Ono Ryoko - POP STEP LOVE‬ · forum‬

YTYuyu

osu! Alumni

Joined January 2011

YTYuyu 2012-09-12T19:26:02+00:00

R a r e wrote:
249's Normal
00:01:837 (2) - more curve slider? any more and the flow would break in this part.
00:09:170 (5) - I prefer to no stack here. no because i want this stack to emphasize the instrumental. this part is like a sneak peek of what players are gonna see.
00:28:170 (1,2,3,4) - how about this pattern? http://puu.sh/12Q9S alright~. i was trying to avoid the 1/1 rhythm here.
01:43:837 (1) - change to slider then end this at 01:44:170 - no. i did this to test the players reaction on their timing. they have to know when to hit the next slider here.
02:22:504 (1,2,3,4,5) - let's try create polygon circle ~ http://puu.sh/12QgD if you notice, i did this so that the blue (4) blankets the (5) here. if i change it to that, it'll be gone.
02:40:837 (5,1,1) - spacing? oh whoops~. fixed ><

alacat wrote:
Hi:3 As requested

[249's Normal]
●00:09:170 (5) - These notes could be stacked better. so spacing too close (0.01x) ooh...i promised myself that i won't fix something like this. fixed.
●00:28:170 (1) - it doesn't follow the music well.
I hope you remove this and try making another pattern.try this?
no that kind of rhythm won't flow to the vocals. (3,4,5) is where the parts change in the vocals, and (1,2) emphasizes the vocals here.
●00:33:170 (3,1) - switch these newcombos for your pattern? no because (1) is where the vocals start. the instrumental is still going from (3).
●00:44:491 (2) - add New combo ? from here it is a slow melody sure. i was thinking about this after all.
●00:51:170 (3) - hidden at 00:49:170 (1) - slider end >.< confusing many beginners this is a normal diff, not an easy. just because it's the easiest diff, doesn't mean i can do easy patterns in a normal diff.
●00:51:837 (1) - hmm , do you really want to use this slider here.
it feels inconsistent here and also two-repeats-sliders are confusing for beginners .
try this ?
no that rhythm makes me feel uncomfortable. i did this as a challenge for players.
●01:09:170 (1) - add finish on the slider's head ? orz fixed.
●01:41:170 (5,1) - switch these newcombos for your pattern? same as 00:33:170 but, (5) follows up in the vocals from the previous although it has stopped.
●01:39:837 (4) - add whistle on the slider's head ? no it'll sound unfitting. yes it follows the dinging noise, but remember that there's claps in this part, and that'll break the flow in the hitsounding.
●01:42:504 (2) - ^ same , here ^
●01:57:170 (1) - same here ~ 00:51:837 (1) - same reply.
●02:41:170 (1,1) - it is better to use DS1.20x i fixed that in the last mod orz.

good luck (ﾉ･ˇ∀ˇ･)ﾉ ~ ♪

ty for the mods everyone

SPOILER

osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: POP STEP LOVE.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 55837
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
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[Editor]
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[Metadata]
Title:POP STEP LOVE
Artist:Ono Ryoko
Creator:-Gamu-
Version:249's Normal
Source:Mashiro Iro Symphony - The color of lovers -
Tags:character song sena airi mythol byakugan249

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maaagic

433 posts

Joined October 2011

maaagic 2012-09-15T02:13:38+00:00

遅くなって申し訳ありません

すべて提案なので気に入らなかったら無視してください・・・

[Hard]
00:01:837 (3) - -3°ほど回転させた方が綺麗になると思いました。
00:57:504 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - 星形にした方が綺麗になるかなと思いました。 http://puu.sh/15apM 一応codeを

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01:02:337 (4,1) - NC入れ替え？こっちのほうが歌に合うかなと思いました。
01:38:670 (4,1) - ＾
01:58:670 - ここにサークルがないのは少し違和感があると思います。スピナーは01:58:754 - か01:58:837 - から始めてもいいと思います。

[Collab]
00:43:004 (1,2,3,4,5) - すこし汚い感じがしました。

あまり指摘できなくて申し訳ありません...
sorry my noooob mod
nice song & map!!

star!!

Gamu

Elite Mapper

2,606 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

Gamu 2012-09-15T23:28:00+00:00

Thanks guys :3

I fixed some

giO-

giO- 2012-09-16T16:56:06+00:00

Hello, from #modreqs for Mod for Mod with Renard - Smoke Tower http://osu.ppy.sh/s/38149

249's Normal

00:03:837 (1) - finish this slider on 00:04:170 - and add beat here 00:04:337 - http://puu.sh/15HpN

Collab

00:09:337 - make this break start like other diff at 00:11:837 - http://puu.sh/15Hwg
00:44:837 (2) - this note is almost overlapped with the slider(3), i suggest to move on x:168 y:240
00:45:337 (4) - move on x:256 y:200
00:45:504 (5) - move on x:296 y:128
00:45:837 (1,2,3) - fix spacing also here with distance snap 1.2x to be like the part that will come

Hard

AR +1 maybe? just a suggestion

00:09:337 - make this break start like other diff at 00:11:837 - http://puu.sh/15HJU
00:28:670 (1) - remove new combo?
02:00:670 (3) - remove 1 repeat on this slider
02:23:837 (1) - remove new combo?

Good luck!

kajiyatta

1,421 posts

Joined April 2011

kajiyatta 2012-09-17T15:23:12+00:00

Hi from PM
General
almost suggestions
249's Normal
nice diff :3
Placement
00:09:170(5) this stack might be difficult for newbie and I don't find this kind of stack in your diff. so, try to replace? e.g)

SPOILER

Rythem
01:43:837(1,2,) it's ok to follow the vocal but a bit weird for me, so maybe this rythem and placement?

SPOILER

Hit Sonud
00:48:837(3) add finish? I can hear it back music.
01:54:170(5)^
00:51:170(3) add clap? same reason as above.
01:55:837(3) add clap at end? ^

Hard
Placement
00:35:504(4) ctrl+Rでジャンプさせてみるのはどうですか？
00:44:837(2,3,4) DSを気にしないのであればもう少し離して見栄えをよくしてみるのはどうですか

SPOILER

00:46:504(1,2,3)^
Rythem
01:30:837(1) 意図的な音取りであればスルーで構いませんが、01:30:670のボーカルを拾った方がより良いと思います　e:g)

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Hit Sonud
01:43:837(1) バックに音は殆どありませんが、始点に音量を抑えたfinishを追加？　(00:38:504でfinishを追加してあるので）

Collab
Rythem
02:43:920 ここはバックの音が響いているのでnoteを追加してみるのは？
Hit Sonud
02:13:004(1) add finish at head?

全体的にとても完成度の高い譜面だと思います。moddingが役に立たないと思ったらno kdsでお願いします

　 good luck & star!

Guy

Former osu! Champion: 2014

2,049 posts

Joined March 2009

Guy 2012-09-18T12:47:45+00:00

mod request from in via-game
most suggestion!
you can ignore when my mod not favorite

　

249's Normal

　●　you not use Kiai-Time?
　●　00:38:504 (1) - Using a symmetric slider is clean here
　●　00:40:170 (2) - 1grid left? (To be located right under a big slider)
　●　00:41:170 (1) - This slider is distorted a little. plz make symmetric.
　●　01:01:170 (1,2) - increase curves with this slider as follows?

SPOILER

　●　01:37:171 (1) - Why doesn't this slider put it without matching it with the center line?

SPOILER

　●　01:41:504 (1) - move to x:368 y:252
　●　01:51:837 (1) - this slider curve is big, therefore look is bad. I think that you should make the curve that is about the same as (2) sliders.

SPOILER

　●　01:57:171 (1) - move to x:136 y:96?
　●　02:01:171 (1,2) - same reason 01:37:171 (1)
　●　02:23:837 (5) - 1grid left? (make Triangle)

Hard

　●　00:06:004 (2) - 少し不恰好に見えます。grid小さくしてもう少し緩やかなカーブでnoteを包む感じで作ってみてください！
　●　00:24:004 (1,2,3) - 流れ的にこんな感じの配置がいいと思いました。

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　●　00:32:337 (2) - slider 2nd pointをセンターラインに合わせているのならば、左右対称にしたほうがいいかと思いました。
　●　00:44:837 (2) - noteの位置がうまく次のスライダーに合っていると思いません。スライダーの延長線上に置く配置のほうが綺麗です。
　●　00:57:504 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - このnoteで星型を作っていますが、00:58:837 (2,3) - この2つが大きくずれているような気がします。x:248 y:164くらいに移動すれば少し綺麗になりますが・・・　これでも少しずれているかもしれません。
　●　01:10:171 (3) - x:148 y:104に移動?
　●　01:11:837 (1) - Ctrl+Jしたスライダーの方が合っているように思いました。
　●　01:30:004 (3,4,5,6) - 星型が崩れたような形に見えたのでちょっとプレイ時に違和感がありました。このような配置はどうでしょうか (わかりづらくてすみません)

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Collab

　●　00:45:004 (3) - grid sizeをtinyにしてslider 3rd pointを1grid up?
　
　problem is not found..xD Good.

以上ですーCollab mod短くてすみません
頑張ってください

Gamu

Elite Mapper

2,606 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

Gamu 2012-09-19T11:20:55+00:00

thank you~ :3

some fix~

YTYuyu

osu! Alumni

4,149 posts

Joined January 2011

YTYuyu 2012-09-19T11:42:59+00:00

giO- wrote:
Hello, from #modreqs for Mod for Mod with Renard - Smoke Tower http://osu.ppy.sh/s/38149

249's Normal

00:03:837 (1) - finish this slider on 00:04:170 - and add beat here 00:04:337 - http://puu.sh/15HpN that will be hard for players in the beginning since we're near the start.

Good luck!

kajiyatta wrote:
Hi from PM

249's Normal
nice diff :3
Placement
00:09:170(5) this stack might be difficult for newbie and I don't find this kind of stack in your diff. so, try to replace? e.g) no i want this stack to represent the introduction to the song because after this is the break.
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Rythem
01:43:837(1,2,) it's ok to follow the vocal but a bit weird for me, so maybe this rythem and placement?
SPOILER
did this.
SPOILER
not this. i did it differently.

Hit Sonud
00:48:837(3) add finish? I can hear it back music. whoops i forgot...fixed.
01:54:170(5)^ ^
00:51:170(3) add clap? same reason as above. no the claps are meant for the consistency, not for the instrumental.
01:55:837(3) add clap at end? ^ ^
good luck & star!

Guy wrote:
mod request from in via-game
most suggestion!
you can ignore when my mod not favorite

　
249's Normal

　●　you not use Kiai-Time? technically yes. it's a kiai burst.
　●　00:38:504 (1) - Using a symmetric slider is clean here it looks symmetric enough so i'm not changing this.
　●　00:40:170 (2) - 1grid left? (To be located right under a big slider) no it'll look uneven with (3,4) since i want the triangle to be evened out.
　●　00:41:170 (1) - This slider is distorted a little. plz make symmetric. ok show me examples.
　●　01:01:170 (1,2) - increase curves with this slider as follows? the curve is good enough to show the flow in the vocals.
SPOILER
　●　01:37:171 (1) - Why doesn't this slider put it without matching it with the center line? uhh...fixed ><.
SPOILER
　●　01:41:504 (1) - move to x:368 y:252 no but i adjusted the slider.
　●　01:51:837 (1) - this slider curve is big, therefore look is bad. I think that you should make the curve that is about the same as (2) sliders. no i did this intentionally to know that the next slider speeds up again.
SPOILER
　●　01:57:171 (1) - move to x:136 y:96? hmm i see...fixed.
　●　02:01:171 (1,2) - same reason 01:37:171 (1) fixed orz.
　●　02:23:837 (5) - 1grid left? (make Triangle)fine...fixed.

ty for the mods everyone

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osu file format v9

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AudioFilename: POP STEP LOVE.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 55837
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
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Title:POP STEP LOVE
Artist:Ono Ryoko
Creator:-Gamu-
Version:249's Normal
Source:Mashiro Iro Symphony - The color of lovers -
Tags:character song sena airi mythol byakugan249

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260,228,179837,5,4
176,312,180170,1,8
92,228,180504,1,0
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460,192,181837,6,0,B|396:268|256:256,1,200,0|4

Scarlet Sisters

130 posts

Joined July 2010

Scarlet Sisters 2012-09-19T14:39:58+00:00

nicemap!!

fight~
and star ~☆

Gamu

Elite Mapper

2,606 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

Gamu 2012-09-20T07:05:57+00:00

ありがとうー

しえるありすさん　<3

CuNha

119 posts

Joined October 2010

CuNha 2012-09-20T10:53:06+00:00

こんにちはgamuさん。from PM
ちょっと遅れてしまいました＞＜よかったら参考程度にみてくれると幸いです！

[249's Normal]
00:01:171 (1) - Volume50% Collab and Hard is 50%

[Hard]
02:23:837 (1) - ここは曲げずに直線の方が見栄えがいい気がします

[Collab]
01:18:504 (1) - ここのfinishですが02:23:837 (1) - と03:01:171 (1) - にはfinishが入ってないのでどっちかに統一した方が良さげです
01:19:004 (3,4,5,6,7) - 3grid下げてみてはいかが？http://puu.sh/16Rq3

01:57:670 (4) - finish
01:58:170 (1) - ^
02:00:504 (1) - remove new combo?

