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Kelly Clarkson - My Life Would Suck Without You

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Topic Starter
GbL
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on quinta-feira, 8 de maio de 2014 at 22:31:50

Artist: Kelly Clarkson
Title: My Life Would Suck Without You
Tags: kingcobra52 0_o All I Ever Wanted
BPM: 145
Filesize: 6689kb
Play Time: 03:25
Difficulties Available:
  1. 0_o's Hard (4,52 stars, 354 notes)
  2. Easy (0,65 stars, 102 notes)
  3. Kingcobra Hard! (4,93 stars, 482 notes)
  4. Normal (3,46 stars, 267 notes)
Download: Kelly Clarkson - My Life Would Suck Without You
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My life would suck without you, osu!
eee
eeemod GO!!

BPM: I guess it's alright
Offset: 13,822 (it's practicallly the first offset, but nearly all your beats were placed on red ticks, when they should've been white)

[Normal]

Naz-eeemod v
SPOILER
00:23:75 (1,2,3,4,5) - small grid change. move all these one grid to the right so that (2) stacks with the following (6). I get this combo cause (6,7) is in the middle already.
02:02:85 (break) - reinsert break


[Hard]
01:04:71 (1) - end 1/4 later
01:06:27 (1) - move 1/4 later
02:16:35 (break) - reinsert break
03:25:82 (1) - end 03:27:06

[Kiai Mode]
[First Kiai] - 00:41:96
[Second Kiai] - 01:36:58
[Third Kiai] - 02:32:85

I say put the choruses at Normal samplesets, but I guess it's not too important.
Also, there are some new combos that don't seem right, I'm not good at combo modding, Blissfulyoshi makes combo mods from time to time though.

I'll star, it's a pretty decent map, looks like you've gotten better
Topic Starter
GbL
Thank you, eee. =}
Kudosu~
Linox_old
Bom mapa GBL, esperamos que seje rankiado xD

*stars*

Na verdade, nem joguei ainda :P mas já to dando stars ^^
Froslass
Eu tenho uma sugestão. Não sei se quer, mas tá aí, ah sim, Hard:

02:08:442 - Finish aqui
02:08:856 - Adicione uma beat aqui
02:09:063 - Adicione uma beat aqui
02:09:270 - Adicione uma beat aqui e coloque o hitsound Finish

Depois, arrume o spacing das notas que vierem depois, claro.

Anyways, isso é só uma sugestão.

Ah, estou fazendo uma diff pra seu map tbm :P

Star. ^^
kingcobra52
Normal

01:59:34 (1,1) - Place the best 1 whole beat later (so it ends with the music). Adjusting the spinner is optional. Fix the break afterwards.
02:18:37 (2,3,4) - These meant to be uneven with 02:16:30 (1,2,3) under it?
02:57:68 (1) - (Optional) I'd say switch to normal sounds for this slider.

Hard

-Turn off kiai after the first chorus (before 01:08:44 (1) )
02:04:71 (4) - I"m against muting these sliders. It just feels out of place. :\

Overall, I feel more can be done with the map itself. I'd say using quarter/eighth beats throughout the whole song is basically a last resort when it comes to mapping. (I know there's definitely not many things to follow in this song besides a constant beat, but I know there's a few places where you can trail away from that consistency) This is just me talking from experience, of course. As long as the ranking guidelines are met, it's rankable imo.

Also, I'd like to make a difficulty for this if you don't mind. :)
Topic Starter
GbL
ty, kingcobra.
I'm waiting for your diff. ;)
Tadaki_Laka
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Heath_old
Okay, i think this map is a good map so i will give a star

But the storyboard... I do not like storyboards, i do not even understand why players put storyboards in beatmaps, but this is irrelevant.

*star*
Cheedar
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Cheedar
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Topic Starter
GbL
Thank you so muuch, Cheedar. I liked it. *-*
0_o
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Topic Starter
GbL

0_o wrote:

Normal sampleset would sound awesome on the choruses ;)

Normal
01:59:34 (1) - Extend to next white tick

That's all I really got after a quick run through.

bleh, now I wanna make a difficulty too :P 3 hards is probably a little much though

*
You can make. :}

Next diff by kingcobra, Bue Dragon e 0_o.

