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Tsukasa - The Clear Blue Sky
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[Easy]
34:208(Break) -> Redo this break
[Hard]
<Overall Difficulty> 를 좀더 높이시는걸 권장드립니다.
롱 놋 속도는 ㅎㄷㄷ인데 원이 너무 천천히 줄어들어서 좀 이상한 느낌이 듭니다.
..... 거의 kudosu 달라는 수준이네:;
Star.
34:208(Break) -> Redo this break
[Hard]
<Overall Difficulty> 를 좀더 높이시는걸 권장드립니다.
롱 놋 속도는 ㅎㄷㄷ인데 원이 너무 천천히 줄어들어서 좀 이상한 느낌이 듭니다.
..... 거의 kudosu 달라는 수준이네:;
Star.
Topic Starter
Fixed >w<
[Easy]
00:42:55 (2,4) finish?
[Hard]
00:14:06 (4,5) Space is too long in combo.
Good DJmax song.
Give you star.
Good luck.
00:42:55 (2,4) finish?
[Hard]
00:14:06 (4,5) Space is too long in combo.
Good DJmax song.
Give you star.
Good luck.
Topic Starter
Fixed >w<Tanmak wrote:
[Hard]
00:14:06 (4,5) Space is too long in combo.
lol at above mods not noticing how off the offset is.
try 12.400
[Easy]
00:23:50 (1) - place this on a white tick
00:26:03 (1) - ^
00:28:73 (1) - ^
00:31:42 (1) - ^
00:56:90 (1) - start 1/2 earlier? ><
00:59:93 (1) - start 1/2 later
01:02:63 (1) - ^
01:05:16 (1) - ^
01:08:02 (1) - ^
01:10:72 (1) - ^
01:13:25 (1) - ^
Sorry for killing your map but you really shouldn't use that many red ticks in an easy diff
[Normal]
Nothing wrong
[Hard]
00:23:10 (7) - hidden
00:55:71 (1) - start the kiai 1/2 later
please lower the tick rate ><
try 12.400
[Easy]
00:23:50 (1) - place this on a white tick
00:26:03 (1) - ^
00:28:73 (1) - ^
00:31:42 (1) - ^
00:56:90 (1) - start 1/2 earlier? ><
00:59:93 (1) - start 1/2 later
01:02:63 (1) - ^
01:05:16 (1) - ^
01:08:02 (1) - ^
01:10:72 (1) - ^
01:13:25 (1) - ^
Sorry for killing your map but you really shouldn't use that many red ticks in an easy diff
[Normal]
Nothing wrong
[Hard]
00:23:10 (7) - hidden
00:55:71 (1) - start the kiai 1/2 later
please lower the tick rate ><
Topic Starter
Thank you >A<happy30 wrote:
lol at above mods not noticing how off the offset is.
try 12.400
[Easy]
00:23:50 (1) - place this on a white tick
00:26:03 (1) - ^
00:28:73 (1) - ^
00:31:42 (1) - ^
00:56:90 (1) - start 1/2 earlier? ><
00:59:93 (1) - start 1/2 later
01:02:63 (1) - ^
01:05:16 (1) - ^
01:08:02 (1) - ^
01:10:72 (1) - ^
01:13:25 (1) - ^
- it followes melody of song. so i'll not fix it. sorry :(
[Hard]
00:23:10 (7) - hidden
00:55:71 (1) - start the kiai 1/2 later
- fixed :)
please lower the tick rate ><
- this song has many 1/4 beat hi-hats. 4 level slider tick rate express it well. so i'll not fix it. sorry ):
Comments and suggestions, not orders.
easy
normal
hard
easy
SPOILER
00:55:20 (4) : You should replace this slider with 2 beats.
00:55:20 (4) : You should replace this slider with 2 beats.
normal
SPOILER
00:56:51 : This part seems empty, maybe you should map it to the vocals, ("Op-En YOUR He-Art")
00:56:51 : This part seems empty, maybe you should map it to the vocals, ("Op-En YOUR He-Art")
hard
SPOILER
While this is a "hard" map, the slider are a lot faster than they should be.
00:22:68 (4,5,6,7) : I don't like how these go under 3 (slider). You should make these beats go off to the left more.
00:55:71 (1) : Make this spinner 1 tick longer.
01:15:43 (13) : This shouldn't have the clap hitsound.
01:23:69 (3) : You should make this slider more visually appealing.
While this is a "hard" map, the slider are a lot faster than they should be.
00:22:68 (4,5,6,7) : I don't like how these go under 3 (slider). You should make these beats go off to the left more.
00:55:71 (1) : Make this spinner 1 tick longer.
01:15:43 (13) : This shouldn't have the clap hitsound.
01:23:69 (3) : You should make this slider more visually appealing.
