1. Marathon (4.84 stars, 976 notes)

Satellite wrote:

hi~

General

title wrong
con~痕~ (full Ver) →　con~痕~ (Full Ver.)---done
why volume all 100%? Please think about your own.---done , change to 70%
I think Circle Size -1 ---done
and, add many hitsound?---done , some note add whistle

check lyrics please
非対称なガラクタで---remake
深さ知らず---remake

sister

00:00:863 - add note---done
00:14:808 (7) - remove note---done

00:20:668 (9) - change slider is better?---done

00:22:426 - add note---done

01:44:574 (8) - forget NewCombo?---done
01:57:465 (6) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.---done

02:23:012 (1) - use Distance snap Too close---done
03:22:543 (9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3) - really nice !! I'm fun <3---i like here too >w<
04:46:918 (1) - too close---done
04:52:777 (10,11) - try this.---done

05:19:496 - why break time? spinner here?---done

good luck your App~ ---thank you ~

1. I saw using two kinds of font in the map. I think it is better to use only one font.
2. 00:13:402- it's hard to read. Don't overlay 2.png on 1.png ,or how about changing font-color?
3. 00:23:012-「模」 「様」 sholud be situatied close together. But if it is necessary for lyrics action, ignore please
   (at the after part, there are same patterns)
4. 00:24:887- the following is easier to read . changing the position of 「っ」
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:29:808- write the sentence from the left. And, 「触」 sholud be a differnt png-file such as 29.png ~ 34.png
6. 01:39:652- the grouping of words is strange. I recommend as follow
   http://puu.sh/30IjX
   http://puu.sh/30Ik3
7. 01:55:355- it is easier to read to reverse the position of 41.png 42.png
8. 02:31:683- 「全」 「て」 shold not be separate
9. 03:14:808 -「さ」 「え」 sholud be situatied close together.
10. 03:31:683- same as 00:13:402-
11. 03:34:027- 71.png~73.png are mistakes? please recheck lyrics from satellite-san
12. 03:47:387- same as 00:13:402-

1. I think normal-hitsound is not suitable for this song. How about using only soft-hitsound or preparing custom hitsound?
2. I suggest to add the following as tags
   sally
   syndrome
   U.N. Owen was Her?

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

passing by your map o/ just some suggestion, no kds

for app, i think this is less jumpy, how about AR+1? ---done
and you should ask someone experienced to check your offset ---i will
is it just me or the audio is in low quality? ---i have not found a high quality audio ;_;

still need more works to do, good luck

RandomEffect wrote:

Nice SB of lyrics! ---thanks
please, let me mod simply

[StoryBoard]

1. I saw using two kinds of font in the map. I think it is better to use only one font. ---done
2. 00:13:402- it's hard to read. Don't overlay 2.png on 1.png ,or how about changing font-color? ---done
3. 00:23:012-「模」 「様」 sholud be situatied close together. But if it is necessary for lyrics action, ignore please
   (at the after part, there are same patterns) ---for lyircs action maybe is no problem , so keep
4. 00:24:887- the following is easier to read . changing the position of 「っ」 ---done
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:29:808- write the sentence from the left. And, 「触」 sholud be a differnt png-file such as 29.png ~ 34.png ---done
6. 01:39:652- the grouping of words is strange. I recommend as follow
   http://puu.sh/30IjX ---done
   http://puu.sh/30Ik3 ---done
7. 01:55:355- it is easier to read to reverse the position of 41.png 42.png ---done
8. 02:31:683- 「全」 「て」 shold not be separate ---done
9. 03:14:808 -「さ」 「え」 sholud be situatied close together. ---done
10. 03:31:683- same as 00:13:402- ---done
11. 03:34:027- 71.png~73.png are mistakes? please recheck lyrics from satellite-san ---yes,my mistake , lost some for sorry to satellite
12. 03:47:387- same as 00:13:402- ---done

[General]

1. I think normal-hitsound is not suitable for this song. How about using only soft-hitsound or preparing custom hitsound? ---soft-hitsound done
2. I suggest to add the following as tags ---done
   sally
   syndrome
   U.N. Owen was Her?

sorry... I couldn't mod sister-diff because it is too difficult for me ---never mind ,
~good luck~thank you ><

vipto wrote:

Timing check

Hai Hai From My Queue

OEvil wrote:

Hai Hai From My Queue

Sorry if my mod sucks

[General]
Rename The Difficulty:
- You Must Name The Difficulty From Sister ----> Marathon, Because this is app map and you must name it Marathon so you can upload it to pending maps---done
suggestions: (I thinks that you must do them)
- Your Map lacks from Hits sound use some---done
- Your Map lacks from breaks add some---done
- Disable Letterbox during breaks---done
- Make Audio in lead 2 (2000ms)---done

[SB]
Multiple .osb Files
There should only be one .osb file in a folder (this folder has 2).---done

[sister]
Breaks
You need a break before 02:15:504.---done
You need a break before 05:13:732.---x


Non-Downbeat Kiai Times
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:09:175, ends on 00:41:754
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:39:175, ends on 02:11:285
Kiai #3: Starts on 03:42:925, ends on 04:13:629
Kiai #4: Starts on 05:05:425, ends on 05:34:136
---keep

