I'm here from eLtigreXXx's queue for m4m lulz.
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00:14:066 (2,3) - You can blanket them in a better way
00:20:733 - I think you should add a note here
00:21:733 (2) - Slider's tail 1 grid up
00:26:399 (3) - Bad overlap with 00:27:399 (3) - It's ugly
00:31:399 - Add a note
00:35:399 (6) - Why don't you copy paste the previous slider here?
00:39:399 (1) - A bit more curved fot improving blanket with 2. Also, fix blanket with 3
01:09:065 (5,1) - Ugly overlap nnnggghhh
01:09:731 (1) - Fix blanket with 01:11:064 (3)
01:18:731 (2) - x:204 y:136 is better
Judgement: Nice, just fix some horible overlaps and some blankets D:
Xin
00:47:732 (6) - x:72 y:164 because it isn't a perfect penthagon
00:49:399 (3) - Fix stack
00:57:232 (3) - x:180 y:240 please
00:59:732 (2) - Stack
01:03:398 (2) - Not perfectly blanketted with the previous slider
01:08:731 (6) - Why not curved?
01:12:398 (1) - Move slider's end to x:404 y:112 Now it's more symmetric
01:15:398 - Add a note?
01:18:064 (1,2,3,4,5) - It's not a perfect penthagon
Judgement: Nice too! Just fix some small things lol
eLtXXx's Insane
00:44:732 (4) - Try this and tell me if you like it. 1) Delete this slider 2) Copy paste 00:44:065 (3) here 3) Ctrl + H 4) Ctrl + J
01:01:731 (1) - Ctrl + G can improve the flow
01:03:065 (3) - Not perfectly symmetric
01:09:731 (1) - Move slider's tail 2 grid down
01:12:398 (1) - Ctrl + G for a better flow
Judgement: Very nice, I like sliders.
Sorry for english mistakes, I'll give this map a star, bye
Normal
00:14:066 (2,3) - You can blanket them in a better way
00:20:733 - I think you should add a note here
00:21:733 (2) - Slider's tail 1 grid up
00:26:399 (3) - Bad overlap with 00:27:399 (3) - It's ugly
00:31:399 - Add a note
00:35:399 (6) - Why don't you copy paste the previous slider here?
00:39:399 (1) - A bit more curved fot improving blanket with 2. Also, fix blanket with 3
01:09:065 (5,1) - Ugly overlap nnnggghhh
01:09:731 (1) - Fix blanket with 01:11:064 (3)
01:18:731 (2) - x:204 y:136 is better
Judgement: Nice, just fix some horible overlaps and some blankets D:
Xin
00:47:732 (6) - x:72 y:164 because it isn't a perfect penthagon
00:49:399 (3) - Fix stack
00:57:232 (3) - x:180 y:240 please
00:59:732 (2) - Stack
01:03:398 (2) - Not perfectly blanketted with the previous slider
01:08:731 (6) - Why not curved?
01:12:398 (1) - Move slider's end to x:404 y:112 Now it's more symmetric
01:15:398 - Add a note?
01:18:064 (1,2,3,4,5) - It's not a perfect penthagon
Judgement: Nice too! Just fix some small things lol
eLtXXx's Insane
00:44:732 (4) - Try this and tell me if you like it. 1) Delete this slider 2) Copy paste 00:44:065 (3) here 3) Ctrl + H 4) Ctrl + J
01:01:731 (1) - Ctrl + G can improve the flow
01:03:065 (3) - Not perfectly symmetric
01:09:731 (1) - Move slider's tail 2 grid down
01:12:398 (1) - Ctrl + G for a better flow
Judgement: Very nice, I like sliders.
Sorry for english mistakes, I'll give this map a star, bye