Fixed :)bmin11 wrote:
[Hard]
Soft whistle spams...
00:26:82 (x) - add a note
That's all
I love the song. DJMax never let me down.
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Topic Starter
[Normal]
01:58:01 (1) - Extend 1/4 beat please
[Hard]
01:15:99 (4,5,6) - Make these 1/4 beat later
01:58:01 (1) - Extend 1/4 beat please
[Hard]
01:15:99 (4,5,6) - Make these 1/4 beat later
Topic Starter
Fixedminyeob wrote:
[Normal]
01:58:01 (1) - Extend 1/4 beat please
[Hard]
01:15:99 (4,5,6) - Make these 1/4 beat later
[Easy]
Should have a spinner to break any ties, but I don't think it's needed.
[Normal]
01:51:65 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - IMO this is too long of a 1/2 stream for a normal.
[Hard]
Looking good
*
Should have a spinner to break any ties, but I don't think it's needed.
[Normal]
01:51:65 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - IMO this is too long of a 1/2 stream for a normal.
[Hard]
Looking good
*
Topic Starter
Fixed. Thank U :Drust45 wrote:
[Easy]
Should have a spinner to break any ties, but I don't think it's needed.
[Normal]
01:51:65 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - IMO this is too long of a 1/2 stream for a normal.
[Hard]
Looking good
*
eeemod GO!!!
I got Offset 2,171, it's almost close to what you had if moved back. I just boosted it up a bit cause I have a certain dislike for negative BPMs
[Easy]
01:17:68 (1) - one more reverse?
[Normal]
Good by me
[Hard]
00:53:24 (break) - reinsert break
01:18:67 (break) - ^
01:31:19 (break) - ^
cool
I got Offset 2,171, it's almost close to what you had if moved back. I just boosted it up a bit cause I have a certain dislike for negative BPMs
[Easy]
01:17:68 (1) - one more reverse?
[Normal]
Good by me
[Hard]
00:53:24 (break) - reinsert break
01:18:67 (break) - ^
01:31:19 (break) - ^
cool
Topic Starter
Fixed :) Thank U :Deee wrote:
eeemod GO!!!
I got Offset 2,171, it's almost close to what you had if moved back. I just boosted it up a bit cause I have a certain dislike for negative BPMs
[Easy]
01:17:68 (1) - one more reverse?
[Normal]
Good by me
[Hard]
00:53:24 (break) - reinsert break
01:18:67 (break) - ^
01:31:19 (break) - ^
cool
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[Easy]
No Problems Found
[Normal]
No Problems Found
[Hard]
No Problems Found
Starr'd
No Problems Found
[Normal]
No Problems Found
[Hard]
No Problems Found
Starr'd
Topic Starter
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Easy~
01:04:96 (5) - Add a break after this slider.
01:08:54 (2) - Add a break after the note.
01:11:72 (2) - ^
01:14:90 (2) - ^
WHOA!!! Resnap all notes ASAP!!!
01:56:60 (1) - Add break after note.
Normal~
RESNAP ALL NOTES!!!
01:57:60 (1) - Suggestion: This is a Normal and a note right after a spinner like this is imo... not Normal ;_;
Hard~
Oh yes. DEFINITELY resnap all notes.
00:27:60 (1) and most of the notes after this one - Whistle spam isn't such a good idea =X
01:24:82 (1) - 01:30:38 (7) - Yes!! I love the hit sound placements here!! Good job here.
01:04:96 (5) - Add a break after this slider.
01:08:54 (2) - Add a break after the note.
01:11:72 (2) - ^
01:14:90 (2) - ^
WHOA!!! Resnap all notes ASAP!!!
01:56:60 (1) - Add break after note.
Normal~
RESNAP ALL NOTES!!!
01:57:60 (1) - Suggestion: This is a Normal and a note right after a spinner like this is imo... not Normal ;_;
Hard~
Oh yes. DEFINITELY resnap all notes.
00:27:60 (1) and most of the notes after this one - Whistle spam isn't such a good idea =X
01:24:82 (1) - 01:30:38 (7) - Yes!! I love the hit sound placements here!! Good job here.
Topic Starter
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[Easy]
00:16:47 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:19:65 (1) - ^
00:22:83 (1) - ^
00:26:01 (1) - ^
01:30:58 (4) - Clap on endpoint.
[Normal]
01:04:95 (1) - Remove new combo.
