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Flask

Beatmap Nominator

Joined July 2011

Flask 2013-01-13T08:03:44+00:00

o3o as Lally's Request (M4M actually lol)

Red: Must be fixed.
Blue: Highly recommended.
Black: Just suggestion/nazi stuff.

[General]

why inconsistent combo colour ;w;

[

Lally's Normal]

00:16:039 (1) - (begin) why clap at begin? It's really inconsistent to 00:19:942 (2) - and something else ._. consider add a finish instead, which is more fit owo
00:23:356 (2) - this slider cross the downbeat, I think you should add something at downbeat because there's a strong sound there :V so change the rhythm like this? :3 and don't forget to add finish there!
01:02:381 (1) - something like ^. Don't make a nice slider shape with not-nice rhythm ;w;
01:06:283 (1) - ^
02:22:381 (3) - ^
02:37:990 (1) - ^
02:36:039 (1) - ^
02:39:942 (3) - ^
03:03:356 (3,1) - ^
04:17:503 (3) - ^
02:00:673 (1,2,3,4) - ^ try this!
02:04:820 (1,2,3) - If you except ^, just delete (2,3) and move (1) 1/1 later, that's awesome imo <3
00:24:820 (4) - I dislike what you do is a slider reserve at red line, it's so unfit with song/rhythm :<! Use few 1/1 & 1/2 would make it better
00:33:600 (1,2,3) - well.. try this placement. Just more like a circle :V
00:38:966 (1) - first, not really like reserve at downbeat or something like that, but it's okay to me :3 So add finish at reserve please >.<
01:05:795 (5) - Remove finish would be well, since the music is random >:
01:08:478 (1) - well really dislike short spinner with unfit rhythm ... remove this spinner then use a 2/1 slider instead this? (at downbeat, end at 01:09:698 - ) don't forget to remove 5% green lines!
02:26:527 (1) - ^
01:30:429 (1,2) - use two 1/2 sliders instead these? It would be fit with vocals since (2) should be end at 01:31:161 - :V
02:10:673 (4) - unfit rhythm since reserve at red line, it suppose nothing D: try this to fit vocal, to improve your rhythm a bit
02:17:015 (2,3) - why don't do like 02:13:112 (3,4,5) - ? They're really fit but why inconsistent between them ;w;
02:28:722 (1,2,3,4,5) - well.. same again.
03:08:722 (1) - Remove reserve, and 1/1 slider at 03:10:186 - instead would be fit with vocals more imo :3
03:11:893 (3,4,5,6) - just suggestion, but use some slider (1/2) instead them? A bit hard for Normal lol
03:27:747 (3) - Remove reserve again, same as above ;w;
Sorry for a long mod ;w; but you should add note/slider begin at downbeat when it fits, not slider reserve/end/slide, it's really unfit!

[

Hard]

00:19:942 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Suggestion here. I prefer to overlap (2,3) & (5,6) to make them symmetrical. If you want to look at the example.jpg!
00:33:112 (4,5,6) - Well a bit dislike what you did is reserve at downbeat. A bit unfit with music sounds V: so try this?
00:41:405 (7) - eh... why finish at end? mistake or serious? If you're serious, make consistent at 00:45:795 (4) - or just whistle instead that!
00:49:210 (8) - Perhaps NC here since the downbeat? And switch nc from 00:50:673 (1,2) - !
01:05:795 (5) - By looking your finish part before, finish here to make consistent please.
01:12:747 (2) - Remove this note would be fit with music more imo. I dislike stream part since the lyric is "i wo" not "iiwo" or something else D:
01:41:893 (3) - Add whistle to make consistent with Lally's diff? I heard a sound here too >.>
01:59:454 (7,7) - Why you keep a break at first (7), but a reserve instead the break at second (7)? Make them consistent by add a reserve/note please.
02:18:966 (5,6) - ~~holy shit I scream~~ why Normal-sound D: a bit loud, reduce the volume about 20%?
02:34:576 (3,4) - ^
03:07:747 (1,2) - ^
03:56:527 (3,4) - ^
03:04:820 (7) - Well great part but finish would be annoying here. Really, remove finish here! Or even whistle instead ;w;
03:53:600 (3) - ^
03:57:503 (5) - ^
03:18:478 (5) - what why clap
03:27:503 (2,3,4,5) - a bit jumpy here, can you reduce the spacing? well just thinking there's just random part 1 secs before, but big jump here.
04:16:040 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
03:29:210 (3) - nazi, but can you curve it more like (4)? Just ugly imo ><
03:31:161 (6) - NC to make an attention to players that the SV change >:
03:40:917 (7,1) - Switch the New combo? Well just more fit with music :3

Good luck owob

Dark_Ai

1,831 posts

Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

Dark_Ai 2013-01-13T16:08:08+00:00

Changed~

but not all
waiting for Normal now
Thank you for your mod~

Lally

3,176 posts

Joined December 2011

Lally 2013-01-13T17:59:12+00:00

:3

Flask wrote:
o3o as Lally's Request (M4M actually lol)
:3
[ Lally's Normal]
00:16:039 (1) - (begin) why clap at begin? It's really inconsistent to 00:19:942 (2) - and something else ._. consider add a finish instead, which is more fit owoadded finish
00:23:356 (2) - this slider cross the downbeat, I think you should add something at downbeat because there's a strong sound there :V so change the rhythm like this? :3 and don't forget to add finish there!
01:02:381 (1) - something like ^. Don't make a nice slider shape with not-nice rhythm ;w;
01:06:283 (1) - ^:3
02:22:381 (3) - ^:3
02:37:990 (1) - ^in all here i just added slidertick don't wanna change >u<
02:36:039 (1) - ^:3
02:39:942 (3) - ^:3
03:03:356 (3,1) - ^here a finish sounds not good
04:17:503 (3) - ^same here
02:00:673 (1,2,3,4) - ^ try this!u.u
02:04:820 (1,2,3) - If you except ^, just delete (2,3) and move (1) 1/1 later, that's awesome imo <3 u.u
00:24:820 (4) - I dislike what you do is a slider reserve at red line, it's so unfit with song/rhythm :<! Use few 1/1 & 1/2 would make it betterno changes here i like it
00:33:600 (1,2,3) - well.. try this placement. Just more like a circle :V naah i keep it how it is
00:38:966 (1) - first, not really like reserve at downbeat or something like that, but it's okay to me :3 So add finish at reserve please >.<added
01:05:795 (5) - Remove finish would be well, since the music is random >: ups removed
01:08:478 (1) - well really dislike short spinner with unfit rhythm ... remove this spinner then use a 2/1 slider instead this? (at downbeat, end at 01:09:698 - ) don't forget to remove 5% green lines! will think about but atm no changes here
02:26:527 (1) - ^^
01:30:429 (1,2) - use two 1/2 sliders instead these? It would be fit with vocals since (2) should be end at 01:31:161 - :V yap changed
02:10:673 (4) - unfit rhythm since reserve at red line, it suppose nothing D: try this to fit vocal, to improve your rhythm a bitu.u changed
02:17:015 (2,3) - why don't do like 02:13:112 (3,4,5) - ? They're really fit but why inconsistent between them ;w;no changes here i like it :C
02:28:722 (1,2,3,4,5) - well.. same again.just added a slidertick
03:08:722 (1) - Remove reserve, and 1/1 slider at 03:10:186 - instead would be fit with vocals more imo :3hmm dunno
03:11:893 (3,4,5,6) - just suggestion, but use some slider (1/2) instead them? A bit hard for Normal lol i know i really unsure about this i'm thinking to do it somehow in a other way but wanna hear more opinion o3o
03:27:747 (3) - Remove reserve again, same as above ;w;
Sorry for a long mod ;w; but you should add note/slider begin at downbeat when it fits, not slider reserve/end/slide, it's really unfit!
naah don't worry about this >.< i try to fix later maybe some slider but for the moment only this changes
Good luck owob

\o3o/

osu file format v11

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
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Countdown: 0
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TitleUnicode:If
Artist:Nishino Kana
ArtistUnicode:Nishino Kana
Creator:Dark_Ai
Version:Lally's Normal
Source:
Tags:Lally Ai
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Chyo-Kun

308 posts

Joined May 2012

Chyo-Kun 2013-01-13T18:40:52+00:00

M4M Richiesta da lally

[Lally's Normal]

01:16:527 (5) - Questo slider overlappa con 01:14:577 (3) - ,spostalo un pò a destra
01:30:429 (1) - Questo slider inizia su un red tick,che è un pò insolito. Trova un modo di farlo essere più intuitivo,anche perchè questa è una normal. A mio parere dovresti piazzare un beat a 01:30:673 - su x:332 y:248
01:32:137 (7) - NC perchè non seguono più il vocal questi beat
02:15:795 (6) - Non sarebbe meglio rimuovere questo beat per far seguire ai tre successivi il sottofondo,come hai fatto a 01:32:137 (3,4,5,6) - ?
02:16:527 (1) - Se hai fixato prima,rimuovi il NC da qui e aggiungilo 02:17:503 (3) - qui
02:22:381 (3) - Questo clap spuntato dal nulla stà davvero male qui :s
02:24:820 (2) - Se non hai voluto fixare il clap nello slider di prima,aggiungilo pure qui,che ci sta bene
02:26:527 (1) - Perchè questo spinner è silenziato? Ci starebbe bene un finish qui,che con quello del prossimo slider segue bene il vocal
02:59:210 (1) - Alza un pò il volume del finish di questo spinner end
03:04:576 - 03:05:064 - Perchè tutto questo spazio sprecato? Potresti fare un bel pattern seguendo il sottofondo
03:30:429 (1) - Abbassa il volume di questo spinner end,che và a finire sulla parte calma subito dopo il kiai

[Hard]

00:48:722 (7) - Add NC here and remove 00:49:210 (1) - here
01:02:869 (4) - Add NC
01:06:283 (1) - This beat should be x:256 y:208 to be in the same line of 01:06:527 (2) -
01:32:137 (7) - Add NC
02:33:112 (4) - ^
02:46:283 - A beat x:256 y:192 here will be perfect!

