- t e n n y a - wrote:

From our queue \(owo)/

[General]

1. 800x640? are you sure about the BG size? It suppose to be 800x600 and 1024x768 to make it rankable D:

i think..........
[Easy]
nothing

[Normal]

1. 00:27:752 (1)- : remove nc here | FIX
2. 02:17:416 (1)- : how about copy the slider on 02:18:172 (2)- here? | it is a good idea, but the distance does not match
   

   312,304,137416,6,0,P|334:332|371:346,2,65,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

3. 03:28:508 (3)- : remove clap here | FIX

[Hard]

1. AR-1 would be so suggested | no thank
2. 00:31:786 (4)- : copy the slider on 00:32:794 (6)- here would be nice~ try this
   

    184,80,31786,2,0,B|130:106|122:191|178:215,1,160,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

3. 01:46:912 (1)- : nazi, move the 4th slider point to x24 y352 | nooooooooooo , i can't find x24 @@!
4. 01:51:954 (3)- : add clap on the slider head | i don't undertand
5. 02:06:071 (4)- : ^ | fix
6. 02:08:088 (4)- : ^ | no
7. 02:42:626 (8)- : nc here, because change of slider velocity | i was changer other

that's all I can find, good luck >__<

1. BG4 is too big, max size is 1024 x 768, so resize it please.
2. BG3 looks strange, the people look stretched can you find a better BG?

1. Please try and make the volume here consistent with the other difficulties.

1. Same thing about volume here, try to make it the same as the other diffs. The choruses on this diff all have different volumes =S

1. Remove the source? Or add it to the other diffs.
2. Add letterbox in breaks here too.
3. Try and make the volume consistent with the other diffs! =P

Shulin wrote:

[General]

1. BG4 is too big, max size is 1024 x 768, so resize it please.
2. BG3 looks strange, the people look stretched can you find a better BG?

[Easy]
00:17:668 (1,2) - Make the volume 40% for these 2 notes? Unless it was intentional for these to be louder.
00:18:172 (2) - Flip this horizontally? It works better with the position of 00:20:693 (3,4) -
00:33:802 (5) - Move this left to improve the blanket with 00:32:290 (4) - you might have reposition other notes slightly after.
00:35:063 - This should be 40% volume? I'm not sure why is suddenly drops to 30% here unless you wanted to reduce the volume of the tick and forgot to change back the volume? If that's the case then the tick at 00:18:172 (2) - is too loud. xD
00:52:962 (3) - Add a whistle to the end to emphasize the vocal like 00:58:004 (5) -
00:54:979 (5) - Missing a clap here.
00:55:987 (1) - Add whistle? Works nice with the patten you have with 00:56:491 (2,3,4) -
01:00:525 (2) - Add whistle to keep your hitsound pattern for this section.
01:16:660 (2) - ^
01:38:340 to 01:54:349 - Volume should be 40% here like the start of the map. Seems too quiet right now.
01:45:399 (2,3) - In game the overlap with 01:42:878 (1) - is rather ugly. Consider moving these up to a new position?
01:53:466 to 02:23:719 - Same suggestions as before since this is a copy paste of the previous section / chorus.
02:10:609 (4) - This should be 45% volume like the other chorus?
02:32:794 (2) - Remove clap and add whistle?
02:38:340 (3) - The direction here is pretty awkward to play. I suggest either using a different slider type for 02:36:828 (2) - or repositioning 02:38:340 (3,4,5) -
02:56:996 (1) - Why not stack this on top of 02:59:012 (1) - plays better imo.
02:59:012 to 03:28:256 - Same suggestions as the other chorus.

Overall a nice easy, be careful to watch out for volume and hitsound consistency though because when you're playing it can be strange when hitsounds seem missing and the volume suddenly lowers.

[Normal]

1. Please try and make the volume here consistent with the other difficulties.

00:43:886 (3) - Remove clap, it clashes with the song. Add whistle instead?
00:47:416 (2) - Add whistle here?
02:00:273 (7) - Remove whistle on the return? Seems to be too much whistle right now.
03:29:012 (1) - It would be cool if you could reduce the volume gradually for this spinner like you did at 02:41:365 (1) -

[Hard]

1. Same thing about volume here, try to make it the same as the other diffs. The choruses on this diff all have different volumes =S

