-00:21:04 (5) - Clap goes on the last point.
-00:22:32 (5) - ^
-00:22:96 (1) - Straighten this out.
-00:23:59 (3) - ^
-00:24:07 (4) - Clap goes here.
-00:24:23 (5) - Finish goes on the first two points.
-00:26:63 (7) - Clap goes here.
-00:27:90 (8) - ^
-00:29:18 (8) - ^
-00:29:34 (9) - Finish on the first and last points.
-00:44:34 (4) - Remove the Clap.
-00:45:30 (8,9) - Remove the Claps and replace them with Whistles.
-00:49:76 (1) - Make this look neater.
-00:53:59 (1) - Replace the Clap with a Whistle.
-00:54:55 (1,2,3,4) - Remove the Whistles.
-00:55:83 (5) - Clap goes here.
-00:56:15 (1) - Whistle goes here; remove the Clap.
-00:57:11 (1,2,3) - Remove the Whistles.
-00:58:06 (4) - Put a Clap on the endpoint.
-00:58:70 (1,2,3,4) - Replace the Claps with Whistles.
-01:03:17 (5) - Add a Whistle.
-01:03:65 (1) - Hitsounds should be like this: Finish and Whistle on the starting point and slider track, just a Whistle on the endpoint.
-01:04:76 (1,2,3,4) - Remove the Whistles.
-01:06:04 (5) - Add a Clap.
-01:06:36 (1) - Replace the Clap with a Whistle.
-01:07:32 (1,2,3) - Remove the Whistles.
-01:08:59 (5) - Put a Clap on the starting point, make the endpoint a Whistle instead of a Clap, and straighten this out, it looks disgusting.
-01:09:55 (1,2,3) - There should only be Whistles on these.
-01:13:06 (4,5,6) - No hitsounds here, remove any there..
-01:17:85 (1,2,3,4,5) - Unnecessary; delete and reinput the break.
-01:31:25 (4) - This should have just a Whistle on everything but the endpoint, which should have a Clap.
-01:32:21 (2,3,4,5) - Just Whistles on these.
-01:33:81 (6) - This just needs a Clap.
-01:34:13 (7) - This just needs a Finish.
-01:36:68 (10) - Add a Whistle.
-01:39:23 (10) - ^
-Remember the hitsounds I mentioned during the chorus section? Use that pattern every time the chorus comes up. It'd be a chore to list all the points, so I'm sure you'll be able to find them.
-01:59:98 (1) - ewwewwewweww change it this is absolutely DISGUSTING.
-02:08:12 (4) - Clap goes here.
-02:08:75 (8) - ^
-02:09:39 (4) - ^
-02:09:55 (5,6,7) - Whistles go here.
-02:10:03 (9) - Clap goes here.
-02:10:51 (2) - Clap goes on the endpoint.
-02:11:15 (4) - ^
-02:11:47 (1) - Add a Whistle.
-02:11:79 (3) - ^, except put a Clap on the endpoint.
-02:12:11 (4) - Put a Clap on the endpoint.
-02:12:42 (5,6,7) - Whistles go here.
-02:12:74 (1) - Tidy this up and add a Finish.
-02:16:25 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - What in the world is this crap. Remap this, it plays like a river of bricks and looks even worse.
-02:33:094 - Soft inherit section goes here.
-02:33:65 (2) - Whistle goes here.
-02:34:92 (4) - ^
-02:35:647 - Go back to Normal sounds here, but a reduced volume.
-02:34:45 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Keep up the New Combo every two beats trend here.
-Look, the chorus again. Remember what I said.
-02:58:54 (7) - Finish goes here.

-00:53:599- That flash fades out too slowly. Fade it out faster.
-01:07:32 (1,2,3) - Remove the Whistles.
-01:47:216 - This fades out too quickly. We need to find a happy medium here.
-01:57:429 - I'd say to remove this one entirely or make it start 1/2 a beat earlier. Having it start in the middle of a slider, even if it syncs up with the vocals, looks awkward as crap.
-02:16:81 (5) - Clap goes on the last point.
-02:17:69 (10) - Clap goes here.
-02:20:40 (1) - This looks ugly. Fix it.
-02:22:96 (16) - Finish goes here.
-Remove the flash in the break, it's not pretty, it's ugly.
-Random kiai. .-. If you're going to turn on/off kiai once, do it the next time.
-Remove the next random flash in the chorus.
-02:50:72 (5) - Clap goes here.
-02:53:28 (5) - Clap goes on the starting point.

[Events]
//Background and Video events
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
Sprite,Background,TopLeft,"white.png",0,0
L,53599,1
F,1,0,319,1,0
L,63812,1
F,1,0,319,1,0
L,107216,1
F,1,0,319,1,0
L,117429,1
F,1,0,319,1,0
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"DS.png",320,240
F,0,157402,157482,0,1
F,0,157482,157562,1,0
F,0,157562,157642,0,1
F,0,157642,157721,1,0
F,0,157721,157801,0,1
F,0,157801,157881,1,0
F,0,157881,157961,0,1
F,0,157961,158040,1,0
F,0,158040,158120,0,1
F,0,158120,158200,1,0
F,0,158200,158280,0,1
M,0,158280,,322,132
S,0,158280,,0.70304
F,0,158280,158439,1,0
S,0,158280,158439,0.70304,1.6656
//Storyboard Sound Samples

-Nice use of flashes.
-00:21:36 (2) - Add a Whistle.
-00:24:87 (6) - Add a Finish to the endpoint.
-00:27:42 (7) - Put a Whistle on the first and third points.
-00:43:06 (3) - Remove the Finish.
-00:45:30 (2,3) - Remove the Finishes.
-01:13:70 (4) - Add a Finish to the endpoint.
-01:35:72 (3) - This beat seems really random.

-00:23:59 (5) - There should only be a Clap on the last point.
-00:24:23 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark and the Whistle stuff; add a Finish to both points.
-00:28:70 (5,1) - See the last two points I brought up.
-00:48:81 (5) - New Combo mark goes here.
-00:49:76 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark and make this neater.
-01:34:13 (6) - Remove the Whistle.
-01:40:51 (3) - Add a Whistle.
-01:57:26 (1) - what is this I don't even--please make it neater.
-02:02:21 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-02:02:53 (2) - New Combo mark goes here.
-02:07:00 (5) - Add a Whistle.
-02:07:32 (6) - Add a Clap.

-00:44:02 (1) - Remove the Whistle. It doesn't particularly fit there.
-00:47:85 (2) - Make the hitsounds of this mirror those of 1.
-00:54:87 (2) - Endpoint should have a Finish.
-00:56:79 (1) - This should have only a Clap.
-01:02:53 (2) - This looks really messy. But it fits I guess but if you could clean it up that would be grand.
-01:06:36 (3,1) - Finish only, Clap only.
-01:27:42 (1) - Again with the whistleslider. It sounds...not good. Please remove the Whistle.
-01:32:53 (5) - First two points should have whistles.
-01:56:15 (1) - Make this symmetrical.
-01:57:429 - Flash should go here, instead of where you had it after this.