1. 00:00:054 (1,2) - i think (1) move left for 4 grids, (2) right 4 grids looks better.
2. 00:13:295 (1,2,3) - 3/4 sliders better maybe :p
3. 00:15:778 (5) - i think only 2 circles here fits better to the vocal
4. 00:16:606 (1) - rotate 7 degrees will look better ^^ 00:17:019 (2) ctrl+h
5. 00:22:709 (3) - move right 1grid >_>
6. 00:23:019 (1) - put here.? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/405205
7. 00:24:881 (2,3,4,5) - more spacing lol
8. 00:53:640 (4) - i think http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/405210 >_>
9. 00:57:364 (4) - put here.? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/405211
10. i like this diff, different feeling from the ranked other happy girls wwwww

1. 00:10:606 (3) - add reverse? spacing to (4) is too confusing
2. 00:25:502 (1,2) - i think, as blue (1,2) is 3/4, pink (1,2) is 1/2 but same distance, it is a bit awkward to play, make them different will be better~
3. 00:38:950 (2) - this slider feels like stacked a note at 00:39:261, so if you stack one 00:39:571 (4) i think players will misclick and miss ww better stack that on blue slider's head http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/405213
4. 01:08:123 (1) - bettter blanket http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/405216
5. 01:21:157 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - don't make big circle ^^b too hard for a Hard diff

1. 00:25:709 (2,1) - blanket o.o
2. 00:56:743 (5) - spacing.?
3. 01:12:881 (3) - ^
4. 01:19:295 (3) - as 01:18:468 skipped a sound too, starting this at 01:19:502 should be better for beginners to follow the rhythm.

1. 00:10:812 (1,2) - better some curve here ww

Sunshine wrote:

[i_k's Insane]

`00:48:675 (1,2,3,4) - It makes me confused. any suggest :3?

Nice map. thanks ><

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

I_k's Insane

1. 00:00:054 (1,2) - i think (1) move left for 4 grids, (2) right 4 grids looks better. ahm jump becomes so long, if its pointed again will change the shape
2. 00:13:295 (1,2,3) - 3/4 sliders better maybe :p pattern sounds good on 1/2 ticks, plus there is a cymbal sound on red ticks, also I like this part like this <3
3. 00:15:778 (5) - i think only 2 circles here fits better to the vocal sounds so suddenly empty, also the vocal change is on white tick
4. 00:16:606 (1) - rotate 7 degrees will look better ^^ 00:17:019 (2) ctrl+h cant see a significative difference but yeah
5. 00:22:709 (3) - move right 1grid >_> <v< ok
6. 00:23:019 (1) - put here.? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/405205 hmm dunno, overlap with others looks soft for me and it is stacked on 00:24:364 (6) -
7. 00:24:881 (2,3,4,5) - more spacing lol is on x1.0 spacing /o/ any suggest?
8. 00:53:640 (4) - i think http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/405210 >_> already changed the shape of this boys, sawa-chan havent updated yet /o/ hey what is that slider ball xD???
9. 00:57:364 (4) - put here.? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/405211 eyup, tried some stuff about this slider but long space blanket looks nice, and dat slider ball >v>
10. i like this diff, different feeling from the ranked other happy girls wwwww yeaaaahh bro, that is what I always try to make ;3!!

Sunshine wrote:

[Hard]

00:11:226 (4) - The spacing... maybe ↓ is better No, spacings seems fine so will keep this for now.

00:46:399 (1,2,3) - I recommend to use 1/2 to match the strong rhythm. 1/1 silder feels dull... No, i think 1/2 rhythm don't fit with the song.

Really good map! I got 99.6%ACC when I first time play it. Ohh thanks!

[Mitsu's Normal]

Open AIMOD and fix the two spacing warnings.
00:16:606 (1) - I think maybe ↓ is better Made something similar.

00:37:088 (2) - try this to match the rhyrhm? Don't forget to add clap. No, thinks this slider is fine.

00:46:399 (1) - maybe putting three notes is better.. No
01:21:157 (1,2,3) - ↓ Made something similar.

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Hard

1. 00:10:606 (3) - add reverse? spacing to (4) is too confusing Just changed (4) place.
2. 00:25:502 (1,2) - i think, as blue (1,2) is 3/4, pink (1,2) is 1/2 but same distance, it is a bit awkward to play, make them different will be better~ I think this is fine
3. 00:38:950 (2) - this slider feels like stacked a note at 00:39:261, so if you stack one 00:39:571 (4) i think players will misclick and miss ww better stack that on blue slider's head http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/405213 Fixed
4. 01:08:123 (1) - bettter blanket http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/405216 Okay
5. 01:21:157 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - don't make big circle ^^b too hard for a Hard diff This is intentional