00:31:786 (4) - Add whistle to emphasize the vocal?
00:41:618 (7) - Add a note here? It's weird to have a gap in the vocal here.
00:55:735 (4) - Remove whistle on the return. Seems too much whistle here.
01:41:870 (8) - Add whistle here so it fits with 01:42:122 (10) -
01:53:340 (1) - Remove whistle here it seems to clash with the song.
02:24:979 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Hmm maybe come up with a better placement for these notes? Right now the pattern isn't very symmetrical but I think it'd be even better if you could make a smoother transition to 02:26:744 (1) -
02:58:508 (4) - Move this left 3 squares, it looks better next to 02:57:500 (2) -
02:58:760 (5) - Right 2 squares ^
03:00:399 (4) - Remove whistle, too much whistle.
03:03:046 (1) - Move this up slightly? The overlap with 03:02:542 (7) - looks very strange.
03:04:559 (4) - This jump does seem very big, it'd be great if you could reduce it slightly.
03:07:584 (2) - Missing clap at the end.
03:09:097 (5) - It would look much better if you stopped this overlapping with 03:08:340 (3) -
03:10:105 (4) - I think a curved slider would look much better here.
03:11:113 (7) - Remove whistle, too much.
03:13:130 (6,7,8) - If you made this symmetrical it would look great.
03:27:500 (5) - Missing whistle?
03:28:004 (1) - Remove whistle from the slider body.
That's all. Really nice maps, call me back after 1 or 2 more mods?

Saten wrote:

Hello~

[Insane]
01:12:374 (6,7,1) - NC on (6) instead k
01:20:441 (1) - finish? whistle is better imo
01:44:895 (6) - I wouldn't stack this because of similar patterns when stacking = 1/2 fixed
02:37:206 (6,1) -NC on (6) looks better imo done
02:12:626 (2,3,4) - avoid stacking 1/4 patterns looks fine to me o3o
02:44:895 - why is the break starting here? o.o idk o.o
03:01:534 (1,2) - NC on (2) instead k
03:11:113 (1,2,3) - avoid stacking 1/4 patterns
03:27:248 (6,7,8) - ^

Lally wrote:

Insane

02:43:004 - useless green line it's not useless o3o

- t e n n y a - wrote:

kazumi's Insane
00:01:534- : lowing the volume to 50%? k
00:20:693 (4)- : nc here, cause change of slider velocity it's not necessary imo
00:27:752 (1)- : make this slider long to 00:28:130- here? suggestion tough k
03:30:273 (2)- : nc here, change of slider velocity

Shulin wrote:

[kazumi's Insane]

1. Remove the source? Or add it to the other diffs. who added this? :B
2. Add letterbox in breaks here too. k
3. Try and make the volume consistent with the other diffs! =P k

00:32:542 (2) - Remove clap? I think this sounds very strange. k
00:37:332 (3) - Missing clap? fixed
00:57:752 (4) - Move the direction of this so the end aligns with the start of 00:58:004 (5) - instead of overlapping it? Something like 00:53:970 (4) - fixed
01:15:399 (3,4) - I don't think this 1/4 is a nice rhythm. It'd be better as 1/2 imo. fixed
01:16:407 (6) - Delete this note? It works better with the vocal. ^
01:22:458 - Move breaktime to 01:22:710 - to keep it the same as the other diffs? ^
01:39:097 (2) - Clap the end?^
01:49:937 (4) - Clap?^
02:22:710 (1) - Maybe start this earlier at 02:22:458 (1) - also reduce the volume it's much too loud right now. k
02:30:273 (3) - Whistle this? k
02:32:038 - Add note? You seem to be following the vocal right now. mm no im not o3o
02:34:559 (1) - Remove clap? Seems to clash with the song here. done
02:40:105 (1,2) - I don't think the 1/4 rhythm works well here, would fit better as 1/2 imo. k

kazumikos wrote:

http://puu.sh/1yWx3

Jayel wrote:

Hi, Zejky!
Really nice song you've mapped!!

From my queue~!!

[General]
- 00:49:937 - Kiai Time like this is personally not preferred.
Try either to remove it or lengthen it.
Fix other Kiai Times as well if you fix this.
- Decrease slider tick rate to 1, this doesn't apply to Hard.
- 02:24:878 - I think you gave TOO long term between the spinner and break time.

[Easy]
02:56:996 (1) - Why don't you change it to slider that ends at 02:58:004? | I want to emphasize drum

[Normal]
Nothing to see.

[Hard]
01:14:895 (2,3) - This might seem better : http://puu.sh/1yrzX | fix
01:22:206 (2) - I suggest you to put this circle at x:256, y:184. | fix, but. it other
01:36:323 - You'd better give consistency to the break time with other diffs. End the break time here. | Drag

Well, you've mapped this really well~!!
Good luck, and here's a star~~!!

