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Kitamura Eri - Happy Girl (TV Size)

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Topic Starter
KuronumaSawako
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on segunda-feira, 13 de janeiro de 2014 at 23:03:30

Artist: Kitamura Eri
Title: Happy Girl (TV Size)
Source: Papa no Iukoto wo Kikinasai!
Tags: opening papakiki suzutsukikanade mitsuneko takanashi sora miu hina ikari_kyon
BPM: 145
Filesize: 14646kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4,89 stars, 209 notes)
  2. i_k's Insane (4,95 stars, 280 notes)
  3. Mitsu's Normal (3,71 stars, 104 notes)
  4. SK's Easy (2,21 stars, 73 notes)
Download: Kitamura Eri - Happy Girl (TV Size)
Download: Kitamura Eri - Happy Girl (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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パパのいうことを聞きなさい!OP - Happy Girl

Re-download if you downloaded before 08/06/2012

Going for ranking!

Easy - Done by suzutsukikanade
Normal - Done by Mitsuneko
Hard - Done by me.
Finished, ready to mods!
Looking for BATs too, plzzz take a look on this! >3<
Starry_old
will mod later :3
Topic Starter
KuronumaSawako

Starry wrote:

will mod later :3
ok will wait
Reed R Gale
Was bored, Starry showed me this map, so I decided to make a difficulty for fun. So I'll put it here.

If you wanna use it (which I would love) just PM me, or poke me... or something.

EDIT: Made some changes per Starry's request/awesome guidance

Download: Itou Kanae, Aizawa Mai & Mikami Shiori - Fuwaffuwa no Mahou (TV Size) (KuronumaSawako) [Reed's Insane].osu
Topic Starter
KuronumaSawako

Reed R Gale wrote:

Was bored, Starry showed me this map, so I decided to make a difficulty for fun. So I'll put it here.

If you wanna use it (which I would love) just PM me, or poke me... or something.

EDIT: Made some changes per Starry's request/awesome guidance
ok will use
Fumika
Offset : 661

Sounds better.
Topic Starter
KuronumaSawako

Netsukawa wrote:

Offset : 661

Sounds better.
ow thx
Starry_old
Reed R Gale
Kiai Modes added.

Also, I think that the BPM should be 130.05

I've set my map in that timing, but if you want, I can change it back.

Cheers,

Reed R Gale

Download: Itou Kanae, Aizawa Mai & Mikami Shiori - Fuwaffuwa no Mahou (TV Size) (KuronumaSawako) [Reed's Insane].osu
Mitsuneko
Here's your normal. Hope you like it.
http://puu.sh/zOcn
Tur00
Hi, From Queue.

[General]
Use same offset in all diffs , Normal Have different offset.

[SK's Easy]

00:06:674 (1) - delete reverse arrow.
00:09:157 (2) - move this slider to 00:08:330 and add "whistle" in the 1st part of the slider
and delete the whistle in the last part.
00:09:985 - if you make ^ , here put a hitcircle with "whistle"
00:54:675 (1) - delete the reverse arrow and add finish in ther first part of the slider.
00:56:743 (2) - move this slider to 00:56:330 and delete the clap of the first part of the slider
and better add it in the second part.

Dont is more .. Good Map.

[Mitsu's Normal]

00:21:260 - add the break time .

Only It :C
This normal are very good :D

[Hard]

Too :C
I like this so much T_T
i skip it why i dont found nothing :C

Srry for this little modding u_u
Lizellota
Hi ~ from our q ~

[Hard]

00:30:675 - remove clap
00:30:881 (2) - add clap
01:03:157 - remove clap
01:03:364 (1) - add clap

[Mitsu's Normal]

00:26:536 - add finish?
00:33:156 (1) - ^
00:37:915 - add clap
00:39:777 - finish
00:46:398 - ^
01:07:294 (6) - clap
01:07:915 - finish
01:24:467 - ^

[Easy]

SliderMultiplier:1.00000000596046 -> 1

Nice map, Good luck~!
Topic Starter
KuronumaSawako

espiritur00 wrote:

Hi, From Queue.

