eufonius - Hikari Kagayaku Sekai [Osu|Taiko]‬ · forum‬

10nya

Joined February 2011

10nya 2013-04-27T04:49:32+00:00

remapped few part also thanks for modding! >_<

osu file format v12

[General]
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Countdown: 0
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StackLeniency: 0.7
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[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Hikari Kagayaku Sekai
TitleUnicode:Hikari Kagayaku Sekai
Artist:eufonius
ArtistUnicode:eufonius
Creator:Flower
Version:n y a's Normal
Source:Irotoridori no Hikari
Tags:favorite riya - t e n n y a - Fionana sekai Athena Tennos String_Ensemble
BeatmapID:176441
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[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
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Flower

1,740 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

Flower 2013-04-27T05:03:14+00:00

wmfchris wrote:
Taiko mod as requested.

00:04:604 - As the melody rises only I'll prefer ddkk here.
00:12:160 - Try k D---ddk D here. Notice that 00:12:160 - and 00:13:048 - has the same note so it's a bit odd to have kdd there.
00:32:160 - You are following the drums quite close but not this one. The drum sounds from the music between your notes are clearly audiable so try to change the pattern.
00:52:382 - spinner itself doesn't correspond to a vocal note in the song, so consider adding an extra note before spinner starts.
00:56:826 - KK feels 'heavier' that fits the music with heavier and higher note.
01:24:604 - nothing special about the note so removing the finish sounds more appropiate. btw 01:26:382 - fits with a finished note.
01:42:604 - from the very last notes they are obviously eariler than the music if you use slower playback, I would advise for a further timing check there.

Pretty smooth in the kiai part but so-so for the rest imo. A bit of inconsistancy occuring over the decorative 2-plets vs 3-plets like 00:12:826 - and 00:21:826 - . As one of them mentioned above those 2-2 pattern may not work very well in the song especially they don't have much on about such kind of character.

All fixed except timing check. The song seems to have an early offset. I have to ask some others. Thanks for modding!

Melophobia

osu! Alumni

2,230 posts

Joined September 2011

Melophobia 2013-04-27T13:21:02+00:00

I bought this game just for Shinku :v

[General]

You need to add some skin elements to complete skin set:
1. approachcircle.png
2. spinner-clear.png
3. spinner-spin.png
4. spinner-osu.png
spinner-background.jpg needs to be in .png format!
Easy difficulty has a wrong Audio lead-in. Make it 1000ms
Disable letterbox in Fionana's Insane and n y a's Normal

[Fionana]

Suggesting having newcombos every downbeat, currently it sometimes counts up over 10 and doesn't look that great tbh.
00:01:493 (3) - Make this slider more curved so the blanket looks better. The same goes to 00:05:270 (3) - as well.
SPOILER
00:04:604 - Add a whistle here and set volume back to the right amount so it'll be consistant with 00:01:049 (1) - .
00:05:826 (1) - As far as I listen a soft whistle fits nicely with this percussion.
00:22:382 - Feels weird to use double whistle here, I'd suggest removing this whistle and add a finish here instead.
00:32:160 (9) - I don't like the angle of this slider, considering how it flows it shouldn't be like that. If I were you I would rotate it a bit counterclockwisely.
00:53:271 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - It'd be cool if there are some normal-hitnormal sounds within this stream.
00:56:382 (4,5,6) - This is obviously overmapped and doesn't make sense at all imo. Prefer if you remove this all and add a 1/2 slider here instead.
00:57:937 (1) - I think you forget to add a finish here.
01:10:826 (8) - 1/1 slider doesn't fit well with the vocal and instruments considering how the singer pronounces.
01:19:937 - 01:20:826 - 01:23:493 - 01:26:382 - 01:27:048 - 01:37:715 - 01:42:160 (8) - I thought there could be some finishes at these points.
01:23:937 (1) - Remove this newcombo. The single combo doesn't make sense.
01:32:715 - There's an extra snare-drum in the song as you can see, so I think a clap fits nicely and sounds good to me.

This difficulty needs some more tweaks and honestly speaking, I don't like the way you use triples in this difficulty.

[Insane]

00:15:160 (7) - Feels better if this note is removed. Also as you can see it's totally overmapped. Though it's not a big deal.
00:18:048 (8) - Just a personal preference, but sounds better to me if there's a whislte on this note instead of (7).
01:17:271 (1,2,3) - There notes are placed too close to each other imo considering how large the spacing betwenn 01:17:048 (3,1) - is.
01:20:826 - Where's note? D: I don't think this blank results in any good and might be pretty boring.
01:24:382 (1) - Make this curved? I just thought the flow between (1) and (2) could be improved by doing this.
SPOILER
01:33:271 (5) - I'd move this note downward for a better flow. Also, blanket.
SPOILER
01:43:937 (1) - It's highly suggested to remove this finish. I can understand why you've added it but as you can see there's no cymbal drum here and it's too echoed imo.

Good hitsounds. <3

[Hard]

00:04:604 - Feels empty here, I think there can be a whistle or custom finish here imo.
00:12:049 (3,6) - A bit overmapped considering the level of this difficulty.
00:14:382 (4) - Maybe add some normal sounds?
00:35:715 (6,1) - Please stack them properly.
00:40:826 - Add a finish here.
00:42:604 - ^
00:53:715 (3,4) - Spacing?
00:54:382 - Finish.
01:35:937 - ^
01:37:048 - ^
01:37:715 - ^ maybe.
01:40:604 - I prefer no finish here.
01:41:271 - Finish.
01:42:271 (1) - Shorten this spinner by 1/4 beat and remove the finish. Also you can add a clap or something I think.

Mostly about hitsounds. Apart from what I mentioned this difficulty is pretty nice and mapped in an unique way.

[Normal]

00:41:715 - Add a finish here.
00:51:493 (2) - Move this a bit leftward maybe? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/725058
01:12:160 - From here this difficulty becomes pretty hard suddenly.. why?
01:42:160 (1) - Shorten this spinner by 1/4 beat, and move the last green line as well.

[Easy]

00:57:048 - Add a clap here instead of the finish.
00:52:604 (1,1,2) - This rhythm is pretty weird imo.. I'd suggest ending the spinner at 00:54:382 - and rearranging the rhythm like this.
SPOILER
01:09:937 (2) - What is the slider end following? I think this slider doesn't need to have a repeat. I personally prefer this rhythm so the notes fit better with the emphasises.
01:15:715 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/2I32r.jpg
01:23:493 - Finish here?

That's all from me. I think you need to get some more mods on the guest Insane and easier diffs as I said above.

That said, the Insane diff is pretty nice to me so I will leave this star icon here for now. Good luck!

