v2b wrote:

green timing lines are not on ticks,please fix them

normal:
00:12:65 (4,1) - too far for a normal(but you can keep it if you think it's fine
00:29:96 (5,1) - ^
01:12:37 (5,1) - ^

insane:
the BG pic sucks,could you find a better one?
00:17:01 (7,8) - wrong spacing
---------------------------------------fixed-------------------------------------------------
02:27:62 (7,8,9) - 8 and 9 are invisible(you neednt change it if you don't want to

drum:
01:48:09 (1) - the repeat arrow is covered by notes - ykcarrot..


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ykcarrot wrote:

v2b wrote:

drum:
01:48:09 (1) - the repeat arrow is covered by notes // fixed

Lizbeth wrote:

Cool map
well done

here's my suggestions n_n

Normal
01:05:28 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - these inconsistence in spacing could get confusing for a normal diff
01:11:28 (1,2,3,4,5) - same
01:18:23 (2) - move 1/4 beat later and add a repeat
01:46:18 (1,2,3,4) - same of the spacing
i suggest you to add a break...almost 3 min map... no breaks.. is wrong IMO

Hard
01:28:59 (3) - replace for a circle
then add a spinner from 01:28:73 to 01:29:27
add break

Insane
00:02:29 (3) - remove note? to fits the vocals.. just like here: 00:06:65 n_n
00:18:38 (1) - intencional jump?
01:55:18 (3,4) - only these two stack.. is kinda confusing IMO
01:57:09 (7,8,9,10) - same
there's a few more like this, i wont point it all. but you know my opinion
02:18:35 (1) - if will be nice, if you silence this spinner
add break

ykcarrot's Drum
Cool what u did with the soft-finish °¬°
02:18:35 (1) - oh you did silence it...i suggest this in insane, but maybe not..to make diference

minyeob's Relaxing
no problems n_n

cya good luck
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osu_CN_yaya wrote:

[minyeob's Relaxing]

01:41:00 (2) - finish at 01:42:09

[normal]

00:42:10 - here . do it like this .
01:11:28 (1,2,3,4,5) - hitsound. plz use 4-5 . dont make it without hitsound .
01:41:68 (2) - i prefer here is a 1/2 beat slider. easy to follow . becuz this is normal.

and . without breaktime ?

[ykcarrot's Drum]

sorry . i dont like this diff . becuz confusing rhythm . hard to follow . and a little boring .

[Hard]

01:11:28 (1,2,3,4,5) - like normal.[attachment=0:f6057]normal.jpg[/attachment:f6057]
01:16:73 (9,1,1) - distance . confuse
02:10:99 (1,1) - ^
all map's distance is strange.if you wanna make some jumps .plz make them obviously


for [insane] . i dont this overall8 is fix this song and this map . 7 is enough .

thanks .

EEeee wrote:

Overall
Offset = 1,210( i've never been soo sure, but this i'm really sure is correct) make sure re-snap all notes/fix breaks after add offset

minyeob's Relaxing
well just fix breaks, they are really really little off, but other than that, map is perfect

Normal
00:22:74 (4) - new combo here, and remove it at 00:23:28 (1)
well, nothing else wrong, but , , maybe add a break, 2 minute normal song without break (heres a good stop for one 02:17:949)

ykcarrot's Drum
k this diff is perfect, just some suggestions, not needed
01:29:14 (7) - new combo
01:50:68 (1) - remove new combo
02:16:594 - add a note here, place it so this patteri is stacked

Hard
perfect, a masterpiece

insane
01:45:36 (11) - new combo, remove from next note
01:46:45 (3) - ^


wow, nice map, really nice
*star

Hujibayasi Kyou wrote:

star ~

Loogiesquared wrote:

hard

SPOILER

00:14:025 : Combine 2 and 3 into a slider.
00:21:115 : Remove the slider and put a beat here.
00:53:836 : You changed the spacing for apparently no reason here.
01:12:651 : This Kiai-Time is too long.

insane

SPOILER

Too many, too long Kiai-Times.

