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Yoko Shimomura - Roxas

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Fuuko
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Fuuko
Here's my mod. :3'

Easy :

Since it's a minute song, remove the break at 0:16:697.
No wrong beat placements...scaring.

Normal :

...Surprising enough, not a single mistake again, really really scaring.
Hint here : That heart on the end, I think you should add a new sound on it, it's a bit...faint.

Hard :

...Amazing.
Hint : At 1:04:447, make that long reversal note have a finish sound.

For all:

6 seconds of the song is silenced at the final, I recommend you remove that ( not really necessary, but then again... up to you, though).
I really think you should prolong the beggining in each diff. The first note is on 0:00:47, that's way too short from the beggining, so what I mean is add the 6 seconds ( Btw, just noticed it's only 5 ) at the final of the song, and put it on the beggining ( hint, though ).

^

http://up.ppy.sh/files/roxas.mp3

Just used audacity. Try this mp3, if you are considering the beggining/5 seconds silenced at the end. :3



Very good map. Amazing. Brilliant. Star for you, and keep up the good work. :3
deadbeat
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deadbeat
nice map..slider at end seem maybe a bit to long...but its a nice map overall*star*
Jinxy
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Joined February 2009
Jinxy
[Normal]
00:04:044 (1) - Snap the slider end to grid. This is definitely an error.

There are some other sliders not snapped to grid, but I won't say because they may be for making a perfect slider.


Starred
Kytoxid
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Kytoxid
FuukoLover:

The break in Easy was shortened a bit.

JInxyjem:

Fixed.

Thanks to both of you + deadbeat. :)
Azure_Kite
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Azure_Kite
Here's my mod

Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this

[Easy]
01:08:044 (1) - Maybe silence the end?

No problems found :)

[Normal]
00:03:094 (9) - Whistle?
00:07:094 (7) - ^
00:24:044 (1) - Move the spinner forward 1/2 a beat, place a note here and shorten the spinner by 1/2 a beat
00:31:044 (3) - Finish on the beginning?
00:35:044 (1) - Finish instead of whistle?
00:44:044 (1) - Move the spinner forward 1/2 a beat, place a note here and shorten the spinner by 1/2 a beat
00:48:044 (1) - Move the end point left 1 lvl2 grid?

No problems found :)

[Hard]
00:02:044 (5) - These 1/6th sliders sound wierd to me. Maybe try using 1/4? slower but it sounds nicer to me.
00:06:044 (5,6) - ^
00:22:044 (1) - 00:44:044 (1) - Move the spinner forward 1/2 a beat, place a note here and shorten the spinner by 1/2 a beat
00:41:044 (1,2) - Finishes?
00:42:044 (1) - Finish on the end?
00:56:069 (1) - This is really strange. It feels really forced on the timing to me. Maybe you should consider something different here?
01:04:044 (1) - ^

Overall, a cool beatmap, and KH is awesome :D Starred
Kytoxid
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Azure_Kyte wrote:

Here's my mod

Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this

[Easy]
01:08:044 (1) - Maybe silence the end?

No problems found :)

[Normal]
00:03:094 (9) - Whistle?
00:07:094 (7) - ^
00:24:044 (1) - Move the spinner forward 1/2 a beat, place a note here and shorten the spinner by 1/2 a beat
00:31:044 (3) - Finish on the beginning?
00:35:044 (1) - Finish instead of whistle?
00:44:044 (1) - Move the spinner forward 1/2 a beat, place a note here and shorten the spinner by 1/2 a beat
00:48:044 (1) - Move the end point left 1 lvl2 grid?

No problems found :)

[Hard]
00:02:044 (5) - These 1/6th sliders sound wierd to me. Maybe try using 1/4? slower but it sounds nicer to me.
00:06:044 (5,6) - ^
00:22:044 (1) - 00:44:044 (1) - Move the spinner forward 1/2 a beat, place a note here and shorten the spinner by 1/2 a beat
00:41:044 (1,2) - Finishes?
00:42:044 (1) - Finish on the end?
00:56:069 (1) - This is really strange. It feels really forced on the timing to me. Maybe you should consider something different here?
01:04:044 (1) - ^

Overall, a cool beatmap, and KH is awesome :D Starred
Everything was changed, except the second vibrating slider; I rather like that slider, lol. Thanks for modding. :)
Shulin
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Shulin
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alvisto
881 posts
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alvisto
Play through all the difficulties, no problem, smooth and fun. =D

Star for ya... ^ ^
yaya
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yaya
nothing .
but i'll point that 1/4 beats isnt fit this soft song .
1/2 beats is perfect.
Kytoxid
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Shulin: Everything was done except I got confused about your comments about volume, but I tried to make sre that every note had a bit of volume.