Dark_Ai

1,831 posts

Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

Dark_Ai 2013-01-13T19:02:51+00:00

Chyo-Kun wrote:
[Hard]

00:48:722 (7) - Add NC here and remove 00:49:210 (1) - here
01:02:869 (4) - Add NC
01:06:283 (1) - This beat should be x:256 y:208 to be in the same line of 01:06:527 (2) -
01:32:137 (7) - Add NC No I dont like that :<
02:33:112 (4) - ^ ^
02:46:283 - A beat x:256 y:192 here will be perfect! ^

Thank you for modding

Cloudchaser

2,327 posts

Joined May 2012

Cloudchaser 2013-01-13T19:19:27+00:00

Hi Dark_Ai

Blue color: suggestion, comments.
Red color: high recommend.
black color: Normal mod.

Hard
00:21:161 (6) - add clap in the circle
AR: 8? maybe
02:05:308 (3) - change the position (i suggest something like this http://puu.sh/1Nivc)

Hope this help

i like ur map

good luck

Lally

3,176 posts

Joined December 2011

Lally 2013-01-13T19:23:55+00:00

o3o

Chyo-Kun wrote:
M4M Richiesta da lally

[Lally's Normal]

01:16:527 (5) - Questo slider overlappa con 01:14:577 (3) - ,spostalo un pò a destra modificato spostandolo un po :X
01:30:429 (1) - Questo slider inizia su un red tick,che è un pò insolito. Trova un modo di farlo essere più intuitivo,anche perchè questa è una normal. A mio parere dovresti piazzare un beat a 01:30:673 - su x:332 y:248 no perche segue il vocal no changes here
01:32:137 (7) - NC perchè non seguono più il vocal questi beat non l'ho fatto nei altri ritornelli ho deciso di non farlo
02:15:795 (6) - Non sarebbe meglio rimuovere questo beat per far seguire ai tre successivi il sottofondo,come hai fatto a 01:32:137 (3,4,5,6) - ? ci pensero ma li era il ritornello è una cosa diversa per ora no changes
02:16:527 (1) - Se hai fixato prima,rimuovi il NC da qui e aggiungilo 02:17:503 (3) - qui no poi segue il vocal owo
02:22:381 (3) - Questo clap spuntato dal nulla stà davvero male qui :s vero suona male
02:24:820 (2) - Se non hai voluto fixare il clap nello slider di prima,aggiungilo pure qui,che ci sta bene^
02:26:527 (1) - Perchè questo spinner è silenziato? Ci starebbe bene un finish qui,che con quello del prossimo slider segue bene il vocal ups sbagliato mettendo la green line comunque ci va un whistle dato che c'è un finisch sul downbeat owo
02:59:210 (1) - Alza un pò il volume del finish di questo spinner end qui ho notato che ho sbagliato dove finisce lo spinner dato che quello sarebbe un punto morto owo comunque niente alzamento di volume
03:04:576 - 03:05:064 - Perchè tutto questo spazio sprecato? Potresti fare un bel pattern seguendo il sottofondo
03:30:429 (1) - Abbassa il volume di questo spinner end,che và a finire sulla parte calma subito dopo il kiai O.O why? non si sente neanche

:3

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Dark_Ai

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Dark_Ai 2013-01-14T16:10:52+00:00

Changed only the last one (;

Updated~

Lally

3,176 posts

Joined December 2011

Lally 2013-01-15T15:53:58+00:00

bb my normal diff <.<

Dark_Ai

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Dark_Ai 2013-01-15T19:09:42+00:00

sorry for kicked but you have to know why ...

S o r d a

1,576 posts

Joined July 2009

S o r d a 2013-01-15T20:31:09+00:00

hey:P
add source Naruto Shippuden The lost tower
this song naruto movie Opening >~<

i like this song Good luck!

Dark_Ai

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Dark_Ai 2013-01-16T05:58:31+00:00

Hmm okay. I will add it ^^

yanlu

749 posts

Joined November 2010

yanlu 2013-01-19T05:40:31+00:00

Done~!

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Dark_Ai

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Topic Starter

Dark_Ai 2013-01-19T06:24:07+00:00

Updated~

Moved to Pending ~ ready for mod

Frostmourne

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Frostmourne 2013-01-19T14:42:29+00:00

Hi Fang !

General
I think it's fine !

yanlu's Normal
quite unbalance ~~ HP,OD,AR - 1 please orz.. "
02:15:064 (5) - from 02:14:088 (3) - , this likely covers the repeat point and it gonna be almost unrankable , recommend you change it

03:10:674 (2,3) - something like this is too hard for the normal diff ~
03:58:478 (1) - suddenly appears under the 03:56:527 (6) - and it might be a bit hard for beginner !
04:14:088 (1) - ^
04:17:991 (1) - you can add finish at the head to decorate this map as well

Hard
HP-1 , this song is soft , not that cruel :\ to let HP Drain be this hard
01:39:698 (6) - nazi , left and up 1 grid , it's quite close to the next note more than the previous
02:42:381 (1) - no this spinner please =_= , it doesn't make sense to me !!!o_o
something like this would be nicer :3

SPOILER

03:03:844 (5) - spacing ! moving right 1 grid looks better
04:16:040 (1,2,3,4,5) - since the map is not jumpy and this one is the only jump in this map ._.
reduce distance a bit please
this is also the end of the song, it might piss of people

glgl

Dark_Ai

1,831 posts

Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

Dark_Ai 2013-01-19T15:05:23+00:00

Frostmourne wrote:
Hi Fang ! Hey Jeep >w<

General
I think it's fine ! >o</

Hard
HP-1 , this song is soft , not that cruel :\ to let HP Drain be this hard Done
01:39:698 (6) - nazi , left and up 1 grid , it's quite close to the next note more than the previous Done
02:42:381 (1) - no this spinner please =_= , it doesn't make sense to me !!!o_o
something like this would be nicer :3 Done
SPOILER
03:03:844 (5) - spacing ! moving right 1 grid looks better Done
04:16:040 (1,2,3,4,5) - since the map is not jumpy and this one is the only jump in this map ._.
reduce distance a bit please
this is also the end of the song, it might piss of people No change because I like this >o<

glgl

Thank you for your mod cutie >w<

yanlu

749 posts

Joined November 2010

yanlu 2013-01-19T15:24:01+00:00

all fix~ thank you Frostmourne :3

Dark_Ai

1,831 posts

Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

Dark_Ai 2013-01-19T15:25:12+00:00

Updated~ :33

Lally

3,176 posts

Joined December 2011

Lally 2013-01-20T00:07:44+00:00

LOL all Inherited Points that i did for Normal are the same, remove some because it sound very ugly to have where i placed spinner you have slider with 5% volume orz. and some unsnapped breaks as always.

Dark_Ai

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Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

Dark_Ai 2013-01-20T00:21:53+00:00

Lally wrote:
LOL all Inherited Points that i did for Normal are the same, remove some because it sound very ugly to have where i placed spinner you have slider with 5% volume orz. and some unsnapped breaks as always.

yanlu did the Diff so I won't delete anything and I like my breaks so let meadd like I want!