Flower

1,740 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

Flower 2013-04-27T13:46:30+00:00

Melophobia wrote:
I bought this game just for Shinku :v

[General]
You need to add some skin elements to complete skin set:
approachcircle.png
spinner-clear.png
spinner-spin.png
spinner-osu.png
spinner-background.jpg needs to be in .png format!
Easy difficulty has a wrong Audio lead-in. Make it 1000ms Done all above. the final one needs to be fixed after nana's and nya's updates
Disable letterbox in Fionana's Insane and n y a's Normal

[Insane]
00:15:160 (7) - Feels better if this note is removed. Also as you can see it's totally overmapped. Though it's not a big deal. I feel blank removing the note. I agree it's overmapping, but does not sound or play bad imo.
00:18:048 (8) - Just a personal preference, but sounds better to me if there's a whislte on this note instead of (7). done
01:17:271 (1,2,3) - There notes are placed too close to each other imo considering how large the spacing betwenn 01:17:048 (3,1) - is. I think it's reasonable. ~~Look at Aha?~~
01:20:826 - Where's note? D: I don't think this blank results in any good and might be pretty boring. Okay. Since there is multiple mods on it, I add notes.
01:24:382 (1) - Make this curved? I just thought the flow between (1) and (2) could be improved by doing this. same as above
SPOILER
01:33:271 (5) - I'd move this note downward for a better flow. Also, blanket. done
SPOILER
01:43:937 (1) - It's highly suggested to remove this finish. I can understand why you've added it but as you can see there's no cymbal drum here and it's too echoed imo. okay
Good hitsounds. <3

[Easy]
00:57:048 - Add a clap here instead of the finish. I changed to clap-finish instead of finish-clap. I think that sounds better.
00:52:604 (1,1,2) - This rhythm is pretty weird imo.. I'd suggest ending the spinner at 00:54:382 - and rearranging the rhythm like this. Umm.. I don't like it... keeping this does not make it bad imo.
SPOILER
01:09:937 (2) - What is the slider end following? I think this slider doesn't need to have a repeat. I personally prefer I feel it play well. However I just reduced the repeat to let it feels better, as previous mods said so.this rhythm so the notes fit better with the emphasises.
01:15:715 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/2I32r.jpg done
01:23:493 - Finish here? doesn't need that imo
That's all from me. I think you need to get some more mods on the guest Insane and easier diffs as I said above.

That said, the Insane diff is pretty nice to me so I will leave this star icon here for now. Good luck!

Thanks for modding~!

[Mahua]

702 posts

Joined November 2010

[Mahua] 2013-04-27T14:56:52+00:00

[General]
来卖萌
[Fionana's Insane]
00:12:937 (4,5) - 个人因素不喜欢这种放置的方法
00:16:382 (4) - ctrl+g怎样
00:44:382 (7) - ^
00:50:826 (1) - wtf是直的好别扭
00:54:382 (12,1,2,3,4) - 听着不太对劲

试试这样

00:58:826 (4,5) - 好吧依然不太对劲滑条放在前note在后？
01:06:160 (7,1,2) - 听着依然不对感觉note 滑条滑条会好一点
[Insane]
00:09:937 (1,2) - 花花你可以用更好的方法来排列这两个滑条
然后没了
[Atan's Hard]
01:01:937 (2) - 感觉要坏事
很多地方打起来不是很通……
感觉就是这个diff坏的事（run
EN没有什么可mod的了祝早rank

Cherry Blossom

3,185 posts

Joined October 2011

Cherry Blossom 2013-04-27T15:39:38+00:00

Hai from PM in game.
(i just testplayed)
It's not a real mod, just suggestions >.>

[General]
I think the mapset needs another taiko diff (at least 2).
Inconsistency in kiai times

[Atan's Hard]

I think, Circle Size 4 is nice, and more playable with AR7.
01:01:937 (2,3) - I was confused here because 3 is closer than 2.
01:13:715 (4) - Lower...
01:41:271 - add finish or whistle or both ?

[Insane]

Here : 01:35:048
My suggestion :

SPOILER

[Fionana's Insane]

00:49:048 (the reverse) x=32 y=132

That's all
Good luck. :p

10nya

2,746 posts

Joined February 2011

10nya 2013-04-27T15:54:29+00:00

Melophobia wrote:
I bought this game just for Shinku :v

[General]
You need to add some skin elements to complete skin set:
approachcircle.png
spinner-clear.png
spinner-spin.png
spinner-osu.png
spinner-background.jpg needs to be in .png format!
Easy difficulty has a wrong Audio lead-in. Make it 1000ms
Disable letterbox in Fionana's Insane and n y a's Normal ok
[Normal]
00:41:715 - Add a finish here. ok
00:51:493 (2) - Move this a bit leftward maybe? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/725058 ok
01:12:160 - From here this difficulty becomes pretty hard suddenly.. why? following vocal at here, should be ok, wont be too hard to DT HR this part i suppose
01:42:160 (1) - Shorten this spinner by 1/4 beat, and move the last green line as well.
That's all from me. I think you need to get some more mods on the guest Insane and easier diffs as I said above.

That said, the Insane diff is pretty nice to me so I will leave this star icon here for now. Good luck!

modding thank you

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 57473
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
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[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1
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TitleUnicode:Hikari Kagayaku Sekai
Artist:eufonius
ArtistUnicode:eufonius
Creator:Flower
Version:n y a's Normal
Source:Irotoridori no Hikari
Tags:favorite riya - t e n n y a - Fionana sekai Athena Tennos String_Ensemble
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
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Sieg

3,981 posts

Joined February 2012

Sieg 2013-04-27T16:07:50+00:00

Hello

General:
Your bg is 800x600 which looks really poor in full-hd resolution, maybe you should try to find better one
I suggest you to not skin cursor this will cause so much rage :3

Easy:
00:27:271 (3,1) - let's make this blanket better http://puu.sh/2I6bW.jpg
132,40,27271,2,2,P|9:93|50:209,1,280,10|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:29:493 (1,2) - ok and this one, it seems that you use old sliders there, I suggest you to make them new 3 point (this will improve overall quality of map), and fix blankets http://puu.sh/2I6hm.jpg Ask me for code if you find this is too hard for you
00:40:604 (4,1,2) - and this maybe too harass for easy, but ok this don't cry for fix or anything just my opinion
01:05:048 (1,2) - let's make something interesting here http://puu.sh/2I6ua.jpg http://puu.sh/2I6uz.jpg
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01:29:937 (1,2,1) - idk, this pattern looks not so great to me for easy i mean, but eh.. don't have any idea how you can improve this :\
well, don't forget to update sliders on this diff don't be lazy, this will improve look slightly

n y a's Normal:
conflict in letterbox during breaks with other diffs, not a big deal at all but remove them
00:15:271 (1,2,3) - this can be improved http://puu.sh/2I6HG.jpg
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01:15:715 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/2I6NG.jpg this will improve flow a bit
diff is nice but can use more good blankets but not all like this so I won't be nazi on this

Atan's Hard:
personal hell for HD players
I mean of course you shouldn't map for mod but this often plays not so well for no-mod as well

Insane:
00:14:382 (1,2) - is this random mapping?
00:14:715 (3) - and this one after ^ random double oh.. this not intuitive to play
00:28:493 (3,4) - again you skip most strongest beat in music here, that's strange
01:34:826 (1,2,3,4) - random doubles again
01:43:271 (1,1,1,1) - this nc spam is not necessary
well, fine I guess :3

Fionana's Insane:
OD 6 is really low for insane, +1
NC on spinners
00:02:048 (1) -
00:05:826 (1) -
00:56:826 (1) -
01:24:382 (1) -
same for sliders as for easy, update them all to new 3 point, this will improve, map look slightly
01:15:271 (2,3) - fix spacing here, music doesn't need this extend
as Insane overmapped a bit but not a big deal, well made

Good Luck!

ertyukjh010

1,415 posts

Joined December 2009

ertyukjh010 2013-04-27T17:16:27+00:00

wow 53000

[General]

You can add a "opening" in Tags.