NOT ACCEPT MORE DIFFS
kingcobra52
Topic Starter
GbL
Wow, very nice.
Added, ty.
Mashley
Dammit these hitcircles are awwwwwful. Can we have a visible spinner circle please?
You need to work on your breaks, maybe add some shorter ones. They're differerent between difficulties too.
00:58:51 (1) - Why does the kiai cut out here? Keep it until the end of the chorus.
01:53:13 (1) - ^
02:57:68 (1) - ^

Normal
YES

Hard
01:28:30 (3) - Space this like the rest of the combo, it looks like 1/4
02:49:40 (1) - ^

Kingcobra Hard
YES
Mafiamaster
Normal~
  1. Kiai: 00:40:71 - Start the first Kiai at 00:41:96 (1).
  2. Kiai: 01:35:44 - Start the second Kiai at 01:36:58 (3).
  3. 151,632ms - Remove it. This inherited timing section is unused.
  4. Kiai: 02:31:71 - Start the third Kiai at 02:32:85 (1).
  5. 02:32:85 (1) - Maybe add a finish at the start of this slider.
  6. 03:25:82 (2) - Move this farther from 1's endpoint. People would probably treat this as a 1/4 note and hit it too fast.
Hard~
  1. 01:13:61 (1) - Suggestion: Add a finish.
  2. 03:19:40 (1) - Move farther from 3.
Saw nothing wrong with Hard~
Topic Starter
GbL
All fixed, ty Mafiamaster. ;}
Inozuma
Hi! :D

[Normal]
00:23:75 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Align the whole combo on the center.
02:40:71 (2,1) - Spacing?
03:23:96 (1,2) - Align two with the slider.


[Hard]
00:57:47 - Add a note?
00:50:02 (1,2,3) - Move it to the right to match symmetry.
00:56:23 (1,2,3) - Move it to the left to match symmetry.
01:28:30 (3,1) - Spacing?
01:32:65 (3,4) - ^
02:16:30 - Add a note? :/ (If you do, redo the break)
02:45:68 (3,4) - Spacing?

[Kingcobra Hard!]
02:21:26 (1,2,3,4) - :/
03:14:01 (5,6,7,8) - Haha

Well I like the hitsounds.
I just think that you could have mixed up with normal hitsounds on chorus part.

Anyway, star~
0_o
:D

Let me know if I got a little too kiai happy :P

Download: Kelly Clarkson - My Life Would Suck Without You (GbL) [0_o].osu
Topic Starter
GbL
Veeery good, 0_o. Added.
All finished, waitin' a BAT. c_c
Cheedar
Well, i think that is out of time, but i hope that isn't TT_TT
I think these timing points fit best with the music (just made changes at the beginning of kiai mode)

[TimingPoints]
13822,413.793103448276,4,2,0,85,1,0
41959,-100,4,2,0,85,0,1
58321,-200,4,2,0,85,0,0
59563,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
96161,-100,4,2,0,85,0,1
113045,-200,4,2,0,85,0,0
114183,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
136130,-100,4,2,0,45,0,0
151632,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
152875,-100,4,2,0,100,0,1
177494,-100,4,2,0,10,0,0
179547,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
201804,-200,4,2,0,100,0,0

Hope you think the same >_>'
yeahyeahyeahhh
Kingcobra Hard!:
02:32:84 - Add a note here! maybe back in the middle where 1 was.
02:39:46 - ^
I really like the parts where the spacing starts small and gets larger.

Hard:
Fine ^^

Normal:
00:23:75 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This section has too much focus on the x-axis. I would suggest maybe go somewhere else on the new combos?
03:22:09 (1,1) - Make both of these into some kind of shape, don't leave them as straight lines.
Topic Starter
GbL

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

Normal:
00:23:75 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This section has too much focus on the x-axis. I would suggest maybe go somewhere else on the new combos? Fix
03:22:09 (1,1) - Make both of these into some kind of shape, don't leave them as straight lines. Fix
Thank you, wait for kingcobra.(=
kingcobra52
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Download: Kelly Clarkson - My Life Would Suck Without You (GbL) [Kingcobra Hard!].osu
Topic Starter
GbL
Al done. :D
[deleted user]
Um map de um brasileiro /o/
Muito legal, e como eu n sei fazer mod eu prefiro n arriscar.