(and I was going to make an Insane, except I didn't see how I could really bring out an interesting map without just shoving notes all over the place or using smaller hitcircles, since I really dislike small hitcircles)

alvisto: Thanks!

osu_CN_yaya: Changed up the start of Hard, thanks. :)
blissfulyoshi
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Kytoxid
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blissfulyoshi wrote:

Easy: fine

Normal:
00:18:457 (4,5,6) - lower stack leniency to make this look nicer
00:30:457 (1) - remove new combo?
00:34:457 (1,1) - might want to consider removing these new combos too
01:08:457 (1) - silence the end of the slider

Hard: (a little difficult for such a peaceful song)
lower stack leniency please
May you move the timing sections that are directly on notes a quarter note back....?
rest of the mod on irc.

Nice map. Star.
All fixed, thanks!
Luvdic
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Luvdic
Nice map

Normal:

01:04:095 (2) - I actually hate these kind of sliders eher i dont know which way to go... but, up to you to leave it as it is, just wanted to say i hated them... >_>

Insane:

I was about to suggest you to make some of the stacks to look nicer before leaving but nvm, i see that you have already done it
Kytoxid
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ErufenRito wrote:

Nice map

Normal:

01:04:095 (2) - I actually hate these kind of sliders eher i dont know which way to go... but, up to you to leave it as it is, just wanted to say i hated them... >_>

Insane:

I was about to suggest you to make some of the stacks to look nicer before leaving but nvm, i see that you have already done it
Slider is redone to be a bit more clear. Thanks!
Froslass
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Froslass
irc modding gogogogo
Kytoxid
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Blue Dragon wrote:

irc modding gogogogo
Thanks a bundle. :)
Mafiamaster
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Mafiamaster
LMAO!! Sora picture in a Roxas song. (Not that it's bad or anything~)


All difficulties~
Take 22 off the offset. (435)
And resnap all notes.
Kytoxid
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DJPop
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Here since the beginning
DJPop
Set background color to black or yellow.

Nothing else was wrong, +Star
Kytoxid
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DJPop wrote:

Set background color to black or yellow.

Nothing else was wrong, +Star
Done. Thanks!
Real1
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Real1
[Easy]
01:08:043 (1) - This spinner could be made longer, and you could add more inherited timing sections gradually getting more silent, instead of just "BANG, now it's silent".
In other words, make the spinner sound fade out along with the music.

[Normal]
Same thing with the last spinner. It adds to the calm atmosphere of the song.

[Hard]
Sweet. Love it.


Awesome map. I love calm slow maps. It's also quite easy, you could maybe consider adding it to Ekaru's Easy series.

Starred. ;)
Nachy
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Nachy
Great map, all seems pretty awesome.

[Hard]
01:04:043 (1) - I suggest removing this, it's bland and repetitive and just continue with the previous melody.

Star'd
Kytoxid
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Real1: Spinners changed, although not lengthened.
NachoPiggy: Eh, I like that part, lol.
anonymous_old
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anonymous_old
Comments and suggestions, not orders

Easy
SPOILER

No visible problems found

Normal
SPOILER

00:03:043 (1) : New combo.
00:07:043 (1) : New combo.
00:32:043 (8) : Finish hitsound (?)

Hard
SPOILER

00:52:043 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) : I dislike how these are randomly placed.
01:04:043 (1) : Make the last beat of this slider a finish (?)
Kytoxid
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Loogiesquared wrote:

Comments and suggestions, not orders

Easy
SPOILER

No visible problems found

Normal
SPOILER

00:03:043 (1) : New combo.
00:07:043 (1) : New combo.
00:32:043 (8) : Finish hitsound (?)

Hard
SPOILER

00:52:043 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) : I dislike how these are randomly placed.
01:04:043 (1) : Make the last beat of this slider a finish (?)
Thanks, everything was changed except the new combos.
rust45
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Joined May 2009
rust45
[Normal]
That high overall diff makes the slowish sliders feel odd and too reflexy for the half noobs who will be playing it. Please lower it.
The heart slider is nice but kinda meh. At the very least have the end be at the same level as the start, looks nicer.

[Hard]
Fine

Nice short and fun map. Star.
Kytoxid
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rust45 wrote:

[Normal]
That high overall diff makes the slowish sliders feel odd and too reflexy for the half noobs who will be playing it. Please lower it.
The heart slider is nice but kinda meh. At the very least have the end be at the same level as the start, looks nicer.

