FuukoLover:
The break in Easy was shortened a bit.
JInxyjem:
Fixed.
Thanks to both of you + deadbeat.
The break in Easy was shortened a bit.
JInxyjem:
Fixed.
Thanks to both of you + deadbeat.
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Yoko Shimomura - Roxas
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Topic Starter
Here's my mod
Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this
[Easy]
01:08:044 (1) - Maybe silence the end?
No problems found
[Normal]
00:03:094 (9) - Whistle?
00:07:094 (7) - ^
00:24:044 (1) - Move the spinner forward 1/2 a beat, place a note here and shorten the spinner by 1/2 a beat
00:31:044 (3) - Finish on the beginning?
00:35:044 (1) - Finish instead of whistle?
00:44:044 (1) - Move the spinner forward 1/2 a beat, place a note here and shorten the spinner by 1/2 a beat
00:48:044 (1) - Move the end point left 1 lvl2 grid?
No problems found
[Hard]
00:02:044 (5) - These 1/6th sliders sound wierd to me. Maybe try using 1/4? slower but it sounds nicer to me.
00:06:044 (5,6) - ^
00:22:044 (1) - 00:44:044 (1) - Move the spinner forward 1/2 a beat, place a note here and shorten the spinner by 1/2 a beat
00:41:044 (1,2) - Finishes?
00:42:044 (1) - Finish on the end?
00:56:069 (1) - This is really strange. It feels really forced on the timing to me. Maybe you should consider something different here?
01:04:044 (1) - ^
Overall, a cool beatmap, and KH is awesome
Starred
Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this
[Easy]
01:08:044 (1) - Maybe silence the end?
No problems found
[Normal]
00:03:094 (9) - Whistle?
00:07:094 (7) - ^
00:24:044 (1) - Move the spinner forward 1/2 a beat, place a note here and shorten the spinner by 1/2 a beat
00:31:044 (3) - Finish on the beginning?
00:35:044 (1) - Finish instead of whistle?
00:44:044 (1) - Move the spinner forward 1/2 a beat, place a note here and shorten the spinner by 1/2 a beat
00:48:044 (1) - Move the end point left 1 lvl2 grid?
No problems found
[Hard]
00:02:044 (5) - These 1/6th sliders sound wierd to me. Maybe try using 1/4? slower but it sounds nicer to me.
00:06:044 (5,6) - ^
00:22:044 (1) - 00:44:044 (1) - Move the spinner forward 1/2 a beat, place a note here and shorten the spinner by 1/2 a beat
00:41:044 (1,2) - Finishes?
00:42:044 (1) - Finish on the end?
00:56:069 (1) - This is really strange. It feels really forced on the timing to me. Maybe you should consider something different here?
01:04:044 (1) - ^
Overall, a cool beatmap, and KH is awesome
Starred
Topic Starter
Everything was changed, except the second vibrating slider; I rather like that slider, lol. Thanks for modding.Azure_Kyte wrote:
Here's my mod
Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this
[Easy]
01:08:044 (1) - Maybe silence the end?
No problems found
[Normal]
00:03:094 (9) - Whistle?
00:07:094 (7) - ^
00:24:044 (1) - Move the spinner forward 1/2 a beat, place a note here and shorten the spinner by 1/2 a beat
00:31:044 (3) - Finish on the beginning?
00:35:044 (1) - Finish instead of whistle?
00:44:044 (1) - Move the spinner forward 1/2 a beat, place a note here and shorten the spinner by 1/2 a beat
00:48:044 (1) - Move the end point left 1 lvl2 grid?
No problems found
[Hard]
00:02:044 (5) - These 1/6th sliders sound wierd to me. Maybe try using 1/4? slower but it sounds nicer to me.
00:06:044 (5,6) - ^
00:22:044 (1) - 00:44:044 (1) - Move the spinner forward 1/2 a beat, place a note here and shorten the spinner by 1/2 a beat
00:41:044 (1,2) - Finishes?