[Hard]
00:02:76 (4) - Put this 1 level 3 grid to the left so it's consistent to the other spacing.
00:36:74 (10) - New combo.
00:46:27 (7) - Clap.
01:04:95 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:30:38 (7) - Clap on endpoint.
Really like this map
Starred *
00:16:47 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:19:65 (1) - ^
00:22:83 (1) - ^
00:26:01 (1) - ^
01:30:58 (4) - Clap on endpoint.
[Normal]
01:04:95 (1) - Remove new combo.
[Hard]
00:02:76 (4) - Put this 1 level 3 grid to the left so it's consistent to the other spacing.
00:36:74 (10) - New combo.
00:46:27 (7) - Clap.
01:04:95 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:30:38 (7) - Clap on endpoint.
Really like this map
Starred *
Topic Starter
Fixed :)
[Easy]
01:40:91 (1) - Too close to 3
Nice Job~
01:40:91 (1) - Too close to 3
Nice Job~
Topic Starter
Fixed :)
This maps needs more attention, such a nice song!
[Easy]
00:19:65 (2) - claps on every note in this slider
00:26:01 (2) - ^ Trust me it sounds much nicer
00:36:74 (2) - remove clap
00:42:70 (4) - change clap to whistle on slider end.
01:08:33 (1,2) - too soft or needs hitsound
01:11:50 (1,2) - ^
01:14:68 (1,2) - ^
01:59:38 (1,2) - sounds a little weird
[Normal]
00:14:88 (1,1,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - some whistles here would be nice.
01:05:74 (1,2,3) - hitsound somewhere?
01:08:92 (1,2,3) - ^
[Hard]
Don't place offsets exactly on the first note pl0x, i recommend setting offset back 1 white tick.
00:27:60 (1) - very bad placed timing section here. The idea is nice but but it before the first combo. (Maybe on 1/8th before this note?)
Very nice map. Best part being the part where the song takes up and you accompanied that so good ^_^
Starred!
[Easy]
00:19:65 (2) - claps on every note in this slider
00:26:01 (2) - ^ Trust me it sounds much nicer
00:36:74 (2) - remove clap
00:42:70 (4) - change clap to whistle on slider end.
01:08:33 (1,2) - too soft or needs hitsound
01:11:50 (1,2) - ^
01:14:68 (1,2) - ^
01:59:38 (1,2) - sounds a little weird
[Normal]
00:14:88 (1,1,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - some whistles here would be nice.
01:05:74 (1,2,3) - hitsound somewhere?
01:08:92 (1,2,3) - ^
[Hard]
Don't place offsets exactly on the first note pl0x, i recommend setting offset back 1 white tick.
00:27:60 (1) - very bad placed timing section here. The idea is nice but but it before the first combo. (Maybe on 1/8th before this note?)
Very nice map. Best part being the part where the song takes up and you accompanied that so good ^_^
Starred!
Topic Starter
fixed :) thxs to u :D
[Easy]
Fine ~
[Normal]
Cool ~
[Hard]
00:07:534(4) - spacing
I love your map <3
Fine ~
[Normal]
Cool ~
[Hard]
00:07:534(4) - spacing
I love your map <3
Topic Starter
fixed :)
thx u XD
thx u XD
Except a slider[Normal][Fixed on IRC],
No issues as I saw.
Star this and let's see '1 day and 2 nights' XD
No issues as I saw.
Star this and let's see '1 day and 2 nights' XD
Topic Starter
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Played, your map is great! but here is the story..
I started Divine Service beatmap a while ago without noticing yours was already exist, played your map and it was fun... but different style than me. So I think it would be great if both Divine Service map are approved together ^^
I have some mods for you too.. it's BG video. My beatmap has better quality than yours so you are welcome to use my video instead
My map here : viewtopic.php?f=6&t=17840
download with video and you can use that.
And feel free to mod or star my map too ^^
I started Divine Service beatmap a while ago without noticing yours was already exist, played your map and it was fun... but different style than me. So I think it would be great if both Divine Service map are approved together ^^
I have some mods for you too.. it's BG video. My beatmap has better quality than yours so you are welcome to use my video instead
My map here : viewtopic.php?f=6&t=17840
download with video and you can use that.
And feel free to mod or star my map too ^^
Good map ^.^
Overall: Re-do some breaks.