02:59:004 (3) - finish
02:59:504 (4) - ^

[Storyboard]
SBもお願いされましたが素晴らしい出来なのでこれでいいと思いますw
強いて言うならサビに出てくる小さいほうのsnow.pngが背景のタイトルにかぶってるので少し下にずらした方が気持ち綺麗になるかもしれません。
それと大きいほうのsnowは名前とかぶってるけど意図的ですかね？

とてもいいmapでした。ranked期待してまーす！

h-728

513 posts

Joined November 2010

h-728 2012-09-20T20:22:27+00:00

こんにちは。

[General]

mp3の曲が終了した後の何も音のない部分が邪魔な気がしました。03:29:170 より後ろあたりはカットしてしまっても良いのでは。

[249's Normal]

AR -1. consider the lowest diff, and 4 is enough fast to avoid too many notes to be displayed in same time.
OD -1. same as above, consider the lowest diff.
00:07:504 (2,3) - surely the distance is according to the distance snap, but SV was changed, so it seems like a jump.
I want you to keep the distance of 00:06:170 (4,1). how about shorten the distance? I think 0.9x is better.
00:07:837 (3,4) - same as above.
00:28:171 (1,2,3,4,5) - rhythm suggestion. to be symmetric with previous rhythm like 00:25:171 (1,2), how about put these sliders on the downbeat?
SPOILER
00:33:504 (1) - how about this form
SPOILER
if you accept this, you have to adjust around of flow, but it blankets (2) better. and please use this code.
```
275,296,33504,6,0,B|365:282|405:210|406:128|335:71,1,300,8|0
```
00:34:837 (2,1) - I feel the flow of cursor isn't kind. how about put (1) on the right side of (2) like this?
SPOILER
if you accept this, you should move (3) to opposite side.
00:38:504 (1,2) - is this jump intentional?
01:05:670 (2) - I feel it will be cool if you make this slider end at 01:06:004. also I think there are stronger sound than 01:06:170.
01:35:837 (3,4) - I feel something lonely here because of few sounds. how about replace with a slider like this
SPOILER
02:11:837 (1,2) - remove stacking. just after this, 02:12:837 (3,4) are stacked in 1/2 rhythm. I think it's confusing to make stacking in different rhythm in same section.
02:47:170 (5) - same as 01:05:670
02:59:837 (1,2,3,4,5) - not so cute pentagon..but how about make hexagon with the end of 02:58:504 (4) and 02:59:837 (1,2,3,4,5) to imitate the snow cristal? anyway nazi.

[Hard]

00:04:670 - これまでの音取りを見ると、ボーカルで取っているように感じますので、ここに音があってもいいように思いました。単純にサークルを追加しても良いと思いますがいかがでしょう。
00:23:004 (4) - 直後の00:25:170 (1,2,3) の音取りと対応させるように、このスライダーをサークルに置き換え、00:23:170 に音が入らないようにしたほうがかっこいいと思います。
00:39:671 (1) - 00:39:670 から始まるボーカルの声は、00:40:004 で終わっているように感じます。直前の流れからしても、このスライダーを1/1のものに置き換えたほうが自然な流れになると思いますがいかがでしょう。
00:48:004 - 00:04:670 と同じ。
00:59:671 (5,1) - (5)の開始する場所に特に音がないので、この音取りに違和感がありました。順番を入れ替え、スライダーの終点にサークルをスタックさせるような感じではいかがでしょう。
SPOILER
01:28:504 (3) - 00:23:004 と同じく、このサークルを削除しても良いのでは
01:45:004 (1) - 00:39:671と同じ
01:47:670 - 曲の1番ではここにノートを置いているので、2番でも追加した方が良いように感じます。
01:53:337 - 難易度を通して、ボーカルに沿わせてノートを置いているように思うので、ここに音が無い事に違和感を感じました。サークルを(1)にスタックさせる形で追加するのはどうでしょう。
02:07:004 (5,6) - 00:59:671 と同じ。順番を入れ替えたほうが曲に合っていると思いますがどうでしょう。

[Collab]

00:07:837 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 直前までスライダーがゆっくりで、ストリームに入った途端に急にスピードが速くなる印象がありなじみ難いと思うので、
サークルのストリームよりも先にスライダーストリームを配置してみてはどうでしょう。
SPOILER
00:24:004 - ボーカルを聞く限り、ここから歌詞が新しく始まってるように感じます。00:23:837 (1) の終点で音を取るのでも問題はないと思いますが、
ヒットサウンドがあまり明確に聞こえないので、次のノートのタイミングが少しわかりづらい気がします。00:23:837 (1) を1/2だけ後ろに動かすのはどうでしょうか。
00:36:504 (3,4,5,6) - 恐らく配置から来る見た目によるものだと思いますが、3,4と5,6が完全に分かれているように見え、視覚的にリズムの誤読を招きそうです。
DS1.4xほどですべてのサークルを離してみるのはどうでしょう。
01:04:504 (7,8,9,10) - 角度が浅く、直線的な配置になっており、少し打ちづらい角度な気がしました。8,10をそれぞれ6,5のスライダーの始点の上にスタックさせるというのはいかがでしょう。
SPOILER
01:58:670 - how about put the circle here and move this spinner 1/4 later like as 00:53:337 (4,1) ?

以上です。
特に気になるところはありませんでした。

Gamu

Elite Mapper

2,606 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

Gamu 2012-09-21T09:12:35+00:00

h-728 wrote:
こんにちは。

[General]
mp3の曲が終了した後の何も音のない部分が邪魔な気がしました。03:29:170 より後ろあたりはカットしてしまっても良いのでは。とくに、カットしても、しなくても　意味がないと思います。　もしも、mp3をカットしてしまうとoffsetがずれてしまいますので、色々とめんどくさいことになりますので、カットしないことにします。もし、BATやMATなどに　「これじゃ泡付けれないよ」とか言われた場合に関してはmp3をカットしたいと思います。
[Hard]
00:04:670 - これまでの音取りを見ると、ボーカルで取っているように感じますので、ここに音があってもいいように思いました。単純にサークルを追加しても良いと思いますがいかがでしょう。追加しました。
00:23:004 (4) - 直後の00:25:170 (1,2,3) の音取りと対応させるように、このスライダーをサークルに置き換え、00:23:170 に音が入らないようにしたほうがかっこいいと思います。　00:23:004を変えずに、00:25:670をサークルからスライダーに変えました。これで対応出来たと思います。
00:39:671 (1) - 00:39:670 から始まるボーカルの声は、00:40:004 で終わっているように感じます。直前の流れからしても、このスライダーを1/1のものに置き換えたほうが自然な流れになると思いますがいかがでしょう。　よく、聞いてみたら　たしかにそうでした。スライダーを00:40:004で終了させました。
00:48:004 - 00:04:670 と同じ。　追加しました。
00:59:671 (5,1) - (5)の開始する場所に特に音がないので、この音取りに違和感がありました。順番を入れ替え、スライダーの終点にサークルをスタックさせるような感じではいかがでしょう。　いいですね。　入れ替えました
SPOILER
01:28:504 (3) - 00:23:004 と同じく、このサークルを削除しても良いのでは　00:23:004はスライダーのままにしていますの、このままにします。
01:45:004 (1) - 00:39:671と同じ　OKです。
01:47:670 - 曲の1番ではここにノートを置いているので、2番でも追加した方が良いように感じます。　私は、音取りのほうを１番と２番では少しだけ変えております。この後のnoteなんですが　１番はスピナーですが、２番はスライダーの連続になっているように、「また、このリズムかよ」っていう気持ちを持たせないようにしています。だけど、同じリズムがちょくちょくあると思いますが、その辺は気にしないでください。ここでは、変更なしで行かせてもらいます。
01:53:337 - 難易度を通して、ボーカルに沿わせてノートを置いているように思うので、ここに音が無い事に違和感を感じました。サークルを(1)にスタックさせる形で追加するのはどうでしょう。　わかりました。追加します。
02:07:004 (5,6) - 00:59:671 と同じ。順番を入れ替えたほうが曲に合っていると思いますがどうでしょう。　入れ替え変えました。
[Collab]
00:07:837 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 直前までスライダーがゆっくりで、ストリームに入った途端に急にスピードが速くなる印象がありなじみ難いと思うので、
サークルのストリームよりも先にスライダーストリームを配置してみてはどうでしょう。　私はいろんな人にテストプレイを頼んでます。それをスペクトし、見てたところ　この部分はほぼ全員３００を出していました。たまに１００が１個出るくらいで　そんなに難しくないと私は思います。あと、正直スライダーストリームを先にしてサークルのストリームは個人的にやりにくいと思っています。　このような理由で、変更はしません。
SPOILER
00:24:004 - ボーカルを聞く限り、ここから歌詞が新しく始まってるように感じます。00:23:837 (1) の終点で音を取るのでも問題はないと思いますが、
ヒットサウンドがあまり明確に聞こえないので、次のノートのタイミングが少しわかりづらい気がします。00:23:837 (1) を1/2だけ後ろに動かすのはどうでしょうか。　00:23:670~00:23:837にスライダーを、00:24:004にサークルにすることにしました。これのほうが、リズムも取りやすくて　歌詞にもあってると思いました。
00:36:504 (3,4,5,6) - 恐らく配置から来る見た目によるものだと思いますが、3,4と5,6が完全に分かれているように見え、視覚的にリズムの誤読を招きそうです。
DS1.4xほどですべてのサークルを離してみるのはどうでしょう。　Insane級なので、普通ではないでしょうか。　私はよくNatsumeRinの譜面でリズムをよく間違えます。こういうこともあるから、楽しいのではないしょうか。そして、この譜面はAR９なので、上から降ってくる”わっか”が速く落ちてきてきます。なので、こういうのも初見で余裕で突破出来ると思います。さっきも書いたとおり、私はテストプレイを多くの人に頼みました。それで、この部分をミスだしてるのは一人もいませんでした。ちなみに頼んだ人はｐｐランク三桁の人ばっかですが、四桁の人にも頼んでいます。大丈夫ではないかと思います。なので、変更はしません。ごめんなさい
01:04:504 (7,8,9,10) - 角度が浅く、直線的な配置になっており、少し打ちづらい角度な気がしました。8,10をそれぞれ6,5のスライダーの始点の上にスタックさせるというのはいかがでしょう。　とくに、打ちづらい角度ではないと私は思っています。こういうきつい（？）ジャンプもあって楽しんでくれるのではないかと思っています。そして、私はこの８と１０は意味があって置いています。　これを見てください　⇒　http://puu.sh/17afY　スライダーの６と５によって上手く綺麗な配置になっています。ここは正直、崩したくないです。ごめんなさい。
SPOILER
以上です。
特に気になるところはありませんでした。

CuNha wrote:
こんにちはgamuさん。from PM
ちょっと遅れてしまいました＞＜よかったら参考程度にみてくれると幸いです！

[Hard]
02:23:837 (1) - ここは曲げずに直線の方が見栄えがいい気がします　なんか曲がってましたｗ　直しました

[Collab]
01:18:504 (1) - ここのfinishですが02:23:837 (1) - と03:01:171 (1) - にはfinishが入ってないのでどっちかに統一した方が良さげです　finishけしました
01:19:004 (3,4,5,6,7) - 3grid下げてみてはいかが？http://puu.sh/16Rq3　OK

[Storyboard]
SBもお願いされましたが素晴らしい出来なのでこれでいいと思いますw
強いて言うならサビに出てくる小さいほうのsnow.pngが背景のタイトルにかぶってるので少し下にずらした方が気持ち綺麗になるかもしれません。
それと大きいほうのsnowは名前とかぶってるけど意図的ですかね？　小さいのは、手からだしてるみたいなｗ　イメージで置きました。
大きいのは名前かぶっていないです。名前の画像を最近変えましたので大丈夫かと思いま

とてもいいmapでした。ranked期待してまーす！

お二人ともありがとうございます(*･ω･)*_ _))ﾍﾟｺﾘﾝ

YTYuyu

osu! Alumni

4,149 posts

Joined January 2011

YTYuyu 2012-09-21T11:06:55+00:00

CuNha wrote:
こんにちはgamuさん。from PM
ちょっと遅れてしまいました＞＜よかったら参考程度にみてくれると幸いです！i wish i can understand this orz...