estrelinha >.>
GabrielRKF
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Topic Starter
GbL
Valeu, vou esperar o restante pra fazer o upload. :}
GabrielRKF
//Hard//
Gostei do estilo non stop dessa diff, realmente machuca o meu pulso XD
Essa diff vai ajudar a música a ficar nas most played song
  1. 00:18::995(spinner) - finish?
  2. 00:29:753(x) - uma nota aqui?
  3. 00:29:959(x) - ^ (+hit finish)
  4. 00:32:235(spinner) - E se esse spinner acabasse 00:33:063 e você adicionasse uma nota (+hit finish) em 00:33:270?
  5. 00:56:443(2,3) - se você olhar com cuidado, você verá q eles não estão espelhados com os (1,2,3) anteriores. Desce um pouquinho o 2 e 3 (uma tiny grid)
  6. 01:27:684(x) - adiciona uma nota aqui e depois bota hit finish no (1) seguinte.
  7. 02:59:546(3) - pela seqüencia sequencia (agora sem trema =p), agora tem um New Combo aqui.
//Kingcobra//
Juro q tentei mas:
  1. Nothing wrong here
Mais skin(como hit 50, usa o original mesmo ^^):

Ta de parabens GbL. O mapa é muito divertido e a música é foda demais.
Nada a acrescentar. *Kudosustar*

Topic Starter
GbL
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GabrielRKF
Mais uma coisinha pra skin xD


Malz ficar zoneando o seu forum. Valew o/
Topic Starter
GbL
Nada, rox. :D

All done, uploaded.
gdeath
plz look these as suggestion

[Normal]
fine

[0_o]
00:51:67 (11) - remove the whistle on end of slider
03:02:43 (10) - new combo
03:07:40 (7) - ^

[Hard]
01:09:89 (1) - remove new combo
01:11:96 (1) - ^
01:25:61 (1) - ^

[Kingcobra Hard!]
01:24:57 (1) - remove new combo
01:24:15 (6) - new combo

awesome map.starry*
Topic Starter
GbL

gdeath wrote:

[Hard]
01:09:89 (1) - remove new combo
01:11:96 (1) - ^
01:25:61 (1) - ^
all fix, ty.
0_o
Sorry for the wait, here's the update. I decided to keep the last two long combos, but I changed the other two.

Download: Kelly Clarkson - My Life Would Suck Without You (GbL) [0_o].osu
Topic Starter
GbL
Ty, 0_o.
0_o
Just some self-modding on my diff

00:50:64 (9) - replace clap with finish
00:51:05 (10) - replace endpoint's clap with whistle
03:22:09 (1) - Make this a soft finish

No kudos :P
Topic Starter
GbL

0_o wrote:

Just some self-modding on my diff

00:50:64 (9) - replace clap with finish
00:51:05 (10) - replace endpoint's clap with whistle
03:22:09 (1) - Make this a soft finish

No kudos :P
Ok, done~
EEeee
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Topic Starter
GbL
Ty, EEeee. All fix in my diffs. :D
0_o

EEeee wrote:

O_o
01:00:98 (5) - I can see the kind of jump ur attending for, but I might as well just snap this note to 4, then it will still be kinda challenging since the next pattern will maybe be jumpish It's not that much of a jump
01:51:88 (5) - New combo sure
02:31:40 (1) - end 1/4 forward, may be a bit hard, but who cares, this diff ain't easy right :P The rest of the spinners give 1/1 leeway, so I think if I do that it'll throw people off. That and I hate when people put notes directly after spinners :P
03:08:43 (9) - New wombo wure
03:13:40 (5) - ^ I'll keep it like it is for phrasing reasons
Download: Kelly Clarkson - My Life Would Suck Without You (GbL) [0_o].osu
Zerostarry
Offset: 13,820

