Andrea wrote:

[Snep's Insane]

01:42:751 (4,5,6,7) - This stream doesn't follow anything. Yes it does. Maybe you are modding without headphones :3? I guess you cannot hear it properly. I suggest that you remove the stream and hear the song carefully at that point

Andrea wrote:

[Hard]

01:38:514 (1) - Do not start spinners on blue tick if not necessary. It is. I added that spinner there to follow the melody. Don't you hear..? Adding spinners at blue ticks isn't a big deal tho.
01:45:842 (1) - ^ ^

[Insane]

00:19:012 (1) - This slider repeat might be hidden. I testplayed it and it can be clearly seen.
00:22:676 (2,3,4,5) - This is really unexpected, better making a slider instead. That would make my insane more easier than it is.. Also, it is not unexpected. Everyone who testplayed this song didn't have problems with this stream so I don't get it :l there are other streams in the map. This shouldn't be a problem..
00:24:738 (7,8) - Why random jump here? Make the spacing equal. Okay, fine. Removed.
00:30:172 (6) - New combo due to the music and snap change. Nope, I'm following the vocals, that's why I didn't add a new combo here.
00:30:859 (1) - Remove new combo. ^
00:32:004 (6,7,8,9) - I highly suggest to make a slider here too. I don't agree Same reason as before.
00:38:340 (1) - Remove new combo, it's not needed at all. Fine
00:51:110 (2,3) - I think there's something wrong here with the snapping. Uhmm..? Nothing.. it's fine o.o
01:08:793 (4) - New combo due to the music change. Nah it is not necessary. Both ways (yours and mine) are fine, but I prefer mine to avoid too much new combos.
01:10:683 (5) - ^ ^
01:43:209 (1) - Remove new combo. K
01:43:896 (2) - New combo due to the music and snap change. ^
02:00:842 (1) - Remove new combo. That would be inconsistent with my other combos (00:22:447 (1))
02:01:071 (2) - New combo due to the music change. ^

Insane needs much work, sorry but I'm popping this.

00:22:676 (2,3,4,5) - This is really unexpected, better making a slider instead.

• I mean, if you want to make your map readable and better, you'd better replace first 1/6 stream in this map (00:22:676 (2,3,4,5) - ) with a repeating slider, first 1/3 stream (00:23:738 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ) with something mixed with sliders. This will show the player that this map has some 1/6's and 1/3's, and the player will be warned and not confused.

1. 00:22:676 (2,3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/460281
2. 00:23:738 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/460283
   After these "warnings" every 1/6 or 1/3 stream in this map will be clear and readable.
   
   Though I'd suggest you to space 1/3 at 1.1x (http://puu.sh/1ekI8); 1/6 at 0.5-0.6x (http://puu.sh/1ekIo) to make it even more disintiguishable.

grumd wrote:

What about 00:02:753 (1,2) - then?
00:04:585 (1) - and 00:02:753 (1,2) - are based on the same melody, but are mapped differently. Choose the one way please.

Anyway, this map low looks much better, good job!

Snepif wrote:

Felicitaciones amor lo hiciste >u<! te amo!

Mercurial wrote:

Felicitaciones señorita

[Yue] wrote:

yey Bubble!!!!!!! \:D/

Animo Kei! > <

Armin wrote:

[General]

The standard hitsounds, especially the soft clap sounds really out of place in the song. Consider to add some custom ones: I added a custom clap from one of those packs~

Clap Packs:

SPOILER

(Link 1) (Link 2)
(Link 3)

Snare Packs:

SPOILER

(Link 1) (Link 2)
(Link 3)

Cymbal Pack:

SPOILER

(Link)

Percussion Pack:

SPOILER

(Link)

*I think it would be better to add a Easy, the spread is not that good I stated before that I can't add a easy now because I lack of time atm. When I made this map I had time but now I don't. Also, I think it's too late to do this. :<

[Normal]

00:38:416 (1,1) - 01:54:430 (1,1) - I have to disagree with these parts, since the recovery time is too short and this is supposed to be the easiest diff of the mapset Yea but if I leave a longer space between the next note after the spinner end the diff will be toooooo easy. I made this normal very simple to make it suitable for the map's spread, but making changes like these to simplify it even more will make the diff ridiculously easy. It's a normal uhm.. "light" diff, not a easy diff.
01:48:476 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1) - I don't see a logic reason to keep all these new combos. Wow you're right. I don't know why I did this. It isn't even consistent with the rest of the combos.
00:02:753 (1,2,3) - I'd try a new rhythm the 1/1 one with a 1/3 rhythm sounds simple but too weird. Try something moar catchy Hmm? I did this like this to keep the simple rhythm. I don't want to add short sliders and stuff like that. I just want to avoid doing things that may confuse newbies. Keeping the rhythm constant and consistent is more important imo. (I'm not sure if this is what you were reffering to. I didn't understand at all)