[249's Normal]
00:01:171 (1) - Volume50% Collab and Hard is 50% alright for consistency.

h-728 wrote:
[249's Normal]
AR -1. consider the lowest diff, and 4 is enough fast to avoid too many notes to be displayed in same time.
OD -1. same as above, consider the lowest diff. alright i guess i'm overdoing it.
00:07:504 (2,3) - surely the distance is according to the distance snap, but SV was changed, so it seems like a jump.
I want you to keep the distance of 00:06:170 (4,1). how about shorten the distance? I think 0.9x is better. i used 1.0 instead since i think that's close enough.
00:07:837 (3,4) - same as above. ^
00:28:171 (1,2,3,4,5) - rhythm suggestion. to be symmetric with previous rhythm like 00:25:171 (1,2), how about put these sliders on the downbeat?
SPOILER
nope that rhythm doesn't flow to the vocals.
00:33:504 (1) - how about this form
SPOILER
if you accept this, you have to adjust around of flow, but it blankets (2) better. and please use this code.
275,296,33504,6,0,B|365:282|405:210|406:128|335:71,1,300,8|0
fixed it myself.
00:34:837 (2,1) - I feel the flow of cursor isn't kind. how about put (1) on the right side of (2) like this?
SPOILER
no i don't like that overlap, and it'll ruin the diamond if i do this.
if you accept this, you should move (3) to opposite side.
00:38:504 (1,2) - is this jump intentional? nuuuu~ my pattern is ruined ;__;. changed to a new pattern.
01:05:670 (2) - I feel it will be cool if you make this slider end at 01:06:004. also I think there are stronger sound than 01:06:170. but if i do this, the consistency in the claps will be gone.
01:35:837 (3,4) - I feel something lonely here because of few sounds. how about replace with a slider like this
SPOILER
02:11:837 (1,2) - remove stacking. just after this, 02:12:837 (3,4) are stacked in 1/2 rhythm. I think it's confusing to make stacking in different rhythm in same section. alright but...i'm not feeling the flow in this suggestion...
02:47:170 (5) - same as 01:05:670 same reply.
02:59:837 (1,2,3,4,5) - not so cute pentagon..but how about make hexagon with the end of 02:58:504 (4) and 02:59:837 (1,2,3,4,5) to imitate the snow cristal? anyway nazi. i moved it but i'm keeping the pentagon. i want this to be the turning point for this pattern.oh i forgot... it's "crystal". it might sound like how you spell but the "y" also makes a long "i". just letting you know.

ty for the mods

.

SPOILER

osu file format v9

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AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 55837
Countdown: 0
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[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:POP STEP LOVE
Artist:Ono Ryoko
Creator:-Gamu-
Version:249's Normal
Source:Mashiro Iro Symphony - The color of lovers -
Tags:character song sena airi mythol byakugan249

[Difficulty]
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TheVileOne

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Joined March 2010

TheVileOne 2012-09-21T21:56:06+00:00

General

249's Normal

00:01:171 (1) - I don't like this. I would have used just a single note to start this.We probably have different preferences.
00:25:171 (1,2) - Not aligned?
00:32:337 (2,3,1) - Maybe 1.1? I suggest evening out the spacing here.
00:38:504 (1,2,3,4,1) - Pacing is poor here IMO. The single notes are forced into the beat. If you're going for a simple beat, make it simple. Don't reverse back at an unfitting pacing.I suggest you change snap to 1.1 because its easier and a more forward pattern would also be good. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/439253
00:48:504 (2) - Move up 1 unit to make a better blanket? Move the next note left a unit.
00:49:170 (1,2,3,4) - This look awful. Do something else.
00:56:504 (2) - Flatness of this curve doesn't look the best. Looks slightly out of place and does not complement 00:57:837 (3,4) - . Also isn't aligned with previous slider. You could try this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/439259
01:02:504 (2) - Also too flat. Doesn't seem to be much you can do except find a pattern that makes it less noticeable. I suggest using a wishbone like pattern. http://puu.sh/17jUY
01:04:504 (1) - Move last point left 1 unit.
01:19:170 (2) - Add whistle to start, it feels quiet.
01:51:837 (1,2,3) - Could be improved. http://puu.sh/17kga
01:57:171 (1) - Move center point more towards the center.
02:03:837 (1) - Kind of ugly. I suggest making this like other sliders you have made.
02:49:837 (2,3,4,1) - 1.1 is better IMO.
02:55:837 (3) - Slider doesn't look right. Try moving the center point to x 180 y 348
03:01:837 (1) - Start sounds quiet, add whistle?

Collab

There are flow issues you should at least know about. Not everything has to be fixed, but some of it should be changed.

00:01:171 (1,2,3) - Pattern needs to be spread out more. The flow is off. http://puu.sh/17kJC
00:23:337 (4,5,6) - Awkward IMO. Not really that fitting to have a large jump here. Your single note approach is flawed. 00:23:504 - This should be the 1/2th long slider. Then have a single note right after it.
00:31:504 (6,1,2) - I can't even hit this, it's too large. It doesn't fit. 6,1 is not a jump transition. I recommend you do something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/439296
00:33:170 (1,2,3) - Consider adding some padding after a jump like this. It's weird to go back to 1.0 spacing after moving quickly. I suggest 1.2 if you can get it to work.
00:54:671 (1) - Too close to the end of the spinner, it's awkward. You should get rid of this.
00:54:837 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Awkward transition. Hard to read after that stack. 00:55:171 (1,2) - Should stack them IMO. The rhythm sounds like stacks.
01:00:171 (5,6,1) - Spacing is not okay. Don't slow down and then suddenly speed up using the same spacing to hide the transition. >.<
01:04:671 (8,9,10,1) - Doesn't represent the beat at all IMO. Spacing should be more equal. I made this diamond pattern that plays fine. http://puu.sh/17lgs
01:28:170 (3) - Move up a unit to align with 1.
01:28:170 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - More of a personal preference so feel free to ignore, but reduce to 1.3 snap?
01:32:170 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Nice transitions.
02:41:171 (1,2) - I suggest 1.8 spacing. It plays better.
02:43:837 - You keep finding ways to space the notes disproportionate to the slider velocity. Spacing is too slow compared to slider speeds. 1.4 is a better distance snap IMO.

Hard

Best difficulty in the set by far.

00:07:837 (1,2) - What the heck is this?
01:04:504 (2,3,1,2) - Awkward. I suggest moving 01:05:504 (2) - 1/2th back and stacking on 1.
01:49:837 (3,4,5) - Slight spacing difference.
01:53:004 (1,2) - Kind of far but I guess its fine.
02:00:504 (2,3) - Please lower snap. I keep expecting this to be the same distance on the timeline as 1,2 and so I miss it.

Gamu

Elite Mapper

2,606 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

Gamu 2012-09-25T12:34:43+00:00

TheVileOne thank you~ :3

DarknessAngel

2,237 posts

Joined May 2010

DarknessAngel 2012-09-25T15:10:31+00:00

as your request via in-game PM ~

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General

I was LOL with inconsistent in tags because of one more space xDDD
http://puu.sh/186Y8 should be http://puu.sh/186XA
so please fixed that in Hard and Collab diffs. lol
not sure whether inconsistent Kiai time in 249's Normal should be fixed.
I think Kiai time in Hard and Collab are better

Collab

~ Gamu's Part ~

00:47:671 (1,2,3) - the rymthm is hard to follow
I highly suggest you change those notes to a 1/2 slider,it follow the vocal well.the rhythm is better,too.
00:59:671 (4) - one grid left,then head of 00:59:004 (2,3,4) will be consistent distance. :p
01:06:837 (3,4) - these jumps is not comfortable to me
move 01:06:837 (3) to (336,176),and move 01:07:004 (4) to (464,144)
I think that'll be better to play,and looks prettier ~
01:19:004 (3) - add new combo here can creat a effect of emphasize for 01:18:504 (1,2)
It also emphasizes the voices well.

~ Mythol's part ~
01:42:170 (5) - simply move it to (216,160) to make a whole part (01:41:504 (1,2,3,4,5,6)) prettier ~
03:02:337 (6,7,8) - change those notes to a 1/4 slider with a repeat like this ?
It can creat a more comfortable flow when we spin after that.
03:02:171 (5) - there are no drum so remove the clap ~

Hard

02:05:504 (1) - I know why you added NC for 02:05:004 (1)
but compare with 02:05:504 (1) and 02:05:504 (1),I think you should remove NC for 02:05:504 (1)
00:55:670 & 00:55:754 - It seems add notes at those times would sound nice and good to play.
I know there are no triplet in this diff,just let you consider the suggestion ~
00:28:670 (1)、01:31:337 (1) - I like this idea ~ it looks <3

249's Normal

00:07:837 (3) - hmm ... I'm care about the distance between 00:07:504 (2,3),it's larger than the others.
Is that intentional ? It looks not good to me. /.\
00:33:504 (1) - the distance between 00:33:171 (3,1) is a problem actually.
I couldn't see any reason to decrease it.
00:51:170 (3) - uh ... don't you worry some people would be hard to read that (at least,it looks not good ...) ?
and then,00:49:170 (1,2,3,4) - the slowing down doesn't make sense ... orz
the pattern starting from 01:54:504 didn't slow down,isn't it ?
01:05:670 (2) - it sounds wired if you skip the symbal.
change the 3/2 slider to 1/2 and add a note at 01:06:170,then they'll follow the symbal and the drum \:D/
02:24:504 (1,2,3) - O_o
try 1/1 slider at 02:24:504 and a note at 02:25:171 (3)
just 3 beats but it sounds better,also it is better to play.
02:25:171 (3) - make a better shape like this ?

that's it ~
good map as always ~ Gamu ^^
oh,so are you,hentai angel <3
have my star
good luck !

YTYuyu

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4,149 posts

Joined January 2011

YTYuyu 2012-09-25T15:52:35+00:00

TheVileOne wrote:
General

249's Normal

00:01:171 (1) - I don't like this. I would have used just a single note to start this.We probably have different preferences. i don't like the circle. if i replace this for a circle, then where would be no flow in the vocals at all.
00:25:171 (1,2) - Not aligned? oh this in intentional because it mainly follows the piano in this and the mood of the song.
00:32:337 (2,3,1) - Maybe 1.1? I suggest evening out the spacing here. oh this is an error. fixed.
00:38:504 (1,2,3,4,1) - Pacing is poor here IMO. The single notes are forced into the beat. If you're going for a simple beat, make it simple. Don't reverse back at an unfitting pacing.I suggest you change snap to 1.1 because its easier and a more forward pattern would also be good. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/439253 yea i was in a rush when i did this...fixed, but i want to keep the DS to 1.20 for consistency in the spacing.
00:48:504 (2) - Move up 1 unit to make a better blanket? Move the next note left a unit.
00:49:170 (1,2,3,4) - This look awful. Do something else. omg how . fixed ><.
00:56:504 (2) - Flatness of this curve doesn't look the best. Looks slightly out of place and does not complement 00:57:837 (3,4) - . Also isn't aligned with previous slider. You could try this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/439259 this is intentional. i don't wanna do that because since there's a finish at the repeat, it'll show that the vocals rise, and so does this slider.
01:02:504 (2) - Also too flat. Doesn't seem to be much you can do except find a pattern that makes it less noticeable. I suggest using a wishbone like pattern. http://puu.sh/17jUY i can see it, but it'll make me feel uncomfortable applying this pattern during gameplay since i want both sliders to be the same.
01:04:504 (1) - Move last point left 1 unit. no i don't see a difference doing this during gameplay.
01:19:170 (2) - Add whistle to start, it feels quiet. no because it'll be inconsistent with the pattern i had at the 2nd break since that has no whistles.
01:51:837 (1,2,3) - Could be improved. http://puu.sh/17kga fixed it a bit.
01:57:171 (1) - Move center point more towards the center. then it'll ruin the flow in the vocals if i do this.
02:03:837 (1) - Kind of ugly. I suggest making this like other sliders you have made. i don't want to do the same curved sliders over and over again. it'll look bad on myself considering it's copy and pasting some of the sliders.
02:49:837 (2,3,4,1) - 1.1 is better IMO. the consistency in the spacing will be broken. i'm the type who wants the DS the same in easy/normal diffs.
02:55:837 (3) - Slider doesn't look right. Try moving the center point to x 180 y 348 fixed it myself.
03:01:837 (1) - Start sounds quiet, add whistle? same reply as 01:19:170.

