lkx_shore wrote:

mod from my queue

General
一卡牧师妹！mod For 打着爽

Hard
OD7→6 不了o3o
00:12:653 (3,4) - 这2连打起来不舒服 對啊可是感覺這樣比較合節奏
00:14:486 (2,3,4) - ...读图困难 這就是這首歌裡頭節奏的挑戰嘛~這首歌節奏很複雜XD

lkx_shore wrote:

mod from my queue

General
一卡牧师妹！mod For 打着爽

Insane
OD8→7 好
00:07:553 (3) - 这里感觉是5连打 wa 好點子 總算救了我>.<
00:07:853 (4) - 到红线停,然后下一个白线加个note会舒服点 ^
00:11:953 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 要是要摆note，建议叠起来，但我还是倾向于滑条1/3 這個就還好了
00:15:153 (3) - 从这里开始用X XXX X XXXXX X接到00:16:753会舒服点好
00:53:953 (2,3) - 用滑条会舒服点ˊˋ故意的嘛 跟前面一樣就不好玩了
01:08:503 (2) - 间距太短了ok
01:18:053 (4) - 这里是白线起，3连到红线ok

Normal
01:24:553 (2) - 弄个2连吧?略難233

-Bakari- wrote:

Ika Musume invades my queue o.o

do not open it <3

[General]
it feels a bit empy without slider tick rate 2 sure

[Insane]
i should say that AR9 is quite fast for this diff. i suggest you to try AR8 because it fits better with SV and BPMOK ;-;
00:01:953 (5) - how about something that will follow vocals a bit closer? examplelol good!
00:36:153 (6) - this antijump feels too sudden. try to use 1/2 slider instead of (5)and after this it probably will be easier to fix spacing and etc.. examplechange it in another way :3 thanks for give me suggestion
01:24:353 (3) - your patterns are cute but how about making them a bit closer to vocals? example (note: end of slider should be quiter if you want to aply this suggestion)mute the slider end and change like what you've said xD

[Normal]
it's ok to make this diff a bit harder and a bit more balanced >.</ try AR and OD +1OD+1 only, AR+1 is so Hard and I don't like to do like this :\
00:11:553 (5) - this emptyspace between slider and circle feels odd. i'd like to remove (5) and add reverse to (4) instead example+flow ideasure~
00:23:353 (3,4) - some more 1/2s would be good (it also won't really make your diff much harder because it's just some more sliders) exampleovo good!
00:56:353 (6) - i agree that consistant flow is important but rhythm is more important. try my example (slider converted to single circle with new combo)okay~
00:57:153 (1) - i'd like to offer you some sort of hard but enjoyable pattern. not example \:D/lol orz
01:02:353 - i think some sort of echo is hearable here so it worth a try to map it examplegood!

[Easy]
00:12:353 (2,4) - i think it's better to make beats at 00:12:753 - 00:14:353 - louder. you can try to make custom slidertick (clap = slidertick) for this slider or try my examplechange :\
00:17:853 (2) - mhm.. sounds nice but not really fits with easiest diff. :/ try remove it and put circle at 00:17:953 o.ook~
00:21:553 (5) - how about new combo? it fits here, imo:3 sure

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
De geso! ~

Gabe wrote:

Make sure to full submit after these changes, after downloading, I had to update the Easy difficulty.
Your map is pretty well constructed. There's nothing wrong with the mapping.. If I was actually a MAT, I would have waited until you get 12 SP and then I would have bubbled this map o3o! I'll wait you to bubble this o3o!!
There's no spinners on every difficulties D: :3 That's not a big deal

Ika Musume invades mine too

do not open this <3

CREVETTE-SAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN!