Ayu wrote:

Hello. Random mod from #modreqs.
[Hard]

General:
• Unsnapped green timing section at 02:26:844. Snap to 02:26:870 | i move point to 02:26:744 -

Hmm, I mistook how much time I had left. I'm out of time to complete this mod, so hit me up on IRC to continue for an IRC mod when you're up too.

Nichiyouki wrote:

Hi, Zejky

My mod from your request in my modding queue

Red = Unrankable
Blue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

1. Fine

Easy

1. 00:17:668 (1) - Move to left 4 grids and up 1 grid, to avoid overlap with (3). | fix, it better old
2. 00:18:172 (2) - Try to make more curve | a little
3. 00:46:912 (1,2,3) - Move (1) to down 2 grids, then move (2,3) to down 2 grids and right 1 grid. It will be more beautiful. | ok, i fix
4. 01:51:450 (1,2,3) - The reason same as 00:46:912 (1,2,3). Move (1) to up 2 grids, then move (2,3) to up 2 grids and left 1 grid. | ok, i fix

Normal

1. 02:09:349 (2,3,4) - Maybe make notes to play smoothly than those by move last point of slider (2) to up 1 grid, move (3) to right 5 grids, and move (4) to down 1 grid and right 2~3 grids like this.
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   thank you about idea, i was fix, but it other

Hard

1. 00:26:239 (1) - Move 2nd point to down 2 grids to parallel with (3). | yes, your slider better
2. 00:29:517 (6,7,1,2) - Move (6,7,1) to right 1 grid to make (6) stack to 00:28:004 (4), and I suggest that move (2) to stack to (1), but you don't fix it, move it to up 1 grid instead. | it is intentionally, because change distance stream
3. 01:55:735 (4) - Ctrl+G be better. | Wow, it beautiful
4. 03:13:130 (6,1,3) - I suggest that Add NC in (6), but remove it in (1) instead. Then add NC in (3), too.

That's all that I can find them, and hope that my mod will be useful for you.

Good luck~

Ayu wrote:

[Kazumi's Insane]

General:
• There's an unsnapped green timing section at 03:30:390, snap this to 03:30:399. ok.. it's kinda pointless though >_>
• Consider also adding 'Kazumi' to your tags. but kazumikos is my name O_o

Placement:
• There's a lot of combo's that don't make sense flow-wise, they play awkward and don't really look fancy or anything.
• Consider using AR 7 instead of 8, since the song is only 119 Beats Per Minute. (?) ar8 is perfectly playable imo. it matches the SV
• 00:19:937 (2) - I'd Ctrl+G this to create a better flow. ctrl+g would make this slider too close to the previous note, besides i dont think this flow is bad o_O
• 00:42:626 (2,3) - •
                               ○ There's a lot more of awkward flows of this, but I decided to not list them all. Try to find them out yourself with the example I just gave you.
• 00:27:752 (1) - Unnecessary overlap?! it's not unnecessary, 00:27:752 (1,2) - is 1/4, and i want 00:28:256 (2) - to stack with 00:27:248 (5) - that's why 00:27:752 (1) - should be there
• 01:11:870 (5) - Unnecessary overlap?! not really, i wanna change direction of the slider w/o making the jump too hard and being driven a corner o3o
• 01:17:920 (6) - Unnecessary overlap?!no particular reason here, i just love overlap =)
                               ○ Just like before, a lot of these. I also decided not to list all of these, but again try to find them yourself. Not all of your overlaps are unnecessary,
                               but most of them unfortunately are.
• 01:47:416 (3) - This just plays Very awkward, flow and overlap wise. but i didnt wanna hide 01:47:416 (3) - under 01:46:407 (1) - so i move it a few grids up o3o
• 03:30:777 (3) - Consider to either remove the finish at the end, or change this kickback-slider in a slider and a circle.
                               Then put the finish on the circle, of course, this way you can emphasize the finish hitsound and it also plays better when clicked on.
it's fine here imo, since i used slow down here, putting a circle may cause confused
Suggestion:
• Try to work on your sliders a bit more. They're not really ugly, but they could be way better. Use approach circle's etc to make it more round. Just a little suggestion.