Mitsu's Normal

1. 00:25:709 (2,1) - blanket o.o Fixed
2. 00:56:743 (5) - spacing.? Fixed
3. 01:12:881 (3) - ^ Fixed
4. 01:19:295 (3) - as 01:18:468 skipped a sound too, starting this at 01:19:502 should be better for beginners to follow the rhythm. Fixed

Tsukasa wrote:

Yay more happy girl mapsets~ I'd have 5 ranked TV sizes if this ever got ranked

I love you sawa-chan for making another set <3

And i'd love to annoy someone with another mapset

EDIT: I'd love to check this out but i'd be quite busy for a while due to a certain exam

TheVileOne wrote:

i_k's Insane

That one stream killed my ability to play it, and some of the spacing sequences played in an unusual way. Gaps in the beat are generally treated like jump sequences in normal insanes but in this one there's a lot of just regular snapped sequences, which tones down the speed. Some players might want a more intense pace, but there's nothing technically wrong with how you spaced things. cant get at all this, sorry bad engrish, you mean that I need more jumps :s?

00:05:847 (1,2,3,4,1) - Small thing, but these spacings differ slightly. You should make this pattern perfect. yeah, minor thing, anyways spaced to x1,50
00:06:468 (4,1) - snap change plays weird. I think this would be better. http://puu.sh/WS3S I think that a flow breaking goes better since the vocals starts here, but will consider if its pointed again
00:15:157 (1,2,3,4) - Make both spacings 1.0? nice nazi catch
00:16:606 (1) - Weirdly sticks out of the end of the stream IMO. hmm? sorry cant get x.x
00:18:675 (2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Awesome pattern thanks~
00:25:192 (3) - Slider could be better. any suggest?~
00:38:743 (1,2,3) - Stacking improperly. You can fix by moving 00:39:157 (2,3) - to x 332 y 268 Check snap afterwards. this is actually a bug of our dear posu editor, like the pointment as down, it get auto-moved or something, I always check this such of things and it makes like this, anyways auto-stack works so I though there is not major problem here, if it still pointed will consider change the pattern
00:40:192 (1,2,3) - Not stacking properly. Spacing isn't exactly 0.00. You will need to straighten the last two move points of the slider to be able to snap notes perfectly to 0.00. eyup~ bug
00:53:640 (4) - This would be better if it were moved to x 256 y 144. k, dunno why but k


Good maps.

TheVileOne wrote:

SK's Easy

Only cosmetic issues to point out.

00:25:709 (2,1) - Transition looks kind of bad. Changed Pattern here.
00:33:157 (1,3) - These sliders aren't perfectly symmetrical. The center point is directly behind the middle slider tick. Fixed, i think...I do not know if they were perfectly symmetrical. But I tried my best to make them perfect.
00:41:019 (2,3,4,1) - You should clean up this corner by slanting the corner out. http://puu.sh/WR4r I think fixed.
00:54:675 (1) - Make symmetrical by making the distance between points 1 and 2 the same as the distance of 3 and 4. I'll help you out on this slider. The middle point needs to be at x 256, y 64. Make similar sliders/sliders you copied from the same too. Ok, thanks for help
00:58:812 (4) - Highly recommend you flip vertically and fix spacing. It looks better and goes nicely into the next slider. You're right, fixed!
01:02:537 (3) - Nazi- Move center point under middle slider tick? Okay
01:03:778 (4) - This does not fit the shape of the previous slider. You should try something like this. http://puu.sh/WReF Fixing spacing shouldn't be that much of an issue afterwards. Tried to make slider like this, isn't like the photo, but tried.

I'm a beginner, don't expect too much!

• 1. Delete 00:37:295 (2) -
  2. Copy this slider 00:36:468 (1) - and then Insert it here 00:37:088
  3. Make a slider from 00:37:709 to 00:38:537
  4. After that It shoud look like this:
  
  SPOILER

  
  SPOILER

  

dubbadeni wrote:

From ★ ~ dubbadeni ' s Beginnner Modding Queue ~ ★
I'm a beginner, don't expect too much!
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Easy

00:37:295 (2) - This slider doesnt fit to the beat or to her voice. Yeah this slider fits with beat and vocals, just listen the music carefully.
You can try this:

• 1. Delete 00:37:295 (2) -
  2. Copy this slider 00:36:468 (1) - and then Insert it here 00:37:088
  3. Make a slider from 00:37:709 to 00:38:537
  4. After that It shoud look like this:
  
  SPOILER

  
  SPOILER

  

00:53:847 (1) - This circle is too close after that spinner before for Easy. (AiMod) No, i think is fine.
00:53:847 (1,2) - No Stacks in Easy please! That's too hard for beginner. Didn't used much stacks, is fine that way.

TheVileOne wrote:

Mitsu's Normal

Solid difficulty. not much wrong.

