jericho2442 wrote:

[Normal]
pretty much perfect

[Hard]
02:22:03 (6,1) - would look better if these lined up Fixed
02:30:74 (4,5,6) - the way these line up look a lil ugly to me Redesigned.
02:43:61 (7,8) - either line (8) up with (7) or line (7) up with (8) Fixed.

very nice map

[Insane]
love the map and pretty much perfect

great maps, have a star

Lokamp wrote:

Normal
00:39:27 (3) - move it 4 squares down Replaced.
01:37:03 (1,1) - check spacing... hmm.. I think that's fine.
01:40:27 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
01:43:52 (1,1) - ^ Same reason 01:37:03 (1,1)

Hard
01:43:52 (1,1) - check spacing... again...Same 01:37:03 (1,1) in [normal]

Insane
03:11:78 (1) - let it start on 03:11:68 (red timing tick) This notes follow Xylophone and Vibraphone sound which are start blue tick. Red tick is snare drum.

Let's raise the priority of this amazing and original map! ;3

Lissette wrote:

Insane
I really like this Diff. ^^
00:55:69 (5) - repeat slider?(suggestion)
00:55:69 (5) - add note?(suggestion)
00:58:93 (4) - repeat slider?(suggestion)
01:02:17 (4) - same(suggestion)
01:05:42 (4) - same(suggestion)
Not fix. Detail is bottom part...
01:30:55 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29) - this combo is too long @.@
01:50:41 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25) - ^
01:53:25 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32) - ^ mercy T.T
plz fix the other long combos, i don't know why you did this.
Long combo are fixed.

Nice map, good job!
Have a star!

minyeob wrote:

[Insane]
00:50:962 (7) - Unsnapped.

(8,10,11)-> 위와 동일

02:28:78 (1) - 위와 동일
All fixed

AI모딩을 돌려봤는데 위의 노트들이 snap 되지 않았다고 나왔네요
이거 무시하고 랭크시키다가 한번 크게 다친 경험이 있어서 ㅜㅜ

1/6 박자를 위에 노트들 말고도 다른 곳에 많이 사용했는데 이 노트들만 un-snapped 됬다고 나오네요.....

osuplayer111 wrote:

Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions, you don't have to fix, your choice.
Orange: You don't have to fix too, but is better if you do it.
Red: You have to fix this for sure!

Starts Suggestions:

- This map needs an easier difficulty.

[Normal]

01:37:44 (1) - Too close from 01:37:03 (1). Fixed. But, this form is not only there. You mean fix only this?
All form fixed in [Normal], [Hard] and [Insane].
02:17:57 (1) - Too close from 02:16:76 (3). Fixed.
03:16:04 (1) - Never start spinner on blue lines. Replaced white tick.

[Hard]

01:06:12 (1) - Never start spinner on blue lines. Replaced red tick.
03:16:04 (1) - Like normal. Replaced white tick.

[Insane]

00:09:78 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Why these notes are placed on blue line? Something is wrong. Hmm..but this notes are matched BGM.
00:50:82 (6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - Resnap correctly these notes. Fixed. This opinion is same minyeob's one.

Kytoxid wrote:

Huh. Cool song. No real issues anywhere I saw, mostly suggestions for looks that probably could be done without also.

[Normal]
02:17:57 (1) - Consider moving this slider one grid left to sit exactly where 02:15:95 (1) was before. Fixed

[Hard]
00:43:73 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Could be a bit more...rounded? Replaced more roundly
00:46:16 (4) - Maybe move this a grid left to line up with 3. Fixed
01:10:28 (1) - Down 1 grid to line up with 01:08:45 (1)? Fixed
01:16:76 (1) - Up 1, right 1 to line up with 01:14:94 (1)?Fixed
01:32:17 (1) - Up 1 grid to line up with the next note in the combo? Fixed
02:25:67 (1,2) - Maybe move these up 1 grid to line up with 02:24:26 (4,5)? Fixed
03:09:45 (4,5,6) - Looks a bit weird, maybe line up 6 with 4. Replaced.
03:13:30 (5,6,7,8,1) - Move down by a bit so that the vertical distance is the same as the last "step". Fixed.

