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posted 2009-08-14T15:16:30+00:00

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Mafiamaster

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Joined July 2008

Mafiamaster 2009-08-26T23:04:38+00:00

Easy~
01:04:96 (5) - Add a break after this slider.
01:08:54 (2) - Add a break after the note.
01:11:72 (2) - ^
01:14:90 (2) - ^
WHOA!!! Resnap all notes ASAP!!!
01:56:60 (1) - Add break after note.

Normal~
RESNAP ALL NOTES!!!
01:57:60 (1) - Suggestion: This is a Normal and a note right after a spinner like this is imo... not Normal ;_;

Hard~
Oh yes. DEFINITELY resnap all notes.
00:27:60 (1) and most of the notes after this one - Whistle spam isn't such a good idea =X
01:24:82 (1) - 01:30:38 (7) - Yes!! I love the hit sound placements here!! Good job here.

MoonFragrance

Joined April 2009

Topic Starter

MoonFragrance 2009-08-27T09:37:49+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Symbolic

Joined June 2008

Symbolic 2009-08-27T12:48:39+00:00

[Easy]

00:16:47 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:19:65 (1) - ^
00:22:83 (1) - ^
00:26:01 (1) - ^
01:30:58 (4) - Clap on endpoint.

[Normal]

01:04:95 (1) - Remove new combo.

[Hard]

00:02:76 (4) - Put this 1 level 3 grid to the left so it's consistent to the other spacing.
00:36:74 (10) - New combo.
00:46:27 (7) - Clap.
01:04:95 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:30:38 (7) - Clap on endpoint.

Really like this map

Starred *

MoonFragrance

Joined April 2009

Topic Starter

MoonFragrance 2009-08-27T13:24:43+00:00

Fixed :)

Sleep Powder

Joined October 2008

Sleep Powder 2009-08-27T18:07:10+00:00

[Easy]
01:40:91 (1) - Too close to 3

Nice Job~

MoonFragrance

Joined April 2009

Topic Starter

MoonFragrance 2009-08-28T07:10:54+00:00

Fixed :)

Jeffro

Joined October 2008

Jeffro 2009-09-05T15:35:21+00:00

This maps needs more attention, such a nice song!
[Easy]
00:19:65 (2) - claps on every note in this slider
00:26:01 (2) - ^ Trust me it sounds much nicer

00:36:74 (2) - remove clap
00:42:70 (4) - change clap to whistle on slider end.
01:08:33 (1,2) - too soft or needs hitsound
01:11:50 (1,2) - ^
01:14:68 (1,2) - ^
01:59:38 (1,2) - sounds a little weird

[Normal]
00:14:88 (1,1,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - some whistles here would be nice.
01:05:74 (1,2,3) - hitsound somewhere?
01:08:92 (1,2,3) - ^

[Hard]
Don't place offsets exactly on the first note pl0x, i recommend setting offset back 1 white tick.
00:27:60 (1) - very bad placed timing section here. The idea is nice but but it before the first combo. (Maybe on 1/8th before this note?)

Very nice map. Best part being the part where the song takes up and you accompanied that so good ^_^

Starred!

MoonFragrance

Joined April 2009

Topic Starter

MoonFragrance 2009-09-05T16:21:17+00:00

fixed :) thxs to u :D

orioncomet

osu! Alumni

Joined May 2009

orioncomet 2009-09-10T08:12:41+00:00

[Easy]
Fine ~

[Normal]
Cool ~

[Hard]
00:07:534(4) - spacing

I love your map <3

MoonFragrance

Joined April 2009

Topic Starter

MoonFragrance 2009-09-10T11:37:42+00:00

fixed :)
thx u XD

arien666

Joined May 2009

arien666 2009-09-20T10:40:06+00:00

Except a slider[Normal][Fixed on IRC],
No issues as I saw.

Star this and let's see '1 day and 2 nights' XD

MoonFragrance

Joined April 2009

Topic Starter

MoonFragrance 2009-09-20T10:42:44+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Sargon_old

Joined November 2008

Sargon_old 2009-09-26T06:43:45+00:00

Played, your map is great! but here is the story..