00:07:481 : Remove this beat.
00:07:754 : Spacing.
00:35:567 : Spacing.
01:17:551 : Spacing.
01:27:376 : Don't stack beats that aren't in a pattern.
02:25:183 : Don't stack beats that aren't in a pattern.
02:29:137 : These two beat snuck up on me, lol. Think about moving them.

askerlate47 wrote:

good song...

sonnyc wrote:

nothing especially need to be fixed(to me)
Maybe Rankable^^
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Azure_Kyte wrote:

Here's my mod ^^

Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this

[minyeob's Relaxing]
No Problems Found

[Normal]
00:52:33 (5) - I think this sounds way cooler extended 1/4
No Problems Found

[ykcarrot's Drum]
Quite an interesting map, for being mapped to drums Great job
No Problems Found

[Hard]
00:26:31 - Maybe a note here?
00:50:70 (1) - To me it sounds cooler if you extend this by one more reverse
02:19:73 (2) - To me the epic chorus part of the song starts here. could Kiai time start here instead of 1/2 a beat earlier?
No Problems Found

[Insane]
00:19:07 (4) - I'd add a note here; I'd also place one at 00:19:34.
00:25:88 - Possibly two 1/4 notes here? (one at 00:26:02 as well)
No Problems Found

Overall, a great beatmap ^^ I'm definitely looking forward to playing this when it's ranked.

Starred and Favourited

satosid wrote:

:)

DeathxShinigami wrote:

Mod request! ^_^

[Minyeob's Relaxing]
01:21:37 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Only thing that messed me up kinda hard to read.
Pretty solid map I would reccommend to map it fully but I see that you might be going for a tv size feel.

[Normal]
I think you should raise HP draain by 1 and raise overall diff by 1. That is all.

[ykcarrot's Drum]
Kinda boringish imo. Could use some custom hitsounds other than that its alright.

[Hard]
00:14:84 (3,4,5) - make this in a neater triangle?
02:31:72 (1,2,3,4,5) - Ew. neater pattern?\

[Insane]
Nothing I could find.

Star.

Shinxyn wrote:

By request~
Please lower all full volume hitsounds by 3 ticks

minyeob's
Meh, it's fine, don't really like the normal-finish usage, but like I said, its fine
Redo All Breaks >.<

Normal-
D: Normal-finish hitsounds overusage
00:16:20 (1) - the spacing threw me off here
00:52:74 (6) - I say reduce 2 repeats, or make is so the next note isn't a jump
01:02:83 (6) - reduce by 1/4 if you're following vocal here
All the 1/4 sliders seem a bit fast paced for this Normal, but that's just my opinion

ykcarrot-
The map is too repetitive.... the way this is mapped, it -could- be more creative with more own beats, but other than that, its technically fine.
Would like Overall diff up a notch though.

Hard-
>_< Either I'm not good at following the random spacing changes or its just too random for me, I guess... please increase Overall Diff by one
At least have a fixed spacing (no jumps) for 00:01:21 to 00:18:11, those jumps just don't fit the music at all
(why does Hard have 00:05:84 (2), and Insane doesn't? remove from hard please~)
That's all

Insane-
This diff is fine for me

The vocal is hard to follow since it goes on 1/4, but that's just the song's fault >.>

Zekira wrote:

Please use two offsets:

First: Offset 651, BPM 110.00
Second: Offset 139196, BPM 110.00

Resnap afterwards.

Cookiezi wrote:

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1. If you can, cut the mp3 to make it smaller. Just optional though.

1. You need to make the Kiai Time the same on all difficulties...
2. Why are there 5 backgrounds? [Normal], [Hard] and [Insane] share the same background. Remove the unused backgrounds and Full Submit.

1. Resnap all notes please.

1. Interesting concept...
2. I agree you should make the colors the same as the other difficulties.

1. Resnap all notes please.

1. Resnap all notes please.

JarJarJacob wrote:

Set tick rate to 2 on all difficulties. Get a better mp3.
// except my diff. tick rate 2 makes wierd sound at my diff.

ykcarrot's Drum:

The kiai bursts outside of the chorus are annoying. // nothing wrong.
02:18:40 (1) - Why is this silent?
This is intentional. If it isn't silent, you can't hear symbal sound.