CDFA wrote:

~LOOOL

cullub:
00:15:491 (1) - Move the sliderpoint more to the right so it's centered :> ~kay
00:19:127 (2) - Probably just copy-paste (1) for this slider ~kay
01:04:945 (1,2) - Make these regular sliders, or notify that they're sped-up ~Will do later
01:06:400 (1,2) - ^ ~ ^
01:07:309 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I'm too lazy to find out where it goes silent, but silent hitsounds aren't allowed ;~; ~aww ;-; but it sounds so good ;-;
01:07:945 - Someone left the 1.5x on :> ~kay
01:54:764 (3) - add clap ~kay
01:55:491 (7) - ^ ~kay
02:06:036 (1) - Add clap on end of slider ~akdas (=kay)
02:07:127 (5) - Add clap on beginning and end of slider ~adasdjasnajksdn
02:13:855 (7) - boring pattern! ~ moved slider 7 to the left
02:17:127 - Re-snap timing section here! ~nyaan.
02:17:127 (1) - Add clap on whole slider ~first no: no :c
02:53:673 (1) - Add clap on beginning of slider ~kay
04:34:309 (1) - Add finish on end of slider ~kay

CUNTRUL:
00:59:127 (4) - Not the most moe of sliders ~these sliderare very moe D:0
03:21:127 (8,9) - Spacing! ~whoops
03:46:400 - http://youtu.be/0Sz1j2Z7GQc THIS 2x ~LOOL
04:10:945 - OH GOD NO DON'T TURN THE 2X BACK ON ~AHAHA
04:11:142 - Move kiai time to here ~kay

Hard:
03:46:400 - OH NO NOT HERE TOO ~muhahaha

[Hard]
01:06:764 – add note here, sounds empty without a note ~i think its okay
So many short spinners ;_; ~sorry ;-;

[Control]
01:06:764 – add a note ~maybe not
01:59:855 (3) – x:352 y:288 ~kay
02:00:036 (4) – x:168 y:288 ~kay
03:34:764 (8) – NC ~nyan
03:57:309 (9) – whistles are annoying, take out the ones that are on the blue tick ~this is a 1/6 slider so there isnt any note on the blue tick ./trollception
04:19:036 (3,4) – too far from the previous, it’s not 1/1, so move them closer to the previous circle ~hmm i think its okay
04:35:218 (1) – unrankable spinner because auto can’t get 2000 ~Read the new rules about spinner ._.

[Collab]
Since this is for app (score is over the maximum, which is 20 millions), I will skip this diff ~okay

Good luck ~ty

• • Remove audio from video to reduce filesize.
  • The SB images contains unnecessary trasparency.
  • Preview Time: 01:25:127
  • Open all .osu files and change...
  

  [Colours]
  Combo1 : 254,81,22
  Combo2 : 255,255,0
  Combo3 : 77,255,0

• • HP Drain Rate: 3 (or 4)
  • 00:41:673 (5) - Add "New Combo".
  • 03:58:036 (green timing section) - Move this section at 03:46:582 (red tick)

• • HP Drain Rate: 5
  • Overall Difficulty: 4
  • 04:34:945 (1) - Start this spinner at 04:35:127 (white tick)

• • 00:36:945 (x) - Add a circle.
  • 00:37:309 (1) - End this spinner at 00:38:400 (white tick) and add a circle at 00:38:764 (white tick).
  • 01:33:218 (7) - Delete this slider. Add a circle at 01:33:309 (white tick).
  • 02:13:491 (x) - Add a circle.
  • 03:51:491 (x) - ^
  • 03:51:855 (x) - ^
  • 03:54:764 (x) - ^
  • 04:19:036 (7) - Delete this slider. add a circle at 04:19:127 (white tick).

• • 00:37:309 (1) - End this spinner at 00:38:400 (white tick) and add a circle at 00:38:764 (white tick).
  • 01:33:218 (3) - Delete this circle.
  • 02:48:854 (3) - ^

xxheroxx wrote:

Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
• You must fix this.
_____________________________________________
_____________________________________________

[General]

• • Remove audio from video to reduce filesize. ~I don;t know how to do that, but ill try :C
  • The SB images contains unnecessary trasparency. ~I don't think (and hope) that it would matter
  • Preview Time: 01:25:127 ~hm i'll keep it for now
  • Open all .osu files and change... ~hm~ I think i will keep it because the background video is mainly yellow & black
  

  [Colours]
  Combo1 : 254,81,22
  Combo2 : 255,255,0
  Combo3 : 77,255,0

[Hard]