I started Divine Service beatmap a while ago without noticing yours was already exist, played your map and it was fun... but different style than me. So I think it would be great if both Divine Service map are approved together ^^

I have some mods for you too.. it's BG video. My beatmap has better quality than yours so you are welcome to use my video instead

My map here : viewtopic.php?f=6&t=17840

download with video and you can use that.

And feel free to mod or star my map too ^^

AeonWing

Joined September 2009

AeonWing 2009-09-26T17:00:19+00:00

Good map ^.^

Overall: Re-do some breaks.
Good use of hitsounds (some of them at least xP)

Easy:
No problems

Normal:
No problems

Hard:
01:31:177 (B): Might want to place notes in this break, hard isn't that much difference of normal.

MoonFragrance

Joined April 2009

Topic Starter

MoonFragrance 2009-09-26T17:43:43+00:00

i think break is okay...

Armin

osu! Alumni

Joined May 2009

Armin 2009-09-26T18:23:52+00:00

Easy
00:19:654 Remove the clap at the start
00:26:012 ^

Normal
00:43:098 Finish?

Hard
00:06:738 Add new combo
00:06:938 Remove new combo
00:08:329 Add new combo
00:08:527 Remove new combo
00:11:507 (3,1) As above
00:33:163 Clap at the start
00:33:560 Remove clap
00:39:123 Clap?
00:49:057 Clap?
00:52:236 whistle at the start?
01:02:368 Align with (6)
01:03:958 1 square to the right
01:07:136 Align with (2) [01:05:944]
01:08:726 Align with (4)
01:55:017 Align with (2)

That's all for me.

MoonFragrance

Joined April 2009

Topic Starter

MoonFragrance 2009-09-26T18:46:13+00:00

Fixed :) Thank you :D

SteRRuM

Joined October 2008

SteRRuM 2009-09-26T19:33:47+00:00

Hi!
[Timing]

BPM: 151,00 (fine)
Offset: 2 161.
Resnap all notes on all difficulties.

[Easy]

01:00:57 (3,4) - 1 grid down,
01:08:81 (6) - 1 grid up-left,
01:17:65 (1) - 1 grid down,
01:30:57 (4) - Remove repeat,
01:56:00 (3) - 1 grid up.

[Normal]

01:30:57 (3) - Remove repeat.

[Hard]

00:29:77 (1,3) - Remove clap,
00:40:30 (1) - 1/2 earlier and then fix spacing,
01:30:37 (7) - Remove last repeat,
01:38:61 (4) - Stack manually on (3)s end,
01:40:30 (4) - Stack manually on (3)s end.

MoonFragrance

Joined April 2009

Topic Starter

MoonFragrance 2009-09-27T02:18:04+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

MoonFragrance

Joined April 2009

Topic Starter

MoonFragrance 2009-09-27T02:23:20+00:00

Sargon wrote:
Played, your map is great! but here is the story..

I started Divine Service beatmap a while ago without noticing yours was already exist, played your map and it was fun... but different style than me. So I think it would be great if both Divine Service map are approved together ^^

I have some mods for you too.. it's BG video. My beatmap has better quality than yours so you are welcome to use my video instead

My map here : viewtopic.php?f=6&t=17840

download with video and you can use that.

And feel free to mod or star my map too ^^

thanks for interest to my beatmap >w<
but i'll take my MV video.

better quality MV has bigger size, so users will be annoying to download map 'w'
i think MV quality isn't necessary to play

al2e10

Joined August 2008

al2e10 2009-09-29T10:59:24+00:00

Nice map^^

ignorethis

osu! Alumni

Joined August 2008

ignorethis 2009-09-30T12:52:27+00:00

<Easy>
Fine.

<Normal>
The map itself is pretty good, except for that it's a bit hard for the Normal difficulty.

<Hard>
Fine and fun to play.

