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t.A.T.u - Gomenasai

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Loooctav
1,070 posts
Joined January 2012
Loooctav


:D Good luck
[Luxord]
503 posts
Joined August 2011
[Luxord]
Hello from my Modding queue :)

[Genera]
So nice song q-q
Make a Easy less than 3 Stars so you can rank it, other wise it goes for Approve only .-.
(Unless that rule is changed)


[Gomen]
00:00:290 (1,2,3) - Maybe like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/648400
The curves looks better this way

Nothing more ._. it's so nice made :c

[Gomenasai]
01:15:819 (4,5,6) - They don't look precisely stacked ._.
01:43:348 (2) - 1 Grid to left
01:42:642 (1) - 1 grid to right
So they wont touch each other and they look better :3


Nothing else :**

I'll note for re-mod later :c
Sorry for the weak mod. The map is nice to me D:
Dark_Ai
1,831 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Dark_Ai
KiyoshiX101

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

Hello from my Modding queue :) Hello o3o

[Genera]
So nice song q-q
Make a Easy less than 3 Stars so you can rank it, other wise it goes for Approve only .-.
(Unless that rule is changed) I dont think it needs ^^


[Gomen]
00:00:290 (1,2,3) - Maybe like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/648400
The curves looks better this way No change here, because it is okay like now too

Nothing more ._. it's so nice made :c

[Gomenasai]
01:15:819 (4,5,6) - They don't look precisely stacked ._. fixed, hope it's fine now
01:43:348 (2) - 1 Grid to left ok
01:42:642 (1) - 1 grid to right okay :3
So they wont touch each other and they look better :3


Nothing else :**

I'll note for re-mod later :c
Sorry for the weak mod. The map is nice to me D:

Thank you for modding ^.^

Updated ~
Verlaren
Verlaren
Hi~ Random mod.

General:
Deselect Letterbox during breaks. because you haven't storyboard

gomen:
00:34:878(1) - reduce to 00:35:231 and add note to 00:35:584
I think it will be more readable

gomenasai:
00:44:231(2,4) - maybe delete this patterns?
01:17:231(1) - reduce to 01:17:584 and add note to 01:17:760
01:18:642(4) - remove pattern
01:17:937(3) - extend to 01:18:642
01:36:113 - add note
03:10:525 - add note?

Pretty nice background~ and goog luck.
On_WanWan
208 posts
Joined July 2010
On_WanWan
Hi I try my best to mod :?

[gomen]
there are 9 objects aren't snapping , check it on Aimod ctrl+shift+A
00:38:231 (2) - I think delect it is better
02:29:937 ~ 02:49:613 - kial time start and end

[gomenasai]
there are 26 objects aren't snapping , check it too 0.0
00:44:231 (2) - delect it? i think it's weird
00:44:937 (4) - ^
01:31:833 (2) - x196 y104
01:31:878 - add a circle here x196 x104
01:54:642 - add a NC?
02:29:937 ~ 02:49:613 - kial time start and end

beautiful song and map and GOOD LUCK!
Dark_Ai
1,831 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Dark_Ai
Verlaren

Verlaren wrote:

Hi~ Random mod.

General:
Deselect Letterbox during breaks. because you haven't storyboard done

gomen:
00:34:878(1) - reduce to 00:35:231 and add note to 00:35:584
I think it will be more readable No change here :/

gomenasai:
00:44:231(2,4) - maybe delete this patterns? done
01:17:231(1) - reduce to 01:17:584 and add note to 01:17:760
01:18:642(4) - remove pattern
01:17:937(3) - extend to 01:18:642
01:36:113 - add note
03:10:525 - add note?
No change >.<

Pretty nice background~ and goog luck.

On_WanWan

On_WanWan wrote:

Hi I try my best to mod :?

[gomen]
there are 9 objects aren't snapping , check it on Aimod ctrl+shift+A aah >.< fixed
00:38:231 (2) - I think delect it is better done :3
02:29:937 ~ 02:49:613 - kial time start and end no change :/

[gomenasai]
there are 26 objects aren't snapping , check it too 0.0 done
00:44:231 (2) - delect it? i think it's weird already did
00:44:937 (4) - ^ ^
01:31:833 (2) - x196 y104 ?
01:31:878 - add a circle here x196 x104 I dont like this huh :/
01:54:642 - add a NC? ok
02:29:937 ~ 02:49:613 - kial time start and end no change here too

beautiful song and map and GOOD LUCK!

Thank you both for modding :3

Updated ~
Totoro
77 posts
Joined November 2012
Totoro
M4M for your queue~~

Gomen

00:29:231 (2,3) - ctrl+g looks better

00:46:878 (1) - flip this slider so the shape matches with 00:47:584 (2) -

01:18:995 (6) - extend this slider to 01:19:701 and remove 01:19:701 (7) -

01:28:525 (5,2) - overlap

02:01:348 (3) - 1 grid right

02:27:819 (1) - 2 grid down

Gomenasai

Wow... Just Wow... i couldnt find anything that was wierd o.o Such a great difficulty!!
jonathanlfj
Elite Mapper
2,568 posts
Joined February 2010
jonathanlfj
mod upon request
u make such good song choices <3

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
BPM: 85, confirmed this with a few others; just double ur sv and tick rate to compensate for the change (mod is still based on 170bpm)
offset is good in the beginning, but starting from 00:22:525 (1) it sounds a bit late compared to the music...might want to find someone good in timing to check that
tag "Dangerous and Moving" since its the original album containing the song (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gomenasai)

[gomen]
00:04:172 (2) - whistle?
00:09:819 (2) - ^
00:34:878 (1,4) - blankets can look better
00:58:878 (6) - spacing
01:24:995 - do one of those short kiai burst things here? same applies to gomenasai
01:41:231 (6) - spacing
02:14:760 (4) - do NC here to indicate transition from instrumentals to vocals
02:34:878 (2) - not perfectly symmetrical ><
02:46:172 (6) - spacing
02:49:348 (4) - finish on slider end

[gomenasai]
00:23:584 (4) - NC
00:56:054 (6,7) - the slider sounds like a triplet to me, how bout this rhythm:
SPOILER
01:23:584 (5) - NC to correspond with the finish u added
01:32:760 (4,5) - a similar thing with 00:56:054 (6,7)
02:00:289 (1) - one grid right
02:14:760 (4) - NC
02:38:231 - add note
02:44:408 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - would be cool if you could perfectly center this
03:08:848 (6) - was this accidental? if it is then snap this to 03:08:760, if not then please use a slider here because the stack is almost impossible to read with the second note on a blue tick

Great map u got there, good luck on ranking ^_^
Nichiyouki
1,579 posts
Joined August 2011
Nichiyouki


Sawatdee khrab, Ai :3

Mod request from pm in-game

Red = Unrankable
Blue = You should consider
Black = My suggestion

General

  1. Offset is 261 (-29) because I feel that 290 is too late for the rhythm.

gomen

  1. 00:05:584 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - It isn't smoothly to play for 00:05:584 (4,1). So I will suggest that make to this pictures will be more beautiful and more smoothly.
    SPOILER