• • 00:36:945 (x) - Add a circle. ~there are no vocals here :C
  • 00:37:309 (1) - End this spinner at 00:38:400 (white tick) and add a circle at 00:38:764 (white tick). ~no sorry :C
  • 01:33:218 (7) - Delete this slider. Add a circle at 01:33:309 (white tick). ~kaaay
  • 02:13:491 (x) - Add a circle. ~oh whoops XD
  • 03:51:491 (x) - ^ ~kay
  • 03:51:855 (x) - ^ ~kay
  • 03:54:764 (x) - ^ ~maybe not
  • 04:19:036 (7) - Delete this slider. add a circle at 04:19:127 (white tick). ~kaay

[Control]

• • 00:37:309 (1) - End this spinner at 00:38:400 (white tick) and add a circle at 00:38:764 (white tick). ~same as at hard
  • 01:33:218 (3) - Delete this circle. ~kaay .-.
  • 02:48:854 (3) - ^ ~yesu

[Te][Amo] wrote:

Hi SkyDevil

General

1. Nothing

bestz's Easy

1. 00:48:945 (2) - Add clap in the reverse arrow, i think it goes whit the drums in the music - FIXED
2. 01:06:400 (6) - Add finish at the end, it sounds great here - FIXED
3. 01:24:218 (2) - I think it sounds better if you remove clap at the begin - FIXED
4. 01:42:036 (8) - Eight combo its to high for a Easy diff so 01:39:855 (5) - Add NC - FIXED
5. 01:50:036 (1) - Add whistle to keep the consistency in hitsounds for this part - FIXED
6. 02:14:764 (1) - Add NC to loud down high combos like 02:16:945 (8) - FIXED
7. 02:39:855 (3) - Remove clap at the begin here too, flows more whit the vocals - FIXED
8. 03:46:400 (x) - Since you're not mapping from there until 03:58:036 (x) Remove the kia time here 03:46:400 (x) i think isn't needed - FIXED
9. 04:19:855 (1) - Add NC to avoid High combos - FIXED
10. 04:25:673 (1) - ^ - FIXED

Collab

[*]03:52:064 (x) - (snap to 03:52:036) - FIXED
[*]03:52:246 (x) - (snap to 03:52:218)[/notice][/list] - FIXED

That's all i found, hope this get ranked soon and sorry if i make a mistake on my english

Good Luck !

xxheroxx wrote:

Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
• You must fix this.

[bestz's Easy]

• • HP Drain Rate: 3 (or 4) - FIXED
  • 00:41:673 (5) - Add "New Combo". - FIXED
  • 03:58:036 (green timing section) - Move this section at 03:46:582 (red tick) - FIXED

OnosakiHito wrote:

requested taiko BG from my queue~

MKSTAR26 wrote:

I'm realizing that most of the Collab modding is on my part, and here's some modding of my own because why not.

Hard
00:44:218 (7,8) - Feels a bit un-natural, space it more? ~fine enough XD
01:33:218 (7) - NO-ONE is going to expect this. Turn it into just a circle? ~fiine
02:17:673 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - Everything whistling sounds weird, try something else? ~nope
03:30:400 (1,2,3,4) - Feels un-natural, change it? ~nah
03:53:673 (5,6) - ^ ~meh
03:56:582 (3,4,5) - ^ ~meh2
04:19:036 (7) - Once again, NO-ONE is going to expect this. Turn it into just a circle? ~finefine

Control
01:44:218 (1,2,3) - Looks kinda ugly. ~I totally agree ><
02:17:673 (4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4) - Everything whistling sounds weird, try something else? ~no
02:48:854 (3,4) - I really don't see your premise in doing this. Turn it into just a circle? ~uhu
03:47:127 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5) - Mixing a 1/4 with 1/6 stream is weird, try something else? ~NO ITS OSM
04:19:036 (3,4) - Once again, turn it into just a circle. ~fiine

Collab
00:50:945 (3,4,5) - Feels weird.
00:52:218 (2,3,4) - ^
00:53:855 (3,4,5,6) - ^
00:56:582 (2,3,4,5) - ^
00:58:218 (2,3,4,5) - ^ ~they are all fine
01:10:945 (1) - Make this straight, I wonder why I liked it wonky ~LOL.
01:19:309 (6) - Get rid of the overall whistle, make it just on the last two "hitcircles". Wonder what happened there ~meh i prefered it how its now :c
01:43:855 (5) - Fairly unexpected, IMO. ~its good
01:48:036 (1) - End 1/2 tick earlier? ~sure
03:04:036 (6) - Make it just a circle? ~meh kuma said NO
04:13:764 (4) - Remove? ~no


La, that's my first proper modding~

[Te][Amo] wrote:

Hi SkyDevil ~ohai

Hard

1. 01:31:127 (2) - Add finish, fits whit this downbeat ~kay
2. 01:42:764 (2) - ^ ~uhu
3. 01:47:855 (1) - Add NC, its works on this downbeat ~wouldnt matter
4. 02:13:491 (6) - Add a note for better spread in the vocal notes ~maybe not :c
5. 02:40:945 (2) - Add finish, add some rhythm to the song ~ fix
6. 02:46:764 (2) - ^ ~fix
7. 02:58:400 (2) - ^ ~yay
8. 03:22:400 (2) - Stack it right the end of the slider whit 03:21:673 (1) http://puu.sh/yfCy ~kaykay
9. 04:11:127 (2) - Add finish, add some rhythm to the song ~nyan
10. 04:16:945 (2) - ^ ~uhu
11. 04:22:764 (2) - ^ ~^
12. 04:28:582 (2) - ^ ~^
13. 04:35:127 (1) - Add finish, sounds well ~i thought i already put finish there :c

Control

1. This Kia time section its not on a Downbeat Kiai #6: Starts on 04:10:945, ends on 04:22:582
   
2. 00:55:855 (6) - Add note, sounds good ~already a note here
3. 00:56:218 (8) - Add finish, finish hitsounds really fit whit this song ~uhu
4. 01:24:400 (3) - This jump a really high jump put it on the center ~a little bit closer then?
5. 02:40:036 (3) - Same as above, put it on the center http://puu.sh/ynXT ~^
6. 03:47:127 (1) - to 03:48:461 (12) - really kill the flow of the song, try some 1/4 streams it sounds really better ~NO ITS OSM
7. 03:49:309 (1) - 03:50:642 (12) - ^ ~^
8. 04:08:036 (1) - 1 grid down to center it ~kay
9. 04:08:764 (3) - This jump a really high jump put it on the center ~just closer
10. 04:10:218 (3) - ^ ~^
11. 04:22:764 (2) - Add finish to notice that the kia time begins ~uhu
12. 04:35:218 (1) - Unrankeable spinner, it doesn't reach 2000 ms whit auto http://puu.sh/yo5d ~replaced with note

Collab

• There are unsnapped inherited points at:

1. 01:07:246 (x) - (snap to 01:07:218)
2. 01:07:337 (x) - (snap to 01:07:309)
3. 01:07:428 (x) - (snap to 01:07:400)
4. 01:07:519 (x) - (snap to 01:07:491)
5. 01:07:610 (x) - (snap to 01:07:582)
6. 01:07:701 (x) - (snap to 01:07:673)
7. 01:07:792 (x) - (snap to 01:07:764)
8. 01:07:883 (x) - (snap to 01:07:855)
9. 02:17:155 (x) - (snap to 02:17:127)
10. 03:52:064 (x) - (snap to 03:52:036)
11. 03:52:246 (x) - (snap to 03:52:218) ~fuu

31's Taiko

• I Don't mod taiko but:

1. 04:35:855 (2) - Put a new combo on this note so the previous spinner ends properly.
2. 04:48:947 (104) - Unsnapped circle.
3. 04:49:038 (105) - Unsnapped circle.
4. 04:49:129 (106) - Unsnapped circle.
5. 04:49:220 (107) - Unsnapped circle.
6. 04:49:947 (112) - Unsnapped circle.
7. 04:50:038 (113) - Unsnapped circle.
8. 04:50:220 (114) - Unsnapped circle.
9. 04:52:947 (137) - Unsnapped circle.
10. 04:54:947 (152) - Unsnapped circle.
11. 04:55:038 (153) - Unsnapped circle.
12. 04:55:129 (154) - Unsnapped circle.
13. 04:55:220 (155) - Unsnapped circle.
14. 04:56:038 (162) - Unsnapped circle.
15. 04:56:947 (169) - Unsnapped circle.
16. 04:57:038 (170) - Unsnapped circle.
17. 04:57:129 (171) - Unsnapped circle.
18. 04:57:220 (172) - Unsnapped circle. ~thanks

That's all i found, hope this get ranked soon and sorry if i make a mistake on my english ~i could understand it

Good Luck !

winber1 wrote:

http://puu.sh/ETOC

made small changes

sorry i'm a little late

MKSTAR26 wrote:

Hope this gets bubbled soon~

MKSTAR26 wrote:

Err. So as long as Dropbox hasn't exploded, here's the download for the no-sound video.

Kuma-san wrote:

[collab]
03:44:945 - R U F**KIN KIDDING ME?2 NOTES?

MKSTAR26 wrote:

Starred it again because why not~

Xierra wrote:

/me takes a seat and plays for eternity.