Nichiyouki wrote:

Kazumi's Insane

01:02:038 (2) - Add clap here. I can observed from 01:17:920. oh, now i find clap at 01:17:920 (6) - is nonsense im gonna remove it
03:21:954 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try to make these more fun by may not overlap the notes. h-how? im out of idea >_>
03:30:390 - Unsnapped a green line. Please resnap to 03:30:399. fixed

Sushi wrote:

Hi hi

The names of difficulty are okay, but I'd would rename them, they don't really fit imo :p
Easy Feels like a Normal
Normal feels like a Hard
Hard feels like an insane (particularly at the end and with all the jumpy nospacing patterns)

I did not know what to say about it . XD
[Easy]
Fine. But feels more like a Normal

[Normal]
Good. But feels more lie a (light) Hard

[Hard]
There are a lot of jumpy patterns without spacing consistency. This should definitely be called Insane
00:40:609 (4,5,6,7,8) - This jump pattern feels a little awkward. Maybe replace (4) with 2 circles and make something less confusing ? | 00:40:609 (4) - i fix it
02:26:744 (1,2,3,4) - Those anti jumps would be better if they were spaced a little more. The current way they are makes that they have the exact spacing of 1/4 triples, making it really confusing, even if you know they are here. | here I want to emphasize vocals, should .......
02:30:273 (7,1,2,3) - ^ | ^
02:34:811 (1,2,3,4) - ^ | ^
Wow, in the Kiai part, the difficulty is really high in comparison of the rest of the map o.o


That's all I'll say, pretty good map

lkx_Shore wrote:

good map,can't mod...

star,goodluck to you

Zejky wrote:

thank you lot Javel

Jayel wrote:

Zejky wrote:

thank you lot Javel

J... Javel...?

Sushi wrote:

Hi hi

[kazumi's Insane]
Nothing really wrong here, There's just something I want to point out

There's a hitsounding pattern that I really didn't like 00:50:693 (2,3) - Using the two claps constantly sounds a little spammy, and you get tired of it really quickly.

Here's the pattern I suggest :
00:49:937 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) -
00:50:693 (2,3) - Clap
00:52:206 (6) - Clap
00:52:458 (8) - Whistle
00:52:710 (1,2) - Claps as before, as it was.
00:53:970 (4) - Whistle (or finish, as you wish)
Repeat this pattern, instead of this clap clap which sounds not so cool.
Also during all the map, don't hesitate using the whistle! The soft whistle is godlike


That's all I'll say, pretty good map

yurunneram wrote:

Eh? OAO still not ranked? I liked this map... Nya >< must star! Get it ranked ok Zejky?

yurunneram wrote:

ok I shot a few stars it should have helped so pls get it ranked ok? Gambatte!

Sushi wrote:

[kazumi's Insane]
Nothing really wrong here, There's just something I want to point out

There's a hitsounding pattern that I really didn't like 00:50:693 (2,3) - Using the two claps constantly sounds a little spammy, and you get tired of it really quickly.

Here's the pattern I suggest :
00:49:937 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) -
00:50:693 (2,3) - Clap
00:52:206 (6) - Clap
00:52:458 (8) - Whistle
00:52:710 (1,2) - Claps as before, as it was.
00:53:970 (4) - Whistle (or finish, as you wish)
Repeat this pattern, instead of this clap clap which sounds not so cool.
Also during all the map, don't hesitate using the whistle! The soft whistle is godlike

fixed almost everything except for adding clap in 00:52:206 (6) I think it sounds weird O_o
thx for modding ^^
http://puu.sh/1Ryek

kazumikos wrote:

sorry im late o3o

Sushi wrote:

[kazumi's Insane]
Nothing really wrong here, There's just something I want to point out

There's a hitsounding pattern that I really didn't like 00:50:693 (2,3) - Using the two claps constantly sounds a little spammy, and you get tired of it really quickly.

Here's the pattern I suggest :
00:49:937 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) -
00:50:693 (2,3) - Clap
00:52:206 (6) - Clap
00:52:458 (8) - Whistle
00:52:710 (1,2) - Claps as before, as it was.
00:53:970 (4) - Whistle (or finish, as you wish)
Repeat this pattern, instead of this clap clap which sounds not so cool.
Also during all the map, don't hesitate using the whistle! The soft whistle is godlike

fixed almost everything except for adding clap in 00:52:206 (6) I think it sounds weird O_o
thx for modding ^^
http://puu.sh/1Ryek

1. Your BPM is doubled and should be 59.5.
2. Your difficulty spread is not even. You're relatively too far on the easy side for Easy and Normal and your Hard is surprisingly difficult. There are three options to fix this gap: make Easy and Normal harder, make Hard easier, or add a difficulty between Normal and Hard.

those wrote:

[General]

1. Your BPM is doubled and should be 59.5. | bpm
2. Your difficulty spread is not even. You're relatively too far on the easy side for Easy and Normal and your Hard is surprisingly difficult. There are three options to fix this gap: make Easy and Normal harder, make Hard easier, or add a difficulty between Normal and Hard.
   