DarknessAngel wrote:
as your request via in-game PM ~

Red words = Unrankable stuff
Blue words = It is the best way that you fix it
Black words = If I were you,I would do that.
Green words = some of my comment,or something I want you to notice

General
not sure whether inconsistent Kiai time in 249's Normal should be fixed.
I think Kiai time in Hard and Collab are better for them it is, but for me i hate kiai times. i'd prefer kiai bursts because i want to give more effect as if fireworks are firing up in the sky. and the kiai times can be different if there's a guest diff in the map.
249's Normal
00:07:837 (3) - hmm ... I'm care about the distance between 00:07:504 (2,3),it's larger than the others.
Is that intentional ? It looks not good to me. /.\ oh this? yea this is intentional. this represents a sneak peek to the song.
00:33:504 (1) - the distance between 00:33:171 (3,1) is a problem actually.
I couldn't see any reason to decrease it. orz fixed.
00:51:170 (3) - uh ... don't you worry some people would be hard to read that (at least,it looks not good ...) ?
and then,00:49:170 (1,2,3,4) - the slowing down doesn't make sense ... orz
the pattern starting from 01:54:504 didn't slow down,isn't it ? this is a mistake. fixed.
01:05:670 (2) - it sounds wired if you skip the symbal.
change the 3/2 slider to 1/2 and add a note at 01:06:170,then they'll follow the symbal and the drum \:D/ can you show me a screenshot of it?
02:24:504 (1,2,3) - O_o
try 1/1 slider at 02:24:504 and a note at 02:25:171 (3)
just 3 beats but it sounds better,also it is better to play. no we're near the end so i want this to be slightly harder as it progresses.
02:25:171 (3) - make a better shape like this ?
mm~ i don't like the slant on this. it even throws me off playing through this during gameplay.

that's it ~
good map as always ~ Gamu ^^
oh,so are you,hentai angel <3
have my star
good luck !

ty for the mods everyone

.

SPOILER

osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: POP STEP LOVE.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 55837
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:POP STEP LOVE
Artist:Ono Ryoko
Creator:-Gamu-
Version:249's Normal
Source:Mashiro Iro Symphony - The color of lovers -
Tags:character song sena airi mythol byakugan249

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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//Storyboard Sound Samples
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DarknessAngel

2,237 posts

Joined May 2010

DarknessAngel 2012-09-26T04:51:59+00:00

sorry my fault ! lol
"1/2 " should be "1/1 "...
http://puu.sh/18J8R

Mythol

1,420 posts

Joined March 2011

Mythol 2012-09-26T13:48:21+00:00

http://puu.sh/18NEu ~
not hentai ;;

KSHR

osu! Alumni

1,668 posts

Joined July 2010

KSHR 2012-09-26T18:25:39+00:00

modding

(request)

[General]

wikiでタイトルを調べてみたところ、アニメタイトルは「ましろ色シンフォニー -The color of lovers-」でした
元のゲームのタイトル「Love is pure white」と、メーカー名の「Palette」をタグに追加しませんか？（Loveは曲名に含まれるから入れなくても大丈夫かも）
creater's wordに誰がゲストで入っているのか書いてあると親切だと思います

[SB]

曲の序盤の"歌手: 小野涼子"と書かれたSBの":"の部分が
上の曲名の":"とズレていて個人的に気になりました
修正する場合は下のcodeを上書きしてもらえるとある程度揃うと思います
```
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\A1.png",320,240
 M,0,13837,14504,190,388,128,388
 F,0,13837,14504,0,1
 F,0,14504,21004,1,0.9912285
 F,0,21004,22170,0.9912285,0
```

[249's Normal]

00:03:837 (1) - change the end to 00:04:504 better imo
I can understand that this slider follows the vocal. but some of players feel hard to read a timing of (2) because of that
02:02:337 (2) - if you change like this, beginners will be easy to read the timing
02:05:004 (2) - hmm, try this for once
02:59:837 (1,2,3,4,5) - make a hexagon like a snow crysta with these and the end of 02:58:504 (4) !! will be beautiful~

I'm sorry, but I can't mod much T^T

[Hard]

00:42:171 (2) - (1)とのスペーシングが狭いと思いますせめてDSの1.20くらい欲しいかも
01:54:170 (5) - (4)と同じ音量は少し大きい気も 10%ほど下げる？
00:53:337 (2) - このnoteを削除して、ここから00:54:504までのスピナーを追加
01:58:670 (1) - ここにはスピナーがあるのにこっちにないのはおかしく感じます
02:00:670 (3) - 終点と(1)のスライダーの始点が離れているので修正
02:42:337 (4) - whistleを追加するのであれば終点より始点がベターだと思います
それから、終点の音量を30%くらいに下げてみてもいいのかも

[collab]

ODを１つ下げたらrateingが5.00になるけど、うーん・・
なんでOD上げたらrating下がっちゃうんだろう

-Gamu-'s part

00:02:504 (1,2,3,4) - ここだけ他よりwhistleが密集していて少し気になりました
下のspoilerにこの周辺部分のヒットサウンド（whistle/finish/clap全部）の提案をまとめています
（spoiler内全部で１セットです。また、ヒットサウンドが"何も"ついていない前提で書いています）
SPOILER
00:01:171 (1) - 始点whistle
00:02:504 (1) - ^
00:03:837 (1) - ^
00:04:837 (5) - ^
これだとムラのない付け方ができると思います
00:06:504 (1,2,3,4) - 00:02と同じく密集してるように思います (2,3,4)の始点whistleはなくてもいいように感じます
曲調が激しくなるからという意図があったと思うんですが、代わりに音量を徐々に上げることで違和感なく修正できると思います
00:55:754 (7) - (1)~(6)の丸い流れがここで少し急になっていて、プレイしたときAIMを急カーブさせたため
00:55:171 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 提案が2つです
1: プレイできなくはありませんが、(1) - (2,3,4,5,6,7)の角度が原因でaimのしにくさを感じました
　　aimを流しやすいように角度を調整してみてはどうでしょう
2: (6,7,1)の角度が(1,2,3,4,5)の丸い流れに比べて急でプレイしていて少しだけ違和感を感じました
　　せっかく綺麗に丸い流れを作れているのにもったいないと思います
01:00:004 (x) - ドラムの音があるのでnoteを追加しませんか？
01:00:420 (x) - ^, ここに追加すると2連打になるので、01:00:337 (x) から3連打を作ると綺麗な音取りになると思います
01:05:920 (x) - ^, ここにもnoteを追加してスライダーの終わりからの連打がベストだと思います
01:13:754 (x) - note追加？

Mythol's part
these are just me. please know that!
if you don't like it, feel free to ignore please~

01:43:754 (x) - add note here to follow the drum
01:48:504 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - how about this?
01:53:504 (2,3,4) - there is a drum sound after each note
it would be better if you follow them with notes or sliders not only vocals
01:58:670 (x) - add note here, and move the beginning of the spinner to 01:58:754
02:05:754 (x) - same as 01:43
02:24:337 (x) - this song tells me "I really wants a note here!!"
02:24:420 (x) - ^
02:55:587 (7) - sounds good to me without this note

fight~

Gamu

Elite Mapper

2,606 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

Gamu 2012-09-26T23:49:20+00:00

DarknessAngel wrote:
as your request via in-game PM ~

Red words = Unrankable stuff
Blue words = It is the best way that you fix it
Black words = If I were you,I would do that.
Green words = some of my comment,or something I want you to notice

General
I was LOL with inconsistent in tags because of one more space xDDD　
http://puu.sh/186Y8 should be http://puu.sh/186XA
so please fixed that in Hard and Collab diffs. lol[/color]
Collab

~ Gamu's Part ~
00:47:671 (1,2,3) - the rymthm is hard to follow
I highly suggest you change those notes to a 1/2 slider,it follow the vocal well.the rhythm is better,too.　OK
00:59:671 (4) - one grid left,then head of 00:59:004 (2,3,4) will be consistent distance. :p OK
01:06:837 (3,4) - these jumps is not comfortable to me
move 01:06:837 (3) to (336,176),and move 01:07:004 (4) to (464,144)
I think that'll be better to play,and looks prettier ~ good :3
01:19:004 (3) - add new combo here can creat a effect of emphasize for 01:18:504 (1,2)
It also emphasizes the voices well. \^^/

Hard
02:05:504 (1) - I know why you added NC for 02:05:004 (1)
but compare with 02:05:504 (1) and 02:05:504 (1),I think you should remove NC for 02:05:504 (1) OK
00:55:670 & 00:55:754 - It seems add notes at those times would sound nice and good to play.
I know there are no triplet in this diff,just let you consider the suggestion ~ ah..no changed. sorry
00:28:670 (1)、01:31:337 (1) - I like this idea ~ it looks <3 thanks :3

that's it ~
good map as always ~ Gamu ^^
oh,so are you,hentai angel <3
have my star
good luck !

KSHR wrote:
modding
(request)

[General]
wikiでタイトルを調べてみたところ、アニメタイトルは「ましろ色シンフォニー -The color of lovers-」でした
元のゲームのタイトル「Love is pure white」と、メーカー名の「Palette」をタグに追加しませんか？（Loveは曲名に含まれるから入れなくても大丈夫かも）うーん。元のタイトル入れずに、ぱれっとだけ入れますね。
creater's wordに誰がゲストで入っているのか書いてあると親切だと思います入れときます
[SB]
曲の序盤の"歌手: 小野涼子"と書かれたSBの":"の部分が　上書きしました
上の曲名の":"とズレていて個人的に気になりました
修正する場合は下のcodeを上書きしてもらえるとある程度揃うと思います
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\A1.png",320,240
 M,0,13837,14504,190,388,128,388
 F,0,13837,14504,0,1
 F,0,14504,21004,1,0.9912285
 F,0,21004,22170,0.9912285,0
[Hard]
00:42:171 (2) - (1)とのスペーシングが狭いと思いますせめてDSの1.20くらい欲しいかも 1.0xになってました。1.2xにしました。
01:54:170 (5) - (4)と同じ音量は少し大きい気も 10%ほど下げる？　そうですかね。でも、あまり不自然じゃないと思うんで、変更なしで
00:53:337 (2) - このnoteを削除して、ここから00:54:504までのスピナーを追加　はい
01:58:670 (1) - ここにはスピナーがあるのにこっちにないのはおかしく感じます
02:00:670 (3) - 終点と(1)のスライダーの始点が離れているので修正　こういうリピートスライダーと次のスライダーは少しわざと、ずらす形をとっていきたいと思っています。とくに理由ないんですが、ピッタリ重ねるのはあまり好きじゃないもので・・　もし、「これ修正しなきゃだめ！」とかBAT・MATとかに言われた場合には修正を考えます。
02:42:337 (4) - whistleを追加するのであれば終点より始点がベターだと思います　りょうかいです。音量も下げました。
それから、終点の音量を30%くらいに下げてみてもいいのかも
[collab]

ODを１つ下げたらrateingが5.00になるけど、うーん・・
なんでOD上げたらrating下がっちゃうんだろう　それがよくわからないのよね。OD８だと下がるという・・・　でも、この譜面はOD８にしときたいです。OD７だと　SSがバンバン出てしまいます。OD８でもあんま変わりませんがね・・　この譜面　意外とACCとりやすいんです。（テストプレイで分かったこと）

