eufonius - Hikari Kagayaku Sekai [Osu|Taiko] · forum

Flower

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

Flower 2013-05-04T17:41:13+00:00

Foreverends wrote:
超~~~遲來的mod >.<
so sorry for the delay ;w;

Taiko
00:08:826 (2) - d done
00:09:715 (1,2,3,4) - 由o ooo轉成ooo o試試 done
像這個
->
00:13:715 (4,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,2) - 由o x o ooo xoo轉成o x xoo o xxo試試改了下有点奇怪所以改成了别的
00:21:271 (1,1,2,3,4) - o x oox好像比較順 nope
00:36:048 - 放一個k, 之後將00:36:382 (1) - 轉成d 改了第一个，第二个不变
00:37:493 (3,1) - 把這删掉,之後在00:37:715 - 補一個d done
00:38:271 - 個人認為補一個k更合rhythm,你細心聽一下背景音就明白的了lol done
00:38:826 - ^ done

因其它diff太神,所以只摸taiko ;w;
sorry Flower ;w;

Thanks for moding~

Fionana

252 posts

Joined April 2011

Fionana 2013-05-06T13:07:30+00:00

A big thanks to the modders for their moding and also to Flower who helped me to fix the diff, sry for being so late T_T

tetsutaro

3,863 posts

Joined February 2008

tetsutaro 2013-05-10T12:39:14+00:00

的改圖喔！

[General]

把日語歌名也放進去

[Easy]

大部分是以滑條加圓圈做成實際上是均等1拍的節奏，有悶
例如 00:43:715 (1,2,3) - 可以(1)的尾、(2)和(3)的頭都早1/2拍
00:52:604 (1) - 轉盤不與歌詞緊扣。00:50:826 (1) - 在 00:51:937 停下，然後讓 00:52:604 (1) 移前1/2拍。

[Normal]
00:59:271 (2) 一類 - 頭晚1/2拍，原本的地方加圓圈
00:59:271 (2) and similar - Start 1/2 later, add circle to original beginning

[Hard]

00:04:826~ - 大部分是以滑條加圓圈做成實際上是均等1/2拍的節奏，有悶

00:04:826~ - Most are only sliders and circles forming a uniform 1/2 rhythm, and sounds a bit boring.
00:01:049 (1,1) - 不與音樂緊扣。00:01:049 (1) 尾及 00:04:826 (1) 頭都早1/2拍
00:01:049 (1,1) - Does not closely fit the music. Move 1/2 earlier the end of 00:01:049 (1) and the beginning of 00:04:826 (1)
00:39:048 (1); 00:52:382 (4); 01:32:382 (4) - 可以再圓一點
00:39:048 (1); 00:52:382 (4); 01:32:382 (4) - Could be rounder
00:59:493 (1,2) 一類滑條早1/4拍完來塞圓圈的有多了點
Sliders ending 1/4 earlier for a circle like 00:59:493 (1,2)
01:42:271 (1) - 不與音樂緊扣。頭吃掉前面的(3)
01:42:271 (1) - Does not closely fit the music. Span the beginning over the (3)

[Taiko] 目測難度：鬼級7星

前後相似的部分的音符排位不大相關。最好的是
01:43:937 (4) - 這邊的音樂跟 01:43:271 (1,2,3) 時的是同音高。變成咔（大小沒所謂）

[Fionana]
00:02:048 (1), 00:05:826 (1) - 不與音樂緊扣，但是在要保持前後的前提下有夠難修的
00:14:604 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - (4)~(8) 和 (1) 的時間分隔有不同，會造成混淆？
00:14:604 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - (4)~(8) and (1) have different time spacing, would it be too confusing?

[Insane]

目測上去有地方不合分隔 e.g. 00:21:493 (1,2,3,4,5)
00:01:937 - 移除休息

EDIT: Forgot about the GDs. Adding English version for those parts.