Lally

3,176 posts

Joined December 2011

Lally 2013-01-20T04:35:49+00:00

I didn't say to detle but to do the Inherited points correcty not like now =w=

Bless

194 posts

Joined January 2010

Bless 2013-01-20T07:23:16+00:00

Hi~ from PM in game :3
[General]
what's the file "soft-whistle.wav" worked in your folder? o.o
offset -12 is better for me
[yanlu's Normal]

36405,-100,4,2,2,50,0,0
36649,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
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delete this green line, it's not work
and why use so many different volume? that sounds very weird
03:46:771 (1) - add note with finish and put spinner at 03:47:747 end at 03:49:698
hitsounds
00:25:785 (5) - whistle slider head, clap slider tail
00:29:688 (3) - whistle slider head
00:31:151 (4) - whistle
00:41:405 (5) - whistle slider head and repeat arrow
00:57:015 (3) - whistle slider head
01:00:429 (3) - whistle slider repeat arrow
01:01:893 (4) - whistle
01:11:161 (2) - whistle slider tail
01:12:625 (4) - whistle slider head
01:14:332 (6) - remove whistle
01:16:527 (6) - clap slider repeat arrow
01:19:454 (2) - whistle
01:20:429 (5) - whistle slider head
01:22:381 (1) - whistle slider repeat arrow
and unify the rest of part like this plz
[Hard]
01:40:917 (1,2) - change to this

02:18:956 (5,6) - make like this

02:34:566 (3,4) - ^
03:07:737 (1,2) - ^
03:56:517 (3,4) - ^
03:21:395 (2,3) - make like this

04:10:176 (2,3) - ^
03:31:639~03:33:102 - do you not map this part yet?
hitsounds
00:41:405 (7) - clap slider tail
00:45:795 (4) - clap
00:47:259 (3) - finish slider head
01:01:405 (6) - clap
01:03:844 (3) - remove finish and add whistle slider head
01:05:795 (5) - ^
01:06:771 (3) - finish slider head
01:08:722 (5) - ^
01:09:698 (7) - remove finish and add whistle slider head
01:41:893 (3) - finish
and also unify the rest of part like this plz

good luck

yanlu

749 posts

Joined November 2010

yanlu 2013-01-20T12:04:05+00:00

thank you Bless :3

fix ver~

SPOILER

osu file format v11

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54576
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

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DistanceSpacing: 1
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GridSize: 4

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TitleUnicode:If
Artist:Nishino Kana
ArtistUnicode:Nishino Kana
Creator:Dark_Ai
Version:yanlu's Normal
Source:Naruto Shippuden: The Lost Tower
Tags:Thank you Love Ai yanlu
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256,52,151893,2,0,P|308:84,1,60,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
348,40,152381,1,0,0:0:0
400,68,152625,6,0,P|440:92|440:92|448:136|480:152,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
364,192,153601,1,0,0:0:0
400,316,154088,2,0,P|440:292|440:292|448:248|480:232,2,120,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
300,252,155552,1,0,0:0:0
268,200,155795,1,0,0:0:0
256,140,156040,2,0,P|256:80,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,20,156528,5,4,0:0:0
156,88,157015,1,8,0:0:0
156,88,157259,1,0,0:0:0
156,88,157503,2,0,P|100:100|44:76,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
24,196,158479,2,0,P|80:216|140:212,2,120,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
44,76,159942,1,8,0:0:0
104,84,160186,1,2,0:0:0
160,108,160430,6,0,P|244:136|328:108,1,180,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
376,72,161406,2,0,P|432:48|492:56,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
444,168,162381,2,0,P|386:234|298:252,1,180,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
240,245,163357,2,0,P|179:252|131:289,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,177503,12,0,180917,0:0:0
296,88,181405,5,8,0:0:0
244,116,181649,1,0,0:0:0
212,168,181893,1,4,0:0:0
160,276,182381,2,0,P|160:336,2,60,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,348,183357,1,8,0:0:0
352,276,183845,2,0,P|352:216,2,60,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
468,248,184820,2,0,P|468:308,2,60,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
468,188,185552,1,2,0:0:0
460,128,185796,6,0,P|416:60|324:44,1,180,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
264,44,186771,1,2,0:0:0
220,84,187015,1,0,0:0:0
208,144,187259,1,8,0:0:0
232,200,187503,1,0,0:0:0
276,240,187747,2,0,P|292:296|256:340,2,120,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
388,192,189210,1,8,0:0:0
464,100,189698,6,0,P|420:64|360:72,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,132,190674,1,0,0:0:0
152,72,191162,1,8,0:0:0
152,72,191405,1,0,0:0:0
152,72,191649,2,0,P|92:64|48:100,2,120,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
124,188,193113,1,8,0:0:0
168,300,193601,6,0,P|232:240|232:152,2,180,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
124,188,195552,2,0,P|137:101|208:51,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,88,196528,1,2,0:0:0
256,208,197015,1,8,0:0:0
256,328,197503,5,0,0:0:0
360,268,197991,2,0,P|424:268,2,60,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,208,198967,1,8,0:0:0
152,148,199454,2,0,P|92:148,2,60,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,88,200430,2,0,P|320:88,2,60,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
204,60,201162,1,2,0:0:0
152,32,201406,6,0,P|92:16|40:36,2,120,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
100,140,202869,1,8,0:0:0
148,176,203113,1,0,0:0:0
200,208,203357,2,0,P|256:224|312:204,2,120
256,104,204820,1,8,0:0:0
352,32,205308,5,4,0:0:0
424,128,205796,1,8,0:0:0
328,200,206284,1,0,0:0:0
388,304,206771,1,8,0:0:0
388,304,207015,1,0,0:0:0
388,304,207259,2,0,P|336:332|280:312,2,120,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
432,192,208723,1,8,0:0:0
388,80,209210,6,0,P|356:124|308:104|308:104|288:124,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
224,124,209942,2,0,P|204:104|204:104|156:124|124:80,2,120,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,211162,12,4,213112,0:0:0
256,192,219698,5,0,0:0:0
220,240,219942,2,0,P|184:288,2,60,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
112,192,220917,5,4,0:0:0
140,76,221405,1,8,0:0:0
256,40,221893,1,0,0:0:0
372,76,222381,2,0,P|392:136|400:192,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
376,312,223356,2,0,P|316:312,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,312,223844,2,0,P|184:312|96:252,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
84,196,224820,5,4,0:0:0
136,80,225308,2,0,P|196:80,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,80,225796,2,0,P|328:80|416:140,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
440,192,226771,1,4,0:0:0
256,192,227503,12,0,229698,0:0:0
256,80,230186,5,8,0:0:0
176,168,230673,2,0,P|256:200|340:168,2,180,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
88,88,232625,1,0,0:0:0
68,144,232869,2,0,P|56:216|92:316,1,180
208,340,234088,1,8,0:0:0
256,228,234576,6,0,P|256:168,1,60,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,48,235308,1,0,0:0:0
316,52,235551,1,2,0:0:0
372,76,235795,1,0,0:0:0
416,116,236039,2,0,P|432:140|436:172,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
388,208,236527,2,0,P|356:248|284:236|284:236|216:224|172:280,1,240,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
280,332,237990,1,8,0:0:0
316,284,238234,1,0,0:0:0
352,236,238478,6,0,P|317:188|258:189,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
200,184,239210,1,0,0:0:0
156,144,239454,1,2,0:0:0
44,192,239942,1,8,0:0:0
96,220,240186,1,0,0:0:0
128,272,240429,2,0,P|160:312|232:300|232:300|300:288|344:344,1,240,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
460,320,241893,2,0,P|420:276,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
380,228,242381,6,0,P|352:180|292:160,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
236,172,243112,1,0,0:0:0
188,204,243356,2,0,P|132:212|72:192,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
108,76,244332,2,0,P|212:128|240:244,1,240,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,360,245795,1,8,0:0:0
336,264,246283,6,8,P|256:232|172:264,2,180,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
424,344,248235,1,0,0:0:0
444,288,248479,2,0,P|456:216|420:117,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
304,92,249698,1,8,0:0:0
280,148,249942,1,0,0:0:0
256,204,250186,6,0,P|256:264,1,60,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,384,250918,1,0,0:0:0
196,380,251161,1,2,0:0:0
96,316,251649,2,0,P|80:292|75:261,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
124,224,252137,2,0,P|156:184|228:196|228:196|296:208|340:152,1,240,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
232,100,253600,1,8,0:0:0
196,148,253844,1,0,0:0:0
160,196,254088,6,0,P|194:243|253:242,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
312,248,254820,1,0,0:0:0
356,288,255064,1,2,0:0:0
468,240,255552,1,8,0:0:0
416,212,255796,1,0,0:0:0
384,160,256039,2,0,P|352:120|280:132|280:132|212:144|168:88,1,240,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
52,112,257503,2,0,P|92:156,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
132,204,257991,6,0,P|196:264|284:276,1,180,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
344,264,258966,2,0,P|400:256|460:276,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,259942,12,0,261893,0:0:0

Dark_Ai

1,831 posts

Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

Dark_Ai 2013-01-20T12:16:46+00:00

Changed but not all >.< (I will write later what I changed)
thank you for your mod

Updated~

Lally

3,176 posts

Joined December 2011

Lally 2013-01-20T20:02:43+00:00

[In all diff:]
all your Inherited points are -12 late fix they because you changed offset
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Hard: HP +1

shikyu

786 posts

Joined January 2011

shikyu 2013-01-21T04:20:24+00:00

Hi~ try to do M4M for your queue

[General]
some inconsistent combo color and unsnapped timing

AIBat Warnings

These warnings were generated by AIBat.

[General]
No problems found.

[Storyboard]
No problems found.