   Fix Hard
   02:24:727 - to 02:26:239 -
   02:56:996 - to 02:58:760 -
   03:05:819 - to 03:06:828 -
   03:08:340 - to 03:09:853 -
   03:13:130 - to 03:13:382 -
   03:15:147 - to 03:16:660 -
   ---------------------------------------------------
   fixed some other
   bpm just numbers

CDFA wrote:

i want

Hard:
03:10:105 (2) - Odd overlap | it is the intention

Normal:
4.08 star normal ok.
Circle Size +1? | it will have to redo the distance

Easy:
Tick Rate -1? | fix

yey.

CDFA wrote:

i want

Insane:
00:19:181 (5) - Peeve about me, I'm never a big fan of this kind of pattern, its awkward to play mmm so how do you want me to fix it? o3o all i can do is unstack this >_>
00:27:752 (1) - Weird overlaps going on here fixed
01:11:870 (5) - ^ k.. since Ayu also complained about this..
01:19:685 (3) - ^ k
01:42:374 (3) - Shift this to the right to avoid overlaps mhm
01:47:416 (3) - Weird overlaps but i cant move this to anywhere else O_o
01:57:752 (2) - ^ i was trying to make a triangle with 01:57:752 (2,3,4) -
02:18:424 (5) - Awk looking note just kind of breaking the flow cuz i was out of idea here <_<
03:03:046 (1) - Awk overlap same reason with 01:47:416 (3) - actually.. but i can move this up a bit o3o
03:18:424 (2) - Raise the bottom up a little bit so it doesn't skim (1) k

The diff is ok but the overlaps and some jumps make it looks really messy and cramped.

yey.

kazumikos wrote:

CDFA wrote:

i want

Insane:
00:19:181 (5) - Peeve about me, I'm never a big fan of this kind of pattern, its awkward to play mmm so how do you want me to fix it? o3o all i can do is unstack this >_>
00:27:752 (1) - Weird overlaps going on here fixed
01:11:870 (5) - ^ k.. since Ayu also complained about this..
01:19:685 (3) - ^ k
01:42:374 (3) - Shift this to the right to avoid overlaps mhm
01:47:416 (3) - Weird overlaps but i cant move this to anywhere else O_o
01:57:752 (2) - ^ i was trying to make a triangle with 01:57:752 (2,3,4) -
02:18:424 (5) - Awk looking note just kind of breaking the flow cuz i was out of idea here <_<
03:03:046 (1) - Awk overlap same reason with 01:47:416 (3) - actually.. but i can move this up a bit o3o
03:18:424 (2) - Raise the bottom up a little bit so it doesn't skim (1) k

The diff is ok but the overlaps and some jumps make it looks really messy and cramped.

yey.

thx for modding ^^
http://puu.sh/1UMvV

1. I'm not too much a fan of the letterboxing during breaks; the backgrounds get awkwardly cut in Easy and Hard.

1. 00:19:937 - Awkward break here, what's up with that?
2. 00:24:727 (3,4) - Usage of 3/4 slider inappropriate; this rhythm is actually used in the song (listen at 00:31:786 - ). Use only when this rhythm comes up in the music. 01:44:391 (5,6) - This is good, 00:27:752 (1,2) - and 03:08:340 (3,4) - are not good, for example. Look through your whole map to check for remaining misused 3/4 sliders.
3. 00:49:937 - I can't understand your hitsounding pattern. It sounds like S:C1 clap is used with no consistency across each of the phrases.
4. The combo pattern for this chorus section is also confusing. For example, 00:55:231 (1) - has a new combo, but why here?

1. Defaulting at 1.0x spacing at this slider velocity is a good speed. One problem, however, is that when you place objects, the smallest difference in spacing (i.e. between 1.00x and 1.01x) causes a followpoint to appear, making it very inconsistent as to where they appear. For example, 00:52:710 (1,2,3,4,5) - should all be the same spacing, but sliderpoints only appear between (3,4,5). Go through the whole map and see what you can do to make these more consistent.
2. 00:21:449 (7,8,9) - These triples are inappropriate at this time, since there are other times in the song where there are actually triple hi-hats (for example, 00:25:483 - ). Use triples there, but not here where the hi-hats don't play. Check all your triples again to see if they're placed at the right times.
3. 00:41:365 (6) - Due to stacking on 00:41:870 (8) - , the spacing is really messy here. Try to manually stack 00:41:365 (6,8) - better.
4. 02:42:626 (8,9) - These might fit better if they were placed inside the triangle 02:41:618 (4,5,6) - . An increase in spacing isn't necessarily called for here.
5. 03:23:214 (5) - New combo here because 01:14:139 (1) - .
6. 03:29:012 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - Amount of stacking and spacing change makes this final part's difficulty too much different from the rest of the map.