My Mod:
- 00:04:722 - Add a slider from here until 00:04:956.---done
- 00:04:722 (3) - Remove this circle.
- 00:05:894 - Add a slider from here until 00:06:128.---done
- 00:05:894 (5) - Remove this circle.
- 00:08:472 - Add a slider from here until 00:08:589.---done
- 00:08:472 (4) - Remove this circle.
- 00:14:566 - Add a slider from here until 00:14:800.---done
- 00:14:566 (6) - Remove this circle.
- 00:16:441 - Add a slider from here until 00:16:675.---done
- 00:16:441 (5) - Remove this circle.
- 01:17:144 - Add a slider from here until 01:17:378.---here is a slider
- 01:17:144 (7) - Remove this circle.
- 01:17:847 - Add a slider from here until 01:18:081..---↑
- 01:17:847 (9) - Remove this circle.
- 01:26:754 - Add a slider from here until 01:26:988.---done
- 01:26:754 (10) - Remove this circle.
- 01:45:504 - Add a slider from here until 01:45:738.---done
- 01:45:504 (8) - Remove this circle.
- 01:45:972 - Add a slider from here until 01:46:206.---done
- 01:45:972 (9) - Remove this circle.
- 01:46:441 - Add a slider from here until 01:46:675.---done
- 01:46:441 (10) - Remove this circle.
- 04:28:160 - Add a slider from here until 04:28:628.---done
- 04:28:160 (6) - Remove this circle.
- 05:05:425 - Add a circle at {x:256 y:88}, with a NC.---keep
- 05:05:425 (1) - Remove this slider.---↑
- 05:05:659 (2) - Remove this slider.---↑
- 05:05:660 - Add a circle at {x:160 y:184}.---↑
- 05:05:894 - Add a circle at {x:352 y:192}.---↑
- 05:05:894 (3) - Remove this slider.---↑
- 05:06:129 (4) - Move to {x:256 y:192}.---↑
- 05:31:910 - Add a slider from here until 05:32:144.---↑
- 05:31:910 (9) - Remove this circle. ---↑
- 05:48:785 (1,2) - Make Them --> http://puu.sh/338oS.jpg---↑
- 05:52:535 (1,2) - ^ ^ ^---↑

thanks for modding

S e e U wrote:

More difficult to this map
Only one comment
HP drain 6->7~8 ->7
CS 4 -> 5~6 x

---------------------------------------
[Sister]
In order to further drain, Please add a "Finish" hit sound---add
Please put "Clap" hit sound every 1/4 beat ~It would be nice to hear---add
01:28:629 (6) - Please correct the shape of the slider

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/781176---done
00:24:879 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Is irregular links Distance//Please adjust the

distance between the slider---done
01:32:144 (8,9) - Move this way >> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/781193---hmm,good
03:00:269 (3,1) - insert break time---done
03:56:754 (9) - The shape of the slider to add more variety// EX)

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/781200---yep,good
04:00:035 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Has to be repeated on purpose? >>>

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/781202---very nice!
05:23:238 (7) - Add circle >>> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/78120---done
05:49:254 (2),05:53:004 (2) - Get this fixed pattern of the slider >>

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/781210---consider and change

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Hi from my Queue.

Mod with grid level 3.

[General]

I give you a better mp3, louder, 192 kbps. => http://puu.sh/36gL4.mp3 download twice ，still is 128 kbps


[Marathon]

AR9 ? i prefer AR8 it's better for playing low BPM.---ok AR8

00:08:004 (3,4) - Remove these objects, and add a circle here : 00:08:004 and 00:08:472---done
00:17:379 (1) - Add finish at the beginning of the slider.---done
00:19:957 (8) - (reverse) x352 y248, it's more cute ---nice,so cute >w<
like this :

SPOILER

00:23:004 (1) - Add finish at the end of the slider.---done
00:24:879 (1) - ^---done
00:29:566 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - start these objects from 00:30:504 ---i can't understand this with next ↓
00:30:504 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - start these object from 00:29:566
00:32:379 (1) - Finish instead of clap.---done
00:41:519 (2) - Remove circle.---done
00:53:941 (2) - Add finish at the end of the slider.---done
01:21:129 (7) - ^---done
01:26:754 (10) - Add finish at the beggining of the slider---done
01:30:504 (4) - ^---done
01:31:675 (7) - 1 grid left for a better pattern.---done
01:32:144 (8) - Finish---done
01:33:550 - Add a note here---done
01:33:785 (11,12,13) - i suggest your to delete these circles and add a slider like this : ---nice
01:35:894 (1) - Finish at the beggining of the slider.---done
01:37:300 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - i suggest you this : ---nice,jumpping is so good!

