WyndII wrote:

[Hard]
00:53:43 (3) - whistle? Added
00:45:31 (1) - hmm... this looks... this doesn't look so spacial. Can you change it or divide it? Changed
01:15:67 (3,5) - whistle Added
01:21:67 (4) - This object is too close from the previous object. lol. lol fixed
02:33:84 (6) - is this alignment done on purpose? Didn't saw that, fixed

[Normal]
Nice map.lol.
xD

Hard lacks hitsounds =( etc. etc. but the song is well mapped.

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

Normal:
00:53:78 (4) - Mirror 1 OK kind of fixed. I'm not too sure if this what you meant by mirror, sorry I'm still not good on mapping/modding terms ._.

Hoo hoo hoo, it's not done. I'll finish it, I'm just lazy that's all >.>

Hard:
00:32:43 (3) - Spacing, closer to 2. Done
00:34:90 (4,5) - ^ Done
01:48:67 (3) - Align with 2 Done
01:49:20 (4) - Mirror with 1. Done but not too sure if that's right, since I really don't know what Mirror'ing means.
02:02:08 (2) - Spacing Done
02:40:90 (2,3) - *nazi* too close together Done
02:42:67 (1) - Spacing, further away from 8. Done
03:09:14 (3,4) - *nazi* mirror 1,2 Done, once again not too sure
03:34:73 (1) - *nazi* Move the first anchor two time to the left, once down ;o ? Did I do it right now? Didn't understood this clearly.

Overall:
I think this diff is kind of messy... it doesn't look pretty at all D: Seems like everything is randomly placed and serves no order/pattern. Maybe pretty it up a bit? I love you nacho don't hate me! ;_;

*starss to make up for mean comment*

NachoPiggy wrote:

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

Normal:
00:53:78 (4) - Mirror 1 OK kind of fixed. I'm not too sure if this what you meant by mirror, sorry I'm still not good on mapping/modding terms ._.

Hoo hoo hoo, it's not done. I'll finish it, I'm just lazy that's all >.>

Hard:
00:32:43 (3) - Spacing, closer to 2. Done
00:34:90 (4,5) - ^ Done
01:48:67 (3) - Align with 2 Done
01:49:20 (4) - Mirror with 1. Done but not too sure if that's right, since I really don't know what Mirror'ing means.
02:02:08 (2) - Spacing Done
02:40:90 (2,3) - *nazi* too close together Done
02:42:67 (1) - Spacing, further away from 8. Done
03:09:14 (3,4) - *nazi* mirror 1,2 Done, once again not too sure
03:34:73 (1) - *nazi* Move the first anchor two time to the left, once down ;o ? Did I do it right now? Didn't understood this clearly.

Overall:
I think this diff is kind of messy... it doesn't look pretty at all D: Seems like everything is randomly placed and serves no order/pattern. Maybe pretty it up a bit? I love you nacho don't hate me! ;_;

*starss to make up for mean comment*

Well it's supposed to actually change all the time the patterns so it looks dynamic, but I guess it backfired I think if it really did make it look ugly, I really don't know how I'm gonna improve it much as of yet since I don't know where to start since in my eyes it looks OK, so I need more of your suggestions/opinions and of others since I'm pretty stuck now actually and this is basically actually my first map and I wasn't taking any risk on making it look prettier/unique/etc. since I was using Distance Snap very strictly throughout the map and played it safe.

Alsoooooooo.... thanks for the star and all buuuuut... if that star is actually just something to make up for your comment and not for map priority, weeeelllll this actually makes me look like more of a jerk ._.