3 Hards and a normal? No way~

Add a difficulty that has 3stars or less.
Froslass
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Download: Kelly Clarkson - My Life Would Suck Without You (GbL) [Blue's EaZy].osu
Topic Starter
GbL
Added, ty. =)
GabrielRKF
//Easy// - 2 tick rate está muito alto. Bota 1.
  1. 00:16:923(3) - não ta começando no local certo. Esse slider começa em 00:17:130 e termina em 00:18:785.
  2. 01:04:923(1) - não gostei desse slider, bota uma coias mais parecida com uma meia lua, menos "quebrado".
  3. 02:32:854(1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Número 1: Tá muito dificil pra uma Easy diff. Número 2: Os hit sounds estão meio aleatórios. Cria algo mais sequencial.
  4. 02:54:578(2) - faz esse igual ao (1). Não espelha.
  5. 02:58:716 até 03:07:199 - Mais uma vez. Difícil demais para um easy. Refaça essa parte. Obs.: Você tem q tirar mas outro erro nessa parte foi os sliders estarem cmeçando no tick vermelho. Ficaria melhor nos brancos.
Gostei, apesra de ser meio que aleatório demais =/
Armin
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Topic Starter
GbL
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0_o
Made most of the above suggestions ^_^

Download: Kelly Clarkson - My Life Would Suck Without You (GbL) [0_o].osu
Topic Starter
GbL
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Cheedar
This is not a comment from a super-modder, but I think that this is usable.
Some sliders/circles (the most) in Blue's EaZy are in places that doesn't have a beat, I find it strange, but this is just an opinion.
nullPointLOL
Hi! thnks for pm.

Beautiful song and map for osu. It makes me want to map o.O


I noticed some notes are not snapped due to timing changes or something like that I guess. You may want to resnap all notes.

[gbl]
SPOILER
00:15:26 (3) - finish at end?
00:19:19 (6) - finish at beginning?
00:19:60 (7) - whiste at ^
00:20:43 (1) - whistle?
00:20:84 (3) - ^
00:23:74 (1) - ^
01:08:44 (1,3) - ^
01:10:50 (4) - finish?
01:11:75 (1,3 at beg.) - whistle
01:13:82 (6,7,8) - finish, whistle, finish.
01:15:06 (1,3) - whistle.
[Hard]
SPOILER
01:11:54 (5) - it would be nice here if you don't place a note at the Red tick, just skip to the next white tick.
02:08:44 (2,3) - maybe remove those finish?
02:59:33 (3) - add a note? finish.
[o_O]
SPOILER
01:06:57 (3) - remove?
01:06:78 (1) - end spinner with no sound.
01:34:91 (1) - finish?
[Normal]
SPOILER
00:13:81 (1 at beginning, 2, 1 at b., 2, 1, 2, 3) - It very nice in Normal to put Whistle every two white ticks.
00:38:85 - add a note?
00:39:26 - ^
00:38:64 (5,6,1 at b.) - whistles.
00:41:75 (4) - add note. with whistle.
01:10:09 (1,2) - 'finish' at beginning?
01:11:75 (1,3) - whistle
01:18:37 (1,3) - ^
01:22:09 (2,4,2) - ^
01:25:40 (5,7,2) - ^
01:28:71 (2,4) - ^
01:31:61 (1,3,5) - ^
Topic Starter
GbL
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happy30
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Yes_old
normal
01:00:15 (3) - move this to 00:59:95 instead?
01:26:63 (1) - up a tick for more symmetry?<3
01:25:81 (6) - ^
01:54:77 (3) - same as at 1:00:15
02:32:84 (1) - finish at beginning of this slider?
02:44:22 (1) - too close after spinner for a normal mode? if it were me i would erase a repeat off the next spinner and move it over 1/2 to start at 02:44:44
02:44:22 (1) - clap at 02:44:85
02:51:05 (2) - move to 02:50:85
02:54:57 (2,3) - whistle
03:11:75 (x) - maybe add a note here?
03:17:83 - ^
03:17:54 (2) - delete note