[Easy]
Pretty well constructed (:Thanks :3
•00:10:353 (4) - This slider could be curved more, don't you think? By moving the second and third dot it may be better. Try to improve some!
•00:12:353 (2,3,4) - I swear there's missing some claps here. Keep the consistency by adding claps at 00:12:353, 00:13:153, 00:13:953, 00:14:753.oops! Forget it ._.
•00:17:953 (2) - I'm hearing a whistle here and at 00:17:553 on the song. Can you add whistles here? :3 sure :3
•00:40:353 (4) - Make sure to add a clap here to keep the consistency with all your claps. forget it again D: /me slaps myself

[Normal]
•00:02:353 (3) - You could add a new combo here because of the vocal. sure o3o
•00:30:753 (5) - Add a clap here to keep the consistency with your claps. okay~
•01:20:753 (1) - Add a new combo here since you have the same pattern at 01:22:353 (1) - but you adding a new combo. So it will be good if you add a new combo here. added!
•01:22:753 - Add a clap here, same reason as above. :3^

[Insane]
I love insanes difficulties :v :3
•00:02:353 (1) - Because of the vocal, it's better if you add a new combo here and delete the new combo on the next note. ok~
•00:03:353 (6) - To make a better flow, delete this slider and copy/paste the previous slider. After that, do Ctrl+H & Ctrl+J and move the slider to x:168 y:192 and also, move this circle 00:03:753 (7) - to x:69 y:172 try to improve some o3o
•00:07:153 (1) - Add a new combo here and delete the new combo to the next note. okay~
•00:23:353 (7) - This slider should be the same as the previous slider (6) good <3
•00:58:653 (7) - That sliders form... You should try to make it more curved by moving the second dot. lol move some anyway
•01:08:486 (2) - I wonder why this circle is on 1/3.. You should put it back to 1/4 like the other here > 01:02:153 (2) - . I was thinking this's not same as previous rhythm but it's a good way to put it on 1/4 rhythm~

wantuole wrote:

迟来的mod :3
来自我的队列
[General]
结尾音效处理手法不一样，hard和insane是采取消音、 easy和nor则是加了音效
建议统一手法处理。大概弄了一下
[easy]
fine
00:02:353 (2) - slider的圈太多部分超过屏幕，换个位子 這個是完全沒有問題的, 微超出網格不大影響遊戲
00:35:753 (2,3,4) - 这种衔接有点太难了对于easy 行
01:17:553 (4) - 超出网格了 最好进去点，或者直接ctrl+r 同前面
[Nor]
00:03:953 (1,2) - ^ ^
00:45:553 (3) - 不太对的鼠标走向 這個就沒什麼修改的必要了

SPOILER

00:53:553 (1,2,3,4) - 音乐很突出 表现的也明显些。不要一路dis snap 我覺得這樣還不錯
00:57:953 (3) - 略微上面点，3 和之前的1一个高度 短期內是不會改了 除非很多人吐

[insane]
00:09:553 (2,3,4,5) - 毫无必要的改变dis snap。而且4→5是3→4的3倍距离 做個跳無傷大雅啊
00:24:753 (1,2) - 肯定是美观的，但根据1的形状2不应该是会出现在这的 所以1的红点还是去了 或者换其他造型 一直再等人吐這個orz 修了一下。
00:40:753 (1) - 很稀疏节奏的地方，堆叠的话是没问题，但在note很稀疏的地方用完全遮盖的回跳梗整体看来很空洞 :3 是有點奇怪但還能read
00:49:953 (6,1) - 太远了.6旋转-45度，略微调整下 不會的

SPOILER

00:58:353 (6,7) - 7的开始在蓝线了,尽可能的slider在白线开始更好 想要更密集的话蓝线加个note即可。配音樂的

就这些了 祝你好运

-Bakari- wrote:

Ika Musume invades my queue o.o

do not open it <3

Pink Agate wrote:

Easy

00:11:953 (1) - 去掉这个circle。00:12:353 (2) - 这这个silder加个回转，这样打起来更舒服
00:12:353 (2) - 去掉这个circle，将此slider拉至00:15:153 (1) - 的白线上
00:47:553 (5) - 这里考虑一下换其他的note？例如给这个00:47:553 (5) - silder加个回转，接下来放2个circle加一个slider，懒得截图了
01:24:153 (3) - 去掉slider换个spinner试试？spinner可以在01:24:153 (3) - 这里结束


Normal

00:04:953 (2) - 向左移动一些，太近了
00:22:353 (2,3,4,5) - 这一窜排法在normal里或许不太合适，降低一下这里的难度，或者考虑多放silder
01:11:753 (2) - 靠的太近slider，移出一些
01:24:553 (2) - 去掉这个circle，将01:23:953 (1) - 的silder拉个回转至01:23:953 (1) - 更好些 k