[Easy]

00:01:048 (1) - resnap, move this to 00:01:049 pls.
00:07:493 (3) - I don't suggest put a short slider in EASY, it's very hard for new player. Add a note at 00:07:715 and instead it, or start at 00:07:271 for slider.
00:09:937 - useless inherited point
00:21:493 (4) - you can delete it and add a note at 00:21:937, like 00:17:493 (2,3)
00:25:493 - I think it's useless inherited point It's because 44% same with 45% for vol.
00:29:826 - useless inherited point
00:36:604 (1,2) - It's not clean to surround. Try this if you feel good http://puu.sh/2I6DS.jpg
348,248,36604,6,0,B|384:264|428:256|456:228|468:200,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:36:937 - useless inherited point
00:37:937 (2,3) - same with 00:36:604 (1,2)
00:40:604 (4,1,2,3) - Too many short slider here. There are including the return and no-return. I think it is not suitable for new player. Try this rhythm http://puu.sh/2I6rR.jpg (The red 3 at 00:39:048)
00:55:715 (1,1) - Too short a timing between spinner and note. I think you can end the spinner at 00:54:382, and add some note start at 00:55:271.
00:56:826 (2) - Same thing with 00:07:493 (3)
01:16:826 (2) - I feel weird here. Try take a return for 01:15:715 (1) to instead this.
01:19:271 (1) - Why put a spinner here @@? You can add a note at 01:18:826 and add more note to instead spinner.
01:31:048 (2) - Same thing with 00:07:493 (3). May be you can add a note at 01:31:271 to instead.
01:34:604 (2) - ^
01:36:382 (2) - ^

I like snow slider style :3

[n y a's Normal]
HP+1

00:18:271 - useless inherited point
00:24:937 - ^
00:26:271 - ^
00:29:382 - ^
00:31:271 (3) - You can copy 00:29:493 (1) and CtrL+H Ctrl+G, make them Symmetry.
00:32:382 (4) - Useless for the second point. Delete it. (Right kick). And weird angle with 00:31:271 (3), Try this http://puu.sh/2I7Ze.jpg
00:42:604 (3) - I can hear "na~~~" here. I think you can add a slider here better. Try this rhythm http://puu.sh/2I8ac.jpg ( Green 2 at 00:41:493)
00:51:271 (1) - miss a clap here? of the tail
00:59:271 (2) - move tail right 2 grid
01:12:160 - useless inherited point
01:18:826 (5) - miss a clap again of tail@@
01:41:160 - useless inherited point

[Atan's Hard]
HP+1 OD+1

00:01:048 (1) - Resnap, move this to 00:01:049
00:14:382 (4) - The stream is start at 00:14:160.
00:36:604 (1) - It's not stack completely with 00:35:937 (6) of tail. Fixed it~
00:37:715 (2,3) - I can see you spent a lot of effort to make it. But I think it's not clean and you use a different distance here, you need to use a 1.20x to surround this. Try this if you feel good http://puu.sh/2I95z.jpg
220,96,37715,2,0,B|268:48|336:60|384:112|372:180,1,225
00:42:604 (3) - Move a tail right 1 grid
00:45:937 (2) - Why use 1.02x of distance here?
00:52:160 (3) - It is blocked with 00:51:493 (2), move it and I can see the number.
00:54:604 (5) - It's not voice here, so take it and start at 00:54:826

[Fionana's Insane]
Some low OD, How about OD7 ?

00:05:604 - useless inherited point
00:02:048 (1) - NC bug here and same thing at 00:05:826、00:56:826、01:24:382. This may unrank 1 year ago. I do not know the rules now, because I just got back from a few days :3
00:14:604 (4) - Same thing with Hard, The stream is start at 00:14:160.
00:55:937 (3,4,1) - Not a voice here, why don't emphasize the sound? http://puu.sh/2I9I8.jpg
01:35:937 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Some ugly of shape @@

In scores, insane than this high scores. I think insane is the Hardest difficulty. But this difficulty SV fast than insane, this is not a good idea. Although I know you will not be changed. But talk about this, if you want to be the best :3

[Insane]
HP+1, too low ~

00:43:271 (2,3,4,5,1) - It's not circular completely
00:58:604 (4) - Different distance with (3) and (5). Put it in the middle?
01:43:271 (1,1,1,1) - Should not use NC if you do not have a special reason

I can see you spent a lot of effort in the shape of stream, Good and I like it

Good Luck for rank~

~~好吧我mod完才發現您會中文QAQ~~

10nya

2,746 posts

Joined February 2011

10nya 2013-04-28T02:30:36+00:00

Sieg wrote:
Hello

n y a's Normal:
conflict in letterbox during breaks with other diffs, not a big deal at all but remove them
tough already fixed it in previous update
00:15:271 (1,2,3) - this can be improved http://puu.sh/2I6HG.jpg
316,124,15271,6,0,P|414:129|457:211,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,212,16604,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,299,17048,2,0,P|313:301|263:211,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
ok

01:15:715 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/2I6NG.jpg this will improve flow a bit
diff is nice but can use more good blankets but not all like this so I won't be nazi on this
ok

Good Luck!

[n y a's Normal]
HP+1

ok

00:18:271 - useless inherited point
00:24:937 - ^
00:26:271 - ^
00:29:382 - ^ all fixed
00:31:271 (3) - You can copy 00:29:493 (1) and CtrL+H Ctrl+G, make them Symmetry. ok
00:32:382 (4) - Useless for the second point. Delete it. (Right kick). And weird angle with 00:31:271 (3), Try this http://puu.sh/2I7Ze.jpg ok
00:42:604 (3) - I can hear "na~~~" here. I think you can add a slider here better. Try this rhythm http://puu.sh/2I8ac.jpg ( Green 2 at 00:41:493) i want to make something different here orz
00:51:271 (1) - miss a clap here? of the tail wuups added
00:59:271 (2) - move tail right 2 grid ok
01:12:160 - useless inherited point
01:18:826 (5) - miss a clap again of tail@@
01:41:160 - useless inherited point
all fix

thanks for modding

code

osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 57473
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

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Title:Hikari Kagayaku Sekai
TitleUnicode:Hikari Kagayaku Sekai
Artist:eufonius
ArtistUnicode:eufonius
Creator:Flower
Version:n y a's Normal
Source:Irotoridori no Hikari
Tags:favorite riya - t e n n y a - Fionana sekai Athena Tennos String_Ensemble
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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LunarSakuya

osu! Alumni

1,704 posts

Joined August 2011

LunarSakuya 2013-04-28T04:58:53+00:00

hi~

General
- Your approach circle file is misnamed. Change it from "1approachcircle.png" to "approachcircle.png"
- Delete the .osb file, the file name seems like from an older version of the map
- You should probably get another Taiko diff. This rule's been implemented for quite some time now.

Easy
00:01:048 (1) - Not allowed to silence sliders & notes. At the tail, try at least 15% volume.
00:04:604 (2) - ^
00:23:715 (2) - custom clap on tail instead of (3) for hitsound consistency?
00:32:604 (4) - Clap
00:52:604 (1) - sounds better if you extend this to the next red tick imo
01:05:048 (1) - one of the custom Finishes on the head would sound nice since it's a new stanza
01:17:271 (3) - custom 1 Finish on head

n y a's Normal
Uncheck "Letterbox during breaks" like the other diffs. Though not rly needed, it's just for consistency lol

00:41:715 (3) - Finish on head
00:54:160 (1) - Sounds more natural if you start this spinner at 00:54:382 (the next white tick)

Atan's Hard
00:01:048 (1,1) - these spinners sound too loud during the spin, lower the volume
00:12:382 (5) - Finish
00:25:493 (1) - try this angle http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/726427, looked kinda funny touching 00:23:937 (4) -
00:27:937 (1) - Start this spinner back at 00:27:715 (6) - , maybe more natural with the vocal's extension
00:29:493 (1) - move this away from the center so it's not blocked by the spinner's hitburst
00:39:048 (1) -

highly suggest you separate the ends more, better to be safe than sorry
00:39:937 (3) - try moving this down here so it's not covering the pink (2) for no reason http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/726438
00:42:604 (3) - need some hitsound on the head
00:45:937 (2) - move a couple grids further away from (1), seems closer than usual
00:52:382 (4) -

again separate the ends
00:53:937 (4) - Finish on tail
00:54:604 (5) - ^
01:08:160 (5) - try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/726447 better cursor flow imo
01:15:048 (4) - Finish with a lower volume?
01:32:382 (4) -

separate ends
01:35:937 (3) - Finish on head
01:37:048 (1) - ^
01:37:715 (3) - ^
01:41:271 (1) - ^

Insane
00:15:271 (1,2,3) - you can adjust this into an even pinwheel thing http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/726454 if you like
00:28:604 - Try this rhythm http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/726461, hear the bg music closely
00:50:826 (1,2,3) - Equalize spacing, no reason not to
01:40:271 - Add note like 01:38:493 (4) - ?