  2. 00:58:878 (6,7,1) - Move (6,7) to down 2 grids, and move slider begin of (1) to stack with 00:57:113 (1) (Symmetric with 00:58:525 (5)).
  3. 01:09:466 (3) - Remove finish wll be better?
  4. 01:23:937 (3,4) - Spacing is too far. Please move (3) to up 1 grid, and move (4) to down 1 grid. Although spacing is 1.04x, but I think these is no problem.
  5. 01:41:231 (6,7,1) - Same with 00:58:878 (6,7,1).
  6. 02:06:995 (2) - Add finish on slider end to follow the rhythm.
  7. 02:46:172 (6,7,1) - Same with 00:58:878 (6,7,1).

gomenasai

  1. 00:22:525 (1,2) - I feel weird when I play and try to compare it with rhythm. I think it will be better if you change 2 circles into a slider instead.
  2. 00:34:172 (3) - Hitsound on here is relatively quiet. You can fix it by add finish here imo.
  3. 01:19:348 (5) - I hear hitsound weird here, and I think you probably did not intend to add clap. So remove it.
  4. 01:19:701 (7) - Try to make it into curve slider, but for me, I suggest that make to symmetric with 01:20:760.
  5. 01:33:113 (5) - Add finish on slider end to follow the rhythm.
  6. 01:36:290 (8) - This, too. Please add finish.
  7. 01:39:466 (1,2) - Spacing is too far, and I feel very weird. So please move (2).
  8. 01:55:348 (3) - Use ctrl+G. It will be more smoothly.
  9. 01:52:878 (2) - Add finish on sider end will be better?
  10. 02:07:348 (6) - Add finish to follow the rhythm.
  11. 02:08:761 (1) - Hitsound on here is too loud. I think remove finish after you fixed note on 02:07:348 (6).
  12. 02:38:407 (5,1) - Spacing is too close. I suggest that move (5) farther from (1), or move slider end to stach with (1).
  13. 02:40:878 (6) - Remove clap.
  14. 02:56:054 (1) - I think you forget add clap on slider begin. So add it.
  15. 03:08:407 (5) - This rhythm of note is weird for me. Maybe remove a circle will be better.
  16. 03:08:848 (6) - Why do you put a circle on blue tick? Please move it at 03:08:760.
  17. 03:11:231 (3) - Move to x:296 y:96 will be better.

Comment: The pattern your mapping is quite good, but I think that these are have problem only putting hitsound which may want more work. However, this map is still possible to be ranked. I think.

Hope my mod will be useful for you.

Good luck~
dkun
osu! Alumni
4,486 posts
Joined August 2009
dkun
modding key

this is unrankable.
this should be highly considered.
this is just a normal suggestion/praise.

thanks for asking me for a mod! (sorry for the very long delay!)

General
  1. Offset is 261, BPM 85. (from the above posts)
  2. Great song and map! I'm looking forward to this being ranked.
gomen
  1. This is really well made. Great job!
  2. 01:39:466 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Perhaps a little something like this, to follow what you've been doing in terms of symmetry.
  3. 02:44:407 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ (c/p? :|)
gomenasai
  1. Most of what I list here are going to be suggestions, please take them into consideration.
  2. 00:04:496 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1) - I linked this in three screenshots, to show how it could be placed better. one, two, three
  3. 00:22:496 (1,2,3) - Is there any reason for these to be different in spacing? (1,2) (2,3)
  4. 00:32:025 (5) - Perhaps place this somewhere that's not at 4's endpoint? ie: this
  5. 00:46:496 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why not move (1,2,3) more to the right and make 4,5 flip hori via the grid? You already do this, just not on the grid itself.
  6. 00:48:966 (1,3) - Slider could be structured better on the grid, it's off by some.
  7. 00:54:261 (1) - Stack on 3 of the previous combo, change spacing as necessary with the rest of the combo.
  8. 01:07:319 (4,5,6) - Any reason why the spacing is different from (1,2) and (2,3)?
  9. 01:19:319 (5,6,7) - ^
  10. 01:28:496 (6) - This isn't stacked properly on 5's endpoint.
  11. 02:17:202 (2) - ^
  12. 02:35:555 (5) - Why not move this on the center of the Y axis at a lower location? ie: [url=http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/655987[/url]
  13. 02:49:319 (4,5,6,1,2) - Center this with the grid? (Move the rest of the combo if you take this suggestion)
Dark_Ai
1,831 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Dark_Ai
-iCo-

-iCo- wrote:

M4M for your queue~~

Gomen

00:29:231 (2,3) - ctrl+g looks better done

00:46:878 (1) - flip this slider so the shape matches with 00:47:584 (2) - dont think it need

01:18:995 (6) - extend this slider to 01:19:701 and remove 01:19:701 (7) - I'm not agree tho

01:28:525 (5,2) - overlap nope ><

02:01:348 (3) - 1 grid right ok

02:27:819 (1) - 2 grid down ok

Gomenasai

Wow... Just Wow... i couldnt find anything that was wierd o.o Such a great difficulty!!

jonathanlfj

jonathanlfj wrote:

mod upon request
u make such good song choices <3

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
BPM: 85, confirmed this with a few others; just double ur sv and tick rate to compensate for the change (mod is still based on 170bpm)
offset is good in the beginning, but starting from 00:22:525 (1) it sounds a bit late compared to the music...might want to find someone good in timing to check that
tag "Dangerous and Moving" since its the original album containing the song (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gomenasai) done both

[gomen]
00:04:172 (2) - whistle? okay
00:09:819 (2) - ^ okay
00:34:878 (1,4) - blankets can look better I dont think it needs ^^
00:58:878 (6) - spacing fixed
01:24:995 - do one of those short kiai burst things here? same applies to gomenasai okay
01:41:231 (6) - spacing fixed
02:14:760 (4) - do NC here to indicate transition from instrumentals to vocals done
02:34:878 (2) - not perfectly symmetrical >< fixed (I guess xD)
02:46:172 (6) - spacing fixed
02:49:348 (4) - finish on slider end there is already one :)

[gomenasai]
00:23:584 (4) - NC done
00:56:054 (6,7) - the slider sounds like a triplet to me, how bout this rhythm: no change sorry
SPOILER
01:23:584 (5) - NC to correspond with the finish u added ok
01:32:760 (4,5) - a similar thing with 00:56:054 (6,7) no change too here
02:00:289 (1) - one grid right done
02:14:760 (4) - NC okay
02:38:231 - add note nope :c
02:44:408 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - would be cool if you could perfectly center this cant because of spacing
03:08:848 (6) - was this accidental? if it is then snap this to 03:08:760, if not then please use a slider here because the stack is almost impossible to read with the second note on a blue tick I dont know what going on here o.o fixed ><

Great map u got there, good luck on ranking ^_^

Nichiyouki

Nichiyouki wrote:



Sawatdee khrab, Ai :3 Sawatdee kha Nichiyouki ^-^

Mod request from pm in-game

Red = Unrankable
Blue = You should consider
Black = My suggestion

General

  1. Offset is 261 (-29) because I feel that 290 is too late for the rhythm. Okay

gomen

  1. 00:05:584 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - It isn't smoothly to play for 00:05:584 (4,1). So I will suggest that make to this pictures will be more beautiful and more smoothly. ok
    SPOILER


  2. 00:58:878 (6,7,1) - Move (6,7) to down 2 grids, and move slider begin of (1) to stack with 00:57:113 (1) (Symmetric with 00:58:525 (5)). okay
  3. 01:09:466 (3) - Remove finish wll be better? ok
  4. 01:23:937 (3,4) - Spacing is too far. Please move (3) to up 1 grid, and move (4) to down 1 grid. Although spacing is 1.04x, but I think these is no problem. done
  5. 01:41:231 (6,7,1) - Same with 00:58:878 (6,7,1). fixed
  6. 02:06:995 (2) - Add finish on slider end to follow the rhythm. ok
  7. 02:46:172 (6,7,1) - Same with 00:58:878 (6,7,1). fixed

gomenasai

  1. 00:22:525 (1,2) - I feel weird when I play and try to compare it with rhythm. I think it will be better if you change 2 circles into a slider instead. no change sry
  2. 00:34:172 (3) - Hitsound on here is relatively quiet. You can fix it by add finish here imo. done
  3. 01:19:348 (5) - I hear hitsound weird here, and I think you probably did not intend to add clap. So remove it. okay
  4. 01:19:701 (7) - Try to make it into curve slider, but for me, I suggest that make to symmetric with 01:20:760. okay
  5. 01:33:113 (5) - Add finish on slider end to follow the rhythm. done
  6. 01:36:290 (8) - This, too. Please add finish. done
  7. 01:39:466 (1,2) - Spacing is too far, and I feel very weird. So please move (2). I'm not agree tho. :/
  8. 01:55:348 (3) - Use ctrl+G. It will be more smoothly. done
  9. 01:52:878 (2) - Add finish on sider end will be better? okay
  10. 02:07:348 (6) - Add finish to follow the rhythm. okay done
  11. 02:08:761 (1) - Hitsound on here is too loud. I think remove finish after you fixed note on 02:07:348 (6). Okay
  12. 02:38:407 (5,1) - Spacing is too close. I suggest that move (5) farther from (1), or move slider end to stach with (1). done
  13. 02:40:878 (6) - Remove clap. fixed
  14. 02:56:054 (1) - I think you forget add clap on slider begin. So add it. done
  15. 03:08:407 (5) - This rhythm of note is weird for me. Maybe remove a circle will be better. no fixed
  16. 03:08:848 (6) - Why do you put a circle on blue tick? Please move it at 03:08:760. already fixed
  17. 03:11:231 (3) - Move to x:296 y:96 will be better. okay

Comment: The pattern your mapping is quite good, but I think that these are have problem only putting hitsound which may want more work. However, this map is still possible to be ranked. I think.

Hope my mod will be useful for you.

Good luck~

Thanks for mod guys :D
I will fix dkun mods later :3

Updated ~
Chyo-Kun
308 posts
Joined May 2012
Chyo-Kun
iasanemoG

[Gomen]


  1. 00:11:555 - Add another beat here? It sounds so good :3
  2. 01:43:672 (3) - Make this slider finish on 01:43:672 - you have to move the spinner start on 01:44:555 for do this.
    168,272,103672,2,0,P|272:232|304:308,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,104555,12,4,107555,0:0:0:0:

[Gomenasai]


  1. 00:07:348 (3) - Reverse this slider,make it start from its end
  2. 00:11:584 - Same as the easy,add a beat here

You don't need luck,this map will be ranked soon :D
Goodlike map.
Dark_Ai
1,831 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Dark_Ai
changed most of the suggestions :))
Thank you both for modding

Updated ~
Kodora
Kodora
ohh dat music band.... and dat new edit -.-



[General]

why normal diff named gomen? o.o

Since it is russian music band i suggest add "russian" to the tags.
And inconsistency in Kiai Times in both diffs, you should fix them all.

[Gomen]

01:29:908 (2,1) - i'm really not sure that it is good idea to overlap reverses in a relax diff.
02:34:849 (2,1) - ^
03:12:261 (1) - Please, end this spinner in 03:14:378 since vocal ends here, and cut useless part of mp3, this spinner is really very long and eggpain.

[Gomenasai]

01:08:760 (7) - this note is stacked bad, try x 428 y 156
01:41:231 (5) - this is just propose, but i think will be better to put this note under the end of 01:40:525 (4) - playes better for me, especially with hidden.
03:04:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i think will be better to make it more symmetrial:

SPOILER
03:12:289 (1) - uh, again this super-long spinner. Suggest end it in 03:14:407 here.

Nice map, good luck Ai-chan~
Dark_Ai
1,831 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Dark_Ai
Kodora

Kodora wrote:

ohh dat music band.... and dat new edit -.-



[General]

why normal diff named gomen? o.o dunno xD

Since it is russian music band i suggest add "russian" to the tags.
And inconsistency in Kiai Times in both diffs, you should fix them all.

[Gomen]

01:29:908 (2,1) - i'm really not sure that it is good idea to overlap reverses in a relax diff.
02:34:849 (2,1) - ^
03:12:261 (1) - Please, end this spinner in 03:14:378 since vocal ends here, and cut useless part of mp3, this spinner is really very long and eggpain. I will see what other will say about it ^^
and no change here ><

[Gomenasai]

01:08:760 (7) - this note is stacked bad, try x 428 y 156
01:41:231 (5) - this is just propose, but i think will be better to put this note under the end of 01:40:525 (4) - playes better for me, especially with hidden.
03:04:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i think will be better to make it more symmetrial:

SPOILER
03:12:289 (1) - uh, again this super-long spinner. Suggest end it in 03:14:407 here.
changed everything but spinner same as above