00:42:044 (1) - Finish on the end?
00:56:069 (1) - This is really strange. It feels really forced on the timing to me. Maybe you should consider something different here?
01:04:044 (1) - ^
Overall, a cool beatmap, and KH is awesome
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Play through all the difficulties, no problem, smooth and fun. =D
Star for ya... ^ ^
Star for ya... ^ ^
nothing .
but i'll point that 1/4 beats isnt fit this soft song .
1/2 beats is perfect.
but i'll point that 1/4 beats isnt fit this soft song .
1/2 beats is perfect.
Topic Starter
Shulin: Everything was done except I got confused about your comments about volume, but I tried to make sre that every note had a bit of volume.
(and I was going to make an Insane, except I didn't see how I could really bring out an interesting map without just shoving notes all over the place or using smaller hitcircles, since I really dislike small hitcircles)
alvisto: Thanks!
osu_CN_yaya: Changed up the start of Hard, thanks.
(and I was going to make an Insane, except I didn't see how I could really bring out an interesting map without just shoving notes all over the place or using smaller hitcircles, since I really dislike small hitcircles)
alvisto: Thanks!
osu_CN_yaya: Changed up the start of Hard, thanks.
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Topic Starter
All fixed, thanks!blissfulyoshi wrote:
Easy: fine
Normal:
00:18:457 (4,5,6) - lower stack leniency to make this look nicer
00:30:457 (1) - remove new combo?
00:34:457 (1,1) - might want to consider removing these new combos too
01:08:457 (1) - silence the end of the slider
Hard: (a little difficult for such a peaceful song)
lower stack leniency please
May you move the timing sections that are directly on notes a quarter note back....?
rest of the mod on irc.
Nice map. Star.
Nice map
Normal:
01:04:095 (2) - I actually hate these kind of sliders eher i dont know which way to go... but, up to you to leave it as it is, just wanted to say i hated them... >_>
Insane:
I was about to suggest you to make some of the stacks to look nicer before leaving but nvm, i see that you have already done it
Normal:
01:04:095 (2) - I actually hate these kind of sliders eher i dont know which way to go... but, up to you to leave it as it is, just wanted to say i hated them... >_>
Insane:
I was about to suggest you to make some of the stacks to look nicer before leaving but nvm, i see that you have already done it
Topic Starter
Slider is redone to be a bit more clear. Thanks!ErufenRito wrote:
Nice map
Normal:
01:04:095 (2) - I actually hate these kind of sliders eher i dont know which way to go... but, up to you to leave it as it is, just wanted to say i hated them... >_>
Insane:
I was about to suggest you to make some of the stacks to look nicer before leaving but nvm, i see that you have already done it
irc modding gogogogo
Topic Starter
Thanks a bundle.Blue Dragon wrote:
irc modding gogogogo
LMAO!! Sora picture in a Roxas song. (Not that it's bad or anything~)
All difficulties~
Take 22 off the offset. (435)
And resnap all notes.
All difficulties~
Take 22 off the offset. (435)
And resnap all notes.
Topic Starter
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Set background color to black or yellow.
Nothing else was wrong, +Star
Nothing else was wrong, +Star
Topic Starter
Done. Thanks!DJPop wrote:
Set background color to black or yellow.
Nothing else was wrong, +Star
[Easy]
01:08:043 (1) - This spinner could be made longer, and you could add more inherited timing sections gradually getting more silent, instead of just "BANG, now it's silent".
In other words, make the spinner sound fade out along with the music.
[Normal]
Same thing with the last spinner. It adds to the calm atmosphere of the song.
[Hard]
Sweet. Love it.
Awesome map. I love calm slow maps. It's also quite easy, you could maybe consider adding it to Ekaru's Easy series.
Starred.
01:08:043 (1) - This spinner could be made longer, and you could add more inherited timing sections gradually getting more silent, instead of just "BANG, now it's silent".
In other words, make the spinner sound fade out along with the music.