[All .osu Files]
Combo Colours:
Inconsistency in combo colours:

- [Hard] :
Combo1 : 255,255,255
Combo2 : 128,0,255
Combo3 : 255,128,192
Combo4 : 255,214,193
Combo5 : 255,0,128

- [yanlu's Normal] :
Combo1 : 255,0,128
Combo2 : 128,0,255
Combo3 : 255,128,192
Combo4 : 255,255,255

[Difficulty: Hard]
Snapping:

Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
00:38:478
00:38:844
00:46:771
00:46:893
01:10:673
01:41:893
02:19:210
02:19:454
02:34:820
02:35:064
03:01:405
03:01:893
03:07:990
03:08:234
03:31:161
03:32:137
03:33:112
03:50:673
03:56:771
03:57:015
04:21:893

Kiai Times Not On Downbeat:
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:10:673, ends on 01:41:893
Kiai #2: Starts on 03:01:893, ends on 03:32:137
Kiai #3: Starts on 03:50:673, ends on 04:21:893

[Difficulty: yanlu's Normal]
Snapping:

Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
00:36:405
00:36:649
00:51:161
00:53:112
01:08:478
01:09:698
01:10:673
01:23:600
01:25:795
01:26:283
01:29:576
01:29:820
01:41:893
01:57:503
02:26:527
02:28:722
02:43:844
02:57:503
02:57:990
02:58:966
02:59:942
03:00:917
03:01:405
03:01:893
03:07:137
03:07:381
03:09:088
03:09:332
03:15:308
03:17:015
03:17:503
03:30:429
03:32:137
03:33:112
03:40:308
03:40:551
03:46:771
03:47:259
03:47:747
03:48:234
03:48:722
03:49:210
03:49:698
03:50:186
03:50:673
04:03:844
04:05:308
04:06:283
04:19:454
04:21:893

Kiai Times Not On Downbeat:
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:10:673, ends on 01:41:893
Kiai #2: Starts on 03:01:893, ends on 03:32:137
Kiai #3: Starts on 03:50:673, ends on 04:21:893

[yanlu's Normal]
unused timing: 00:36:393 - 00:36:637 - 03:07:125 - 03:07:369 - 03:09:076 - 03:09:320 -
imo better use slidertick custom hitsound to make consistent clap pattern at 2nd and 4th white tick
00:41:393 (5) - sounds weird, recommend to change this (maybe 1/1 repeat slider and add note at 00:42:857) or at least change first tick sound sampleset to S:C2
00:51:149 - volume too low to hear clap hitsound, ~35% better
00:53:588 - lower volume here, clap hitsound seems too loud. after this timing you can make volume higher again
00:59:930 (2,3) - spacing between these notes 1,08x, fix them
01:08:710 (3,4) - spacing 0,92x
01:32:125 (4) - add clap at repeat
01:37:978 (1,2) - spacing 1,06x
01:38:710 (2) - use custom slidertick at 2nd tick 'cause at 04:18:954 (2) slider's end you use clap
01:57:491 - 02:08:710 - not prefer clap at 3rd white tick, maybe it can changed to whistle?
02:12:125 (5) - remove whistle at start and add it at the end? you not filled any hitsound when there's drum sound
02:15:052 (5) - same as 00:41:393 (5)
02:27:247 - same as 00:53:588
02:43:345 (4) - if volume lowered at slider's end, no need to add clap
02:46:271 - prefer start break here
03:16:516 (3) - remove whistle? 03:15:540 (2) slider's end already use it and imo not relly necessary
03:29:930 (2) - same as 01:38:710 (2)
03:45:784 (3) - use custom slidertick here, there's clap to follow
03:50:661 (2) - same as 00:41:393 (5)
04:06:271 (1) - ^
04:10:906 (2,3) - place them higher? almost out of frame

[Hard]
00:16:027 (1) - add whistle, higher instrumental sound
00:16:515 (3) - remove whistle and add whistle at 00:16:759 (4)
00:17:978 (1) - add whistle
00:18:466 (4) - remove whistle and add whistle at 00:18:710 (5)
00:20:661 (4) - add whistle
00:30:417 (5) - ^ at slider's end?
00:33:100 (4) - remove whistle at slider's end, there's nothing to follow
00:38:588 (6) - has different spacing than (5) and (7)
01:06:759 (3) - add whistle at slider's end
01:18:466 (3) - add finish at slider's start
01:22:369 (3) - ^ to keep consistency
01:36:027 (3) - ^
02:31:637 (1,2) - too linear, maybe ctrl+H for (1) to make arrow head shape?
02:42:369 (4) - add whistle at slider's start?
02:59:198 (1) - weird start, maybe start spinner at 02:59:930?
03:16:515 (4,5,6) - didn't use normal sampleset?
03:33:100 - unused timing
03:58:466 (3) - add finidh at slider's start
04:10:296 (3) - why 3/4? slider's start doesn't follow anything
04:17:979 (3) - add finish at slider's start?

that's all, sorry for many minor stuffs mod, good luck~

B2IN

B2IN 2013-01-21T10:54:30+00:00

Hi ~ Dark_Ai :3
in-game req

[General]
fine. but re-snap green timing point plz ~ orz..
[yanlu's Normal]
-> you should start break time on 02:46:271 ?
02:26:272 (2) - move to x256 y176 will better.
02:43:345 (4) - remove clap will much better imo. :3
03:15:540 (2,3) - why decrease this ? o.o
03:58:466 (1) - i think this some confused.
04:04:320 (4) - 03:15:540 (2,3) -
04:14:076 (1) - same as 03:58:466 (1) .
[Hard]
00:53:100 (2) - you should cange to 2 circle note will much better imo. same as 02:26:759 (2,3) .
00:54:076 (4) - remove finish and add whistle. much better.
01:10:174 (1) - just suggestion. change 2 circle note ? like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/578024 . and 01:10:661 (2) - nc? because new lyrics.
01:16:515 (7) - i hear many sounds in this part. if add note will interested instead repeated long slider. :3
01:26:271 (3) - should add finish slider on start ? because i think here accent part .
02:01:393 (4) - you can more neatly stack with 02:00:905 (2) .
02:26:759 (2) - add finish will much better. :3 if follow this suggestion, add finish same as 02:26:759 (2) .
02:27:491 (4) - remove whistle ?
03:04:808 (7) - add whistle and remove finish. i don't find any accent there.
03:38:954 (3) - i think this finish is some loud. should decrease this 40%. finish only
03:50:661 (3) - NC ?
03:32:613 (1) - add clap.
03:53:588 (3) - same as 03:04:808 (7)

Gl~~

Last edited by B2IN 2013-02-17T03:43:13+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Dark_Ai

1,831 posts

Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

Dark_Ai 2013-01-21T19:25:23+00:00

Fixed both mod but didn't change all ><

waiting for yanlu's fixed before update :3

yanlu

749 posts

Joined November 2010

yanlu 2013-01-22T06:27:22+00:00

almost fix~~ thank you all :3/
http://puu.sh/1QYLD

Dark_Ai

1,831 posts

Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

Dark_Ai 2013-01-22T09:20:05+00:00

Thank you. I will update it when I'm back home

_Loop

61 posts

Joined October 2011

_Loop 2013-01-22T09:59:22+00:00

yanlu bakaaaa o3o/
ohwell
here's some suggestions (you don't have to fix it if you don't want to)

yanlu's normal O3O

-> 01:38:710 = end this slider on 01:39:198 and put a circle in 01:39:442 (http://puu.sh/1R0Ru)
-> 03:29:930 = same problem with ^
-> 02:01:393 = add finish
-> 02:30:661 = end this slider on 01:31:637
-> 02:20:417 = add nc
-> 02:20:905 = remove nc
-> 02:37:491 = add finish
-> 02:38:466 = ^
-> 02:39:442 = ^
-> 03:26:271 = ^
-> 03:27:247 = ^
-> 03:28:222 = ^
-> 03:50:661 = do it like this :3 http://puu.sh/1R0YA
-> if u really did like ^ then add clap in (3)
-> 03:54:564 = do it like this http://puu.sh/1R0ZP
-> 04:00:417 = http://puu.sh/1R10I :3
-> 04:06:271 = http://puu.sh/1R11Z and add clap in the beginning of slider (2)
-> 04:14:076 = add finish
-> 04:15:052 = ^
-> 04:16:027 = http://puu.sh/1R13h and add finish
-> 04:17:003 = add finish
-> 03:59:442 = add finish
-> 03:46:759 = add a circle and a finish. overlap it with the spinner like this http://puu.sh/1R14G
-> 04:16:027 = add finish
-> 04:16:515 = ^
-> 04:17:003 = ^
thats it :3 all of these are just suggestions
you don't have to change it if you don't want to
its just a recommendation :3
inb4 this is the best yanlu's map i ever played <3

hard o3o

-> 01:12:857 = http://puu.sh/1R18U
-> 01:35:052 = add finish
-> 01:59:930 = add clap
-> 03:04:076 = expand this slider till 03:04:808
-> 02:37:491 = add finish
-> 02:38:466 = ^
-> 02:39:442 = ^
-> 01:36:027 = ^
-> 01:37:003 = ^
-> 02:16:515 = add clap
-> 02:23:344 = ^
-> 03:31:149 = remove nc
-> 03:31:637 = suggestions \:D/ http://puu.sh/1R1mF
-> 03:38:954 = remove finish
-> 03:52:857 = expand this slider till 03:53:588. if u do this, remove the circle on 03:53:588
-> 04:10:296 = move this slider to 04:10:417 till 04:10:661 http://puu.sh/1R1q2
-> 04:15:052 = add finish
-> 04:17:003 = add finish
thats it. ur map is awesome

i'll leave the design to you guys if u changed it

let me throw a star \:D/
btw this mod is requested by Sacchann :3

Last edited by _Loop 2013-01-23T08:21:27+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Dark_Ai