[General]
Use same offset in all diffs , Normal Have different offset. Will wait Mitsuneko fix this

[SK's Easy]Will fix for her because she's not feeling good these days

00:06:674 (1) - delete reverse arrow. No because looks fine this way
00:09:157 (2) - move this slider to 00:08:330 and add "whistle" in the 1st part of the slider
and delete the whistle in the last part. No, plays weird when i do this so...
00:09:985 - if you make ^ , here put a hitcircle with "whistle" No, same reason
00:54:675 (1) - delete the reverse arrow and add finish in ther first part of the slider. Looks fine this way
00:56:743 (2) - move this slider to 00:56:330 and delete the clap of the first part of the slider
and better add it in the second part. No same reason as 00:54:675

Dont is more .. Good Map.

[Hard]

Too :C
I like this so much T_T Oh thanks :D
i skip it why i dont found nothing :C

Srry for this little modding u_u thanks for mod

KersiTyan wrote:

[Hard]

00:30:675 - remove clap No, feels weird if i do this so no
00:30:881 (2) - add clap No
01:03:157 - remove clap Ok
01:03:364 (1) - add clap Ok

[Easy]

SliderMultiplier:1.00000000596046 -> 1 Ok

Nice map, Good luck~! Thanks for mod!
RikiH_
Hi from my queue o/

Green = Suggestion
Blue = You should fix it
Red = You must fix it

SK's Easy

00:57:985 (3) - Maybe this way is better http://i46.tinypic.com/289wwg3.png
01:09:571 (3) - 2 grid left for making it symmetric with 01:07:916 (1)
01:10:812 (4) - If you follow my preceding suggestion move this note in x:168 y:220

Mitsu's Normal

00:57:984 (1) - I don't like this slider shape... try to improve it
01:07:915 (1) - Finish at the beginning
01:23:639 (4) - Finish at the end

Hard

00:13:709 (2) - CTRL + R
00:28:606 (6) - ^
00:48:675 (5) - ^

Good luck :)
suzutsukikanade
[quote="RikiH_"]SK's Easy

00:57:985 (3) - Maybe this way is better http://i46.tinypic.com/289wwg3.png Nice! Fixed
01:09:571 (3) - 2 grid left for making it symmetric with 01:07:916 (1) Fixed
01:10:812 (4) - If you follow my preceding suggestion move this note in x:168 y:220 Fixed

[quote]
http://puu.sh/J9OK
Topic Starter
KuronumaSawako

RikiH_ wrote:

Hi from my queue o/


Hard

00:13:709 (2) -
00:28:606 (6) - ^
00:48:675 (5) - ^

Good luck :)
No fixes sorry
jamxx
General
  • Combo color 6 is too dark.
Easy
  • 00:18:261 (1) - this spinner is too short for newbie.remove 00:17:847 (2) - and spinner start here.
    00:53:847 (1) - remove
Normal
  • HP,OD+1
    00:25:708 (2) - finish at slider end
    00:33:156 (1) - finish
    00:54:674 (1) - ^
    01:07:915 (1) - ^
    01:23:639 (4) - remove whistle and add finish
Hard
  • 00:24:881 (1,2,3,4,5) - distance...
    00:28:192 (5) - newcombo
    00:34:812 (5) - ^
    01:02:123 (4) - remove clap?
    this diff is Hard+.
nice map.
Topic Starter
KuronumaSawako

jamxx wrote:

General
  • Combo color 6 is too dark. Ok changed
Hard
  • 00:24:881 (1,2,3,4,5) - distance... This Jump is intentional
    00:28:192 (5) - newcombo Fixed
    00:34:812 (5) - ^ ^
    01:02:123 (4) - remove clap? Ok
    this diff is Hard+. Yes
nice map.
Thanks for mod!
-Neipezi
ahm.. excuse me..?
guest difficulty(Insane) can be done.. :?:
Topic Starter
KuronumaSawako

-Kirito wrote:

ahm.. excuse me..?
guest difficulty(Insane) can be done.. :?:
Well i don't have a Insane guest diff yet, but i think my hard is close to a one so will not add a one
pimp
ola o/

mod mais ou menos random

geral

inconsistencia no timing

a dificuldade do mitsuneko tem -1 offset de diferença entre as outras duas
bom, eu tenho costume de checar o timing quando modero um map, o seu timing ja é otimo,
eu sugiro offset -4, nao é uma grande diferença, voce pode manter seu offset atual se preferir

sk's easy

00:24:881 (1) - nao é uma grande mudança, mas eu acho q esse slider devia ser mais arredondado:


1o curve point x216 y192 (onde ele esta atualmente)
2o curve point x152 y200
3o curve point x140 y144

o spacing fica perfeito
..........
01:07:916 (1,2,3) - mover (2) para x432 y232?
ou mover (2) para x424 y232 e (3) para x424 y152 ?


mitsu's normal

00:19:501 spinner end here, just like sk's diff? sounds better
btw if you want to keep your current spinner end it still look like need to map the small break time
..........
01:05:225 (2) - i think you should remove this note
01:05:639 - i think you should add a note here

hard

00:18:261 - acho que o spinner devia começar nesse tick branco

its an awesome map :)

good luck
suzutsukikanade

pimpG wrote:

sk's easy

00:24:881 (1) - nao é uma grande mudança, mas eu acho q esse slider devia ser mais arredondado: Ok
http://puu.sh/MKv8

1o curve point x216 y192 (onde ele esta atualmente)
2o curve point x152 y200
3o curve point x140 y144

o spacing fica perfeito
..........
01:07:916 (1,2,3) - mover (2) para x432 y232?
ou mover (2) para x424 y232 e (3) para x424 y152 ? Ok

http://puu.sh/MLw6
pieguyn
hi there =w=

SK's Easy:

00:47:640 (2) - perhaps add clap from start and remove it from end? it might sound better if you start the clap pattern here :?
01:09:571 (3) - remove finish? since you didn't put one at the end of 00:54:675 (1) -

Mitsu's Normal:

00:16:605 (5) - add NC?
00:19:915 ~ 00:24:880 - add break here? such a long pause seems really weird...
00:54:674 (1) - add finish?
01:07:294 (6) - maybe add clap?
01:07:915 (1) - add finish on start?
01:17:846 (4) - add NC?
01:24:674 (1) - end it 3/4 later like in other diffs?

Hard:

00:39:778 (4) - add NC?
00:54:054 (3) - maybe use regular soft clap on the end? >< I'd recommend having the same hitsound since the sound in the music also repeats..

nice map, good luck~
Arnold0
From Let me TRY to mod your maps
As said in my queue I'm a newbie modder so my mod might be bad.

[General]
Since you have two gest diff, you should add the name of the two guest mapper in your tags.

[SK's Easy]
00:08:743 - Add note
00:15:364 - Add note
01:24:054 - Add a slider which end at 01:24:261 -

[Mitsu's Normal]
The offset in this diff is 6674 insted of 6675 in the two other diffs, you should change it and resnapp all notes.
From 00:19:916 - to 00:24:881 - Add a break here since there is 5 second without any notes

[Hard]
01:05:847 (5) - It seams you follow the vocals here so I think you should delete this note.

Good map, I don't find many things. Good luck with ranking :)
Topic Starter
KuronumaSawako

pimpG wrote:

ola o/

mod mais ou menos random

geral

inconsistencia no timing

a dificuldade do mitsuneko tem -1 offset de diferença entre as outras duas Fixado
bom, eu tenho costume de checar o timing quando modero um map, o seu timing ja é otimo,
eu sugiro offset -4, nao é uma grande diferença, voce pode manter seu offset atual se preferir Melhor deixar do jeito que está.

mitsu's normalfixando pra ele já q não encontro ele pra fixar a diff

00:19:501 spinner end here, just like sk's diff? sounds better
btw if you want to keep your current spinner end it still look like need to map the small break time
..........
01:05:225 (2) - i think you should remove this note
01:05:639 - i think you should add a note here
fixei tudo aquí
hard

00:18:261 - acho que o spinner devia começar nesse tick branco Não acho necessário.

its an awesome map :)

good luck :)

pieguy1372 wrote:

Mitsu's Normal:

00:16:605 (5) - add NC? Kay
00:19:915 ~ 00:24:880 - add break here? such a long pause seems really weird...Kay
00:54:674 (1) - add finish? Kay
01:07:294 (6) - maybe add clap? Kay
01:07:915 (1) - add finish on start? Kay
01:17:846 (4) - add NC? Okay
01:24:674 (1) - end it 3/4 later like in other diffs? Kay

Hard:

00:39:778 (4) - add NC? Kay
00:54:054 (3) - maybe use regular soft clap on the end? >< I'd recommend having the same hitsound since the sound in the music also repeats.. No, this sound good for me.