00:09:157 (4) - Doesn't look good next to 00:09:985 (1) - . I highly suggest you make these sliders parallel. Fixed
00:17:226 (2) - Repeat is awfully close to that hitburst. I don't suggest having it so close. Okay
00:26:950 (1,2,3) - Nazi- Exactly 1.2? Okay
00:29:640 - Sounds empty without a note. I don't think it.
00:42:468 (5) - Should follow the end of previous slider better and be closer to parallel with the next slider. http://puu.sh/WRs3 Ok
00:48:675 (4) - I suggest you place this above the end of 3 instead of below it. It looks better that way. http://puu.sh/WRuq Okay
01:04:606 (1,2) - The misalignment sort of bothers me. But it would involve you to move a lot of your patterns down to fix. I'm not sure if it's worth it. ? Don't understand this sorry for my poor english
01:17:847 (1) - Doesn't look that good so close to the curve of the previous slider. I suggest moving x 344 y 184 Okay
01:19:502 (3,4,5,1) - This part of the combo is kind of formless and doesn't look good. You should try a pattern. This is a suitable pattern IMO. http://puu.sh/WRDu Ok
01:22:812 (4) - This would be better if it was moved down some. It would be a more natural flowing angle off of 3. If you didn't understand what you meant, here is a SS http://puu.sh/WRGr Ok

Hard

I liked it. You should change everything I found though.

00:06:674 (1) - Move left 1 unit to fix spacing? Ok
00:24:881 (1,2,1,2) - I don't agree with spacing 3/4th and 1/2th the same even if you change combo. The spacing of that 1/2th is unexpected when you first try it and really too fast in general. Just make all one combo and stack the 1/2th part. It plays better. Okay
00:54:675 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This is a rather boring way to start a kiai. I recommend you remap and use less repetition. Remapped a bit...

nich95 wrote:

Mitsu's Normal

1. 01:05:433 (2,3,4) - Make to this be better. No, rhythm here seems fine.
   
   SPOILER

   

Hard

1. 00:09:468 (5) - The rhythm is strange. Please move it to 00:09:675 -. Fixed
2. 00:16:295 - Add a note here? Fixed
3. 00:37:709 (1,2) - Move (1) to like 00:36:468 (1,2) and 00:37:088 (1,2). Okay
4. 01:17:847 (2,3) - Spacing is closer than (7,1) and (4,5). Move (1,2) to x:488 y:184. Okay

Good luck~ Thanks for mod

cmn_891127 wrote:

[Hard]
00:37:088 (1,2) - (1) x:444 y:48, move (2) with (1) Okay
01:02:537 (5,6) - Ctrl+R No, seems strange for me.

[Mitsu's Normal]
01:22:399 (3) - tail x:200 y:200 Okay

Nice song and nice mapset~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Thanks!
Good luck!!! Thanks for mod and star~

R e v i v e wrote:

Normal

00:48:675 (4) - Spacing then add clap end of slider. Fixed only clap in slider end, spacing is ok.

Hard

00:49:088 (6) - Add clap. Ok

And sorry about my noob mod skill lol rs i don't mind thanks for mod

Lally wrote:

[Hard]
01:12:881 (5) ~ new combo No problem


sorry for noob mod ;W; Don't mind

Gabe wrote:

Hi, here's my mod from my one hour modding queue. Really sorry for the realy big delay. No problem

Red/Bold = Must be fixed;
Bold = Something that should be fixed.

[Easy]
Pretty well constructed.
00:06:674 (1) - This slider could be improved by moving the last dot one grid down (So both start and ending will be aligned) and also, move the second dot, one grid down. Ok
00:11:640 (2) - This circle has some problems with hitsounds. It's totally not consistent. Before, you added whistles to every big white line and now you're adding them to the second and fourth white line. So.. all I can say here is to add a whistle to this circle. Ok
00:50:950 (2) - This circle can be easily be moved somewhere else. Since the previous slider is curved, the circle sould be somewhere around x:44 y:184. Ok
00:53:847 (1,2) - Can you unstack these please? In fact, it's prefered to not stack circles/sliders on an easy difficulty. Beginner players can be confused. She don't want to unstack them so will keep this because she already said why she don't want to unstack them. Will talk to her in next so will talk to her about this stack

[Normal]
I'm seeying nothing wrong here. It's pretty simple and clean.
01:14:123 (4,1) - These objects shouldn't be in the same y:axis. Maybe doing something like this would be better? If course, if you do this change, you must change the spacing for the other slider. Ok

[Hard]
I really like this difficulty. Keep up the good work. Arigato *o*
HP +1
00:09:985 (1) - I really think this slider shouldn't be stacked with the triplets before.. It may be confusing but not really. But still, getting them unstacked will be nice. Stacked them intentionally.
00:45:778 and 00:45:985 (6) - These two notes should have a normal clap like these 00:42:468 (2,3) - . Ok
01:12:881 (5) - I agree with Lally. You should add a new combo here since the combo is really long and there's also some changes in the song. Fixed in previous mod
01:18:675 (5) - I swear this note is not aligned with these circles 01:17:847 (1,2,3,4) - . So move this slider to x:360 y:344 to get them more aligned that it is right now. Ok

SkyDevil wrote:

Easy
00:54:675 (1,2) - maybe => (notice the claps too btw) Can't understand this...
Rhythm change maybe?

suzutsukikanade wrote:

SkyDevil wrote:

Easy
00:54:675 (1,2) - maybe => (notice the claps too btw) Can't understand this...
Rhythm change maybe?