Last edited by tetsutaro 2013-05-10T14:08:54+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Flower

1,723 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

Flower 2013-05-10T13:49:51+00:00

Thanks for modding. Will reply later. To nya, atan, fionana, I will reply to this mod. if you think my replies have problems then pm me/in-game puush me the code, instead of posting.

Athena Tennos

1,038 posts

Joined February 2010

Athena Tennos 2013-05-10T22:55:17+00:00

幫我把diffname改成Athena's Hard吧/w\~

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Hikari_kagayaku_sekai.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 57473
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 26382
DistanceSpacing: 2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Hikari Kagayaku Sekai
TitleUnicode:Hikari Kagayaku Sekai
Artist:eufonius
ArtistUnicode:eufonius
Creator:Flower
Version:Atan's Hard
Source:Irotoridori no Hikari
Tags:favorite riya opening - t e n n y a - Fionana sekai Athena Tennos String_Ensemble
BeatmapID:177457
BeatmapSetID:53000

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
Video,320,"irohika_OP.flv"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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kanpakyin

Global Moderator

4,233 posts

Joined June 2010

kanpakyin 2013-05-12T08:18:02+00:00

hello.

[General]

The offset is sightly early (sure) please change the offset to 1053
The combo color is inconsistent. Checked that please~
AIBAT indicates that the tags are also inconsistent.

[Easy]

Beatmap design/suggestion
(These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
1. 00:11:048 - Remove one green line there, one of them are meaningless.
2. 00:47:271 (1) - hum..The slider shape looks quite bad imo, so I did some adjustment on it. Here is a reference, take it under consideration please. I will give you the code.
```
277,106,47271,6,0,B|226:124|194:64|144:85,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
```
3. 01:19:271 (1) - I don't feel like a spinner here because the vocal is still singing. I would rather remove the spinner and map this part or partially map it and then start the spinner at 01:20:826 - ?
Hitsound
(These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
1. 00:18:826 (1) - How about to add a whistle at the beginning of the slider to fit the music and pitch there?
2. 00:20:160 (2) - ^Same, but add it at the end of the slider.
3. 00:27:271 (3) - ah, please remove the whistle from the entire slider because this makes some noise which doesn't fit the music. After that, add a whistle at the beginning and the end of the slider.
4. 00:37:937 (2) - Remove the whistle at the end of the slider please, it doesn't fit the music that much.
5. 00:40:604 (4) - Add a clap sound at the beginning of the slider to fit the drum sound there?
6. 00:42:160 (2) - ^Same, add a s2 clap at the reverse of the slider
7. 00:49:048 (3) - How about to add a whistle at the beginning and the end of the slider? It sounds cool imo.
8. 01:23:271 - Make this tick back to soft hitsound? The tick doesn't fit the music that well.

[n y a's Normal]

Beatmap design/suggestion
(These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
1. 00:11:937 - unused green line, better to remove it.
2. 00:17:048 (3,4,1) - Inconsistent spacing. I don't know are you doing this intentionally or not but be careful, this kind of spacing might confuse the player. I highly suggest changing it.
Hitsound
(These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
1. 01:17:937 (4) - This clap is too sudden and doesn't fit the music. I would rather remove it or change it to normal hitsound.

[Athena's Hard]

Difficulty setting
(I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
1. OD +1 to balance the difficulty setting?
2. circle size +1 感覺好一點 spacing神馬的都打得比較舒服
Beatmap design/suggestion
(These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
1. 00:13:049 (9,1) - This jump is quite meaningless in my opinion because the spacing isn't that big so it doesn't feel like a jump during gameplay. I would use normal distance there if I were you.
  suggestion

[Fionana's Insane]

Beatmap design/suggestion
(These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
1. 00:15:271 (1) - I think you can remove the stack and then make a jump there because I can hear a strong downbeat there.
2. 01:42:160 (8) - ^Same, I think you can stack this note at 01:42:382 (1) -
Hitsound
(These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
1. 00:05:715 (3) - Change the sliderend to 5% volume since 10% is too loud imo.
2. 00:32:160 (4) - How about to add a clap sound at the reverse of the slider to fit the drum sound there?
3. 01:15:715 (1) - How about to add a whistle at the beginning of the slider to fit the pitch and the sound behind the music?
4. 01:34:160 (5) - Remove the whistle at the beginning of the slider and add it at the end of the slider to fit the drum sound better as you do this at 01:33:493 -
5. 01:42:382 (1,2) - These whistle sound weird. I would rather remove them and only add few on suitable place if I were you.

