TheVileOne wrote:

I really hope this wasn't bubbled with Hard looking like that.

Easy

Looks fine to me.

Normal

00:11:271 (3,1) - Flawed transition, but I don't see any immediate fix. The transition looks better like this IMO. It's not a big deal though. Just don't make anything worse off trying to fix this. It's not worth it. Fixed at all.


That's the only thing that I found other than small spacing differences that I considered flowed better than standard spacing. It's a really clean map.

Hard

Oh boy. This map is definitely not as clean as the other two maps.

00:02:141 (1,2,3,4) - Looks unpolished to me. How about using a more even curve with a single arc here. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/723999 If you want to keep your shape in this pattern, I suggest altering the arc on 1 to be softer like in the screenshot and then reposition the notes accordingly. I would prefer the former though because it fits better with the parts after which have a single arc. Should be more neat now (I hope so!)
00:05:075 (2,3,4,5) - Please smooth this curve, it's ugly. I guess I have done it. Slap me if it's still ugly.
00:07:358 (1,2,3,4) - Shape 1, similar to 4 and then reposition 2,3 accordingly. It looks better than the way you have it with 1, having no relation to 4, and 2,3 not really forming a smooth transition. I got to ask you In-Game for that.
00:09:967 (1,2) - Just a comment, but personally don't care for these shapes. Pattern is fine though. Okay.
00:11:271 (3,4,5,6,7) - Interesting flow here. I like it! Nice to hear! These pattern are new at this Diff.
00:15:184 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Structure of this combo is all over the place. The lack of a stable pattern stands out, but the vocals are weird and asymmetrical. You should work on the angles. Make 00:15:836 (3) - symmetrical and the angle here 00:15:836 (4,5,6) - disconnects the transition and makes it feel like there are two separate patterns instead of one coherent one. Here is an angle that is more agreeable. http://puu.sh/2HL3B.jpg I changed the part from 00:15:184 (1,2,3) that it fits more to the Music and also that the structure looks more clean.
00:17:793 (1,2,3) - Design is random, structure is unpolished, and the flow is weird. My thoughts: 00:18:608 (3) - might carry a better flow broken up into notes. If you don't agree, please work on your blankets. Both blankets don't retain the same distance across the entire face of the blanket. They create a blanket with their current position. I purposed here that you start at (1), then going to (2) and then having a short kickback to (3) again. And I find that fine for now.
00:22:195 - whistle? Yup.
00:28:545 (2,3,4,5) - smooth the curve. Fixed.

1. Add in tags Ground Control to Psychoelectric Girl it is needed here because it's an english name of the anime.

1. Consider reducing HP Drain and OD by One Tick to make this diff more passable for beginners. BPM is quite fast, so be more gentle with beginners!
2. Try to avoid copypasta at least next time. Show some respect to people who will play it, playing copypasta is always boring. :<

1. 00:11:271 (3) - personally, I'm strongly against using those sliders on easier diffs. Second reverse arrow appears too late, so players have no time to notice it and read this pattern properly.
2. 00:19:097 (3) - replace this slider with two circles to be consistent with 00:16:488 (3,4) - it will make your pattern more understandable

1. This is the [Hard] diff, so OD/HP 6 will fit better here.
2. 00:02:956 (4) - consider replacing this slider with two citcles. Also, you'll have to fix comboing a bit. Take a look at my example and listen to vocals here! At 00:03:282 - she says first "yo!" that's why you should re-arrage your pattern a bit.
3. 00:04:749 (1,2) - I've spent 10 minutes to hear anything at 00:04:994 - and still nothing. Why there's 3/4 slider? End (1) at 00:04:912 - to follow background music. It will also make your rhythm more consistent.
   
4. 00:11:271 (3) - 00:16:488 (4) - 00:34:740 (3) -00:38:653 (4) - I'd recommend you to place NCs here to follow lyrics/vocals/character's voice.
5. 00:12:575 (1) - nazi - curve this slider a bit, too. To mae this pattern look prettier. example

Current BG

Here are my suggested BG's:

4:3 1024x768

16:9 1365x768

1. 00:04:749 (1,2) - Don't ask me why. But the transition is not perfect. For me it is actually one of those slidertrransitions where I would prefer a sliderend,sliderbeginning stack. Also the curve of (2) itself is meh imo, a bow that shows in the other direction seems better for me
2. 00:13:554 (4) - I don't like that this one has one more repeater than the others from the combo. Can you remove on repeater and add a circle instead >.>
3. 00:18:608 (3) - and 00:18:934 - the slider ends where I actually would exect a 1/2 slider, because of the voice. The empty 1/2 has a tone on it. I just miss something here :/ Make (3) 1/2 beat longer or use a repeat somehow
4. 00:26:938 (1) - I fail at this slider everytime. The Timing change comes out of nowhere. I mean I am no timing expert and I won't say it is wrong but it just plays bad. really >w< I don't even think you can change it so easy ._.
5. 00:28:219 (1,2) - same as 00:04:749 (1,2) -
6. 00:38:327 (3,4) - feels pointless music wise. If there was 1/2 between a note it would be okay I see your pattern there and so but still. It is meh :/

[TimingPoints]
2150,326.086956521739,4,2,0,70,1,0
15184,-100,4,2,0,70,0,0
20401,-100,4,2,0,70,0,0
25628,361.44578313253,4,2,0,70,1,0
26350,327.868852459016,4,2,0,70,1,0
26677,300,4,2,0,70,1,0
27277,320.855614973262,4,2,0,70,1,0
27918,303.030303030303,4,2,0,70,1,0
28221,326.086956521739,4,2,0,70,1,0
38653,-100,4,2,0,40,0,0

1. 00:15:845 (3) - i think you should change the shape of that slider. the rounder part doesn't look tidy at all, it feels off, imo! (maybe just copy, past 00:15:193 (1) - and use the given round shape and change the slider until it fits. This way you also have a call- and response thing. Dunno how i should call it)
2. 00:08:019 (3) - sorry it's nazi-time. the right gray square should go up 1 or 2 grids. i think it is a better blanket that way.
   
3. nothing else. good map and good diff^^

Easy

General (Hard-Dif)

Pattern / Rhythm

1. 00:36:699 (5,6,7) - This triple has an unstable spacing. What about fix it using x1.0 spacing as in the other triples?
2. 00:37:351 (9,1) - I'd add a note between these two notes, it fits the music well.

Combo4 : 250,145,29

1. 00:09:976 (1,2) - This pattern could follow vocals more, in my opinion. I'd suggest using 1/1 slider instead (or circles if you prefer that). I know the pattern you suggested is already used in Normal, but I think it's appropriate enough to be in an [Easy] too
2. 00:33:438 (1,2) - Same as above
3. 00:23:019 (1) - This whistle sounds really unnecessary, this is the only one you hear throught the map and it doesn't really make much sense.

1. 00:16:660 - I think a note is needed here, and it's not that hard for a Normal, so you could add it without any problem
2. 00:23:019 (1) - Same as Normal (also I don't really like shape but that's a personal opinion, I think..

1. 00:05:736 (5) - Welp, I found this slider out of place, it's not so good to see. You may try some cool blanket instead.
2. 00:29:199 (5) - Same as above
3. 00:08:019 (3) - I'd make it similar to the previous two.
4. 00:21:063 (4) - What about making this more symmetrical with x axis?
5. 00:21:878 (2,3,4) - I'm being nazi here, but distance between these notes is kinda different, 00:21:959 (3) - should be under 00:21:715 (1) - and so on..
6. 00:23:182 (2) - Same as other diffs

Leader wrote:

I was missing those short NND mixes in osu!. Time to mod this, I want to see this ranked! \:3/

[Easy]

1. 00:09:976 (1,2) - This pattern could follow vocals more, in my opinion. I'd suggest using 1/1 slider instead (or circles if you prefer that). I know the pattern you suggested is already used in Normal, but I think it's appropriate enough to be in an [Easy] too Changed.
2. 00:33:438 (1,2) - Same as above desu
3. 00:23:019 (1) - This whistle sounds really unnecessary, this is the only one you hear throught the map and it doesn't really make much sense. derp, okay.

[Normal]

1. 00:16:660 - I think a note is needed here, and it's not that hard for a Normal, so you could add it without any problem If you say so.
2. 00:23:019 (1) - Same as Normal (also I don't really like shape but that's a personal opinion, I think.. You mean Easy, right? /runs

[Hard]

1. 00:05:736 (5) - Welp, I found this slider out of place, it's not so good to see. You may try some cool blanket instead. I don't know, I have no idea how I could change this shape to a "better" one or how to keep the current structure. From my side I see no problems.
2. 00:29:199 (5) - Same as above desu
3. 00:08:019 (3) - I'd make it similar to the previous two.idk let's see what I can do. I hope you're not going to slap me.
4. 00:21:063 (4) - What about making this more symmetrical with x axis?Actually it creates with the previous circle a smooth flow curve. Well, let's see.
5. 00:21:878 (2,3,4) - I'm being nazi here, but distance between these notes is kinda different, 00:21:959 (3) - should be under 00:21:715 (1) - and so on.. I see, it's fixed.
6. 00:23:182 (2) - Same as other diffs desu

I guess that's all, good job.