Insane

00:59:353 (1) - 放减速绿线有点奇怪，试试还原成1.0的速度，在右上角节拍1/4换成1/8，增加slider的回转数目，然后你发现好玩的来了 让那个回转的siler高速起来吧

抱歉我的MOD估计对你没多大作用

• 
  "re" 意思是 "remove"
  黑色 只是建議,不喜歡可以略過~OAO
  藍色 是要討論的問題
  紅色 是unrankable

[general]

1. 奇怪,明明有影片 可是咱在MOD Easy,Normal,Hard,時沒影片跑出來 insane卻跑出來了!!! loool ?

[Easy]

1. 00:17:953 (2) - 總覺得這有點怪怪的 ... 突然發現原來這裡的sound是在藍線 , 那要不要乾脆re這個note?
2. 01:09:553 (1) - 第2個點 x:368 y:348 ?~
3. 01:11:153 (3) - 第2個點 x:400 y:148
4. 01:15:953 (3) - NC~

[Normal]

1. 00:03:953 (1) - 紅點在x:96 y:48

[Regou's Hard]

1. 00:22:953 (3) - 第3個點 x:184 y:224 ?~
2. 01:24:653 (4) - 第2個點 x:228 y:84 , 第3個點 x:308 y:96 ~?

[Insane]

1. 00:11:953 (1,2,3,4) - 這可能會讓人當成是1/4 因為間距跟00:07:653 (5,6) - 很像
2. 00:12:753 (1,2,3) - ^

l1106188 wrote:

早灣 >w<
抱歉 咱來遲了 ;w; .. 完全忘了這件事情 ...
Request from In-game.

• 
  "re" 意思是 "remove"
  黑色 只是建議,不喜歡可以略過~OAO
  藍色 是要討論的問題
  紅色 是unrankable

[general]

1. 奇怪,明明有影片 可是咱在MOD Easy,Normal,Hard,時沒影片跑出來 insane卻跑出來了!!! loool ? 我每次都忘記這個QAQ fixed!!!

[Easy]

1. 00:17:953 (2) - 總覺得這有點怪怪的 ... 突然發現原來這裡的sound是在藍線 , 那要不要乾脆re這個note? 刪掉了TAT
2. 01:09:553 (1) - 第2個點 x:368 y:348 ?~ 好!
3. 01:11:153 (3) - 第2個點 x:400 y:148 ^ (不過我是直接複製上面再搬過來所以不確定座標>_>)
4. 01:15:953 (3) - NC~ OK!

[Normal]

1. 00:03:953 (1) - 紅點在x:96 y:48 好OAO

[Regou's Hard]

1. 00:22:953 (3) - 第3個點 x:184 y:224 ?~ 我幫Regou修了=w=
2. 01:24:653 (4) - 第2個點 x:228 y:84 , 第3個點 x:308 y:96 ~? ^

[Insane]

1. 00:11:953 (1,2,3,4) - 這可能會讓人當成是1/4 因為間距跟00:07:653 (5,6) - 很像 改成1.2x了~
2. 00:12:753 (1,2,3) - ^^

good song & good luck ~ star 謝謝l18!!!
嘛~ 咱好想吃掉那烏賊 看起來可以烤 QAQ!!

1. size of the video is so large, but at the beginning of the video, there are a lot of noise and it looks really bad.
   SPOILER

   
   you should improve quality of the video, or reduce the size of video file.

• too many ticks. set tick rate to 1.
  00:26:353 (4) - replace with 3/2 slider. newbie player may be broken his rhythm because of this blue tick.
  also, you made Normal as a bit harder, so you should make Easy as really easy. same as other sliders.

• 00:23:753 (4) - replace with a 1/2 slider since there is strong sound at 00:23:953?
  00:42:353 (3,4) - replace with reversing slider like 00:39:153 (1). to put note on blue tick is enough to cause mistake for newbie players.