[Insane]

Beatmap design/suggestion
(These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
1. 00:55:937 (1,1,1) - Spamming new combo isn't that necessary here imo. Please remove the new combo at 00:56:382 - and 00:56:826 -
2. 01:19:382 (1) - I don't feel like a spinner here because the vocal is still singing. I would rather remove the spinner and map this part
3. 01:43:271 (1,1,1,1) - Same as 00:55:937
Hitsound
(These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
1. 00:01:049 (1) - Add a whistle here to fit the pitch and the next pattern (00:04:604 (1) - ) ?
2. 00:09:937 (1) - Please change the slidertick back to softhitsound. This is extremly weird. Especially the slider (2)- is a clap sound.
3. 00:14:826 (4) - Remove this clap and then start using normal hitsound at 00:14:715 - to 00:15:271 - ?
4. 00:28:160 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Weird hitclap placement. How about using whistle instead of clap?
5. 00:40:604 (6) - Remove clap there and then change this to normal hitsound

這diff的clap sound放的有點怪

[Taiko]

00:09:160 (2) - Diplet sounds weird, probably move this note to 00:09:048 - ?
00:44:826 (1,2,3,1) - ^Same, change this back to 1/2 would be much better
01:40:382 (2,1,2) - kkd

感覺insane的hitsound不搞一下的話很難泡下手.......

Athena Tennos

1,038 posts

Joined February 2010

Athena Tennos 2013-05-12T08:32:20+00:00

OD沒變~其他fixed

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Hikari_kagayaku_sekai.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 57473
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 26382
DistanceSpacing: 2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Hikari Kagayaku Sekai
TitleUnicode:Hikari Kagayaku Sekai
Artist:eufonius
ArtistUnicode:eufonius
Creator:Flower
Version:Athena's Hard
Source:Irotoridori no Hikari
Tags:favorite riya opening - t e n n y a - Fionana sekai Athena Tennos String_Ensemble
BeatmapID:177457
BeatmapSetID:53000