Hard
00:55:71 (1) - end point at 00:56:89
star
00:55:71 (1) - end point at 00:56:89
star
Topic Starter
Fixed except spinner. if i fix spinner, it'll be uncomfortable to play 'w'
나의 스타를 받아랏!
i dont think this kind of rhythm is fun to play in Easy and Normal . i think it will be better if you make all notes follow the rhythm . for new players ,they will feel your Easy is confuse.
Insane:
slider tick 2 plz.
00:15:93 (3) - this slider should begin at 00:16:10
01:16:78 (5) - add a note .
nothing else . xD
Insane:
slider tick 2 plz.
00:15:93 (3) - this slider should begin at 00:16:10
01:16:78 (5) - add a note .
nothing else . xD
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Topic Starter
Fixed,Thank you~ >w<
별별별
Star!
[Easy]
00:12:40 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Add a Finish on the 1's?
Personally I thinking mapping on the white ticks more would make it easier.
[Normal]
Add a Finish on the 1's? In the beginning
00:12:40 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Add a Finish on the 1's?
Personally I thinking mapping on the white ticks more would make it easier.
[Normal]
Add a Finish on the 1's? In the beginning
Topic Starter
Fixed >A<~
easy:
normal:
hard:
SPOILER
00:52:84 - ugh seizures. not much you can do about it if it's part of the video though...
00:57:06 (1) - either have this slider start earlier or the kiai start sometime else (there's a blinding white flash just as you *think* the note should start)
00:57:06 (1) - either have this slider start earlier or the kiai start sometime else (there's a blinding white flash just as you *think* the note should start)
normal:
SPOILER
00:55:71 (1) - unless intentional, space this a bit farther.
01:04:98 (1,2) - which note does the slider belong to?
01:04:98 (1,2) - which note does the slider belong to?
hard:
SPOILER
this is more like insane, given that i'd probably need 50 tries to beat this.
00:21:33 (3) - I normally hate these things but this cresc. is so cleverly done.
00:43:07 (5,6) - why is this pattern different?
00:56:894 - lots of visibility problems here, a combination of kiai, overlapping combos, and the objects colour being similar to the background colour. When it flashes the number becomes invisible and thus it's impossible to tell which direction sliders go. See replays and look at which notes i missed (as opposed to bad aim or wrong tempo)
01:11:05 (4) - this one is especially difficult to see.
01:16:697 - lessen the fade, they're barely audible and only if you listen for them.
00:21:33 (3) - I normally hate these things but this cresc. is so cleverly done.
00:43:07 (5,6) - why is this pattern different?
00:56:894 - lots of visibility problems here, a combination of kiai, overlapping combos, and the objects colour being similar to the background colour. When it flashes the number becomes invisible and thus it's impossible to tell which direction sliders go. See replays and look at which notes i missed (as opposed to bad aim or wrong tempo)
01:11:05 (4) - this one is especially difficult to see.
01:16:697 - lessen the fade, they're barely audible and only if you listen for them.
Did hutka gave up?
Done
Download: (DJPop) The Clear Blue Screen.rar
I think at least 1 diff should snap on the vocal.
~Easy~
00:15:09 (1,2) - should copy from 00:12:40 (1,2) and flip them
00:32:62 (1) - start at 00:32:793
00:42:06 (1,2,3,4,5) - hitfinish all
01:26:55 (1) - end at 01:29:253
~Normal~
01:26:55 (1) - end at 01:29:253
~Hard~
SilderTickRate: 2
00:33:97 (1) - silence it
00:49:64 (5) - hitclap at the end
01:17:45 (1) - too short
01:26:55 (1) - end at 01:29:253
+Star
Download: (DJPop) The Clear Blue Screen.rar
I think at least 1 diff should snap on the vocal.
~Easy~
00:15:09 (1,2) - should copy from 00:12:40 (1,2) and flip them
00:32:62 (1) - start at 00:32:793
00:42:06 (1,2,3,4,5) - hitfinish all
01:26:55 (1) - end at 01:29:253
~Normal~
01:26:55 (1) - end at 01:29:253
~Hard~
SilderTickRate: 2
00:33:97 (1) - silence it
00:49:64 (5) - hitclap at the end
01:17:45 (1) - too short
01:26:55 (1) - end at 01:29:253
+Star
Topic Starter
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Beautyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!
Mod Info's:
Green: Suggestions, you don't have to fix, your choice.
Orange: You don't have to fix too, but is better if you do it.
Red: You have to fix this for sure!
Starts Suggestions:
All seems fine.
[Easy]
00:57:006 (1) - 1/2 backward and lenght it by 1/2.
01:17:062 (1) - Spinner too hard for an easy.
[Normal]
00:14:059 (3) - New combo.
00:15:009 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:16:061 (3) - New combo.
