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Choucho - DreamRiser (TV Size) [Osu|Taiko]

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KaODia
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013년 8월 4일 일요일 at 오후 9:40:58

Artist: Choucho
Title: DreamRiser (TV Size)
Source: Girls und Panzer
Tags: Opening Ohzero jieusieu kiiwa ReySHeL anime
BPM: 165
Filesize: 13536kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Collab (4.97 stars, 270 notes)
  2. Easy (2.75 stars, 106 notes)
  3. Kiiwa's Insane (4.83 stars, 262 notes)
  4. Ohzero's Normal+ (4.23 stars, 144 notes)
  5. ReySHeL's Oni (4.83 stars, 479 notes)
Download: Choucho - DreamRiser (TV Size)
Download: Choucho - DreamRiser (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Girls und Panzer I love this anime!
My 1st beatmap! XD
Thank you :)
Guest diff Insane - by Kiiwa
Collab diff with - Ohzero , jieusieu
Taiko Oni diff made by ReySHeL thank you so much :)
Last edited by KaODia , edited 54 times in total.
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20:48 B2IN: 00:05:331 (4)-
20:48 B2IN: 이거 슬라이더 너무 못생겼어요
20:48 KaODia: ㅇㅇ
20:48 KaODia: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
20:48 B2IN: 음
20:49 B2IN: 전체적인슬라이더 속도
20:49 B2IN: 좀 느린거같아요
20:49 KaODia: 앵
20:49 B2IN: 하드에요 ?
20:49 B2IN: 이 콜랍 ?
20:49 KaODia: ㅔㄴ
20:49 KaODia: 네
20:49 KaODia: 인세인 ㄴㄴ
20:49 B2IN: 인세인은 ?
20:49 KaODia: 읍서요
20:49 KaODia: zz
20:49 B2IN: 인세인도 만드시길 ㅋ
20:49 KaODia: 헐
20:49 KaODia: 멘붕
20:49 B2IN: ㅋ
20:49 KaODia: 00초부터
20:49 KaODia: 30초까지가
20:49 KaODia: 제 파트
20:50 B2IN: ㅇㅋ
20:50 KaODia: 30초부터 키아이까지 오제로 파트
20:50 KaODia: 오제로파트를 좀 잘봐주시길
20:50 KaODia: ㅋㅋㅋㅋ
20:50 KaODia: 갓만들어서
20:50 KaODia: 지적할곳많을듯
20:50 B2IN: 오제론림꺼도
20:50 B2IN: 님이 수정해요 ?
20:50 KaODia: 그래야것죠;
20:50 B2IN: 그래도 오제로님이 만드신건 오제로님 의견이 있으실텐데
20:51 B2IN: 흠..뭐 오제로님이 상관없다하시면 님이 고치셔도되고 ㅋㅋ
20:51 KaODia: ㅇㅇ
20:51 B2IN: 음 전체적으로 말씀드리자면
20:51 KaODia: ㄱㅊ
20:51 B2IN: 디스탠스는 잘지켜주셨는데
20:51 KaODia: 네
20:51 B2IN: 너무 기차처럼 줄줄이 이어져있어서 좀 별루같아요
20:52 KaODia: 흠
20:52 B2IN: 특히 이런거
20:52 B2IN: 00:18:604 (1,2,3,4,5)-
20:52 KaODia: 아
20:52 B2IN: 옛날 djpop 맵같음
20:52 KaODia: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
20:52 B2IN: 그리고 힛사
20:52 B2IN: 힛사 다집어너야해요
20:52 KaODia: 네
20:52 KaODia: 그전에
20:52 KaODia: 제대로 만들고할생각
20:53 B2IN: 00:41:150 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9)-
20:53 B2IN: 하드에는 스트림 잘 안집어는는데 ㅋ
20:53 B2IN: 이거 킥슬라이더랑 섞어너 넣으면 좋을듯
20:53 KaODia: ㅇㅇ
20:53 KaODia: 연타
20:53 KaODia: 몇개넣고 킥스트림?
20:54 B2IN: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/558692
20:54 B2IN: 예를 들어서 이런식으로
20:55 KaODia: ㅇㅎ
20:55 B2IN: 00:55:695 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)-
20:55 B2IN: 여기도잇네
20:56 B2IN: 흐름상 여기는 전부다 슬라이더로 바꾸면 좋을듯 ?
20:56 B2IN: 그리구
20:56 B2IN: 00:53:513 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5)-
20:56 KaODia: 잠프?
20:56 B2IN: 여기 솔직히 하드치고는 너무 어렵지 않나싶음
20:57 KaODia: 하아
20:57 KaODia: 고쳐야죠 zz
20:57 KaODia: 마지막연타부분
20:57 KaODia: 전부 슬라?
20:57 B2IN: 네
20:57 B2IN: 킥슬라이더로
20:57 B2IN: 짧은슬라이더
20:57 KaODia: 그 반복슬라
20:57 B2IN: 네
20:57 KaODia: 따따다닥
20:57 B2IN: 드포에있는거
20:58 B2IN: 그리고 왠만하면
20:58 B2IN: 하드에서는 필요한 연타만 넣어요
20:58 B2IN: 아 잠시만요
20:59 B2IN: ㅈㅅ; 맵 손좀보고 계셔보세요. 빨래좀
20:59 KaODia: ㅇㅇ
21:08 B2IN: 00:29:513 (1,2,3,4)-
21:08 B2IN: 34번 삭제하고
21:08 KaODia: 날려요?
21:08 KaODia: ㅇㅇ
21:09 B2IN: 12번 겹쳐서 놓는게 나을ㄷ스
21:09 KaODia: ㅇㅇ
21:09 KaODia: 했어요
21:10 KaODia: 음
21:10 KaODia: 하드인데 좀 최대한 어려운하드로
21:10 B2IN: 하고싶어요 ?
21:10 KaODia: 네
21:10 B2IN: 00:37:877 노트 추가
21:11 KaODia: 인세인은
21:11 KaODia: 만들꺼긴한데
21:11 KaODia: 갈색슬라 위에 써클
21:11 B2IN: 네
21:11 B2IN: 아
21:11 B2IN: 00:41:150 (5)-
21:12 KaODia: 저거
21:12 B2IN: 아까전에 여기 바꾸라했었잔아요 ?
21:12 KaODia: 네
21:12 KaODia: 나둬요?
21:12 B2IN: ㄴㄴ
21:12 B2IN: 5번자리에 지금 보니까 연타가 필요없는 자리네요
21:12 B2IN: 1/2 박자슬라이더로 변경
21:12 KaODia: ㅇㅇ
21:13 KaODia: 스트림통쨰로 날리고요?
21:13 B2IN: 아뇨
21:13 B2IN: 스샷보여드림
21:13 KaODia: ㅇㅇ
21:13 B2IN: 배치는 그냥 아무렇게나 논거
21:13 B2IN: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/558711
21:13 B2IN: 위에꺼만 봐요
21:13 KaODia: 연타가
21:14 KaODia: 5개?
21:14 B2IN: 네
21:14 B2IN: 저 같으면
21:14 B2IN: 저기 연타 자체를 안넣었지만
21:14 B2IN: 어려운 하드 하고싶으시댔으니
21:14 KaODia: 흠
21:15 KaODia: 네
21:15 B2IN: 저같았으면
21:15 B2IN: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/558716
21:15 B2IN: 이런식으로 했었을듯
21:15 KaODia: 슬라두개?
21:15 B2IN: 네
21:16 KaODia: 연속으로?
21:16 B2IN: 1/2박자
21:16 KaODia: 근데
21:16 KaODia: 스트림을 지워버리면
21:16 KaODia: 4번 써클에 붙어버리는데
21:16 KaODia: 어떻하나요
21:17 B2IN: 디스탠스 끄고 옮기면되죠
21:17 KaODia: 무시해도되요?
21:17 B2IN: 애초에 그 스트림도 디스탠스 무시상태였어요
21:17 B2IN: 한
21:17 KaODia: ㅋㅋ
21:17 B2IN: 거리 1.3? 1.5?
21:17 B2IN: 이정도해서 배치하세요
21:18 KaODia: http://puu.sh/1KiAj
21:18 KaODia: 이정도?
21:18 B2IN: 헐
21:18 B2IN: 그 슬라 두개는 왜 붙이심 ㄷ;
21:18 KaODia: 띄울께요
21:19 KaODia: 슬라두개는 디스턴스지키고?
21:19 B2IN: 스샷 보여드릴게요
21:20 B2IN: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/558722
21:20 B2IN: 이런식도 나쁘지않아요
21:21 KaODia: 오호
21:21 B2IN: 근데 이렇게하면 다음 노트
21:21 B2IN: 00:42:240 (1)-
21:21 B2IN: 이거 거리도 맞춰줘야하니
21:21 KaODia: 문제가좀;
21:21 B2IN: 00:42:240 (1)- 이거를 ctrl + g 해서 거리 맞추셔도 되고
21:22 KaODia: 오
21:22 KaODia: 뒤바뀌는군요
21:22 B2IN: 네
21:23 B2IN: 됫어요 ?
21:23 KaODia: 잠시만요
21:24 KaODia: 네
21:24 B2IN: 00:03:331 ~ 00:03:887
21:25 B2IN: 여기 사이에 노트 넣으면 더 좋을듯 싶음
21:25 B2IN: 1/2 박자 슬라이더 두개
21:26 B2IN: 00:03:150
21:26 B2IN: 여기도 넣어도 좋을듯
21:26 KaODia: http://puu.sh/1KiHx
21:27 B2IN: 음..
21:27 B2IN: 슬라이더 두개 겹치는거 좀 별론듯
21:27 KaODia: ㅇㅇ
21:28 KaODia: http://puu.sh/1KiJE
21:29 B2IN: 읭; 거리가 1.0 이 아닌거 같은뎅..
21:29 KaODia: ㅋㅋ?
21:29 KaODia: 위에껀
21:29 KaODia: 디스터스 어기고
21:29 KaODia: 밑에건 디스턴스
21:29 KaODia: 엥
21:30 KaODia: 0.4가되있네
21:30 B2IN: 1.0 으로 ㅋ
21:32 KaODia: http://puu.sh/1KiMy
21:32 B2IN: ㅇㅋ
21:32 KaODia: 네
21:33 B2IN: 00:12:059 (4)-
21:33 B2IN: 지우고
21:33 B2IN: 00:12:422 (5)-
21:33 B2IN: 이거를 그자리에 넣어요
21:33 KaODia: ㅇㅇ
21:33 KaODia: 그럼
21:33 KaODia: 빈공간은요?
21:33 B2IN: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/558736
21:34 B2IN: 서클노트로 채워요
21:34 KaODia: ㅇㅋ
21:34 B2IN: 디스탠스 다시 맞춰주시고
21:34 KaODia: 뒤부터요?
21:34 B2IN: 뒤에잇었던 긴 슬라이더가
21:34 B2IN: 앞으로왓으니
21:34 B2IN: 앞으로 땡겨줘야죠 거리를
21:34 KaODia: 네
21:35 B2IN: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/558739
21:35 B2IN: 요런느낌도 괜찮구
21:36 KaODia: 음
21:36 KaODia: 2번 슬라이더는 그냥 그대로 ㅋㅋ;
21:36 B2IN: 어떤거요 ?
21:37 KaODia: 00:11:272-
21:37 KaODia: 00:11:513 (2)-
21:37 B2IN: 전 그거 바꾸라한적 없는데 ;ㅅ; ㅋ
21:37 KaODia: 엥
21:37 B2IN: 4번
21:38 KaODia: 아
21:38 B2IN: 4번을 지워요
21:38 B2IN: 4번지우고
21:38 B2IN: 4번 빈자리에 5번 슬라이더를 땡기셈
21:38 KaODia: ??
21:38 KaODia: 5번이 서클이잔아요
21:39 B2IN: 긴슬라이더
21:39 B2IN: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/558744
21:39 KaODia: 00:12:059 (4)- 요거?
21:39 B2IN: 지금 이상태 아니에요
21:39 B2IN: ?
21:39 KaODia: 아뇨
21:40 KaODia: 지웠는데
21:40 KaODia: ㅋㅋㅋ
21:40 B2IN: 님이 싫다고해서 되돌렷는데 ;
21:40 KaODia: 엥
21:40 KaODia: 저 님께서 말하시는건
21:40 KaODia: 전부 수정중
21:40 B2IN: 4번 지워야하는데 2번지우신거에요 ?
21:40 KaODia: http://puu.sh/1KiVK
21:40 KaODia: 이렇게요
21:40 KaODia: 아니요 ㅋㅋ
21:41 B2IN: ㅇㅋ
21:41 B2IN: 된거임 그러면
21:41 KaODia: ㅇㅇ
21:41 B2IN: 00:12:786 (5)-
21:41 B2IN: 이거 서클 노트죠 ?
21:41 KaODia: 네
21:41 B2IN: 이거 뉴콤보
21:41 KaODia: 네
21:41 B2IN: 00:16:968 (1)-
21:41 B2IN: 이거 뉴콤보지우고 다음 노트를 뉴콤보
21:41 KaODia: 네
21:43 B2IN: 핰
21:43 KaODia: ???
21:44 B2IN: 00:16:240 (2)-
21:44 B2IN: 이거 긴슬라이더로 바꿔주세요
21:44 B2IN: 00:15:695 (1)- 이거랑 똑같은길이
21:44 KaODia: 엥
21:44 B2IN: 아니면 냅두셔도 되구
21:44 KaODia: ㅇㅇ
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[General]
Collab에 비디오 파일 안들어갔네요, 넣어주시길 바랍니다!

