Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions, you don't have to fix, your choice.
Orange: You don't have to fix too, but is better if you do it.
Red: You have to fix this for sure!

Starts Suggestions:

- Cut the mp3 please.

BPM: 156,01
Offset: 56 (Remember to resnap all notes.)

[Easy]

01:29:028 (1) - A note after the spinner is too hard for an easy map.

[Hard]

00:36:097 (3) - New combo.
00:37:016 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:38:051 (6) - New combo.
01:13:094 (1) - Invisible slider.
01:21:077 (1,2,3,4) - Unintuitive change of spacing.
01:22:093 (4) - New combo due to jump.
01:39:008 (2,1) - Spacing.
02:26:000 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:49:027 (1) - Same like 01:13:094.

[Lunatic]

00:52:035 (1,2) - Spacing.
01:21:077 (3,4,5,6) - You need a BPM 2x storyboard warning.
01:24:066 (1) - Unrankable slider.
01:25:023 (2) - ^
01:29:027 (1) - ^
01:30:081 (7) - ^
01:32:093 (2) - ^
01:40:081 (7) - SB Warning here too.
01:58:050 (8) - New combo.

Easy
Nothing

Hard
01:36:097 (1) - i don't like this spinner e_e

Lunatic
Awesome

Star[ite] for you :3

Black approach circles are difficult to see

~Easy~ <<< more like Normal - -"
Fine

~Hard~
00:48:032 (4,5) - don't mute them, at least set volume 20 or 30

~Lunatic~
Crazy, but fine.


+Star

☆ﾉﾉ～

thanks >O<

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I think the hitsounds are kinda loud... well, just the normal hitsound used as a custom soft

Normal-
It's fine

Hard-Could you please increase overall diff by one? The notes come too slow for this fast paced map
Aside from that, the map's fine, ignoring the nazi list I can make

Lunatic-
01:21:078 (3,4,5) - too sudden of a speed change
01:40:081 (7) - ^
02:40:081 (3) - hardly saw this, maybe new combo to make this more visible (or new combo the 2), but I honestly think this is too quick to appear, and unrankable imo
Nazi-
Since so many people already looked and you didn't change those self overlapping sliders, I don't need to ask you to change them, do I?

Awesome song. Im not usually keen on Silver forest but this tune is class

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing it
Red = major issues. you need to change these

Timing looks good

[NORMAL]

no problems

[HARD]

01:21:078 (1,2,3) - Remove these jumps? They feel off to me. but its probably just my opinion

[INSANE]

01:21:078 (3) - Add a warning for the speedup here?
01:40:081 (7) - ^

Nice map. Pretty fun too, even though that stream at 02:23:070 made me go :<

star'd

nice map

star

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Updated!!! I finally changed the sliders ;_____;

Fabulous~!

[Normal]
Fine~

[Hard]
00:48:42(5)-Start here 00:48:51?
00:54:48(6,7,8)-Move 1 lv.3 grid left?
00:57:36(5)-Move 1 lv.3 grid right?
00:59:28(2,3)-Spacing?
01:00:05(3,4,5,6,7)-^
01:03:37(2,3,4,5,6)-^
02:01:01(4,5)-^
02:01:78(6,7)-^
02:09:09(10,11)-^
02:17:74(11)-Move 1 lv.3 grid down?
02:18:70(2,3)-Spacing?
02:29:28(5,6)-^

[Insane]
01:14:01-Ilove this part~
01:34:10(1,3,7)-Move 1 lv.3 grid right?

Star~

fixed n-n thanksss!

nice song, i like the streams in lunatic.

i did not mod normal and hard btw, they seemed fine.

But here are a few things that bothered me in the Lunatic diff. your combo color sometimes breaks off the rythm. there were some kind of unrankable stuff aswell

put +5 to the offset (all diffs)


[Lunatic]
00:33:091 (9) - new combo starts here | 00:34:068 (1) - remove new combo
01:24:068 (6) - new combo here
01:26:021 (9) - new combo here
01:30:083 (7) - new combo here
01:34:088 (5) - Move this note 2 grids left to make it symmetric
02:09:029 (13) - new combo starts here | 02:09:068 (1) - remove new combo
02:10:083 (11) - new combo starts here | 02:11:060 (1) - remove new combo
02:12:037 (8) - new combo starts here | 02:12:056 (1) - remove new combo
01:13:091 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - cluster fuck, please remove i doubt this is rankable
02:17:075 (8,9,10) - don't do this. bad jump pattern, swap places between 9 and 10

not a fan of those fast weird sliders, it's almost as if you got bored and just put down whatever :\

other then that really fun ^^

star

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wooow

star~

thanks!!