00:17:079 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:19:098 (3) - New combo.
00:20:048 (1) - Remove new combo.
[Hard]
Cute~
[DJPop's Insane]
00:23:018 (13) - New combo.
00:23:035 (1) - Remove new combo.
Green: Suggestions, you don't have to fix, your choice.
Orange: You don't have to fix too, but is better if you do it.
Red: You have to fix this for sure!
Starts Suggestions:
All seems fine.
[Easy]
00:57:006 (1) - 1/2 backward and lenght it by 1/2.
01:17:062 (1) - Spinner too hard for an easy.
[Normal]
00:14:059 (3) - New combo.
00:15:009 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:16:061 (3) - New combo.
00:17:079 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:19:098 (3) - New combo.
00:20:048 (1) - Remove new combo.
[Hard]
Cute~
[DJPop's Insane]
00:23:018 (13) - New combo.
00:23:035 (1) - Remove new combo.
Fixed.osuplayer111 wrote:
[DJPop's Insane]
00:23:018 (13) - New combo.
00:23:035 (1) - Remove new combo.
Download: Tsukasa - The Clear Blue Sky (MoonFragrance) [DJPop's Insane].osu
DJMAX ~ 
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Topic Starter
fixed :3
Fuuko's mod DEKIMASHITA~ <3
Check this. =o
Hints. :3
Awesome map. I don't even need to say this will be ranked soon...lol
Star, and keep up the good work. :3
Check this. =o
Hints. :3
Easy
1:10:00 (1) - Move this 1/2 beat back.
1:13:242 (1) - ^
Normal
No errors found, awesome. :3
HardWell, I prolly don't need to check DJPop's ( Well, I did, but didn't find anything wrong...surprising. *ironic* )
Dammit, awesome! I want to play this, like, all the time. lol
Awesome map. I don't even need to say this will be ranked soon...lol
Star, and keep up the good work. :3
Mod Info's:
Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.
Starts Suggestions:
All seems ok.
[Easy]
01:10:004 (x) - add a circle
[Normal]
omg i love it *w*
[Hard]
It's ok
[DJPop]
Nice
starred~
Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.
Starts Suggestions:
All seems ok.
[Easy]
01:10:004 (x) - add a circle
[Normal]
omg i love it *w*
[Hard]
It's ok
[DJPop]
Nice
starred~
Easy
00:20:048 (1,2) - move 1 tiny square down to center (2)
00:29:075 (3) - align with (1)
Normal
00:14:059 (3) - ?????? start at 00:14:422 and end at 00:14:759
Hard
00:17:079 (1) - Center this combo
DJPop is awesome.
Star[ite].
00:20:048 (1,2) - move 1 tiny square down to center (2)
00:29:075 (3) - align with (1)
Normal
00:14:059 (3) - ?????? start at 00:14:422 and end at 00:14:759
Hard
00:17:079 (1) - Center this combo
DJPop is awesome.
Star[ite].
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star~
Easy: fine
Normal: fine, just one suggestion
00:48:804 (1) - remove new combo to make the combo 8 whole notes long also
Hard: fine, just one suggestion
00:48:635 (1,2) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 2 to be consistent with 00:47:287 (5)
DJPop's Insane: fine
---
Great map. Star.
Normal: fine, just one suggestion
00:48:804 (1) - remove new combo to make the combo 8 whole notes long also
Hard: fine, just one suggestion
00:48:635 (1,2) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 2 to be consistent with 00:47:287 (5)
DJPop's Insane: fine
---
Great map. Star.
Overall (all diffs)
make offset in all diffs 265,cause right now Djpop's has a different offset from the rest, just add 265 as the offset in all diffs, map should still be same as it is, (don't forget to re-snap all notes just in case
)
Easy
00:23:035 (1) - move this 1/2 back, on the white tick, make sure spacing is still perfect after doing this, i'm saying to do this atm, cause it sounds better on the white tick, i don't really hear anything ur mapping at
Normal
00:17:079 (1) - remove new combo
00:19:098 (3) - add new combo
00:20:048 (1) - remove new combo
Hard
00:55:037 (9) - center this in the middle of all that cool stuff,
DJpop's Insane
nothing ._.
make offset in all diffs 265,cause right now Djpop's has a different offset from the rest, just add 265 as the offset in all diffs, map should still be same as it is, (don't forget to re-snap all notes just in case
)Easy
00:23:035 (1) - move this 1/2 back, on the white tick, make sure spacing is still perfect after doing this, i'm saying to do this atm, cause it sounds better on the white tick, i don't really hear anything ur mapping at
Normal
00:17:079 (1) - remove new combo
00:19:098 (3) - add new combo
00:20:048 (1) - remove new combo
Hard
00:55:037 (9) - center this in the middle of all that cool stuff,
DJpop's Insane
nothing ._.