Stefan wrote:

Have followed Chiva's Mod, thanks.

Good Luck!

Mod request via Forum PM and QAT queue! No kudosu since this is technically a recheck!

1. If this map is not designed for wide screen support, consider disabling Widescreen Support in your Hard difficulty. (Song setup under Design Tab). Otherwise, you could just enable it on your Easy and Normal difficulties. Take note that your video size is 640x360 which is indeed 16:9 video format, so widescreen support will be possible. :3
2. For a short map like this, I would consider increasing the drain rate and overall difficulty by 1 for all difficulties so it would balance the completion a little more.
3. For the last green timing section at 00:38:655, it's not really necessary to lower the hitsound volume to 40% as the music is still at it's full volume at that point before the music fades out and it would not be a consistent contrast to the music.

1. Excellent! Very straight forward and nothing to really point out point out in this difficulty! Just the nazi parts and that's will be all. This will just be nazi mods for quality improvement. Of course you don't have to change anything.
2. 00:07:367 (1) - For a perfect blanket in this slider, encircling the next hit circle at 00:09:323 (2), consider moving the middle anchor point at x:304 y:328 and the last anchor point x:376 y:272. This will form a perfect blanket.
3. 00:09:976 (1) - If suggested above, copy-paste that slider and rotate it 180 degrees clockwise (also reverse selection and remove repeat). The slider should land at x:137 y:110 if done correctly. Of course don't forget to add the soft-whistles back and chance combo if necessary. :3
4. 00:11:280 (2) - Now copy-paste 00:09:976 (1) and rotate it 132 degrees clockwise. The slider should land at x:396 y:158 if done correctly. Again, don't forget to add the soft-whistles back and chance combo if necessary. :3

1. 00:30:829 (1) - For a perfect blanket in this slider, encircling the next hit circle at 00:32:786 (2), consider moving the middle anchor point at x:304 y:56 and the last anchor point x:376 y:112. This will form a perfect blanket.
2. 00:33:438 (1) - If suggested above, copy-paste that slider and rotate it 180 degrees counter-clockwise (also reverse selection and remove repeat). The slider should land at x:137 y:274 if done correctly. Of course don't forget to add the soft-whistles back and chance combo if necessary. :3
3. 00:34:742 (2) - Now copy-paste 00:33:438 (1) and rotate it 132 degrees counter-clockwise. The slider should land at x:396 y:226 if done correctly.
   Again, don't forget to add the soft-whistles back and chance combo if necessary. :3

1. 00:02:802 (2) - This slider caught me off guard because it was lacking a soft-whistle at the slider head as it would emphasize well with the "Hey" vocal line. I would consider adding a soft-whistle here for consistency.
2. 00:03:780 (4,5) - Comparing to your Easy and Hard difficulties, you added the soft whistle at 00:04:106 and no hitsound at 00:04:432, but in this difficulty you did the opposite. For that reason, I would consider adding the soft-whistle at the end of 00:03:780 (4) and delete the soft-whistle at 00:04:432 (5). That way, the hitsounds will be relatively consistent with all of your difficulties.
3. 00:04:758 (1,2,3,4) - How about making these sliders more smoother? Here is an example:
   
   Image and code (if necessary)

   
   

   296,176,4758,6,0,B|280:104|208:104|208:104|112:104,1,220,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   84,188,5736,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   112,272,6063,2,0,B|128:344|200:344|200:344|296:344,1,220,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   380,328,7041,1,10,0:0:0:0:

4. 00:09:323 (5) - Similar suggestion as 00:03:780 (4,5). Comparing to your Easy and Hard difficulties, you added the soft whistle at 00:09:323 (5)but in this difficulty you added a clap instead XD. Why is that? o.o For this reason, I would consider replacing the clap with a soft-whistle to be consistent with your other difficulties. I would do the same thing at 00:32:786 (5) if suggested.
5. 00:15:193 (1) - This slider shape could be a bit nicer. If you want, you could try to improve this slider a little bit (maybe a 3-point slider or something).
6. 00:24:323 (2) - Again, compare to your other difficulties, you added a soft-whistle but in this difficulty you added a normal-whistle. If this is a guest difficulty, then I can understand. Otherwise, you should replace it with a soft-whistle for consistency. o.o

1. 00:03:617 (1) - Adding a soft-whistle at the start of this slider would sound nice with the vocals imo. Try testing it yourself and see if you like it. If not, just simply ignore. :3
2. 00:15:845 (3) - This slider shape quality can be improved. How about you copy-paste the slider at 00:15:193 (1), flip it vertically, and reverse selection?