Mod's Info:
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3 I'll just mod the beats in your map, in all its forms, will not tell you to add or remove the beat <3

[Normal]
HP Drain Rate, Circle Size and Overall Difficulty are too low! Increase them.
Afterall i don't see any problemi ^^

[Hard]
Circle Size are too large! Make them more tiny.
Seems fine ^^

[Lunatic]
02:23:142 (1,2,3) Spacing is wrong, Insane or not. Recheck.

And that's all for your map! Good job! <3 I hope you will search me again for other mods x3 Starred

Some sliders must be fixed. Especially 01:40:083 (7) in the in the Lunatic diff.
Other else, fine. And anyway, this song is really nice but will nicer with vocal IMO.

EDIT: Increase the HP Drain Rate and Overall Difficulty two or three ticks in the Normal diff. You MUST do it.

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good, Lunatic's insane, but it's alright, cannot find anything.

General
Kiai time. (A map like thing needs kiai time )
Also cut the .mp3

Normal
00:26:989(3)- New combo

Hard
No real complaint. Just recheck using AImod.

Lunatic
01:13:912 (1) - 01:16:892 (8) - Wow!
01:20:642 (6) - Looks not that neat
01:21793 (3,4,5) - SB Warning; The tempos not fast here for you to x2 it without a warning.

Apart from that my only complaint is that the sliders are not that neat-looking.

Good map.

Howdy Mr.YES!!!!

[Normal]
00:48:527 (5) - Make parallel
01:09:681 (1) - Allign with 2 (from bottom) and please fix all spacing

[Hard]
01:01:027 (6) - Make parallel
02:33:335 (7,8,9) - Allign with 6
02:38:142 (3) - Offscreen
02:47:566 (1) - ^

I think this song like eurobeat song
Starred

thank you for mod & stars (:
i think that the storyboard 2x bpm thing isn't really needed. but maybe if i stop being so lazy i'll make one. thanks for all of the helpful comments n_n

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The combination of skin elements + combo colors makes it really really hard to see anything, mainly the black color.

Lunatic:

00:46:002 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - The way you have these placed on the time line right now is completely unintuitive. Move all of these back 1/2. It sounds and plays MUCH better. I understand what you mapped this to, but it just doesn't flow well at all with the previous and next sections.
02:23:071 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Space these closer horizontally. Ideally you want it to be possible to move the cursor in a straight line and still hit everything, and you can't really do that right now.
02:49:010 (6,1) - Why is there a random jump in a 1/4 stream.

Thanks Lybydose! I changed everything you mentioned.
Been meaning to change that black combo color since someone else already mentioned but I forgot

00:45:083 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - You moved the notes but didn't change the hitsounds to go with it. Should be clap on 1, 5, and 9, and remove clap from 4 and 8.

don't kudosu this

i kinda like the hitsounds on 4,8 ;__; i added the claps to 1,5,9 too though. maybe that sounds betterr.

thanks again!

totaly worth to get it ranked star!

|Blue = Suggestion | Red = Change plz | Green = Design |
-Normal-
Good :3

-Hard-
Nice!

-Lunatic-
Would be cool if you map it to the end.

-Overall-
Cut the mp3 if youre not going to map Lunatic to the end.
Nice map :3
Have a Star~

I prefer to make maps a bit easier, so if you want to keep your map hard, reject my suggestion.

Lunatic
00:44:10 (6,7) - : stacking on 00:44:48 (8) seems not a good idea,but it looks symmetry. try the placement below, at your choice.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1085

actually i'd like do this:
but hmm.. starz.

Thanks! I'll cut the mp3 later and update n_n

By Al2e10's Mod!!

[Lunatic]
02:09:296 (10) new combo
02:09:681 (1) remove new combo
02:10:739 Changed(11) New combo
02:11:604 (1) remove new combo

[Hard]
Fine !!

[Normal]
Fine !!

[All]
I think Lunatic can use sone spinner next time ~ That can be better
Nice map !!

Star!!!

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Fixed Thanks al2e10~
I changed the mp3 too!

[Overall]

Capitalize "touhou & alice" on the tags.

[Difficulties]

[Lunatic]

01:21:079 (1,2,3) - Add some storyboard warning for this sliders.
01:40:083 (7) - ^
02:40:083 (3) - Hidden slider.

That's all.

i like this song very much

i added the warning 2x, but i kept the hidden slider because i think it's okay :/

thanks for mod and star~

Enjoy your bubble. <3

<3__<3

Way to recolor my cursor without asking.

You need to include the following sprites:

-scorebar-BG.png (looks like you based the lifebar on the default skin, so i suggest grabbing that one.)
-cursortrail.png (if you need one, since you already used my cursor, feel free to use the cursortrail from that as well. Recolor it if you have to of course.)


The comboburst is too large. Maximum width for combobursts in a ranked map is 500px.

Kiai time is NOT to be used for the fountain effects alone. Please change this. It happens at 01:16:989 and 02:53:142.