[Easy]
내용이 많으므로 박스를 사용했습니다.
00:01:150 (1,2,3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/567627 이렇게 해보시는게 어떻까요? (자리배치는 알아서 해주세요)
00:01:877 - 서클 추가 (콤보 이어줍니다.)
00:03:695 - ^
00:04:786 - ^
00:08:422 (2) - 슬라이드 이렇게 바꾸세요
00:09:513 - 서클 추가
00:09:877 (3) - 00:08:422 (2) - 과 슬라이드 길이 동일
00:10:604 (4) - 삭제
00:11:331 (5) - 00:10:968 - 으로 이동, 그리고 00:08:422 (2) - 과 슬라이드 길이 동일
00:12:059 - 여기에 1/2 슬라이드 추가해주세요
00:13:331 - 서클 추가
00:13:877 - ^
00:14:240 (4) - 00:14:422 - 으로 이동
00:14:968 - 서클 추가
00:15:331 - ^
00:15:695 (7) - 뉴콤!
00:17:150 (8) - 00:16:968 - 이동 00:17:695 - 1/1 슬라이드 2배길이
00:18:240 - 서클 추가
00:18:604 (9) - 뉴콤!
00:20:422 - 1/1 슬라이드 추가
00:21:513 (2) - 1/1 슬라이드 반복 추가!
00:22:604 (3) - 1/1 슬라이드 2배길이로 교체! (반복 넣으셔도 좋아요~)
00:25:150 (5) - 1/2 슬라이드 스냅에서 한칸만 줄이세요
00:26:604 - 서클 추가?
00:27:331 (6) - 뉴콤!
00:32:422 (4) - 00:32:059 - 으로 이동
00:33:150 - 1/1 슬라이드 반복와 뉴콤 추가!
00:34:240 (5) - 1/1 슬라이드 한단만 줄이세요~
00:36:059 (6) - [url=http://puu.sh/1NeVt] 슬라이드로 넣어보시는게 어떻까요? (뉴콤)
00:36:968 - 서클 추가
00:37:513 (7) - 00:37:331 - 으로 이동, [url=http://puu.sh/1NeVt]슬라이드 이렇게 바꾸세요
00:38:240 - 1/2 슬라이드 반복 추가
00:38:968 (9) - 뉴콤
00:40:422 (10) - ^ 위 슬라이드와 같게
00:42:240 - 서클 추가?
00:42:604 - 1/1 슬라이드 추가?
00:43:331 (4) - 1/2 슬라이드 반복 추가 (뉴콤)
00:44:059 - ^
00:45:150 - 1/1 슬라이드 반복 추가
00:46:240 (8) - 뉴콤
00:46:968 (7) - 00:46:786 - 으로 이동 [url=http://puu.sh/1NeVt]슬라이드 이렇게 바꾸세요
00:47:695 (8) - 00:47:513 - 으로 이동 ^
00:49:150 (11) - 슬라이드만 ^ (앞부분 Finishi)
00:57:877 (2) - 00:57:695 - 으로 이동 [url=http://puu.sh/1NeVt] 반복 삭제
00:58:604 - 1/2 슬라 추가
01:01:513 - 1/2 슬라 반복 추가
01:05:150 (6) - 뉴콤
01:08:422 - 서클 추가?
01:08:786 - 1/2 슬라 반복 추가
01:16:786 (4) - 뉴콤
01:19:695 (8) - 뉴콤
01:26:877 (1) - 01:26:786 - 이동 01:29:331 - 끝부분
추가 자리배치는 알아서 해주세요~ 디스텐스 간격 맞춰가면서요~