Nice map, good luck Ai-chan~

Thanks for mod :3
Updated ~
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
~General~
  1. Timing between the difficulties is inconsistent, please make sure to fix that and resnap everything carefully.
  2. Make the kiai time the same on both the difficulties, it's inconsistent right now.
~gomen~
  1. Rename it to "Gomen", it looks much better if capitalized.
  2. This difficulty is too hard to be the easiest difficulty of the mapset, please try to reduce the settings or remove some circles/sliders.
  1. 00:09:790 (2,3,4,5) - Try to avoid stacking notes together on the easiest difficulty of the mapset, since they could confuse beginners.
  2. 00:26:378 (4,5) - Same here, but this is even more confusing, since there's a big gap between these two notes.
  3. 00:51:437 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Once again, try to avoid making so many stacks on the easiest difficulty of the mapset, it's too confusing.
  4. 00:54:966 (3,4,5) - Try to avoid this overlap between these two sliders, it looks pretty bad.
  5. 01:29:908 (2,1) - Another ugly overlap that you could try to avoid easily.
  6. 01:36:613 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Too many stacks once again, please space them normally.
  7. 02:34:849 (2,1) - Ugly overlap once again, move the second slider somewhere else to fix this.
  8. 02:41:555 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Too many stacks once again, please space them normally.
  9. 02:48:613 (3,4) - These sliders could be stacked much better each other, disable grid snap and fix them manually.
~gomenasai~
  1. Rename it to "Gomenasai", it looks much better if capitalized.
  1. 00:29:937 (3) - It seems like you're missing your custom clap here, please make sure to add it to follow your current hitsounds pattern.
  2. 00:32:760 (1,2) - These sliders could be stacked much better each other, disable grid snap and fix them manually.
  3. 01:08:054 (6,7) - These notes could be stacked much better together, please disable grid snap and fix them.
  4. 01:19:701 (7) - Another missing custom clap on slider repeat, please add it here as well.
  5. 01:39:466 (1,2) - This random jump doesn't make sense to me, space them normally like the rest of the difficulty.
  6. 01:52:172 (1,2) - Like I said above, these notes could be stacked much better if you disable grid snap.
  7. 02:23:937 (6,7) - These sliders seems too close each other, try to make them like this, for a better blanket and flow.
    SPOILER
  8. 02:27:819 (1,2) - Again, another stack that could be improved.
  9. 02:54:641 (2,3,4) - I don't like how you've spaced these notes, try to place them like this.
    SPOILER
  10. 02:59:584 (2,3,4) - Try to avoid overlapping these sliders together, it looks pretty bad to me.
Dark_Ai
1,831 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Dark_Ai
Changed some stuff
Thanks for modding

Updated ~
Aka
1,777 posts
Joined January 2012
Aka
OMGOMG WHAT A FAMILIAR SONG WHAT A NOSTALGIA >_<
Setsurei
1,149 posts
Joined May 2012
Setsurei
Gomen
01:00:966 (2,3) - upper

01:09:437 (1) - could you move this slider a bit up? (slider on the edge make easy/normal diff difficult
(if you still want to stick with the distance spacing, then move the 01:08:731 (5) a bit up)
01:15:084 (1) - ^ same as above, the position is too the edge
(to make it in the middle, move 01:14:378 (6) a bit to the upper left)
01:31:319 (1) - move down a bit (stick to the snap? put these 01:28:496 (5,1,2) down a bit too)

01:36:613 (1,2,3,4,5) - move it like this?

01:39:437 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - upper a bit

01:58:849 (1) - down a bit (3 squares down of grid level 4)
02:36:261 (1) - move it down, it's to the edge (similar with 01:31:319 (1) with horizontal flip)
(put these 02:33:437 (5,1,2) down a bit too)

02:43:672 (5) - put this a bit left so 02:44:378 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) can make the position snap for a bit up


02:53:908 (1) - move down a bit to the right
02:56:025 (1,2,3,4) - move it up

03:08:378 (5,6) - move them like this

so 03:09:437 (1,2,3) can be positioned like that


Gomenasai
- the placement is alright
- timing is ok - stick to the tick (nothing to be concerned)
for this one, this is just my "subjective" opinion - you may not follow mine
- I only see the slider curve that tilde shaped only twice (the shape is like this: ~ or S),
change the long sliders to tilde, that will be good (but don't change too much, it will make the beatmap ugly (change 4-6 sliders))
Dark_Ai
1,831 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Dark_Ai
change only 1 or 2 suggestions on Gomen. thanks for mod C:

Updated ~
makeamove
1,127 posts
Joined July 2010
makeamove
Hello~ little m4m here.
Didn't know t.A.T.u. made a song like this. lol :3

[General]

AIBAT tells me there's inconsistency in preview times, check and fix those.
Other than that, folder seems okay.

On a side note, offset+5 feels much better to me. Remember to resnap timing sections and notes afterwards.

[Gomen]

00:00:266 (1) - That clap feels to aggresive/noisy for such a calm and relaxing intro. I'd just leave soft samples and soft whistles.
00:02:736 (4) - This note breaks the flow badly, I would move it to x340 y136
00:06:265 (2) - If you make this slider start on red tick, make the next slider (00:08:030 (3) - ) start on red tick as well, or make them both at white ticks. For consistency, you know, since it will be played by begginers.
00:11:207 (4) - I'm not a fan of making the big white tick a slider end, since it won't be pressed when playing and makes it less "strong".. you don't wanna make a big white tick feel soft-ish. I suggest changing this slider into 2 notes.
00:23:560 (1) - Why new combo? o.O
00:27:442 (1) - Improve this blanket please. Right now it's http://puu.sh/2zyKD | My suggestion: http://puu.sh/2zyMI
00:34:854 (1) - Same ^ http://puu.sh/2zyTj and remember to copypaste to the next big slider which is symmetric.
00:38:383 (1,2) - (2) kinda breaks the flow that (1) creates, it changes the direction. Maybe if you curve (1) like this it's better: http://puu.sh/2zyWN
01:11:913 (2) - Moving it to x320 y172 looks and plays much better
01:15:089 (1) - ehhh move it to the center? 1 grid left :P
01:18:971 (4,5) - Having these 2 sliders so close to each other is unnecesary and doesn't happen anywhere else.. Delete (5), make (4) end at 01:19:677 - and add a return to it.
02:16:501 (1) - Looks very ugly with (2). Make it a better blanket by moving its middle point upwards.
02:53:913 (1) - This looks so bad and is so confusing.. maybe it was a mistake? Move this slider somewhere else.. o.O Also it makes a jump with (2), i'm sure it was just a mistake hehe
03:12:266 (1) - This spinner is unnecesarily long... TOO long and it doesn't fit with the music, it should end on 03:13:677 - where the "nooooooow" ends.

Nothing else here, not a bad diff but i'd like to see some less copypasting in the future ^^

[Gomenasai]

00:29:908 (3) - This slider's shape breaks the flow badly, change it so it's like this: http://puu.sh/2zzjN
00:54:260 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Maybe these jumps are too long compared to the rest of the map?
01:13:143 (3) - Really unnecessary note, suggest removing it. It doesnt even have sound D:
01:17:202 (1) - This should end in the previous red tick...
01:22:849 (4) - New combo should be here imo since it's where she starts to sing again.
01:23:908 (2) - Really weird flow here.. how about doing this so it doesn't flow weirdly? http://puu.sh/2zzs6
01:34:143 (2,4) - Stack with 01:33:084 (5) - start?
01:53:555 (3,4,5,1,2) - When you are making stacks of 2 notes, and then another stack of 2 notes, etc etc. it's -almost- never suitable to start each stack in a red tick. Rearrange this so the stacks start on white ticks.
02:05:202 (3) - End it on the previous red tick
02:23:908 (6,7) - You should delete (7), make (6) end 1 tick further and add a repeat.
02:44:731 (2,4,8) - Make these notes be in the centre :P a few grids right
02:49:143 (x) - I don't understeand why did you add notes where there is no sound, but you hear a clear sound in this blue tick, yet you leave it unmapped. Please add a note here D:
03:12:261 (1) - Same as Gomen

