enlxodutls wrote:

Easy

00:01:497 (1) - http://puu.sh/1e0Lj , http://puu.sh/1e0LA 요런 식으로 노트정리를 깨끗하게해주시는게 좋을거같네요. 되도록이면 매핑라운드를 벗어나지 않게해주세요. Easy잖아요 ㅎ No fixed
00:13:147 (1) -, 00:15:477 (1) -, 00:18:827 (3) -, 00:24:798 (1) -, 00:28:147 (2) -, 00:29:458 (1) -, 00:31:788 (1) -, 00:35:283 (2) -, 00:42:128 (2)-00:45:768 (1) -, 00:55:963 (2) -, 01:02:079 (1) -^ 너무 깐깐하게 본걸지도 ;ㅅ; No fixed

00:17:807 (1,2) - 엇박자가 은근 예상하기 힘드네요. 슬라이더로 바꿔주시면 원활하게 칠 수 있겠다고 생각합니다. I'll think it

00:29:458 (1) - 리버스를 없애고 http://puu.sh/1e11y 식의 박자를넣는건 어떨까요. 왠지 슬라이더만있으면 밋밋한느낌이 듭니다. No fixed

00:52:759 (1) - ^ , http://puu.sh/1e151 처음에나오던 연속감있는 박자와는다르게 오히려 클라이맥스 부분에서 박자감이 떨어지는느낌이 듭니다. No fixed

00:57:419 (1) - ^ , http://puu.sh/1e16y 역시 마찬가지입니다. No fixed

01:02:079 (1) - ^ , http://puu.sh/1e18b 앞부분보다 한박자 더 줬습니다. 신나는노래니까요 No fixed

01:06:739 (1) - ^ , http://puu.sh/1e1ax 마찬가지입니다. No fixed

01:23:633 (1,3) - http://puu.sh/1e1cV 마지막부분에 한박자 더 주었습니다. 깔끔하게 노래를끝내고싶다면 안바꾸셔도되고, 여흥있는 끝을 No fixed

맺고싶으시면 저렇게 한번 넣어보세요.

1. 오프셋 조금 이상하네요 1488 써보세요
   
   [Easy]
   
   1. 00:18:235 (2) - 00:18:381 - 로 옮겨주세여 피니시가 여기씀
   2. 00:45:768 (1) - 보컬에 맞추시는게 더 어울릴듯
   [Normal]
   
   1. 00:19:555 (4) - 더 치기 편하게 1/1 슬라 놔주세여
   2. 00:47:516 (2) - ^
   3. 00:56:254 (1) - 갑자기 짧은 슬라에 애로우 2개붙은거 나오면 헷갈려요, 차라리 슬라 2개로 나눠주세요
   [Hard]
   
   1. 00:19:555 (4,5) - 슬라로 하시는게 더 어울릴듯
   2. 00:26:545 (3) - 예측하기 어려워요, 차라리 애로우 1개만 넣고 디스탠스 벌려주세요
   3. 00:32:225 (2) - 1/2 뒤로 밀고 여기에 서클 하나 추가?
   4. 00:46:351 - 크랩
   5. 00:48:099 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 리듬이 이상하네요, 1/1 슬라 2개 1/2 서클 2개 2번 반복해서 리듬 넣어보세요
   6. 01:01:788 (5,6) - 어색해요, 5부터 홀드슬라로 해주세요
   
   
   [Insane]
   
   1. 00:17:807 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - 점프 다시 짜주세요
   2. 00:22:176 (5) - 4번째에 멜로디 거의 없어요 애로우 하나 없애주세요
   3. 00:46:351 - 크랩

Star Stream wrote:

From my queue

아 언리밋 괜히 염 wwwww

[General]

1. 오프셋 조금 이상하네요 1488 써보세요 Yeap! Changed :d
   
   [Easy]
   
   1. 00:18:235 (2) - 00:18:381 - 로 옮겨주세여 피니시가 여기씀 Fixed
   2. 00:45:768 (1) - 보컬에 맞추시는게 더 어울릴듯 No change
   [Normal]
   
   1. 00:19:555 (4) - 더 치기 편하게 1/1 슬라 놔주세여 Changed
   2. 00:47:516 (2) - ^ No change
   3. 00:56:254 (1) - 갑자기 짧은 슬라에 애로우 2개붙은거 나오면 헷갈려요, 차라리 슬라 2개로 나눠주세요 Changed
   [Hard]
   
   1. 00:19:555 (4,5) - 슬라로 하시는게 더 어울릴듯 No change
   2. 00:26:545 (3) - 예측하기 어려워요, 차라리 애로우 1개만 넣고 디스탠스 벌려주세요 I'll think about it :3
   3. 00:32:225 (2) - 1/2 뒤로 밀고 여기에 서클 하나 추가? Fixed
   4. 00:46:351 - 크랩 I'll think about it :3
   5. 00:48:099 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 리듬이 이상하네요, 1/1 슬라 2개 1/2 서클 2개 2번 반복해서 리듬 넣어보세요 I'll think about it :3
   6. 01:01:788 (5,6) - 어색해요, 5부터 홀드슬라로 해주세요 Changed
   