[Ohzero's Normal]
앞부분은 제가 어떻게 못하므로 Skip
00:43:331 (3,4) - 1/2 슬라 반복으로 교체?
01:02:240 (1,2) - 너무 고정인거 같아요.. 다른 패턴으로 바꿔보시는 게 어떨까요..?
01:05:150 (3) - 뉴콤
01:09:513 (3) - 01:09:331 - 으로 이동, [url=http://puu.sh/1NeVt]슬라이드 이렇게 바꾸세요
01:10:240 (4,5) - 1/2 슬라 반복으로 교체?
01:10:968 (1) - [url=http://puu.sh/1NeVt] 슬라이드로 바꿔보시는게 어떨까요? (반복삭제)
01:12:059 (2) - 01:11:877 - 서클로 변경?
01:13:150 (3) - 01:12:240 - 으로 이동, 1/1 슬라이드 길이 2배
01:13:513 (4) - 1/2 슬라 반복 추가
01:25:513 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/567762 이렇게 해보시는게 어떠신가요?
01:22:604 (1) - 01:26:786 - 이동 01:29:331 - 끝부분

[Kiiwa's Insane]
00:07:786 (5) - 00:07:604 - move?
00:22:786 (1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/567719 thus?
00:25:150 (4) - 00:24:968 - move?
00:25:513 (5) - circle add?
00:31:331 (1,2,3,4,1) - To make accurate polygon
:arrow: (1) x:476 y:96 , (2) x:424 y:188 , (3) x:320 y:164 , (4) x:308 y:60 , (1) x:404 y:16 may not be accurate :D
00:42:240 - circle add?
Very good difficulty!

[Collab]
하드인지 인센인지.. :o
콜랍이 인센 처럼 보입니다. 하드를 추가하셔야할지도 모릅니다. <- 무시
01:21:150 (3) - 뉴콤?


Ranked Hope :lol:
(444 post KaoDia sama Curse!)
ReySHeL
612 posts
Joined March 2012
ReySHeL
can i make a taiko maps?
KaODia
20 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
KaODia

ReySHeL wrote:

can i make a taiko maps?
of course.! sure thank you :)
ReySHeL
612 posts
Joined March 2012
ReySHeL
http://puu.sh/1NzTk
finish~ :D
KaODia
20 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
KaODia

ReySHeL wrote:

http://puu.sh/1NzTk
finish~ :D
ok, Thank you so much :)
jomnhnk
276 posts
Joined March 2010
jomnhnk
Good map~！！！

The Taiko map made by ReySHeL. So you were to add ReySHeL tags is nice.
ReySHeL
612 posts
Joined March 2012
ReySHeL
http://puu.sh/1NFri
Taiko BG~ :)
KaODia
20 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
KaODia

ReySHeL wrote:

http://puu.sh/1NFri
Taiko BG~ :)
ahhh thx :)
Chocoliti
130 posts
Joined January 2012
Chocoliti
별주고싶은데 i have not kudosu..
scanter
2,385 posts
Joined July 2012
scanter
[General]

SPOILER
Song Setup에서 Storyboarding 탭에 Letterbox during breaks 체크 해제하세요.
Song Setup에서 General 탭에 Artist를 ちょうちょ로 변경.

[Easy]

Style

SPOILER
전반적으로 직선 슬라이더가 많아서 지루해 보입니다. 보컬음에 따라서 모양을 구부리시는 걸 추천.
00:06:240 (1) - 거리 0.8에 안 맞네요. 다른 곳으로 이동시키는걸 추천.
00:06:240 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 참고해보세요. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/581160, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/581161
00:12:059 (2) - 2 그리드 왼쪽, 1 그리드 위로
00:23:695 - 서클 추가하시길. 예를들어 이렇게 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/581223
00:49:877 - 서클하나 추가?
00:49:150 (12) - 이렇게 해보시는 것도 나쁘지 않을듯.? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/581175
00:57:877 (2,3,4,5) - 1 그리드 오른쪽으로
01:13:513 - 서클 추가
01:16:422 - ^
01:22:240 - ^
01:25:150 (2) - 이건 어때요? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/581212

Combo

SPOILER
뉴콤은 특정 음 부분 따라가시는게 아니면 기다란 하얀틱에 맞추는게 좋아요. 제껀 별로 도움 안 될꺼임
00:01:877 (2) - NC?
00:03:695 (1) - NC 삭제
00:04:059 (2) - NC
00:04:786 (1) - NC 삭제
00:06:240 (1) - NC 삭제
00:06:968 (2) - NC
00:09:513 (1) - NC 삭제
00:09:877 (2) - NC
00:10:968 (1) - NC 삭제
00:12:786 (3) - NC
00:13:331 (1) - NC 삭제
00:15:695 (5) - NC
00:17:150 (1) - NC 삭제
00:18:604 (2) - NC
00:21:513 (3) - NC
00:27:331 (2) - NC
00:32:422 (5) - NC
00:36:059 (9) - NC
00:38:968 (13) - NC
00:44:786 (5) - NC
00:47:695 (9) - NC
00:59:331 (3) - NC
01:02:240 (7) - NC
01:07:331 (5) - NC
01:10:240 (8) - NC
01:16:786 (5) - NC
01:19:695 (9) - NC