Xavier18488 wrote:

MY MODDDDDD (is noob because this map is pro and difficult to mod)! ~yay :3
Hard:
00:30:036 (1) - Overlap ~fixeed o3o
01:43:855 (4,5) - Change symmetrical ~nah
01:48:400 (10) - Not the best place to put a note :/ ~YES IT IS D<
02:56:945 (3) - Change symmetrical ~dat fix
02:57:673 (5) - ^ ~no fix o3o
02:59:491 (4,5) - ^ ~dat fixes o3o
03:03:673 (4) - ^ ~Y U SUCH A NAZI MODDER
03:27:855 (2) - Out of grind ~FUU--
03:28:582 (4) - ^ ~DOUBLE FUU--
03:39:127 - 03:46:036 - ME GUSTA ~Me Rinsta
04:23:855 (4,5) - Change symmetrical ~its okay
04:33:855 (3) - ^ ~^
Control:
03:46:400 - 03:58:036 - ME GUSTA STREAM! STREAM MOARRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!! ~LOOOOOOOOl
Collab:
00:32:945 (3,4,5,6) - Change Symmetricals ~FIXUD
01:14:400 (4,5) - ^ ~fix
01:15:491 (8,9) - ^ ~fix
01:19:309 (6) - Take off any whistle sound ~nya
01:22:036 (5,6,7,8) - Change notes position ~kay o3o

Kagamine rin + Yellow BG + Yellow notes + Pro map + Pro hitsounds = DREAM MAP *-* I wanna shoot star When I have
04:08:764 - OMG KAGAMINE RIN IS STRANGEEEEEEE ~ME RINSTA

RinKagamine wrote:

love this map, hope it gets ranked soon :3 and Kuma-san, be a little more nicer when tying to help someone.

Teru21 wrote:

:D Hi Sky~ xD
As Shoily told me that you need a Muzu, here~
Yeah.. I'm speedmapping xD cause I'll be hiatus for a week D: (exam)

Good Luck

Teru21 wrote:

:D Hi Sky~ xD
As Shoily told me that you need a Muzu, here~
Yeah.. I'm speedmapping xD cause I'll be hiatus for a week D: (exam)

Good Luck

Shoily wrote:

Teru21 wrote:

:D Hi Sky~ xD
As Shoily told me that you need a Muzu, here~
Yeah.. I'm speedmapping xD cause I'll be hiatus for a week D: (exam)

Good Luck

*doesfabulouspose*

CoroQuetz wrote:

[General]
Delete unnecessary timing points, use default hitsounds. ~ill fix those timing points soon, using default hitsounds seems unneccesary
Remove letterboxing during breaks. ~okay
Use alternating colours next time~ ~sure


Very good map~ ~thanks

mintong89 wrote:

[notice]Taiko Mod from My Queue ♪
umm...Project Diva f ? o3o

[31's Taiko]
i think you should change to 31's Taiko Oni is better.

00:07:855 (19) - k? ~okai :3

naisu =w=

i can't find anything so i shoot a star o3o.
good luck o3o. ~thanks o3o

CoroQuetz wrote:

Taiko mod~
All are suggestions unless in red.

[General]
Delete unnecessary timing points, use default hitsounds.
Remove letterboxing during breaks. ~okayokay but those default hitsounds dont seem necessary =3=
Use alternating colours next time~ ~okay

[31's Taiko]
00:29:491 - kkd ~okay
03:44:582 - kdddd ~sounds kinda awkward :<

Very good map~

Blaziken wrote:

Bro... Control +1 AR? (Plays better imo... IMO!)

Xavier18488 wrote:

Las mad pictures are here!


*click* *click* Link Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ <('o'<)

Muahahahahahahaha surprise to leona :3

Blaziken wrote:

Xavier18488 wrote:

Las mad pictures are here!


*click* *click* Link Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ <('o'<)

Muahahahahahahaha surprise to leona :3

I thought the size limit was 24MB ;_; It is for me at least.

cirno- wrote:

Easy+Normal seem good to me

Hard
01:25:309 (2) - Finish slider head PLEASE it's killing me ~kaay OAO;;
01:42:764 (2) - ^ OR you could do that pattern you had before here 01:47:127 (6,7,8) - (6,7) slider heads. Maybe not (8) tho ~finish might be better xD
02:32:945 (2,3) - I don't think these play very well. Maybe it's because (3) is on a blue line so it feels awkward ~bb--b-b-b-uttt it sounds great ;A; ./keeps it for now
04:29:127 (3,4) - ^
04:30:582 (3,4) - ^ ~same to these two ;A;
03:50:764 (6) - Hard to read. Make it just one reverse and add circle after? ~I think a hard player can read this :3