Good use of hitsounds (some of them at least xP)
Easy:
No problems
Normal:
No problems
Hard:
01:31:177 (B): Might want to place notes in this break, hard isn't that much difference of normal.
Overall: Re-do some breaks.
Good use of hitsounds (some of them at least xP)
Easy:
No problems
Normal:
No problems
Hard:
01:31:177 (B): Might want to place notes in this break, hard isn't that much difference of normal.
Topic Starter
i think break is okay...
Easy
00:19:654 Remove the clap at the start
00:26:012 ^
Normal
00:43:098 Finish?
Hard
00:06:738 Add new combo
00:06:938 Remove new combo
00:08:329 Add new combo
00:08:527 Remove new combo
00:11:507 (3,1) As above
00:33:163 Clap at the start
00:33:560 Remove clap
00:39:123 Clap?
00:49:057 Clap?
00:52:236 whistle at the start?
01:02:368 Align with (6)
01:03:958 1 square to the right
01:07:136 Align with (2) [01:05:944]
01:08:726 Align with (4)
01:55:017 Align with (2)
That's all for me.
00:19:654 Remove the clap at the start
00:26:012 ^
Normal
00:43:098 Finish?
Hard
00:06:738 Add new combo
00:06:938 Remove new combo
00:08:329 Add new combo
00:08:527 Remove new combo
00:11:507 (3,1) As above
00:33:163 Clap at the start
00:33:560 Remove clap
00:39:123 Clap?
00:49:057 Clap?
00:52:236 whistle at the start?
01:02:368 Align with (6)
01:03:958 1 square to the right
01:07:136 Align with (2) [01:05:944]
01:08:726 Align with (4)
01:55:017 Align with (2)
That's all for me.
Topic Starter
Fixed :) Thank you :D
Hi!
[Timing]
[Timing]
SPOILER
[Easy]BPM: 151,00 (fine)
Offset: 2 161.
Resnap all notes on all difficulties.
Offset: 2 161.
Resnap all notes on all difficulties.
- 01:00:57 (3,4) - 1 grid down,
- 01:08:81 (6) - 1 grid up-left,
- 01:17:65 (1) - 1 grid down,
- 01:30:57 (4) - Remove repeat,
- 01:56:00 (3) - 1 grid up.
- 01:30:57 (3) - Remove repeat.
- 00:29:77 (1,3) - Remove clap,
- 00:40:30 (1) - 1/2 earlier and then fix spacing,
- 01:30:37 (7) - Remove last repeat,
- 01:38:61 (4) - Stack manually on (3)s end,
- 01:40:30 (4) - Stack manually on (3)s end.
Topic Starter
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Topic Starter
thanks for interest to my beatmap >w<Sargon wrote:
Played, your map is great! but here is the story..
I started Divine Service beatmap a while ago without noticing yours was already exist, played your map and it was fun... but different style than me. So I think it would be great if both Divine Service map are approved together ^^
I have some mods for you too.. it's BG video. My beatmap has better quality than yours so you are welcome to use my video instead
My map here : viewtopic.php?f=6&t=17840
download with video and you can use that.
And feel free to mod or star my map too ^^
but i'll take my MV video.
better quality MV has bigger size, so users will be annoying to download map 'w'
i think MV quality isn't necessary to play
Nice map^^
<Easy>
Fine.
<Normal>
The map itself is pretty good, except for that it's a bit hard for the Normal difficulty.
<Hard>
Fine and fun to play.
You have my star now :3
Fine.
<Normal>
The map itself is pretty good, except for that it's a bit hard for the Normal difficulty.
<Hard>
Fine and fun to play.
You have my star now :3
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Topic Starter
Fixed :) thanks you :D
overall
Offset = 2,154 (all diffs, make sure u re-snap all notes, and fix all breaks)
Easy
01:56:796 - fix break, it's a little off
that's it ^
Normal
looks good here
Hard
new combo to help spacing
01:13:88 (8) - new combo?
01:46:26 (3) - ^
01:51:63 (5) - ^
*star
Offset = 2,154 (all diffs, make sure u re-snap all notes, and fix all breaks)
Easy
01:56:796 - fix break, it's a little off
that's it ^
Normal
looks good here
Hard
new combo to help spacing
01:13:88 (8) - new combo?
01:46:26 (3) - ^
01:51:63 (5) - ^
*star
Topic Starter
Fixed :) Thank you >w<
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Topic Starter
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[Eazy]
01:53:71 No break? (브레이크는 없어도 될 것 같네요.)