Fionana's Insane
00:01:493 (3) - the tail sounds almost silent, try 15% to be safe
00:05:270 (3) - ^
01:18:160 (2) - Finish on head sounds nice
01:23:493 (4) - ^
01:31:048 (3) - seemed kinda random, curve it and try something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/726475
nice

Great map! <3

Athena Tennos

1,038 posts

Joined February 2010

Athena Tennos 2013-04-28T09:33:01+00:00

誒~說法各種各樣。把一些當初惡趣味坑人的地方remove了。。hitsound。。該加的都加了。。唔。差不多就這些吧。。一個一個回好麻煩/w\~

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Flower

1,740 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

Flower 2013-04-28T12:22:31+00:00

Updated. Too many mods with too many diffs... I am to lazy to reply to all mods... Fixed most that I think improving. To all, thanks for modding!

10nya

2,746 posts

Joined February 2011

10nya 2013-04-28T14:53:41+00:00

tough I already uncheck letter box orz

all applied (tough I already added finish at previous mod)

update

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Hikari_kagayaku_sekai.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 57473
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 104160
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Hikari Kagayaku Sekai
TitleUnicode:Hikari Kagayaku Sekai
Artist:eufonius
ArtistUnicode:eufonius
Creator:Flower
Version:n y a's Normal
Source:Irotoridori no Hikari
Tags:favorite riya - t e n n y a - Fionana sekai Athena Tennos String_Ensemble
BeatmapID:176441
BeatmapSetID:53000

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
Video,320,"irohika_OP.flv"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Chloe

1,162 posts

Joined April 2011

Chloe 2013-04-29T06:36:55+00:00

Hello : ) Just as some suggestions.

[General]

所有diff的spinner都可以静音结尾需要音效可以加绿线

[Easy]

01:26:382 (1) - 尾巴的w可以去掉

[n y a's Normal]

00:31:271 (3) - Change to↓
SPOILER
00:52:826 (1) - 加个NOTE或者把00:53:048 (1) - 去掉换根1/2的slider
01:20:826 (4) - Change to↓
SPOILER
01:22:826 (1) - 停在01:25:493 (1) - add 01:25:937 (1) - 和01:26:382 (1) -

[Atan's Hard]

01:43:937 (1) - 转圈这里结束

[Insane]

00:04:604 (1) - 加个w
00:14:826 (4) - 去掉r加个w 00:14:937 (5) - 删 00:15:160 (6) - 去掉w 00:15:048 (5,6) - 手动调整一下位置
00:23:604 (5) - ADD
00:32:271 (5) - 去掉r 这里不加听起来更舒服
00:28:160 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 虽然可以自创不过我觉得不好跟00:35:271 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 一样?
00:29:493 (1) - 要有弧度 just like ↓
SPOILER
00:34:826 (1,2) - 这边如果能有2根绿线 50% 40%这样会锦上添花?
00:47:715 (4) - 加个w或e都差不多个人偏好w
00:50:493 (4) - 加个r
00:51:271 (3) - ^
00:55:493 (3) - e
00:55:715 (4) - w
01:01:493 (1,2,3,4,5) - 建议24clap然后01:02:604 (4) - +个r
01:24:160 (4) - e
01:42:826 (3) - w
这DIFF Soft2的finish其实可以多用

[Fionana's Insane]

OFFSET 5604/7826的绿线似乎没用
00:49:937 (4,5) - 没必要2个W吧红白线那4个点就可以了
00:51:271 (2) - & 00:52:160 (4) - R
00:53:382 (3) - 删然后这部分调整下位置
01:27:271 (4) - & 01:34:160 (5) - 的尾巴加个w 这部分可以考虑多加点w
01:42:382 (1,2) - 没必要2个W 同前

Nice rhythm and good job. ^^

Flower

1,740 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

Flower 2013-04-29T10:32:57+00:00

Chloe wrote:
Hello : ) Just as some suggestions.

[General]
所有diff的spinner都可以静音结尾需要音效可以加绿线我认为spinnerspin不应该静音规则也不允许
[Easy]
01:26:382 (1) - 尾巴的w可以去掉
[n y a's Normal]
00:31:271 (3) - Change to↓
SPOILER
00:52:826 (1) - 加个NOTE或者把00:53:048 (1) - 去掉换根1/2的slider
01:20:826 (4) - Change to↓
SPOILER
01:22:826 (1) - 停在01:25:493 (1) - add 01:25:937 (1) - 和01:26:382 (1) -

[Atan's Hard]
01:43:937 (1) - 转圈这里结束
[Insane]
00:04:604 (1) - 加个w
00:14:826 (4) - 去掉r加个w 00:14:937 (5) - 删 00:15:160 (6) - 去掉w 00:15:048 (5,6) - 手动调整一下位置
00:23:604 (5) - ADD
00:32:271 (5) - 去掉r 这里不加听起来更舒服
00:28:160 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 虽然可以自创不过我觉得不好跟00:35:271 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 一样?
00:29:493 (1) - 要有弧度 just like ↓
SPOILER
00:34:826 (1,2) - 这边如果能有2根绿线 50% 40%这样会锦上添花?
00:47:715 (4) - 加个w或e都差不多个人偏好w
00:50:493 (4) - 加个r
00:51:271 (3) - ^
00:55:493 (3) - e
00:55:715 (4) - w
01:01:493 (1,2,3,4,5) - 建议24clap然后01:02:604 (4) - +个r
01:24:160 (4) - e
01:42:826 (3) - w
这DIFF Soft2的finish其实可以多用
[Fionana's Insane]
OFFSET 5604/7826的绿线似乎没用
00:49:937 (4,5) - 没必要2个W吧红白线那4个点就可以了
00:51:271 (2) - & 00:52:160 (4) - R
00:53:382 (3) - 删然后这部分调整下位置
01:27:271 (4) - & 01:34:160 (5) - 的尾巴加个w 这部分可以考虑多加点w
01:42:382 (1,2) - 没必要2个W 同前

Nice rhythm and good job. ^^

大约采纳了一半左右的mod，鉴于音效问题见仁见智我就不详细回复了。Thanks for modding~!

10nya

2,746 posts

Joined February 2011

10nya 2013-04-30T10:25:32+00:00

Chloe wrote:
Hello : ) Just as some suggestions.