[Hard]

00:02:753 (1,2) - I really feel the doublet here, I don't think you have to simplify the rhythm here I just want to simplify this diff in general to avoid making it exactly like the insane diff. It's just a way to variate the rhythm between the insane and hard diff.
00:22:447 (1,2) - I feel these notes off Why? o.o they fit perfectly with the music.
00:47:217 (1) - this little jump just brokes the clear spacing in my opinion Hmmm right. I made the jump a bit more bigger and distinguishable.
01:23:743 (1) - Make this end on the previous red tick I made it end on the next red tick. I think you wrote this wrong~

[Insane]

01:52:140 (1) - I'd make this end earlier in order to add a doublet Done~

Mercurial wrote:

I'd like to know where is Armin.

Garven wrote:

Long time no see. Veeery long time. Nice to see you again around here~

[General]
Kind of weird that the video starts long after, and runs out before the song does... That's because the opening (video) starts at that point and at the start in the anime you only see a preview of a chapter and that would be meaningless for a map. That's why I removed that part from the video. Here's a example of how it officially looks in the anime.

[Normal]
00:40:118 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for a Normal. Might be best to map through the spinner with something like this: Fine!

01:18:247 (1) - This part feels so... bland. There's some rich rhythms that you can follow with sliders, but instead just went with a 1/1/1/1 approach. Think you can spruce it up a bit? Done :3 I hope it's better now!
01:34:735 (4,5) - There's such a strong emphasis on the offbeats during this part... going with the beat feels wrong. Rearranged this too.

[Hard]
00:02:753 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This part feels really... claustrophobic. Everything feels really slow and squished up during a part where you really want to just start boogieing down and dancing about like a maniac. I like the slowdown because it gives a slow start and feel before the song starts to become more catchy and epic
00:23:238 (4,5) - This would be better as a stack I agree
00:27:882 (2,3,4,5) - A minor thing, but if you could go through the map and see if you can move things around a little bit so that there aren't these tiny overlaps, it would make the map look much more clean. Mmm I didn't notice this. I don't like it so I fixed them all.
00:55:919 (1,2,3,4) - This was weird to play since you had just followed the vocals at 00:54:316 (1,2,3,4,5) - I changed this a lot.
01:25:575 (1) - Too soon after a spinner for a Hard. I'd give about 1 beat instead of a 1/2. That's more for an Insane level of map. Hmm right.
01:48:705 (1) - ^ In this case I don't agree because this part is slow and I just added a slider after it so it shouldn't be a problem. I tried to change the rhythm here to avoid this but it doesn't sound right to me. The only way I like is this one.
01:48:705 (1) - Aaand everything is back to squished form again. Doesn't feel right to me. But I like to make the player feel that this part is less epic and catchy than the other ones. I also think the melody feels slower and more calm. I want to keep this :<
01:56:033 (1) - Soon after spinner Fine, I changed this too-.

[Insane]
This has the same squished nature as Hard did. Doesn't look or play well to me. ;__________;

http://puu.sh/1po7B

Garven wrote:

[Snep's Insane]
OD +1
AR -1 maybe. Feels too fast, but it makes your clusters of ugh like at 00:30:401 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - kind of hard to read.
Otherwise this is nice. He doesn't agree with these two suggestions because AR helps to read patterns and about OD: he said it is not a good idea to add more OD because his diff has 1/6 and 1/3 patterns.

Kei wrote:

[Snep's Insane]
OD +1
AR -1 maybe. Feels too fast, but it makes your clusters of ugh like at 00:30:401 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - kind of hard to read.
Otherwise this is nice. He doesn't agree with these two suggestions because AR helps to read patterns and about OD: he said it is not a good idea to add more OD because his diff has 1/6 and 1/3 patterns.

Garven wrote:

[Normal]
00:38:645 (3,1) - Hm... might be better if these weren't so close. Maybe have the 1 and 2 ctrl H'd and repositioned. Should work a bit better. Ok I repositioned them. They make simmetry with the previous notes.

[Hard]
01:23:743 (1,1) - You uh, didn't change this note after the spinner. lol I'm not sure why I did this. Fixed
01:47:216 (1) - Maybe instead of using spinners, mapping through them? I can't bubble a map with notes this soon after spinners in a Hard, sorry. Fine. I changed it. I changed the spacing between (1) and (2) a little bit to avoid confusion since (2) is at a blue tick and placing (1) with distance snap makes this part look weird and difficult to read.

Garven wrote:

[Snep]
The problem with the OD reasoning is that if people are getting 100s for that, the problem is with the map's readability rather than the difficulty settings. The AR I don't mind as much as the overly-easy OD in comparison. Kind of trivializes the map.

Kei wrote:

and yeah congratulate Snep too ;____; It's his first ranked guest diff (if I'm not wrong).