Control
I like this a lot. the large circle size plays real well on it and your work on the SV and hitsounds is great ~yaay
01:28:400 (1,2) - For some reason I think this is better http://i.imgur.com/kkIWx.png (just ctrl g em separately) ~kaay, because it reads probably better OAO;;



Collab
01:01:673 (3) - delete the middle slider point. It doesn't make a difference to the slider. At first I thought it was an unrankable slider when I checked it out. http://i.imgur.com/0EACd.png ~Ill fix this one a little bit~
01:07:218 - I like what was done to the hitsounds here! ~me too xDD
01:42:764 (1) - whistle slider head
01:43:309 (3) - whistle slider end ~okay to both OAO;;
03:15:855 - I don't like all these claps ~its following the music in the background quite well >3<
04:13:764 (4,5) - I think DS 1.0x for these is better ~hmm,,, Ill make something else out of it :3

Take a star <3 My sister will love this. ~thaankss :3

SuperMoutarde wrote:

You should be careful when to use the black color because your skin has no border for circles so black circles appearing on black background are hard to see.

[Hard]
01:26:582 (5) - circle is hard to see because of the skin+background
01:27:855 (7) - idem
01:47:855 (8) - idem
02:00:218 (1) - idem
02:59:127 (5) - idem

... etc. There are some others but with less completely dark background, I wrote only the "worse" ones. Maybe it's just me, though, but I feel like you should either go for another combo colour, or try to use the black color only when there won't be black background behind the circle.

Hope it will help, plz also my mod my map

1. Maybe make it so that the only diff that uses the storyboard is the collab, because having the mapper's names appear and change in all the difficulties is a bit strange considering they aren't the one mapping unless the player is playing the collab.

1. Maybe change the name to Betsuto's Easy to avoid confusion.

1. 01:45:673 (3,4) - A bit strange to just have the same slider at the same orientation again. How about flipping the 4 a bit to make it interesting?
   
   
2. 01:48:610 - Unsnapped green line here.
   
   
3. 01:52:945 (3,4) - It's pretty confusing to introduce a 1/2 rhythm here when all the other rhythms have been 1/1. Maybe try a different rhythm here,
   
   
   
4. 03:39:218 (1,1) - Having two spinners back to back would be too confusing for a beginner imo because when they think they're done spinning, another spinner starts right away. These should just be one long spinner.

1. In my opinion, the on-beat clapping that you used sounds very bad. It would have been much better to have off-beat clapping just like other diffs through use of a slidertick clap. You'll notice that the clapping happens in the music on the offbeats, so it makes your on-beat claps pretty noisy.
   
   
2. 01:22:400 (1,2) - If you're going to have this rhythm here, then I suggest making the slider end of 1 a quiet soft hit because right now it hits after the vocals and sounds very strange. The vocals actually hit at 01:23:673. If you want to stick with this all white tick rhythm here, it would be better to make the hit at 01:23:855 a soft hit. Same at 02:38:036 (2,3).

1. 01:45:855 (3) - Maybe have a NC here to be conistent with 01:35:491 (1).
   
   
2. 03:01:491 (3) - Same, maybe NC because it's a new sentence in the vocals.
   
   
3. 04:31:673 (3) - Same -.-

1. 00:52:764 (1) - It's pretty confusing to have this combo color be the same as the previous combo. Can you just make it the next color in the cycle? The black.
   
   
2. 00:55:673 (10,11) - The anti jump is a bit strange. It's making spacing feel very closed, can you make it 1.0 spacing between the 10 and the 11. Just move the 11 up a bit.
   
   
3. 01:07:855 (6) - To me, it's pretty strange not having a NC here because it's a new verse, just like at 01:02:036 (1). I'm not sure what you're following with the combos here.
   
   
4. 01:13:673 (4) - Again it's strange to me that we wouldn't have a NC here with the finish as the verse changes just like we have at 01:19:855 (1).

1. 00:37:309 (1) - Maybe add a finish to the end of this spinner to kick off the verse a bit better. It's a bit flat without it.
   
   
2. 01:02:036 (1) - Hmm, maybe add a finish to the head just like you have in the other diffs. Also maybe add a clap to the tail to follow your pattern of claps in this section.
   
   
3. 01:31:127 (2) - Maybe add a finish to the head here like you have in the insane diff.
   
   
4. 02:17:673 (1) - Maybe add a finish to the head with the whistle just like you have at 02:23:491 (1).
   
   
5. 02:40:946 (2) - Missing finish on the head.
   
   
6. 03:46:400 (3) - A finish on the head here would sound very nice imo.
   
   
7. 04:11:127 (2) - Why wouldn't you start this kiai time with a finish just like you did with the first kiai time? 0.0
   
   
8. 04:22:764 (1) - To me, it's strange to not have a finish on this downbeat that resets the kiai after we had all the finishes before it. This would be the most important finish. Maybe add one the head here.
   