Kecco wrote:

[General]

Everything ok!

[Insane]

00:05:736 (5) - Give this a better look. Your map is pretty "ordered" and good-looking in a matter of blankets and stuff. So I think this kinda ruins it a bit. I'd suggest you to reshape it in a better way. I really see no reason behind of it, that's so nazi. D:
00:15:845 (3) - What about some symmetry? You should give this the same shape of 00:15:845 (3) - for a general better looking. Done.
00:17:313 (4) - Align this with 00:16:986 (3) - . The flow would be better, and since these two hitcircles are aligned 00:16:497 (1,2) - , you should do the same with that slider and that hitcircle. Okay.
00:29:199 (5) - Same suggestion of the first one. ;WWWWW;
00:30:177 (4) - ^ ;ooooo;
00:30:992 (6) - CTRL+G? Better flow in my opinion. Yup.
00:33:112 (4) - ^ Not sure about it..
00:38:003 (3,4,5) - Make this triangle bigger? You should increase the spacing inbetween the notes, emphatizes the end of the difficulty in my opinion. I actually kept it consistent with the first part.

[Hard]

[box=nazi]00:16:497 (3,4,5) - Replace them as follows? Better looking in my opinion since they'd follow a curve-line. http://puu.sh/4kuv2.jpg
00:19:106 (3) - Symmetry is not perfect with 00:17:802 (1) - . You should copy 00:17:802 (1) - and CTRL+H + CTRL+J. You know. It's actually fine as it is. o-o"
00:22:367 (5) - Missing whistle. Well no, it's purposed without a Hitsound.

[Easy]

Everything ok!

Good Luck!

Irreversible wrote:

How about never again trying to make a QAT banner?

Welcome to another mod from QAT-Queue ! :3 But what I've seen so far, the map is supah-dupah already.

[General]

It tells me your tags are inconsistent.. but somehow that's not true.. oô desu

That's all

[Easy]

00:04:758 (1) - wow that curve looks really good o.o desu
00:06:063 (2,3) - I don't quite agree with the rhythm here, it makes more sense for me if it's actually like this: 00:06:063 - 00:06:715 - (circle on both places). This rhythm should be easier to follow for beginners as well.. desu, at all nobody has critism this part so far. I will think about it, no change at now.

got no other suggestions here, rank please?

[Normal]

00:02:150 (1) - This is unsnapped, fix please! Drama bby!
00:15:193 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - About this part, i'm quite unsure. The rhythm in the first part 00:15:193 (1,2,3,4,5) - tends to be difficult to get for newbies, since there is a doublet. Also, it sounds a bit unconsistent because of this 00:17:802 (1,2,3) - . I mean , varying is okay, but here it should be the same rhythm. So imo you've got two options: Either you take the first rhythm for both, what makes it harder, or the second, what makes it easier. But well, you don't have to change it. It's still up to you. I actually agree that 00:16:497 (3,4) plays a bit difficult.
00:31:807 (2,3,4,5) - It would look better if you move 2 to 412 224, because otherwise it looks so.. 'abgehackt' :c You know? Don't forget to rearrange everything. http://imgur.com/iwodHQk (couldn't be bothered to cut the picture, well w/e) Okay.

~

[Hard]

00:19:921 (3,4,5) - This DS looks a bit messed up, make them equal please. Except if you wanted to put a jump here but well.. not really necessary imo. Fixu desu
00:23:182 (2) - I suppose mapping this out is a more creative idea, since the long slider is just blocking some playable beats. What about a circle 00:23:182 - here, slider from 00:23:345 - to 00:23:508 - and another circle 00:23:671 - ? desu, this Slider is intended to echo a wavy part of the Song. Not every beat needs to be mapped, especially not for a Hard Diff.
00:35:394 (3) - Move this a bit to the right. Reason is that it looks more polished, and it has the same gap between 00:34:742 (1,2) - , which is quite important imo! Okay.
00:38:655 (5) - Nc because you've done this in all your diffs? It's actually a Mistake that I put a NC in Normal, desu.

That's all again, really solid mapset. lol, and i like the song :3 This was probably the last mod from QAT (normal modders) =v=
See you later!

Raose wrote:

irre u ruined my banner, prepare to die )))):

Raose wrote:

irre u ruined my banner, prepare to die )))):

Kyshiro wrote:

You just couldn't wait 9 more days, could you? Grats nigga

Gabe wrote: