Loogiesquared wrote:

Comments and suggestions, not orders.

normal

SPOILER

00:03:37 (1) : Snap this beat to a tick. Fixed
00:25:08 (7,8,9) : Not visually appealing stacking. Fixed
01:17:17 (3,1) : You should repeat the slider instead of adding a new beat. Oh, I think that's fine.

insane

SPOILER

00:39:88 (8,9,10) : Incomprehensible. Redesigned
01:08:054 : Add a break here. Fixed
01:53:25 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) : Design these beats better. Redesigned

Matma Rex wrote:

Dude. Just... dude. This song/video are so awesome.
Map is really great, too. Your hitsounds are f'kin amazing.

[Normal]
Bah, your stacks are hard to read. Sometimes stacked note is 1/4 later, sometimes 1/1 later, and it all gets confusing.
I almost replaced and redesigned it.
02:44:52 (5,6), 02:51:01 (4,5) - these finishes are pretty random IMO. I'm sorry but I can't understand. T.T What is that mean?
03:14:32 (1,1,1) - uhh. Stack problem?

[Insane]
Woot, that's full of deathstreams. I like it~
00:39:88 (8,9,10) - weird. Doesn't play nice IMO. Redesigned
01:37:03 (1) - finish doesn't fit. That's fine. It's equal other things.


Overall - I love you. Starred. Get it ranked ASAP.


edit: snap first beat in Normal and remove commas from tags, they're separated by just space.Fixed. And removed commas in tags.

Mafiamaster wrote:

This is really awesome! I loved the hit sounds and everything~
It looked pretty flawless except for the max score on Insane being around 17 mil.
Try getting the max score somewhere around 14 mil.
I decreased score 15.7 mil. I can't decrease any more orz.

Derekku Chan wrote:

ahhhhhh I love Animusic <3

[General]
When downloading the .osz (with or without video), the Normal diff is not there. I had to download it manually ._.; Please do another full upload to see if that fixes it.
I uploaded full style.

[Normal]
The beginning is kinda awkward since there's no music to follow along to (especially because there's some blue tick notes). I'd start this diff at uhhhhh 00:19:20 (1) probably. I removed 00:00:00 - 00:15:86 and start 00:15:96
00:38:26 (1,2) - Perhaps put (2) on the other side of the repeating slider like you did for the others?Fixed
00:48:39 (1) - Kinda loud imo (the ones after it too)Arranged volume lower.
01:07:04 (4) - ^ Arranged volume lower.
01:40:27 (1,2) - Again, I don't like how (1) ends on the opposite side of where (2) is. It makes it look like (1) will be longer and it's confusing :X It's for matching BGM. However I think this note is confusing play the this map so I fixed.
03:14:32 (1,1,1) - 1/4th kick sliders are confusing enough on harder difficulties. I see that you have 0 spinners in this map, so I'd recommend having (1) keep repeating until the blue tick before the 5th white tick, and then finishing with a spinner starting on the blue tick after the 5th white tick. Fixed. It look like Good

[Insane]
00:38:26 (1) - Uncombo? Fine
00:38:66 (2) - New combo; Confusing to read. Stack on old (1)? No new combo. And Stack it.
Loud finished again x_x Some note fixed. All finished notes are wrong?
02:28:78 (10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - I love this part in the music, but it's hard to read with the fast approach circles. Could you unstack these and spread them out instead? Fixed

Your difficulties jump from decently normal to HOLY FFFFFFFFF DEATHSTREAMS. I'd recommend making a [Hard] (without deathstreams, but regular ~5 beat streams are okay) for those that would like a harder diff but can't pass the streams.
Also, this could probably use an easier diff too ;X
hyu~~ I maked it which [Hard] Pattern.


PS I really like the hitsounds. They accentuate the map nicely~

Derekku Chan wrote:

Okay, NOW Normal (and Hard )) are there. Don't worry about your English; I can understand it fine. About the finishes, just a few of them were too loud (for my taste, at least). It's not a big issue

[Hard]
Skimmed through here real quick...
02:45:54 (3) - Move the last anchor of this slider to the right one grid. Then it should stack with (5) better. Fixed.
02:50:00 (6) - New combo so it's a little less confusing? Fixed.
03:14:42 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Move this whole stack backwards to the white tick. It started 1/4th of a beat late and went 1/4th too long, so moving it backwards will fix it xD Fixed.
This diff could maybe use a couple more spinners too. There's a few empty spots like the break at 01:06:00 and some other repeating pats in the map. Added 2 spinner which placed 00:52:65 and 01:06:12.