nice map, good luck~

Arnold0 wrote:

[General]
Since you have two gest diff, you should add the name of the two guest mapper in your tags. Their names are already here

[Mitsu's Normal]
The offset in this diff is 6674 insted of 6675 in the two other diffs, you should change it and resnapp all notes.
From 00:19:916 - to 00:24:881 - Add a break here since there is 5 second without any notes
All fixed
[Hard]
01:05:847 (5) - It seams you follow the vocals here so I think you should delete this note. No changes
Thx for mods all :D
Konei
Hah, is there a way this song can get boring? ;D

M4M for your Queue =w=~

Please notice I will point everything out that I notice. You should see:

red= unranable issue

blue= very recommend you to change this

purple= I wanted to point it out, but I'm not sure to change it

black = suggestions


General


Cancel Countdown? Doesn't really fit the song

Cancel letterboxes during breaks, because you use a video!

You don't use a SB, so you should delete the osb. file in your folder and full submit


Easy

00:48:468 (3) shortning this slider would fit the vocals better

00:53:847 (1,2) you should avoid using stacks on Easy, because beginners will be confused to click

01:07:916 (1,2,3) You can change this pattern like this: http://puu.sh/NqCQ

01:14:950 (3) Nazi~ Move wave point of the slider to x 24 y 148

01:17:019 (4) Move the wave point to x 228 y 272


Normal

The video isn't working - go in Design, insert background and put in new

00:16:606 (1,2) I see you follow the vocals, so I recommend you to change it like this: http://puu.sh/NqJQ

01:21:157 (1) give the head a finish?


Hard

01:16:812 (5,6) I think removing those two might be better because I can't here enough sound for them in the music


Very nice done map and funny hard :) :)

Good luck on ranking ;)
Topic Starter
KuronumaSawako

Konei wrote:

Hah, is there a way this song can get boring? ;D :)

M4M for your Queue =w=~

Please notice I will point everything out that I notice. You should see:

red= unranable issue

blue= very recommend you to change this

purple= I wanted to point it out, but I'm not sure to change it

black = suggestions


General


Cancel Countdown? Doesn't really fit the song Fixed

Cancel letterboxes during breaks, because you use a video! Fixed

You don't use a SB, so you should delete the osb. file in your folder and full submit Fixed


Normal

The video isn't working - go in Design, insert background and put in new Fixed, i think

00:16:606 (1,2) I see you follow the vocals, so I recommend you to change it like this: http://puu.sh/NqJQ Fixed

01:21:157 (1) give the head a finish? fixed


Hard

01:16:812 (5,6) I think removing those two might be better because I can't here enough sound for them in the music (5) - I'm following vocal/(6) - Just to make this more harder.


Very nice done map and funny hard :) :) Oh thanks!

Good luck on ranking ;)
Stefan
I will see if I gonna mod this.
Topic Starter
KuronumaSawako

Stefan wrote:

I will see if I gonna mod this.
Okay :D
suzutsukikanade

pieguy1372 wrote:

SK's Easy:

00:47:640 (2) - perhaps add clap from start and remove it from end? it might sound better if you start the clap pattern here :? Added clap in start and finish in the end
01:09:571 (3) - remove finish? since you didn't put one at the end of 00:54:675 (1) - Now added finish

Arnold0 wrote:

[SK's Easy]
00:08:743 - Add note No
00:15:364 - Add note No
01:24:054 - Add a slider which end at 01:24:261 - Ok

Konei wrote:

Easy

00:48:468 (3) shortning this slider would fit the vocals better No

00:53:847 (1,2) you should avoid using stacks on Easy, because beginners will be confused to click I think is fine because i didn't used much stacks here.