-Gamu-'s part
00:02:504 (1,2,3,4) - ここだけ他よりwhistleが密集していて少し気になりました少しwhistleの付け方変えました。
下のspoilerにこの周辺部分のヒットサウンド（whistle/finish/clap全部）の提案をまとめています
（spoiler内全部で１セットです。また、ヒットサウンドが"何も"ついていない前提で書いています）
SPOILER
00:01:171 (1) - 始点whistle
00:02:504 (1) - ^
00:03:837 (1) - ^
00:04:837 (5) - ^
これだとムラのない付け方ができると思います
00:06:504 (1,2,3,4) - 00:02と同じく密集してるように思います (2,3,4)の始点whistleはなくてもいいように感じます　３だけ残しました。音量を徐々にあげました。
曲調が激しくなるからという意図があったと思うんですが、代わりに音量を徐々に上げることで違和感なく修正できると思います
00:55:754 (7) - (1)~(6)の丸い流れがここで少し急になっていて、プレイしたときAIMを急カーブさせたため
00:55:171 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 提案が2つです　この連打の後のスライダーを動かしたくないので。上手く連打の配置ができなかったです。なので、普通の連打にしました。
1: プレイできなくはありませんが、(1) - (2,3,4,5,6,7)の角度が原因でaimのしにくさを感じました
　　aimを流しやすいように角度を調整してみてはどうでしょう
2: (6,7,1)の角度が(1,2,3,4,5)の丸い流れに比べて急でプレイしていて少しだけ違和感を感じました
　　せっかく綺麗に丸い流れを作れているのにもったいないと思います
01:00:004 (x) - ドラムの音があるのでnoteを追加しませんか？　それを追加して、三連打を後に追加すると、なんだかやりにくい感じがしました。なので、このままです。　ごめんなさい　
01:00:420 (x) - ^, ここに追加すると2連打になるので、01:00:337 (x) から3連打を作ると綺麗な音取りになると思います　
01:05:920 (x) - ^, ここにもnoteを追加してスライダーの終わりからの連打がベストだと思います
01:13:754 (x) - note追加？あうあう。ボーカルに合わせるのが好きなので、のーです
[list]

fight~

mod てゃんｋ　よう！ (thank you!)

D.N.Angel is hentai ><

Mythol

1,420 posts

Joined March 2011

Mythol 2012-09-28T00:55:54+00:00

http://puu.sh/19fQk
most fixed ty~

YTYuyu

osu! Alumni

4,149 posts

Joined January 2011

YTYuyu 2012-09-29T20:17:28+00:00

KSHR wrote:
modding
(request)
[249's Normal]
00:03:837 (1) - change the end to 00:04:504 better imo
I can understand that this slider follows the vocal. but some of players feel hard to read a timing of (2) because of that then they have to learn about these sliders ending at the 1/2 ticks. if i put them all in 1/1, i feel that the diff would look boring, and it'll look like i'm giving an easy pass for players.
02:02:337 (2) - if you change like this, beginners will be easy to read the timing again, they have to learn about these sliders ending at the 1/2 ticks.
02:05:004 (2) - hmm, try this for once ^
02:59:837 (1,2,3,4,5) - make a hexagon like a snow crysta with these and the end of 02:58:504 (4) !! will be beautiful~ no i didn't intended this to be nice. i did this to make it simple and straight to the point.

I'm sorry, but I can't mod much T^T ahh it's fine. you did your best :3.
fight~

no changes made but ty for the mod.

Dino99

1,830 posts

Joined May 2011

Dino99 2012-09-30T05:59:00+00:00

Sorry for huge delay >.<

• Suggestion
• Extremely suggestion
• Unrankable stuff
----------------------

<249's Normal>

• 00:09:337 - Add a spinner here is better than nothing @.@ ...Like this:

• 00:24:837 (4) - Move to [X:396 Y:196] to make a good four-side shape
• 00:29:504 (3,4,5) - Stack third is not really good in Normal IMO.. :< How about make 00:29:837 (4) - stack on 00:30:504 (1) - ?
• 00:45:170 (2) - All whistle to follow the..... bell? :>
• 00:49:170 (1,2,3,4) - Try to make 00:51:170 (3) - stack on 00:49:170 (1) - 's tail~~ It looks more better!
• 01:05:670 (2) - finish sounds good~
• 01:34:504 - Add a circle?
• 01:47:504 (2,3) - Hmm.. bad beat >.< I think this better is better:

• 02:11:004 - finish
• 02:16:171 (2,3,4,1) - Change to sliders to instead the stack?

<Hard>

• 00:09:337 - Same as Normal~
• 00:54:671 (1,2,3,4) - To follow the drum.. o.o Clap is better than whistle~
• 01:04:504 (2,3,1) - Make these don't stack? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/446875
• 01:13:171 (1) - Whistle sounds good
• 02:00:004 (1,2) - Clap~
• 02:18:504 (1) - Whistle
• 02:55:837 (1) - ^

<Collab>

• 00:09:337 - Same as Normal too~
• 00:54:671 (1,2,1) - Clap
• 01:06:004 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Hmm.. I don't like the shape >_> Try to change its' shape?
• 01:17:837 (3,4,1) - Turn the volume up gradually?
• 02:00:004 (1,2,1) - clap
• 02:58:504 (1) - finish
• 02:59:004 (3) - ^
• 03:01:170 (1,2) - Do a jump? :>

Good luck~ :3

Fumika

1,432 posts

Joined November 2011

Fumika 2012-09-30T13:03:25+00:00

Just a little suggestion

[249's Normal]
00:29:504 (3,4,5) - repeat slider instead ?
00:38:504 (1) - you forgot to add soft-slidertick2 here.

[Collab]
00:24:837 (5) - invert it to make a flow ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/447249

[Hard]
Nothing

That's all I got...

Sorry, if my modding quality isn't good enought ;w;

Mythol

1,420 posts

Joined March 2011

Mythol 2012-10-02T14:23:59+00:00

>barry last 2 finish added
http://puu.sh/1aH2G

Gamu

Elite Mapper

2,606 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

Gamu 2012-10-03T10:02:57+00:00

12BARRY21 wrote:
Sorry for huge delay >.<

• Suggestion
• Extremely suggestion
• Unrankable stuff
----------------------

<Hard>
• 00:09:337 - Same as Normal~ Do not need a spinner here D:
• 00:54:671 (1,2,3,4) - To follow the drum.. o.o Clap is better than whistle~ 00:54:837 & 00:55:337 : Added clap
• 01:04:504 (2,3,1) - Make these don't stack? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/446875 sorry~ ;w;
• 01:13:171 (1) - Whistle sounds good Ok~
• 02:00:004 (1,2) - Clap~ 02:00:170 & 02:00:670 Added clap
• 02:18:504 (1) - Whistle OK~
• 02:55:837 (1) - ^ OK~
<Collab>
• 00:09:337 - Same as Normal too~ Same as Hard diff
• 00:54:671 (1,2,1) - Clap 00:54:837 & 00:55:337 : Added clap
• 01:06:004 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Hmm.. I don't like the shape >_> Try to change its' shape? OK~
• 01:17:837 (3,4,1) - Turn the volume up gradually? OK~
Good luck~ :3

Netsukawa wrote:
Just a little suggestion

[Collab]
00:24:837 (5) - invert it to make a flow ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/447249 sorry~ ;w;

[Hard]
Nothing \^^/

That's all I got...

Sorry, if my modding quality isn't good enought ;w;

thank you ! :333

Leorda

4,416 posts

Joined June 2009

Leorda 2012-10-04T15:37:33+00:00

Hi there

[249's Normal]
* AR +1?

02:10:171 (2) - Add clap?
02:16:837 (4) - ^

[Hard]
* AR +1?

00:23:337 (1) - Remove new combo, I have no idea why you put NC here
00:26:004 (1) - ^
00:28:670 (1) - ^
01:31:337 (1) - ^
01:34:004 (1) - ^
02:00:670 (3) - Remove 1 repeating slider so players are able to click the next note with perfect timed

That's all I got....

Gamu

Elite Mapper

2,606 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

Gamu 2012-10-05T13:37:23+00:00

Leorda wrote:
Hi there hi~ :3

[Hard]
* AR +1? I think fit AR7. Honestly, AR8 is difficult, I think so D:

00:23:337 (1) - Remove new combo, I have no idea why you put NC here
00:26:004 (1) - ^
00:28:670 (1) - ^
01:31:337 (1) - ^
01:34:004 (1) - ^
02:00:670 (3) - Remove 1 repeating slider so players are able to click the next note with perfect timed

That's all I got....

ALL fixed! (Except for "AR+1?")

thank you~ <3

YTYuyu

osu! Alumni

4,149 posts

Joined January 2011

YTYuyu 2012-10-06T18:07:31+00:00

12BARRY21 wrote:
Sorry for huge delay >.<

• Suggestion
• Extremely suggestion
• Unrankable stuff
----------------------

<249's Normal>

• 00:09:337 - Add a spinner here is better than nothing @.@ ...Like this: alright added.

• 00:24:837 (4) - Move to [X:396 Y:196] to make a good four-side shape no that's too nazi and i don't see a difference.
• 00:29:504 (3,4,5) - Stack third is not really good in Normal IMO.. :< How about make 00:29:837 (4) - stack on 00:30:504 (1) - ? no i stacked this to show emphasis in the vocals in this part of the song. if i stack it on (1), it'll look like that the vocals are connected, even though the lyrics change.
• 00:45:170 (2) - All whistle to follow the..... bell? :> only at the repeat for consistency.
• 00:49:170 (1,2,3,4) - Try to make 00:51:170 (3) - stack on 00:49:170 (1) - 's tail~~ It looks more better!
• 01:05:670 (2) - finish sounds good~ alright i'll add it.
• 01:34:504 - Add a circle? added at the red tick to follow the vocals.
• 01:47:504 (2,3) - Hmm.. bad beat >.< I think this better is better:
i disagree, this pattern follows the vocals perfectly and i'm not following the drums for this pattern.
• 02:11:004 - finish no this sounds too distracting and it'll be overusing the finishes in this part during gameplay
• 02:16:171 (2,3,4,1) - Change to sliders to instead the stack? no this shows emphasis in the instrumental in this part of tht song.
Good luck~ :3

Netsukawa wrote:
Just a little suggestion

[249's Normal]
00:29:504 (3,4,5) - repeat slider instead ? no because for this combo, i don't want this pattern to be all sliders. ik i did it on my other combos, but if i do it here, then it'll look boring. i did this as a challenge for players
00:38:504 (1) - you forgot to add soft-slidertick2 here. oh whoops...fixed ><

Sorry, if my modding quality isn't good enought ;w;

Leorda wrote:
Hi there

[249's Normal]
* AR +1? no this is the easiest diff in the map, so doing AR5 would overdo it for beginners IMO.

02:10:171 (2) - Add clap? ahh whoops...fixed.
02:16:837 (4) - ^ ^

That's all I got....

ty for the mods everyone

SPOILER

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Artist:Ono Ryoko
Creator:-Gamu-
Version:249's Normal
Source:Mashiro Iro Symphony - The color of lovers -
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NewRulerNA

1,301 posts

Joined December 2010

NewRulerNA 2012-11-01T15:53:00+00:00

hi

[General]

Mashiro Iro Symphonyとtagにつけていますし"visual novel"を追加してみては？

[249's Normal]

why KIAI time is not same as other diff?
00:07:504 (2,3) - Distance?
Actual distance is different.
01:05:670 (2) - remove clap and add finish
I think it is better.
01:07:170 (3,4,5) - suggestion of flow.
01:19:170 (2) - remove slidertick sound.
this tick do not follow song....
01:30:837 (1,2,3,4) - suggestion of flow. this is not beautiful.
I suggest this flow.
01:52:837 (2,3) - few grid down.
I dont like this misalignment....
try this.
01:52:837 (2,3) - move to x:316 y:108
02:17:171 (1) - suggestion of flow.
This way, flow will be better than now.