   
   [Insane]
   
   1. 00:17:807 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - 점프 다시 짜주세요
   2. 00:22:176 (5) - 4번째에 멜로디 거의 없어요 애로우 하나 없애주세요 ... Fixed
   3. 00:46:351 - 크랩 I'll think about it :3

맷잡으세요 맷 What is MAT? i don't know that :3

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Underflow ~

As per your request ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[Insane]

1. 00:10:224 (3,2) - Stack is looks better. Move 00:11:390 (2) to 192, 228

[S.S]

Change to what he said :3

1. Increase Stack Leniency at least 0.3.
2. 01:06:730 - Missing Add finish to here.

[Normal]

1. 00:49:254 (1) - Remove short new combo. Okay

[Easy]

1. AR,OD-1 much better with play. Changed
2. 00:43:138 (3) - Remove this circle,make more easy playable. Fixed

That's all ~ Awesome map and song ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

Kawayi Rika wrote:

OK ~ Looks much better now ~

Here you go :3

Star Stream wrote:

Star Stream wrote:

Star Stream wrote:

BeatofIke wrote:

A self-pop XD. Nice picture btw! It reminds me of Time Warp XD.

Star Stream wrote:

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Sorry, i missing a point ~

Pls fix Inconsistent Artist/TitleUnicode and call me ~

Sonnyc wrote:

Star is only yours and mine (Which is a trap)

those wrote:

All this sounds like is a 17% speed increase. Where did you find this/how did you remix this to make it Nightcore?

Andrea wrote:

This is terrible.

Andrea wrote:

I didn't meant to be rude, sorry if it looked like that

Andrea wrote:

but this mix it's pretty bad, it ruins the true meaning of Nightcore Mix.

Hope you understand what I really mean

Sonnyc wrote:

Maybe you should explain who HE is, whom gave you the mp3. :3

Dark_Ai wrote:

OH MY GOD! O.O

why.. DD:

ztrot wrote:

I could add in a bassline and a drum filler wouldn't help much but maybe XD

Garven wrote:

If you go with the remix from ztrot, when you update the map, try and fit in a spinner in the Easy and S.S to allow for score variance. If not, well, do that anyway. q:

terametis wrote:

Source: Nekokoi ~ Nekogami Sama to Nekomimi no Tatari ~

Although it is not important, please adjust before going to rank :3
go go~~<3

ztrot wrote:

like i have no good samples for this I would just call it a speed up ver and be done with it ..... all i have is techno vsts and samples.

XinCrin wrote:

This version is not Nightcore Mix, mix nightcore is Increased pitch of songs songs thecno eg, ztrot said to change the title of the map to Speed ​​Up instead of Nightcore Mix, because that's what a speed up and not nightcore.

Garven wrote:

[General]
That BG is really really really bright. Blindingly so. Combined with really light blending combo colors, it's pretty hard on the eyes. Changed
Tick rate 2 fits this song best. Hmm... Changed

[Easy]
Add a spinner somewhere so that there are differences in scores. Changed 01:23:073 ~ 01:24:821 to spinner
00:50:876 (2) - This play better on 00:51:021 - Fixed

[Insane]
00:32:373 (3,4,5) - This is an awkward spot for a 1/4 triple. It would make more sense at 00:32:737 - , but I would prefer none at all since there isn't really anything in the music that would prompt this rhythm. Hmm... i think it is okay. No change
00:33:247 (2,3) - Same thing going on here. Awkwardly placed. Removed this and some changed
00:37:035 (3,4,5) - ^ Better placed at 00:36:817 - Changed
00:59:180 (3) - Repeat is covered by the hitburst from 00:58:306 (4) - Fixed
01:09:961 (3,4,5) - Awkward 1/4s. better placed at 01:09:888 - Changed
01:14:623 (3,4,5) - ^ @ 01:14:550 - Fixed. same as 01:09:961

Garven wrote:

[Insane]
00:37:327 - Add a circle Changed 00:37:035 (4) to repeat slider

p3n wrote:

[Easy]
For the slow SV in this map I'd recommend using Tickrate 1. The many ticks on the sliders don't seem necessary (Tickrate 1 covers all beats on sliders with the current BPM) Changed



[Normal]
looking good~ O_o



[Hard]
00:26:546 (3) - 2x repeat slider plays horrible here. You could remove 1 repeat and add a circle on 00:26:983 - instead OR use 2 non-repeat sliders. Hmm... i think now is better. No change
01:01:802 (5) - slider feels out of place. The drum actually starts on 01:01:948 - and is just a triplet. I recommend using only a short 1x repeat slider (remove 2 repeats from (5) and move it foward by 1/2) You should also try to keep the vocal follow active here by mapping 01:01:656 - and 01:01:802 - properly Changed back