[General]
所有diff的spinner都可以静音结尾需要音效可以加绿线
[n y a's Normal]
00:31:271 (3) - Change to↓
SPOILER
it already orz
00:52:826 (1) - 加个NOTE或者把00:53:048 (1) - 去掉换根1/2的slider
somehow fixed
01:20:826 (4) - Change to↓
SPOILER
no I want to follow vocal here
01:22:826 (1) - 停在01:25:493 (1) - add 01:25:937 (1) - 和01:26:382 (1) -
somehow fixed!

thanks for modding

code

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Hikari_kagayaku_sekai.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 57473
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 104160
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Hikari Kagayaku Sekai
TitleUnicode:Hikari Kagayaku Sekai
Artist:eufonius
ArtistUnicode:eufonius
Creator:Flower
Version:n y a's Normal
Source:Irotoridori no Hikari
Tags:favorite opening riya - t e n n y a - Fionana sekai Athena Tennos String_Ensemble
BeatmapID:176441
BeatmapSetID:53000

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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103271,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
103715,-100,4,2,1,10,0,0
103937,-100,4,2,2,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 254,171,237
Combo2 : 140,230,255
Combo3 : 253,140,134
Combo4 : 187,255,204
SliderBorder : 255,255,255

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also thanks flower for translating \xD\

Foreverends

992 posts

Joined July 2011

Foreverends 2013-05-04T02:59:47+00:00

超~~~遲來的mod >.<
so sorry for the delay ;w;

Taiko
00:08:826 (2) - d
00:09:715 (1,2,3,4) - 由o ooo轉成ooo o試試

像這個

->

00:13:715 (4,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,2) - 由o x o ooo xoo轉成o x xoo o xxo試試
00:21:271 (1,1,2,3,4) - o x oox好像比較順
00:36:048 - 放一個k, 之後將00:36:382 (1) - 轉成d
00:37:493 (3,1) - 把這删掉,之後在00:37:715 - 補一個d
00:38:271 - 個人認為補一個k更合rhythm,你細心聽一下背景音就明白的了lol
00:38:826 - ^

因其它diff太神,所以只摸taiko ;w;
sorry Flower ;w;

Flower

1,740 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

Flower 2013-05-04T17:41:13+00:00

Foreverends wrote:
超~~~遲來的mod >.<
so sorry for the delay ;w;

Taiko
00:08:826 (2) - d done
00:09:715 (1,2,3,4) - 由o ooo轉成ooo o試試 done
像這個
->
00:13:715 (4,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,2) - 由o x o ooo xoo轉成o x xoo o xxo試試改了下有点奇怪所以改成了别的
00:21:271 (1,1,2,3,4) - o x oox好像比較順 nope
00:36:048 - 放一個k, 之後將00:36:382 (1) - 轉成d 改了第一个，第二个不变
00:37:493 (3,1) - 把這删掉,之後在00:37:715 - 補一個d done
00:38:271 - 個人認為補一個k更合rhythm,你細心聽一下背景音就明白的了lol done
00:38:826 - ^ done

因其它diff太神,所以只摸taiko ;w;
sorry Flower ;w;

Thanks for moding~

Fionana

252 posts

Joined April 2011

Fionana 2013-05-06T13:07:30+00:00

A big thanks to the modders for their moding and also to Flower who helped me to fix the diff, sry for being so late T_T

tetsutaro

3,863 posts

Joined February 2008

tetsutaro 2013-05-10T12:39:14+00:00

的改圖喔！

[General]

把日語歌名也放進去

[Easy]

大部分是以滑條加圓圈做成實際上是均等1拍的節奏，有悶
例如 00:43:715 (1,2,3) - 可以(1)的尾、(2)和(3)的頭都早1/2拍
00:52:604 (1) - 轉盤不與歌詞緊扣。00:50:826 (1) - 在 00:51:937 停下，然後讓 00:52:604 (1) 移前1/2拍。

[Normal]
00:59:271 (2) 一類 - 頭晚1/2拍，原本的地方加圓圈
00:59:271 (2) and similar - Start 1/2 later, add circle to original beginning

[Hard]

00:04:826~ - 大部分是以滑條加圓圈做成實際上是均等1/2拍的節奏，有悶

00:04:826~ - Most are only sliders and circles forming a uniform 1/2 rhythm, and sounds a bit boring.
00:01:049 (1,1) - 不與音樂緊扣。00:01:049 (1) 尾及 00:04:826 (1) 頭都早1/2拍
00:01:049 (1,1) - Does not closely fit the music. Move 1/2 earlier the end of 00:01:049 (1) and the beginning of 00:04:826 (1)
00:39:048 (1); 00:52:382 (4); 01:32:382 (4) - 可以再圓一點
00:39:048 (1); 00:52:382 (4); 01:32:382 (4) - Could be rounder
00:59:493 (1,2) 一類滑條早1/4拍完來塞圓圈的有多了點
Sliders ending 1/4 earlier for a circle like 00:59:493 (1,2)
01:42:271 (1) - 不與音樂緊扣。頭吃掉前面的(3)
01:42:271 (1) - Does not closely fit the music. Span the beginning over the (3)

[Taiko] 目測難度：鬼級7星

前後相似的部分的音符排位不大相關。最好的是
01:43:937 (4) - 這邊的音樂跟 01:43:271 (1,2,3) 時的是同音高。變成咔（大小沒所謂）

[Fionana]
00:02:048 (1), 00:05:826 (1) - 不與音樂緊扣，但是在要保持前後的前提下有夠難修的
00:14:604 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - (4)~(8) 和 (1) 的時間分隔有不同，會造成混淆？
00:14:604 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - (4)~(8) and (1) have different time spacing, would it be too confusing?

[Insane]

目測上去有地方不合分隔 e.g. 00:21:493 (1,2,3,4,5)
00:01:937 - 移除休息

EDIT: Forgot about the GDs. Adding English version for those parts.

Last edited by tetsutaro 2013-05-10T14:08:54+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Flower

1,740 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

Flower 2013-05-10T13:49:51+00:00

Thanks for modding. Will reply later. To nya, atan, fionana, I will reply to this mod. if you think my replies have problems then pm me/in-game puush me the code, instead of posting.

Athena Tennos

1,038 posts

Joined February 2010

Athena Tennos 2013-05-10T22:55:17+00:00

幫我把diffname改成Athena's Hard吧/w\~

osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 57473
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

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Title:Hikari Kagayaku Sekai
TitleUnicode:Hikari Kagayaku Sekai
Artist:eufonius
ArtistUnicode:eufonius
Creator:Flower
Version:Atan's Hard
Source:Irotoridori no Hikari
Tags:favorite riya opening - t e n n y a - Fionana sekai Athena Tennos String_Ensemble
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kanpakyin

Global Moderator

4,236 posts

Joined June 2010

kanpakyin 2013-05-12T08:18:02+00:00

hello.

[General]

The offset is sightly early (sure) please change the offset to 1053
The combo color is inconsistent. Checked that please~
AIBAT indicates that the tags are also inconsistent.

[Easy]

Beatmap design/suggestion
(These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
1. 00:11:048 - Remove one green line there, one of them are meaningless.
2. 00:47:271 (1) - hum..The slider shape looks quite bad imo, so I did some adjustment on it. Here is a reference, take it under consideration please. I will give you the code.
```
277,106,47271,6,0,B|226:124|194:64|144:85,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
```
3. 01:19:271 (1) - I don't feel like a spinner here because the vocal is still singing. I would rather remove the spinner and map this part or partially map it and then start the spinner at 01:20:826 - ?
Hitsound
(These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
1. 00:18:826 (1) - How about to add a whistle at the beginning of the slider to fit the music and pitch there?
2. 00:20:160 (2) - ^Same, but add it at the end of the slider.
3. 00:27:271 (3) - ah, please remove the whistle from the entire slider because this makes some noise which doesn't fit the music. After that, add a whistle at the beginning and the end of the slider.
4. 00:37:937 (2) - Remove the whistle at the end of the slider please, it doesn't fit the music that much.
5. 00:40:604 (4) - Add a clap sound at the beginning of the slider to fit the drum sound there?
6. 00:42:160 (2) - ^Same, add a s2 clap at the reverse of the slider
7. 00:49:048 (3) - How about to add a whistle at the beginning and the end of the slider? It sounds cool imo.
8. 01:23:271 - Make this tick back to soft hitsound? The tick doesn't fit the music that well.