[Hard]

00:06:004 (2) - 設定ミス？ whistleが全体に付いています
00:36:004 (1) - この前後の流れを考慮すると(4)からの入りがやや悪いように思えました
00:53:337 (1) - このスピナーは00:52:337 (2)と音取りに関して比較した場合にかなり違和感があります
たしかにこの部分は曲をフォローしていますが、00:51:837 (1,2)がfinishで強調された音取りをしており、それがこの箇所において大きな違和感を発生させてしまいます
00:52:337 (2)と同じヒットサウンドを持ったスライダーをここに置くほうが曲をフォローし、一貫性を保持できます
01:43:004 (3,4) - この譜面はボーカルをフォローした音取りが主です
それを考えるとこのスライダーの開始が1/2遅く、それが私には違和感があるように思いました
この部分を1/1スライダー、サークルの順番になるように入れ替えた音取りにしてみてはどうでしょうか
01:44:337 (2,3) - ^
01:58:670 (1) - 00:53:337 (1)と同じ
この場合は01:58:670にサークルを置く方向で

[Collab]

01:11:171 (2,3) - この部分の繋ぎが好きではありません
少しここがズレているような印象を私は受けました
提案としてはスライダーの流れを変更し、画像のような配置にすることでそれが気になることがなくなり良くなると思います
01:58:670 (4) - add finish
Consistent with 00:53:337 (4)

[SB]

コラボだけに"Beatmap by ~"というテキストを追加していることを私は残念に思いました
元からSBがシンプルですし、Normalの難易度にもそれを追加してあげてください・・・
C1.pngの画像サイズ、というより画質が悪く、現在の使用用途ではこの画像が写っている箇所でやたら浮いています
今の画像が小さいので私はこれを修正することができ、高画質なものに変更することが可能であるように感じました
K1.pngの歌詞のFadeタイミングが他のSB比較で一貫性を持っておらず、不必要に長く表示されているように思えました
00:05:504 あたりでfade追加してみてはどうでしょう
ただパターンを見きっていないのでFadeタイミングにはズレがある可能性を持っています
もしあなたがパターンを持たせており、それに沿ってfadeをさせているならばそのタイミングに合わせる形で使用してください

gl

Gamu

Elite Mapper

2,606 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

Gamu 2012-11-04T12:00:21+00:00

NewRulerNA wrote:
hi

[General]
Mashiro Iro Symphonyとtagにつけていますし"visual novel"を追加してみては？ OK
[Hard]
00:06:004 (2) - 設定ミス？ whistleが全体に付いていますわざとです。
00:36:004 (1) - この前後の流れを考慮すると(4)からの入りがやや悪いように思えました　いいね
00:53:337 (1) - このスピナーは00:52:337 (2)と音取りに関して比較した場合にかなり違和感があります　サークルに変えました。
たしかにこの部分は曲をフォローしていますが、00:51:837 (1,2)がfinishで強調された音取りをしており、それがこの箇所において大きな違和感を発生させてしまいます
00:52:337 (2)と同じヒットサウンドを持ったスライダーをここに置くほうが曲をフォローし、一貫性を保持できます
01:43:004 (3,4) - この譜面はボーカルをフォローした音取りが主です　おｋ
それを考えるとこのスライダーの開始が1/2遅く、それが私には違和感があるように思いました　
この部分を1/1スライダー、サークルの順番になるように入れ替えた音取りにしてみてはどうでしょうか
01:44:337 (2,3) - ^　おｋ
01:58:670 (1) - 00:53:337 (1)と同じ　おｋ
この場合は01:58:670にサークルを置く方向で
[Collab]
01:11:171 (2,3) - この部分の繋ぎが好きではありません　OK
少しここがズレているような印象を私は受けました
提案としてはスライダーの流れを変更し、画像のような配置にすることでそれが気になることがなくなり良くなると思います
01:58:670 (4) - add finish
Consistent with 00:53:337 (4)
[SB]
コラボだけに"Beatmap by ~"というテキストを追加していることを私は残念に思いました
元からSBがシンプルですし、Normalの難易度にもそれを追加してあげてください・・・なんかのニャル子さんの譜面みたいに全難易度つけました
C1.pngの画像サイズ、というより画質が悪く、現在の使用用途ではこの画像が写っている箇所でやたら浮いています
今の画像が小さいので私はこれを修正することができ、高画質なものに変更することが可能であるように感じました現在、高画質なものを持っていません。残念ながら・・
K1.pngの歌詞のFadeタイミングが他のSB比較で一貫性を持っておらず、不必要に長く表示されているように思えました
00:05:504 あたりでfade追加してみてはどうでしょう　そうですね。。fix!
ただパターンを見きっていないのでFadeタイミングにはズレがある可能性を持っています
もしあなたがパターンを持たせており、それに沿ってfadeをさせているならばそのタイミングに合わせる形で使用してください

gl

mod感謝感激です

ありがとうございした：３

YTYuyu

osu! Alumni

4,149 posts

Joined January 2011

YTYuyu 2012-11-04T19:06:38+00:00

NewRulerNA wrote:
hi

[249's Normal]
why KIAI time is not same as other diff? i'd prefer kiai bursts over kiai times. i don't find them exciting.
00:07:504 (2,3) - Distance?
Actual distance is different. whoops fixed ><
01:05:670 (2) - remove clap and add finish
I think it is better. i disagree. it breaks the consistency in the current clap pattern i'm having.
01:07:170 (3,4,5) - suggestion of flow.
no because of you notice (1,2,4), it forms a triangle and i don't want to ruin that shape.
01:19:170 (2) - remove slidertick sound.
this tick do not follow song.... if i remove it, it'll break consistency in the claps.
01:30:837 (1,2,3,4) - suggestion of flow. this is not beautiful.
I suggest this flow. no i'd prefer my flow since it's slightly linear.
01:52:837 (2,3) - few grid down.
I dont like this misalignment....
try this. this was a mistake. fixed.
01:52:837 (2,3) - move to x:316 y:108
02:17:171 (1) - suggestion of flow.
This way, flow will be better than now. it's a good pattern, but i wanna hear more opinions about this. for now i'll keep it.
gl

ty for the mod

SPOILER

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kosiga

1,548 posts

Joined May 2011

kosiga 2012-11-07T15:49:35+00:00

hello :3

thank you for the request~

here my mod ~

[General]

fine~

[249's Normal]

00:06:504 (1,2,3) - The difference in these sudden spacing is very difficult as the minimum degree of difficulty. 00:07:504 (2,3) - It is DS of the front similar to note( 00:03:837 (1,2) - ) so This may get a wrong timing. If you want to change spacing , i recommend 00:06:504 (1,2) - you change it from here.
However, I feel that it is too wide suddenly. so i suggest use DS 00:06:504 (1,2) - DS1.33x. 00:07:504 (2,3) - DS1.00x. ( It is a way to increase stepwise spacing for normal )
00:07:837(green line) - Why is it necessary to lower the volume o.o? have a loud sound more clearly than 00:06:504 there.
00:24:837 (4) - I feel that the flow does not match melody. i suggest use curve slider, and like this flow : http://puu.sh/1nrSG ( ↓put code, try it )
```
396,196,24837,2,0,P|396:224|405:251,1,50
380,300,25171,6,0,B|324:316|264:284,1,100
```
00:33:504(green line) - Unnecessary green line. You use clap here(S:C2) but this clap is S:C11 and the same sound. Therefore, there is not the meaning to change here This is also unnecessary with 00:33:837. and below↓
SPOILER
00:35:337
00:35:837
00:41:504
01:45:504
02:11:504
00:33:504 (1) -try like this?: http://puu.sh/1ns1K haha just say it. It is easy to make a slider that just now :3

00:51:170 (3) - hide in hitburst of 00:49:170 (1)slider end, so I cannot recommend it for normal. The flow that it is not covered in the case of me: for ex: put code, please look at it

SPOILER

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01:33:171 (1,2,3) - Rhythm suggest, 01:34:337 (2) - When you put it to follow vocal here, 01:34:337 (2,3) - between the rhythm here is a little hard to take. If you follow the vocal, 01:34:670 - the rhythm that is better if you add note here.
01:35:837 (5) - add NC. This NC for timing and stack
01:47:837 (3) - You are good at matching it with a vocal. However, this note does not match it. If you match it with a vocal, 01:47:670 - better to put sound here. or i thoght 01:47:837 (3) - delete this and 01:47:504 (2) - put only this note and was enough. ( That case , 01:47:504 (2) - add whistle to instead to clap is better )
01:53:004 (3,4,5) - A sudden slider speed change and change of DS. In the case of normal, it is desirable to use the NC to change the speed. However, I think that the change of the slider speed is not necessary here. 01:54:504 (1) - It is enough from here ==
02:10:504 (3) - add finish to end of the slider. ( same as 01:05:670 (2) -
02:16:171 (2,3,4,1) - 4 consecutive stack == It does not see it very much for normal. I think that better to increase variations than you use stack here
03:03:670 (2) - i think this rhythm is not necessary. because 03:01:837 (1) - Melody is already finished here.
03:01:837 (1,2) - If you do not put anything between here, 03:03:670 (2) - This is the sound that leads to the next. ( like 03:50:170. 03:06:337. 03:07:837. ) If this is just adjusts it to other degrees of difficulty, it is unnecessary

[Hard]

00:07:837 (1,2) - 曲の感じから、スライダーを懲りすぎず普通の感じのスライダーの方がここは良いと思います。例えば: http://puu.sh/1ntaA (このパターンだと少しジャンプ大きいので後々指摘受けるかもしれませんが.. きれいなスライダー今とても簡単に作れるので色々試すといいかも。 )
ヒットサウンドに関して, 00:07:837 (1,2) - スライダーendはsamplesetをsoftにした方が聞こえが良いかと思います。
00:35:004 (2,3) - リズムは好きですが、配置的にジャンプだと勘違いしそうなイメージ。とりあえず提案は思い浮かばないので気に入ってるならスルーしてもらってよいです x3
00:42:504 (1) - startを00:42:420.にしては。　00:42:171 (2) ~の歌の伸びも良くなるし、スピナー得点も稼げるので。
00:52:337 (2) - 00:53:337 (2) - ここと音の取り方が違うのですが、 00:52:504に音を取るのであれば00:52:670にも音を置いた方が良いリズムになるかなと思いました。
01:18:504 (1,2) - 位置の提案: http://puu.sh/1ntvi 01:17:171 (1,2,3,4) - の中心くらいの配置でスタック。せっかくNC置いてるので普通に流すよりスタックでまとめて、ちょっとジャンプでアクセント付けたほうがおもしろいかなと思っただけです
01:38:670 (4) - これを消して勢い止めるほうが私は好きです
01:47:670 (x) - ここはnoteを置いたほうがよいかと。音が無いと01:47:504~の「ふぅ~」になんか合わないと感じたので
02:00:670 (3) - この近さで置くならリピートもう1個追加すべきだと思います ><!
02:23:837 (1) - finishを消してstart,edn共にclap置いた方が合うかな？

[Collab]

Mythol

01:41:170 (1) - remove NC. It is the single NC, do not have a meaning

-Gamu-
00:07:170 (3) - これだけwhistle置いてあって1~ 音量上げてっているので少し目立つ感じ。 whistleを外す or 00:06:504 (1,2,3,4) - 全てのスライダーstartにwhistle置いてあげたほうがよいかも。
00:32:337 (1,2,3) - 00:31:837 (1,2) - の続きで 00:33:170 (1)~とは違うリズムにしてみてはどうでしょうか？例えば: http://puu.sh/1ntSO
00:35:837 (1) - remove NC and 00:36:004 (2) - add NC.