[Normal]
01:53:44 (1) No new combo and (2) is new combo?
[Hard]
Fine.
Star.
01:53:71 No break? (브레이크는 없어도 될 것 같네요.)
[Normal]
01:53:44 (1) No new combo and (2) is new combo?
[Hard]
Fine.
Star.
Topic Starter
Fixed
This is pretty confusing for an Easy map. But in a good way.
I love what you did with the notes on the blue ticks on Easy at around 01:11:98. And that section is sort of boring in Normal and Hard; could you re-map those parts to do something similar?
[All difficulties]
The hitsounds aren't very nice in some places. Soft whistles everywhere. I'm not going to point out any specifics points, but there are a lot.
[Normal]
00:26:19 (1,2,3) - Doesn't go with the music.
[Hard]
00:41:09 - This section is sort of boring too; it doesn't flow BADLY but it could be better.
I love what you did with the notes on the blue ticks on Easy at around 01:11:98. And that section is sort of boring in Normal and Hard; could you re-map those parts to do something similar?
[All difficulties]
The hitsounds aren't very nice in some places. Soft whistles everywhere. I'm not going to point out any specifics points, but there are a lot.
[Normal]
00:26:19 (1,2,3) - Doesn't go with the music.
[Hard]
00:41:09 - This section is sort of boring too; it doesn't flow BADLY but it could be better.
Topic Starter
Fixed, thank you >w<~
[Hard]
00:46:85 (2,3,4) - The spacing slightly increased in the middle of this stream.
That's the only thing that I noticed with this difficulty. But another thing that i've noticed is the combo colors. There are some parts of the video where the red and yellowish colors blend in. Just something to take note of but the rest of the map seems fine to me.
00:46:85 (2,3,4) - The spacing slightly increased in the middle of this stream.
That's the only thing that I noticed with this difficulty. But another thing that i've noticed is the combo colors. There are some parts of the video where the red and yellowish colors blend in. Just something to take note of but the rest of the map seems fine to me.
Topic Starter
fixed, thank you >w<~
스타
[Easy]
레미같은 초 nazi 비에이티 대비입니다.
00:25:99 (2) - (1)이 이 롱 놋의 유턴을 가리고 있는데
기준에 의하면 유턴을 가리는 노트는 언랭의 요소라고 들은 바 있습니다......
01:08:80 (5), 01:11:98 (5), 01:15:16 (5)
소리와 안맞는 걸 모르고 이렇게 맵핑 하시지는 않은 것 같은데......
소리가 안맞네요 그냥 알아두세요.
님 주관대로 하십시오
[Hard]
01:16:25 ( ) - 노트 추가?(갠적 의견)
01:46:85 (6) - 왠지 nazi 모더가 된 느낌인듯합니다만.... (5)하고 쫌 가까운 것 같습니다.
Fix and I'll bubble.
레미같은 초 nazi 비에이티 대비입니다.
00:25:99 (2) - (1)이 이 롱 놋의 유턴을 가리고 있는데
기준에 의하면 유턴을 가리는 노트는 언랭의 요소라고 들은 바 있습니다......
01:08:80 (5), 01:11:98 (5), 01:15:16 (5)
소리와 안맞는 걸 모르고 이렇게 맵핑 하시지는 않은 것 같은데......
소리가 안맞네요 그냥 알아두세요.
님 주관대로 하십시오
[Hard]
01:16:25 ( ) - 노트 추가?(갠적 의견)
01:46:85 (6) - 왠지 nazi 모더가 된 느낌인듯합니다만.... (5)하고 쫌 가까운 것 같습니다.
Fix and I'll bubble.
Hard:
00:44:27 (3) - clap?
01:16:259 - add a note?
Normal:
fine.
Easy:
fine.
awesome map , Star for you
I like DJMax too ^^ , and how about change the difficultys' named "Easy Style" "Normal Style"
00:44:27 (3) - clap?
01:16:259 - add a note?
Normal:
fine.
Easy:
fine.
awesome map , Star for you
I like DJMax too ^^ , and how about change the difficultys' named "Easy Style" "Normal Style"
Topic Starter
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Here's Bubble #1.
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Topic Starter
umm...... i'm confused now.CheeseWarlock wrote:
[Easy]
01:09:30 (1,2,3,4) - You took out my favourite part! I meant last time that you should use notes on blue ticks with all the difficulties, instead of just Easy.
some people this part is out of beat. but i don't think so ;w;
so i fixed it again.