Enough Stars, You need a BAT, not my STAR><
comboburst too big?
map comboburst: 551x784
starred
Don't make skinned elements larger than template skin dimensions. This is especially true for combobusts.templateskin comboburst: 388x767
map comboburst: 551x784
starred
lolsonnyc wrote:
Enough Stars, You need a BAT, not my STAR><
[General]
You can remove the .osb if you want.
Please remove the lead-in time on all the difficulties but DJPop's.
[Easy]
I felt the patterns in the opening section before the break might be confusing to start with for Easy.
As a whole, the map's fine. It might be better if you followed the vocals more than the accompaniment though; the beat there is much easier to sense.
[Normal]
00:22:000 (1) - The part before this note is a bit hard to follow.
01:23:069 (3) - Didn't like the looks of this slider, lol.
Nice.
[Hard]
00:31:095 (2) - The extra repeat on this came as a bit of a surprise.
00:55:037 (9) - Consider stacking this under 8.
01:23:069 (3) - Could this be made to look nicer?
[DJPop's Insane]
Background colour is different here, consider making it consistent.
Didn't see anything here.
Star~
You can remove the .osb if you want.
Please remove the lead-in time on all the difficulties but DJPop's.
[Easy]
I felt the patterns in the opening section before the break might be confusing to start with for Easy.
As a whole, the map's fine. It might be better if you followed the vocals more than the accompaniment though; the beat there is much easier to sense.
[Normal]
00:22:000 (1) - The part before this note is a bit hard to follow.
01:23:069 (3) - Didn't like the looks of this slider, lol.
Nice.
[Hard]
00:31:095 (2) - The extra repeat on this came as a bit of a surprise.
00:55:037 (9) - Consider stacking this under 8.
01:23:069 (3) - Could this be made to look nicer?
[DJPop's Insane]
Background colour is different here, consider making it consistent.
Didn't see anything here.
Star~
Topic Starter
Others all fixed :3 thanks >w<Kytoxid wrote:
[General]
Please remove the lead-in time on all the difficulties but DJPop's.
- it's for MV backgrounds.
[Hard]
00:31:095 (2) - The extra repeat on this came as a bit of a surprise.
- it's fit on drum beat.
00:55:037 (9) - Consider stacking this under 8.
- it's a jumpy zone lol
Star
[Normal]
00:12:399 (3) - Allign with 2
[Hard]
00:19:815 (6) - Allign with 5 (end of slider
01:00:602 (4) - Move 1 grid up
Not bad. Star
00:12:399 (3) - Allign with 2
[Hard]
00:19:815 (6) - Allign with 5 (end of slider
01:00:602 (4) - Move 1 grid up
Not bad. Star
[Easy]
00:15:09(1,2) - 왼쪽으로 1칸 옮기는게 어떨까요?
00:17:79(1,2) - 위쪽으로 1칸 옮기는게 어떨까요?
[Normal]
00:23:18(1,2) - [제안] (1)의 화살표부분하고 (2)의 피니시를 겹치는게 좋을듯 싶네요 ㅜㅜ
00:32:79(4) - [제안] 위쪽으로 1칸 옮기는게 어떨까요?
[Hard]
문제 없음 ㅇㅅㅇ
[DJPop's Insane]
당연히 문제 없음 ㅇㅅㅇ
음...
일단 얼마 안남았으니 힘내시길 바랍니다 XD
여기 제 별이군요 ㄷㄷ
00:15:09(1,2) - 왼쪽으로 1칸 옮기는게 어떨까요?
00:17:79(1,2) - 위쪽으로 1칸 옮기는게 어떨까요?
[Normal]
00:23:18(1,2) - [제안] (1)의 화살표부분하고 (2)의 피니시를 겹치는게 좋을듯 싶네요 ㅜㅜ
00:32:79(4) - [제안] 위쪽으로 1칸 옮기는게 어떨까요?
[Hard]
문제 없음 ㅇㅅㅇ
[DJPop's Insane]
당연히 문제 없음 ㅇㅅㅇ
음...
일단 얼마 안남았으니 힘내시길 바랍니다 XD
여기 제 별이군요 ㄷㄷ
[Normal & Hard]
00:56:894 - Add the kiai time on a note.
Except that, all maps are flawless. Love the background and the hitcircles.
00:56:894 - Add the kiai time on a note.
Except that, all maps are flawless. Love the background and the hitcircles.
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Nice. ~
Why the genres are Any(Other)? Add something maybe?
Oh, I feel so bad
Oh, I feel so bad
Ranked.
Oh lovely I've just been KS'ed after announcing my intentions publicly.
Still, I'd have ranked it as well. Nominated for Beatmap Charts.
Still, I'd have ranked it as well. Nominated for Beatmap Charts.