[Normal]
Same thing with the last spinner. It adds to the calm atmosphere of the song.
[Hard]
Sweet. Love it.
Awesome map. I love calm slow maps. It's also quite easy, you could maybe consider adding it to Ekaru's Easy series.
Starred.
Great map, all seems pretty awesome.
[Hard]
01:04:043 (1) - I suggest removing this, it's bland and repetitive and just continue with the previous melody.
Star'd
[Hard]
01:04:043 (1) - I suggest removing this, it's bland and repetitive and just continue with the previous melody.
Star'd
Topic Starter
Real1: Spinners changed, although not lengthened.
NachoPiggy: Eh, I like that part, lol.
NachoPiggy: Eh, I like that part, lol.
Comments and suggestions, not orders
Easy
Normal
Hard
Easy
SPOILER
No visible problems found
No visible problems found
Normal
SPOILER
00:03:043 (1) : New combo.
00:07:043 (1) : New combo.
00:32:043 (8) : Finish hitsound (?)
00:03:043 (1) : New combo.
00:07:043 (1) : New combo.
00:32:043 (8) : Finish hitsound (?)
Hard
SPOILER
00:52:043 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) : I dislike how these are randomly placed.
01:04:043 (1) : Make the last beat of this slider a finish (?)
00:52:043 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) : I dislike how these are randomly placed.
01:04:043 (1) : Make the last beat of this slider a finish (?)
Topic Starter
Thanks, everything was changed except the new combos.Loogiesquared wrote:
Comments and suggestions, not orders
EasySPOILER
No visible problems found
NormalSPOILER
00:03:043 (1) : New combo.
00:07:043 (1) : New combo.
00:32:043 (8) : Finish hitsound (?)
HardSPOILER
00:52:043 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) : I dislike how these are randomly placed.
01:04:043 (1) : Make the last beat of this slider a finish (?)
[Normal]
That high overall diff makes the slowish sliders feel odd and too reflexy for the half noobs who will be playing it. Please lower it.
The heart slider is nice but kinda meh. At the very least have the end be at the same level as the start, looks nicer.
[Hard]
Fine
Nice short and fun map. Star.
That high overall diff makes the slowish sliders feel odd and too reflexy for the half noobs who will be playing it. Please lower it.
The heart slider is nice but kinda meh. At the very least have the end be at the same level as the start, looks nicer.
[Hard]
Fine
Nice short and fun map. Star.
Topic Starter
Fixed, thanks!rust45 wrote:
[Normal]
That high overall diff makes the slowish sliders feel odd and too reflexy for the half noobs who will be playing it. Please lower it.
The heart slider is nice but kinda meh. At the very least have the end be at the same level as the start, looks nicer.
[Hard]
Fine
Nice short and fun map. Star.
-14 or so on the offset seems to work best
Easy
Perfect
Normal
00:04:043 (1,2,3) - Bad spacing, even it out please
Hard
Perfect
Very good map, well done.
Easy
Perfect
Normal
00:04:043 (1,2,3) - Bad spacing, even it out please
Hard
Perfect
Very good map, well done.
Topic Starter
Thanks for modding.Agent Spin Here wrote:
-14 or so on the offset seems to work best
Easy
Perfect
Normal
00:04:043 (1,2,3) - Bad spacing, even it out please
Hard
Perfect
Very good map, well done.
It's all been fixed.This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Mod Info's:
Green: Suggestions, you don't have to fix, your choice.
Orange: You don't have to fix too, but is better if you do it.
Red: You have to fix this for sure!
Starts Suggestions:
BPM: 120,00
Offset: 425 (Remember to resnap all notes.)
The silenced spinner on all difficulties it's bad. I suggest to add some volume on it.
[Easy]
00:20:092 (5) - New combo.
00:22:042 (1) - Remove new combo.
[Normal]
Fine~
[Hard]
00:41:042 (2) - New combo due to jump.
Green: Suggestions, you don't have to fix, your choice.
Orange: You don't have to fix too, but is better if you do it.