~Easy~
01:16:85 (1) - remove new combo
~Normal~
00:20:23 (3) - start at 00:20:432, end at 00:21:028
~Hard~
00:16:45 (1) - remove new combo
00:16:85 (2) - new combo
00:18:04 (1) - remove new combo
00:18:44 (2) - new combo
00:44:27 (3) - hitclap at the start, remove hitclap at the end
00:50:63 (3) - hitclap
00:52:22 (1) - hitclap at the start
01:45:66 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacings are too far
01:51:02 (3,4,5) - confused spacings
+Star
01:16:85 (1) - remove new combo
~Normal~
00:20:23 (3) - start at 00:20:432, end at 00:21:028
~Hard~
00:16:45 (1) - remove new combo
00:16:85 (2) - new combo
00:18:04 (1) - remove new combo
00:18:44 (2) - new combo
00:44:27 (3) - hitclap at the start, remove hitclap at the end
00:50:63 (3) - hitclap
00:52:22 (1) - hitclap at the start
01:45:66 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacings are too far
01:51:02 (3,4,5) - confused spacings
+Star
Topic Starter
fixed. thank you >w<~DJPop wrote:
~Normal~
00:20:23 (3) - start at 00:20:432, end at 00:21:028
- i think this is little bit out of beat...
~Hard~
01:45:66 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacings are too far
- jump :)
Just a suggestion, not a direction...
[Easy]
01:56:78 - Maybe you can replace the break here and the two notes at the end with a spinner?
Other than that, the map seems good. Once you have double checked everything, i'll check back again for the bubble.
Edit: Checked out okay as far as I can see and bubbled.
[Easy]
01:56:78 - Maybe you can replace the break here and the two notes at the end with a spinner?
Other than that, the map seems good. Once you have double checked everything, i'll check back again for the bubble.
Edit: Checked out okay as far as I can see and bubbled.
Topic Starter
umm..... i think it will be funny for 'expert' if it is fixed.
but (i think) rookies don't be experienced of spinner.
only two notes make is diff more easier.
but thank you for suggestion. so kudosu for you :)
but (i think) rookies don't be experienced of spinner.
only two notes make is diff more easier.
but thank you for suggestion. so kudosu for you :)
Hi!
Im so sorry >.<
Mod:
Just my Suggestions. xD
Easy
01:08:80 (5) - this is hard to time for an easy style imo. move to 01:08:710 ?
01:11:88 (5) - ^?
01:15:16 (5) - ^?
01:30:56 (4) - end of this slider is so not complete, add a clap at end of the slider?
Normal
00:16:45 (1,1) - shouldn't you follow the hitsound pattern used in 00:14:86 (1) - a whistle at the start of slider and at the end?
nice xD
Hard
Awesome =D
Good Luck!
Im so sorry >.<
Mod:
Just my Suggestions. xD
Easy
01:08:80 (5) - this is hard to time for an easy style imo. move to 01:08:710 ?
01:11:88 (5) - ^?
01:15:16 (5) - ^?
01:30:56 (4) - end of this slider is so not complete, add a clap at end of the slider?
Normal
00:16:45 (1,1) - shouldn't you follow the hitsound pattern used in 00:14:86 (1) - a whistle at the start of slider and at the end?
nice xD
Hard
Awesome =D
Good Luck!
Topic Starter
no fixing. sorry ;w; but i'll give you a kudosu for trying :)WyndII wrote:
Easy
01:08:80 (5) - this is hard to time for an easy style imo. move to 01:08:710 ?
01:11:88 (5) - ^?
01:15:16 (5) - ^?
- i agree with you it can be little hard for easy. but i like the beat on this part(same to CheeseWarlock).
so i don't think i have to change this part. sorry ;w;
01:30:56 (4) - end of this slider is so not complete, add a clap at end of the slider?
- it sounds little weird for me. that track is the beginning of beat. so i just use finish <_<
Normal
00:16:45 (1,1) - shouldn't you follow the hitsound pattern used in 00:14:86 (1) - a whistle at the start of slider and at the end?
- beacuse of only whistle being on 00:14:86 (1) is, the higher tone narration also be on the 00:14:86 (1).
Kein Anschluss unter diesem Rank.
Topic Starter
Hurraaaaaaaaaay~ thank you >A<~