1,831 posts

Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

Dark_Ai 2013-01-22T11:05:09+00:00

Baka sacchan >w<

Thank you loop for your mod :3 will fix it later >O<

birra

359 posts

Joined May 2011

birra 2013-01-22T11:13:44+00:00

yay! hehe >w<

searching searching~ <3 *keeps haunting like a bakabossh* c8

Dark_Ai

1,831 posts

Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

Dark_Ai 2013-01-22T18:17:51+00:00

fixed almost everything ^^

Updated~

but I still need yanlu's fix ><

_Loop

61 posts

Joined October 2011

_Loop 2013-01-23T05:09:11+00:00

Dark_Ai wrote:
fixed almost everything ^^

Updated~

but I still need yanlu's fix ><

awesome <3

yanlu

749 posts

Joined November 2010

yanlu 2013-01-24T08:02:13+00:00

-LooP- wrote:
yanlu bakaaaa o3o/ not =A=!
ohwell
here's some suggestions (you don't have to fix it if you don't want to)

yanlu's normal O3O
-> 01:38:710 = end this slider on 01:39:198 and put a circle in 01:39:442 (http://puu.sh/1R0Ru)
-> 03:29:930 = same problem with ^
-> 02:01:393 = add finish ok
-> 02:30:661 = end this slider on 01:31:637 nani!?
-> 02:20:417 = add nc change
-> 02:20:905 = remove nc ^and above
-> 02:37:491 = add finish
-> 02:38:466 = ^ ok
-> 02:39:442 = ^
-> 03:26:271 = ^
-> 03:27:247 = ^ ok
-> 03:28:222 = ^
-> 03:50:661 = do it like this :3 http://puu.sh/1R0YA
-> if u really did like ^ then add clap in (3)
-> 03:54:564 = do it like this http://puu.sh/1R0ZP
-> 04:00:417 = http://puu.sh/1R10I :3 umm..keep
-> 04:06:271 = http://puu.sh/1R11Z and add clap in the beginning of slider (2)
-> 04:14:076 = add finish ok
-> 04:15:052 = ^
-> 04:16:027 = http://puu.sh/1R13h and add finish just finish~
-> 04:17:003 = add finish
-> 03:59:442 = add finish
-> 03:46:759 = add a circle and a finish. overlap it with the spinner like this http://puu.sh/1R14G I think it's unrankable ;D..
-> 04:16:027 = add finish ok
-> 04:16:515 = ^
-> 04:17:003 = ^
thats it :3 all of these are just suggestions
you don't have to change it if you don't want to
its just a recommendation :3
inb4 this is the best yanlu's map i ever played <3 I'm improving =3=

i'll leave the design to you guys if u changed it
let me throw a star \:D/
btw this mod is requested by Sacchann :3

Thank you BAKA Loop =3=/

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Title:If
TitleUnicode:If
Artist:Nishino Kana
ArtistUnicode:Nishino Kana
Creator:Dark_Ai
Version:yanlu's Normal
Source:Naruto Shippuden: The Lost Tower
Tags:Thank you Love Ai yanlu
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Dark_Ai

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Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

Dark_Ai 2013-01-24T16:08:27+00:00

Updated ~ :3

NewRulerNA

1,301 posts

Joined December 2010

NewRulerNA 2013-01-25T16:07:06+00:00

hi
found a issue. you must fix it.

[General]

Preview Time is not same between diffs. should be 00:54:564 -

gl

Dark_Ai

1,831 posts

Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

Dark_Ai 2013-01-25T16:46:57+00:00

I changed the Preview Time ^^

Updated ~

birra

359 posts

Joined May 2011

birra 2013-01-25T16:52:03+00:00

gl ai :'3

damn, i cant stop listening to this since the "house fight" were started. so goodluck ;w; <3 *shoo shoo the stars*

Dark_Ai

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Topic Starter

Dark_Ai 2013-01-25T16:55:59+00:00

Thank you baka/moe sacchan >o</

BounceBabe

1,626 posts

Joined October 2010

BounceBabe 2013-01-25T17:17:07+00:00

The preview point on the website isnt similar with the one on osu, try uploading it again and fixing

Dark_Ai

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Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

Dark_Ai 2013-01-25T17:40:46+00:00

Updated ~

Nichiyouki

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Joined August 2011

Nichiyouki 2013-01-25T21:57:35+00:00

Hi, Ai >w<

My mod from your request in pm in-game

Red = Unrankable
Blue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

Combo colours of yanlu's Normal diff has 4 colours, Hard diff has 5 colours. You should change combo colours to same.
Kiai time of yanlu's Normal diff is err on the end of Kiai#1. You should move it to 01:41:881.

yanlu's Normal

00:41:393 (5,6,1) - Move to down and right 1 grid. Notes between (4,5) will be more look good.
00:50:661 (7,1,2) - Move (7) to x:364 y:272, then move (1,2) to left 1 grid. It will be more beautiful.
00:57:003 (3) - I think that slider shouldn't end there because it isn't suitable with the rhythm of song. I suggest that end a slider at 00:57:490.
00:57:978 (4,5,6,7) - Change 4 circles into 2 slider will be easier.
01:16:515 (6) - Add clap in slider repeat to follow the rhythm.
01:26:271 (1) - Add finish here.
01:30:174 (1) - Same as 01:16:515 (6).
01:32:125 (4) - Move slider last point to up and left 1 grid.
01:41:893 - From what I mentioned in general. Resnap a green line sections to 01:41:881
02:15:052 (5,6,1) - The same reason as 00:41:393 (5,6,1). Move to up and left 1 grid.
02:24:320 (8,1,2,3) - Similar to 00:50:661 (7,1,2). Move (7) to x:148 y:112, move (1,3) to right 1 grid, and move (2) to stack with slider begin of 02:22:857 (7). It will be more beautiful.
02:30:662 (3) - Same as 00:57:003 (3). End a slider at 02:31:149.
03:07:735 (6) - Same as 01:16:515 (6).
03:17:491 (1) - Same as 01:26:271 (1).
03:21:394 (1) - Same as 01:16:515 (6).
03:23:345 (4) - ^
03:42:369 (4) - Add finish in slider end to following the song.
04:17:979 (1,2) - Remove (2), then repeat slider (1) instead to suitable to the rhythm of song.

Comment: Your mapping hasn't many problem, but I think that you may have to check putting hitsound, because you forget put it a lot.

Hard

00:18:466 (4) - Hitsound is weird. I suggest that remove whistle, if you are not sure will you remove it or not, you can observe from 00:22:369 (4).
01:06:515 (2) - Move to right 1 grid. It will be symmetric with slider end of 01:05:783 (5), and you can move 01:04:320 (1) to stack with (2), if you want.
02:05:296 (3) - Change to curve slider will be more beautiful.
04:04:076 (6) - Try don't stack with (5,1), but I'a not sure would I like move it?

Comment: Good diff, but you may have to more work about some NC on notes, because i felt surprise when I see some NC aren't following the rhythm of song and the vocal but I'm sorry for don't mod about any NC on ths diff.

That's all that I can find them, and hope that my mod will be useful for you.

Good luck~

Dark_Ai

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Dark_Ai 2013-01-25T23:07:42+00:00

Thank you for your mod.

Changed ~

waiting for yanlu to fix her diff C:

Kodora

Kodora 2013-01-26T01:36:51+00:00

Hey Ai :3

[yanlu's Normal]

00:56:027 (2) - i think better move this slider to x:320 - i think it will confuse a little beginners
01:00:417 (3) - as propose - reverse selections here because copypasta in next part
01:02:369 (5) - propose again: y:224 this slider
02:11:150 (3) - imho hidden beginning of this slider will confuse beginners, i propose change it
02:31:881 (4,5) - dont like this part :\
03:56:515 (6) - overlap :V

[Hard]

00:42:857 (2) - reverse selections for more symmetrial?
02:31:637 (1,2) - I dont like this mirror sliders part. Mayme change it to 2 notes?
02:38:466 (3,4,5) - Again this sliders. Maybe remake this part too?
03:27:247 (1,2,3,4,5) - this jumps will be a little bit hard with dt. Maybe remake this part?
04:16:028 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

Good luck!

yanlu

749 posts

Joined November 2010

yanlu 2013-01-26T04:44:20+00:00

change many in Nichiyouki's :3
sor no change in Kodora's..cuz I think it's okay ;<

