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Tsukasa - The Clear Blue Sky

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Shulin
1,333 posts
Joined August 2009
Shulin
General:

Put a warning in the beat map description that the video contains flashing.

00:52:832 – The flashing in the video makes the notes hard to see, but there’s not much you can do about that.

Easy: – Fine.
Normal: – Fine.
Hard: - You might want to consider renaming this insane. It has a star difficulty of 4.99. But apart from that its good.

All the maps are fantastic, I love the design and the way you’ve mapped this makes it jump really well. Star!!
MoonFragrance
1,929 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance
i'll add warning storyboard later. because my photoshop is vaporize orz

by the way, i'll not rename Hard -> Insane.
becuase i don't think it's hard like 4.99diff. maybe 4.95?

I'm fail to play osu with many Insane diff. but i'm not fail with this song :lol:
panic_on
16 posts
Joined September 2009
panic_on
haha~
minyeob
osu! Alumni
2,540 posts
Joined May 2008
minyeob
[Easy]
34:208(Break) -> Redo this break

[Hard]
<Overall Difficulty> 를 좀더 높이시는걸 권장드립니다.
롱 놋 속도는 ㅎㄷㄷ인데 원이 너무 천천히 줄어들어서 좀 이상한 느낌이 듭니다.

..... 거의 kudosu 달라는 수준이네:;

Star.
MoonFragrance
1,929 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance
Fixed >w<
Tanmak
896 posts
Joined August 2009
Tanmak
[Easy]
00:42:55 (2,4) finish?

[Hard]
00:14:06 (4,5) Space is too long in combo.


Good DJmax song.

Give you star.
Good luck.
MoonFragrance
1,929 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance

Tanmak wrote:

[Hard]
00:14:06 (4,5) Space is too long in combo.
Fixed >w<
happy30
Featured Artist
2,064 posts
Joined August 2008
happy30
lol at above mods not noticing how off the offset is.

try 12.400

[Easy]

00:23:50 (1) - place this on a white tick
00:26:03 (1) - ^
00:28:73 (1) - ^
00:31:42 (1) - ^

00:56:90 (1) - start 1/2 earlier? ><
00:59:93 (1) - start 1/2 later
01:02:63 (1) - ^
01:05:16 (1) - ^
01:08:02 (1) - ^
01:10:72 (1) - ^
01:13:25 (1) - ^

Sorry for killing your map but you really shouldn't use that many red ticks in an easy diff

[Normal]

Nothing wrong

[Hard]

00:23:10 (7) - hidden
00:55:71 (1) - start the kiai 1/2 later

please lower the tick rate ><
MoonFragrance
1,929 posts
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Topic Starter
MoonFragrance

happy30 wrote:

lol at above mods not noticing how off the offset is.

try 12.400

[Easy]

00:23:50 (1) - place this on a white tick
00:26:03 (1) - ^
00:28:73 (1) - ^
00:31:42 (1) - ^

00:56:90 (1) - start 1/2 earlier? ><
00:59:93 (1) - start 1/2 later
01:02:63 (1) - ^
01:05:16 (1) - ^
01:08:02 (1) - ^
01:10:72 (1) - ^
01:13:25 (1) - ^

- it followes melody of song. so i'll not fix it. sorry :(

[Hard]

00:23:10 (7) - hidden
00:55:71 (1) - start the kiai 1/2 later

- fixed :)

please lower the tick rate ><

- this song has many 1/4 beat hi-hats. 4 level slider tick rate express it well. so i'll not fix it. sorry ):
Thank you >A<
Luneko
842 posts
Joined June 2009
Luneko
Great beatmap *.*
Star~
anonymous_old
0 posts
Here since the beginning
anonymous_old
Comments and suggestions, not orders.

easy
SPOILER

00:55:20 (4) : You should replace this slider with 2 beats.

normal
SPOILER

00:56:51 : This part seems empty, maybe you should map it to the vocals, ("Op-En YOUR He-Art")

hard
SPOILER

While this is a "hard" map, the slider are a lot faster than they should be.

00:22:68 (4,5,6,7) : I don't like how these go under 3 (slider). You should make these beats go off to the left more.
00:55:71 (1) : Make this spinner 1 tick longer.
01:15:43 (13) : This shouldn't have the clap hitsound.
01:23:69 (3) : You should make this slider more visually appealing.
Lissette
osu! Alumni
1,496 posts
Joined July 2008
Lissette
Hard
00:55:71 (1) - end point at 00:56:89

star :)
MoonFragrance
1,929 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance
Fixed except spinner. if i fix spinner, it'll be uncomfortable to play 'w'
Sure
4,220 posts
Joined February 2009
Sure
나의 스타를 받아랏!
yaya
osu! Alumni
1,164 posts
Joined November 2008
yaya
i dont think this kind of rhythm is fun to play in Easy and Normal . i think it will be better if you make all notes follow the rhythm . for new players ,they will feel your Easy is confuse.

Insane:
slider tick 2 plz.