Sound

SPOILER
무시하셔도 되요. 00:01:150 (1) - Finish 삭제 and Clap 추가
00:02:240 (3) - 머리부분 Clap 제거?
00:03:695 (1) - Finish 삭제
00:04:059 (2) - Clap 추가
00:06:240 (1) - 머리 부분 Finish 제거
00:06:968 (2) - 머리 부분 Finish
00:15:695 (5) - 첫 번째 애로우 and 끝 부분 Clap 추가
00:18:604 (2) - Whistle 제거?
00:20:059 (1) - Whistle 제거
00:20:422 (2) - 끝 부분 Clap
00:22:240 (4) - 머리 부분 Clap
00:23:695 (6) - Clap 추가
00:24:422 (1) - 끝 부분 Clap
00:27:331 (2) - Whistle 제거
00:27:695 (3) - ^
00:30:240 (1) - 머리 부분 Finish
00:30:968 (2) - Whistle 지우고 Clap
00:32:422 (5) - 머리 부분 Clap and 끝 부분 Clap 제거
00:33:513 (6) - 끝 부분 Clap
00:34:240 (7) - Whistle 지우고 끝 부분 Clap
00:35:695 (8) - Clap?
00:36:059 (9) - Finish 제거
00:36:422 (10) - 끝 부분 Clap
00:37:877 (12) - 애로우 Clap
00:38:968 (13) - 끝 부분 Clap
00:42:240 (2) - 끝 부분 Whistle
00:43:695 (4) - ^
00:44:786 (5) - Clap 삭제
00:45:150 (6) - 첫 번째 애로우에 Whistle
00:46:968 (8) - 머리 부분에 Whistle
00:47:695 (9) - 머리 부분 Finish? and 끝 부분 Clap
00:55:695 (1) - 끝 부분 Clap
00:56:422 (1) - 머리 부분 Finish
00:57:877 (2) - 애로우 Clap
00:59:331 (3) - Clap 삭제
00:59:695 (4) - Clap
01:01:513 (6) - 끝 부분 Clap
01:02:240 (7) - 첫 번째 애로우 Clap and 끝 부분 Clap
01:05:150 (1) - Whistle 제거
01:05:877 (3) - ^
01:06:240 (4) - 끝 부분 Clap
01:07:331 (5) - ^
01:08:422 (6) - 첫 번째 애로우 Clap and 끝 부분 Clap
01:10:240 (8) - 끝 부분 Clap
01:11:331 (9) - Clap 삭제
01:13:513 - Clap 추가
01:13:877 (1) - Finish 추가
01:14:240 (2) - 끝 부분 Clap
01:16:786 (5) - Whistle 제거
01:17:513 (7) - Clap 추가 and Whistle 제거
01:17:877 (8) - 머리 부분 Clap 제거 and 두 번째 애로우 Clap 제거
01:20:059 (10) - Clap 제거
01:20:422 (11) - Whistle 제거 and Clap 추가
01:21:877 (13) - Finish 제거
01:22:604 (1) - 머리 부분 Finish
01:25:513 - Clap 추가
01:26:604 (3) - Finish

Timing
SPOILER
00:01:786 - 00:01:877 이 쪽으로 옮기세요.
00:05:968 - 00:06:240 ^
00:18:604 - 녹색 선 추가 and 볼륨은 40~55%정도
00:30:240 - ^ and 볼륨은 55~65% 정도
00:42:240 - ^ and 볼륨은 50~55% 정도
00:47:695 - ^ and 볼륨은 55~65% 정도
00:55:331 - ^ and 볼륨은 30~40% 정도
00:56:059 - ^ and 볼륨은 55~65% 정도
01:07:968 - 키아이 끄시고 볼륨 80%
01:08:059 - 키아이 키시고 볼륨 80%
01:22:604 - 볼륨 60~70%

일단 제출할께요 헥헥
Gamu
Elite Mapper
2,606 posts
Joined December 2010
Gamu
:? hi~

Sorry for being late ;w;

[General]

●This video file is useless. Because this is break the rules. There are rules to the resolution of the video.
800 * 600 is the largest(4:3). or, 848*480 is the largest(16:9). You must abide by the rules of these.
So, I have prepared a video for you. http://puu.sh/1TWLR
However, the quality of the original video is little bad. So I can not do anything.. sorry orz
There is a need to find a good quality video.

●Tags: Add "anime" ? This song is a song of anime. So, I think need to put.

●Tags: Add "ReySHeL" Must contain the name of this person.

●SB file: "BG01" and "White Effect" and "1"...I do not find these files. If you do not need, please remove. http://puu.sh/1TWHl

●All diff: Resnaps All Notes http://puu.sh/1TWN6

●Inconsistency in LetterboxInBreaks: http://puu.sh/1TWRJ You must be "0" it. So please turn off. http://puu.sh/1TWT5

●taiko diff is required at least 2. The text below is about it.

Sakura wrote:

From now on, single taiko diffs in mapsets are unrankable, include 2 and at least one of them should be an easier level if there isn't an osu! Easy (not normal).
The above applies only if you want to include Taiko diffs in your set.
[Ohzero]

●100% volume is very loud. Please lower the volume a little
●00:19:695 (2) - Move (x:240 y:200). Become beautiful
●00:25:150 (2) - Suggestion of arrangement. I think this place is great. http://puu.sh/1TX3t
●00:30:240 (1) - Whistle ⇒ finish change (Start)
●00:53:513 (1) - finish ⇒ whistle change
●00:56:422 (3) - clap ⇒ finish change
●01:27:059 (1) - You need to start at 01:26:786
●Shape of the slider is pretty good. However, there are a lot of problems. It is Hitsound. Please get a lot of Mod.

[Kiiwa]

●amazing map <3

[Collab]

●00:01:150 (T) - It is unnecessary (Green line).
●00:55:877 (3) - remove finish
●hmm... Please get a lot of Mod. Mainly hitsound


need a lot of Mod~
good luck :3

@KaODia : Easy diff ha, anata ga iru toki ni mod shimasu. well, chat de anata ni advice shimasu. it's ok?
KaODia
20 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
KaODia

-Gamu- wrote:

:? hi~

Sorry for being late ;w;

[General]

●This video file is useless. Because this is break the rules. There are rules to the resolution of the video.
800 * 600 is the largest(4:3). or, 848*480 is the largest(16:9). You must abide by the rules of these.
So, I have prepared a video for you. http://puu.sh/1TWLR
However, the quality of the original video is little bad. So I can not do anything.. sorry orz
There is a need to find a good quality video.

●Tags: Add "anime" ? This song is a song of anime. So, I think need to put.

●Tags: Add "ReySHeL" Must contain the name of this person.

●SB file: "BG01" and "White Effect" and "1"...I do not find these files. If you do not need, please remove. http://puu.sh/1TWHl

●All diff: Resnaps All Notes http://puu.sh/1TWN6

●Inconsistency in LetterboxInBreaks: http://puu.sh/1TWRJ You must be "0" it. So please turn off. http://puu.sh/1TWT5

●taiko diff is required at least 2. The text below is about it.

Sakura wrote:

From now on, single taiko diffs in mapsets are unrankable, include 2 and at least one of them should be an easier level if there isn't an osu! Easy (not normal).
The above applies only if you want to include Taiko diffs in your set.
[Ohzero]

●100% volume is very loud. Please lower the volume a little
●00:19:695 (2) - Move (x:240 y:200). Become beautiful
●00:25:150 (2) - Suggestion of arrangement. I think this place is great. http://puu.sh/1TX3t
●00:30:240 (1) - Whistle ⇒ finish change (Start)
●00:53:513 (1) - finish ⇒ whistle change
●00:56:422 (3) - clap ⇒ finish change
●01:27:059 (1) - You need to start at 01:26:786
●Shape of the slider is pretty good. However, there are a lot of problems. It is Hitsound. Please get a lot of Mod.

[Kiiwa]

●amazing map <3

[Collab]

●00:01:150 (T) - It is unnecessary (Green line).
●00:55:877 (3) - remove finish
●hmm... Please get a lot of Mod. Mainly hitsound


need a lot of Mod~
good luck :3

@KaODia : Easy diff ha, anata ga iru toki ni mod shimasu. well, chat de anata ni advice shimasu. it's ok?

ohhh okurete sumimasen arigatou!!!!
KaODia
20 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
KaODia
헉짱 많음 ;; 땡큐
KaODia
20 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
KaODia
모딩 모든분들께 감사해요!
Last edited by KaODia , edited 1 time in total.
KaODia
20 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
KaODia
.........
KaODia
20 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
KaODia

scanter wrote:

[General]

SPOILER
Song Setup에서 Storyboarding 탭에 Letterbox during breaks 체크 해제하세요.
Song Setup에서 General 탭에 Artist를 ちょうちょ로 변경.

