Overall:
If you could get an mp3 that is NOT cut off at the end, that would be awesome D:
Luxary Remix:
00:05:79 (1) - This speed up feels sort of unnatural. Sure you wanna keep it?
Armin Remix:
02:14:19 (1,1,2) - That pattern is so weird, I really suggest moving the second slider ;(
Yumiko's Insane:
00:53:00 (3,4,5) - This pattern sounds and plays awkwardly :<
01:05:84 (9,1) - It MIGHT trip people up how close those notes are to each other. It didn't trip me up, changing it would probably be best.
01:44:36 (1,2,3) - It feels a bit unnatural how these sliders slow down. Up to you if you wanna change it.
CNF:
No problem! And wow, those sliders... They look totally unrankable, but hey, they feel natural to me and they shouldn't trip up players too much, so I'm fine with 'em.
Kyo:
00:12:59 (3,4,5) - Wat... this spacing was weiiird.
Normal:
01:45:11 (2,1) - those notes feel so close to each other. Or maybe that's just me. Up to you.
Okay, this feels a bit hard, but new players should always be able to understand the patterns. And the HPDrain should be low enough for them to be able to make mistakes anyway.