1. 00:48:928 (1,2) - Blanketing can be much improved.
2. 01:17:164 (3,4) - Stacking pattern inconsistent with previous stacks. Given this is an Easy difficulty, I'd try to avoid more than one different occasion of stacking per section. Since you have stacked the double claps 01:13:130 (3,4) - , it's best you don't stack these.
3. Fix the copy paste, too.

those wrote:

[General]

[Insane]

1. 00:19:937 - Awkward break here, what's up with that? i didnt do it o3o
2. 00:24:727 (3,4) - Usage of 3/4 slider inappropriate; this rhythm is actually used in the song (listen at 00:31:786 - ). Use only when this rhythm comes up in the music. 01:44:391 (5,6) - This is good, 00:27:752 (1,2) - and 03:08:340 (3,4) - are not good, for example. Look through your whole map to check for remaining misused 3/4 sliders. mm fixed
3. 00:49:937 - I can't understand your hitsounding pattern. It sounds like S:C1 clap is used with no consistency across each of the phrases. k
4. The combo pattern for this chorus section is also confusing. For example, 00:55:231 (1) - has a new combo, but why here? fixed

those wrote:

[Hard]
[*]03:29:012 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - Amount of stacking and spacing change makes this final part's difficulty too much different from the rest of the map.[/list]
[/list]

kazumikos wrote:

those wrote:

[General]

[Insane]

1. 00:19:937 - Awkward break here, what's up with that? i didnt do it o3o
2. 00:24:727 (3,4) - Usage of 3/4 slider inappropriate; this rhythm is actually used in the song (listen at 00:31:786 - ). Use only when this rhythm comes up in the music. 01:44:391 (5,6) - This is good, 00:27:752 (1,2) - and 03:08:340 (3,4) - are not good, for example. Look through your whole map to check for remaining misused 3/4 sliders. mm fixed
3. 00:49:937 - I can't understand your hitsounding pattern. It sounds like S:C1 clap is used with no consistency across each of the phrases. k
4. The combo pattern for this chorus section is also confusing. For example, 00:55:231 (1) - has a new combo, but why here? fixed

thx for modding^^
http://puu.sh/2fWEt

1. Timing is off (confirmed with two other staffs), so +12ms to your offset
2. In all .osu files, change the code like in Event section
   

   0,0,"BG2.jpg",1,1

   to
   

   0,0,"BG2.jpg",0,0

1. SliderTickRate 2 is recommended since your sliders are looked empty
2. 00:19:433 (1) - ctrl+g for better flow?
3. 00:22:206 (2,3,4) - average the spacing here? i can't see any reason for alternate spacing
4. 00:23:718 (2) - heard weird a bit... i suppose two 1/4 sliders is better
5. 00:50:945 (3) - stack to 00:51:197 (4) - ?
6. 01:52:458 (9) - flip vertical and move to 60:266? also for flow :>
7. 02:10:609 (4) - i'd like to suggest a three-anchor point blanket slider but not four
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 02:11:870 (1) - ^
9. 02:17:416 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - hmm.. about this pattern, i think a "fluctuant line" is much better than current, like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 02:21:954 (3,4,5) - i suppose this kinda stack may break your flow
11. 02:29:643 - add a note here or make a 1/8 slider with 02:29:769 (1) - ? heard better imo
12. 02:31:281 (6) - move next NC to here to emphasize the blank beat?
13. 02:42:878 (5) - move to 207:223?
14. 03:00:273 (3) - try ctrl+g?
15. 03:10:861 - add a note placed at 252:296 for transition?