01:07:916 (1,2,3) You can change this pattern like this: http://puu.sh/NqCQ No changes

01:14:950 (3) Nazi~ Move wave point of the slider to x 24 y 148 Fixed

01:17:019 (4) Move the wave point to x 228 y 272 Fixed
http://puu.sh/Nwcn
Scorpiour
Hi there~~M4M

[General]
  1. Audio Lead-in is unnecessary, please remove it.
  2. 00:54:675 - i think it's better to set preview time to here
[Easy]
  1. 00:17:847 (2) - maybe a note here is enough
  2. 00:37:088 - no note here is weird because u chooose to follow vocal at 00:36:675 - .maybe u can move 00:37:295 (2) - to here and extend 1/2 length.
  3. 01:14:123 (2) - i'd like to use two notes here because of the stress at 01:14:537 - , a slider end is not suitable.
  4. 01:24:054 - uncomfortable blank
Generally..i don't like use slider end to start a downbeat like 00:09:985 - maybe u can pay more attention about that :>

[Normal]
  1. 00:18:261 - i suppose it's better to start spinner here and add a repeat to 00:17:433 (2) -
  2. 00:55:502 (3,4) - maybe the beat here could be improved? try this one~
[Hard]
  1. 00:09:571 (5,6) - i'd like to move them a tick prev to make a triplet with 00:09:364 (4) - and add a whistle to 00:09:364 (4) - ?
  2. 00:17:847 (4,5,6) - still triplet issue...i can't agree with the triplet position here.. i would like to move them to next red tick.
  3. 00:38:950 (2,3) - here should be two 1/2 beats...leave a slider end at blue tick is weird..
  4. 01:11:640 - from here to 01:12:054 - maybe u can put a stream~
  5. 01:23:640 (5,6) - this spacing is not good....
that's all~~and good luck with rank :)
Topic Starter
KuronumaSawako

Scorpiour wrote:

[General]
  1. Audio Lead-in is unnecessary, please remove it. Okay
  2. 00:54:675 - i think it's better to set preview time to here Okay
[Normal]
  1. 00:18:261 - i suppose it's better to start spinner here and add a repeat to 00:17:433 (2) - Fixed
  2. 00:55:502 (3,4) - maybe the beat here could be improved? try this one~ Fixed
[Hard]
  1. 00:09:571 (5,6) - i'd like to move them a tick prev to make a triplet with 00:09:364 (4) - and add a whistle to 00:09:364 (4) - ? Ok
  2. 00:17:847 (4,5,6) - still triplet issue...i can't agree with the triplet position here.. i would like to move them to next red tick. Fixed i think
  3. 00:38:950 (2,3) - here should be two 1/2 beats...leave a slider end at blue tick is weird..Have a idea to fix this, ok.
  4. 01:11:640 - from here to 01:12:054 - maybe u can put a stream~ Nice idea, fits with the music, but want to keep this for now.
  5. 01:23:640 (5,6) - this spacing is not good... EEEH? I think this anti-jump would look good here...but ok ok fixed spacing here.
that's all~~and good luck with rank :)
meiikyuu

hello ^^

SK's Easy
  1. 00:10:812 (3) - NC
  2. 00:18:261 (1) - extend the spinner to 00:19:916 - and add a finish sound to it
  3. 00:46:399 (1) - add finish at the beginning
nice

Mitsu's Normal
  1. 00:42:468 (5) - instead of this, maybe u can just add a single note at 00:42:675 - . but either way works
  2. 00:49:709 (1) - add finish at beginning?
  3. 01:05:433 (2) - one grid up
  4. 01:23:640 (4) - move last point one grid up
no big problems here~

Hard
  1. 00:10:399 (2,3) - unstack maybe?
  2. 00:26:537 (1) - woah , uneven slider xD i fixed it for u if you want:
    256,192,26537,6,0,B|192:248|88:192,1,170,4|8
  3. 00:27:364 (3,4) - stack with 00:26:537 (1) - more perfectly
  4. 00:39:261 (3,4) - unstack? some ppl might trip at this spot, idk xD
  5. 00:53:019 (1) - consider adding a finish
good luck! <3
DakeDekaane
Hi, mod time~ :3

I love the song, it was the 1st song I played in osu! (apart from tutorial), so, at least, you have a star from me, but it doesn't mean it is ready, I'm here to mod and destroy your map >:D

I was kidding, let's take this and put it on ranked. The next are suggestions, except if I underline some words

[SK's Easy]

00:12:054 (5) - In my opinion, this sounds better if you move to 00:12:468 - obviously deleting the reverse x3
00:17:847 (2) - 1/2 slider sounds weird to me, change this for a circle, or begin the slider here, or you could try this
or change the 1/2 repeat slider for a 1/1 single slider
00:31:295 (2) - This would be a trap for beginners, you could move it to 00:31:709 - , finishing in 00:31:916 -
00:36:468 - What about trying this?