Anyway, thanks for mod

SkyDevil wrote:

Hello~ Modding taim~

General
Maybe its a good idea to have a clap sound of S:C1 as slidertick for S:C2 so you can make that sound on sliderticks for example: 00:41:847 - at normal I really don't like put custom sliderticks in my maps, i just add if my guest wants.

Normal
00:14:950 (4) - (nazi) Make it more curved please :3 Ok
00:55:502 (3) - make this slider 2 x 1/1 long :c and remove the circle at 00:56:330 (4) - Sorry. but i think the current rhythm sounds fine for a normal.
01:03:571 (3) - clap? :3 OK
01:16:812 (3) - ^ Ok

Hard
00:09:571 (5,6,7,1) - Please don't stack a slider beneath a triplet, it doesn't play well Plays good for me and made this intentionally so...
00:25:502 (1) - why new combo here? Oh missed this, fixed

Good luck with your map~ and I hope its going to get ranekd soon~

1. 00:06:674 (1) - Add a whistle on the reverse arrow
2. 00:09:157 (2) - ^ but on the start of the slider
3. 00:12:054 (3) - since there whistle on the note before it, so remove whistles on the start and end and add whistle on reverse sounds better >.<
4. 00:13:295 (1) - same as i said here 00:06:674 (1) -
5. 00:15:778 (2) - remove whistle on the end and add it on the start instead
6. 00:18:261 (1) - let this spinner end here 00:19:502 - sounds better with the song :3
7. 00:49:709 (1) - remove this nc seems useless to me and i mean really =3=
8. 01:13:709 (1,3) - switch the nc then remove the nc here 01:18:261 (1) -
9. 01:24:054 (4) - why whistle here? it dont follow anything so remove it

1. 00:18:261 (1) - same as i said on easy diff
2. 00:49:709 (1) - remove this nc seems useless here orz
3. 01:19:502 (3) - i see red sliderpoint maybe remove it?

Piscis wrote:

[Mitsu's Normal]
00:51:157 (1) - Start 00:51:364 ~ end 00:54:261. OK
01:09:571 (3) - Add finish to slider start. OK
01:11:226 (1) - ^ ^

[Hard]
01:02:743 (6) - I think it does not match the song... Suggestion~ No

SPOILER

Good map!

Sekai-nyan wrote:

Mitsu's Normal:

1. 00:18:261 (1) - same as i said on easy diff OK
2. 00:49:709 (1) - remove this nc seems useless here orz Ok
3. 01:19:502 (3) - i see red sliderpoint maybe remove it? As this does not imply the format slider so for me no problem.

That's all i can find here, this normal seems to be normal+ then original normal ><

Sonnyc wrote:

This is a thrid mod 4 mod post

Mitsu's Normal:

00:42:468 (5) - Since it's heading toward, 1 grid up to make a line with (4) Ok
01:05:847 (2,3) - Make a better line Ok

Hard:

00:14:950 (6) - NC? Ok
00:43:916 (8) - Add Whistle at the start, due to your pattern Ok
00:49:916 (2,3) - Ctrl+G each? Jumping here will not be a bad choice Ok
00:54:054 (3) - Reduce 1/4, and add a Reverse Since this is following with the song is ok

Good luck~

Fenya wrote:

Hi~ M4M~ :3


Mitsu's Normal:
Missing work, some parts is so easy in other parts is hard, try fix it
Pls, Fix the spacing o_O For me spacing here is ok
Your distance spacing is x0,8... You should change distance spacing to x1,0~ Eh...DS is 1.2 not 0.8
The big jumps in a normal, not suitable~ Don't see jumps here orz
00:14:950 (4) - Put like this: http://puu.sh/1hAzC sounds better, imo :p Ok
00:54:675 (1) - Too close with spinner, for the newbie player can be hard Well seems empty for me without this note...but ok i think you are right.
00:55:502 (3) - This slider not have rhythm, pls, fix it :c "Happy Happy Giiiirl" yes they have rhythm, following vocal for me.
01:02:950 (3) - Put like this: http://puu.sh/1hAMG Sounds better, imo Ok

Hard:
Some Jumps pointless Some jumps are made intentionally.
01:13:606 (5) - Note unnecessary Yes this note is needed here, follow the song.
01:16:916 (6) - ^ ^

That's all, sorry for my bad English :c Not really

Piscis wrote:

Hi M4M!