   
9. 04:28:582 (1) - Hm, maybe add a finish to the head here just like you did at 04:16:945 (2). That's the same bit of music.
   
   
10. 04:34:218 (10) - The finish here is really noisy to me because the music cuts out and all we hear is this finish. It would better to remove it and have the finish just at the end of the spinner there as you do.

1. 00:15:491 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3) - Honestly, I don't like this section, I think it's very awkward to play. I think the way that you mapped it in the collab is much nicer, you should consider something similar here.
   
   
2. 00:44:582 (8) - Eh, maybe NC here just like you do in the hard diff.
   
   
3. 01:13:673 (5) - Again so strange that we don't NC here. -.- Maybe NC here, NC at 01:10:764 (7) and remove the one at 01:12:218 (1). That just makes more sense musically.
   
   
4. 02:00:218 (13) - Maybe you forgot to NC here like you did in the hard diff.
   
   
5. 03:27:491 - How about adding a circle here stacked on the 03:27:673 (1) so that we could have the NC on this downbeat and continue the flow of the rhythm by having a hit on the downbeat just as you've done throughout the whole section so far. The gap here that you have currently is breaking flow imo.
   
   
6. 03:30:400 - Same, maybe add a circle.
   
   
7. 03:36:218 - And again, maybe add a circle with a finish, just like 03:33:309 (1).
   
   
8. 04:34:309 - Maybe start the spinner here instead like in the collab. I'm not sure if the pause before the spinner fits very well.

1. 00:37:309 (1) - Maybe add a finish to the end of the spinner to start the verse strong just like in hard.
   
   
2. 01:25:309 (2) - Missing finish on the head here to start the kiai like you've done in the hard diff.
   
   
3. 01:42:764 (1) - Finish here to keep consistent with pattern.
   
   
4. 02:40:946 (2) - Finish on head to start the kiai.
   
   
5. 02:52:582 (2) - Missing finish on the head.
   
   
6. 02:58:401 (1) - Finish just like in the previous kiai time.
   
   
7. 04:11:127 (2) - Finish on the head to start the kiai.
   
   
8. 04:16:945 (2) - Finish missing imo.
   
   
9. 04:22:764 (2) - Finish
   
   
10. 04:28:582 (2) - Finish

1. 01:06:764 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I really don't like this stream. I think it's really overmapped and the volume decrease is just trying to hide that fact, even though it makes it even more awkward. I really suggest not doing this stream and just having nice moving sliders like you've been doing.
   
   
2. 02:13:855 (7) - Having so many repeats here is really breaking flow for me because nothing in the music is calling for such a slider. It would be so much better as two 1/2 sliders and a single circle imo.

1. 00:37:309 (1) - A finish on the end of the spinner would fit nicely to start the verse off imo.
   
   
2. 01:14:036 to 01:25:309 - This section doesn't have any offbeat clapping, which is strange because there is offbeat clapping at the similar section 02:29:309. Consider adding some here for consistency.
   
   
3. 01:22:400 (1,2) - The finishes on the ends here are are far too noisy imo because the music cuts out and we hear them. Use less finishes here. And maybe add a finish on the head of the 01:24:218 (5) because that is the strongest part of this section yet it doesn't have a finish currently. Use the same hitsound pattern here that is used at 02:38:036 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3). It's much better.
   
   
4. 02:00:218 (1) - Consider a finish here. Sounds nice to me.
   
   
5. 02:40:945 (3) - Maybe add a finish to start the kiai a bit stronger.
   
   
6. 02:46:764 (1) - Erm, maybe add a finish just like was done in the first kiai.
   
   
7. 02:52:582 (1) - Finish on head
   
   
8. 02:58:400 (1) - Finish would be nice.
   
   
9. 04:07:491 (1) - Maybe a finish to be consistent with earlier sections.
   
   
10. 04:08:036 (1,3) - Same, finish on the head of the 1 and on the 3.
    
    
11. 04:11:127 (1) - Finish on the head to start the kiai would be really nice.
    
    
12. 04:16:945 (1) - Finish
    
    
13. 04:28:582 (1) - Finish

UnitedWeSin wrote:

I find this song pretty obnoxious, so I'm sorry if this doesn't help much. ~everyone has their own tastes OAO;;

[General]

1. Maybe make it so that the only diff that uses the storyboard is the collab, because having the mapper's names appear and change in all the difficulties is a bit strange considering they aren't the one mapping unless the player is playing the collab. ~b-b-b-uttt the .osb is already removed since last week...