I didn't really like this diff since it has some flow and rhythm problems, but it's okay. Just my opinion, sorry if i was too tough. Good luck Ai :3
HeatKai
osu! Alumni
2,801 posts
Joined April 2010
HeatKai
[General]
  1. You have a different preview time on the diffs.Fix it so it have the same preview time.
  2. I think you should put this in the tags "Lyudi Invalidy and Dangerous and Moving" that "Lyudi Invalidy"
[Gomen]
Make it slider tickrate 2 if you want to use that hitsounds of yours,if you stay at 1 just delete the hitsounds and the timing point 00:27:790
Slider Velocity 2.0? That is deadly for easiest diff omg.
  1. 00:29:555 (3) - why clap here? I thought it should be at the white tick to make it consistent.It should be here 00:29:202 (2) -
  2. 00:42:260 (2) - add whistle at the end to make it consistent,it would be better with whistle rather then letting it empty.
  3. 01:01:319 (3) - move it to the middle,make it look neater.
    SPOILER
  4. 01:25:672 (1) - remove finish at the starting,the music or vocal is not loud enough to have finish here and i don't think its fits.clap only would be good.
  5. 01:26:378 (2) - move it to the middle,so it looks more good and I think this should be at middle.
    SPOILER
  6. 01:31:319 (1) - long slider like this looks sexy if you curve it xD so curve it downward,it would look better you know.
    SPOILER
  7. 01:43:672 (3) - same as before. 01:01:319 (3)
  8. 02:10:849 - this llittle break,map it better.leaving this short break newbie might think that they have a long one instead of a short break.
  9. 02:14:731 (1,2) - add whistle to make it consistent with before.
  10. 02:15:437 (3) - remove whistle at the end.it goes with ^ you must fix it,it will sounds better
  11. 02:20:731 (2) - add finish at the end of the slider because there's a deep beat from the music.
  12. 02:22:143 (1,2,3,4,5) - this doesn't looks right for a relaxing song ;_____; make it like this would fits better.
    SPOILER
  13. 02:23:202 (4) - remove whistle, 02:23:555 (5) - add whistle , 02:23:908 (6) - remove whistle at the starting and ending. it would be better if you make it consistent.rather then putting it like it's current position.
  14. 02:53:908 (1) - this overlap is bad.move it somewhere else that you like but dont make it overlap like this.and spacing lol maybe you do something wrong at the editor.
  15. 03:08:025 (4) - put whistle here, 03:08:731 (6) - remove whistle from here,it would be better because the ending is a silence no beat.
  16. 03:10:849 (2) - add whistle here like you did on gomenasai diff.
  17. That is one long last spinner.
[Gomenasai]
there's too many stacking here,makes me miss when testplay because of it.
Slider tickrate 2?
  1. 00:11:555 (5) - add clap,make it consistent and there's a beat.don't leave it empty here.
  2. 00:54:260 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I don't think this jump really fits,whether you should make it just a small jumps or make it normal spacing.this jump is quite big.
  3. 01:24:966 - what's the point of this timing section here? delete it
  4. 02:00:437 (2) - delete this circle,don't put circle when there's not beat :< you're just overmapping it. and straighten this circle 02:00:613 (2) - with the circle before.
  5. 02:08:731 (1,2,3,4,5) - make it like this ,it's more neater.
    SPOILER
  6. 02:10:849 - this llittle break,map it would be better or move the break here.
  7. 02:14:731 (1,2,3) - add whistle here for consistent, and remove whistle from 02:15:790 (4) -
  8. 02:17:202 (2) - I don't there's so many stacking that actually I miss this because this is not the same beat. it's 1/4 I don't really like you stack it,why don't you move it somewhere?
  9. 02:17:908 (4) - add whistle here and remove whistle at the starting of the next slider for consistency.
  10. 02:20:731 (4) - add finish at the starting and end of the slider because there's a deep beat from the music.
  11. 02:22:143 (1,2,3,4,5) - rather then putting it randomly,why don't you put whistle at all of the white tick only.it sounds consistent and good.
  12. 02:28:496 (2) - add clap at the starting like you did at the gomen diff.
  13. 02:49:496 (6) - remove this circle it shouldn't be here,no beat at all.add a circle here 02:49:143
  14. 03:08:025 (4,5,6) - as I say in gomen diff.
  15. 03:11:202 (3) - add whistle at the starting.following vocal and like you did on gomen diff.
Dark_Ai
1,831 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Dark_Ai
finally have time for look at the mods >< sorry for delay ;A;

Snepif

Snepif wrote:

Hello~ little m4m here. [b]I'm sorry I couldnt do m4m ;_____; *cries in a corner*
Didn't know t.A.T.u. made a song like this. lol :3[/b]

[General]

AIBAT tells me there's inconsistency in preview times, check and fix those.
Other than that, folder seems okay.

On a side note, offset+5 feels much better to me. Remember to resnap timing sections and notes afterwards. okay done

[Gomen]

00:00:266 (1) - That clap feels to aggresive/noisy for such a calm and relaxing intro. I'd just leave soft samples and soft whistles. deleted
00:02:736 (4) - This note breaks the flow badly, I would move it to x340 y136 ok
00:06:265 (2) - If you make this slider start on red tick, make the next slider (00:08:030 (3) - ) start on red tick as well, or make them both at white ticks. For consistency, you know, since it will be played by begginers. changed
00:11:207 (4) - I'm not a fan of making the big white tick a slider end, since it won't be pressed when playing and makes it less "strong".. you don't wanna make a big white tick feel soft-ish. I suggest changing this slider into 2 notes. kk
00:23:560 (1) - Why new combo? o.O because new combo :c
00:27:442 (1) - Improve this blanket please. Right now it's http://puu.sh/2zyKD | My suggestion: http://puu.sh/2zyMI fixed
00:34:854 (1) - Same ^ http://puu.sh/2zyTj and remember to copypaste to the next big slider which is symmetric. fixed
00:38:383 (1,2) - (2) kinda breaks the flow that (1) creates, it changes the direction. Maybe if you curve (1) like this it's better: http://puu.sh/2zyWN kk
01:11:913 (2) - Moving it to x320 y172 looks and plays much better moved it somewhere else ><
01:15:089 (1) - ehhh move it to the center? 1 grid left :P fixed ><
01:18:971 (4,5) - Having these 2 sliders so close to each other is unnecesary and doesn't happen anywhere else.. Delete (5), make (4) end at 01:19:677 - and add a return to it. ok
02:16:501 (1) - Looks very ugly with (2). Make it a better blanket by moving its middle point upwards. no change here :c
02:53:913 (1) - This looks so bad and is so confusing.. maybe it was a mistake? Move this slider somewhere else.. o.O Also it makes a jump with (2), i'm sure it was just a mistake hehe waaah yeah this was a mistake ><
03:12:266 (1) - This spinner is unnecesarily long... TOO long and it doesn't fit with the music, it should end on 03:13:677 - where the "nooooooow" ends. changed this part :c