00:15:93 (3) - this slider should begin at 00:16:10
01:16:78 (5) - add a note .

nothing else . xD
Mafiamaster
osu! Alumni
3,460 posts
Joined July 2008
Mafiamaster
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
MoonFragrance
1,929 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance
Fixed,Thank you~ >w<
askerlate47
45 posts
Joined September 2009
askerlate47
별별별
Ra-s
1,289 posts
Joined May 2009
Ra-s
Star!
Sleep Powder
1,540 posts
Joined October 2008
Sleep Powder
[Easy]
00:12:40 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Add a Finish on the 1's?
Personally I thinking mapping on the white ticks more would make it easier.

[Normal]
Add a Finish on the 1's? In the beginning
MoonFragrance
1,929 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance
Fixed >A<~
taihw
11 posts
Joined October 2009
taihw
easy:
SPOILER
00:52:84 - ugh seizures. not much you can do about it if it's part of the video though...
00:57:06 (1) - either have this slider start earlier or the kiai start sometime else (there's a blinding white flash just as you *think* the note should start)

normal:
SPOILER
00:55:71 (1) - unless intentional, space this a bit farther.
01:04:98 (1,2) - which note does the slider belong to?

hard:
SPOILER
this is more like insane, given that i'd probably need 50 tries to beat this.
00:21:33 (3) - I normally hate these things but this cresc. is so cleverly done.
00:43:07 (5,6) - why is this pattern different?
00:56:894 - lots of visibility problems here, a combination of kiai, overlapping combos, and the objects colour being similar to the background colour. When it flashes the number becomes invisible and thus it's impossible to tell which direction sliders go. See replays and look at which notes i missed (as opposed to bad aim or wrong tempo)
01:11:05 (4) - this one is especially difficult to see.
01:16:697 - lessen the fade, they're barely audible and only if you listen for them.
bmin11
5,438 posts
Joined October 2008
bmin11
Did hutka gave up?
DJPop
osu! Alumni
3,549 posts
Here since the beginning
DJPop
Done :)

Download: (DJPop) The Clear Blue Screen.rar


I think at least 1 diff should snap on the vocal.

~Easy~
00:15:09 (1,2) - should copy from 00:12:40 (1,2) and flip them
00:32:62 (1) - start at 00:32:793
00:42:06 (1,2,3,4,5) - hitfinish all
01:26:55 (1) - end at 01:29:253

~Normal~
01:26:55 (1) - end at 01:29:253

~Hard~
SilderTickRate: 2
00:33:97 (1) - silence it
00:49:64 (5) - hitclap at the end
01:17:45 (1) - too short
01:26:55 (1) - end at 01:29:253


+Star
MoonFragrance
1,929 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
anonymous_old
0 posts
Here since the beginning
anonymous_old
Beautyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions, you don't have to fix, your choice.
Orange: You don't have to fix too, but is better if you do it.
Red: You have to fix this for sure!

Starts Suggestions:

All seems fine.

[Easy]

00:57:006 (1) - 1/2 backward and lenght it by 1/2.
01:17:062 (1) - Spinner too hard for an easy.

[Normal]

00:14:059 (3) - New combo.
00:15:009 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:16:061 (3) - New combo.
00:17:079 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:19:098 (3) - New combo.
00:20:048 (1) - Remove new combo.

[Hard]

Cute~

[DJPop's Insane]

00:23:018 (13) - New combo.
00:23:035 (1) - Remove new combo.
DJPop
osu! Alumni
3,549 posts
Here since the beginning
DJPop

osuplayer111 wrote:

[DJPop's Insane]
00:23:018 (13) - New combo.
00:23:035 (1) - Remove new combo.
Fixed.

Download: Tsukasa - The Clear Blue Sky (MoonFragrance) [DJPop's Insane].osu
Cyril Scarlet
osu! Alumni
3,877 posts
Joined May 2009
Cyril Scarlet
DJMAX ~ :shock:
Armin
osu! Alumni
2,454 posts
Joined May 2009
Armin
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
MoonFragrance
1,929 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance
fixed :3
Fuuko
486 posts
Joined June 2009
Fuuko
Fuuko's mod DEKIMASHITA~ <3

Check this. =o
Hints. :3

Easy

1:10:00 (1) - Move this 1/2 beat back.
1:13:242 (1) - ^
Normal

No errors found, awesome. :3
Hard

Dammit, awesome! I want to play this, like, all the time. lol
Well, I prolly don't need to check DJPop's ( Well, I did, but didn't find anything wrong...surprising. *ironic* )

Awesome map. I don't even need to say this will be ranked soon...lol
Star, and keep up the good work. :3
Diasios
3,966 posts
Joined August 2008
Diasios
Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Starts Suggestions:

All seems ok.

[Easy]

01:10:004 (x) - add a circle

[Normal]

omg i love it *w*

[Hard]

It's ok

[DJPop]

Nice :)

starred~
Froslass
Beatmap Nominator
9,344 posts
Joined July 2008
Froslass
Easy
00:20:048 (1,2) - move 1 tiny square down to center (2)
00:29:075 (3) - align with (1)

Normal
00:14:059 (3) - ?????? start at 00:14:422 and end at 00:14:759

Hard
00:17:079 (1) - Center this combo

DJPop is awesome.