Lunatic:

00:45:835 (1) - Since it's right after a series of jumps, it makes me want to rush the next note. How about considering moving it higher?
01:13:912 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is near impossible to read.
01:16:989 to 01:41:219: There are some really ugly sliders.
01:40:835 (7) - The 2x warning on this slider is hard for me to notice since it is placed over Alice in the BG, specifically over the red area. Please consider moving the warning to the other side of the slider.
02:21:412 (2) - This slider is somewhat hidden.
02:23:719 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Can you *not* zig-zag these notes?
02:40:835 (3) - This slider is mostly hidden.
02:48:142 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This stream is *kind* of absurd. That being said i have hit it more than once....


Hard:

00:48:335 - Please make these have SOME sound. They are completely inaudible here.
01:13:912 (1,1,1,1) - There is absoultely no reason whatsoever you could give me to convince me that these sliders need 1/8th beat timing.
01:16:989 (1,2,3,4,1) - Why are these so slow?
01:23:142 to 01:41:219: Same as Lunatic. Sliders seem a bit sloppy.
02:23:912 to 02:48:142: Same as above note. Ugly/sloppy sliders. If you have to use squiggly-line sliders, i suggest linear, not bezier.
02:49:296 - Same as note at 01:13:912.


Normal:

There's some sloppy slider construction here as well, but it's not as bad as the other difficulties. Sliders like 00:43:142 (1) should probably change though.

Cyclone wrote:

Way to recolor my cursor without asking. oh.i thought it was the same as default skin but colored differently so i didnt think to. sorry about that!



The comboburst is too large. Maximum width for combobursts in a ranked map is 500px. current combo burst is 480 x 640 so i didnt change it. unless you mean max height is 500 >_<

Lunatic:

01:13:912 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is near impossible to read. i left this the way it is because it just goes in a circle and i dont think its too hard to read :/ i love this part
01:16:989 to 01:41:219: There are some really ugly sliders. changed a bunch of them. hopefully its better now
02:21:412 (2) - This slider is somewhat hidden. i left this one
02:23:719 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Can you *not* zig-zag these notes? ._. i like this part tooo
02:48:142 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This stream is *kind* of absurd. That being said i have hit it more than once.... i put less spacing between the notes (:


Hard:

01:23:142 to 01:41:219: Same as Lunatic. Sliders seem a bit sloppy. changed some of them

everything else is done! thanks for the mod

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okay n_n i changed it

thanks again Gabi and Cyclone!

yes's map is very nice

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thanks for stars SOGASOGAMO and Celestral. updated ~

[Normal]
00:43:142 (6) - new combo

[Hard]
02:26:604 (5,6,7) - move 7 closer to 6 to make this look better, look odd the way it is


[lunatic]
01:33:719 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - spacing change at (5.6.7) compared to (1,2,3,4,5) make same spacing or use a new combo i say
01:40:835 (7) - feels pontless having a speed up for one slider

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expect from them few probs its nice maps, diserves a star

updated n_n thanks

Star, I love your use of hitsounds. nice hit lighting also

The map is technically fine. Here are a few suggestions for better looking stuff if you want.

Lunatic:

00:53:142 (3) - Can probably make this symmetrical.
01:17:566 (2) - You can curve this better, something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1744
02:36:219 (12) - This way this slider stacks looks kind of odd in play mode.
02:48:142 (1) - Really high on the screen. This is mostly a result of grid shift in the new build though.

Hard:

01:01:604 (1) - More symmetrical maybe?
01:17:565 (2) - ^
01:32:373 (3) - ^
02:24:681 (1) - ^
02:46:219 (1) - ^

Normal:

01:14:681 (2) - Align with the 1 by holding shift
01:30:835 (3) - Curve is kind of sloppy

PM me after you make these changes (or if you decide not to change anything).

thanks Randy96 and Lybydose (again~)
updated mostly everything

Bubble.

ooh wow! yay thanks!

Just a couple minor tweaks and suggestions.


Lunatic:

01:21:796 - Is there any particular reason why this is louder than all around it?
01:22:950 (4,1) - This spacing is kinda close. May I suggest that the 3 sliders before this (the white combo) alternate directions for sliders? Kinda like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1790
01:24:681 (1) - And since I'm on suggestions, how about flipping this to be similar to many of the patterns around it. (sliders coming/going from opposite directions.) And possibly make these more symmetrical.


Hard:

01:23:142 - Similar to the first note above. Why is this the only area you decided to use normal hitsounds instead of soft ones?

I love your map

thankss.

Cyclone wrote:

01:22:950 (4,1) - This spacing is kinda close. May I suggest that the 3 sliders before this (the white combo) alternate directions for sliders? Kinda like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1790

Don't want to make this change? There's nothing wrong as it is though, so...

Proto-Bubble (again)

Since they were only simply suggestions, it's up to him if he wants to follow them or not.

Also, was the break in Hard always that long?

Anyways, bubbled.

Ranked!

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<3 THANK YOU