[Hard]

Map Design/Rhythm

1. 00:52:764 (1) - It's pretty confusing to have this combo color be the same as the previous combo. Can you just make it the next color in the cycle? The black. ~kaay OAO;;
   
   
2. 00:55:673 (10,11) - The anti jump is a bit strange. It's making spacing feel very closed, can you make it 1.0 spacing between the 10 and the 11. Just move the 11 up a bit. ~uhmmm okay i guess? ./moves up
   
   
3. 01:07:855 (6) - To me, it's pretty strange not having a NC here because it's a new verse, just like at 01:02:036 (1). I'm not sure what you're following with the combos here. ~yeaahh im not that good with NC'ing D:
   
   
4. 01:13:673 (4) - Again it's strange to me that we wouldn't have a NC here with the finish as the verse changes just like we have at 01:19:855 (1). ~okai OAO;;

Hitsounds

1. 00:37:309 (1) - Maybe add a finish to the end of this spinner to kick off the verse a bit better. It's a bit flat without it. ~kay
   
   
2. 01:02:036 (1) - Hmm, maybe add a finish to the head just like you have in the other diffs. Also maybe add a clap to the tail to follow your pattern of claps in this section. ~Finish added, and the clap is already there btw..
   
   
3. 01:31:127 (2) - Maybe add a finish to the head here like you have in the insane diff. ~uhuu
   
   
4. 02:17:673 (1) - Maybe add a finish to the head with the whistle just like you have at 02:23:491 (1). ~yes
   
   
5. 02:40:946 (2) - Missing finish on the head. ~uuhuuu
   
   
6. 03:46:400 (3) - A finish on the head here would sound very nice imo. ~yess
   
   
7. 04:11:127 (2) - Why wouldn't you start this kiai time with a finish just like you did with the first kiai time? 0.0 ~sorru ;A;
   
   
8. 04:22:764 (1) - To me, it's strange to not have a finish on this downbeat that resets the kiai after we had all the finishes before it. This would be the most important finish. Maybe add one the head here. ~yesss it sounds better this wayy
   
   
9. 04:28:582 (1) - Hm, maybe add a finish to the head here just like you did at 04:16:945 (2). That's the same bit of music. ~yess
   
   
10. 04:34:218 (10) - The finish here is really noisy to me because the music cuts out and all we hear is this finish. It would better to remove it and have the finish just at the end of the spinner there as you do. ~Ill keep it because I kinda did that on purpose because it gives some sort of effect OAO;;

[Control]

Map Design/Rhythm

1. 00:15:491 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3) - Honestly, I don't like this section, I think it's very awkward to play. I think the way that you mapped it in the collab is much nicer, you should consider something similar here. ~hmm,,, Ill keep it for now...
   
   
2. 00:44:582 (8) - Eh, maybe NC here just like you do in the hard diff. ~kaay
   
   
3. 01:13:673 (5) - Again so strange that we don't NC here. -.- Maybe NC here, NC at 01:10:764 (7) and remove the one at 01:12:218 (1). That just makes more sense musically. ~hmm... ./at least it looks better
   
   
4. 02:00:218 (13) - Maybe you forgot to NC here like you did in the hard diff. ~Yeah DX
   
   
5. 03:27:491 - How about adding a circle here stacked on the 03:27:673 (1) so that we could have the NC on this downbeat and continue the flow of the rhythm by having a hit on the downbeat just as you've done throughout the whole section so far. The gap here that you have currently is breaking flow imo. ~sounds better indeed OwO;;
   
   
6. 03:30:400 - Same, maybe add a circle. ~kaay
   
   
7. 03:36:218 - And again, maybe add a circle with a finish, just like 03:33:309 (1). ~yesuu
   
   
8. 04:34:309 - Maybe start the spinner here instead like in the collab. I'm not sure if the pause before the spinner fits very well. ~well.. I was following that weird sound at the end, and the last collab part wasnt made by me

Hitsounds

1. 00:37:309 (1) - Maybe add a finish to the end of the spinner to start the verse strong just like in hard.
   
   
2. 01:25:309 (2) - Missing finish on the head here to start the kiai like you've done in the hard diff.
   
   
3. 01:42:764 (1) - Finish here to keep consistent with pattern.
   
   
4. 02:40:946 (2) - Finish on head to start the kiai.
   
   
5. 02:52:582 (2) - Missing finish on the head.
   
   
6. 02:58:401 (1) - Finish just like in the previous kiai time.
   
   
7. 04:11:127 (2) - Finish on the head to start the kiai.
   
   
8. 04:16:945 (2) - Finish missing imo.
   