hard
00:27:06 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - whistle overload! if it were me i would only leave 1,3,7
00:41:75 (4) - finish
00:47:75 (1,2) - whistles instead
01:02:23 (2) - remove whistle. i think the combination sounds a little weird
01:03:89 (2) - ^
01:17:75 (1,2) - try out using (clap, clap) for these parts instead of (nothing, finish)
01:21:68 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - whistle overload!
01:36:37 (4) - finish?
01:42:37 (2) - take off clap (it doesn't follow the clapping pattern you have going)
02:32:65 (4) - finish
02:39:47 (6) - ^
02:48:78 (4) - would look nice if lined this up with (3)
02:50:23 (2) - clap (change these 4 hit-sound changes first and then listen to it all together)
02:50:44 (3) - remove clap
02:50:65 (4) - clap
02:50:85 (5) - finish
02:51:27 (1) - new combo?
03:14:44 (1) - ^
03:18:78 (2) - clap
03:18:99 (3) - no clap
03:20:44 (2) - clap
03:20:65 (3) - no clap
03:25:82 (1) - finish?


kingcobra
00:40:50 (5) - whistle?
01:09:05 (4) - spacing (sorry for nazi)
01:24:57 (1) - finish?

easy
00:25:82 (x) - note?
00:28:71 (3) - add a repeat
00:48:99 (1,3,5,7,9) - clap
00:53:54 (12) - finish
00:58:50 (1) - this hitsound combination doesnt sound too good to me. i would just make it a clap
01:00:16 (2) - just a finish (no clap)
01:09:26 (2) - no clap at 01:10:09
01:22:09 (x) - note here
01:25:82 (2) - finish at the end of slider
01:28:71 (x) - note
01:36:99 (2) - hitsound combination sounds weird
01:38:64 (4) - ^
01:44:02 (2) - take off whistle
01:44:85 (4) - ^
01:45:68 (6) - ^
01:49:82 (2) - ^
01:50:64 (4) - ^
01:51:47 (6) - ^ and add finish

and delete all the timing sections after the difficulty ends? xD


o_0
00:23:33 (7) - clap
01:34:91 (1) - ^
01:47:95 (x) - note here?
03:00:57 (3) - clap


hope that helped(: nice mapssssszzz.
Topic Starter
GbL
Awesome mod, Yes!
All done in easy, normal and hard diff, ty ty. :)
Shinxyn
All suggestions..

Blue's-
Meh, just remove the timing panels at end, hitsounds didn't appeal to me much..

Normal-
Single Nazi point-
00:24:57 (3,7) - right one tick, so the spacing is equal to that of the other side (1,5)
The hitsounds... are weak for the non-chorus parts... please try to add a few?
This has a lot of short spinner for a Normal......

Hard-
01:53:96 (2,3) - this .5x section's spacing threw me off
Hitsounds again were weak in the non-chorus parts..
Ninja Spinners </3

0_o-
Normal timing sections kinda loud (might be cuz I listened to those ^ first)...
Nazi-
01:49:19 (5,6,7) - remove whistle(s) please!
01:55:19 (6) - New combo and try using whistle instead of finish here?
Unique hitsound patterns~

Kingcobra Hard! (why isn't is "Kingcobra's Hard!"?)
Great!
0_o
Sleep Powder
[Song Setup]
Add Source
Add Tags [include all guest beatmapper's names]

[Easy]
00:27:06 (1) - Add a Clap here?
00:35:33 (3) - ^
00:41:95 (2) - Add a finish at the beginning of the slider?
01:40:30 (6) - Add some claps?

[Normal]
00:33:67 (1) - Add a finish here?
01:16:70 (1,2) - Add finishes at the beginning of these?
02:34:50 (2) - Align with 1?
02:34:91 (3) - Align with 2?

[Hard]
00:26:65 (3) - Remove finish from 2 and add it to this one
01:12:78 (4) - Seems a bit like a ninja slider to me
02:58:71 (1) - Align with 6?

[Kingcobra Hard!]
Kingcobra's Hard?
03:12:36 (4,5,6) - orly?
Topic Starter
GbL
All done, ty animask~
PicoLo_old
~Star. ;)
Azure_Kite
Here's my mod

Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this

[Blue's EaZy]
No Problems found :)

[Normal]
00:26:44 (8) - Note here?
00:26:64 (9) - Note with finish here?

