプルにはなりますが、ddddk d K とか…
  8. 01:00:672 (81) - これ消しても良いかもです。このノーツのせいで、ボーカルの歌い出しがぼやけちゃってる気がしました。これ消したら、次の 01:00:820 (82) - もサビの頭に合わせて K にしても良いと思います。(Muzuはfinisherになってます)
  9. 01:27:878 (94) - finisherじゃない方が良いと感じました。ここからの音を強調したくてfinisherを付けたなら、直前のノーツを消してみてください。

[ m1ng's Inner Oni]
  1. 00:14:863 (2) - del. i know, you supporting the violin sound nicely. but this is unnecessary notes. over a little x_x
  2. 00:21:334 (3) - => 00:21:187 - make the good balance with preceding pattern.
  3. 00:25:378 (1) - del. need the empty between "Sou" and "Me" vocal sounds.
  4. 00:34:642 (1) - del. do you really need this? i felt a little noisy ;_;
  5. 00:41:848 (1) - you said "deleted again". so forgot? :3c
  6. 00:58:320 (1) - del. it doesnt fit the flow of the your mapped.

また呼んでください
mingmichael
TKSalt
recheck.

[ m1ng's Inner Oni]
  1. 00:14:863 (2) - del. i know, you supporting the violin sound nicely. but this is unnecessary notes. over a little x_x ugh okay ;w;)b
  2. 00:21:334 (3) - => 00:21:187 - make the good balance with preceding pattern. keep mine here. basically i still used ooo patterns at there, and i think the patterns are still good and also balance
  3. 00:25:378 (1) - del. need the empty between "Sou" and "Me" vocal sounds. sorry, it's just an additional note there. it feels really empty there if i don't use any notes at there ;w;
  4. 00:34:642 (1) - del. do you really need this? i felt a little noisy ;_; yes i need it to follow the background sound there (violin sounds after vocals ;w;)
  5. 00:41:848 (1) - you said "deleted again". so forgot? :3c aaahhh gomenn forgottt xD deleted deleted
  6. 00:58:320 (1) - del. it doesnt fit the flow of the your mapped. okay at here, i am agree at here

また呼んでください
thanks for the recheck takashi :3
here's mine toara >w< http://puu.sh/6sLIK.osu
Topic Starter
toara_fict

TKSalt wrote:

recheck.

[General]
  1. TitleからShort ver.を消してください。Short ver.まで記述されている公式の音源を発見出来ませんでした。その代わりにタグの方にshortとか入れても良いと思います。もし公式の音源でShort ver.と記述しているものがあるならそのままでいいですごめんなさい。 okay. 修正しました Tagに Short 追加
  2. Sourceも「DIVINA」で良いと思います。DIVINA Onlineは米国とかの方での呼称みたいですし、この曲自体も日本のDIVINAの曲なのでそっちに合わせて良いと思います。(本国では幻月之歌という名前らしい…) DIVINA に変更しました。
[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:01:408 (2,3) - 音に変化が無いし、鳴ってる音もシンプルなものなので、無理に変化を付けずに入れ替えて純粋な音取りにしても良いかも知れません。Change d d d
  2. 00:44:349 (165) - 微かにクラッシュシンバルっぽい音は聞こえるのですが、finisherじゃない方が直前の D やその後のスピンまでのパターンに合う気がします。一度テストプレイしてみてください。見比べてFinishじゃない方が良かったのでChange