thank you all for mod~~

fix~ver~~

SPOILER

osu file format v11

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 70174
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
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TitleUnicode:If
Artist:Nishino Kana
ArtistUnicode:Nishino Kana
Creator:Dark_Ai
Version:yanlu's Normal
Source:Naruto Shippuden: The Lost Tower
Tags:Thank you Love Ai yanlu
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52,256,74564,6,0,P|96:324|188:340,1,180,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
248,340,75539,1,2,0:0:0
292,300,75783,1,0,0:0:0
304,240,76027,1,8,0:0:0
280,184,76271,1,0,0:0:0
236,144,76515,2,0,P|220:88|256:44,2,120,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
124,192,77978,1,8,0:0:0
48,284,78466,6,0,P|92:320|152:312,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,252,79442,1,0,0:0:0
360,312,79930,1,8,0:0:0
360,312,80174,1,0,0:0:0
360,312,80417,2,0,P|420:320|464:284,2,120,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
388,196,81881,1,8,0:0:0
344,84,82369,6,0,P|280:144|280:232,2,180,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
388,196,84320,2,0,P|375:283|304:333,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,296,85296,1,2,0:0:0
256,176,85783,1,8,0:0:0
256,56,86271,5,4,0:0:0
152,116,86759,2,0,P|88:116,2,60,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,176,87735,1,8,0:0:0
360,236,88222,2,0,P|420:236,2,60,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,296,89198,2,0,P|192:296,2,60,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
308,324,89930,1,2,0:0:0
360,352,90174,6,0,P|420:368|472:348,2,120,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
412,244,91637,1,8,0:0:0
364,208,91881,1,0,0:0:0
312,176,92125,2,0,P|256:160|196:176,2,120,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,280,93588,1,8,0:0:0
160,352,94076,5,4,0:0:0
88,256,94564,1,8,0:0:0
184,184,95052,1,0,0:0:0
124,80,95539,1,8,0:0:0
124,80,95783,1,0,0:0:0
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288,260,98710,2,0,P|308:280|308:280|356:260|388:304,2,120,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,99930,12,4,101881,0:0:0
256,152,116515,5,8,0:0:0
172,68,117003,1,2,0:0:0
60,28,117491,2,0,P|52:88|80:140,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
128,176,118223,1,0,0:0:0
128,236,118467,1,2,0:0:0
196,336,118955,1,0,0:0:0
256,232,119442,2,0,P|304:184|256:128|256:128|204:68|256:20,1,240,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
316,28,120662,1,0,0:0:0
376,36,120906,1,8,0:0:0
484,96,121394,5,4,0:0:0
412,192,121881,2,0,P|380:240|320:244,2,120,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
316,120,123345,2,0,P|256:36|196:120,1,240,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
100,192,124808,1,0,0:0:0
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256,24,131881,1,0,0:0:0
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28,192,133101,5,4,0:0:0
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276,280,134564,1,8,0:0:0
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396,232,136759,1,0,0:0:0
428,284,137003,5,4,0:0:0
508,192,137491,1,8,0:0:0
400,140,137979,1,0,0:0:0
472,44,138467,1,8,0:0:0
352,40,138954,2,0,P|284:120|328:236,1,240,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,332,140418,5,8,0:0:0
220,284,140661,1,0,0:0:0
184,236,140906,1,4,0:0:0
112,140,141394,1,8,0:0:0
132,84,141637,1,0,0:0:0
184,56,141881,2,0,P|240:40|300:56,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
248,168,142857,2,0,P|307:184|363:168,2,120,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
144,104,144320,1,8,0:0:0
144,224,144808,6,0,P|86:240|30:224,2,120,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
248,168,146272,1,8,0:0:0
356,112,146759,2,0,P|415:97|471:113,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
504,164,147491,1,0,0:0:0
504,224,147735,1,8,0:0:0
384,224,148223,1,8,0:0:0
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216,300,149686,2,0,P|176:292|176:292|148:280|96:288,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
92,168,150662,2,0,P|68:84|140:48,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,52,151881,2,0,P|308:84,1,60,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
348,40,152369,1,0,0:0:0
400,68,152613,6,0,P|440:92|440:92|448:136|480:152,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
364,192,153589,1,0,0:0:0
400,316,154076,2,0,P|440:292|440:292|448:248|480:232,2,120,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
300,252,155540,1,0,0:0:0
268,200,155783,1,0,0:0:0
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256,20,156516,5,4,0:0:0
156,88,157003,1,8,0:0:0
156,88,157247,1,0,0:0:0
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24,196,158467,2,0,P|80:216|140:212,2,120,6|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
44,76,159930,1,8,0:0:0
104,84,160174,1,2,0:0:0
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376,72,161394,2,0,P|432:48|492:56,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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296,88,181393,5,8,0:0:0
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256,348,183345,1,8,0:0:0
352,276,183833,2,0,P|352:216,2,60,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
468,248,184808,2,0,P|468:308,2,60,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
468,188,185540,1,2,0:0:0
460,128,185784,6,0,P|416:60|324:44,1,180,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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388,192,189198,1,8,0:0:0
464,100,189686,6,0,P|420:64|360:72,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,132,190662,1,0,0:0:0
152,72,191150,1,8,0:0:0
152,72,191393,1,0,0:0:0
152,72,191637,2,0,P|92:64|48:100,2,120,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
124,188,193101,1,8,0:0:0
168,300,193589,6,0,P|232:240|232:152,2,180,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
124,188,195540,2,0,P|137:101|208:51,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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432,192,208711,1,8,0:0:0
388,80,209198,6,0,P|356:124|308:104|308:104|288:124,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
228,124,209930,2,0,P|208:104|208:104|160:124|128:80,2,120,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,211150,12,4,213100,0:0:0
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380,220,242369,6,0,P|352:172|292:152,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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444,280,248467,2,0,P|456:208|420:109,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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Dark_Ai

1,831 posts

Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

Dark_Ai 2013-01-26T07:12:06+00:00

No change too =w= But thank you for your mod :33

Updated ~

Shadow Fear

43 posts

Joined January 2011

Shadow Fear 2013-01-26T10:09:37+00:00

Via sacchan's irc..Well i tried my best to try modding this map so here's the result..

16:27 sacchann: hey can you do modding?
16:27 Shadow_Fear: can..:F
16:28 *sacchann is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/209123 Nishino Kana - If]
16:28 sacchann: please mod that :3
16:28 sacchann: can you mod it now or at least today?
16:28 Shadow_Fear: k
16:28 Shadow_Fear: i'll see
16:28 Shadow_Fear: you map?
16:28 sacchann: alright.
16:29 sacchann: nope. im just helping her to find some modders cz it's hard to find them
16:29 Shadow_Fear: owo
16:29 sacchann: pretty please :<
16:29 Shadow_Fear: i'll try
16:29 sacchann: i've been waiting since she submitted the map too, so yea
16:29 sacchann: alright :3
16:29 sacchann: i'll ask again later to know if you already mod it or not :3
16:29 Shadow_Fear: k
16:30 sacchann: mhm k
16:31 Shadow_Fear: 00:29:930 (2,3,4) -
16:31 Shadow_Fear: increase space
16:31 sacchann: you can pm dark_ai :3
16:32 sacchann: oh nvm. she went off. alright
16:32 sacchann: and then?
16:33 Shadow_Fear: wow
16:33 Shadow_Fear: not basd
16:33 Shadow_Fear: bad*
16:33 sacchann: hm
16:37 Shadow_Fear: offset..bpm..ok
16:37 Shadow_Fear: 02:09:198 (2,3,4) - better if make distant
16:38 sacchann: k. what else?
16:38 Shadow_Fear: on the way
16:38 sacchann: ok
16:39 Shadow_Fear: 03:27:979 (4) -
16:40 Shadow_Fear: balance it
16:40 sacchann: hm
16:42 Shadow_Fear: elsewhere ok
16:42 Shadow_Fear: i suppose
16:43 sacchann: mm k
16:43 sacchann: anything else?
16:43 Shadow_Fear: this can get ranked
16:43 sacchann: ok
16:43 sacchann: what about the normal diff?
16:43 Shadow_Fear: just a little tweek and its ok
16:43 Shadow_Fear: owo
16:43 Shadow_Fear: also?
16:44 sacchann: if you want that is D:
16:44 Shadow_Fear: oke
16:48 Shadow_Fear: 03:54:564 (1,2,3,4) -
16:48 Shadow_Fear: its missing a note
16:48 sacchann: um ok
16:48 Shadow_Fear: can easily lost timing
16:49 sacchann: hee.. kk
16:50 Shadow_Fear: 04:13:588 (6,7) - suggestion..make it more bending style?
16:51 sacchann: umm k?
16:53 Shadow_Fear: ok!
16:53 Shadow_Fear: that's only..

16:53 sacchann: thats it? :3
16:54 sacchann: okiedokie <3
16:54 Shadow_Fear: yep
16:54 sacchann: sankyu o3o>
16:54 Shadow_Fear: welcome
16:54 Shadow_Fear: this map quite nice..hope its ranked