00:33:26 (4) - I think a finish would be suited more here than the next note
02:22:71 - A timing section here with increased hitsound audio would be great, or even better, maybe every 4 beats a louder timing section, so it sounds like it's reaching a climax?
No Problems found :)

[0_o]
No Problems found :)

[Hard]
01:10:71 (1) - This should probably be moved from under the slider
02:19:61 to 02:31:61 - In my opinion, this really should be mapped for hard, it was in Normal, and if done properly, it would add so much epic factor to the map

[Kingcobra Hard]
01:35:12 (7,8,9) - you do realise the spiral slider makes these almost impossible to see? I suggest at the very least making these a new combo
03:12:36 (4,5,6) - Ahahah, real clever, I like it
No Problems found, although I strongly suggest changing something with 01:35:12.

a Great song, good beatmaps. Pity Kingcobra Hard and Normal are the only ones that map the build up, but whatever. Starred for sure
greendamn
:o
Topic Starter
GbL
BAT's please! @_@
Andrea
Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions, you don't have to fix, your choice.
Orange: You don't have to fix too, but is better if you do it.
Red: You have to fix this for sure!

Starts Suggestions:

- Set a preview point on all diff's.

[Blue's EaZy]

Add more breaks. Remember it's an easy difficulty.

01:51:06 (5) - This note go outscreen. Change the placing please.

[Normal]

00:27:05 (1) - Too close from (7).
00:46:50 (1) - This spinner is too hard for a normal difficulty.
00:53:12 (1) - ^
01:47:74 (1) - ^

02:36:98 (1) - This is considered a jump for a normal.

[0_o]

Fine.

[Hard]

01:36:78 (1) - Too close from (4).

[Kingcobra Hard!]

01:53:01 (1) - Never start a spinner on blue lines! Start this on white line.
01:59:22 (1) - ^ Etc.
Topic Starter
GbL
Fixed, ty. :D
MaxwellDemon
Timing sounds fine for me, let's see...

[Blue's EaZy]

Remove unnecessary timing sections and the kiai time here~

A little too hard for EASY, but that's okay, I guess, hahaha.


[Normal]

Notes are not snapped to current timing! D:

03:22:08 (1,1) - Slow sliders doesn't really work here. :<

Finishes in this song sounds somewhat... unfitting... especially at the verses of the song. And I tend to really like finishes. XD

If I were the one to map it, I'd have the hitsounds fitting when there is a stronger drumbeat... like for example, at 00:36:99 (1,2,3), you can hear 1 and 3 have weak beats, but 2 has a strong beat, so I'd give this beat either a whistle or a finish then. Or even whistle-finish-whistle for that combo, hahaha.

I am not saying there is anything technically wrong with the hitsounds, but I am just giving some ideas, but at the moment, it seems a little everywhere to me. Partially the reason could be I could barely hear the beats since it is soft, but the finish is a very resounding hitsound, so I could hear that a bit too clearly.

For example:

00:33:68 (1) - I don't understand why this one has a finish, is it because she sang with the beat? Her voice in this beat sounds rather soft, in fact, the finish would sound better at 00:34:09 (2) because her voice seems to sound stronger here.

Your hitsounds in the chorus is a lot better. XD

Oh yeah, and also try playing around with volume change with the inherited timing sections!

There were a few points I'd imagine would sound fabulous if you got it decreasing the volume or increasing the volume.

02:57:67 (1) is such one point. If this slider gradually increased in volume until we can actually hear it going at the end, then that would really make the map great.

[0_o]

Not snapped here either. D:

Hmmm, I got the idea that the sliders should be at 0.5x at the beginning, because when the chorus starts with its current slider speeds, it felt really, really good (except that was the slider speed along, LOL!). It is also because the current slider velocity felt so out of place in the verse, but so perfect in the chorus. Of course, I understand how much of a pain it is to remap all the sliders and I am also aware you chose to use 0.5x in the slowest part of the song, so this is purely just a suggestion. :)

00:53:13 - Felt like there should be a note here. Purely a suggestion again.