[SK's Easy]
01:07:916 (1,3) - Overlap? Exactly
01:17:019 (4) - Remove finish to slider end. This doesn't have a finish in slider end.
01:18:261 (1) - ^ ^

Sekai-nyan wrote:

SK's Easy:

1. 00:06:674 (1) - Add a whistle on the reverse arrow Ok
2. 00:09:157 (2) - ^ but on the start of the slider Ok
3. 00:12:054 (3) - since there whistle on the note before it, so remove whistles on the start and end and add whistle on reverse sounds better >.< Ok
4. 00:13:295 (1) - same as i said here 00:06:674 (1) - Ok
5. 00:15:778 (2) - remove whistle on the end and add it on the start instead Ok
6. 00:18:261 (1) - let this spinner end here 00:19:502 - sounds better with the song :3 Ok
7. 00:49:709 (1) - remove this nc seems useless to me and i mean really =3= NC here because of the vocal change here
8. 01:13:709 (1,3) - switch the nc then remove the nc here 01:18:261 (1) - Ok
9. 01:24:054 (4) - why whistle here? it dont follow anything so remove it Ok

Taris wrote:

[Normal]

00:19:916 - Either add note here or extend spinner Sounds better with the song
00:25:709 (2) - Make it a 1/2 reverse slider. Don't think this is a good idea...don't like how slider sound here...
00:35:226 (5) - Add new combo Added more because i fixed the suggestion below, to prevent the combo becomes too long.
00:35:847 - Add note OK
00:40:812 - ^ No
01:12:675 - ^ No
01:20:537 - ^ No
00:49:709 (6) - New combo No, reason in sekai-nyan mod, nc seems useless here.

Placement is kinda messy...I don't think so

[Hard]

00:09:985 (1) - Remove note, stacking like this might make players click to fast and miss My ranked Hard diff have a pattern like this and works good for me so...
00:19:502 (1) - Remove note, increase the spinner length.. Sounds strange for me when i make this

That's all.

Wax789 wrote:

Hi Sawa-chan
from your M4M queue~
All mod is suggestion

[General]
00:54:675 - 01:24:468
In this kiai time, change volume 70% Changed to 75%

[Mitsu's Normal]
01:04:606 - 01:07:502 Current is better
Try this? http://puu.sh/1hZ6n
You should adjust to vocal in this part, I think

00:54:054 unnecessary inherited point...? Ok
00:54:261 ^ Ok deleted
delete it or add note!

[Hard]
00:46:399 (1) - make more symmetrical slider Looks symmetrical for me
00:47:640 (3) - ^ ^

01:04:606 (1) - add clap to slider start Ok
01:05:433 (3) - ^ ^
01:06:054 (6) - add clap Sounds strange so no
01:06:261 (7) - add clap to slider reverse point ^

Taris wrote:

Hi~

[Easy]

00:15:364 - Add a note No
00:11:226 - ^ ^
00:27:364 (2) - Please add a new combo here, since we are going to vocals now Is strange, since are another combo in previous slider.
00:15:778 (3) - Change to a note instead of slider I think slider is fine for beginners and don't looks good with a slider before a note
00:30:261 (1) - Hm... Make the slider start in white tick and end in red tick.. Current rhythm is fine since they are followiing vocal
00:37:088 - Try this rhythm http://puu.sh/1j7zO Don't want make rhythm changes here
00:37:709 (3) - ^ ^
00:38:950 (5) - Shorten slider, so it end in white tick Follow instrumental so i think it's not a problem
00:42:675 (4) - Clap here sound really bad.... Not really
01:07:088 (3) - ^ ^
00:54:675 (1) - Make the curve nicer, Looks nice for me
00:54:675 (1) - Finish in the end can be removed.. Added whistle
00:57:985 (3) - New combo Ok
01:09:571 (3) - Remove finish.. Added whistle
01:14:123 (2) - New combo should be here, remove the new combo in the note before No, because back vocal (or vocal? don't know o.o) starts here
01:24:054 (4) - Try this rhythm http://puu.sh/1j7GJ Don't want to make rhythm changes here

This diff can be better... but your combo placement is good

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

[Normal]
00:59:433 (3) - I suggest to shorten this slider (start at 00:59:640 - , end at 01:00:054 - ) because I think it's unexpected. Ok

[Hard]
00:19:916 (2) - New Combo? Kay

Only this

Xinely wrote:

[Normal]
00:12:468 (6) - make slider end in 00:12:881 - and give circle at 00:13:295 - This pattern actually works good in Normal diffs, but will keep it because is more easier to read the rhythm here.
00:13:709 (1,2) - how about remove 2 circle this and make slider to change this circle? Looks strange for me when i do this...
01:04:192 (4,1) - just suggest, don't stack it This stack is fine for me i guess...
01:07:295 (5) - remove clap In this part have clap sound here.
01:21:157 (1,2,3) - hard for normal i think, just make a simple pattern plz Yeah i guess too, will think in something more simple to do here.