Dark_Ai

1,831 posts

Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

Dark_Ai 2013-01-26T10:52:13+00:00

Thank for your mod :33
I will fix it later ^^

Revo

78 posts

Joined April 2012

Revo 2013-01-26T11:25:44+00:00

Here's my mod via sacchann's IRC

SPOILER

17:28 sacchann: eh eh
17:28 sacchann: lu bisa modding ga?
17:28 Revolver_revo: apa apa??
17:28 Revolver_revo: bisa" aja sih
17:28 *sacchann is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/211245 Nishino Kana - If]
17:29 sacchann: bisa mod sekarang ga? o3o
17:29 Revolver_revo: oh yang tadi di #modreqs
17:29 sacchann: IYA
17:29 sacchann: <3
17:29 sacchann: kyah lu tau aja deh <3
17:29 Revolver_revo: habisa yang paling aneh sendiri requestnya >_>
17:30 sacchann: =w=
17:30 sacchann: aneh gimana =3=
17:30 Revolver_revo: itu aja udah paling aneh sendiri ._.
17:31 sacchann: aneh gimananya? .___. '
17:31 Revolver_revo: ada "weeee~"
17:31 Revolver_revo: trus ada emot" gitu~
17:31 Revolver_revo: tapi gapapa
17:31 Revolver_revo: mengundang perhatian
17:31 sacchann: HAHAH
17:31 sacchann: mod yah mod yah o3o
17:32 Revolver_revo: 00:40:905 (4) - sebaiknya buat sejajar dengan sumbu y kalo mau
17:33 sacchann: ...bisa pake english ga. ntar orangnya ga ngerti .__.
17:33 Revolver_revo: 00:41:393 (5) - biar ini juga bisa pas ama tengahnya
17:33 Revolver_revo: oh ._.
17:33 sacchann: dari ulang pelase <3
17:33 Revolver_revo: kirain elu yang bikin
17:33 sacchann: wakakak pan cuma bantu nyari modder. susah nyari sih o3o> ulang ulang~
17:35 Revolver_revo: 00:41:393 (5) - move to x:156 y:192
17:36 sacchann: ok
17:38 sacchann: what else?
17:40 Revolver_revo: 00:56:027 (2) - make the 364;104 tick to a red tick, or move it to 368;116
17:40 Revolver_revo: just choose on of them
17:40 Revolver_revo: *one
17:41 sacchann: ok
17:43 Revolver_revo: 01:12:125 (3) - make this as a reverse slider, and continue it by a slider until 01:13:344
17:43 sacchann: mmk
17:44 Revolver_revo: 01:27:735 - make this just like before
17:44 sacchann: hm
17:46 Revolver_revo: 01:38:710 (2) - this one is wrong timed slider. cut the reverse arrow, then add two notes on 01:39:442 and 01:39:686
17:46 Revolver_revo: 01:38:710 (2) - this one is wrong timed slider. cut the reverse arrow, then add two notes on 01:39:442 and 01:39:686
17:46 sacchann: hng
17:47 Revolver_revo: 01:56:515 (1) - I think you should remove this
17:48 sacchann: hng
17:49 Revolver_revo: 02:29:686 (2) - make the 148;280 tick as a red tick, or move it to 136;264
17:50 Revolver_revo: 02:31:881 (4,5) - why don't you make it as a reverse slider? it should be easier
17:51 sacchann: hm
17:52 Revolver_revo: 03:03:345 (5,6) - make these as I thought you in 01:12:125 (3)
17:52 Revolver_revo: 03:18:955 (3,4) - make it like before
17:53 Revolver_revo: 03:29:930 (2) - cut the reverse arrow and add two notes on 03:30:661 and 03:30:905
17:54 sacchann: mmk
17:55 sacchann: it's for normal diff right?
17:55 Revolver_revo: yeah ofc
17:55 sacchann: yep k :3
17:56 sacchann: hardhard one naw weee
17:56 Revolver_revo: okay okay
17:57 *sacchann rolls
17:59 Revolver_revo: From now on, the mod is for Hard diff
17:59 sacchann: ok
18:00 Revolver_revo: 01:14:564 - until 01:15:296, make it like this http://puu.sh/1SQWL
18:01 sacchann: hm
18:10 Revolver_revo: 02:43:344 (5) - I think you can make a 1/2 sv slider here, and make it like this http://puu.sh/1SR55
18:11 sacchann: hm
18:12 Revolver_revo: and here's the range fo the previous slider http://puu.sh/1SR5U
18:12 Revolver_revo: *of
18:14 sacchann: hng
18:14 Revolver_revo: okay, I think that's all
18:14 sacchann: okiedokie o3o>
18:14 sacchann: sararankyu \:D/
18:14 Revolver_revo: overall, it's a great map
18:14 Revolver_revo: goodjob
18:14 Revolver_revo: and good luck~
18:15 Revolver_revo: also, I love the hitsounds, since I'm poor at hitsounding ._.v

Dark_Ai

1,831 posts

Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

Dark_Ai 2013-01-26T12:45:38+00:00

Fixed Hard =w=
Waiting for yanlu before update :33

And also thank you both for modding and baka sacchann THANKS for helping meee >.<//

Tshemmp

1,405 posts

Joined June 2011

Tshemmp 2013-01-26T13:18:40+00:00

[General]

not sure, maybe Offset 412 (-6)

[Hard]