[Normal]
03:14:42 (1) - Move this backwards to the white tick (same reason as Hard's) Fixed

Also, I forgot to note about the artist. I would put "Animusic" as "Source" and "Wayne Lytle" as "Artist" since he's the founder of Animusic and most probably the composer of all of these :X Fix the source/artist for all diffs and then reupload.
Fixed.

lRasl wrote:

모딩할께 없는듯..

잘만드셨으니 +Star

오버레일도 조화가 끝내줌!

Armin wrote:

[Normal]

Nice.


[Hard]

No problems found.

[Insane]

00:04:211 (Break) Remake this break
00:07:251 ^
01:11:094 ^
01:15:958 ^
01:19:404 Make a straight line with (1,2,3,4)
01:30:551- 01:35:212 @_@ Make a better position of this beats
01:59:939 Remake this break
02:22:233 ^
02:28:786 New combo
02:35:355 Remake this break
03:05:808 2 squares above
03:15:942 New combo?
All Fixed~~

Azure_Kyte wrote:

Here's my mod

Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this

[Normal]
02:32:16 (1) - Possibly make this sit between the slider better?
02:32:97 (3) - Same for this (Fixed it. You mean this is little overlapping problem, right?)
No problems found

[Hard]
00:54:829 - I suggest you use soft custom hitsound 2 for this section, complements it well
Love it (Hmm.. that's fine. I think it's fitness about hihat sound. One more thing, I decided that soft custom hitsound 2 is mainly used for brown Xylophone. )

[Insane]
Simply incredible. Words cannot explain the epicness I just modded.

Great job~ This is fantastic! Starred

jericho2442 wrote:

[Normal]
pretty much perfect

[Hard]
02:22:03 (6,1) - would look better if these lined up Fixed
02:30:74 (4,5,6) - the way these line up look a lil ugly to me Redesigned.
02:43:61 (7,8) - either line (8) up with (7) or line (7) up with (8) Fixed.

very nice map

[Insane]
love the map and pretty much perfect

great maps, have a star

Lokamp wrote:

Normal
00:39:27 (3) - move it 4 squares down Replaced.
01:37:03 (1,1) - check spacing... hmm.. I think that's fine.
01:40:27 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
01:43:52 (1,1) - ^ Same reason 01:37:03 (1,1)

Hard
01:43:52 (1,1) - check spacing... again...Same 01:37:03 (1,1) in [normal]

Insane
03:11:78 (1) - let it start on 03:11:68 (red timing tick) This notes follow Xylophone and Vibraphone sound which are start blue tick. Red tick is snare drum.

Let's raise the priority of this amazing and original map! ;3

Lissette wrote:

Insane
I really like this Diff. ^^
00:55:69 (5) - repeat slider?(suggestion)
00:55:69 (5) - add note?(suggestion)
00:58:93 (4) - repeat slider?(suggestion)
01:02:17 (4) - same(suggestion)
01:05:42 (4) - same(suggestion)
Not fix. Detail is bottom part...
01:30:55 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29) - this combo is too long @.@
01:50:41 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25) - ^
01:53:25 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32) - ^ mercy T.T
plz fix the other long combos, i don't know why you did this.
Long combo are fixed.

Nice map, good job!
Have a star!

minyeob wrote:

[Insane]
00:50:962 (7) - Unsnapped.

(8,10,11)-> 위와 동일

02:28:78 (1) - 위와 동일
All fixed

AI모딩을 돌려봤는데 위의 노트들이 snap 되지 않았다고 나왔네요
이거 무시하고 랭크시키다가 한번 크게 다친 경험이 있어서 ㅜㅜ

1/6 박자를 위에 노트들 말고도 다른 곳에 많이 사용했는데 이 노트들만 un-snapped 됬다고 나오네요.....

osuplayer111 wrote:

Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions, you don't have to fix, your choice.
Orange: You don't have to fix too, but is better if you do it.
Red: You have to fix this for sure!

Starts Suggestions:

- This map needs an easier difficulty.

[Normal]

01:37:44 (1) - Too close from 01:37:03 (1). Fixed. But, this form is not only there. You mean fix only this?
All form fixed in [Normal], [Hard] and [Insane].
02:17:57 (1) - Too close from 02:16:76 (3). Fixed.
03:16:04 (1) - Never start spinner on blue lines. Replaced white tick.

[Hard]

01:06:12 (1) - Never start spinner on blue lines. Replaced red tick.
03:16:04 (1) - Like normal. Replaced white tick.

[Insane]

00:09:78 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Why these notes are placed on blue line? Something is wrong. Hmm..but this notes are matched BGM.
00:50:82 (6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - Resnap correctly these notes. Fixed. This opinion is same minyeob's one.

Kytoxid wrote:

Huh. Cool song. No real issues anywhere I saw, mostly suggestions for looks that probably could be done without also.

[Normal]
02:17:57 (1) - Consider moving this slider one grid left to sit exactly where 02:15:95 (1) was before. Fixed

[Hard]
00:43:73 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Could be a bit more...rounded? Replaced more roundly
00:46:16 (4) - Maybe move this a grid left to line up with 3. Fixed
01:10:28 (1) - Down 1 grid to line up with 01:08:45 (1)? Fixed
01:16:76 (1) - Up 1, right 1 to line up with 01:14:94 (1)?Fixed
01:32:17 (1) - Up 1 grid to line up with the next note in the combo? Fixed
02:25:67 (1,2) - Maybe move these up 1 grid to line up with 02:24:26 (4,5)? Fixed
03:09:45 (4,5,6) - Looks a bit weird, maybe line up 6 with 4. Replaced.
03:13:30 (5,6,7,8,1) - Move down by a bit so that the vertical distance is the same as the last "step". Fixed.

[Insane]
I had a really cool feeling when going through this map. Maybe it's because it follows the foreground, but it felt really nice. 14.6m total score is a bit high, but it's quite hard also, so that might be something to ask a BAT about.

Generally, the long streams are very very long. Maybe cut a few notes out of it just to give a 1/2 or 1/4 of rest for the player to get their sense of beat back. Otherwise, nice job.

I change it to slide note in 01:56:088(13) and 01:58:115(1,1,1,1).
This will be make to rest players...
(And now maximum score is 14.1 mil.)

Starred.

nuzagoo wrote:

ster ~ ☆

Gothic wrote:

★

hutka wrote:

드세염

Ephemeral wrote:

Timing interval is incorrect.

Should be: BPM 148.02 / Offset: -217

You will need to realign beats along with the usual resnap. The timing change will shift them two seconds to the left or so.

Aside from that, it's pretty decent. The hitsounds are wonderful. Shoot me a PM when you've changed the timing and I may even bubble this.

mtmcl wrote:

[Insane]

Andrea (osuplayer111) helped me find a few problems I wouldn't have noticed otherwise :p

03:11:790 (1) - I'm a little concerned about this slider. It starts on a blue tick but all the other sliders like this one start on a red or white tick.
That's fine. This note starts on a blue, that's correct. Not only BGM but also movie is evidence.

03:12:297 (1,1) - The spacing on these might confuse people given the context of the streams before and after it.
Fixed..

Tell me what you think about these suggestions. I won't pop the bubble, but know that the bubble will be popped if you change these. I will check back to see your response either way

Starred

minyeob wrote:

There is no hitcircle overlay D:
I don't know if it's a un-rank stuff or not :;

whymeman wrote:

Sorry to do this, but I found something that was overlooked.

[Hard]

03:12:070 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing between the notes is flawed. If you look closely at (1) t0 (3), you can see the spacing is not even.

(Modding in progress...)

whymeman wrote:

Sorry to do this, but I found something that was overlooked.

[Hard]

03:12:070 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing between the notes is flawed. If you look closely at (1) t0 (3), you can see the spacing is not even.


[Insane]

01:46:036 (13,14) - Too close together.

As small as the error is, a tiny error in a stream can screw up the playability of the map.

Look into these and then i'll rebubble for you.

Oh, my...I missed it..

Cyclone wrote:

I'm not so sure the BPM should be 148.02. Putting it down to 148.00 made everything feel better to me.

Hard:

00:55:086 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - You should probably move at least some of this so it's not the same pattern over and over.
02:25:682 (1) - This should probably be spaced farther away than the previous note. I went for it based on the cymbal sounds

taka1235 wrote:

awesome ~ !

DeathxShinigami wrote:

boop. Late as always.

RemmyX25 wrote:

Normal:
While I like the difficulty, it seems better suited as an "in-between" map than the Easiest difficulty. Playing through it, it has more difficulty spots that a new play probably wouldnt get without plenty of practice.

That said, I highly recommend making an [Easy] difficulty instead of just toning down the [Normal] one.

RemmyX25 wrote:

Normal:
While I like the difficulty, it seems better suited as an "in-between" map than the Easiest difficulty. Playing through it, it has more difficulty spots that a new player probably wouldnt get without plenty of practice.

That said, I highly recommend making an [Easy] difficulty instead of just toning down the [Normal] one.
I made it. >w<

Insane:
00:50:083 (6) - IMO, this slider sounds terrible and offbeat. I fiddled around with it and it sounds better like this
Hmm... It's not offbeat. These note follow tom sound.

02:30:086 (9) - This should be on the blue tick imo Fixed.
02:31:078 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Try this section with 1/6 snap instead of 1/8 snap Fixed.

Otherwise, very well done. I cant wait to see this ranked.

RemmyX25 wrote:

Easy:
Increase the circle size. This is important to me. Lowering the drain rate wont hurt either, but thats not as important.