[Easy]

Style

SPOILER
전반적으로 직선 슬라이더가 많아서 지루해 보입니다. 보컬음에 따라서 모양을 구부리시는 걸 추천.
00:06:240 (1) - 거리 0.8에 안 맞네요. 다른 곳으로 이동시키는걸 추천.
00:06:240 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 참고해보세요. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/581160, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/581161
00:12:059 (2) - 2 그리드 왼쪽, 1 그리드 위로
00:23:695 - 서클 추가하시길. 예를들어 이렇게 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/581223
00:49:877 - 서클하나 추가?
00:49:150 (12) - 이렇게 해보시는 것도 나쁘지 않을듯.? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/581175
00:57:877 (2,3,4,5) - 1 그리드 오른쪽으로
01:13:513 - 서클 추가
01:16:422 - ^
01:22:240 - ^
01:25:150 (2) - 이건 어때요? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/581212

Combo

SPOILER
뉴콤은 특정 음 부분 따라가시는게 아니면 기다란 하얀틱에 맞추는게 좋아요. 제껀 별로 도움 안 될꺼임
00:01:877 (2) - NC?
00:03:695 (1) - NC 삭제
00:04:059 (2) - NC
00:04:786 (1) - NC 삭제
00:06:240 (1) - NC 삭제
00:06:968 (2) - NC
00:09:513 (1) - NC 삭제
00:09:877 (2) - NC
00:10:968 (1) - NC 삭제
00:12:786 (3) - NC
00:13:331 (1) - NC 삭제
00:15:695 (5) - NC
00:17:150 (1) - NC 삭제
00:18:604 (2) - NC
00:21:513 (3) - NC
00:27:331 (2) - NC
00:32:422 (5) - NC
00:36:059 (9) - NC
00:38:968 (13) - NC
00:44:786 (5) - NC
00:47:695 (9) - NC
00:59:331 (3) - NC
01:02:240 (7) - NC
01:07:331 (5) - NC
01:10:240 (8) - NC
01:16:786 (5) - NC
01:19:695 (9) - NC

Sound

SPOILER
무시하셔도 되요. 00:01:150 (1) - Finish 삭제 and Clap 추가
00:02:240 (3) - 머리부분 Clap 제거?
00:03:695 (1) - Finish 삭제
00:04:059 (2) - Clap 추가
00:06:240 (1) - 머리 부분 Finish 제거
00:06:968 (2) - 머리 부분 Finish
00:15:695 (5) - 첫 번째 애로우 and 끝 부분 Clap 추가
00:18:604 (2) - Whistle 제거?
00:20:059 (1) - Whistle 제거
00:20:422 (2) - 끝 부분 Clap
00:22:240 (4) - 머리 부분 Clap
00:23:695 (6) - Clap 추가
00:24:422 (1) - 끝 부분 Clap
00:27:331 (2) - Whistle 제거
00:27:695 (3) - ^
00:30:240 (1) - 머리 부분 Finish
00:30:968 (2) - Whistle 지우고 Clap
00:32:422 (5) - 머리 부분 Clap and 끝 부분 Clap 제거
00:33:513 (6) - 끝 부분 Clap
00:34:240 (7) - Whistle 지우고 끝 부분 Clap
00:35:695 (8) - Clap?
00:36:059 (9) - Finish 제거
00:36:422 (10) - 끝 부분 Clap
00:37:877 (12) - 애로우 Clap
00:38:968 (13) - 끝 부분 Clap
00:42:240 (2) - 끝 부분 Whistle
00:43:695 (4) - ^
00:44:786 (5) - Clap 삭제
00:45:150 (6) - 첫 번째 애로우에 Whistle
00:46:968 (8) - 머리 부분에 Whistle
00:47:695 (9) - 머리 부분 Finish? and 끝 부분 Clap
00:55:695 (1) - 끝 부분 Clap
00:56:422 (1) - 머리 부분 Finish
00:57:877 (2) - 애로우 Clap
00:59:331 (3) - Clap 삭제
00:59:695 (4) - Clap
01:01:513 (6) - 끝 부분 Clap
01:02:240 (7) - 첫 번째 애로우 Clap and 끝 부분 Clap
01:05:150 (1) - Whistle 제거
01:05:877 (3) - ^
01:06:240 (4) - 끝 부분 Clap
01:07:331 (5) - ^
01:08:422 (6) - 첫 번째 애로우 Clap and 끝 부분 Clap
01:10:240 (8) - 끝 부분 Clap
01:11:331 (9) - Clap 삭제
01:13:513 - Clap 추가
01:13:877 (1) - Finish 추가
01:14:240 (2) - 끝 부분 Clap
01:16:786 (5) - Whistle 제거
01:17:513 (7) - Clap 추가 and Whistle 제거
01:17:877 (8) - 머리 부분 Clap 제거 and 두 번째 애로우 Clap 제거
01:20:059 (10) - Clap 제거
01:20:422 (11) - Whistle 제거 and Clap 추가
01:21:877 (13) - Finish 제거
01:22:604 (1) - 머리 부분 Finish
01:25:513 - Clap 추가
01:26:604 (3) - Finish

Timing
SPOILER
00:01:786 - 00:01:877 이 쪽으로 옮기세요.
00:05:968 - 00:06:240 ^
00:18:604 - 녹색 선 추가 and 볼륨은 40~55%정도
00:30:240 - ^ and 볼륨은 55~65% 정도
00:42:240 - ^ and 볼륨은 50~55% 정도
00:47:695 - ^ and 볼륨은 55~65% 정도
00:55:331 - ^ and 볼륨은 30~40% 정도
00:56:059 - ^ and 볼륨은 55~65% 정도
01:07:968 - 키아이 끄시고 볼륨 80%
01:08:059 - 키아이 키시고 볼륨 80%
01:22:604 - 볼륨 60~70%

일단 제출할께요 헥헥

KaODia wrote:

캄샤합니다
Shop
30 posts
Joined September 2011
Shop
[Ohzero's Normal]

00:05:877 (5) - 이거 4, 6 슬라 사이에 껴있는건데 조금 삐딱하니깐 예쁘게 수정해주세여 :>
00:08:422 (5,6) - 굳이 이런 배치 쓰시려면 http://puu.sh/25wm8 이런게 났지 않을까요? 어디까지나 스샷의 배치는 급히급히 만든거이고 제안입니다. 참고삼아 배치해주셔도 되고, 무시하셔도 되고 :D
00:09:513 (1,2,3,4,5) - 이거 디스턴스 스냅 0.8로 하고 예쁘게 이어주세여 :D http://puu.sh/25wpX
00:15:695 - 여기는 박자가 하나 비었는데 넣어주시면 좋겠어요.
00:19:695 (2,3,4,5) - 디스턴스 스냅 0.9로 하고 거리 일정하게!
00:32:240 (3,4,5) - 엇박 넣으셨는데 리버스 슬라이더로 대체하시는게 어때요?
00:38:422 (1,2,3) - D: 스냅 1.0으로 하고 2번 서클 바깥쪽으로 살짝 빼주시면 간격 일정해져요
01:08:059 (1,2) - 이건 왜 높이가 다를까여 ㅁㄴㅇㄹ 스냅 1.0으로 하시고 1번슬라 오른쪽으로 좀 땡기시면 높이 같아짐
01:11:877 (6,7,8) - 이건 일자로 배치하는게 예쁠거같아요 스냅은 0.4를 추천! http://puu.sh/25wB6

[Kiiwa's Insane]

:O

[Collab]