Nothing else here, not a bad diff but i'd like to see some less copypasting in the future ^^ ><

[Gomenasai]

00:29:908 (3) - This slider's shape breaks the flow badly, change it so it's like this: http://puu.sh/2zzjN done
00:54:260 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Maybe these jumps are too long compared to the rest of the map? I like it :c
01:13:143 (3) - Really unnecessary note, suggest removing it. It doesnt even have sound D: deleted :c
01:17:202 (1) - This should end in the previous red tick... I like it like now :/
01:22:849 (4) - New combo should be here imo since it's where she starts to sing again. kk
01:23:908 (2) - Really weird flow here.. how about doing this so it doesn't flow weirdly? http://puu.sh/2zzs6 done
01:34:143 (2,4) - Stack with 01:33:084 (5) - start? no because it will destroy my spacing ><
01:53:555 (3,4,5,1,2) - When you are making stacks of 2 notes, and then another stack of 2 notes, etc etc. it's -almost- never suitable to start each stack in a red tick. Rearrange this so the stacks start on white ticks. eeeh o.o
02:05:202 (3) - End it on the previous red tick ok
02:23:908 (6,7) - You should delete (7), make (6) end 1 tick further and add a repeat. no change here :/
02:44:731 (2,4,8) - Make these notes be in the centre :P a few grids right I cant because of spacing o3o
02:49:143 (x) - I don't understeand why did you add notes where there is no sound, but you hear a clear sound in this blue tick, yet you leave it unmapped. Please add a note here D: ok :/
03:12:261 (1) - Same as Gomen changed

I didn't really like this diff since it has some flow and rhythm problems, but it's okay. Just my opinion, sorry if i was too tough. Good luck Ai :3

HeatKai

HeatKai wrote:

[General]
  1. You have a different preview time on the diffs.Fix it so it have the same preview time.
  2. I think you should put this in the tags "Lyudi Invalidy and Dangerous and Moving" that "Lyudi Invalidy"
[Gomen]
Make it slider tickrate 2 if you want to use that hitsounds of yours,if you stay at 1 just delete the hitsounds and the timing point 00:27:790
Slider Velocity 2.0? That is deadly for easiest diff omg.
  1. 00:29:555 (3) - why clap here? I thought it should be at the white tick to make it consistent.It should be here 00:29:202 (2) -
  2. 00:42:260 (2) - add whistle at the end to make it consistent,it would be better with whistle rather then letting it empty.
  3. 01:01:319 (3) - move it to the middle,make it look neater.
    SPOILER
  4. 01:25:672 (1) - remove finish at the starting,the music or vocal is not loud enough to have finish here and i don't think its fits.clap only would be good.
  5. 01:26:378 (2) - move it to the middle,so it looks more good and I think this should be at middle.
    SPOILER
  6. 01:31:319 (1) - long slider like this looks sexy if you curve it xD so curve it downward,it would look better you know.
    SPOILER
  7. 01:43:672 (3) - same as before. 01:01:319 (3)
  8. 02:10:849 - this llittle break,map it better.leaving this short break newbie might think that they have a long one instead of a short break.
  9. 02:14:731 (1,2) - add whistle to make it consistent with before.
  10. 02:15:437 (3) - remove whistle at the end.it goes with ^ you must fix it,it will sounds better
  11. 02:20:731 (2) - add finish at the end of the slider because there's a deep beat from the music.
  12. 02:22:143 (1,2,3,4,5) - this doesn't looks right for a relaxing song ;_____; make it like this would fits better.
    SPOILER
  13. 02:23:202 (4) - remove whistle, 02:23:555 (5) - add whistle , 02:23:908 (6) - remove whistle at the starting and ending. it would be better if you make it consistent.rather then putting it like it's current position.
  14. 02:53:908 (1) - this overlap is bad.move it somewhere else that you like but dont make it overlap like this.and spacing lol maybe you do something wrong at the editor.
  15. 03:08:025 (4) - put whistle here, 03:08:731 (6) - remove whistle from here,it would be better because the ending is a silence no beat.
  16. 03:10:849 (2) - add whistle here like you did on gomenasai diff.
  17. That is one long last spinner.
fixed everything here

[Gomenasai]
there's too many stacking here,makes me miss when testplay because of it.
Slider tickrate 2?
  1. 00:11:555 (5) - add clap,make it consistent and there's a beat.don't leave it empty here.
  2. 00:54:260 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I don't think this jump really fits,whether you should make it just a small jumps or make it normal spacing.this jump is quite big. same answer as above :c
  3. 01:24:966 - what's the point of this timing section here? delete it short kiai timing
  4. 02:00:437 (2) - delete this circle,don't put circle when there's not beat :< you're just overmapping it. and straighten this circle 02:00:613 (2) - with the circle before. deleted
  5. 02:08:731 (1,2,3,4,5) - make it like this ,it's more neater. dont like this
    SPOILER
  6. 02:10:849 - this llittle break,map it would be better or move the break here.
  7. 02:14:731 (1,2,3) - add whistle here for consistent, and remove whistle from 02:15:790 (4) - ok
  8. 02:17:202 (2) - I don't there's so many stacking that actually I miss this because this is not the same beat. it's 1/4 I don't really like you stack it,why don't you move it somewhere? no I like it :c
  9. 02:17:908 (4) - add whistle here and remove whistle at the starting of the next slider for consistency. kk
  10. 02:20:731 (4) - add finish at the starting and end of the slider because there's a deep beat from the music. added only on the end sound much better instead of to add it at start too
  11. 02:22:143 (1,2,3,4,5) - rather then putting it randomly,why don't you put whistle at all of the white tick only.it sounds consistent and good. kk
  12. 02:28:496 (2) - add clap at the starting like you did at the gomen diff. kk
  13. 02:49:496 (6) - remove this circle it shouldn't be here,no beat at all.add a circle here 02:49:143 already changed from the previous mod
  14. 03:08:025 (4,5,6) - as I say in gomen diff.ok
  15. 03:11:202 (3) - add whistle at the starting.following vocal and like you did on gomen diff. ok


Updated =w=)/
ImperatorRemus
11 posts
Joined December 2011
ImperatorRemus
Ai , Ai , Ai ... again a wonderful beatmap !;)
You"re mapps are the best ever <3 ;D

Ok Lets come to some Informations o.O..

In my Opinion The timing of " Gomen and Gomenasai " are Nearly Perfectly,
Would be Cool if the Beatmap Getting RANKED soon ...
I would be glad to that...