• 00:12:653 (3,5) - remove these notes. to combine 1/3 and 1/4 rhythm at the same time will cause confusing.
  00:14:619 (3,4) - I recommend you not to stack these notes and keep distance snap because these notes are on 1/3 divisor.
  to make stacking, it becomes hard to read whether it's 1/4 rhythm or 1/3 one.
  00:19:153 (3) - when I put a circle to the accent of lyrics, it maybe becomes like this.
  SPOILER

  
  this slider ignores half of them, so I feel something unnatural to it. can you follow the song better? btw, I like the rhythm of 00:31:153 (1,2,3,4,5).
  00:47:153 (3) - ^

• 00:04:553 (3,4) - make them parallel? I suggest this because you make 00:02:953 (5,6) parallel.
  00:05:553 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - how about place them along with the video? in the song, the lyrics "migi yoshi hidari yoshi" means "right, left".
  so how about repeat the same rhythm and placement twice like this?
  rhythm

  
  placement

  
  00:09:953 (4,5) - hmm...why is there so large jump between 4 and 5? I feel certain melody in the song.
  00:11:953 (1,2,3,4) - to combine 1/3 rhythm is fine and surely it makes interesting, but if you do it suddenly, it may cause confusing.
  this can be solved if you put some slider which has 1/3 rhythm like 00:13:553 (1,2) before circle stream. so replace 1~3 with slider.
  then, replace 00:13:553 (1,1) with circle stream. it goes well imo.
  00:19:453 (7) - hmm...this stream seems loose for me. remove this note and put punctuation here.
  00:33:553 (4,5) - these notes doesn't follow the music well. how about this rhythm?
  SPOILER

  
  also you use kick reverse slider like 00:31:853 (3), so this rhythm fits your map imo. if you feel lonely at 00:34:153, you can add a circle there.
  00:42:353 (1) - is this mistake? the correct rhythm is this. use 1/4 divisor.
  SPOILER

  
  00:58:653 (7) - replace with 1/2 slider and move 1/4 later. it will follow the music well.
  01:04:153 (3,4,5) - same as 00:09:953

h-728 wrote:

thank you for your request

[General]

1. size of the video is so large, but at the beginning of the video, there are a lot of noise and it looks really bad.
   SPOILER

   
   you should improve quality of the video, or reduce the size of video file. Will try

[Easy]

• too many ticks. set tick rate to 1. Nope
  00:26:353 (4) - replace with 3/2 slider. newbie player may be broken his rhythm because of this blue tick. fit with songs so no
  also, you made Normal as a bit harder, so you should make Easy as really easy. same as other sliders.

[Normal]

• 00:23:753 (4) - replace with a 1/2 slider since there is strong sound at 00:23:953? nope
  00:42:353 (3,4) - replace with reversing slider like 00:39:153 (1). to put note on blue tick is enough to cause mistake for newbie players. ^

[Insane]

• 00:04:553 (3,4) - make them parallel? I suggest this because you make 00:02:953 (5,6) parallel. try to improve some
  00:05:553 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - how about place them along with the video? in the song, the lyrics "migi yoshi hidari yoshi" means "right, left". D: that's a bit hard to fix
  so how about repeat the same rhythm and placement twice like this?
  rhythm

  
  placement

  
  00:09:953 (4,5) - hmm...why is there so large jump between 4 and 5? I feel certain melody in the song. nope I just wanna make a jump here.
  00:11:953 (1,2,3,4) - to combine 1/3 rhythm is fine and surely it makes interesting, but if you do it suddenly, it may cause confusing.
  this can be solved if you put some slider which has 1/3 rhythm like 00:13:553 (1,2) before circle stream. so replace 1~3 with slider.
  then, replace 00:13:553 (1,1) with circle stream. it goes well imo. no changes cause not a big problem
  00:19:453 (7) - hmm...this stream seems loose for me. remove this note and put punctuation here. sure
  00:33:553 (4,5) - these notes doesn't follow the music well. how about this rhythm?
  SPOILER

  
  also you use kick reverse slider like 00:31:853 (3), so this rhythm fits your map imo. if you feel lonely at 00:34:153, you can add a circle there. use your rhythm, thanks (:
  00:42:353 (1) - is this mistake? the correct rhythm is this. use 1/4 divisor. lol my fault
  SPOILER

  
  00:58:653 (7) - replace with 1/2 slider and move 1/4 later. it will follow the music well. nope
  01:04:153 (3,4,5) - same as 00:09:953 again

that's all
Insane should get more mod, but other diff seems good enough.