   
9. 04:22:764 (2) - Finish
   
   
10. 04:28:582 (2) - Finish

~All hitsounding accepted lol

[Collab]

Map Design/Rhythm

1. 01:06:764 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I really don't like this stream. I think it's really overmapped and the volume decrease is just trying to hide that fact, even though it makes it even more awkward. I really suggest not doing this stream and just having nice moving sliders like you've been doing. ~well,,, I kinda like it DX If too many modders complain, I'll change it OAO;;
   
   
2. 02:13:855 (7) - Having so many repeats here is really breaking flow for me because nothing in the music is calling for such a slider. It would be so much better as two 1/2 sliders and a single circle imo. ~Bleh, I prefer it honestly more like it is currently now :c

Hitsounds

1. 00:37:309 (1) - A finish on the end of the spinner would fit nicely to start the verse off imo. ~yesu
   
   
2. 01:14:036 to 01:25:309 - This section doesn't have any offbeat clapping, which is strange because there is offbeat clapping at the similar section 02:29:309. Consider adding some here for consistency. ~okai OAO;;
   
   
3. 01:22:400 (1,2) - The finishes on the ends here are are far too noisy imo because the music cuts out and we hear them. Use less finishes here. And maybe add a finish on the head of the 01:24:218 (5) because that is the strongest part of this section yet it doesn't have a finish currently. Use the same hitsound pattern here that is used at 02:38:036 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3). It's much better. ~Hmm,,, change it I believe
   
   
4. 02:00:218 (1) - Consider a finish here. Sounds nice to me. ~okaayy
   
   
5. 02:40:945 (3) - Maybe add a finish to start the kiai a bit stronger. ~uhu
   
   
6. 02:46:764 (1) - Erm, maybe add a finish just like was done in the first kiai. ~yess
   
   
7. 02:52:582 (1) - Finish on head ~wwww
   
   
8. 02:58:400 (1) - Finish would be nice. ~cat
   
   
9. 04:07:491 (1) - Maybe a finish to be consistent with earlier sections. ~meow
   
   
10. 04:08:036 (1,3) - Same, finish on the head of the 1 and on the 3. ~OAO;;
    
    
11. 04:11:127 (1) - Finish on the head to start the kiai would be really nice.
    
    
12. 04:16:945 (1) - Finish
    
    
13. 04:28:582 (1) - Finish
    
    all hitsounding accepted xD

Ok. Sorry it's mostly a hitsound mod, I can't get into these maps much. In my honest opinion, the collab is a bit of mess. There are just so many different styles trying different things, and a lot of the placements are pretty sloppy. I can't enjoy the map, but it's just my opinion.

I hope it helps.

Stefan wrote:

1,234 posts wwww

1. According with AIBat there are some missing skin files:
   
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   hitcircleoverlay.png
   approachcircle.png
   reversearrow.png

1. 01:03:491 (1,2,3,5,6): Imo this spacing looks bad, maybe try instead this spacing?
   
   
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   280,256,63491,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   339,275,63855,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   402,255,64218,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   432,128,64945,2,0,B|512:128,2,80,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   336,216,66400,2,8,B|344:120|296:64,2,160,8|8|12,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

2. 01:12:582 (6): Curve a bit this slider fits more.
   
   
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3. 01:16:582 (3): I was expecting a rhythm more like this:
   
   
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4. 02:39:855 (3): Move to x:320 y:63.
   
5. 03:39:218 (1,2): I think this is more acceptable for a easy:
   
   
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1. 02:11:491: Sounds empty without a note here, maybe consider adding a one here.
   
2. 03:18:582: ^
   
3. 03:30:218: ^
   
4. 03:46:036 (2,3): What about add a whistle in (2) and add a finish in (3)?

1. 00:55:855: Sounds empty without a note here, maybe consider adding a one here.
   
2. 00:56:036 (11): NC (don't forget to remove nc at 00:56:218 if you fix this suggestion)
   
3. 01:06:582 (6): Unstack this note looks better imo.
   
4. 01:24:945: Same as 00:55:855. Also if you are fixing this, add a whistle in the note, sounds good.
   
5. 01:58:764 (9): NC
   
6. 01:59:855 (4,5): Move (4) to x:256 y:216. If you fix this, move (5) to x:256 y:40.
   
7. 02:40:582: Same as 00:55:855.
   
8. 03:45:675 (1): Two 1/1 notes is enough.

Stefan wrote:

Sky, any plans to lead this for a Rank?

Xierra wrote:

Stefan wrote:

Sky, any plans to lead this for a Rank?

Sorry for this but, I think I remember Sky saying that this map is too hard to make xD

SkyDevil wrote:

Well the map wasnt hard to make but its too hard to find mods for it .w.
I keep getting the message: sorry the song is too long >< I got to skip ><

Ranking TV size maps are already hard so ranking this is ughhh =3=