[Hard]

Again, not snapped. XD XD

The stuff I said in normal applies here. :)

00:40:09 (1) - Okay, I am a mapper that used to LOVE using these so-called ninja spinners... and well, I'll have to say it and be a hypocrite. It seems out of place and you could probably do so much better than to drop a spinner like that. Besides, bonus is lower than a 1000... and I don't find it a good enough spinner to ignore that guideline. :( If you absolutely want to keep the spinners, try to make them at least 2000 bonus because it is placed right in the middle of a sea of notes.
00:46:71 (1) - ^
01:16:50 (3) - Slider sounds like if it was going on for too long, I'd end it in the white tick and make a second slider starting from the next red tick to where 01:17:75 (1) is. Just think it might work better, it is totally your chocie. XD
01:26:44 (1) - If I thought those spinners in the chorus wasn't exactly fitting, this spinner is totally out of place. No beat, no vocal, no nothing for the spinner to be there, in my opinion. It is such a short and sudden one too. :(
01:41:33 (1) - Ah, just refer to 00:40:09 XD
02:13:40 (3) - Why is this slider so fast when the others before it was slow? It felt like a fish out of water. :(
02:45:88 (4) - Slow slider feels out of place here, it wasn't even dragging out to follow the vocal, which is the only part that "dragged" in that part of the song. D:
02:49:40 (1) - Then I saw this and got what were you trying to do. XD XD It's a neat idea, but the section wasn't long enough for that. If there was a third slider, then that might work out fine. But even then, the first slider was a little dodgy at play. XD
02:57:47 (3) - New combo here~ XD
02:59:95 (3,1) - Felt really odd to have nothing between those two beats. D:
03:10:71 (1) - More ninja spinners~

[KC's Hard]

Unsnapped~~~ there are some notes here that won't snap automatically since they are 1/8th snapped, so check it thorough with AIMod (ctrl+shift+a). XD

03:18:57 (1,1,1) - Okay, whoa. um... whoa. Too many long spinners?! That'd be tiring to play, come on, KC, you must have honestly thought of something better than that? XD

Anyway, REALLY, REALLY nice set of maps. I hope you guys aren't discouraged by the length of this song, a lot of it is just the matter of preference and techniques that I think would help you guys at mapping your next song or whatever. :)

Gotta admit, really impressed. I'll come back to it once this post has been addressed. For now, have a very nice star. :D
0_o
I'll keep my diff as it is, just resnap to 1/8 for me ^_^

Also,
02:16:504 - move this timing section on top of 6, and adjust the volume to match the previous section.
Topic Starter
GbL

MaxwellDemon wrote:

Timing sounds fine for me, let's see...

[Blue's EaZy]

Remove unnecessary timing sections and the kiai time here~

A little too hard for EASY, but that's okay, I guess, hahaha.

Done.


[Normal]

Notes are not snapped to current timing! D:

03:22:08 (1,1) - Slow sliders doesn't really work here. :<

Finishes in this song sounds somewhat... unfitting... especially at the verses of the song. And I tend to really like finishes. XD

If I were the one to map it, I'd have the hitsounds fitting when there is a stronger drumbeat... like for example, at 00:36:99 (1,2,3), you can hear 1 and 3 have weak beats, but 2 has a strong beat, so I'd give this beat either a whistle or a finish then. Or even whistle-finish-whistle for that combo, hahaha.

I am not saying there is anything technically wrong with the hitsounds, but I am just giving some ideas, but at the moment, it seems a little everywhere to me. Partially the reason could be I could barely hear the beats since it is soft, but the finish is a very resounding hitsound, so I could hear that a bit too clearly.

For example:

00:33:68 (1) - I don't understand why this one has a finish, is it because she sang with the beat? Her voice in this beat sounds rather soft, in fact, the finish would sound better at 00:34:09 (2) because her voice seems to sound stronger here.

Your hitsounds in the chorus is a lot better. XD

Oh yeah, and also try playing around with volume change with the inherited timing sections!

There were a few points I'd imagine would sound fabulous if you got it decreasing the volume or increasing the volume.

02:57:67 (1) is such one point. If this slider gradually increased in volume until we can actually hear it going at the end, then that would really make the map great.