Red: You have to fix this for sure!
Starts Suggestions:
BPM: 120,00
Offset: 425 (Remember to resnap all notes.)
The silenced spinner on all difficulties it's bad. I suggest to add some volume on it.
[Easy]
00:20:092 (5) - New combo.
00:22:042 (1) - Remove new combo.
[Normal]
Fine~
[Hard]
00:41:042 (2) - New combo due to jump.
Easy
00:30:042 (4) - whistle the 2nd repeat of this slider
Normal
00:04:042 (1) - whistle the 2nd repeat of this slider
00:29:042 (2) - whistle here
Hard
00:14:092 (3) - whistle the 1st repeat of this slider (and remove whistle from 2nd repeat of this slider)
00:25:092 (4,1) - end these sliders with a whistle
00:33:042 (2) - start it with whistle
A short, relaxing song mapped very well... have a star! ;3
00:30:042 (4) - whistle the 2nd repeat of this slider
Normal
00:04:042 (1) - whistle the 2nd repeat of this slider
00:29:042 (2) - whistle here
Hard
00:14:092 (3) - whistle the 1st repeat of this slider (and remove whistle from 2nd repeat of this slider)
00:25:092 (4,1) - end these sliders with a whistle
00:33:042 (2) - start it with whistle
A short, relaxing song mapped very well... have a star! ;3
Topic Starter
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Nice one you have here.
Star ^^!
Star ^^!
Normal
00:32:194(7,8) - spacing
00:40:944(2) spacing
hard
00:41:444(1,2) center these, make it symmetrical
00:32:194(7,8) - spacing
00:40:944(2) spacing
hard
00:41:444(1,2) center these, make it symmetrical
Topic Starter
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[Easy]
00:01:444 Whistle
00:05:444 ^
00:08:444 Whistle at the start; whistle or finish on the third repeat
00:13:444 Whistle at the start
00:17:444 Whistle
00:29:444 ^
00:33:444 ^
[Normal]
00:17:444 whistle
00:21:444 whistle at the start
00:38:444 Finish also at the start
00:53:444 whistle
01:04:944 Whistle at the start
[Hard]
00:12:944 Whistle at the start+ whistle on the third repeat
00:14:944 whistle on the second repeat, remove the whistle on the third repeat
00:19:194 Stack perfectly with (5)'s end
00:37:444 Whistle at the start
00:42:444 ^
00:44:444 ^ + whistle at the end
00:46:444 whistle on the third repeat or at the end
01:05:444 whistle
00:01:444 Whistle
00:05:444 ^
00:08:444 Whistle at the start; whistle or finish on the third repeat
00:13:444 Whistle at the start
00:17:444 Whistle
00:29:444 ^
00:33:444 ^
[Normal]
00:17:444 whistle
00:21:444 whistle at the start
00:38:444 Finish also at the start
00:53:444 whistle
01:04:944 Whistle at the start
[Hard]
00:12:944 Whistle at the start+ whistle on the third repeat
00:14:944 whistle on the second repeat, remove the whistle on the third repeat
00:19:194 Stack perfectly with (5)'s end
00:37:444 Whistle at the start
00:42:444 ^
00:44:444 ^ + whistle at the end
00:46:444 whistle on the third repeat or at the end
01:05:444 whistle
Topic Starter
Woot. Thanks!Armin wrote:
[Easy]
00:01:444 Whistle
00:05:444 ^
00:08:444 Whistle at the start; whistle or finish on the third repeat
00:13:444 Whistle at the start
00:17:444 Whistle
00:29:444 ^
00:33:444 ^
[Normal]
00:17:444 whistle
00:21:444 whistle at the start
00:38:444 Finish also at the start
00:53:444 whistle
01:04:944 Whistle at the start
[Hard]
00:12:944 Whistle at the start+ whistle on the third repeat
00:14:944 whistle on the second repeat, remove the whistle on the third repeat
00:19:194 Stack perfectly with (5)'s end
00:37:444 Whistle at the start
00:42:444 ^
00:44:444 ^ + whistle at the end
00:46:444 whistle on the third repeat or at the end
01:05:444 whistle
I'm new at modding, so you may ignore them all...