I think that's all of my part, added to meiikyuu mod.

[Mitsu's Normal]

Delete 01:12:468 (3) - and move 01:11:847 (2) - to 01:12:054 -

[Hard]

I recommend HP drain 6.

That's all my mod, and if you want, I'd like to make a guest diff, if you want of course. (not Insane x3)
suzutsukikanade

meiikyuu wrote:

SK's Easy
  1. 00:10:812 (3) - NC Fine
  2. 00:18:261 (1) - extend the spinner to 00:19:916 - and add a finish sound to it Nice, fixed.
  3. 00:46:399 (1) - add finish at the beginning Nice
nice

DakeDekaane wrote:

[SK's Easy]

00:12:054 (5) - In my opinion, this sounds better if you move to 00:12:468 - obviously deleting the reverse x3 No, I'm trying to follow the instrumental here...
00:17:847 (2) - 1/2 slider sounds weird to me, change this for a circle, or begin the slider here, or you could try this
or change the 1/2 repeat slider for a 1/1 single slider Just added a circle
00:31:295 (2) - This would be a trap for beginners, you could move it to 00:31:709 - , finishing in 00:31:916 - I think this is fine for a easy.
00:36:468 - What about trying this? My rhythm is better.


I think that's all of my part, added to meiikyuu mod.
Fixed some, here baka

http://puu.sh/PaDY
Topic Starter
KuronumaSawako

meiikyuu wrote:


hello ^^ Hi Hi! :D



Mitsu's Normal
  1. 00:42:468 (5) - instead of this, maybe u can just add a single note at 00:42:675 - . but either way works No
  2. 00:49:709 (1) - add finish at beginning? Ok
  3. 01:05:433 (2) - one grid up OK
  4. 01:23:640 (4) - move last point one grid up Ok


    • no big problems here~

      Hard
    1. 00:10:399 (2,3) - unstack maybe? Hm...this works too, ok fixed.
    2. 00:26:537 (1) - woah , uneven slider xD i fixed it for u if you want: Ok fixed
      256,192,26537,6,0,B|192:248|88:192,1,170,4|8
    3. 00:27:364 (3,4) - stack with 00:26:537 (1) - more perfectly Fixed i think...
    4. 00:39:261 (3,4) - unstack? some ppl might trip at this spot, idk xD Ok fixed
    5. 00:53:019 (1) - consider adding a finish No
good luck! <3 Thanks <3

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi, mod time~ :3

I love the song, it was the 1st song I played in osu! (apart from tutorial), so, at least, you have a star from me, but it doesn't mean it is ready, I'm here to mod and destroy your map >:D

I was kidding, let's take this and put it on ranked. Destroy my map and you will see the hell :P Jodan yo~The next are suggestions, except if I underline some words

[Mitsu's Normal]

Delete 01:12:468 (3) - and move 01:11:847 (2) - to 01:12:054 - Okay

[Hard]

I recommend HP drain 6. Since this is the highest diff of the map, will keep HP 7 for now

That's all my mod, and if you want, I'd like to make a guest diff, if you want of course. (not Insane x3) Sorry but i'm not accepting guest diffs more...but thanks fo mod!
kurohana
Thank you for request \(^^)/

SK's Easy

01:00:468 (1) - clap at the end

Mitsu's Normal

00:57:157 (6) - clap at the end

Nice song, good luck ^^
Leorda
Hi there~


[SK's Easy]
00:41:019 (2) - Add clap at tail slider
00:42:675 (4) - Use custom clap please


[Mitsu's Normal]
* AR +1?

00:16:606 (1,2) - These pattern seems not beginner-friendly. Remove 1 repeating slider for each slider
00:39:778 (1) - Stack under slider makes confuse for beginners
00:57:157 (6) - Add clap at end slider?
01:05:433 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern are not beginner-friendly, IMO


[Hard]
00:19:502 (1) - Add clap
00:31:088 (3) - ^
01:19:916 (8) - Add clap at head slider


Be happy, ok?
Topic Starter
KuronumaSawako

Leorda wrote:

Hi there~ Hi~

[Mitsu's Normal]
* AR +1? Fixed

00:16:606 (1,2) - These pattern seems not beginner-friendly. Remove 1 repeating slider for each slider Fixed
00:39:778 (1) - Stack under slider makes confuse for beginners Fixed
00:57:157 (6) - Add clap at end slider? Fixed in previous mod
01:05:433 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern are not beginner-friendly, IMO Rearranged pattern