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
Video,320,"irohika_OP.flv"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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204,76,46160,6,0,B|152:124|64:120,1,150
4,64,46826,1,2,0:0:0:0:
88,36,47048,6,0,B|116:8,2,37.5
64,120,47493,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,196,47715,2,0,B|60:200|84:236,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,344,48160,2,0,B|152:336|136:300,1,75,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,224,48604,1,2,0:0:0:0:
232,172,48826,6,0,B|264:152|308:152,2,75
256,252,49493,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,304,49715,2,0,B|392:332|468:296,1,150
492,220,50382,2,0,B|512:184,2,37.5,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,232,50826,6,0,B|388:152|424:84,1,150,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,148,51493,2,0,B|296:176|220:156,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,204,52160,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,276,52382,2,0,B|356:280|368:308|356:344|312:352|284:332|284:312|296:288,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,228,53048,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,216,53271,5,0,0:0:0:0:
512,268,53493,1,0,0:0:0:0:
492,348,53715,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,336,53937,2,0,B|364:272|372:192,1,150,6|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,244,54604,2,0,B|396:276|316:272,1,150,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,264,55271,1,2,0:0:0:0:
168,216,55493,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,136,55715,1,2,0:0:0:0:
188,64,55937,5,4,0:0:0:0:
428,36,56382,1,4,0:0:0:0:
356,264,56826,1,4,0:0:0:0:
388,188,57048,1,2,0:0:0:0:
284,224,57271,1,2,0:0:0:0:
356,116,57493,1,2,0:0:0:0:
212,204,57715,1,2,0:0:0:0:
220,188,57826,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,180,57937,6,0,B|152:196|96:144,1,150,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,68,58604,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,180,58826,2,0,B|232:224|192:240,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,268,59271,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,328,59493,6,0,B|244:336|292:308,1,112.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,288,59937,1,2,0:0:0:0:
400,200,60160,2,0,B|424:168|460:160,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,180,60604,2,0,B|272:191|309:175,1,75
172,248,61048,1,2,0:0:0:0:
56,284,61271,1,0,0:0:0:0:
28,260,61382,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,224,61493,6,0,B|28:184|60:160,1,75,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,204,61937,1,2,0:0:0:0:
104,92,62160,2,0,B|144:92|172:120,1,75
224,224,62604,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,120,62826,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,224,63048,6,0,B|228:312|300:344,1,150
184,324,63715,2,0,B|256:304|308:244,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,132,64382,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,92,64604,1,2,0:0:0:0:
400,196,64826,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,216,64937,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,212,65048,6,0,B|268:188|264:128,1,112.5,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,96,65493,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,44,65715,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,124,65937,2,0,B|48:164|72:196,1,75
172,260,66382,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,140,66604,6,0,B|152:172|108:200|68:196,1,112.5
32,196,67048,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,300,67271,2,0,B|108:340|148:344,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,252,67715,2,0,B|204:244|172:260,1,75
288,320,68160,2,0,B|327:303|324:260,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,176,68604,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,104,68826,5,0,0:0:0:0:
396,216,69048,2,0,B|352:212|324:168,1,75,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,84,69493,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,32,69715,1,4,0:0:0:0:
72,120,69937,1,2,0:0:0:0:
116,232,70160,6,0,B|176:200|168:140,1,112.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,104,70604,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,232,70826,2,0,B|132:272|172:280,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,212,71271,2,0,B|261:205|234:236,1,75
380,280,71715,2,0,B|422:286|449:255,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,144,72160,6,0,B|360:104|320:88|272:88|248:124,1,150,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,176,72826,2,0,B|108:216|148:232|196:232|220:196,1,150
248,124,73493,1,2,0:0:0:0:
204,56,73715,2,0,B|196:16|156:0|108:0|88:24,1,112.5
80,20,74160,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,96,74382,5,2,0:0:0:0:
104,192,74604,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,288,74826,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,296,75048,1,4,0:0:0:0:
104,192,75271,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,88,75493,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,180,75715,6,0,B|240:216|288:232|336:228|344:192,1,112.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,192,76160,1,2,0:0:0:0:
364,72,76382,2,0,B|376:108|420:116|420:116|456:136|456:180,1,150,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,296,77048,1,2,0:0:0:0:
332,348,77271,6,0,B|296:332|280:296|280:296|260:328|216:332,1,150,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,324,77937,1,2,0:0:0:0:
20,232,78160,2,0,B|24:192|64:176|64:176|96:152|88:108,1,150,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
4,24,78826,1,2,0:0:0:0:
124,24,79048,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,24,79271,6,0,B|320:24,1,75,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,104,79715,2,0,B|364:104,1,75,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,104,80382,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,176,80604,6,0,B|284:176,1,75,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,180,81271,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,264,81493,1,2,0:0:0:0:
400,304,81715,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,300,81937,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,248,82160,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,216,82382,1,2,0:0:0:0:
392,160,82604,2,0,B|408:144|400:120,1,37.5
388,84,82826,5,6,0:0:0:0:
304,48,83048,2,0,B|268:68|232:60,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,68,83493,2,0,B|172:96|184:136|168:180|140:200,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,264,84160,1,2,0:0:0:0:
12,328,84382,6,0,B|32:360|76:376|128:380|176:372|212:332,1,225,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,268,85271,2,0,B|256:236|212:220|160:216|112:224|76:264,1,225,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,344,86382,5,4,0:0:0:0:
436,300,86604,2,0,B|464:272,1,37.5
476,236,86826,1,2,0:0:0:0:
440,140,87048,2,0,B|412:112|408:72,1,75
512,92,87493,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,156,87715,2,0,B|408:188|368:200|320:192|304:172,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,176,88160,5,0,0:0:0:0:
196,204,88382,2,0,B|160:224|160:268,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,260,88826,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,188,89048,2,0,B|156:160|164:120,1,75
192,20,89493,2,0,B|176:56|156:84|116:100|76:96,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,300,90382,5,2,0:0:0:0:
116,348,90604,2,0,B|156:360|188:340,1,75
264,268,91048,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,340,91271,2,0,B|160:312|156:272|160:228|184:212,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,204,91715,5,0,0:0:0:0:
232,128,91937,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,88,92160,1,2,0:0:0:0:
408,84,92382,2,0,B|448:100|452:128|432:160|400:164|372:144|376:116,1,150
388,20,93048,1,2,0:0:0:0:
464,200,93493,6,0,B|480:236|472:280|440:304,1,112.5
416,324,93937,2,0,B|380:340|344:332,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,356,94382,2,0,B|220:336|220:296,1,75
240,192,94826,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,48,95271,6,0,B|348:88|316:116|276:120,1,112.5
240,116,95715,1,2,0:0:0:0:
156,80,95937,2,0,B|112:40|44:56|20:100,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,144,96604,2,0,B|120:172|132:212|120:240|96:276,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,288,97048,6,0,B|100:324|148:340|184:324,1,112.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,304,97493,1,2,0:0:0:0:
268,184,97715,2,0,B|256:220|272:264|324:288|352:280,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,248,98382,1,2,0:0:0:0:
424,40,98826,6,0,B|396:20|336:40|332:76,1,112.5
320,112,99271,1,2,0:0:0:0:
420,188,99493,2,0,B|424:148|400:116,2,75
372,276,100160,1,2,0:0:0:0:
140,344,100604,5,2,0:0:0:0:
236,248,100826,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,360,101048,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,248,101271,6,0,B|212:220|216:172|240:132|276:124,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,116,101937,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,272,102160,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,102271,12,0,103937,0:0:0:0:

Flower

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Topic Starter

Flower 2013-05-12T15:31:22+00:00

kanpakyin wrote:
hello.

[General]
The offset is sightly early (sure) please change the offset to 1053
The combo color is inconsistent. Checked that please~
AIBAT indicates that the tags are also inconsistent.

[Easy]
Beatmap design/suggestion
(These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
00:11:048 - Remove one green line there, one of them are meaningless. done
00:47:271 (1) - hum..The slider shape looks quite bad imo, so I did some adjustment on it. Here is a reference, take it under consideration please. I will give you the code. done
277,106,47271,6,0,B|226:124|194:64|144:85,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
01:19:271 (1) - I don't feel like a spinner here because the vocal is still singing. I would rather remove the spinner and map this part or partially map it and then start the spinner at 01:20:826 - ? can't agree. the vocal is actually background chorus. I feel it's more like a break.
Hitsound
(These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
00:18:826 (1) - How about to add a whistle at the beginning of the slider to fit the music and pitch there? I feel soft normal is enough. No change
00:20:160 (2) - ^Same, but add it at the end of the slider. ^
00:27:271 (3) - ah, please remove the whistle from the entire slider because this makes some noise which doesn't fit the music. After that, add a whistle at the beginning and the end of the slider. done
00:37:937 (2) - Remove the whistle at the end of the slider please, it doesn't fit the music that much. done
00:40:604 (4) - Add a clap sound at the beginning of the slider to fit the drum sound there? done
00:42:160 (2) - ^Same, add a s2 clap at the reverse of the slider done
00:49:048 (3) - How about to add a whistle at the beginning and the end of the slider? It sounds cool imo. Added on the head. did not add on the tail, it sounds tedious
01:23:271 - Make this tick back to soft hitsound? The tick doesn't fit the music that well.
[n y a's Normal]
Beatmap design/suggestion
(These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
00:11:937 - unused green line, better to remove it. done
00:17:048 (3,4,1) - Inconsistent spacing. I don't know are you doing this intentionally or not but be careful, this kind of spacing might confuse the player. I highly suggest changing it. [/color]
Hitsound
(These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
01:17:937 (4) - This clap is too sudden and doesn't fit the music. I would rather remove it or change it to normal hitsound. there is such sound in the music. instead I change it to 60% volume