1. Also SliderTickRate 2 is recommend
2. 00:22:206 (1,2) - i think two 1/4 sliders here is much better than current due to the vocal~
3. 00:23:214 (3,4) - ^, more, the 00:23:214 - & 00:23:466 - could be two notes i suppose~
4. 00:29:769 (1) - straight slider is looked odd.. make it curved a bit?
5. 01:10:105 (3) - make the blanket here better?
6. 01:17:164 (3,4) - highly recommend to swap their positions for better
7. 01:18:928 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ungly linear pattern....
8. 02:41:870 (5,6) - stack break flow :<

1. 00:21:702 (6) - Move next NC to here for downbeat
2. 00:25:735 (5) - ^, and other similar cases so i won't repeat it once and once again
3. 01:10:861 - a 1/2 slider from here is better than 01:11:113 (5) - imo
   
4. 02:11:618 (2) - ^, move it to 02:11:365 - and add note (or slider) at 02:12:122 - for vocal
5. 02:15:651 (4) - ^
6. 02:27:752 (3,4) - i think stack them is a good choice ~

1. 00:21:702 (5) - NC here, same as Normal, also other similar cases in this diff.
2. 01:14:139 (5) - move to 176:292 and make it more curved like this?
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:21:197 (1,2) - i can't see any reason to stack them
4. 02:18:677 (5) - same as 01:14:139 (5) -

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~random bubble check~~

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[General]

• 
  fix all

1. Timing is off (confirmed with two other staffs), so +12ms to your offset
2. In all .osu files, change the code like in Event section
   

   0,0,"BG2.jpg",1,1

   to
   

   0,0,"BG2.jpg",0,0

[Hard]

1. Also SliderTickRate 2 is recommend | it's a bit noisy with songs
   

   [*]00:22:206 (1,2) - i think two 1/4 sliders here is much better than current due to the vocal~
   [*]00:23:214 (3,4) - ^, more, the 00:23:214 - & 00:23:466 - could be two notes i suppose~
   i think as current is easy 

2. 00:29:769 (1) - straight slider is looked odd.. make it curved a bit?| I see an emphasis of piano and stack with 00:31:786 (4) -
3. 01:17:164 (3,4) - highly recommend to swap their positions for better | a little
4. 01:18:928 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ungly linear pattern.... | it is a straight line and easy
5. 02:41:870 (5,6) - stack break flow :< | fix

[Normal]

1. 00:21:702 (6) - Move next NC to here for downbeat | fixed NC
2. 00:25:735 (5) - ^, and other similar cases so i won't repeat it once and once again | fixed NC
3. 02:27:752 (3,4) - i think stack them is a good choice ~ | i think, because, i use it with choice before should i want it other before

[Easy]

1. 00:21:702 (5) - NC here, same as Normal, also other similar cases in this diff. | fixed NC
2. 01:21:197 (1,2) - i can't see any reason to stack them | this is 2 hit clap

to many copy-pasts and then rotate in Easy diff :<
I regret, about it and normal, it is bad map :(

Scorpiour wrote:

[kazumi's Insane]

1. SliderTickRate 2 is recommended since your sliders are looked empty i think it's really not necessary, the rhythm doesnt present so..
2. 00:19:433 (1) - ctrl+g for better flow? k
3. 00:22:206 (2,3,4) - average the spacing here? i can't see any reason for alternate spacing fixed
4. 00:23:718 (2) - heard weird a bit... i suppose two 1/4 sliders is better oh i think it's fine? o_O reserve should be on yellow tick
5. 00:50:945 (3) - stack to 00:51:197 (4) - ? done
6. 01:52:458 (9) - flip vertical and move to 60:266? also for flow :> k
7. 02:10:609 (4) - i'd like to suggest a three-anchor point blanket slider but not four fixed
8. 02:11:870 (1) - ^
9. 02:17:416 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - hmm.. about this pattern, i think a "fluctuant line" is much better than current ok fixed
10. 02:21:954 (3,4,5) - i suppose this kinda stack may break your flow cuz i was lazy there >_>
11. 02:29:643 - add a note here or make a 1/8 slider with 02:29:769 (1) - ? heard better imo mmm but i cant here anything on yellow tick o_o
12. 02:31:281 (6) - move next NC to here to emphasize the blank beat? k
13. 02:42:878 (5) - move to 207:223? i just stack this with (4)
14. 03:00:273 (3) - try ctrl+g? spacing too close ._.
15. 03:10:861 - add a note placed at 252:296 for transition? but put it where? xD

kazumikos wrote:

Scorpiour wrote:

[kazumi's Insane]