Ok , and now comes .... " something other"s ;D"

Anyway , Keep it up Ai ;) your beatmaps are the best ! ;D 8-)
SOMEBODY RANK IT NOW PLS <3 ;D!!!
Miya
2,690 posts
Joined June 2011
Miya
Hello :3

General
  1. Unherited timing point in each diff is inconsistant. You have offset 266 at Gomen diff, and 265 at Gomenasai diff. Make sure to fix this.
  2. Preview time is also inconsistant. Fix this via opening .osu in notepad.
  3. Because of different offset ,kiai time is also inconsistant :(
  4. I personally dislike the use of the finish sounds as a whistle. It's too loud to be a whistle imo. It's supposed to be a finish, not whistle :(. If you want to keep this finish as a whistle, try reducing their volume.
Gomen
  1. Try to reducing some of the circle or complex pattern rhythm here. Having 3.13 Stars is a bit too much for current standard rule.
  2. 00:07:324 (1) - Remove this new combo. This is inconsistant according to your NC pattern.
  3. 00:11:560 (5) - Well, i suggest adding a whistle here to cover the strong piano sounds from the music.
  4. 00:12:265 (1) - Also, add a whistle here too, it's too quiet without a whistle.
  5. 00:17:913 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think this circle pattern can be simplified to reduce the star rating. Maybe to 2 slider with repeat? It's up to you ><
  6. 00:23:560 (1) - Unnecesary new combo again. Please remove this.
  7. 00:27:442 (1) - New combo here should be on 00:26:383 (5) - according to new stanza. So remove this NC, and add NC at 00:26:383 (5) -
  8. 00:29:207 (1) - This should be NC according to new stanza.
  9. 00:32:030 (7,1) - Same, switch NC here.
  10. 00:34:854 (1) - You forgot a whistle here at the slider end?
  11. 00:43:324 - Why no kiai here? there is kiai here at your hard diff.
  12. 00:57:089 (1,3) - Please don't stop the whistle rhythm here. You can add a whislte at this both silder start.
  13. And so many NC that need to be fix here. I won't mention it again, lazy to mention it one by one. You can get the general idea by reading hw i add NC pattern to make it consistant.
  14. 01:20:030 - Please don't skip this clap. You never skip a clap in your previous rhythm. So add a circle here then add a clap.
  15. 02:16:501 (1) - Nazi, but i think this slider can be blanketed better like this > http://puu.sh/321f2.jpg so it will be similar to slider 02:18:266 (4) -
  16. 02:22:148 (1,2,3,4,5) - This a lot of circle rhythm too can be simplified to reduce star rating.
  17. 02:44:383 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This one too ><
  19. 03:15:088 - Make a new green timing point here, and increase the volume by 10%-20%. This part volume is too low, imo.
Gomenasai
  1. Same as normal, i think your current combo is not consistant. Please review your combo pattern in this difficulty.
  2. 00:14:029 (5,6) - Whistle at the 6 should be on 5 for the whistle rhythm to be consistant.
  3. 00:15:794 (3) - Overused whistle which doesnt fit the song imo. Better to remove it.
  4. 00:16:853 (5,6) - This one too.
  5. 00:29:912 (3) - Whistle at the repeat? Feels empty without whistle.
  6. 00:42:264 (4) - I think this slider can mapped again to be create more interesting rhythm. Since there is 1/4 beat here 00:42:441 -, it's better to make this slider to 1/4 slider with repeat too. Take a look at this > http://puu.sh/323qw.jpg
  7. 00:50:735 (3) - It's better to remove the finish imo. The whistle sounds is already loud enough to cover the heavy beat from here. Besides, it's not consistant with previous combo too.
  8. 01:14:382 (5) - Remove the whistle from this circle. Break the consistencies :<
  9. 01:27:441 (5,6) - Nazi, but i think it wil better if you just blanket this slider with 01:26:735 (4) -
  10. 01:34:147 (2,4,7,8) - Stack this with 01:32:735 (4,5) - ? But of course you need to fix the spacing of 01:35:206 (5,6) - if you do this.
  11. 02:31:853 (3) - Remove this circle. I don't think triplet is fit with the current vocal.
  12. 02:44:735 (2,7,8) - Same, stack this with 02:48:265 (2) - ?
  13. 02:53:206 (7,8,9) - This one too, make sure the 8 stacked properly with 02:54:970 (3) -
  14. 03:15:088 - Same as normal.
  15. 03:15:088 (1) - Remove clap, overused and doesnt fit.
That's all i think. Overal the pattern is quite neat, and rhythm is also good too.
But the consistencies of NC and hitsound need to be looked at.
There is still some room for improvement before rank.
Also, don't forget to fix those unrankable stuff Dx

Good luck ;)
Chyo-Kun
308 posts
Joined May 2012
Chyo-Kun
Gogo Ai! First BAT mod!
Dark_Ai
1,831 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Dark_Ai
well changed everything guess o.o Thank you for your mod :3

Updated ~
Satellite
Beatmap Nominator
3,703 posts
Joined June 2012
Satellite
hi~

[General]
try japanese Artist name? 

タトゥ
タトゥー

[Gomenasai]
00:22:849 (3,1) - change Newcombo?

01:05:025 (2) - move x382 y192 nazi
01:21:790 (3) - try this. (Cover more 2)
176,260,81790,2,0,P|113:152|184:28,1,280,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
02:07:319 (6) - unrankable slider? need slider tick or NewCombo?
02:25:319 - add note
02:29:555 (4) - last point forget Finish.

[Gomen]
00:47:555 (2) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.

00:56:378 (5) - move x180 y192 is better?
01:59:908 (3,1) - try this. I think slider cover fit


nazi modding go me n a s a i ~~ :(
Dark_Ai
1,831 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Dark_Ai
Thanks for you mod C:
changed everything

Updated ~
Kodora
Kodora
this is not japanese band, remove japanese artist name.
this is not even japanese song

this is nesessary only if artist is eastern.
scanter
2,394 posts
Joined July 2012
scanter
Hi Hi ~

General

  1. You used rarely soft-slidertick2. how about delete it?
  2. I recommend increase the overall of volume 10~20%. every notes are hardly listen to do.

Gomen

  1. 00:07:672 (4,5) - Change 1/2 repeated slider one? following piano sound much better.
  2. 00:08:731 (1,2,3,4) - Makes more perfect blanket?
    SPOILER


    This is code.
    400,244,8731,6,0,P|300:284|224:216,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    320,180,9790,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    236,124,10143,2,0,P|168:75|68:115,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    148,180,11202,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    160,280,11555,1,2,0:0:0:0:
  3. 00:13:672 (3) - Add whistle.
  4. 00:56:378 (5) - If you want more perfect blanket, move to x:180, y:192.
  5. 01:29:908 (2) - Ctrl + G. really bad overlap.
  6. 02:34:849 (2) - Same. Ctrl + G.
  7. 03:17:908 (3) - Add NC?