[Hard]
Fine

Nice short and fun map. Star.
Fixed, thanks!
Mashley
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Mashley
-14 or so on the offset seems to work best

Easy
Perfect

Normal
00:04:043 (1,2,3) - Bad spacing, even it out please

Hard
Perfect

Very good map, well done.
Kytoxid
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Agent Spin Here wrote:

-14 or so on the offset seems to work best

Easy
Perfect

Normal
00:04:043 (1,2,3) - Bad spacing, even it out please

Hard
Perfect

Very good map, well done.
Thanks for modding. :) It's all been fixed.
Zekira
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Zekira
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Andrea
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Andrea
Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions, you don't have to fix, your choice.
Orange: You don't have to fix too, but is better if you do it.
Red: You have to fix this for sure!

Starts Suggestions:

BPM: 120,00
Offset: 425 (Remember to resnap all notes.)

The silenced spinner on all difficulties it's bad. I suggest to add some volume on it.

[Easy]

00:20:092 (5) - New combo.
00:22:042 (1) - Remove new combo.

[Normal]

Fine~

[Hard]

00:41:042 (2) - New combo due to jump.
Lokamp
2,530 posts
Joined January 2009
Lokamp
Easy
00:30:042 (4) - whistle the 2nd repeat of this slider

Normal
00:04:042 (1) - whistle the 2nd repeat of this slider
00:29:042 (2) - whistle here

Hard
00:14:092 (3) - whistle the 1st repeat of this slider (and remove whistle from 2nd repeat of this slider)
00:25:092 (4,1) - end these sliders with a whistle
00:33:042 (2) - start it with whistle

A short, relaxing song mapped very well... have a star! ;3
Kytoxid
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Krisom
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Krisom
Nice one you have here.

Star ^^!
ouranhshc
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ouranhshc
Normal
00:32:194(7,8) - spacing
00:40:944(2) spacing

hard
00:41:444(1,2) center these, make it symmetrical
Kytoxid
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Armin
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Armin
[Easy]

00:01:444 Whistle
00:05:444 ^

00:08:444 Whistle at the start; whistle or finish on the third repeat
00:13:444 Whistle at the start
00:17:444 Whistle
00:29:444 ^
00:33:444 ^

[Normal]

00:17:444 whistle
00:21:444 whistle at the start
00:38:444 Finish also at the start
00:53:444 whistle
01:04:944 Whistle at the start

[Hard]

00:12:944 Whistle at the start+ whistle on the third repeat
00:14:944 whistle on the second repeat, remove the whistle on the third repeat
00:19:194 Stack perfectly with (5)'s end
00:37:444 Whistle at the start
00:42:444 ^
00:44:444 ^ + whistle at the end
00:46:444 whistle on the third repeat or at the end
01:05:444 whistle
Kytoxid
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Armin wrote:

[Easy]

00:01:444 Whistle
00:05:444 ^

00:08:444 Whistle at the start; whistle or finish on the third repeat
00:13:444 Whistle at the start
00:17:444 Whistle
00:29:444 ^
00:33:444 ^

[Normal]

00:17:444 whistle
00:21:444 whistle at the start
00:38:444 Finish also at the start
00:53:444 whistle
01:04:944 Whistle at the start

[Hard]

00:12:944 Whistle at the start+ whistle on the third repeat
00:14:944 whistle on the second repeat, remove the whistle on the third repeat
00:19:194 Stack perfectly with (5)'s end
00:37:444 Whistle at the start
00:42:444 ^
00:44:444 ^ + whistle at the end
00:46:444 whistle on the third repeat or at the end
01:05:444 whistle
Woot. Thanks!
Vanmonky
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Vanmonky
I'm new at modding, so you may ignore them all...

[Easy]
00:01:043 (3) - Add whistle.
00:05:043 (3) - ^
00:08:043 (1) - Add finish at the beginning. Add whistle at the second repeat.
00:13:043 (3) - Add whistle at the beginning and the end.
00:17:043 (2) - Add whistle.
00:29:043 (2) - ^
00:30:043 (4) - Add whistle at the second repeat.
00:33:043 (2) - Add whistle.
00:35:043 (5) - Add whistle. Make it straight up.

[Normal]
00:04:043 (1) - Add whistle at the second repeat.
00:21:043 (3) - Add whistle at the beginning.
00:38:043 (7) - Add finish at the beginning.
01:04:093 (2) - Resnap.

Hard
00:25:093 (4) - Add whistle at the end.
00:26:093 (1) - ^
00:27:093 (3) - Add whistle.
00:33:043 (2) - Add whistle at the beginning.
00:35:093 (7) - ^
00:44:043 (1) - Add finsih at the beginning.