00:29:930 (2,3,4) - I don't like this triplet being in a straight line, maybe move (3) 2 or 3 grids down
00:45:539 (2,3,4) - same, a more "roundish" stream would fit the song better imo, maybe like this:
SPOILER
00:57:978 (1,2,3,4,5) - don't know, I don't like the flow here into the slider, how about this:
SPOILER
```
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```
01:01:881 (8,1) - a little jump could fit here
01:40:905 (1,2) - uh, you mapped the triplet to early I think, it should be at 01:41:149 - , 01:41:271 - , 01:41:393 - :
SPOILER
02:43:100 - for some reason I want to click here, so maybe you can shorten the slider and put a circle there (stacked on 02:43:344 (5) ). Oh, and a little jump between the slider and the circle could fit aswell.
03:15:783 - triplet here?
03:27:491 (2,3,4,5) - meh, your whole map was very "un-jumpy" and now out of a sudden you put these 2.0x circle jumps (which are harder than slider jumps). I would decrease the spacing.
04:16:271 (2,3,4,5) - same, decrease the spacing a bit, 2.0x is so much on this song, I'd say 1.7x as a maximum

[yanlu's Normal]

00:40:417 (3,5) - this overlap. It is still readable, but will be very hard for a beginner. It also doesn't look too good.
00:41:393 (5) - hm, I can't hear what the return arrow is mapped to
00:54:564 (6) - maybe NC here already, because I feel the new part starts already there. The way it is now is good, too, just a small idea I had.
01:26:027 - maybe add a circle here (you did it 01:10:417, too)
02:14:076 (3,5) - copy-pasta: this overlap. It is still readable, but will be very hard for a beginner. It also doesn't look too good.
02:15:052 (5) - hm, I can't hear what the return arrow is mapped to
02:28:223 (6) - maybe NC here already, because I feel the new part starts already there. The way it is now is good, too, just a small idea I had.
02:30:662 (3) - uh, the ending point of this slider sounds weird. It is especially strange to play with this little break after it followed by a slider on a red tick. I suggest doing this (shortening (3) by one tick and adding a return arrow):
SPOILER
02:57:491 (1) - I really dislike the starting time if this spinner, 02:57:978 would be much better imo
03:50:661 (2) - it doesn't fit is this return arrow is just there without anything in the music supporting it :<
04:06:271 (1) - again, what is this return arrow mapped to?

Dark_Ai

1,831 posts

Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

Dark_Ai 2013-01-26T13:44:15+00:00

changed almost everything ~ thank you for your mod >.<//

Anyway

Updated without yanlu's fix >.<

yanlu

749 posts

Joined November 2010

yanlu 2013-01-26T14:46:51+00:00

update

SPOILER

osu file format v11

[General]
AudioFilename: Nishino_Kana_-_if.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 70174
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 16039,101893,230086
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:If
TitleUnicode:If
Artist:Nishino Kana
ArtistUnicode:Nishino Kana
Creator:Dark_Ai
Version:yanlu's Normal
Source:Naruto Shippuden: The Lost Tower
Tags:Thank you Love Ai yanlu
BeatmapID:211245
BeatmapSetID:73413

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

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Kanari

1,311 posts

Joined June 2011

Kanari 2013-01-26T16:01:42+00:00

Hellowww ~
Request via in-game ~
Kaannaaaaa ~ <3

[General]
- Artist can be 西野カナ and romanised is Nishino Kana.
- Bookmarks can be removed ~

[yanlu's Normal]
02:20:661 (2) - Place at x:212 y:292
03:50:174 (1) - Maybe remove to give a pause effect? ~ This part is a bit silent.

Difficulty is fine, but maybe.. try to place some objects someewhere else to avoid overlaps ? Like 04:13:588 (6,7,1), 04:04:320 (4,5,1), 04:13:588 (6,7,1) and so on ~

[Hard]
00:33:100 (4) - Place at x:424 y:40 so that it blackets around the previous note
01:02:125 (1) - A bit sudden of a jump ? owo
03:43:588 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Make a flower shape ? Place 03:44:808 (9) where (4) is if you take this flower suggestion.

03:50:174 (1,2) - Maybe remove to give a pause effect? ~ This part is a bit silent.

Nicely mapped!
Sorry for my poor mod ;w;
Good luck with rank! >w<

Dark_Ai

1,831 posts

Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

Dark_Ai 2013-01-26T16:31:47+00:00

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:
Hellowww ~
Request via in-game ~
Kaannaaaaa ~ <3

[General]
- Artist can be 西野カナ and romanised is Nishino Kana. Okay
- Bookmarks can be removed ~ nuuuh :c

[Hard]
00:33:100 (4) - Place at x:424 y:40 so that it blackets around the previous note Okay
01:02:125 (1) - A bit sudden of a jump ? owo changed
03:43:588 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Make a flower shape ? Place 03:44:808 (9) where (4) is if you take this flower suggestion. I can't do that TToTT
03:50:174 (1,2) - Maybe remove to give a pause effect? ~ This part is a bit silent. Okay

Nicely mapped!
Sorry for my poor mod ;w;
Good luck with rank! >w<

Thank you for your mod >w<//

Updated ~ but waiting for yanlu's fix too =w=/

yanlu

749 posts

Joined November 2010

yanlu 2013-01-27T08:01:14+00:00

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:
Hellowww ~
Request via in-game ~
Kaannaaaaa ~ <3

[yanlu's Normal]
02:20:661 (2) - Place at x:212 y:292 okay
03:50:174 (1) - Maybe remove to give a pause effect? ~ This part is a bit silent. no dele but change to 50%vol. now

Difficulty is fine, but maybe.. try to place some objects someewhere else to avoid overlaps ? Like 04:13:588 (6,7,1), 04:04:320 (4,5,1), 04:13:588 (6,7,1) and so on ~
uhmm..keep cuz it's okay now but i'll think about...

Nicely mapped!
Sorry for my poor mod ;w;
Good luck with rank! >w<

thank you Crystal~ :3

update~

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UnderminE

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UnderminE 2013-02-09T23:25:51+00:00

Hey, don't give up. Good luck \:D/

Raging Bull

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Joined June 2010

Raging Bull 2013-02-09T23:30:43+00:00

UnderminE wrote:
Hey, don't give up. Good luck \:D/

Dark_Ai

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Dark_Ai 2013-02-09T23:30:57+00:00

UnderminE wrote:
Hey, don't give up. Good luck \:D/

I've thought about .... but thank you ^^

birra

359 posts

Joined May 2011

birra 2013-02-12T02:44:35+00:00

KEEP-SMILING c8 dont give up easily pretty pwease. you will break mah deepdeepheart if you do ;;

Dark_Ai

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Dark_Ai 2013-02-12T14:50:48+00:00

sacchann wrote:
KEEP-SMILING c8 dont give up easily pretty pwease. you will break mah deepdeepheart if you do ;;

orz ...

yanlu

749 posts

Joined November 2010

yanlu 2013-02-12T16:38:54+00:00

Orz..Don't give up Ai~!ill always by your side 0-0/ cheer up

/me hugs Ai

Dark_Ai

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Dark_Ai 2013-02-13T06:09:35+00:00

Thanks for support ;A;

/me hugs all >o<

lolcubes

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lolcubes 2013-02-13T08:43:37+00:00

Just remember to fix the offset (if it's the same mp3 Lally used?). Should be 404 iirc.
No kd.

Dark_Ai

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Dark_Ai 2013-02-13T13:34:48+00:00

ok

uodated ~

Frostmourne

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Frostmourne 2013-02-16T09:24:58+00:00

as I promised to mod it before I am a MAT.

General
unsnapped 3rd kiai time in Hard diff so fix it

yanlu's Normal
OD-1 since I feel it's supposed to be easier than this (the song, feeling, how it plays)
01:15:525 (2,3,4,5) - the way it goes upward is quite hard for beginner I guess , it's not like 00:57:964 (4,5,6,7) - because it doesn't go up
I suggest you add some sliders in there instead of only single notes here

SPOILER

03:02:355 (4) - feels too long .. NC ? if you fix , you have to remove NC 01:10:647 (1) - and add at 01:11:135 (2) - for consistency

Hard
04:06:257 (3) - clap tail ?
04:17:964 (3) - ^

seems fine !
let me know when you have fixed

yanlu

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yanlu 2013-02-16T11:52:36+00:00

Frostmourne wrote:
as I promised to mod it before I am a MAT.

General
unsnapped 3rd kiai time in Hard diff so fix it

yanlu's Normal
OD-1 since I feel it's supposed to be easier than this (the song, feeling, how it plays) fix >_<
01:15:525 (2,3,4,5) - the way it goes upward is quite hard for beginner I guess , it's not like 00:57:964 (4,5,6,7) - because it doesn't go up
I suggest you add some sliders in there instead of only single notes here okay fix~and 03:06:989 (3) - too
SPOILER
03:02:355 (4) - feels too long .. NC ? if you fix , you have to remove NC 01:10:647 (1) - and add at 01:11:135 (2) - for consistency okay~

Hard
04:06:257 (3) - clap tail ?
04:17:964 (3) - ^

seems fine !
let me know when you have fixed

wow thank you Frostmourne! >w</

http://puu.sh/23oGz

ririco

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ririco 2013-02-16T12:00:04+00:00

tbh the song name is "if" not "If"

so i will change it if i were you =3=

Frostmourne

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Frostmourne 2013-02-16T12:29:26+00:00

Sekai-nyan wrote:
tbh the song name is "if" not "If"

so i will change it if i were you =3=

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/If_%28Kana_Nishino_song%29

not sure but both i and I are fine
changed source to Naruto Shippuden 4: The Lost Tower because it was written in that page

Bass

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Bass 2013-02-16T12:32:40+00:00

yay

Dark_Ai

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Dark_Ai 2013-02-16T12:33:06+00:00

Sekai-nyan wrote:
tbh the song name is "if" not "If"

so i will change it if i were you =3=

Isn't it doesn't matter if ''if'' or ''If'' since it means the same anyway huh? ^^

And also Thank you very much Fr-- Jeep >.<

Andrea

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Andrea 2013-02-16T12:55:04+00:00

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Like the image says "if" is the correct title.

Dark_Ai

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Dark_Ai 2013-02-16T12:58:20+00:00

Dark_Ai wrote:
Isn't it doesn't matter if ''if'' or ''If'' since it means the same anyway huh? ^^

rEdo

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rEdo 2013-02-16T12:58:27+00:00

Andrea wrote:
Like the image says "if" is the correct title.

hi free kudosu

@Dark_Ai: yes, it does. it's just like I would write your nickname "darkai". sounds wrong, doesn't it? that's why "if" is the correct title, and should be changed. ;)

@Bass: wikipedia is made by people, and people can be wrong. the cover says "if", and we should suggest overselves using the artists' content, not some random page on the internet.

also: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/If_%28Kana_Nishino_song%29
>stylised as "if"

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Bass

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Bass 2013-02-16T13:00:45+00:00

Title in Wikipedia is "If".

Now stop complaining.

Andrea

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Andrea 2013-02-16T13:02:10+00:00

Nobody is complaining here, title is wrong as of now, that's it.

Make sure to change it, I just don't wanna see this unranked because of that afterwards.

Dark_Ai

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Dark_Ai 2013-02-16T13:12:25+00:00

meh ... here you go >_>

it looks horrible

Frostmourne

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Frostmourne 2013-02-16T13:14:54+00:00

Frostmourne wrote:
not sure but both i and I are fine

Andrea

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Andrea 2013-02-16T13:22:38+00:00

Thank you for listening, good luck on getting this ranked. :3

Lally

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Lally 2013-02-16T14:41:02+00:00

[Normal]

00:40:403 (3) - this circle cover the reverse arrow and is a unrankable thing
02:14:062 (3) - same here ^
03:21:379 (1) - this slider touch HP drain
03:50:160 (1) - this circle is overlapped with spinner combo burst

Bass

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Bass 2013-02-16T14:59:53+00:00

Lally wrote:
[Normal]
00:40:403 (3) - this circle cover the reverse arrow and is a unrankable thing
02:14:062 (3) - same here ^
03:21:379 (1) - this slider touch HP drain
03:50:160 (1) - this circle is overlapped with spinner combo burst

Learn to mod

First pointed thing isn't even necessary, circle nor hitburts doesn't cover repeat and it's really readable, consulted with MAT.
Second is basically same so won't bother commenting.
Third point - I suggest you to go to optic, where do you see touching HP drain bar, did you even use default skin to mod?

Last point

...........................................................

I have no comment, circle is really far from hitburst

and (2) is readable.

Your mod is pointless, sorry. Any of your suggestion doesn't even make sense. Sorry.

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Lally

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Lally 2013-02-16T15:04:06+00:00

Bass wrote:
First pointed thing isn't even necessary, circle nor hitburts doesn't cover repeat and it's really readable, consulted with MAT.

same here consulted with a MAT before

Dark_Ai

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Dark_Ai 2013-02-16T15:10:15+00:00

Lally wrote:
[Normal]
00:40:403 (3) - this circle cover the reverse arrow and is a unrankable thing
02:14:062 (3) - same here ^
03:21:379 (1) - this slider touch HP drain
03:50:160 (1) - this circle is overlapped with spinner combo burst

some discuss and talk and checking by myself I don't agree with your mod.
sorry but I don't change anything

not again in this way please orz

Bass

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Bass 2013-02-16T15:12:52+00:00

Want me ask more MATs? Or you just admit that you made fool of yourself.

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Low

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Low 2013-02-16T15:16:29+00:00

Lally wrote:
Bass wrote:
First pointed thing isn't even necessary, circle nor hitburts doesn't cover repeat and it's really readable, consulted with MAT.
same here consulted with a MAT before

I'm here to stop the arguing.

Lally, all of the things you've pointed out aren't really valid things that should be pointed out during modding. 00:40:403 (3) and 02:14:062 (3) do not cover the reverse arrow with their hitbursts. There's plenty of time to see the reverse arrow after the hitburst fades away (the reverse arrow is still visible with the hitburst there).

03:21:379 (1) does not touch the HP bar. Use default skin while modding, please.

03:50:160 (1) isn't a problem at all.

Which MAT told you that this stuff was an issue? I want to talk with them.

Stefan

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Stefan 2013-02-16T15:19:24+00:00

I wasn't so sure about 03:50:160 (1) - since the Hitburst hides almost the complete Sliderbody of (2), but oh well.

Gogo Ai

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Lally 2013-02-16T15:19:47+00:00

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about this i asked Chewin and confirmed it