[Hard]
00:12:881 (10,1) - hard jump X_X , maybe a little closer plz :3 E-eto...this isn't really too hard jump and spacing looks fine for me so will keep it for now.
00:36:468 (1,2) - spacing, use DS plz Anti-jumps are intentional here
00:37:088 (1,2) - ^ ^
00:37:709 (1,2) - stack ^
nice diff and hitsound Thanks~
i like it

i think that's all
Good Luck (:

• 01:05:433 (2,3) - Delete 3 and add a repeat to 2
  01:06:261 (4) - Move it back to the red tick (01:06:054) and add another hit circle at 01:07:088
  http://puu.sh/1DZJE

Weez wrote:

From my mod queue

Mitsu's Normal
00:25:709 (2) - This slider isn't prefectly even. Tried to make it more perfect
00:45:571 (5) - Fits much more better with the song if it were a 1/1 slider instead of a repeating one. http://puu.sh/1DZDa Ok
01:05:433 (2,3,4) - Really inconsistent with the entire diff. A sudden increase in diffuclty of how its map isn't good. Fixed that in another way

• 01:05:433 (2,3) - Delete 3 and add a repeat to 2
  01:06:261 (4) - Move it back to the red tick (01:06:054) and add another hit circle at 01:07:088
  http://puu.sh/1DZJE

[size=150]Hard[/size]
00:09:572 (5,6,7,1) - Really really bad idea to stack a Move the slider away from the stream stack. If it were a continuing stream then thats fine but you have a stream, stop for a 1/4 beat then have a slider which is a major throw off. Continued stream here
00:12:881 (10) - Better to continue the pattern just like 00:12:468 (8,9) - Since this is highest diff now, will keep.

Thats all, nice map set here, good luck with it

Byakugan249 wrote:

hai~ o/. found this on #modreqs so let's get started.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Green: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. I'll give you my opinion, advice, or curiosity about something.

[General]
add "喜多村 英梨 (Kitamura Eri)" in the artist since it can read the Japanese characters. Okay

[SK's Easy]
00:18:261 (1) - add a timing point at the end and make this a default clap to match the clap in the BGM. i find it unfitting if it's the custom clap in this part during gameplay, or you can keep it, but replace the clap for a finish since it's close to the clap in the BGM, like the normal diff. Ok
00:31:502 (2) - you're forgetting a clap at the end. add it for consistency with the clap pattern. Ok
00:38:950 (4) - remove the clap at the repeat. yes it's meant for the drums, but at the same time, it sounds unfitting and it ruins the flow in the hitsounds during gameplay. Ok
00:40:192 (1) - the flow here feels awkward because going from a straight to a curved slider like that doesn't feel right IMO. i highly suggest that you make this another straight slider to make the flow easier during gameplay, also i think doing this would be less rage inducing during gameplay. Ok
00:44:330 (2,3) - these notes don't fit with the vocals. it starts with a drum and then the hold in the vocals. in this case, it looks like the sliders are representing the hold in the vocals. do this instead: a circle to follow the drum, followed by a 2/1 slider to follow the hold in the vocals. like this. doing this would flow a lot smoother in this vocals during gameplay IMO. Keeping this because she follows the drum here.
00:54:054 (1) - to make this easier, replace this for a circle at the white tick. since the previous note is a spinner, this 1/2 slider might catch them off guard during gameplay. Kay
00:54:675 (1) - remove the finish at the end of this slider. it sounds awkward, as well as that it doesn't fit with the vocals. there's not enough emphasis in the vocals to go along with it. I think she put this finish to follow the high tone of "ha-" here, but ok fixed, i didn't like this finish here even

[Mitsu's Normal]
00:11:831 (5) - make this point in the opposite direction of (4) for a smoother transition to the song. it should look like a triangular roof on a house. fixed i think...
00:25:693 (2,1) - ik that this blanket can look a lot nicer. move (1) at the middle of the slider, and then adjust the slider so that the approach circle touches the arc of the slider. it should look something like this. Ok
00:29:210 - add a circle here. it'll be consistent with (2) since it goes 1/2 and it follows the BGM nicely. this 1/1 rhythm ruins the consistency during gameplay IMO. Ok
00:42:452 (5) - do default claps instead of custom claps. it sounds a lot fitting then the drums during gameplay. in other words, the drum claps break the flow in the hitsounds since the clap is different in the song. Ok
00:45:555 (5) - same as above, but at the end. Ok[/coklor]
00:54:245 (1) - [color=#FF0000]same as 00:42:452. Ok
00:57:969 (1,2) - the spacing here is inconsistent compared to the rest. consider fixing this for a steady flow in the whole diff during gameplay. Ok fixed i think