[Hard]
00:19:502 (1) - Add clap Fixed
00:31:088 (3) - ^ Fixed
01:19:916 (8) - Add clap at head slider Fixed


Be happy, ok? I'm always happy :D

kurohana wrote:

Thank you for request \(^^)/

Mitsu's Normal

00:57:157 (6) - clap at the end Fixed

Nice song, good luck ^^ Thanks
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Thanks for mod all! :)
HanzeR
Happy happy girl~

I cant find much, your map is already great :)

[Hard]
00:26:537 (1) - Move the endpoint to x88 y188 to stack better with 00:25:192 (2) - . Then you will need to reposition the rest of the combo a bit

[Normal]
00:41:433 (4) - This slider looks ugly compared to all your other pretty ones, :o maybe try like this? http://puu.sh/R0ye

[Easy]
01:00:468 - remove nc, start here 01:01:295 instead maybe?

Really well done, good luck!!
Topic Starter
KuronumaSawako

HanzeR wrote:

Happy happy girl~

I cant find much, your map is already great :) Oh thanks :D

[Hard]
00:26:537 (1) - Move the endpoint to x88 y188 to stack better with 00:25:192 (2) - . Then you will need to reposition the rest of the combo a bit Okay

[Normal]
00:41:433 (4) - This slider looks ugly compared to all your other pretty ones, :o maybe try like this? http://puu.sh/R0ye Kay
Thanks for the mod :)
Kiiwa
Hi~

Hard
00:25:502 (3,4) - Spacing should be different from 00:24:881 (1,2) - Change spacing or add new combo to show this difference
00:37:709 (1) - Move this note so it makes same pattern as these two 00:36:468 (1,2,1,2) -
00:47:226 (2) - Place in center of X line
00:49:502 (8) - New combo 00:49:916 (1) - Remove new combo
00:54:054 (3) - These hitsounds should be the same as 00:42:468 (2,3) - and 01:07:088 (1,2) - change it please~
01:24:054 (6) - New combo

Other two diffs are fine~
Good luck ^~^
jossieP
http://puu.sh/V760

hope you like it ><
I failed on getting a higher star rating than your hard, it doesnt matter anyways
I have a little disagree on offset, video quality and kiai time o3o lets discuss on irc
:3~
Topic Starter
KuronumaSawako

Kiiwa wrote:

Hi~

Hard
00:25:502 (3,4) - Spacing should be different from 00:24:881 (1,2) - Change spacing or add new combo to show this difference Add NC...
00:37:709 (1) - Move this note so it makes same pattern as these two 00:36:468 (1,2,1,2) - I think is fine
00:47:226 (2) - Place in center of X line Fixed
00:49:502 (8) - New combo 00:49:916 (1) - Remove new combo Ok
00:54:054 (3) - These hitsounds should be the same as 00:42:468 (2,3) - and 01:07:088 (1,2) - change it please~ No
01:24:054 (6) - New combo Kay~

Other two diffs are fine~
Good luck ^~^
Thanks for mod~

ikari_kyon wrote:

http://puu.sh/V760

hope you like it ><
I failed on getting a higher star rating than your hard, it doesnt matter anyways
I have a little disagree on offset, video quality and kiai time o3o lets discuss on irc
:3~
Thanks for you diff~
added
jossieP
forgot to suscribe topic and add star /.\

edit: auto-updates /o/ http://puu.sh/W3eW
suzutsukikanade

kurohana wrote:

SK's Easy

01:00:468 (1) - clap at the end Kay

Leorda wrote:

[SK's Easy]
00:41:019 (2) - Add clap at tail slider Yeah
00:42:675 (4) - Use custom clap please No, fits with song

HanzeR wrote:

[Easy]
01:00:468 - remove nc, start here 01:01:295 instead maybe? Fine

http://puu.sh/W3Gf
sunshy_old
Good afternoon :)

For M4M~
Sry for my poor English~
Feel free to ignore anything you dislike.

[i_k's Insane]

`00:48:675 (1,2,3,4) - It makes me confused.

Nice map.

[Hard]

00:11:226 (4) - The spacing... maybe ↓ is better
00:46:399 (1,2,3) - I recommend to use 1/2 to match the strong rhythm. 1/1 silder feels dull....