Azure_Kyte wrote:

Here's my random mod

Green = Suggestion Red = Check this

[Normal]
*I think the slider velocity is a little fast for a normal map; this may just be me, but... yeah
00:59:26 (3) - maybe line up with (2)
00:59:43 (4) - is you do the above one, move this one grid down to make it even
01:00:67 (3) - Would it be possible to extend this to 01:02:26? it sounds a lot better if it ends here. I'd suggest setting a .5x timing section to achieve this though. The break will need to be resized if this is done as well
01:20:26 (3) - I'd probably move this 1/2 note forward
02:57:84 (3) - Again, I'd probably align this with (2)
02:58:02 (4) - Move this one 2 grids up if you do the above one
03:00:49 (2) - I'd probably move this 1/2 beat forward, but it fit's better than the one at 1:20:26 so I'll mark this as a suggestion
03:19:02 (4) - Distance snap here is wierd

[Hard]
00:29:61 (2) - This sounds better when you shorten it by 1/2 a beat
00:35:26 (1) - move back 1/2 a beat
00:37:02 (1) - Try moving this back 1/2 beat
01:26:08 (1) - Move this 1/2 a beat forward
01:55:73 (3) - line up with 2
02:37:02 (1) - Distance snap here is wierd

[Whymeman's Glide]
No Problems found

Overall a good beatmap and whyme's map is extremely fun to play, I'd check to make sure distance snap is correct through normal and hard, however.

Great job ^^
Starr'd

vytalibus wrote:

[Normal]
01:19:90 (1,2,3) - (3) is horribly-spaced. Lookit that.

[Hard]
01:21:84 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing between (1) and (2) doesn't make sense compared to the rest.
01:25:90 (1) - Move starting point forward by 1/2. Don't forget to re-space this.

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

[Normal]:
03:00:31 (2) - Slider endpoint gets Finish? o.o - Done
03:21:84 (3) - Slider endpoint gets Finish? o.o - Done

[Hard]:
02:31:37 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Nacho so pro (No really, check that) - lol how did that happen

Pasonia wrote:

I'm quite bothered by a number of spacing issues in all difficulties, like in Hard there's 01:09:31 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - where end of 5 is too close to start of 1 compared to rest of combo and end of 1 spaces differently from 2 than 2 to 3.

I think all that suffices in this mod post is a please-check-your-spacing conclusion.

Oh, and repeating sliders with ALL finishes sounds bad. It jars my nerves somewhat (no offence to you) esp. in a soft tune like this.

Star coz I like soft tunes like this. Dreamy soft.

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Overall]

BPM: 170,00 - Offset: 22.785 (Remember to resnap all notes.)

[Normal]

I Don't like some combo placing, but it's fine.

01:00:037 (2,3) - Spacing.
01:33:019 (2,3) - ^
01:51:054 (3,4) - ^

[Hard]

00:35:011 (5,1) - Unexpected change of spacing.
01:47:082 (1) - Partially offscreen.
02:01:041 (3,4) - Adjust spacing.
02:54:000 (8) - New combo.
03:23:082 (2) - ^
03:29:011 (5,1,2) - Partially offscreen.

[whymeman's Glide]

Offset is totally wrong. Set this one: 22.785 and resnap all notes.

02:15:054 (10,1) - Spacing.

whymeman wrote:

*sigh* . . .

The notes sounds properly timed, and yet they say the offset is wrong.

Then the offset is right and the notes are way off....

ykcarrot wrote:

[General]
Make same tag and source.
Add guest's name at tag.


[Normal]
01:52:078 (4) - new combo
03:45:002 (2) - Redo this slider. make it parallel.


other diffs are good.

sonnyc wrote:

Hello
[Normal]
00:27:902 ~ 00:28:079 Maybe pull it timelines each(Space it by yourself><) or add in 00:27:726
01:33:726 New combo?
02:46:255 ~ 02:46:784 Spacing
03:07:432 Spacing~(little left)
03:17:843 Little down
03:39:549 Del New combo
[Gilde]
03:46:079 I think ending in 03:46:034 can be suitable..

For the good map, you'll get a kudosu star awarded

minyeob wrote:

[Normal]
01:52:078 (1) - IMO this is too close from previous object.

[Your difficulties]
whyme added source on his diff. >_>

Mafiamaster wrote:

Ranked!

whymeman wrote:

Ah, I found out why my offset seemed so wrong. The .mp3 was changed but I didn't know since I had the old one... (; ._.)

But its all good now and good job Nacho