Star[ite].
eee
692 posts
Joined January 2008
eee
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Nakagawa-Kanon
Featured Artist
1,893 posts
Joined March 2009
Nakagawa-Kanon
star~
blissfulyoshi
osu! Alumni
4,755 posts
Joined July 2008
blissfulyoshi
Easy: fine

Normal: fine, just one suggestion
00:48:804 (1) - remove new combo to make the combo 8 whole notes long also

Hard: fine, just one suggestion
00:48:635 (1,2) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 2 to be consistent with 00:47:287 (5)

DJPop's Insane: fine

---
Great map. Star.
EEeee
1,026 posts
Joined July 2008
EEeee
Overall (all diffs)
make offset in all diffs 265,cause right now Djpop's has a different offset from the rest, just add 265 as the offset in all diffs, map should still be same as it is, (don't forget to re-snap all notes just in case ;))

Easy
00:23:035 (1) - move this 1/2 back, on the white tick, make sure spacing is still perfect after doing this, i'm saying to do this atm, cause it sounds better on the white tick, i don't really hear anything ur mapping at

Normal
00:17:079 (1) - remove new combo
00:19:098 (3) - add new combo
00:20:048 (1) - remove new combo

Hard
00:55:037 (9) - center this in the middle of all that cool stuff,

DJpop's Insane
nothing ._.
Sonnyc
7,776 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
Enough Stars, You need a BAT, not my STAR><
Hanyuu
2,223 posts
Joined February 2009
Hanyuu
comboburst too big?

Don't make skinned elements larger than template skin dimensions. This is especially true for combobusts.
templateskin comboburst: 388x767
map comboburst: 551x784

starred :)
Kitty McWittles
141 posts
Joined September 2008
Kitty McWittles

sonnyc wrote:

Enough Stars, You need a BAT, not my STAR><
lol
Kytoxid
osu! Alumni
1,369 posts
Joined April 2009
Kytoxid
[General]

You can remove the .osb if you want.
Please remove the lead-in time on all the difficulties but DJPop's.

[Easy]

I felt the patterns in the opening section before the break might be confusing to start with for Easy.

As a whole, the map's fine. It might be better if you followed the vocals more than the accompaniment though; the beat there is much easier to sense.

[Normal]

00:22:000 (1) - The part before this note is a bit hard to follow.
01:23:069 (3) - Didn't like the looks of this slider, lol.

Nice.

[Hard]

00:31:095 (2) - The extra repeat on this came as a bit of a surprise.
00:55:037 (9) - Consider stacking this under 8.
01:23:069 (3) - Could this be made to look nicer?

[DJPop's Insane]

Background colour is different here, consider making it consistent.

Didn't see anything here.

Star~
MoonFragrance
1,929 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance

Kytoxid wrote:

[General]

Please remove the lead-in time on all the difficulties but DJPop's.
- it's for MV backgrounds.

[Hard]

00:31:095 (2) - The extra repeat on this came as a bit of a surprise.
- it's fit on drum beat.
00:55:037 (9) - Consider stacking this under 8.
- it's a jumpy zone lol
Others all fixed :3 thanks >w<
DeathxShinigami
1,176 posts
Joined November 2008
DeathxShinigami
Star
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
[Normal]
00:12:399 (3) - Allign with 2

[Hard]
00:19:815 (6) - Allign with 5 (end of slider
01:00:602 (4) - Move 1 grid up

Not bad. Star
arien666
6,312 posts
Joined May 2009
arien666
[Easy]
00:15:09(1,2) - 왼쪽으로 1칸 옮기는게 어떨까요?
00:17:79(1,2) - 위쪽으로 1칸 옮기는게 어떨까요?

[Normal]
00:23:18(1,2) - [제안] (1)의 화살표부분하고 (2)의 피니시를 겹치는게 좋을듯 싶네요 ㅜㅜ
00:32:79(4) - [제안] 위쪽으로 1칸 옮기는게 어떨까요?

[Hard]
문제 없음 ㅇㅅㅇ

[DJPop's Insane]
당연히 문제 없음 ㅇㅅㅇ



음...
일단 얼마 안남았으니 힘내시길 바랍니다 XD

여기 제 별이군요 ㄷㄷ
Nharox
884 posts
Joined February 2008
Nharox
[Normal & Hard]

00:56:894 - Add the kiai time on a note. ;)

Except that, all maps are flawless. Love the background and the hitcircles. :)
Vanmonky
986 posts
Joined June 2009
Vanmonky
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Takuma
osu! Alumni
1,704 posts
Joined October 2008
Takuma
Nice. ~
bmin11
5,438 posts
Joined October 2008
bmin11
Why the genres are Any(Other)? Add something maybe?

Oh, I feel so bad :o
La Valse
501 posts
Joined February 2009
La Valse
카악~~~~~~~~~~~~ 퉷 :!:
Jarby
2,962 posts
Joined August 2008
Jarby
Ranked.
Pasonia
osu! Alumni
1,199 posts
Joined October 2008
Pasonia
Oh lovely I've just been KS'ed after announcing my intentions publicly.

Still, I'd have ranked it as well. Nominated for Beatmap Charts.
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