---

Yes, you may ignore them all ^^
And *~
Kytoxid
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eee
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eee
Very good
Your getting better with mapping as time progresses
Map is better than the old one (from what I remember, old one wasn't too memorable).
you get a smooth, soothing star (-_- ) zzzZZZ
Kytoxid
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eee wrote:

Very good
Your getting better with mapping as time progresses
Map is better than the old one (from what I remember, old one wasn't too memorable).
you get a smooth, soothing star (-_- ) zzzZZZ
Wow, nice timing. 1 minute after my last post. Anyways, thanks!
Mafiamaster
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Mafiamaster
Easy~
00:29:944 (3) - Align with 4 better.
01:04:444 (1) - Move this a little farther up so it mirrors with 01:00:444 (1). (To make perfect symmetry)

Hard~
00:39:944 (8) - Mirror this with 6. (Since it looks like you're going for symmetry)
00:41:944 (2) - Mirror with 1.

You'll earn my bubble once these are fixed. :]

Edyt: Buhbeld!
Kytoxid
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Mafiamaster wrote:

Easy~
00:29:944 (3) - Align with 4 better.
01:04:444 (1) - Move this a little farther up so it mirrors with 01:00:444 (1). (To make perfect symmetry)

Hard~
00:39:944 (8) - Mirror this with 6. (Since it looks like you're going for symmetry)
00:41:944 (2) - Mirror with 1.

You'll earn my bubble once these are fixed. :]
All fixed. :)
La Valse
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La Valse
star ~ :)
mosluv
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mosluv
I'm pretty sure the title is "The Other Promise". Except the original is also orchestral and slower.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pgUzWrTk1KI

Your version is definitely faster, but it's still pretty much the same thing. Up to you if you want to change it I guess.
Kytoxid
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Nexy wrote:

I'm pretty sure the title is "The Other Promise". Except the original is also orchestral and slower.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pgUzWrTk1KI

Your version is definitely faster, but it's still pretty much the same thing. Up to you if you want to change it I guess.
The version from the KH2 soundtrack is titled just Roxas, which is where I got it from. Thanks though. :)

EDIT: Want to give a special shout-out thanks to peppy for fixing the thumbnail. :D
RaisTF
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RaisTF
I like that map *
whymeman
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whymeman
[Normal]

00:06:44 (3,4,5) - Not evenly spaced.
00:08:44 (1,2,3) - Too far apart.
. . .

Before it keep going with the list, i'll point this out instead. In this difficulty, you have some notes close together while you have others spaced apart. Like how from 00:00:44 to 00:08:44, the spacing changes. Make sure all of the spacing in this difficulty is even.

That's the only thing I see that really needs to be checked on. When you're done with the fixes, forum PM me.
Kytoxid
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All fixed. :)
Shulin
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Shulin
Yes, I am stupid, this mod was meant for Sora, those names are too similar :o

MonNky's BeaT:

General: Audio level may be too low, try and have uniformity with the other difficulties.

00:08:004 (7) - Messy move it down to make a triangle or something, or stack it on the slider.
00:26:000 (1) - Spinners usually should start on a white tick, not a big issue though.


Insane:

00:01:056 (6) - Distance snap this, it should be in the center, symmetrical to 1. Alter 3, 4 and 5 also.
00:16:011 (2,3,4) - Compare distance between the notes here and 00:16:056 (5,6,7) - here they should be the same distance since they are the same distance on the time line.

That's all I could see :D Hope this gets ranked soon.
Last edited by Shulin , edited 1 time in total.
Kytoxid
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Shulin wrote:

MonNky's BeaT:

General: Audio level may be too low, try and have uniformity with the other difficulties.

00:08:004 (7) - Messy move it down to make a triangle or something, or stack it on the slider.
00:26:000 (1) - Spinners usually should start on a white tick, not a big issue though.


Insane:

00:01:056 (6) - Distance snap this, it should be in the center, symmetrical to 1. Alter 3, 4 and 5 also.
00:16:011 (2,3,4) - Compare distance between the notes here and 00:16:056 (5,6,7) - here they should be the same distance since they are the same distance on the time line.

That's all I could see :D Hope this gets ranked soon.
I shall award the kudosu here, and then make the changes on Sora, where they belong. XD
whymeman
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whymeman
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Mafiamaster
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Mafiamaster
Ranked!
Jarby
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Jarby
Why did you do that?
Vanmonky
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Vanmonky
Because he wanted to do that
Mafiamaster
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Mafiamaster
Ohhhh wow, I never knew. Sorry!
Vanmonky
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Vanmonky
No prob. But you must learn much from me.
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