[SB]

曲名のテロップ - normalでスピナー中に出ちゃってるので、A3,A1,A2,C1.pngを同じテンポづつずらしてスピナー終わりで出るようにしてみてはどうでしょうか？

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最後のC1がすぐ消えちゃうので気に入らなければ変える必要はありません

あとはnazi的なものがありますが、見た目的には気づかないものなので無理して直す必要はないでしょう

good map. star☆~

Good luck~

Gamu

Elite Mapper

2,606 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

Gamu 2012-11-18T11:39:16+00:00

kosiga wrote:
hello :3

thank you for the request~

here my mod ~

[General]
fine~
[Hard]
00:07:837 (1,2) - 曲の感じから、スライダーを懲りすぎず普通の感じのスライダーの方がここは良いと思います。例えば: http://puu.sh/1ntaA (このパターンだと少しジャンプ大きいので後々指摘受けるかもしれませんが.. きれいなスライダー今とても簡単に作れるので色々試すといいかも。 )
ヒットサウンドに関して, 00:07:837 (1,2) - スライダーendはsamplesetをsoftにした方が聞こえが良いかと思います。
00:35:004 (2,3) - リズムは好きですが、配置的にジャンプだと勘違いしそうなイメージ。とりあえず提案は思い浮かばないので気に入ってるならスルーしてもらってよいです x3　しゅるーさせてもらいます
00:42:504 (1) - startを00:42:420.にしては。　00:42:171 (2) ~の歌の伸びも良くなるし、スピナー得点も稼げるので。
00:52:337 (2) - 00:53:337 (2) - ここと音の取り方が違うのですが、 00:52:504に音を取るのであれば00:52:670にも音を置いた方が良いリズムになるかなと思いました。　サークルじゃなくてスライダーにしますた
01:18:504 (1,2) - 位置の提案: http://puu.sh/1ntvi 01:17:171 (1,2,3,4) - の中心くらいの配置でスタック。せっかくNC置いてるので普通に流すよりスタックでまとめて、ちょっとジャンプでアクセント付けたほうがおもしろいかなと思っただけです　申し訳ございません。
01:38:670 (4) - これを消して勢い止めるほうが私は好きです　このままで
01:47:670 (x) - ここはnoteを置いたほうがよいかと。音が無いと01:47:504~の「ふぅ~」になんか合わないと感じたので
02:00:670 (3) - この近さで置くならリピートもう1個追加すべきだと思います ><!　
02:23:837 (1) - finishを消してstart,edn共にclap置いた方が合うかな？微妙なのでパスします。また言われたら変えます
[Collab]
Mythol
01:41:170 (1) - remove NC. It is the single NC, do not have a meaning

-Gamu-
00:07:170 (3) - これだけwhistle置いてあって1~ 音量上げてっているので少し目立つ感じ。 whistleを外す or 00:06:504 (1,2,3,4) - 全てのスライダーstartにwhistle置いてあげたほうがよいかも。　
00:32:337 (1,2,3) - 00:31:837 (1,2) - の続きで 00:33:170 (1)~とは違うリズムにしてみてはどうでしょうか？例えば: http://puu.sh/1ntSO　このままで＞＜
00:35:837 (1) - remove NC and 00:36:004 (2) - add NC.
[SB]
曲名のテロップ - normalでスピナー中に出ちゃってるので、A3,A1,A2,C1.pngを同じテンポづつずらしてスピナー終わりで出るようにしてみてはどうでしょうか？
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Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\A2.png",320,240
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 F,0,19837,20504,0,1
 F,0,21004,22170,1,0
最後のC1がすぐ消えちゃうので気に入らなければ変える必要はありません

あとはnazi的なものがありますが、見た目的には気づかないものなので無理して直す必要はないでしょう
good map. star☆~

Good luck~

ほかは修正しました

ありがとうございます(｡・◡・｡)

YTYuyu

osu! Alumni

4,149 posts

Joined January 2011

YTYuyu 2012-11-18T13:01:53+00:00

kosiga wrote:
hello :3

thank you for the request~

here my mod ~

[General]
fine~
[249's Normal]
00:06:504 (1,2,3) - The difference in these sudden spacing is very difficult as the minimum degree of difficulty. 00:07:504 (2,3) - It is DS of the front similar to note( 00:03:837 (1,2) - ) so This may get a wrong timing. If you want to change spacing , i recommend 00:06:504 (1,2) - you change it from here.
However, I feel that it is too wide suddenly. so i suggest use DS 00:06:504 (1,2) - DS1.33x. 00:07:504 (2,3) - DS1.00x. ( It is a way to increase stepwise spacing for normal ) alright done.
00:07:837(green line) - Why is it necessary to lower the volume o.o? have a loud sound more clearly than 00:06:504 there. change in slider speed.
00:24:837 (4) - I feel that the flow does not match melody. i suggest use curve slider, and like this flow : http://puu.sh/1nrSG ( ↓put code, try it )
396,196,24837,2,0,P|396:224|405:251,1,50
380,300,25171,6,0,B|324:316|264:284,1,100
i'm not very fond of the 1/2 curved sliders. instead moved the end vertically to make it straightforward.
00:33:504(green line) - Unnecessary green line. You use clap here(S:C2) but this clap is S:C11 and the same sound. Therefore, there is not the meaning to change here This is also unnecessary with 00:33:837. and below↓
SPOILER
00:35:337
00:35:837
00:41:504
01:45:504
02:11:504
actually they are necessary because if i remove them, the ticks will make that hitsound and that will lead to breaking consistency.
00:33:504 (1) -try like this?: http://puu.sh/1ns1K haha just say it. It is easy to make a slider that just now :3 nahh i'd rather go old school on this one.
00:51:170 (3) - hide in hitburst of 00:49:170 (1)slider end, so I cannot recommend it for normal. The flow that it is not covered in the case of me: for ex: put code, please look at it
SPOILER
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mm~ sure why not. done .
01:33:171 (1,2,3) - Rhythm suggest, 01:34:337 (2) - When you put it to follow vocal here, 01:34:337 (2,3) - between the rhythm here is a little hard to take. If you follow the vocal, 01:34:670 - the rhythm that is better if you add note here. but i'm not folloing the vocals. i'm following the piano.
01:35:837 (5) - add NC. This NC for timing and stack i've been thinking about this. done.
01:47:837 (3) - You are good at matching it with a vocal. However, this note does not match it. If you match it with a vocal, 01:47:670 - better to put sound here. or i thoght 01:47:837 (3) - delete this and 01:47:504 (2) - put only this note and was enough. ( That case , 01:47:504 (2) - add whistle to instead to clap is better ) done.
01:53:004 (3,4,5) - A sudden slider speed change and change of DS. In the case of normal, it is desirable to use the NC to change the speed. However, I think that the change of the slider speed is not necessary here. 01:54:504 (1) - It is enough from here == done. it took some time to readjust.
02:10:504 (3) - add finish to end of the slider. ( same as 01:05:670 (2) - no. there's no finish at the end. only the beginning.
02:16:171 (2,3,4,1) - 4 consecutive stack == It does not see it very much for normal. I think that better to increase variations than you use stack here what kind of variations :/
03:03:670 (2) - i think this rhythm is not necessary. because 03:01:837 (1) - Melody is already finished here. how did that get there o_o. fixed~ ><
03:01:837 (1,2) - If you do not put anything between here, 03:03:670 (2) - This is the sound that leads to the next. ( like 03:50:170. 03:06:337. 03:07:837. ) If this is just adjusts it to other degrees of difficulty, it is unnecessary i removed (2) so i can't do this ><
good map. star☆~

Good luck~

ty for the mod

.

SPOILER

osu file format v10

[General]
AudioFilename: POP STEP LOVE.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 55837
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:POP STEP LOVE
TitleUnicode:
Artist:Ono Ryoko
ArtistUnicode:
Creator:-Gamu-
Version:249's Normal
Source:Mashiro Iro Symphony - The color of lovers -
Tags:character song sena airi mythol byakugan249 palette visual novel
BeatmapID:174953
BeatmapSetID:57649

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

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cirno-_old

cirno-_old 2012-11-26T04:04:40+00:00

I apologize, but maybe this is a good thing. I'm still a bit new to modding and I honestly can't find anything wrong with this. I really enjoyed the collab diff and I hope this gets ranked!

Star~

Gamu

Elite Mapper

2,606 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

Gamu 2012-12-02T04:27:13+00:00

cirno- wrote:
I apologize, but maybe this is a good thing. I'm still a bit new to modding and I honestly can't find anything wrong with this. I really enjoyed the collab diff and I hope this gets ranked!

Star~

thanks ;3

Scorpiour

2,633 posts

Joined May 2011

Scorpiour 2012-12-12T13:46:11+00:00

Hi there~~ mod from sp3's baka lucky queue
and i'm so sorry for my late >.<

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[General]

Empty ArtistUnicode & TitleUnicode, please fill them in osu file manually same as artist/title
No kiai in 249's Normal? i suppose only fountains are not enough
Audio Lead-in maybe too long, i'd like to choose 1000-1500ms as well

[249's Normal]

00:29:837 (4) - stack to 00:28:171 (1) - 's head for better flow? i suppose it's better than stack :>
00:51:170 (3) - i suppose it's better to be placed at 256:308 due to the direction of music~
00:53:504 - remove break here? it looks weird a bit since it's short and your hp is low enough
01:27:837 (1) - a sudden red-node-slider is strange because most of the other sliders are curved...and the music here is not hard also so i think a curved slider could be a better choice.

[Hard]

00:04:337 (2,3) - combine to an 1/1 slider for vocal?
00:25:670 (3) - change to a note here? hmm, since the rhythm is same as following, i prefer the beat you choose at 00:28:004 (2,3) - and 01:31:337 (3) -
01:50:337 (4,5) - heard weird a bit because i think the beat here is :
01:58:837 - how about to add a spinner here?
02:05:504 (1) - i wondered if the single here is designed?
02:44:004 - perhaps, a slider here is better?
02:52:337 (2,3) - combine to an 1/1 for vocal?

[Collab]

01:19:004 (1,2,3) - the triplet here is felt mess... consider this kinda beat?
02:43:337 (1) - designed NC?

That's all~~ call me back to recheck when you're ready :>

YTYuyu

osu! Alumni

4,149 posts

Joined January 2011

YTYuyu 2012-12-12T20:21:50+00:00

Scorpiour wrote:
Hi there~~ mod from sp3's baka lucky queue
and i'm so sorry for my late >.<

[249's Normal]
00:29:837 (4) - stack to 00:28:171 (1) - 's head for better flow? i suppose it's better than stack :> ahh sure why not . fixed.
00:51:170 (3) - i suppose it's better to be placed at 256:308 due to the direction of music~ no the transition and the blanket would be gone if i move it there.
00:53:504 - remove break here? it looks weird a bit since it's short and your hp is low enough no i feel that it'd make players nervous if i remove the break and with the hp bar draining slowly, they might hit the next note too early.
01:27:837 (1) - a sudden red-node-slider is strange because most of the other sliders are curved...and the music here is not hard also so i think a curved slider could be a better choice. no i feel that the flow would play awkwardly during gameplay in this part of the song.
That's all~~ call me back to recheck when you're ready :>

ty for the mod

. and about the kiais...i don't like them because i don't find them exciting compared to kiai bursts/fountains.

SPOILER

osu file format v10

[General]
AudioFilename: POP STEP LOVE.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 55837
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:POP STEP LOVE
TitleUnicode:
Artist:Ono Ryoko
ArtistUnicode:
Creator:-Gamu-
Version:249's Normal
Source:Mashiro Iro Symphony - The color of lovers -
Tags:character song sena airi mythol byakugan249 palette visual novel
BeatmapID:174953
BeatmapSetID:57649

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

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0,0,"Airi.jpg"
//Break Periods
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2,53536,54517
2,80036,86517
2,118871,119851
2,145371,154517
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Byakugan249.png",320,240
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 F,0,169170,169837,0,0.896
 F,0,169837,182504,0.896
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//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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Gamu

Elite Mapper

2,606 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

Gamu 2012-12-13T07:56:56+00:00

Scorpiour wrote:
Hi there~~ mod from sp3's baka lucky queue hi~ :3
and i'm so sorry for my late >.<

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[General]
Empty ArtistUnicode & TitleUnicode, please fill them in osu file manually same as artist/title oh..ok!
Audio Lead-in maybe too long, i'd like to choose 1000-1500ms as wel ok!
[Hard]
00:04:337 (2,3) - combine to an 1/1 slider for vocal? ok!
00:25:670 (3) - change to a note here? hmm, since the rhythm is same as following, i prefer the beat you choose at 00:28:004 (2,3) - and 01:31:337 (3) - ok!
01:50:337 (4,5) - heard weird a bit because i think the beat here is : ok!
01:58:837 - how about to add a spinner here? hmm...I don't want to put the spinner here. This is a Hard diff. I hate the short spinner. So, I do not put. However, insane diff except　
02:05:504 (1) - i wondered if the single here is designed? ok. changed
02:44:004 - perhaps, a slider here is better? ok!