[n y a's Normal]

Beatmap design/suggestion
(These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
1. 00:11:937 - unused green line, better to remove it.
2. 00:17:048 (3,4,1) - Inconsistent spacing. I don't know are you doing this intentionally or not but be careful, this kind of spacing might confuse the player. I highly suggest changing it.
Hitsound
(These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
1. 01:17:937 (4) - This clap is too sudden and doesn't fit the music. I would rather remove it or change it to normal hitsound.

[Athena's Hard]

Difficulty setting
(I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
1. OD +1 to balance the difficulty setting?
2. circle size +1 感覺好一點 spacing神馬的都打得比較舒服
Beatmap design/suggestion
(These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
1. 00:13:049 (9,1) - This jump is quite meaningless in my opinion because the spacing isn't that big so it doesn't feel like a jump during gameplay. I would use normal distance there if I were you.
  suggestion

[Fionana's Insane]

Beatmap design/suggestion
(These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
1. 00:15:271 (1) - I think you can remove the stack and then make a jump there because I can hear a strong downbeat there.
2. 01:42:160 (8) - ^Same, I think you can stack this note at 01:42:382 (1) -
Hitsound
(These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
1. 00:05:715 (3) - Change the sliderend to 5% volume since 10% is too loud imo.
2. 00:32:160 (4) - How about to add a clap sound at the reverse of the slider to fit the drum sound there?
3. 01:15:715 (1) - How about to add a whistle at the beginning of the slider to fit the pitch and the sound behind the music?
4. 01:34:160 (5) - Remove the whistle at the beginning of the slider and add it at the end of the slider to fit the drum sound better as you do this at 01:33:493 -
5. 01:42:382 (1,2) - These whistle sound weird. I would rather remove them and only add few on suitable place if I were you.

[Insane]

Beatmap design/suggestion
(These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
1. 00:55:937 (1,1,1) - Spamming new combo isn't that necessary here imo. Please remove the new combo at 00:56:382 - and 00:56:826 -
2. 01:19:382 (1) - I don't feel like a spinner here because the vocal is still singing. I would rather remove the spinner and map this part
3. 01:43:271 (1,1,1,1) - Same as 00:55:937
Hitsound
(These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
1. 00:01:049 (1) - Add a whistle here to fit the pitch and the next pattern (00:04:604 (1) - ) ?
2. 00:09:937 (1) - Please change the slidertick back to softhitsound. This is extremly weird. Especially the slider (2)- is a clap sound.
3. 00:14:826 (4) - Remove this clap and then start using normal hitsound at 00:14:715 - to 00:15:271 - ?
4. 00:28:160 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Weird hitclap placement. How about using whistle instead of clap?
5. 00:40:604 (6) - Remove clap there and then change this to normal hitsound

這diff的clap sound放的有點怪

[Taiko]

00:09:160 (2) - Diplet sounds weird, probably move this note to 00:09:048 - ?
00:44:826 (1,2,3,1) - ^Same, change this back to 1/2 would be much better
01:40:382 (2,1,2) - kkd

感覺insane的hitsound不搞一下的話很難泡下手.......

Athena Tennos

1,038 posts

Joined February 2010

Athena Tennos 2013-05-12T08:32:20+00:00

OD沒變~其他fixed

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Hikari_kagayaku_sekai.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 57473
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 26382
DistanceSpacing: 2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Hikari Kagayaku Sekai
TitleUnicode:Hikari Kagayaku Sekai
Artist:eufonius
ArtistUnicode:eufonius
Creator:Flower
Version:Athena's Hard
Source:Irotoridori no Hikari
Tags:favorite riya opening - t e n n y a - Fionana sekai Athena Tennos String_Ensemble
BeatmapID:177457
BeatmapSetID:53000

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
Video,320,"irohika_OP.flv"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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428,36,56382,1,4,0:0:0:0:
356,264,56826,1,4,0:0:0:0:
388,188,57048,1,2,0:0:0:0:
284,224,57271,1,2,0:0:0:0:
356,116,57493,1,2,0:0:0:0:
212,204,57715,1,2,0:0:0:0:
220,188,57826,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,180,57937,6,0,B|152:196|96:144,1,150,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,68,58604,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,180,58826,2,0,B|232:224|192:240,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,268,59271,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,328,59493,6,0,B|244:336|292:308,1,112.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,288,59937,1,2,0:0:0:0:
400,200,60160,2,0,B|424:168|460:160,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,180,60604,2,0,B|272:191|309:175,1,75
172,248,61048,1,2,0:0:0:0:
56,284,61271,1,0,0:0:0:0:
28,260,61382,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,224,61493,6,0,B|28:184|60:160,1,75,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,204,61937,1,2,0:0:0:0:
104,92,62160,2,0,B|144:92|172:120,1,75
224,224,62604,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,120,62826,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,224,63048,6,0,B|228:312|300:344,1,150
184,324,63715,2,0,B|256:304|308:244,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,132,64382,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,92,64604,1,2,0:0:0:0:
400,196,64826,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,216,64937,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,212,65048,6,0,B|268:188|264:128,1,112.5,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,96,65493,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,44,65715,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,124,65937,2,0,B|48:164|72:196,1,75
172,260,66382,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,140,66604,6,0,B|152:172|108:200|68:196,1,112.5
32,196,67048,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,300,67271,2,0,B|108:340|148:344,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,252,67715,2,0,B|204:244|172:260,1,75
288,320,68160,2,0,B|327:303|324:260,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,176,68604,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,104,68826,5,0,0:0:0:0:
396,216,69048,2,0,B|352:212|324:168,1,75,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,84,69493,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,32,69715,1,4,0:0:0:0:
72,120,69937,1,2,0:0:0:0:
116,232,70160,6,0,B|176:200|168:140,1,112.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,104,70604,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,232,70826,2,0,B|132:272|172:280,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,212,71271,2,0,B|261:205|234:236,1,75
380,280,71715,2,0,B|422:286|449:255,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,144,72160,6,0,B|360:104|320:88|272:88|248:124,1,150,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,176,72826,2,0,B|108:216|148:232|196:232|220:196,1,150
248,124,73493,1,2,0:0:0:0:
204,56,73715,2,0,B|196:16|156:0|108:0|88:24,1,112.5
80,20,74160,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,96,74382,5,2,0:0:0:0:
104,192,74604,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,288,74826,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,296,75048,1,4,0:0:0:0:
104,192,75271,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,88,75493,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,180,75715,6,0,B|240:216|288:232|336:228|344:192,1,112.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,192,76160,1,2,0:0:0:0:
364,72,76382,2,0,B|376:108|420:116|420:116|456:136|456:180,1,150,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,296,77048,1,2,0:0:0:0:
332,348,77271,6,0,B|296:332|280:296|280:296|260:328|216:332,1,150,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,324,77937,1,2,0:0:0:0:
20,232,78160,2,0,B|24:192|64:176|64:176|96:152|88:108,1,150,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
4,24,78826,1,2,0:0:0:0:
124,24,79048,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,24,79271,6,0,B|320:24,1,75,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,104,79715,2,0,B|364:104,1,75,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,104,80382,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,176,80604,6,0,B|284:176,1,75,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,180,81271,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,264,81493,1,2,0:0:0:0:
400,304,81715,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,300,81937,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,248,82160,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,216,82382,1,2,0:0:0:0:
392,160,82604,2,0,B|408:144|400:120,1,37.5
388,84,82826,5,6,0:0:0:0:
304,48,83048,2,0,B|268:68|232:60,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,68,83493,2,0,B|172:96|184:136|168:180|140:200,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,264,84160,1,2,0:0:0:0:
12,328,84382,6,0,B|32:360|76:376|128:380|176:372|212:332,1,225,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,268,85271,2,0,B|256:236|212:220|160:216|112:224|76:264,1,225,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,344,86382,5,4,0:0:0:0:
436,300,86604,2,0,B|464:272,1,37.5
476,236,86826,1,2,0:0:0:0:
440,140,87048,2,0,B|412:112|408:72,1,75
512,92,87493,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,156,87715,2,0,B|408:188|368:200|320:192|304:172,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,176,88160,5,0,0:0:0:0:
196,204,88382,2,0,B|160:224|160:268,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,260,88826,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,188,89048,2,0,B|156:160|164:120,1,75
192,20,89493,2,0,B|176:56|156:84|116:100|76:96,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,300,90382,5,2,0:0:0:0:
116,348,90604,2,0,B|156:360|188:340,1,75
264,268,91048,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,340,91271,2,0,B|160:312|156:272|160:228|184:212,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,204,91715,5,0,0:0:0:0:
232,128,91937,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,88,92160,1,2,0:0:0:0:
408,84,92382,2,0,B|448:100|452:128|432:160|400:164|372:144|376:116,1,150
388,20,93048,1,2,0:0:0:0:
464,200,93493,6,0,B|480:236|472:280|440:304,1,112.5
416,324,93937,2,0,B|380:340|344:332,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,356,94382,2,0,B|220:336|220:296,1,75
240,192,94826,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,48,95271,6,0,B|348:88|316:116|276:120,1,112.5
240,116,95715,1,2,0:0:0:0:
156,80,95937,2,0,B|112:40|44:56|20:100,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,144,96604,2,0,B|120:172|132:212|120:240|96:276,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,288,97048,6,0,B|100:324|148:340|184:324,1,112.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,304,97493,1,2,0:0:0:0:
268,184,97715,2,0,B|256:220|272:264|324:288|352:280,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,248,98382,1,2,0:0:0:0:
424,40,98826,6,0,B|396:20|336:40|332:76,1,112.5
320,112,99271,1,2,0:0:0:0:
420,188,99493,2,0,B|424:148|400:116,2,75
372,276,100160,1,2,0:0:0:0:
140,344,100604,5,2,0:0:0:0:
236,248,100826,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,360,101048,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,248,101271,6,0,B|212:220|216:172|240:132|276:124,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,116,101937,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,272,102160,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,102271,12,0,103937,0:0:0:0:

Flower

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Topic Starter

Flower 2013-05-12T15:31:22+00:00

kanpakyin wrote:
hello.

[General]
The offset is sightly early (sure) please change the offset to 1053
The combo color is inconsistent. Checked that please~
AIBAT indicates that the tags are also inconsistent.

[Easy]
Beatmap design/suggestion
(These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
00:11:048 - Remove one green line there, one of them are meaningless. done
00:47:271 (1) - hum..The slider shape looks quite bad imo, so I did some adjustment on it. Here is a reference, take it under consideration please. I will give you the code. done
277,106,47271,6,0,B|226:124|194:64|144:85,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
01:19:271 (1) - I don't feel like a spinner here because the vocal is still singing. I would rather remove the spinner and map this part or partially map it and then start the spinner at 01:20:826 - ? can't agree. the vocal is actually background chorus. I feel it's more like a break.
Hitsound
(These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
00:18:826 (1) - How about to add a whistle at the beginning of the slider to fit the music and pitch there? I feel soft normal is enough. No change
00:20:160 (2) - ^Same, but add it at the end of the slider. ^
00:27:271 (3) - ah, please remove the whistle from the entire slider because this makes some noise which doesn't fit the music. After that, add a whistle at the beginning and the end of the slider. done
00:37:937 (2) - Remove the whistle at the end of the slider please, it doesn't fit the music that much. done
00:40:604 (4) - Add a clap sound at the beginning of the slider to fit the drum sound there? done
00:42:160 (2) - ^Same, add a s2 clap at the reverse of the slider done
00:49:048 (3) - How about to add a whistle at the beginning and the end of the slider? It sounds cool imo. Added on the head. did not add on the tail, it sounds tedious
01:23:271 - Make this tick back to soft hitsound? The tick doesn't fit the music that well.
[n y a's Normal]
Beatmap design/suggestion
(These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
00:11:937 - unused green line, better to remove it. done
00:17:048 (3,4,1) - Inconsistent spacing. I don't know are you doing this intentionally or not but be careful, this kind of spacing might confuse the player. I highly suggest changing it. [/color]
Hitsound
(These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
01:17:937 (4) - This clap is too sudden and doesn't fit the music. I would rather remove it or change it to normal hitsound. there is such sound in the music. instead I change it to 60% volume

[Athena's Hard]
Difficulty setting
(I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
OD +1 to balance the difficulty setting?
circle size +1 感覺好一點 spacing神馬的都打得比較舒服
Beatmap design/suggestion
(These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
00:13:049 (9,1) - This jump is quite meaningless in my opinion because the spacing isn't that big so it doesn't feel like a jump during gameplay. I would use normal distance there if I were you.
suggestion

[Fionana's Insane]
No change until I contackt Fionana
Beatmap design/suggestion
(These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
00:15:271 (1) - I think you can remove the stack and then make a jump there because I can hear a strong downbeat there.
01:42:160 (8) - ^Same, I think you can stack this note at 01:42:382 (1) -
Hitsound
(These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
00:05:715 (3) - Change the sliderend to 5% volume since 10% is too loud imo.
00:32:160 (4) - How about to add a clap sound at the reverse of the slider to fit the drum sound there?
01:15:715 (1) - How about to add a whistle at the beginning of the slider to fit the pitch and the sound behind the music?
01:34:160 (5) - Remove the whistle at the beginning of the slider and add it at the end of the slider to fit the drum sound better as you do this at 01:33:493 -
01:42:382 (1,2) - These whistle sound weird. I would rather remove them and only add few on suitable place if I were you.

[Insane]
Beatmap design/suggestion
(These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
00:55:937 (1,1,1) - Spamming new combo isn't that necessary here imo. Please remove the new combo at 00:56:382 - and 00:56:826 - done
01:19:382 (1) - I don't feel like a spinner here because the vocal is still singing. I would rather remove the spinner and map this part Same as Easy
01:43:271 (1,1,1,1) - Same as 00:55:937 done
Hitsound
(These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
00:01:049 (1) - Add a whistle here to fit the pitch and the next pattern (00:04:604 (1) - ) ? done
00:09:937 (1) - Please change the slidertick back to softhitsound. This is extremly weird. Especially the slider (2)- is a clap sound. done
00:14:826 (4) - Remove this clap and then start using normal hitsound at 00:14:715 - to 00:15:271 - ? Can't agree. I feel less flow removing the clap
00:28:160 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Weird hitclap placement. How about using whistle instead of clap? ^
00:40:604 (6) - Remove clap there and then change this to normal hitsound ^
這diff的clap sound放的有點怪

[Taiko]
00:09:160 (2) - Diplet sounds weird, probably move this note to 00:09:048 - ? done
00:44:826 (1,2,3,1) - ^Same, change this back to 1/2 would be much better done
01:40:382 (2,1,2) - kkd done

感覺insane的hitsound不搞一下的話很難泡下手.......

Melophobia wrote:
Good hitsounds. <3
咦

Thanks for modding~!

Fionana

252 posts

Joined April 2011

Fionana 2013-05-12T16:58:45+00:00

SPOILER

[Fionana's Insane]

Beatmap design/suggestion
(These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
1. 00:15:271 (1) - I think you can remove the stack and then make a jump there because I can hear a strong downbeat there. All changed except this one..
2. 01:42:160 (8) - ^Same, I think you can stack this note at 01:42:382 (1) -
Hitsound
(These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
1. 00:05:715 (3) - Change the sliderend to 5% volume since 10% is too loud imo.
2. 00:32:160 (4) - How about to add a clap sound at the reverse of the slider to fit the drum sound there?
3. 01:15:715 (1) - How about to add a whistle at the beginning of the slider to fit the pitch and the sound behind the music?
4. 01:34:160 (5) - Remove the whistle at the beginning of the slider and add it at the end of the slider to fit the drum sound better as you do this at 01:33:493 -
5. 01:42:382 (1,2) - These whistle sound weird. I would rather remove them and only add few on suitable place if I were you.