Really good map! I got 99.6%ACC when I first time play it.

[Mitsu's Normal]

Open AIMOD and fix the two spacing warnings.
00:16:606 (1) - I think maybe ↓ is better
00:37:088 (2) - try this to match the rhyrhm? Don't forget to add clap.
00:46:399 (1) - maybe putting three notes is better..
01:21:157 (1,2,3) - ↓

[Easy]
Seems fine :3

Good luck with RANK~ :)
Tsukasa
Yay more happy girl mapsets~ I'd have 5 ranked TV sizes if this ever got ranked

I love you sawa-chan for making another set <3

And i'd love to annoy someone with another mapset

EDIT: I'd love to check this out but i'd be quite busy for a while due to a certain exam
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
hi~ for mod4mod ~


I_k's Insane

  1. 00:00:054 (1,2) - i think (1) move left for 4 grids, (2) right 4 grids looks better.
  2. 00:13:295 (1,2,3) - 3/4 sliders better maybe :p
  3. 00:15:778 (5) - i think only 2 circles here fits better to the vocal
  4. 00:16:606 (1) - rotate 7 degrees will look better ^^ 00:17:019 (2) ctrl+h
  5. 00:22:709 (3) - move right 1grid >_>
  6. 00:23:019 (1) - put here.? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/405205
  7. 00:24:881 (2,3,4,5) - more spacing lol
  8. 00:53:640 (4) - i think http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/405210 >_>
  9. 00:57:364 (4) - put here.? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/405211
  10. i like this diff, different feeling from the ranked other happy girls wwwww
Hard

  1. 00:10:606 (3) - add reverse? spacing to (4) is too confusing
  2. 00:25:502 (1,2) - i think, as blue (1,2) is 3/4, pink (1,2) is 1/2 but same distance, it is a bit awkward to play, make them different will be better~
  3. 00:38:950 (2) - this slider feels like stacked a note at 00:39:261, so if you stack one 00:39:571 (4) i think players will misclick and miss ww better stack that on blue slider's head http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/405213
  4. 01:08:123 (1) - bettter blanket http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/405216
  5. 01:21:157 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - don't make big circle ^^b too hard for a Hard diff
Mitsu's Normal

  1. 00:25:709 (2,1) - blanket o.o
  2. 00:56:743 (5) - spacing.?
  3. 01:12:881 (3) - ^
  4. 01:19:295 (3) - as 01:18:468 skipped a sound too, starting this at 01:19:502 should be better for beginners to follow the rhythm.
SK's Easy

  1. 00:10:812 (1,2) - better some curve here ww
Good luck~
jossieP

Sunshine wrote:

[i_k's Insane]

`00:48:675 (1,2,3,4) - It makes me confused. any suggest :3?

Nice map. thanks ><

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

I_k's Insane

  1. 00:00:054 (1,2) - i think (1) move left for 4 grids, (2) right 4 grids looks better. ahm jump becomes so long, if its pointed again will change the shape
  2. 00:13:295 (1,2,3) - 3/4 sliders better maybe :p pattern sounds good on 1/2 ticks, plus there is a cymbal sound on red ticks, also I like this part like this <3
  3. 00:15:778 (5) - i think only 2 circles here fits better to the vocal sounds so suddenly empty, also the vocal change is on white tick
  4. 00:16:606 (1) - rotate 7 degrees will look better ^^ 00:17:019 (2) ctrl+h cant see a significative difference but yeah
  5. 00:22:709 (3) - move right 1grid >_> <v< ok
  6. 00:23:019 (1) - put here.? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/405205 hmm dunno, overlap with others looks soft for me and it is stacked on 00:24:364 (6) -
  7. 00:24:881 (2,3,4,5) - more spacing lol is on x1.0 spacing /o/ any suggest?
  8. 00:53:640 (4) - i think http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/405210 >_> already changed the shape of this boys, sawa-chan havent updated yet /o/ hey what is that slider ball xD???
  9. 00:57:364 (4) - put here.? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/405211 eyup, tried some stuff about this slider but long space blanket looks nice, and dat slider ball >v>
  10. i like this diff, different feeling from the ranked other happy girls wwwww yeaaaahh bro, that is what I always try to make ;3!!
>>> to sawa-chan <3~ <<<
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