00:05:331 (4) - 솔직히 슬라가 기괴하네요. http://puu.sh/25wIn 바깥으로 삐죽 튀어나온거 지워보시고 마음에 안드시면 냅두세여 :)
00:06:059 - 서클 추가
00:09:877 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - 슬라 모양이 왜 다 다르죠 D:
00:18:513 - 서클추가
00:18:604 (1,2) - 슬라모양이 다르네요
00:19:331 (3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/25wQ2 이런식으로 배치해주시면 좋겠네여. 꼭 이런식으로 하라는건 아니에여 :D
00:24:786 (5) - Ctrl+G 하셔서 슬라 뒤집어주시면 O_o
01:02:786 (4) - 뒤집어봐도 괜찮을듯 싶네영


모딩끝. 노멀에 정성이 묻어나지 않나요? 콜랍이 하드라니 문화컬쳐 충격쇼크임;
Sonnyc
7,753 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
[Easy:]
00:06:604 (4) - (408,344) 에라도 놓으셔야 매우 먼 디스탄스를 잡을 수 있을듯
00:18:604 (x) - 노트 추가가 시급하다고 봐요
00:24:422 (1) - 오프스크린은 안되요~ 안으로 잘 넣어보세요 : http://puu.sh/26ww9
00:32:059 (4) - 거리 신경 바랍니다. (386,34)가 좋을듯
00:49:150 (4,5) - (4)를 00:49:695에 끝내고, (5)는 지우세요
00:55:695 (1) - 이지니까 이거는 지우기로 해요
01:10:968 (1) - 거리 수정 바람~
01:18:968 (5) - 1/2 안쓰셨으니, 이거도 그냥 1/1 슬라이더로 만드세요
01:21:877 (5,6,1) - 1칸 오른쪽
[Ozhero's Normal:]
-- 좀 .. 노트별로 거리가 안맞는게 많은데 신경쓰셔야 겠어요 :(

00:04:059 (1) - 1/2 줄이셔서 00:01:150 (1,2)와 같은 효과를 보시길.
00:06:059 (6) - (272,32)로 옮겨보세요? 거리위해..
00:26:604 (5) - 이거도 굽은 슬라이더로 만들어 보세요
00:28:604 (4) - O.o 노말에 1/4은 아닌듯요. 슬라이더라도
00:51:695 (3) - 거리
00:56:422 (3) - 뉴콤
01:10:968 (5) - 뉴콤
01:11:877 (6,7,8) - 거리를 0.36x로 한 의도가 있으신가요,, 이 경우에는 겹치는게 더 나을지도 모르겠어요. 노말에는 헷갈
01:19:695 (1) - 오른쪽 리버스에 Clap 넣어주세요
[Collab:]
00:04:786 (3) - 이전 노트와 이렇게 가까우면 곤란함~
00:05:331 (4) - 못생김 ><
00:15:695 (1) - 이거도 이전 노트와 너무 가까운듯요
00:16:968 (4,1) - 00:16:968에서 슬라이더 시작하면 좋을듯요
00:24:786 (5) - 가까움
00:32:240 (5) - 딱히 예상 못한 점프네요. 거리를 줄이시거나, 뉴콤을 하세요
00:36:059 (4) - 뉴콤
00:51:877 (6) - 뉴콤
00:55:877 (3) - 여기 피니시는 삭제 바라요
01:12:968 (6) - 이전 노트에 비해 매우 부담스러운 점프임. (4)를 콘트롤G하면 동일 거리이긴 하지만, 그거는 그저 시각적 요소만 제공하는 것이기 때문에 거리가 잘 통일되는 (348,88)로 옮기기 바랍니다.
01:18:604 (5) - 이거를 1/4 줄여서 01:19:059 (6) 슬라이더가 01:18:968에서 시작하면 좋을듯요
[kiiwa's Insane:]
00:24:968 (x) - Imo, adding a note here will be nice.
00:27:150 (x) - ^
01:07:786 (6,7) - Deleting these will be better
01:12:786 (2,3) - D: This is so confusing.. At least, consider placing at (196,140)

홧팅!
taka1235
609 posts
Joined February 2009
taka1235
i love this song^^
TheWantedOne
21 posts
Joined May 2012
TheWantedOne
This beatmap is great! I love this anime! But perhaps you can improve the video quality? it will look bad on 1366x768 resolution and up.
Sylith
722 posts
Joined September 2012
Sylith
IRC mod
00:08 sKZy: 음; 도움이 되실지는 모르겠는데
00:08 KaODia: ㄷ대충해주셔도 쿠도스드림;
00:08 sKZy: 콜랍만이라도.. 그냥 느낌 좀 특이하다 싶은것들 있으면 알려드릴게여
00:08 KaODia: ㅇㅇ
00:08 sKZy: 다하기는 제 멘탈이 좀...
00:08 sKZy: 00:12:059 (4) -
00:08 sKZy: 요거
00:09 sKZy: 조금더 왼쪽으로해보셔도 될거같아요
00:09 KaODia: ㅇㅇ
00:09 sKZy: 00:22:240 (7,8) -
00:09 sKZy: 박자
00:09 sKZy: 컨트롤 G 해보세요
00:10 KaODia: 슬라이더뒤집기
00:10 sKZy: 박자만이요 ㅋㅋ
00:10 sKZy: 슬라이더랑 노트랑 박자를 반대루
00:10 sKZy: 전 이게 더 듣기 좋은듯
00:10 KaODia: 그러면걍 슬라이더만 뒤집히는데??
00:10 sKZy: 노트랑
00:10 sKZy: 슬라랑
00:10 sKZy: 두개 선택하고 해보세요
00:10 sKZy: 나오는순서도바껴여
00:11 KaODia: 아
00:11 KaODia: ㅇㅇ
00:11 sKZy: 00:33:695 (4,1,2,3) -
00:11 sKZy: 요부분
00:11 KaODia: 네
00:12 sKZy: 3연타 지우고 4 한칸 미루시고 노트넣으시는게
00:12 sKZy: 더 자연스러울거같은데
00:12 sKZy: 큰 문제는 없으려나
00:12 KaODia: 이게자연스러워보이는데걍;
00:12 sKZy: 음
00:13 sKZy: 00:36:494 -
00:13 sKZy: 요기
00:13 sKZy: 00:36:494 -
00:13 sKZy: 모양 좀만 이쁘게해주시면 좋을거같아요
00:13 sKZy: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/711893
00:13 KaODia: 네
00:14 sKZy: 00:54:968 -
00:14 sKZy: 서클추가 해보세요
00:15 KaODia: 모양새를어떻게;
00:15 sKZy: 음....
00:16 sKZy: 그냥 6자리에 스택하셔도 괜찮을거같은데
00:17 KaODia: 넣었어요
00:18 sKZy: 아니면
00:18 sKZy: 00:54:786 -
00:18 sKZy: 00:54:877 -
00:18 sKZy: 00:54:968 -
00:18 sKZy: 요렇게 3연타가 훨씬 나을거같네요
00:18 KaODia: 점프지우거여?
00:19 sKZy: 아녀
00:19 sKZy: 그냥
00:19 sKZy: 배치는 제가 뭐라 할수있는게 아니긴 한데...
00:19 sKZy: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/711900
00:19 sKZy: 요렇게 한번 해보셔도 될거같아요
00:19 KaODia: ㅇㅎ
00:20 sKZy: 쥬슈님파트는 잘짜신듯...
00:21 sKZy: 00:04:786 -
00:21 sKZy: 요근처
00:21 sKZy: 리듬바꿔보시는건어때요?
00:21 KaODia: 어떻해요
00:21 sKZy: 음; 그건 제가 어떻게 짜드린다고 되는게 아닌거같은데
00:21 sKZy: 음
00:22 sKZy: 딱히 악기소리 튀는부분이 아니니까
00:22 KaODia: 네
00:22 sKZy: 보컬에 맞추셔서 시작할때 슬라시작 맞추셔도 될거같아요
00:26 KaODia: 음
00:26 sKZy: 음
00:26 sKZy: 저라면... 음
00:27 sKZy: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/711915
00:27 sKZy: 대충 이렇게 짤거같은데
00:27 sKZy: 제가 매핑실력이 후달려서 자세히 말씀드리기는 그렇네요 ㅠ
00:27 sKZy: 00:04:786 -
00:27 sKZy: 시작점은 여기구요
00:27 KaODia: 3번슬라는됬고
00:28 KaODia: 4번슬라를줄이는군요
00:28 sKZy: 아녀 3번도 줄였어요
00:28 sKZy: 빨간틱까지였었는데
00:28 sKZy: 00:22:240 (7,8) -
00:28 sKZy: 빰 하는 소리가
00:28 sKZy: 00:05:331 -
00:28 sKZy: 여기에서 나오잖아요
00:28 sKZy: 전 그래서 여기다가 노트뒀는데..
00:30 sKZy: 쥬슈님 리듬 참고하셔서 틀짜셔도 괜찮을거같아요
00:30 KaODia: 원래
00:30 KaODia: 초록부분
00:30 KaODia: 거기를 주황으로바꾼거죠?
00:31 sKZy: 잠시만요 ㅋㅋㅋ 제가 지워버려서
00:31 sKZy: 01:26:604 (1) -
00:31 sKZy: 아니
00:31 sKZy: 00:04:786 -
00:31 sKZy: 여기가 3이예요
00:31 KaODia: 원래 거기부터 슬라시작지점인데 ㅋㅋ
00:31 sKZy: 끝지점을 줄였을거예요
00:31 sKZy: 아닌가...
00:31 KaODia: 스샷보면
00:31 KaODia: 3번슬라는 똑같고
00:32 KaODia: 4번슬라줄여서 노트더 붙이신듯
00:32 sKZy: 아 3번같나요 ㅋㅋ
00:32 KaODia: 네
00:32 sKZy: 아 그렇네요
00:32 sKZy: 제가 줄인게 4번이네요 ; 햇갈린듯
00:32 KaODia: 네
00:32 KaODia: 써클삽입끝
00:33 sKZy: 마지막
00:33 sKZy: 01:26:422 -
00:33 sKZy: 01:26:422 (5) -
00:33 sKZy: 요거 노트로 지워보시고
00:33 sKZy: 슬라 1틱 땡기는게 더 자연스러워보이긴 하네요
00:34 KaODia: 원래슬라이더를 지우라고요?
00:34 sKZy: 넹
00:34 sKZy: 무리하게 슬라로 넣을필요 없을거같아요
00:34 KaODia: 아걍 지워놓기만하면끝?
00:35 KaODia: 써클하나넣을까요
00:35 sKZy: 지우고 서클하나
00:35 sKZy: 넣어보세요
00:35 sKZy: 슬라래
00:35 sKZy: 그
00:35 sKZy: 스피너
00:35 sKZy: 1틱땡겨보시구요
00:36 sKZy: 아 그리구
00:36 sKZy: 00:19:331 (3,4) -
00:36 sKZy: 여기도 컨트롤 g하는게 더 나은거같다고 생각해요
00:36 KaODia: 엥
00:37 KaODia: http://puu.sh/2D27K.jpg
00:37 KaODia: 이리?
00:37 sKZy: 아뇨 ㅋㅋ 배치는 따로 하셔야죠
00:37 KaODia: 아네
00:37 sKZy: 리듬이...
00:38 sKZy: 음
00:38 sKZy: 요기리듬도 한번 바꿔보셔도 될거같은데
00:38 sKZy: 00:24:059 (4) -
00:38 sKZy: 00:24:604 -
00:38 sKZy: 여기 공백으로 비우고싶으시면
00:39 sKZy: 4를 노트, 1/4슬라이더로 쪼개시면 될거같아요
00:40 sKZy: 그런데 딱히 공백 없애셔도 괜찮으시면
00:40 sKZy: 노트 노트 슬라이더 하셔서 공백 매꿔보셔도 좋을거같아요