[Hard]
00:18:054 (5,1) - use default claps instead. same reason as 00:42:452 on normal. Kay
00:36:675 (2) - replace this for a custom clap. it sounds really unfitting with the finish since there's not enough emphasis in the vocals. They make sense for me, because the "ga" in chorus have a high tone if listening attentively to music.
00:37:295 (2) - ^ ^ now in "i"
00:37:916 (2) - ^, but at the beginning of this slider. ^ now in "yoooo"
01:05:847 (5) - remove this note. you're breaking consistency with (1,2) since you're following vocals. in other vocals, it follows the BGM, but this note is considered overmapped in the vocal part in this song during gameplay. I make this intentionally, actually wanted to make a mix with BGM so will keep, and i don't think this note is overmapped in gameplay.

and that's it. the map is good, it's just that the hitsounding and flow can be better, but i feel that since this is 1 of your 1st maps, i'm gonna give this a star. it's almost ready for a bubble, but i feel that you need more mods in the meantime. if i'm wrong then you can ask another MAT, or go with my advice, and look for more mods. anyways GL and don't give up on this map . i can see the potential in this map...and it may lead to a rank, you never know . as long as you don't give up on this map, you'll be fine.

ikari_kyon wrote:

hi again
Don't know if you keep pushing for this, but dont stop just because of a xat said something about potential, keep improving Of course will improve!
firs, dont kudos this!

[Hard]

1. 00:08:121 (5) - the whistleing of this part feels a bit repetitive, so adding a whistle here, will make a nice double whislte pattern, also it fits to that belling on song
2. 00:09:777 (7) - same as up, also will acentuate more the stream of this part
3. 00:12:880 (10) - whistle on repeat?
4. 00:18:052 (5) - the vocal has the same level of previous 00:17:846 (4) - adding a whistle on (5) will keep the level of the voice
5. 00:18:156 (1) - try it witouth clap, maybe you like it or not; the effect of song is higher on the note, the spin is like not that high
6. 00:31:294 (4) - the lonely whistle make this part sounds really empty, changing it for a clap will leave a nice double with 00:31:087 (3) - and will fill the lack of clap less noticable
7. 00:32:328 (7) - maybe a clap? nice double clap on next one btw
8. 00:34:604 (4) - for better whistleing, add a whistle here, remove the whistle on start of 00:34:811 (1) - you will notice that whistles will be on red ticks, when you have a constant 2/1 clapping the best place to locate whistles is on red ticks. 00:35:432 (2) - whistle, 00:35:639 (3) - no whistle on start
9. 00:36:466 (1,2) - this bothers me a bit, while playing it looks like 1/4 but its 1/2, the problem is that looks like a manual stack for 1/4 notes, maybe just stack them or make a longer space on the manual stack and less straight
   SPOILER

   also for 00:37:708 (1,2) -
10. 00:40:501 (3) - the whisltes are following bells? add one here please
11. 00:42:466 (2,3) - not so sure about double clap, sounds nice though Fits well with BGM
12. 00:49:294 (7) - add a finish? sounds really empty, due the previous clap is not so noticable with the sounds of song
13. 00:49:708 (2) - if you added the finish from up, this may sounds weird, change the finish from here for a clap and add a clap on start of 00:50:328 (3) -
14. 00:51:156 (5) - finish? Sounds strange
15. 00:54:673 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the first red tick whistle may be removed, and use whistle on next red tick of each 2/1 white tick clap, as suggested upper, whistles sounds better on red ticks when you have 2/1 claps
16. 01:05:846 (5) - I know you are following the bass on song, but this dont sound so good as you where following the vocal changes with previous slider changes, try deleting this and hear how it sounds, keep it if you want. If you keep it, please remove the clap here, the clapping on starts of 01:04:604 (1,3) - are following those piano change of song, so removing will leave your pattern and vocals more clean I think is fine now but have doubts
17. 01:24:259 (2) - finish? Current is better imo

The patterns have improved a lot, the spacing is less squared now, pretty nice. But keep in mind the whistles suggest, sounds better on red ticks when you have 2/1 clapping, try it please *---* Thanks and will keep this in mind and consideration

[Normal]

1. 00:14:949 (4) - maybe change the whistle from the end to the repeat, the vocals has a rise up on repeat and a lower level on end, try it please
2. 00:17:846 (3) - hmmmm, look at screen please
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:36:673 (1,2,3) - wow, nice
4. 00:55:501 (3) - make it 1/1 long? so you can add a clap to the end of slider and keep your pattern
5. 01:01:294 (1) - finish on start of slider, sounds empty because of you used some previously
6. 01:22:811 (5,6) - no finish on start of these 2?