Gomenasai

  1. 00:00:261 (1) - Clap sound looks really strange. all about like this part has quite sound.
  2. 00:02:731 (6) - Add whistle
  3. 00:37:672 (6) - Stack is not suitable this sound. how about this shapes? just moved number 6 to x:44, y:240 and moved triplet and slider to x:24, y:100
    SPOILER
  4. 01:19:672 (7) - Add whistle on slider's first. it is your hitsound pattern.
  5. 01:23:908 (3) - How about put this slider to linear line? like this.
    01:24:613 (4) - If you followed this, move to x:51, y:268.
    SPOILER
  6. 01:46:849 (1,2,3,4,5) - How about makes pentagonal shape? of course your pattern is good. but, players can beat too hard this. y axis moving with overlap is really prone to miss.
    SPOILER


    This is code.
    191,99,106849,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    329,125,107202,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    347,266,107555,1,4,0:0:0:0:
    219,325,107908,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    122,222,108260,1,8,0:0:0:0:
  7. 01:52:849 (2) - Move to x:396, y:104. not perfect stacked.
  8. 01:59:908 (4,1,2,3,4) - Makes more perfect symmetry.
  9. 02:10:143 (5) - Move to x:188, y:40. it will become better symmetry.
  10. 02:28:496 (2) - I know this is nazi. but I will specify this. move to x:404, y:108. not perfect stacked.
  11. 02:43:319 (4) - this reverse hitsound is intentional? I don't recommend this. add clap on slider's first and delete clap at slider's end.
  12. 02:49:143 (4,5) - really extreme pattern. how about this?
    SPOILER


    This is code.
    368,80,168613,2,0,P|431:102|459:166,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    448,236,169143,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    412,296,169319,1,0,0:0:0:0:
That's all :) GL ;)
Dark_Ai
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Dark_Ai

Kodora wrote:

this is not japanese band, remove japanese artist name.
this is not even japanese song

this is nesessary only if artist is eastern.
well okay

scanter wrote:

You used rarely soft-slidertick2. how about delete it?
didnt delete it ><

I didnt change 01:46:849 (1,2,3,4,5) but otherwise changed everything Thanks for your mod :3

Updated ~
Flower
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Flower
Hi~

[General]
Please increase the 20% volume part to 30%. They are not audible to me.
STR ->2

[Normal]
00:05:908 (1,2) - blanket looks better
00:08:731 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:36:613 (3,1) - slightly separate from each other
00:54:966 (3) - downbeat starts at 00:55:319 - , so maybe separate into a note and a slider.
01:34:496 (3) - ^
after 01:58:849 - same as above. I just wonder why you start sliders on offbeats.

[Hard]
00:30:966 (4) - make a little "bounce" in the middle of the slider. use the tick (when you change to STR 2) as a help.
01:26:555 (3) - I think it should be at 01:26:908 - . up to you
02:20:202 (2) - delete this?
02:27:790 (1) - extend 1/4 beats longer to get a better sense
02:31:319 (2,3) - not symmetrical, and have made a bad overlap to the following notes
02:53:378 (8,9) - delete 8, and move 9 symmetrical to 7. it looks and plays better.

No big problems and good map. Good luck~
eveless
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eveless
  • [Gomenasai]
  1. 00:16:496 (4) - the triangle looks imperfect imo, how about move this note to x:316 y:308(nazi)?
  2. 00:20:025 (6) - whistle?
  3. 01:36:084 (8) - I suggest you to add a note here to do a transition
  4. 02:05:908 (4) - a bit unti-flow for me, try sth like this?
    SPOILER
  5. 03:07:672 (3,4,5,6) - this whistle spam make me confusing, can you remove 6's whistle?

  • [Gomen]
  1. 00:07:672 (4) - Missing a whistle in the end
  2. 00:18:966 (2) - add whistle in he middle?
Dark_Ai
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Dark_Ai
Flower

Flower wrote:

Hi~

[General]
Please increase the 20% volume part to 30%. They are not audible to me.
STR ->2 I think 20% is okay too

[Normal]
00:05:908 (1,2) - blanket looks better okay
00:08:731 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:36:613 (3,1) - slightly separate from each other yup
00:54:966 (3) - downbeat starts at 00:55:319 - , so maybe separate into a note and a slider. I like it like it is now :c
01:34:496 (3) - ^ same here
after 01:58:849 - same as above. I just wonder why you start sliders on offbeats. o change here too ><

[Hard]
00:30:966 (4) - make a little "bounce" in the middle of the slider. use the tick (when you change to STR 2) as a help. uh no change here :c
01:26:555 (3) - I think it should be at 01:26:908 - . up to you ^
02:20:202 (2) - delete this? ok
02:27:790 (1) - extend 1/4 beats longer to get a better sense I dont think so
02:31:319 (2,3) - not symmetrical, and have made a bad overlap to the following notes :/
02:53:378 (8,9) - delete 8, and move 9 symmetrical to 7. it looks and plays better. okay

No big problems and good map. Good luck~

eveless

eveless wrote:

  • [Gomenasai]
  1. 00:16:496 (4) - the triangle looks imperfect imo, how about move this note to x:316 y:308(nazi)? okay
  2. 00:20:025 (6) - whistle? fixed
  3. 01:36:084 (8) - I suggest you to add a note here to do a transition hmmkay
  4. 02:05:908 (4) - a bit unti-flow for me, try sth like this? changed
    SPOILER
  5. 03:07:672 (3,4,5,6) - this whistle spam make me confusing, can you remove 6's whistle? okay

  • [Gomen]
  1. 00:07:672 (4) - Missing a whistle in the end fixd
  2. 00:18:966 (2) - add whistle in he middle? okay

Thank you for your mods :3

Updated ~
eveless
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eveless
I think t.a.T.u should restudy their japanese, because it should be "Gomennasai" but not "Gomenasai" /joking face

Remove “タトゥ” from your title please :3...
Stefan
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Stefan
t.A.T.u is a japanese band? Or why is their name written in japanese?
It makes more logic if you write their name in cyrillic - which would be " Тату ".
Dark_Ai
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okay done :3

Updated ~
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wtf lol
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Wah omg thank you very much >.</
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Ranked~~!!
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waah Thank you \*w*/
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:D congratz /o/
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well congratz~
baka Ai :3
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wuhhhh :D gz ai! ~ ~~
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congratz \o/
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Gz!
Stefan
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Stefan

Stefan wrote:

t.A.T.u is a japanese band? Or why is their name written in japanese?
It makes more logic if you write their name in cyrillic - which would be " Тату ".
Just bringing this back in case.

Congrats Ai-chan :)
Luna
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http://ru.wikipedia.org/wiki/%D0%A2%D0% ... F%D0%B0%29
Тату and t.A.T.u. are both valid.
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gratz o3o/
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Stefan wrote:

Stefan wrote:

t.A.T.u is a japanese band? Or why is their name written in japanese?
It makes more logic if you write their name in cyrillic - which would be " Тату ".
Just bringing this back in case.
a bit more random wouldn't be possible, hm? if it was wrong it wouldn't have been ranked..
Kodora
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Kodora wrote:

this is not japanese band, remove japanese artist name.
this is not even japanese song

this is nesessary only if artist is eastern.

.
Roxas
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Congrats hentai baka ♥
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Congratz~!
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Finally Ranked! Congratz! :D
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Thank you guys :33
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congratulations :3
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Was willst du damit loooool
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