You have my star now :3

v2b

Joined October 2008

v2b 2009-09-30T13:54:29+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

MoonFragrance

Joined April 2009

Topic Starter

MoonFragrance 2009-09-30T16:35:50+00:00

Fixed :) thanks you :D

panic_on

Joined September 2009

panic_on 2009-10-01T13:34:56+00:00

오늘따라 별을 많이 주는거 같네.......
어째뜬 여기별받으세요~~

EEeee

Joined July 2008

EEeee 2009-10-02T12:30:14+00:00

overall
Offset = 2,154 (all diffs, make sure u re-snap all notes, and fix all breaks)

Easy
01:56:796 - fix break, it's a little off
that's it ^

Normal
looks good here

Hard
new combo to help spacing
01:13:88 (8) - new combo?
01:46:26 (3) - ^
01:51:63 (5) - ^

*star

MoonFragrance

Joined April 2009

Topic Starter

MoonFragrance 2009-10-02T13:22:23+00:00

Fixed :) Thank you >w<

Aoitenshi

Joined February 2009

Aoitenshi 2009-10-04T13:42:26+00:00

nothing wrong for me, star.

kino77

Joined March 2009

kino77 2009-10-08T05:39:03+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

MoonFragrance

Joined April 2009

Topic Starter

MoonFragrance 2009-10-08T08:23:48+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Tanmak

Joined August 2009

Tanmak 2009-10-09T01:36:58+00:00

[Eazy]
01:53:71 No break? (브레이크는 없어도 될 것 같네요.)

[Normal]
01:53:44 (1) No new combo and (2) is new combo?

[Hard]
Fine.

Star.

MoonFragrance

Joined April 2009

Topic Starter

MoonFragrance 2009-10-09T08:08:52+00:00

Fixed

CheeseWarlock

osu! Alumni

Joined May 2008

CheeseWarlock 2009-10-15T22:49:52+00:00

This is pretty confusing for an Easy map. But in a good way.

I love what you did with the notes on the blue ticks on Easy at around 01:11:98. And that section is sort of boring in Normal and Hard; could you re-map those parts to do something similar?

[All difficulties]
The hitsounds aren't very nice in some places. Soft whistles everywhere. I'm not going to point out any specifics points, but there are a lot.

[Normal]
00:26:19 (1,2,3) - Doesn't go with the music.

[Hard]
00:41:09 - This section is sort of boring too; it doesn't flow BADLY but it could be better.

MoonFragrance

Joined April 2009

Topic Starter

MoonFragrance 2009-10-17T05:05:58+00:00

Fixed, thank you >w<~

whymeman

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Joined November 2008

whymeman 2009-10-17T17:09:17+00:00

[Hard]

00:46:85 (2,3,4) - The spacing slightly increased in the middle of this stream.

That's the only thing that I noticed with this difficulty. But another thing that i've noticed is the combo colors. There are some parts of the video where the red and yellowish colors blend in. Just something to take note of but the rest of the map seems fine to me.

MoonFragrance

Joined April 2009

Topic Starter

MoonFragrance 2009-10-20T11:44:49+00:00

fixed, thank you >w<~

Gothic_old

Joined June 2009

Gothic_old 2009-10-20T11:48:12+00:00

스타

minyeob

osu! Alumni

Joined May 2008

minyeob 2009-10-20T14:57:11+00:00

[Easy]
레미같은 초 nazi 비에이티 대비입니다.
00:25:99 (2) - (1)이 이 롱 놋의 유턴을 가리고 있는데
기준에 의하면 유턴을 가리는 노트는 언랭의 요소라고 들은 바 있습니다......

01:08:80 (5), 01:11:98 (5), 01:15:16 (5)
소리와 안맞는 걸 모르고 이렇게 맵핑 하시지는 않은 것 같은데......
소리가 안맞네요 그냥 알아두세요.
님 주관대로 하십시오

[Hard]
01:16:25 ( ) - 노트 추가?(갠적 의견)
01:46:85 (6) - 왠지 nazi 모더가 된 느낌인듯합니다만.... (5)하고 쫌 가까운 것 같습니다.

Fix and I'll bubble.

JamesLeao

Joined October 2008

JamesLeao 2009-10-20T18:24:53+00:00

Hard:
00:44:27 (3) - clap?
01:16:259 - add a note?
Normal:
fine.
Easy:
fine.

awesome map , Star for you

I like DJMax too ^^ , and how about change the difficultys' named "Easy Style" "Normal Style"

MoonFragrance

Joined April 2009

Topic Starter

MoonFragrance 2009-10-21T06:56:01+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

minyeob

osu! Alumni

Joined May 2008

minyeob 2009-10-21T14:13:44+00:00

Here's Bubble #1.