[Athena's Hard]
Difficulty setting
(I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
OD +1 to balance the difficulty setting?
circle size +1 感覺好一點 spacing神馬的都打得比較舒服
Beatmap design/suggestion
(These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
00:13:049 (9,1) - This jump is quite meaningless in my opinion because the spacing isn't that big so it doesn't feel like a jump during gameplay. I would use normal distance there if I were you.
suggestion

[Fionana's Insane]
No change until I contackt Fionana
Beatmap design/suggestion
(These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
00:15:271 (1) - I think you can remove the stack and then make a jump there because I can hear a strong downbeat there.
01:42:160 (8) - ^Same, I think you can stack this note at 01:42:382 (1) -
Hitsound
(These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
00:05:715 (3) - Change the sliderend to 5% volume since 10% is too loud imo.
00:32:160 (4) - How about to add a clap sound at the reverse of the slider to fit the drum sound there?
01:15:715 (1) - How about to add a whistle at the beginning of the slider to fit the pitch and the sound behind the music?
01:34:160 (5) - Remove the whistle at the beginning of the slider and add it at the end of the slider to fit the drum sound better as you do this at 01:33:493 -
01:42:382 (1,2) - These whistle sound weird. I would rather remove them and only add few on suitable place if I were you.

[Insane]
Beatmap design/suggestion
(These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
00:55:937 (1,1,1) - Spamming new combo isn't that necessary here imo. Please remove the new combo at 00:56:382 - and 00:56:826 - done
01:19:382 (1) - I don't feel like a spinner here because the vocal is still singing. I would rather remove the spinner and map this part Same as Easy
01:43:271 (1,1,1,1) - Same as 00:55:937 done
Hitsound
(These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
00:01:049 (1) - Add a whistle here to fit the pitch and the next pattern (00:04:604 (1) - ) ? done
00:09:937 (1) - Please change the slidertick back to softhitsound. This is extremly weird. Especially the slider (2)- is a clap sound. done
00:14:826 (4) - Remove this clap and then start using normal hitsound at 00:14:715 - to 00:15:271 - ? Can't agree. I feel less flow removing the clap
00:28:160 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Weird hitclap placement. How about using whistle instead of clap? ^
00:40:604 (6) - Remove clap there and then change this to normal hitsound ^
這diff的clap sound放的有點怪

[Taiko]
00:09:160 (2) - Diplet sounds weird, probably move this note to 00:09:048 - ? done
00:44:826 (1,2,3,1) - ^Same, change this back to 1/2 would be much better done
01:40:382 (2,1,2) - kkd done

感覺insane的hitsound不搞一下的話很難泡下手.......

Melophobia wrote:
Good hitsounds. <3
咦

Thanks for modding~!