All done, i think. haha~


[Hard]

Again, not snapped. XD XD

The stuff I said in normal applies here. :)

00:40:09 (1) - Okay, I am a mapper that used to LOVE using these so-called ninja spinners... and well, I'll have to say it and be a hypocrite. It seems out of place and you could probably do so much better than to drop a spinner like that. Besides, bonus is lower than a 1000... and I don't find it a good enough spinner to ignore that guideline. :( If you absolutely want to keep the spinners, try to make them at least 2000 bonus because it is placed right in the middle of a sea of notes.
00:46:71 (1) - ^
01:16:50 (3) - Slider sounds like if it was going on for too long, I'd end it in the white tick and make a second slider starting from the next red tick to where 01:17:75 (1) is. Just think it might work better, it is totally your chocie. XD
01:26:44 (1) - If I thought those spinners in the chorus wasn't exactly fitting, this spinner is totally out of place. No beat, no vocal, no nothing for the spinner to be there, in my opinion. It is such a short and sudden one too. :(
01:41:33 (1) - Ah, just refer to 00:40:09 XD
02:13:40 (3) - Why is this slider so fast when the others before it was slow? It felt like a fish out of water. :(
02:45:88 (4) - Slow slider feels out of place here, it wasn't even dragging out to follow the vocal, which is the only part that "dragged" in that part of the song. D:
02:49:40 (1) - Then I saw this and got what were you trying to do. XD XD It's a neat idea, but the section wasn't long enough for that. If there was a third slider, then that might work out fine. But even then, the first slider was a little dodgy at play. XD
02:57:47 (3) - New combo here~ XD
02:59:95 (3,1) - Felt really odd to have nothing between those two beats. D:
03:10:71 (1) - More ninja spinners~


All done too.


[KC's Hard]

Unsnapped~~~ there are some notes here that won't snap automatically since they are 1/8th snapped, so check it thorough with AIMod (ctrl+shift+a). XD

[ I fix only 1/8th snapped. ]


03:18:57 (1,1,1) - Okay, whoa. um... whoa. Too many long spinners?! That'd be tiring to play, come on, KC, you must have honestly thought of something better than that? XD

Anyway, REALLY, REALLY nice set of maps. I hope you guys aren't discouraged by the length of this song, a lot of it is just the matter of preference and techniques that I think would help you guys at mapping your next song or whatever. :)

Gotta admit, really impressed. I'll come back to it once this post has been addressed. For now, have a very nice star. :D

0_o wrote:

I'll keep my diff as it is, just resnap to 1/8 for me ^_^

Also,
02:16:504 - move this timing section on top of 6, and adjust the volume to match the previous section.
Okay, 0_o. Done. xD

Tysm, MD. =D
Mafiamaster
Eazy~
Remove the unused timing sections starting at 136,716ms to the end of the map

Normal~
Notes aren't snapped.

There you go.
Topic Starter
GbL

Mafiamaster wrote:

Eazy~
Remove the unused timing sections starting at 136,716ms to the end of the map

Normal~
Notes aren't snapped.

There you go.
ty, ty.:)
Can you recheck?
Mafiamaster
Sure
greendamn
:)
Jarby
00:41:95 - Set audio preview. Get a new mp3. Comboburst is too big.

Easy:

Use kiai.
01:08:44 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - Remove, extend break.
01:13:61 - Remove break.
01:20:23 - Remove break.
01:26:85 - Remove break.

Normal:

00:58:50 (1) - Annoying half time slider.
01:08:44 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - Remove, add break.

0_o:

03:22:09 (1,2) - Move it up, it's cluttered and confusing.

I sort of felt sick modding the rest. I give up.
Topic Starter
GbL
Fixed, JarJar. :}
Linox_old
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Froslass

Linox wrote:

Poderiam rankiar logo isso .-.
Enquanto tiver problemas não dá né >:( :o
Linox_old

Blue Dragon wrote:

Linox wrote:

Poderiam rankiar logo isso .-.
Enquanto tiver problemas não dá né >:( :o

AHSUAHSUAHSUASH Eu digo por que esse mapa tá a um tempão no pending :P
anonymous_old
Normal
SPOILER

Excellent.

0_o
SPOILER

00:22:71 (6) : Finish hitsound on the first part of this slider.
00:46:09 (1) : New combo.
00:49:61 (1) : New combo.
01:00:99 (5) : New combo.
01:01:19 (1) : Remove new combo.

Hard
SPOILER

Super.

Kingcombra Hard
SPOILER

Excellent.

Nice beats, and the skin is nice. *star*
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