CheeseWarlock

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Joined May 2008

CheeseWarlock 2009-10-21T19:55:06+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

MoonFragrance

Joined April 2009

Topic Starter

MoonFragrance 2009-10-22T01:26:27+00:00

CheeseWarlock wrote:
[Easy]
01:09:30 (1,2,3,4) - You took out my favourite part! I meant last time that you should use notes on blue ticks with all the difficulties, instead of just Easy.

umm...... i'm confused now.
some people this part is out of beat. but i don't think so ;w;
so i fixed it again.

DJPop

osu! Alumni

Here since the beginning

DJPop 2009-10-22T02:33:05+00:00

~Easy~
01:16:85 (1) - remove new combo

~Normal~
00:20:23 (3) - start at 00:20:432, end at 00:21:028

~Hard~
00:16:45 (1) - remove new combo
00:16:85 (2) - new combo
00:18:04 (1) - remove new combo
00:18:44 (2) - new combo
00:44:27 (3) - hitclap at the start, remove hitclap at the end
00:50:63 (3) - hitclap
00:52:22 (1) - hitclap at the start
01:45:66 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacings are too far
01:51:02 (3,4,5) - confused spacings

+Star

MoonFragrance

Joined April 2009

Topic Starter

MoonFragrance 2009-10-22T02:49:28+00:00

DJPop wrote:
~Normal~
00:20:23 (3) - start at 00:20:432, end at 00:21:028
- i think this is little bit out of beat...

~Hard~
01:45:66 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacings are too far
- jump :)

fixed. thank you >w<~

whymeman

osu! Alumni

Joined November 2008

whymeman 2009-10-23T06:43:56+00:00

Just a suggestion, not a direction...

[Easy]

01:56:78 - Maybe you can replace the break here and the two notes at the end with a spinner?

Other than that, the map seems good. Once you have double checked everything, i'll check back again for the bubble.

Edit: Checked out okay as far as I can see and bubbled.

MoonFragrance

Joined April 2009

Topic Starter

MoonFragrance 2009-10-23T07:34:59+00:00

umm..... i think it will be funny for 'expert' if it is fixed.
but (i think) rookies don't be experienced of spinner.
only two notes make is diff more easier.

but thank you for suggestion. so kudosu for you :)

WyndII

Joined October 2008

WyndII 2009-10-23T11:36:03+00:00

Hi!
Im so sorry >.<

Mod:
Just my Suggestions. xD

Easy
01:08:80 (5) - this is hard to time for an easy style imo. move to 01:08:710 ?
01:11:88 (5) - ^?
01:15:16 (5) - ^?
01:30:56 (4) - end of this slider is so not complete, add a clap at end of the slider?

Normal
00:16:45 (1,1) - shouldn't you follow the hitsound pattern used in 00:14:86 (1) - a whistle at the start of slider and at the end?
nice xD

Hard
Awesome =D

Good Luck!

MoonFragrance

Joined April 2009

Topic Starter

MoonFragrance 2009-10-23T11:53:56+00:00

WyndII wrote:
Easy
01:08:80 (5) - this is hard to time for an easy style imo. move to 01:08:710 ?
01:11:88 (5) - ^?
01:15:16 (5) - ^?
- i agree with you it can be little hard for easy. but i like the beat on this part(same to CheeseWarlock).
so i don't think i have to change this part. sorry ;w;

01:30:56 (4) - end of this slider is so not complete, add a clap at end of the slider?
- it sounds little weird for me. that track is the beginning of beat. so i just use finish <_<

Normal
00:16:45 (1,1) - shouldn't you follow the hitsound pattern used in 00:14:86 (1) - a whistle at the start of slider and at the end?
- beacuse of only whistle being on 00:14:86 (1) is, the higher tone narration also be on the 00:14:86 (1).

no fixing. sorry ;w; but i'll give you a kudosu for trying :)

Larto

Joined June 2008

Larto 2009-10-23T14:46:53+00:00

Kein Anschluss unter diesem Rank.

MoonFragrance

Joined April 2009

Topic Starter

MoonFragrance 2009-10-23T15:45:46+00:00

Hurraaaaaaaaaay~ thank you >A<~

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