Fionana

252 posts

Joined April 2011

Fionana 2013-05-12T16:58:45+00:00

SPOILER

[Fionana's Insane]

Beatmap design/suggestion
(These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
1. 00:15:271 (1) - I think you can remove the stack and then make a jump there because I can hear a strong downbeat there. All changed except this one..
2. 01:42:160 (8) - ^Same, I think you can stack this note at 01:42:382 (1) -
Hitsound
(These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
1. 00:05:715 (3) - Change the sliderend to 5% volume since 10% is too loud imo.
2. 00:32:160 (4) - How about to add a clap sound at the reverse of the slider to fit the drum sound there?
3. 01:15:715 (1) - How about to add a whistle at the beginning of the slider to fit the pitch and the sound behind the music?
4. 01:34:160 (5) - Remove the whistle at the beginning of the slider and add it at the end of the slider to fit the drum sound better as you do this at 01:33:493 -
5. 01:42:382 (1,2) - These whistle sound weird. I would rather remove them and only add few on suitable place if I were you.

>tetsutaro, kanpakyin
Thanks for your moding!!

http://puu.sh/2S2Zv.osu

kanpakyin

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kanpakyin 2013-05-12T17:09:33+00:00

我主要是覺得那個clap (ka ka ka)的那個放的有點多...而且有一些有點怪怪的所以如果要處理的話就搞那個就好了

Flower

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Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

Flower 2013-05-12T18:09:00+00:00

kanpakyin wrote:
我主要是覺得那個clap (ka ka ka)的那個放的有點多...而且有一些有點怪怪的所以如果要處理的話就搞那個就好了

我觉得还好啊……做出一点让步把一些串的音量降低10% 你看好不好

kanpakyin

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kanpakyin 2013-05-13T09:36:33+00:00

[General]

Offset重新測一了次, 感覺現在還是快了一點... 重測之後是1056 這次肯定了

[Taiko]

Tons of unsnapped notes
感覺volume有點大聲. 我建議全程用normal-60% hitsound就好
01:28:052 - Add a note here to form a triplet and then remove the note at 01:28:275 - . The rhythm sounds better in this way.
01:28:826 (187,188,189,190,191) - ddkkd?

Flower

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Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

Flower 2013-05-13T20:30:41+00:00

kanpakyin wrote:
[General]
Offset重新測一了次, 感覺現在還是快了一點... 重測之後是1056 這次肯定了
[Taiko]
Tons of unsnapped notes
感覺volume有點大聲. 我建議全程用normal-60% hitsound就好
01:28:052 - Add a note here to form a triplet and then remove the note at 01:28:275 - . The rhythm sounds better in this way.
01:28:826 (187,188,189,190,191) - ddkkd?

all fixed. thanks again~

10nya

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Joined February 2011

10nya 2013-05-15T13:00:39+00:00

thnkx for fixing Flower orz ;w;

kanpakyin

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kanpakyin 2013-05-16T12:33:08+00:00

Bubbled.

(ノ・ω・)ノ

Flower

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Topic Starter

Flower 2013-05-16T20:26:13+00:00

kanpakyin wrote:
Bubbled.

(ノ・ω・)ノ

(´・ω・`) thx

[CSGA]Ar3sgice

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Joined July 2011

[CSGA]Ar3sgice 2013-05-17T03:53:18+00:00

四暗刻

10nya

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Joined February 2011

10nya 2013-05-17T07:48:11+00:00

YEAH! x'D

Athena Tennos

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Joined February 2010

Athena Tennos 2013-05-17T07:49:45+00:00

Yoooooooooooo~

pw384

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Joined January 2012

pw384 2013-05-17T10:49:43+00:00

233

LKs

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Joined August 2009

LKs 2013-05-20T14:19:33+00:00

amended the timing(added several red sections during the intro)

reb

raririn

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Joined October 2011

raririn 2013-05-21T11:08:15+00:00

感觉十万年才泡

NewRulerNA

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NewRulerNA 2013-05-26T09:12:28+00:00

hi
found little issues, please fix before ranking.

[Easy]

00:08:165 (1) - unsnapped note.