부족한 모딩이지만... ㅜㅜ
랭크힘내시길!
KaODia
20 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
KaODia

taka1235 wrote:

i love this song^^
Thank you^^
Nemis
847 posts
Joined May 2012
Nemis
[Collab]
HP 6
KaODia's part needs a hitsounding rework, I suggest to hitsound it again. Ohzero's part needs a little hitsound rework too.

00:05:695 (5,6,7,1) - I suggest to remove the jump 00:06:059 (7,1) - here, I don't find it so fun to play since it's linear
00:09:877 (1,2) - I suggest to fix this blanket
00:12:786 (1,2) - Stack these two beats
00:15:331 (8,1) - Fix this spacing
00:19:331 (3,4) - Unstack them
00:36:059 (4,5) - Fix the overlap:
SPOILER
00:38:604 (4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - Sincerly I don't like this pattern, it's hard too read
00:41:513 (7) - I suggest to change this slider to 00:41:150 (6) - this one rotated by 180°
00:43:331 (3,4) - I suggest to fix this blanket:
SPOILER
01:10:422 (7,8) - I suggest to reverse them (CTRL+G) they flow awesome
01:15:877 (1,2,3) - Fix this blanket:
SPOILER
01:21:877 (2) - I suggest to low this slider's start volume
01:26:059 (4,5) - Unstack (5) and move it at x:264;y:344, it would be better
01:26:604 (1) - I suggest to finish this spinner at 01:29:150 (1) -

[Kiiwa]
00:07:695 (4,5,6,1) - I suggest to fix this blanket
00:14:968 (1,2,1) - I suggest to stack perfectly all the sliders' ends
00:16:059 (2,3) - Fix this:
SPOILER
00:41:331 (1,2,3,4,5) - I suggest to increase the spacing in this pattern (you should start to deincrease the spacing from 00:42:604 (1) - , not from here)
00:50:968 (2) - I suggest to add a note here and 00:51:513 (4) - (more readable)
01:12:786 (2,3) - I suggest to unstack them moving (2) somewhere
01:16:240 (3,4) - I suggest to unstack them too
01:26:604 (1) - I suggest to finish this spinner at 01:29:150 (1) -

[Ohzero's Normal]
00:12:059 (5) - I suggest to add a whistle on its start
00:24:059 (6) - Whistle
00:26:604 (5) - Whistle on begin & end
00:30:968 (2) - Whistle
00:32:968 (6) - I suggest to remove this finish
00:35:331 (5) - Whistle on end

[Easy]
This difficulty is a bit hard (I'm talking about its rhythm)
00:12:786 (1,2) - Fix the overlap
00:17:695 (2,3,1) - Fix the spacing
00:24:422 (1,1) - Spacing
00:49:150 (4) - Add a reverse:
SPOILER
01:14:968 (3,4) - I suggest to fix the overlap
01:25:513 (1,2) - I suggest to change this pattern in:
SPOILER
01:26:604 (1) - I suggest to finish this spinner at 01:29:150 (1) -
(＾∇＾)ﾉ
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전 꾸미는데에는 익숙하지 않아서 그냥 밋밋하게 쓸게요

난이도 분배가 중요한데 하드난이도가 없으면 안되지 않나 싶어요.

Easy

Letterbox 꺼주세요

00:03:695 (4,1) - 이전부분처럼 일렬로 맞춰주세요
00:15:331 (3,1) - 약간 오버랩되는부분이 이상해요 조금만 아래로 172:340
00:46:240 (3) - 스페이싱이 약간 벌어져있는 점도 있고 해서 (제가 제대로 한건 아니지만 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/713660 이런식으로 하는건 어떨까요)
01:07:331 (5) - 오버랩이 이상해요 다음노트들을 건드리자니 뭔가 더 번잡할거같으니 이런식으로 슬라이더를 구부려주시는건 어떨까요 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/713666
01:08:422 (1) - 같은이유에서 조금만 끝부분을 다른쪽으로 돌려주세요
01:15:331 (4) - 이것도 1그리드만 바깥쪽으로

그리고 덧붙여서
00:21:150 - 뭔가 비어있는 느낌이 들어요

Oh0 Normal

스페이싱이랑 sv, 난이도설정만 바꾸면 노말이 아니게 될거같;;
노말이니 1/2를 써도 되긴한데 모든 diff 사이의 적절한 난이도 분배가 필요해요.
Easy <<<< Normal 으로되있어서 랭크에는 태클이 많이 들어올것같아요.
맵 안에 들어있는 1/2리듬을 조금 줄이는 것을 개인적으로 추천드려요.