• ~超强nazi版~ 试试把没用的红点都去掉？~

1. 00:10:353 (4) - 歪了=w=
2. 00:46:353 (4) - ..为什么不试试结束在00:46:753 - 然后在00:47:153 - add note?~这样hitsound也解决了~
3. 00:55:553 (3) - 可以试试变成1/4 然后再00:56:353 - add note~

1. 00:00:753 (1) - 歪了~中间的point放在正中间~
2. 00:24:753 (1,2) - 没包好~
   
   • nazi 赛高~
   1. 00:47:953 (3,4) - ^
   2. 01:13:953 (3,1) - ^
   3. 01:15:553 (3,1) - ^
   [Hard]
   
   • OD-1
   1. 00:48:553 - add note~
   [Insane]
   
   1. 00:05:753 (2,3) - 这个太违和了。orz。。orz感觉很不合适。。这个强烈建议改。orz好几次都点不到。orz我个人问题就算了。。找人试试把~
      
      1. 试试减少距离~
      2. 不改变距离的话，试试移到右边上方~
   2. 00:43:953 (1,2) - 这个有点小小的坑人。。orz。。个人建议+个note过度下。。。故意的就算了。orz
   3. 00:43:953 (1,4) - 建议改成折返~长slider有点单调~感觉你用的折返好多~所以。。这个纯属个人意见。。
   4. 00:47:953 (4,5,6) - 这个3连有点急~
      
      试试，无视摆，。。放看节奏。。

      
   5. 00:48:853 (2) - delete?~节奏满奇葩的。。。
   6. 00:48:953 (3) - 这个改成3连?>_>、、、、全都是个人建议。。orz。。。你试试就好了。。。打打。。找找感觉。。
   7. 00:49:353 (4) - 不美观
   8. 00:49:953 (6) - 这个结束在00:50:153 - 然后00:50:353 - add note？~
   9. 01:13:153 (5) - delete.....
   10. 01:14:753 (5) - delete....至于为什么。。50%你就懂了。orz
   11. 01:16:353 (5) - delete....
       感觉要说的好多。。。下次来irc把~

h-728 wrote:

thank you for your request

[Regou's Hard]

• 00:12:653 (3,5) - remove these notes. to combine 1/3 and 1/4 rhythm at the same time will cause confusing. It's easy to click and won't even cause a miss.. and delete these notes make it feels so empty O__o..
  00:14:619 (3,4) - I recommend you not to stack these notes and keep distance snap because these notes are on 1/3 divisor.
  to make stacking, it becomes hard to read whether it's 1/4 rhythm or 1/3 one.OK
  00:19:153 (3) - when I put a circle to the accent of lyrics, it maybe becomes like this.
  SPOILER

  
  this slider ignores half of them, so I feel something unnatural to it. can you follow the song better? btw, I like the rhythm of 00:31:153 (1,2,3,4,5). I don't know,, through I don't want to fix it for now and see what other people comment on this...
  00:47:153 (3) - ^ Try some other pattern for this

Athena Tennos wrote:

A-tan's M4M~

[General]
没看~>_>应该没什么问题~>_>

[Easy]

• ~超强nazi版~ 试试把没用的红点都去掉？~-A-

1. 00:10:353 (4) - 歪了=w=
2. 00:46:353 (4) - ..为什么不试试结束在00:46:753 - 然后在00:47:153 - add note?~这样hitsound也解决了~
3. 00:55:553 (3) - 可以试试变成1/4 然后再00:56:353 - add note~
   我忘了我這邊怎麼改的了 好像all fix了吧..昨晚睡前改的

[Normal]

1. 00:00:753 (1) - 歪了~中间的point放在正中间~
2. 00:24:753 (1,2) - 没包好~
   
   • nazi 赛高~
   1. 00:47:953 (3,4) - ^
   2. 01:13:953 (3,1) - ^
   3. 01:15:553 (3,1) - ^ 這些好像都還OK (不過微調了!)
   [Insane]
   