[Normal]

00:08:165 (1) - same as Easy

of course, no kd pls.

shinku <333

Colin Hou

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Colin Hou 2013-05-27T11:50:54+00:00

[General]

反AV画质/音质增强包: http://puu.sh/32c1r background的话, 拿这个好了 offset自己试试要打本去了

[Fionana's Insane]

01:15:278 (2,3,1) - 这个距离增长应该可以再柔和点
01:32:833 (5,6,1) - 把6稍往右移一下?
01:43:944 (3) - 听起来感觉更像一个到01:44:055的slider 而且感觉可以摆个跳

[Insane]

01:44:055 - 加个note
00:09:944 (1) - clap去了吧(密度减半的意思

[Athena's Hard]

00:07:721 (1) - 不是故意的话就加个new combo吧
00:10:611 (9,1) - 教练这俩slidertick好奇怪
01:42:278 (1) - 这个01:44:055结束好点

[n y a's Normal]

01:42:278 (1) - 同Hard

[Easy]

01:42:278 (1) - 同Hard

[Taiko]

0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
把加下划线的值调整下, 让真空的脸露出来吧..
intro部分下的太密的感觉
01:26:389 ~ 01:29:944 - 这一段也和后面的差距略大建议在kiai结束到末尾的这一段做下平衡简言之就是1/1的小break要么平均下或者避免连续用
01:44:055 - ka

没想到这么久, 爬山去了

Flower

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Flower 2013-05-27T13:52:14+00:00

Colin Hou wrote:
SPOILER
[General]
反AV画质/音质增强包: http://puu.sh/32c1r background的话, 拿这个好了 offset自己试试要打本去了
[Fionana's Insane]
01:15:278 (2,3,1) - 这个距离增长应该可以再柔和点 ok
01:32:833 (5,6,1) - 把6稍往右移一下? ok
01:43:944 (3) - 听起来感觉更像一个到01:44:055的slider 而且感觉可以摆个跳我认为不是
[Insane]
01:44:055 - 加个note 同fionana's Insane
00:09:944 (1) - clap去了吧(密度减半的意思没发现这个的必要
[Athena's Hard]
00:07:721 (1) - 不是故意的话就加个new combo吧 ok
00:10:611 (9,1) - 教练这俩slidertick好奇怪 ok
01:42:278 (1) - 这个01:44:055结束好点同上
[n y a's Normal]
01:42:278 (1) - 同Hard
[Easy]
01:42:278 (1) - 同Hard
[Taiko]
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
把加下划线的值调整下, 让真空的脸露出来吧.. ok
intro部分下的太密的感觉 ok
01:26:389 ~ 01:29:944 - 这一段也和后面的差距略大建议在kiai结束到末尾的这一段做下平衡简言之就是1/1的小break要么平均下或者避免连续用 ok
01:44:055 - ka ok
没想到这么久, 爬山去了

需要再检查一下offset，感觉不太对劲
Thanks for modding~!

LunarSakuya

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LunarSakuya 2013-05-28T05:42:44+00:00

Timing check

BPM: 126
Offset: 887 (-10)

BPM: 126
Offset: 4444 (-10)

BPM: 135
Offset: 7110 (-10)

BPM: 135
Offset: 7996 (-14)

please check for yourself to make sure you agree!
Don't forget to check for unsnapped notes after changing
Good luck!!

Flower

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Flower 2013-05-28T06:36:59+00:00

All fixed.

Colin Hou

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Colin Hou 2013-05-30T11:30:02+00:00

recheck

[Insane]
00:07:554 (3) - length change to '189.144', you can find the original length in osu by search 7554, and in that line '256,144,7554,2,0,B|328:180|312:272|256:296,1,190,12|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:', the underlined one is the to-be-fixed target.

[Hard]
00:07:110 - keep volume as 40?
00:07:554 (1) - length change to '149.324'
00:20:440 (4) - missing whistle at the end

[Fionana's Insane]
00:07:110 - volume change too sudden

Flower

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Flower 2013-05-30T11:35:43+00:00

all fixed~

Colin Hou

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Colin Hou 2013-05-30T11:39:36+00:00

okay have you bubble back