[Easy]
00:01:043 (3) - Add whistle.
00:05:043 (3) - ^
00:08:043 (1) - Add finish at the beginning. Add whistle at the second repeat.
00:13:043 (3) - Add whistle at the beginning and the end.
00:17:043 (2) - Add whistle.
00:29:043 (2) - ^
00:30:043 (4) - Add whistle at the second repeat.
00:33:043 (2) - Add whistle.
00:35:043 (5) - Add whistle. Make it straight up.
[Normal]
00:04:043 (1) - Add whistle at the second repeat.
00:21:043 (3) - Add whistle at the beginning.
00:38:043 (7) - Add finish at the beginning.
01:04:093 (2) - Resnap.
Hard
00:25:093 (4) - Add whistle at the end.
00:26:093 (1) - ^
00:27:093 (3) - Add whistle.
00:33:043 (2) - Add whistle at the beginning.
00:35:093 (7) - ^
00:44:043 (1) - Add finsih at the beginning.
---
Yes, you may ignore them all ^^
And *~
[Easy]
00:01:043 (3) - Add whistle.
00:05:043 (3) - ^
00:08:043 (1) - Add finish at the beginning. Add whistle at the second repeat.
00:13:043 (3) - Add whistle at the beginning and the end.
00:17:043 (2) - Add whistle.
00:29:043 (2) - ^
00:30:043 (4) - Add whistle at the second repeat.
00:33:043 (2) - Add whistle.
00:35:043 (5) - Add whistle. Make it straight up.
[Normal]
00:04:043 (1) - Add whistle at the second repeat.
00:21:043 (3) - Add whistle at the beginning.
00:38:043 (7) - Add finish at the beginning.
01:04:093 (2) - Resnap.
Hard
00:25:093 (4) - Add whistle at the end.
00:26:093 (1) - ^
00:27:093 (3) - Add whistle.
00:33:043 (2) - Add whistle at the beginning.
00:35:093 (7) - ^
00:44:043 (1) - Add finsih at the beginning.
---
Yes, you may ignore them all ^^
And *~
Topic Starter
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Very good
Your getting better with mapping as time progresses
Map is better than the old one (from what I remember, old one wasn't too memorable).
you get a smooth, soothing star (-_- ) zzzZZZ
Your getting better with mapping as time progresses
Map is better than the old one (from what I remember, old one wasn't too memorable).
you get a smooth, soothing star (-_- ) zzzZZZ
Topic Starter
Wow, nice timing. 1 minute after my last post. Anyways, thanks!eee wrote:
Very good
Your getting better with mapping as time progresses
Map is better than the old one (from what I remember, old one wasn't too memorable).
you get a smooth, soothing star (-_- ) zzzZZZ
Easy~
00:29:944 (3) - Align with 4 better.
01:04:444 (1) - Move this a little farther up so it mirrors with 01:00:444 (1). (To make perfect symmetry)
Hard~
00:39:944 (8) - Mirror this with 6. (Since it looks like you're going for symmetry)
00:41:944 (2) - Mirror with 1.
You'll earn my bubble once these are fixed. :]
Edyt: Buhbeld!
00:29:944 (3) - Align with 4 better.
01:04:444 (1) - Move this a little farther up so it mirrors with 01:00:444 (1). (To make perfect symmetry)
Hard~
00:39:944 (8) - Mirror this with 6. (Since it looks like you're going for symmetry)
00:41:944 (2) - Mirror with 1.
You'll earn my bubble once these are fixed. :]
Edyt: Buhbeld!
Topic Starter
All fixed.Mafiamaster wrote:
Easy~
00:29:944 (3) - Align with 4 better.