[Easy]

1. 00:17:847 (2) - whsitle? sounds empty
2. 00:40:192 (1) - missing clap on start of slider, add it please
3. 01:24:054 (4) - whistle or finish? just maybe

and if maybe you want to re-add my diff here it is: http://puu.sh/21UBt fixed offset and made some changes, dont have to do it, just if you want

-Gamu- wrote:

hi~

From osu! queue

[General]

●All diff: Resnap All Notes!
●I don't like the sound of the flow of the slider. It is recommended that you silence the slider. recommended that you add this → http://puu.sh/2HPsv.zip

[SK's Easy]

●00:09:157 (2) - Add whistle (End).
●00:12:054 (3) - ^
●00:15:778 (2) - ^
●00:18:261 (1) - clap → finish change.
●00:27:364 (2) - Add new combo.
●00:32:743 (4) - Default clap would be better. same as these. → 00:42:675 (4) and 00:45:985 (4)
●00:57:985 (3) - Add new combo.
●01:12:881 (1) - Remove new combo.
●01:24:468 (1) - End is 01:27:259 → 01:27:777. Please extend. would be better.

[Mitsu's Normal]

●00:07:501 (2) - Add whistle (End).
●00:12:466 (6) - Add whistle (Start and End).
●00:14:949 (4) - Add whistle (End).
●01:04:604 (1) - Add finish (Start).
●01:09:570 (3) - Remove finish (Start).
●01:14:535 (1) - Add finish (Start).
●01:17:846 (1) - ^
●01:24:673 (1) - Same as Easy diff.

[Hard]

●00:12:052 (6) - Add new combo.
●00:09:156 (3) - Move (x:192 y:56). And, 00:09:570 (5,6,7,8,1) - Move (x:320 y:56).
●00:13:294 (1) - Add whistle (Start).
●00:14:535 (4) - Add whistle.
●00:15:363 (2) - ^
●00:18:156 (1) - Add clap.
●00:31:294 (4) - Add new combo.
●00:55:501 (3) - Remove clap (Start).
●00:57:156 (7) - ^
●00:56:328 (5) - Add new combo.
●00:59:432 (4) - ^
●01:06:053 (6) - ^
●01:09:570 (6) - ^
●01:16:190 (5) - ^
●01:19:294 (7) - ^
●01:04:604 (1) - spacing 1.00x → 1.20x　change.
●01:13:501 (4,5,6) - Move (x:160 y:132).
●01:24:466 (1) - Same as Easy diff.

[i_k's Insane]

●Amazing map :3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/724193
This is my limit orz.



That's all :3

If you do not understand, please call me

good luck ><

312,72,16604,6,0,B|288:48|256:48,2,55,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,88,17225,2,0,B|408:79|424:51,2,55,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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pimpG wrote:

mitsu's normal

00:16:604 (1,2,3) - sliders are clearly irregular. try this code Ok

312,72,16604,6,0,B|288:48|256:48,2,55,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,88,17225,2,0,B|408:79|424:51,2,55,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
330,135,17846,2,0,B|321:167|337:195,1,55

if you dont like my version, you can try yourself. just delete the 2nd and 3rd slider and copy the 1st, then paste it as 2nd slider, rotate it by 120 and move it to where you want it, to make the 3rd slider copy the 2nd and rotate by 120 again. or copy the 1st and rotate by -120...

00:24:880 (1) - straight horizontal slider would look better imo Nah, acho que assim fica melhor, deve ser pq tenho tara por sliders curvados.
01:07:294 (5,6) - stack this notes and move them to x408 y312 will play / look much better Ok
01:16:190 (3) - the current slider does not fits that much. something like that would be more suitable http://puu.sh/3pLaX.jpg Sinto q tá mais confortável assim e acho que segue bem com o vocal então vou deixar desse jeito

hard

00:16:501 - acho q um circle ficaria bem aqui e também poderia stackear o próximo slider junto com essas ok
00:46:397 (1,3) - http://puu.sh/3pM94.jpg algo assim é muito mais apelativo eu diria
acho que ficaria melhor se usasse os claps normalmente, sem usar em ticks pra seguir o vocal Não me parece ruim desse jeito por isso vo deixa assim

pimpG wrote:

sk's easy

00:26:949 - ficaria melhor se tivesse algo aqui, por causa dos claps Adicionei um círculo
00:35:225 (3) - talvez remover esse clap pra ficar consistente a 00:33:570 ? Há um som de clap aqui na música então se tirar iria ficar algo vazio...
00:42:259 (3) - spacing Ok
00:54:673 (1,2) - esses sliders não passam uma boa representação da musica imo. o o slider ate limita o uso de hitsounds pelo que eu vi. talvez tente algo como 01:07:915 (1,2,3,4) - Fiz algo diferente
01:20:328 (3) - que tal fazer esse slider virar 2 circles só pra variar um pouco? as 5 notas anteriores são sliders e as próximas 3 tb.