[Insane]
Nice map. There is only one BIG issue I have with it: Most streams are almost silenced. Streams in a song like this should ALWAYS be audible. If you can't hear the stream being played you made a mistake placing a stream - simple. This is NOT a design issue it also affects gameplay alot (especially noticable in this map). You can even hear the beats for all of the notes I mention below to be very similar to your custom clap sound. If you have a (very very) good reason why your streams are soft/silenced please tell me, otherwise please add the claps. Check 01:01:802 (5,6,7,8,1) - on 'S.S' difficulty for reference.
I can't found about it, and i don't know why i change this. if i made a mistake placing a streams or it was big issue, MAT would not give bubble to this beatmap (or BAT would say about it when popped bubble). Anyway, i don't agree with some in your modding. Fixed all

00:32:373 (3,4) - add claps to both
00:33:903 (5,6,7) - add claps to each
00:36:889 (2,3) - ^
00:43:300 (4,5) - ^
01:01:948 (6,7) - ^
01:06:610 (6,7) - ^
01:09:888 (3,4) - ^
01:14:550 (3,4) - ^
01:22:781 (4,5,6,7) - ^
00:59:617 (4,5) - ^




Cute set. Issues are easy and fast to fix. I'll ask Garven if I can rebubble this after you applied the mod!
~

Ranking Criteria wrote:

Hitsounds from hitcircles and sliders must be audible. These provide feedback for the player, and having them silent in a rhythm game doesn't make much sense. If you don't like the default sounds, then find replacements rather than silencing notes. You can use hitsounds from the Custom Hitsound Library or easily find others online. Lowering the volume of a few notes to provide a dampened effect is usually fine, but complete silence is always unacceptable. The end of a spinner (or even the entire spinner) the sliding sound of a slider, and the end of a slider can be silent, but only do it if it makes sense. Finally, you cannot silence both slider ticks and slider slides together.

Underflow wrote:

Auuu... Sorry for said rude. i didn't mean to say it like that.

Garven wrote:

[S.S]
00:57:432 (1) - Since you took that pattern, I find ctrl + g on this flows into the next pattern better since it's kind of easing back from crazy-ass jumps, haha. Changed XD

p3n wrote:

[S.S]
You have to add the missing hitsounds to the triplets (SC1 claps with a slightly lowered volume works perfect). It is basically the continuation of the pattern you used here: 01:01:802 (5,6,7,8,1) - Hitsound problem is all fixed

00:06:004 (3,4) - add claps to make the triplet reflect the beatpattern in the song (+lower the volume for the two notes a bit if you feel the claps are too diminant)
00:31:499 (5) - Try ctrl+g here to make the flow more consistent (trust the mouse-only player ) I think now is okay. No change
00:53:207 (3) - overlapping the hp-bar. You should move the whole combo 00:52:770 (1,2,3,4,5) - a bit down No change
00:43:300 (2,3) - add SC1 claps here
01:06:610 (3,4) - add SC1 claps here, too (probably best with slightly lower volume)

Fun map!

Garven wrote:

[Easy]
Tick rate 1... orz It's best to set the tick rate according to the music, and musically this fits best with rate 2. Well, if you do change this back, keep in mind I'll have to pop again (maybe call p3n back but yeah). Keep this in mind for your other maps. Auu... Fixed

[Hard]
00:05:858 (3,2) - Kinda ugly overlap Hmm... 00:05:858 (3) is no relation to 00:06:732 (2) and i think it is okay. No change
[Insane]
00:59:617 (4,5,1) - Those claps intended? Changed to whistle
01:01:948 (6,7,1) - ^ ^
01:17:245 (1) - This plays better with the tail facing down and to the left Okay, Changed

[S.S]
The HP overlap is fine.

Garven wrote:

[Easy]
Tick rate 1... orz It's best to set the tick rate according to the music, and musically this fits best with rate 2. Well, if you do change this back, keep in mind I'll have to pop again (maybe call p3n back but yeah). Keep this in mind for your other maps.

p3n wrote:

Garven wrote:

[Easy]
Tick rate 1... orz It's best to set the tick rate according to the music, and musically this fits best with rate 2. Well, if you do change this back, keep in mind I'll have to pop again (maybe call p3n back but yeah). Keep this in mind for your other maps.

Yeah ok...Tickrate 1 would've been enough imo (as the BPM is doubled anyway) and it would've prevented the ticks overlapping the slider endings but it was not a ranking issue.

Garven loves Tickrate 2! ♥

p3n loves Bubbles!

Garven wrote:

Boop.

Flask wrote:

Gratz o.o

B2IN wrote:

축하해요~

-Kirito wrote:

랭크 축하~

LQA20Ans wrote:

축하드려요

Kaburagi Kotetsu wrote:

고생끝에 드디어 랭크되셨네요! 축하드립니다! 그런의미로 이지겟난..

Sonnyc wrote:

ㅊㅋㅊㅋ

W h i t e wrote:

추카드려요!!!

Stefan wrote:

C-C-C-C-Combo Breaker!!
Congrats!

Aqo wrote:

w...wait... what?

why did you speedup this song? seriously lol what

Aqo wrote:

and if you're already speeding it up why not just use a tempo change, or did you actually WANT this high pitch? >.<

Underflow wrote:

I don't know why it is high pitch.