>tetsutaro, kanpakyin
Thanks for your moding!!

http://puu.sh/2S2Zv.osu

kanpakyin

Global Moderator

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kanpakyin 2013-05-12T17:09:33+00:00

我主要是覺得那個clap (ka ka ka)的那個放的有點多...而且有一些有點怪怪的所以如果要處理的話就搞那個就好了

Flower

1,740 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

Flower 2013-05-12T18:09:00+00:00

kanpakyin wrote:
我主要是覺得那個clap (ka ka ka)的那個放的有點多...而且有一些有點怪怪的所以如果要處理的話就搞那個就好了

我觉得还好啊……做出一点让步把一些串的音量降低10% 你看好不好

kanpakyin

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kanpakyin 2013-05-13T09:36:33+00:00

[General]

Offset重新測一了次, 感覺現在還是快了一點... 重測之後是1056 這次肯定了

[Taiko]

Tons of unsnapped notes
感覺volume有點大聲. 我建議全程用normal-60% hitsound就好
01:28:052 - Add a note here to form a triplet and then remove the note at 01:28:275 - . The rhythm sounds better in this way.
01:28:826 (187,188,189,190,191) - ddkkd?

Flower

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Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

Flower 2013-05-13T20:30:41+00:00

kanpakyin wrote:
[General]
Offset重新測一了次, 感覺現在還是快了一點... 重測之後是1056 這次肯定了
[Taiko]
Tons of unsnapped notes
感覺volume有點大聲. 我建議全程用normal-60% hitsound就好
01:28:052 - Add a note here to form a triplet and then remove the note at 01:28:275 - . The rhythm sounds better in this way.
01:28:826 (187,188,189,190,191) - ddkkd?

all fixed. thanks again~

10nya

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Joined February 2011

10nya 2013-05-15T13:00:39+00:00

thnkx for fixing Flower orz ;w;

kanpakyin

Global Moderator

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kanpakyin 2013-05-16T12:33:08+00:00

Bubbled.

(ノ・ω・)ノ

Flower

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Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

Flower 2013-05-16T20:26:13+00:00

kanpakyin wrote:
Bubbled.

(ノ・ω・)ノ

(´・ω・`) thx

[CSGA]Ar3sgice

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Joined July 2011

[CSGA]Ar3sgice 2013-05-17T03:53:18+00:00

四暗刻

10nya

2,746 posts

Joined February 2011

10nya 2013-05-17T07:48:11+00:00

YEAH! x'D

Athena Tennos

1,038 posts

Joined February 2010

Athena Tennos 2013-05-17T07:49:45+00:00

Yoooooooooooo~

pw384

Beatmap Nominator

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Joined January 2012

pw384 2013-05-17T10:49:43+00:00

233

LKs

3,119 posts

Joined August 2009

LKs 2013-05-20T14:19:33+00:00

amended the timing(added several red sections during the intro)

reb

raririn

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Joined October 2011

raririn 2013-05-21T11:08:15+00:00

感觉十万年才泡

NewRulerNA

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Joined December 2010

NewRulerNA 2013-05-26T09:12:28+00:00

hi
found little issues, please fix before ranking.

[Easy]

00:08:165 (1) - unsnapped note.

[Normal]

00:08:165 (1) - same as Easy

of course, no kd pls.

shinku <333

Colin Hou

osu! Alumni

4,456 posts

Joined November 2009

Colin Hou 2013-05-27T11:50:54+00:00

[General]

反AV画质/音质增强包: http://puu.sh/32c1r background的话, 拿这个好了 offset自己试试要打本去了

[Fionana's Insane]

01:15:278 (2,3,1) - 这个距离增长应该可以再柔和点
01:32:833 (5,6,1) - 把6稍往右移一下?
01:43:944 (3) - 听起来感觉更像一个到01:44:055的slider 而且感觉可以摆个跳

[Insane]

01:44:055 - 加个note
00:09:944 (1) - clap去了吧(密度减半的意思

[Athena's Hard]

00:07:721 (1) - 不是故意的话就加个new combo吧
00:10:611 (9,1) - 教练这俩slidertick好奇怪
01:42:278 (1) - 这个01:44:055结束好点

[n y a's Normal]

01:42:278 (1) - 同Hard

[Easy]

01:42:278 (1) - 同Hard

[Taiko]

0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
把加下划线的值调整下, 让真空的脸露出来吧..
intro部分下的太密的感觉
01:26:389 ~ 01:29:944 - 这一段也和后面的差距略大建议在kiai结束到末尾的这一段做下平衡简言之就是1/1的小break要么平均下或者避免连续用
01:44:055 - ka

没想到这么久, 爬山去了

Flower

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Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

Flower 2013-05-27T13:52:14+00:00

Colin Hou wrote:
SPOILER
[General]
反AV画质/音质增强包: http://puu.sh/32c1r background的话, 拿这个好了 offset自己试试要打本去了
[Fionana's Insane]
01:15:278 (2,3,1) - 这个距离增长应该可以再柔和点 ok
01:32:833 (5,6,1) - 把6稍往右移一下? ok
01:43:944 (3) - 听起来感觉更像一个到01:44:055的slider 而且感觉可以摆个跳我认为不是
[Insane]
01:44:055 - 加个note 同fionana's Insane
00:09:944 (1) - clap去了吧(密度减半的意思没发现这个的必要
[Athena's Hard]
00:07:721 (1) - 不是故意的话就加个new combo吧 ok
00:10:611 (9,1) - 教练这俩slidertick好奇怪 ok
01:42:278 (1) - 这个01:44:055结束好点同上
[n y a's Normal]
01:42:278 (1) - 同Hard
[Easy]
01:42:278 (1) - 同Hard
[Taiko]
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
把加下划线的值调整下, 让真空的脸露出来吧.. ok
intro部分下的太密的感觉 ok
01:26:389 ~ 01:29:944 - 这一段也和后面的差距略大建议在kiai结束到末尾的这一段做下平衡简言之就是1/1的小break要么平均下或者避免连续用 ok
01:44:055 - ka ok
没想到这么久, 爬山去了

需要再检查一下offset，感觉不太对劲
Thanks for modding~!

LunarSakuya

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LunarSakuya 2013-05-28T05:42:44+00:00

Timing check

BPM: 126
Offset: 887 (-10)

BPM: 126
Offset: 4444 (-10)

BPM: 135
Offset: 7110 (-10)

BPM: 135
Offset: 7996 (-14)

please check for yourself to make sure you agree!
Don't forget to check for unsnapped notes after changing
Good luck!!

Flower

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Topic Starter

Flower 2013-05-28T06:36:59+00:00

All fixed.

Colin Hou

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Colin Hou 2013-05-30T11:30:02+00:00

recheck

[Insane]
00:07:554 (3) - length change to '189.144', you can find the original length in osu by search 7554, and in that line '256,144,7554,2,0,B|328:180|312:272|256:296,1,190,12|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:', the underlined one is the to-be-fixed target.

[Hard]
00:07:110 - keep volume as 40?
00:07:554 (1) - length change to '149.324'
00:20:440 (4) - missing whistle at the end

[Fionana's Insane]
00:07:110 - volume change too sudden

Flower

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Topic Starter

Flower 2013-05-30T11:35:43+00:00

all fixed~

Colin Hou

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Colin Hou 2013-05-30T11:39:36+00:00

okay have you bubble back