[Insane]
I had a really cool feeling when going through this map. Maybe it's because it follows the foreground, but it felt really nice. 14.6m total score is a bit high, but it's quite hard also, so that might be something to ask a BAT about.

Generally, the long streams are very very long. Maybe cut a few notes out of it just to give a 1/2 or 1/4 of rest for the player to get their sense of beat back. Otherwise, nice job.

I change it to slide note in 01:56:088(13) and 01:58:115(1,1,1,1).
This will be make to rest players...
(And now maximum score is 14.1 mil.)

Starred.

nuzagoo wrote:

ster ~ ☆

Gothic wrote:

★

hutka wrote:

드세염

Ephemeral wrote:

Timing interval is incorrect.

Should be: BPM 148.02 / Offset: -217

You will need to realign beats along with the usual resnap. The timing change will shift them two seconds to the left or so.

Aside from that, it's pretty decent. The hitsounds are wonderful. Shoot me a PM when you've changed the timing and I may even bubble this.

mtmcl wrote:

[Insane]

Andrea (osuplayer111) helped me find a few problems I wouldn't have noticed otherwise :p

03:11:790 (1) - I'm a little concerned about this slider. It starts on a blue tick but all the other sliders like this one start on a red or white tick.
That's fine. This note starts on a blue, that's correct. Not only BGM but also movie is evidence.

03:12:297 (1,1) - The spacing on these might confuse people given the context of the streams before and after it.
Fixed..

Tell me what you think about these suggestions. I won't pop the bubble, but know that the bubble will be popped if you change these. I will check back to see your response either way

Starred

minyeob wrote:

There is no hitcircle overlay D:
I don't know if it's a un-rank stuff or not :;

whymeman wrote:

Sorry to do this, but I found something that was overlooked.

[Hard]

03:12:070 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing between the notes is flawed. If you look closely at (1) t0 (3), you can see the spacing is not even.

(Modding in progress...)

whymeman wrote:

Sorry to do this, but I found something that was overlooked.

[Hard]

03:12:070 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing between the notes is flawed. If you look closely at (1) t0 (3), you can see the spacing is not even.


[Insane]

01:46:036 (13,14) - Too close together.

As small as the error is, a tiny error in a stream can screw up the playability of the map.

Look into these and then i'll rebubble for you.

Oh, my...I missed it..

Cyclone wrote:

I'm not so sure the BPM should be 148.02. Putting it down to 148.00 made everything feel better to me.

Hard:

00:55:086 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - You should probably move at least some of this so it's not the same pattern over and over.
02:25:682 (1) - This should probably be spaced farther away than the previous note. I went for it based on the cymbal sounds

taka1235 wrote:

awesome ~ !

DeathxShinigami wrote:

boop. Late as always.

RemmyX25 wrote:

Normal:
While I like the difficulty, it seems better suited as an "in-between" map than the Easiest difficulty. Playing through it, it has more difficulty spots that a new play probably wouldnt get without plenty of practice.

That said, I highly recommend making an [Easy] difficulty instead of just toning down the [Normal] one.

RemmyX25 wrote:

Normal:
While I like the difficulty, it seems better suited as an "in-between" map than the Easiest difficulty. Playing through it, it has more difficulty spots that a new player probably wouldnt get without plenty of practice.

That said, I highly recommend making an [Easy] difficulty instead of just toning down the [Normal] one.
I made it. >w<

Insane:
00:50:083 (6) - IMO, this slider sounds terrible and offbeat. I fiddled around with it and it sounds better like this
Hmm... It's not offbeat. These note follow tom sound.

02:30:086 (9) - This should be on the blue tick imo Fixed.
02:31:078 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Try this section with 1/6 snap instead of 1/8 snap Fixed.

Otherwise, very well done. I cant wait to see this ranked.

RemmyX25 wrote:

Easy:
Increase the circle size. This is important to me. Lowering the drain rate wont hurt either, but thats not as important.