01:04:444 (1) - Move this a little farther up so it mirrors with 01:00:444 (1). (To make perfect symmetry)
Hard~
00:39:944 (8) - Mirror this with 6. (Since it looks like you're going for symmetry)
00:41:944 (2) - Mirror with 1.
You'll earn my bubble once these are fixed. :]
I'm pretty sure the title is "The Other Promise". Except the original is also orchestral and slower.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pgUzWrTk1KI
Your version is definitely faster, but it's still pretty much the same thing. Up to you if you want to change it I guess.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pgUzWrTk1KI
Your version is definitely faster, but it's still pretty much the same thing. Up to you if you want to change it I guess.
Topic Starter
The version from the KH2 soundtrack is titled just Roxas, which is where I got it from. Thanks though.Nexy wrote:
I'm pretty sure the title is "The Other Promise". Except the original is also orchestral and slower.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pgUzWrTk1KI
Your version is definitely faster, but it's still pretty much the same thing. Up to you if you want to change it I guess.
EDIT: Want to give a special shout-out thanks to peppy for fixing the thumbnail.
[Normal]
00:06:44 (3,4,5) - Not evenly spaced.
00:08:44 (1,2,3) - Too far apart.
. . .
Before it keep going with the list, i'll point this out instead. In this difficulty, you have some notes close together while you have others spaced apart. Like how from 00:00:44 to 00:08:44, the spacing changes. Make sure all of the spacing in this difficulty is even.
That's the only thing I see that really needs to be checked on. When you're done with the fixes, forum PM me.
00:06:44 (3,4,5) - Not evenly spaced.
00:08:44 (1,2,3) - Too far apart.
. . .
Before it keep going with the list, i'll point this out instead. In this difficulty, you have some notes close together while you have others spaced apart. Like how from 00:00:44 to 00:08:44, the spacing changes. Make sure all of the spacing in this difficulty is even.
That's the only thing I see that really needs to be checked on. When you're done with the fixes, forum PM me.
Topic Starter
All fixed.
Yes, I am stupid, this mod was meant for Sora, those names are too similar 
MonNky's BeaT:
General: Audio level may be too low, try and have uniformity with the other difficulties.
00:08:004 (7) - Messy move it down to make a triangle or something, or stack it on the slider.
00:26:000 (1) - Spinners usually should start on a white tick, not a big issue though.
Insane:
00:01:056 (6) - Distance snap this, it should be in the center, symmetrical to 1. Alter 3, 4 and 5 also.
00:16:011 (2,3,4) - Compare distance between the notes here and 00:16:056 (5,6,7) - here they should be the same distance since they are the same distance on the time line.
That's all I could see Hope this gets ranked soon.
MonNky's BeaT:
General: Audio level may be too low, try and have uniformity with the other difficulties.
00:08:004 (7) - Messy move it down to make a triangle or something, or stack it on the slider.
00:26:000 (1) - Spinners usually should start on a white tick, not a big issue though.
Insane:
00:01:056 (6) - Distance snap this, it should be in the center, symmetrical to 1. Alter 3, 4 and 5 also.
00:16:011 (2,3,4) - Compare distance between the notes here and 00:16:056 (5,6,7) - here they should be the same distance since they are the same distance on the time line.
That's all I could see
Hope this gets ranked soon.
Topic Starter
I shall award the kudosu here, and then make the changes on Sora, where they belong. XDShulin wrote:
MonNky's BeaT:
General: Audio level may be too low, try and have uniformity with the other difficulties.
00:08:004 (7) - Messy move it down to make a triangle or something, or stack it on the slider.
00:26:000 (1) - Spinners usually should start on a white tick, not a big issue though.
Insane:
00:01:056 (6) - Distance snap this, it should be in the center, symmetrical to 1. Alter 3, 4 and 5 also.
00:16:011 (2,3,4) - Compare distance between the notes here and 00:16:056 (5,6,7) - here they should be the same distance since they are the same distance on the time line.
That's all I could see
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Ranked!
Ohhhh wow, I never knew. Sorry!