[ Oni]
  1. 00:00:820 - Muzuでも言ったようにシンプルなパターンで良いと思います。Muzuと差別化するためにも、スライダーまで休符入れずに d k d k ... でも良い気が。(Innerがそんな感じのパターンですが、かぶっても全然大丈夫です) okay. Change
  2. 00:10:231 (34) - MuzuがfinisherじゃないのでOniも合わせましょう。有るか無いかだと無い方が綺麗だと思います。Change
  3. 00:12:878 (49) - k. スネアドラムの音です。Muzuは k になってますが、音取りが少し異なってるのでどっちでも良いとは思いますが…こっちの方が個人的には良いと思いました。 Change
  4. 00:28:540 (140) - del. ここらへんのパートはtripletばかりで構成されてるので、ここを5-pletにすると何となく浮いてるような感じでした。 Vocalに合わせて5連をおいていましたが、前後を見比べても3連打で大丈夫なのでChange
  5. 00:42:290 (222) - これらの k がなんか無理やりくっつけたような感じがしました。そうじゃなかったらごめんなさい;_; これがあってもなくても難易度に変化は無いですし、思い切って全部消した方が D の音がバッチリ決まって良いと思います。無理やりくっつけてました;;
  6. 00:44:349 (232,233,234,235) - Muzuと同じ kdkk が一番音楽に合ってる気がしました。finisherについてもMuzuのmodと同じです。 okay.
  7. 00:50:820 - やっぱりここがちょっと気になりました;; たぶん k の音が邪魔してるんだと思うんですが、色々な音が鳴ってて全部あやふやなのでこれが正解!っていうパターンは思いつきませんでした;; 強いて言うならシンプルにはなりますが、ddddk d K とか… ddddk d K でFitした(と思う)のでChange!
  8. 01:00:672 (81) - これ消しても良いかもです。このノーツのせいで、ボーカルの歌い出しがぼやけちゃってる気がしました。これ消したら、次の 01:00:820 (82) - もサビの頭に合わせて K にしても良いと思います。(Muzuはfinisherになってます) Change
  9. 01:27:878 (94) - finisherじゃない方が良いと感じました。ここからの音を強調したくてfinisherを付けたなら、直前のノーツを消してみてください。直前の音を消してみたらなんか違和感感じられたのでBIGを消しましtつぁ。
また呼んでください
Update :3
TKS
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Topic Starter
toara_fict

TKSalt wrote:

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Alternative
Evil_Twilight
  • You can't use ''Frenzy''because the new rule, change it to Insane. o.o
    :arrow: I'll change to Extra
  1. 00:11:849 (4) - Make this ''S'' more better.
  2. 00:12:584 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Same as above :P
  3. 00:18:172 (4) - Ctrl + g? It is a good flow and plays comfortable for me.
  4. 00:37:290 (1,2) - 2 grids left to make 00:37:437 (2,3,4) - them a equilateral triangle.
  5. 00:38:172 (7) - 2 grids left too.
  6. 00:41:996 (1,2,3) - Make these like 00:42:584 (1,2,3) - to keep the regular.
  7. 00:54:643 (3,1) - It isn't a good flow, consider trying this or something else like this?
  8. 01:03:025 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Move these to center to make them symmetrical?

:arrow: All accept!

Nice mod!!! :)

Minakami Yuki
  1. 00:07:731 (6,7,1) - not in a line.
    :arrow: It's OK
  2. 00:09:717 (5) - delete this and make a better pattern here
    :arrow: Accept
  3. 00:12:584 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - overmapped
    :arrow: Why do you think this is overmapped? You can hear BGM song. So these streams are appropriate.
  4. 00:17:290 (1) - too close with 00:16:996 (6) -
    :arrow: :arrow: It's OK
  5. 00:25:672 (2,3) - it's not a good blanket
    :arrow: It's OK
  6. 00:53:393 (4,5,6,7,8) - I can only hear downbeats on 00:53:467 - and 00:53:614 -
    :arrow: I know. But I want to describe variety.
  7. 01:01:849 (1,2,3,4,5) - 234 is weird because it's 3 notes, players will feel weird here, and I can only hear downbears on 01:02:290 -
    :arrow: I know. But I want to describe variety.
  8. 01:19:275 (4,5,1) - weird distance
    :arrow: Accept
  9. 01:21:482 (5) - same as before
    :arrow: Accept

    Need some works.

Thanks for modding
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toara_fict
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