Hello
[General]
- TV Size and no video? o.o
- The offset kinda feel early. I can't really pinpoint it atm
- 00:30:250 - This is 3/4 (Waltz). You can hear the triple time
- 00:38:348 - move this red line to 00:39:084 - (if you have something here, you have to compensate with green lines instead to make the speed normal)
- 00:47:918 - why are you using 81,50bpm? it's the same as 163 bpm but only halved. You can use a 0,5x green line it you really need it.
- 00:49:390 - You can remove this red line
[Insane]
When I played this, I thought it was AR7 lol. Please consider using AR 9 instead
00:02:734 (1,2,3) - really awkward for some reason. Not the slider only, it's the 2 other circles (you make it look like it's a 1/2 slider)
00:30:250 - feels really odd that you skipped this beat
00:34:483 (8) - you don't put a slider on an offbeat like this, it's really awkward D: It should start on 00:34:667 -
00:47:918 - make this beat louder
00:59:696 (9) - nothing wrong really, but why this shape? o.o
01:12:948 - 50% on all these sliders, just like the start
01:14:972 (1,2,3) - awkward part
01:19:942 (4) - finish on start
01:18:837 (1) - did you have to shape it like this? D:
01:20:862 (1,2,3) - awkward
01:22:334 (6) - finish on start
01:23:807 (7) - ^
01:26:199 - 40% fits better imo. It's kinda frustrating not to be able to hear those notes because the volume is too low
01:26:015 (3) - finish
[Hard]
00:30:250 - feels really odd that you're skipping this beat
00:47:918 - higher volume
01:07:794 (6,1) - This is a nasty trap. Most players will think that it still will go by 1/2
01:12:948 - 50% volume, just like the start
01:14:052 (4) - finish on start
01:22:335 (2) - ^
01:23:807 (6) - ^
01:26:016 (8) - finish
01:26:199 - 40%
01:26:384 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I would
never use such a finale on a
Hard difficulty
[Normal]
00:30:250 - Like I mentioned before, it feels odd that you skipped this beat
00:30:618 - I would use higher the spacing on slow part because it can look so crowded when you use regular spacing + slow sliders
00:43:501 (1) - finish
01:07:059 (2) - finish on start only
01:22:335 (2) -Finish on start. Also, awkward end, it should end at 01:22:886 -
01:23:808 (2) - ^
01:25:648 (3) - finish on end
01:26:199 - 40%
[Easy]
00:28:685 (7,1) - this looks really weird. You are skipping 2 beats and have this anti-spacing as well. At least add something on 00:30:250 -
00:30:618 - same as normal. Would be nice with more spaced notes
01:10:003 (1) - finish on end
01:11:475 (2) - ^
01:22:334 (4,1) - don't use such patterns on easy please. Just remove (1) and extend the slider to 01:23:255 -
01:23:807 (2,1) - ^
01:26:383 (1,2,3,1,2) - Please use something less like this. it looks so messed up everything
Well there was some messed up things here, but overall nice
Good luck!