그리고 일정하지 않은 디스턴스도 문제가 될 것 같은데 디스턴스를 그냥 처음부터 끝까지 일정하게 유지해 주시던가
특정 패턴에는 특정한 디스턴스로 이어 준다던가 해야 될 것 같아요. 예를 들면 이런부분 01:11:877 (2,3,4) -

00:09:877 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 뭔가 붙어는 있는데 떨어져있는 느낌이 나요. 나선형으로 배치해주시는건 어떨까요
00:15:695 - 여기 리듬 채워주세요

Collab

00:06:240 (1) - 여기까지는 디스턴스 지켜주시는게 좋지않을까 싶어요
00:09:877 (1,3,5,2) - 손수 찍는것이 인간미넘쳐서 저도 개인적으로 많이 좋아했었는데 어느정도의 형태는 비슷하게 갖춰놓는게 좋다고 생각해요
그게 불편하시면 이런 슬라이더 하나하나는 복붙으로 해주시는게 더 좋을 것 같아요.
00:14:968 (6,7,8) - 완전히 스택시켜주세요 그리드기능 끄시고.
00:32:240 (5,6) - 컨G기능으로 평행시켜주시는게
00:33:695 (4) - 바깥쪽으로 휘게 해주시는건 어떨까요?

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jieusieu
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jieusieu
collab
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80,144,70604,1,10,0:0:0:0:
184,12,70786,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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384,224,72059,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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160,272,74240,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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ShadowSoul
352 posts
Joined September 2010
ShadowSoul
[Easy]
00:15:331 (3,1) - Maybe do it like This. That slightly overlapping might be a bit hard to read for beginners
00:21:513 (1) - Spacing is wrong, It's too confusing for an Easy diff.
01:08:422 (1,2) - Overlapping Problems again.. This coult be fine.

[Ohzero's Normal]
00:49:150 (4,5) - For someone who doesn't know that song, this might appear abit unexpected. Maybe do it like This

Looks good so far
Good Job there.

[Kiiwa's Insane]
Nothing to mention here.

[Collab]
00:01:150 (1,2) - Why not starting right in the centre?
00:07:695 (1,2) - This looks way better for me :)
00:13:150 (2,3,4,5) -You could try This It plays way better than what u got there
00:14:968 (6,7,8,1) - You can keep 6,7,8 stacked if you like that more. But make sure to stack the end of (1) on (6) Like This

Also you should change some of your pattern. It's always just a simple line. Try to create something different. You don't have to, just a suggestion.

Overall It's not a bad mapset. Good Luck with it. :)
Sanjenin Nagi
381 posts
Joined December 2009
Sanjenin Nagi
Mording :>
But your Choose


Red - d Blue - k
BigRed - D BigBlue - K

[ReySHeL's Taiko Oni]
00:34:422 (2) - change D
00:34:604 (1) - Del
00:36:604 - add d
00:55:150 - 00:55:331 - ddk
pife1
522 posts
Joined January 2012
pife1
Hi:
In Normal
00:02:422 (3) - It should be moved because the two previous notes 00:01:150 (1)(2) makes me think that the rhythm was from the singer's voice, but when I see 00:02:422 (3) automaticly I had to make the click following the singer's voice.
00:32:604 (4)(5) - Snap
00:57:695 (4) - Add clap at the end of the slider, and remove clap at the beginning of the slider
00:58:604 (5) - Add clap at the end of the slider, and remove clap at the beginning of the slider
00:59:331 (1) - Add clap at the end of the slider, and remove clap at the beginning of the slider
01:00:059 (2) - Add clap at the end of the slider, and remove clap at the beginning of the slider
01:00:786 (3) - Add clap
01:01:150 (4) - Add clap
01:01:513 (5) - Add clap
01:01:877 (6) - Add clap
01:02:240 (1) - Add finish at the beginning
01:06:968 (4) - Add clap
01:07:331 (5) - add clap at the end of the slider
01:08:059 (1) - add clap at the end of the slider
01:08:786 (2) - Add clap at the end of the slider, and remove clap at the beginning of the slider
01:09:331 (3) - Add clap at both the beggining and the end of the slider
01:10:968 (1) - Remove clap at the beginning, and add finish at both the beggining and the end of the slider
01:12:240 (4) - Add finish at both the beggining and the end of the slider

In the Insane

00:16:786 (1) - In my opinion please remove this circle, because there is not enough time to hit it and it's a little bit visible

In the Collab

00:16:786 (3) - align it with 00:16:240 (2)
Image
KaODia
20 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
KaODia

pife1 wrote:

Hi:
In Normal
00:02:422 (3) - It should be moved because the two previous notes 00:01:150 (1)(2) makes me think that the rhythm was from the singer's voice, but when I see 00:02:422 (3) automaticly I had to make the click following the singer's voice.
00:32:604 (4)(5) - Snap
00:57:695 (4) - Add clap at the end of the slider, and remove clap at the beginning of the slider
00:58:604 (5) - Add clap at the end of the slider, and remove clap at the beginning of the slider
00:59:331 (1) - Add clap at the end of the slider, and remove clap at the beginning of the slider
01:00:059 (2) - Add clap at the end of the slider, and remove clap at the beginning of the slider
01:00:786 (3) - Add clap
01:01:150 (4) - Add clap
01:01:513 (5) - Add clap
01:01:877 (6) - Add clap
01:02:240 (1) - Add finish at the beginning
01:06:968 (4) - Add clap
01:07:331 (5) - add clap at the end of the slider
01:08:059 (1) - add clap at the end of the slider
01:08:786 (2) - Add clap at the end of the slider, and remove clap at the beginning of the slider
01:09:331 (3) - Add clap at both the beggining and the end of the slider
01:10:968 (1) - Remove clap at the beginning, and add finish at both the beggining and the end of the slider
01:12:240 (4) - Add finish at both the beggining and the end of the slider

In the Insane

00:16:786 (1) - In my opinion please remove this circle, because there is not enough time to hit it and it's a little bit visible

In the Collab

00:16:786 (3) - align it with 00:16:240 (2)
Image
Thank you ^^
ReySHeL
612 posts
Joined March 2012
ReySHeL

Sanjenin Nagi wrote:

Mording :>
But your Choose


Red - d Blue - k
BigRed - D BigBlue - K

[ReySHeL's Taiko Oni]
00:34:422 (2) - change D
00:34:604 (1) - Del
00:36:604 - add d
00:55:150 - 00:55:331 - ddk
thanks for mod :3
diff name changed~
http://puu.sh/3LBvE.zip
KaODia
20 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
KaODia

ReySHeL wrote:

Sanjenin Nagi wrote:

Mording :>
But your Choose


Red - d Blue - k
BigRed - D BigBlue - K

[ReySHeL's Taiko Oni]
00:34:422 (2) - change D
00:34:604 (1) - Del
00:36:604 - add d
00:55:150 - 00:55:331 - ddk
thanks for mod :3
diff name changed~
http://puu.sh/3LBvE.zip
ok
ReySHeL
612 posts
Joined March 2012
ReySHeL
is no longer required Taiko BG
http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/2000248

please update as it is
http://puu.sh/3LBvE.zip
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