02:52:337 (2,3) - combine to an 1/1 for vocal? ok!
[Collab]
01:19:004 (1,2,3) - the triplet here is felt mess... consider this kinda beat? ok!
02:43:337 (1) - designed NC? ok!
That's all~~ call me back to recheck when you're ready :>

thank you ><

Scorpiour

2,633 posts

Joined May 2011

Scorpiour 2012-12-13T09:37:42+00:00

bubbled~~

YTYuyu

osu! Alumni

4,149 posts

Joined January 2011

YTYuyu 2012-12-13T11:13:50+00:00

hurray~ \o/. gogo Gamu-chan <3

spboxer3

Global Moderator

3,616 posts

Joined November 2009

spboxer3 2012-12-13T15:12:28+00:00

※ Notice

red is unrankable issue.
blue is recommended to fix.
Black is just suggestion.

general

Settings
(For the setting/general issue.)

※notice: Hard diff's SB have some wrong code
```
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\-Gamu-1.png",320,240 
```
It should fixed name to SB\-Gamu-.png imo. I can't find any elements is "-Gamu-1.png"

Normal

Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)

00:32:837 - (slider tail) to correspond 00:31:170 - (reverse) so I hope you can add whistle here.
01:13:170 - recommend to add finish, 01:11:837 - to 01:15:837 - it's too empty then preview/next part for finish track, It's make hitsound a kinda irregular. (02:18:504 - ,02:57:170 - etc.)

mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

00:57:837 (3,4,1) - move to x:212,y:200 take equilateral triangle shape for 00:55:837 (1,2,3) - also make 00:57:837 (3,4) - to medium 00:56:504 (2) - but it's a minor issue, take free if you take it or not xD.

Hard

Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap each other could space them farther apart. yep. It's just suggest and nazi. you can ignore this par)

01:04:504 (2) - move to x:148,y:184 and 01:05:171 (1) - move to x:156,y:40 regardless of the spacing to avoid overlap?

Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)

00:07:837 - used 50% volume to make vloume increasing? (It's a bit loud now, I hope you can make vol change more gentle )
00:39:670 - recommend add finish, make 00:38:504 - to 00:43:837 - like an interlude part.
00:52:504 - ,00:53:504 - add 20% volume to make hitsound blend the music? (btw, If you accept it, you must add 80% volume at 00:52:837 - to make the volume back xD)
01:13:170 - same as I recommend for 249's Normal diff:
recommend to add finish, 01:11:837 - to 01:15:837 - it's too empty then preview/next part for finish track, It's make hitsound a kinda irregular. (02:18:504 - ,02:57:170 - etc.)
01:45:004 - to correspond 00:39:670 - , add finish to make interlude?

mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

00:57:004 (4,1) - I recommend used slider to replace those couple note. 00:57:170 (1) - it's neither unchanging pitch nor have drumbeat at here, it's just assist note to 00:57:504 (2,3,4,1) - . so I think this click is no sense, used slider it's more suitable imo.
02:42:337 (4,5,1,2,3) - a kinda confuse rhythm and hard to map it, even though I tried to make it more suitable (I contacted with Scorpiour and discuss it before).
start at: 02:42:337 (4) -

or

Insane

Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)

00:39:671 (1) - same as I said at Hard diff: recommend add finish, make 00:38:504 - to 00:43:837 - like an interlude part.
01:13:170 - recommend to add finish, 01:11:837 - to 01:15:837 - it's too empty then preview/next part for finish track, It's make hitsound a kinda irregular. (same as 02:18:504 - )
02:19:837 - add finish? ok, I guess it's forget to add it.

mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

looks good

I'm so sorry to popped this, but you can call me back to recheck it.

YTYuyu

osu! Alumni

4,149 posts

Joined January 2011

YTYuyu 2012-12-13T21:26:43+00:00

spboxer3 wrote:
※ Notice
red is unrankable issue.
blue is recommended to fix.
Black is just suggestion.

Normal

Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
00:32:837 - (slider tail) to correspond 00:31:170 - (reverse) so I hope you can add whistle here. ahh sure fixed.
01:13:170 - recommend to add finish, 01:11:837 - to 01:15:837 - it's too empty then preview/next part for finish track, It's make hitsound a kinda irregular. (02:18:504 - ,02:57:170 - etc.) no i don't wanna give "too" much emphasis in the vocals.
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
00:57:837 (3,4,1) - move to x:212,y:200 take equilateral triangle shape for 00:55:837 (1,2,3) - also make 00:57:837 (3,4) - to medium 00:56:504 (2) - but it's a minor issue, take free if you take it or not xD. i think i fixed it like you said o.o

I'm so sorry to popped this, but you can call me back to recheck it.

ty for the mod ~~baka~~boxer

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212,128,127837,1,0,0:0:0
332,116,128171,1,8,0:0:0
336,236,128504,1,0,0:0:0
452,208,128837,1,8,0:0:0
420,324,129171,6,0,B|320:360|216:288,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
144,212,130171,1,8,0:0:0
56,132,130504,2,0,B|108:68|192:68,2,150,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
144,212,131837,5,4,0:0:0
208,312,132171,2,0,B|328:312,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
364,212,132837,1,8,0:0:0
364,212,133004,2,0,B|360:128|424:76,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
476,188,133837,1,0,0:0:0
424,296,134171,1,8,0:0:0
308,268,134504,6,0,B|228:256|184:172,2,150,4|0|12,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
316,28,136171,1,8,0:0:0
316,28,136504,1,0,0:0:0
316,28,136837,1,8,0:0:0
316,28,137171,6,0,B|316:88|372:136,2,100,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
436,44,138171,1,8,0:0:0
444,164,138504,2,0,B|448:272|336:328,2,200
328,196,140171,5,8,0:0:0
212,160,140504,1,0,0:0:0
140,256,140837,1,8,0:0:0
68,160,141171,2,0,B|76:76|164:36,2,150,4|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
124,264,142504,5,4,0:0:0
124,264,142837,1,8,0:0:0
243,264,143171,1,0,0:0:0
243,264,143504,1,8,0:0:0
184,160,143837,1,4,0:0:0
424,192,144504,6,0,B|496:192,2,50,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
364,192,145004,1,0,0:0:0
304,192,145171,1,4,0:0:0
256,192,155837,12,4,157170,0:0:0
148,256,158504,5,0,0:0:0
328,256,159170,1,2,0:0:0
236,156,159670,2,0,B|236:96|304:60,1,112.500004291535
324,152,160504,1,2,0:0:0
400,200,160837,1,0,0:0:0
332,260,161170,6,0,B|228:292|124:228|132:128,2,262.500010013581,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
376,180,163837,5,4,0:0:0
376,180,165170,2,0,B|320:120|216:132,1,150.000005722046,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
156,168,166170,1,0,0:0:0
112,248,166504,1,0,0:0:0
284,296,167170,2,0,B|360:248|376:176,1,150.000005722046,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
76,56,169170,6,0,B|128:40|188:56,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
288,92,169837,2,0,B|340:148|312:240,2,150,0|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
200,172,171170,1,0,0:0:0
92,228,171504,1,8,0:0:0
200,284,171837,6,0,B|260:324|352:312,2,150,4|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
44,100,173504,1,8,0:0:0
152,48,173837,1,0,0:0:0
272,48,174170,1,8,0:0:0
380,100,174504,6,0,B|404:152|380:208,2,100,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
272,152,175504,1,8,0:0:0
272,272,175837,2,0,B|180:320|80:272,2,200
180,192,177504,5,8,0:0:0
88,112,177837,1,0,0:0:0
176,32,178170,1,12,0:0:0
264,112,178504,2,0,B|324:156|416:148,2,150,4|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
288,228,179837,5,4,0:0:0
204,312,180170,1,8,0:0:0
120,228,180504,1,0,0:0:0
144,112,180837,1,8,0:0:0
263,112,181170,1,4,0:0:0
464,244,181837,6,0,B|400:320|260:308,1,200,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

Gamu

Elite Mapper

2,606 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

Gamu 2012-12-14T07:44:38+00:00

spboxer3 wrote:
※ Notice
red is unrankable issue.
blue is recommended to fix.
Black is just suggestion.
general

Settings
(For the setting/general issue.)
※notice: Hard diff's SB have some wrong code
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\-Gamu-1.png",320,240 
It should fixed name to SB\-Gamu-.png imo. I can't find any elements is "-Gamu-1.png"　Oh ... I did not notice orz.. fixed!
Hard

Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap each other could space them farther apart. yep. It's just suggest and nazi. you can ignore this par)
01:04:504 (2) - move to x:148,y:184 and 01:05:171 (1) - move to x:156,y:40 regardless of the spacing to avoid overlap? ok!
Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
00:07:837 - used 50% volume to make vloume increasing? (It's a bit loud now, I hope you can make vol change more gentle ) ok!

00:39:670 - recommend add finish, make 00:38:504 - to 00:43:837 - like an interlude part. ok!

00:52:504 - ,00:53:504 - add 20% volume to make hitsound blend the music? (btw, If you accept it, you must add 80% volume at 00:52:837 - to make the volume back xD) ok!

01:13:170 - same as I recommend for 249's Normal diff:
recommend to add finish, 01:11:837 - to 01:15:837 - it's too empty then preview/next part for finish track, It's make hitsound a kinda irregular. (02:18:504 - ,02:57:170 - etc.) I like the "whistle" personally. So, here is adopted "whistle"

01:45:004 - to correspond 00:39:670 - , add finish to make interlude? ok!
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
00:57:004 (4,1) - I recommend used slider to replace those couple note. 00:57:170 (1) - it's neither unchanging pitch nor have drumbeat at here, it's just assist note to 00:57:504 (2,3,4,1) - . so I think this click is no sense, used slider it's more suitable imo. ok!
02:42:337 (4,5,1,2,3) - a kinda confuse rhythm and hard to map it, even though I tried to make it more suitable (I contacted with Scorpiour and discuss it before). fixed~
start at: 02:42:337 (4) -

or

Insane

Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
00:39:671 (1) - same as I said at Hard diff: recommend add finish, make 00:38:504 - to 00:43:837 - like an interlude part. ok!
01:13:170 - recommend to add finish, 01:11:837 - to 01:15:837 - it's too empty then preview/next part for finish track, It's make hitsound a kinda irregular. (same as 02:18:504 - ) Same as Hard diff

02:19:837 - add finish? ok, I guess it's forget to add it. ok!

mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
looks good
I'm so sorry to popped this, but you can call me back to recheck it.

thank you <33

spboxer3

Global Moderator

3,616 posts

Joined November 2009

spboxer3 2012-12-14T10:58:55+00:00

no kd

recheck log

18:13 spboxer3: check now~
18:13 -Gamu-: okay~
18:15 -Gamu-: If you have a problem, suggestion, please tell me
18:15 spboxer3: ok><
18:31 spboxer3: still here o.o?
18:31 -Gamu-: yeah
18:33 spboxer3: 02:42:337 (4,5,6,1,2)-  [Hard] I think you can make this layout better, if you have no idea to arrange it, let me 
18:33 spboxer3: know~ I can give you some code... if you want.
18:34 spboxer3: you can check this: 02:43:670 (6,1,2)- obviously, It's uneven spacing for this pattern
18:36 -Gamu-: Honestly, I do not know a good placement orz
18:37 spboxer3: lol
18:38 -Gamu-: Give me the code ;w;
18:46 spboxer3: in your forum pm :P
18:47 -Gamu-: thank you :3
18:48 spboxer3: btw, you should resnap all note again... It's very nazi (maybe is bug) you have 1ms difference in this diff
18:49 -Gamu-: ah... ok !
18:50 -Gamu-: updated!
18:50 spboxer3: ok~

Let's try again~^^

EDIT: add Artist Unicode and change "Collab" slider tick to 2 (popped by himself)
back~

Garven

osu! Alumni

5,857 posts

Joined January 2010

Garven 2012-12-18T09:52:17+00:00

Did some IRC modding.

Changed some bad spacing in the beginning of the Normal, some tiny overlaps in the Hard, and tick rate 2 for the Collab. Also changed the really light combo color to something a little darker and the artist unicode entry. Passed to sp3, and here we are.

Ranked!

NewRulerNA

1,301 posts

Joined December 2010

NewRulerNA 2012-12-18T09:53:03+00:00

おめでとうー

ririco

6,402 posts

Joined February 2011

ririco 2012-12-18T09:53:27+00:00

yay ome~ Gamu owo/

fusya

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