SPOILER

01:39:879 (4) - Add finish.---done
01:47:379 (1) - ^---done
01:47:379 (1) - Add finish at the beginning of the slider.---done
01:53:004 (9) - Shorten the slider on the first red tick on the left and add finish at the end. and add a circle here : 01:53:941---done
02:02:379 (1) - Add finish at the beggining of the slider.---done
02:08:004 (1) - ^---done
02:15:504 - Add a circle here with finish.---done
02:23:004 (1) - Further than 02:22:769 (15) ---here is no problem
02:30:504 (13,14,15,16) - I suggest you ---nice

SPOILER

(16) stacked on (13)

02:30:504 (13) - Add finish---done
02:34:254 (1) - Add finish at the beggining of the slider.---done
02:40:347 (3) - Add finish---done
02:39:879 (2) - 1 grid left + 1 grid down---done
02:42:457 (5) - Add Finish at the end of the slider.---done
02:45:035 (3) - Add finish---done
02:59:332 (1,2,3) - I suggest to make this : ---nice

SPOILER

03:09:879 (6) - Add finish at the beggining of the slider.---done
03:23:004 (11) - Add Finish---done
03:25:113 (9) - ^---done
03:26:754 (18) - ^---done
03:28:863 (6) - 2 grids up.---done
03:29:566 (8) - 2 Grids left + 1 down---done
03:29:800 (9) - 2 Grids left + 2 Down---done
03:30:035 (10) - Like this---nice

SPOILER

03:35:894 (6) - Add finish ---done
03:39:644 (5) - Add finish at the beggining of the slider.---done
03:44:097 (4) - Add finish---done
03:44:566 (6) - Add finish at the beggining of the slider.---done
03:48:082 (4,5) - ctrl+g---done
03:51:129 (1) - Add Finish---done
03:52:066 (3,4) - 2 grid up (both)---done
03:53:004 (5,6,7) - ^---done
03:56:754 (9) - add finish at the reverse.---done
04:06:129 (1) - Add Finish at the beggining of the slider.---done
04:11:754 (9) - Add finish at the beggining, the reverse, the end.---done
04:15:504 (2) - I suggest you something like this...---nice,i like this very much ,thank you >w<

SPOILER

Awh shiet how to do this ?! => i will help you. First, the beggining of the slider x336 y344.
12 Points.
Second point : x328 y296, third (red point) : x352 y264, fourth x384 y208, 5th point : x408 y136, 6th point x344 1y6, 7th point x168 y16, 8th point x104 y136, 9th point x128 y208, 10th (red point) x160 y264, 11th point x184 y296, last point x176 y344---thank you

04:19:254 (2) - Flip vertically this ^---done
04:31:910 (7) - Add finish at the end of the slider---done
04:47:614 (6) - Add finish---done
04:48:550 (1) - ^---done
04:49:254 (7) - Add finish---done
04:49:371 (8) - Remove circle.---done
04:52:769 (12) - Finish instead of clap at the end of the slider.---done
04:56:754 (7) - Finish instead of whistle at the beggining of the slider.---done
04:58:394 (5) - Finish---done
05:02:379 - 05:05:191 You can map this part.---yep,i map >w<
05:06:129 (4) - Finish instead of clap.---done
05:13:629 (1) - Add finish at the beggining of the slider---done
05:21:129 (1) - Finish instead of clap---done
05:28:629 (1) - Add Finish at the beggining of the slider.---done
05:56:754 (2) - Add Finish---done
06:00:504 (6) - Add finish at the beggining of the slider---done
06:03:550 (1,1,1) - Do not abuse of NC.---done
06:04:254 (1) - Finish instead of clap---done
06:06:597 (1) - ^---done
06:08:941 (5) - Finish instead of whistle---done
06:11:285 (3) - Finish instead of clap---done
06:13:629 (1) - Silent this Spinner.---done


Nice song, Nice SB
Not bad, but your map needs more working...

Good luck

baldrace wrote:

Hi~from my queue
normal mod

general
感觉饼和滑条的比例不太平衡，note太多，大量不fit的串，永远不要为了放串而放串。。其他梗也一样
clap放的很乱---嗯>w<

00:03:785(11)感觉折返一次+1note比较好---可以

00:22:183(6) 多余音符，删去---ok

00:44:683(2,1)没包好---调好了

01:18:199 不Fit的串---修成一些单点和滑条
00:28:629 ^ ^
01:43:629 ^^
03:54:879 ^^
04:09:879 ^^
04:56:050 ^^
05:17:379 ^^

00:59:979 要不要换个自定义的soft clap，感觉很吵啊;_;---还行吧

01:59:566 new combo---ok

02:07:183(6,10)删了---ok

02:22:652(14,15) 2连放这感觉很奇怪，建议单点---ok

04:46:910 这边开始的节奏---ok

05:33:902(9) 删去---ok

唉再吐槽一下单点太多了。。---好吧>w<

good luck

Jemmmmy wrote:

00:07:864 - add a circle or don't stack 00:07:747 (10,1) -
00:07:747 (10,1) - use same shape
00:22:161 (6) - remove
00:58:841 (7) - remove
00:59:075 (8) - NC
00:59:310 (1) - cancel NC
01:02:825 - add a circle
02:15:482 - add a circle
04:06:107 (1,2,3) -

04:48:880 (4,5,6,7) -

05:18:294 (1,2,3,4) - change rhythm

good mapset and good luck