-[NYAN]- wrote:

喵~小峰峰啾个~

Easy

easy用1/2编辑吧，能好些

00:02:353 (2) - 这个滑条第二个点出格子了没问题么... 有問題么
00:11:953 (1,2) - 节奏感觉怪怪的，像下面那样比较好吧 no

00:25:553 - 少个note的感觉...
00:28:753 - ^ 都故意的
00:34:353 (1) - 这样修改节奏上会好点 不喜歡這樣的

00:55:553 (3) - 喂喂，这个明显出格子了吧 一点問題都沒有吧
01:22:753 (1,2,3) - 推荐改成下面这个 no

Normal

00:10:353 (4) - 挪到296|208 也太nazi了吧 總之fix
00:03:953 (1) - 滑条按照这样改改吧，红点位置注意就行，节奏 no

00:25:153 (2) - 弄好看点，包好 . 已經不錯了
00:47:953 (3) - 挪到492|136 k
01:14:353 (1) - 旋转下，和下一个note保持位置上的一致，比如旋转18°然后挪到412|372 不
01:15:953 (1,2) - 像这样 k

01:23:953 (1) - 尾巴加上finish？ no


Insane

00:08:753 (1) - 又出格子了 你去test看看就知道
00:17:553 (4) - nc no


差不多就这样了:3

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Flask ~

Mod time for my Lucky Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

1. I guess source should be : Shinryaku!! Ika Musume
   (you can check with video). k

[Insane]

1. HP-1 is better. k
2. 01:13:053 (4) - Move 1 grid up,looks better. k
3. 01:14:353 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make more curved stream,same as 01:12:753 (1,2,3,4,5). k
4. 01:15:953 (1,2,3,4,5) - I guess change to straight is better. k

[Normal]

1. 00:09:553 (3,4) - Make more blanket.動了下> >

That's all ~ Not bad map for newbies mapper ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Recheck ~ no kds pls ~

[Regou's Hard]

1. 00:13:453 (4) - Still no remove this circle.

MMzz wrote:

Hellooooooo.

[Hard]
00:07:353 (2,3) - Make this all a 1/3 kickback slider. Like I told Flask in the insane this part is 1/3 and needs to be mapped as such. You can hear that 3 is extremely late because it's not snapped to 1/3 beats. Alright,fixed (Although it sounds really weird to me, I checked it and it's really a 1/3 rhythm...orz)
01:24:653 (4) - This slider has no purpose because it's landing on no beat, just make a circle instead. I want to show the 'lasting' feeling... it just sound so odd if I use a circle instead.Sorry.

Look this over and call me back. And I can give you your bubble back.

MMzz wrote:

Hellooooooo.

[Insane]
00:07:353 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This is 1/3 not 1/4 and should be mapped as such. Look at the taiko for example, it's in 1/3. (Also listen at 25% you'll hear it) k
00:34:353 (1) - This needs to be 1/3 aswell [/color]


[Easy]
01:24:353 (1) - This slider needs to end on the blue tick! That's where the last beat in the music lands. [/color]

[Taiko Oni]
00:23:053 (82,83) - Delete these two notes then make 00:22:953 (81) - a finisher. You really should follow the powerful vocal section right here and this resembles it perfectly.
00:35:853 (152,153) - ^ Do the same thing here.
01:01:353 (255) - Make this a k? Will establish some better flow for the 3/4 beat.
01:07:753 (14) - ^

[Taiko Muzukashii]
00:11:953 (14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29) - I don't think dddk is a good patternt o use for muzukashii, especially on 1/3. Try doing a simple type of pattern like: dddd kkkk dddd kkkk. Would work nicely.

Look this over and call me back. And I can give you your bubble back.

Andrea wrote:

~Regou's Hard~

01:23:453 (3) - This slider looks ugly compared to the rest of the map. Change to a nice slider :3

Just that and I'll go ahead with ranking this (:

winber1 wrote:

um... wtf is 00:11:953 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
isn't this supposed to be snapped to 1/3....???

?? >_>

inb4rerank

Farex wrote:

winber1 wrote:

um... wtf is 00:11:953 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
isn't this supposed to be snapped to 1/3....???

?? >_>

inb4rerank

Confirming.

Andrea wrote:

Now you guys made me confused.

Andrea wrote:

Now you guys made me confused.

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