1. SliderTickRate 2 is recommended since your sliders are looked empty i think it's really not necessary, the rhythm doesnt present so..
2. 00:19:433 (1) - ctrl+g for better flow? k
3. 00:22:206 (2,3,4) - average the spacing here? i can't see any reason for alternate spacing fixed
4. 00:23:718 (2) - heard weird a bit... i suppose two 1/4 sliders is better oh i think it's fine? o_O reserve should be on yellow tick
5. 00:50:945 (3) - stack to 00:51:197 (4) - ? done
6. 01:52:458 (9) - flip vertical and move to 60:266? also for flow :> k
7. 02:10:609 (4) - i'd like to suggest a three-anchor point blanket slider but not four fixed
8. 02:11:870 (1) - ^
9. 02:17:416 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - hmm.. about this pattern, i think a "fluctuant line" is much better than current ok fixed
10. 02:21:954 (3,4,5) - i suppose this kinda stack may break your flow cuz i was lazy there >_>
11. 02:29:643 - add a note here or make a 1/8 slider with 02:29:769 (1) - ? heard better imo mmm but i cant here anything on yellow tick o_o
12. 02:31:281 (6) - move next NC to here to emphasize the blank beat? k
13. 02:42:878 (5) - move to 207:223? i just stack this with (4)
14. 03:00:273 (3) - try ctrl+g? spacing too close ._.
15. 03:10:861 - add a note placed at 252:296 for transition? but put it where? xD

http://puu.sh/2ncTk
thx for modding ^^

1. Snapping 01:38:858 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
2. 01:41:379 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
3. 01:46:421 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
4. 01:56:505 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
5. 01:59:026 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
6. 02:13:648 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
7. 02:21:211 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
8. 02:23:732 (6) - Unsnapped slider (start)

Scorpiour wrote:

[Easy]

• 
  

1. Snapping 01:38:858 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
2. 01:41:379 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
3. 01:46:421 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
4. 01:56:505 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
5. 01:59:026 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
6. 02:13:648 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
7. 02:21:211 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
8. 02:23:732 (6) - Unsnapped slider (start)

Scorpiour wrote:

rebubbled~~

Dark_Ai wrote:

go ranked it ;w;

1. 00:31:798 (1) - how about here? as the bass is pretty strong
2. 03:21:461 (5) - shouldn't this be at 03:21:461?

1. 00:32:806 (6) - missing claps on both starting and ending circle.

1. 01:12:890 (1) - clap on the middle circle

Colin Hou wrote:

[Hard]

1. 00:32:806 (6) - missing claps on both starting and ending circle.

[Normal]

1. 01:12:890 (1) - clap on the middle circle

that's all I think.

Colin Hou wrote:

[kazumi's Insane]

1. 00:31:798 (1) - how about here? as the bass is pretty strong fixed
2. 03:21:461 (5) - shouldn't this be at 03:21:461? mmm.. i assume you mean 03:21:588? o_o fixed anyway

Colin Hou wrote:

well, before kazumikos (actually fix the tags to kazumikos) giving a response, I tried to find a non-128kbps mp3 for this song.

http://puu.sh/2vFP7 offset +8ms(to all sections of course).

as this is a song not formally issued, the artist/title should be what it is mostly well known as.

I got 7470 result with 'ina wroldsen i wanted you' and 702000 results with 'ina i wanted you' (Google). and from the file info of the mp3 you used or the ones I found, they're all taged with 'Ina' instead of 'Ina Wroldsen', and title as 'I wanted you' instead of 'I Wanted You'.

thus, you'd better change artist to 'Ina' and title to 'I wanted you'. with 'Wroldsen' and 'kazumikos' in tags.

PM me when all done.

kazumikos wrote:

Colin Hou wrote:

[kazumi's Insane]

1. 00:31:798 (1) - how about here? as the bass is pretty strong fixed
2. 03:21:461 (5) - shouldn't this be at 03:21:461? mmm.. i assume you mean 03:21:588? o_o fixed anyway

thx for modding ^^
http://puu.sh/2vGph

Colin Hou wrote:

ahh, my bad orz. I love your diff so much that I cannot focus x3x

edit: lol new page, anyway read my former post Zejky/

Colin Hou wrote:

I asked around about the offset, and seems need -6ms.

one more thing is the in/outing time for your breaks are quite uneven. please manutally adjust them to a proper position.

edit: rebubbled

Gabe wrote:

Such a nice map and song >//<

spboxer3 wrote:

It's enough quality to Rank~

Ranked~~~

Gloria Guard wrote:

first~~

gratz !!

Ayu wrote:

I didn't like the map at all, but that's just me it seems. It's not that it looks that bad, it looks really decent for being a first map.

But honestly, please do your utmost best at improving. I just flinched at the end of [Hard] every time because the difficulty increase at the end is kind of unexpected and unnecessary. I'm not sure what the trend of this is but everyone should quit using it.

Dark_Ai wrote:

waaah didnt know that is ranked ><

congrats

/me late ;_;

RainBowTR wrote:

The song is awesome, map too