   1. 00:05:753 (2,3) - 这个太违和了。orz。。orz感觉很不合适。。这个强烈建议改。orz好几次都点不到。orz我个人问题就算了。。找人试试把~
      
      1. 试试减少距离~
      2. 不改变距离的话，试试移到右边上方~I follow h-728's idea this time (pretty cool!)
   2. 00:43:953 (1,2) - 这个有点小小的坑人。。orz。。个人建议+个note过度下。。。故意的就算了。orz (1)換折返了zz
   3. 00:43:953 (1,4) - 建议改成折返~长slider有点单调~感觉你用的折返好多~所以。。这个纯属个人意见。。 摁這可行 改了!
   4. 00:47:953 (4,5,6) - 这个3连有点急~ 好!
      
      试试，无视摆，。。放看节奏。。

      
   5. 00:48:853 (2) - delete?~节奏满奇葩的。。。
   6. 00:48:953 (3) - 这个改成3连?>_>、、、、全都是个人建议。。orz。。。你试试就好了。。。打打。。找找感觉。。 跟著上面改了 還不錯的樣子
   7. 00:49:353 (4) - 不美观 / \
   8. 00:49:953 (6) - 这个结束在00:50:153 - 然后00:50:353 - add note？~ GOOD!
   9. 01:13:153 (5) - delete.....
   10. 01:14:753 (5) - delete....至于为什么。。50%你就懂了。orz
   11. 01:16:353 (5) - delete.... 藍線有音的 而且4連不喜歡._.
       感觉要说的好多。。。下次来irc把~

差不多就这样了~睡觉去orz
Star and Good Luck~

LunarSakuya wrote:

hi!

General
Nice

Easy
00:18:353 (1) - Add whistle also, to match bg music lol
00:31:153 (1) - Finish at beginning
00:34:353 (1) - try and center http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/458890
00:56:753 (1) - Finish at beginning
01:24:153 (3) - i think it should end at the blue tick http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/458892
All fix !!!
Normal
00:23:353 (3) - I feel like rhythm is kinda funny here, maybe something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/458898 I delete (3,4) and put like a note+1/4 slider~
00:56:753 (1) - Finish k
01:10:153 (2,3) - Making a slider feels better imo no fix this D:
01:23:953 (1) - Same as easy, i think this should end on the blue tick k

Insane
00:01:953 (5) - Shorten to red tick, matches vocals
00:03:353 (6) - forgot clap
00:08:353 (8,1) - give some more space between these 2?
00:19:353 (6,7) - Increase distance
00:33:153 (3) - Extend this to blue tick, follow vocals
00:49:953 (6) - Finish at end
00:56:753 (1) - Finish at beginning
01:04:353 (4,5) - maybe lessen distance a little so it's not too extreme for no reason
01:05:153 (2) - Finish at beginning All fixed thank you ovo!

Such a cute song!! I love it xD \:3/
Good luck!

Lizellota wrote:

Hello~ From in-game queue~

[General]

First of all, i dont like these jumps like: 00:23:753 (1,2) so weird..i'll try to help to you Thanks ><

[Insane]
01:08:753 (3) - clap (NC:2) should be here, remove from (2) There's a sound here D: so nope
01:13:153 - remove a note? well.. this has pointed by someone b4, and I don't think it should be remove D:
01:13:453 - add a note no because I heard nothing here
01:14:753 (5) - remove ^^
01:15:053 - add a note ^^
01:16:353 (5) - remove ^^
That's all for now, i'm busy, sorry >< i'll mod other diffs a bit later ;3

Lizellota wrote:

Hah, it's really funny, i dont find anything in other diffs D:

28,172,58353,2,0,B|4:204|0:248|16:288|44:308,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

1. Set AudioLeadIn: 2000 in all diffs, atm it's 2015

1. 00:05:553 (1,2,3) - Honestly I think that finishes on (1,2) and on (3)'s would sound pretty nice here
2. 00:24:353 (1,2) - According to the vocal sound remove new combo from (1) adding it on (2) instead
3. 00:34:353 (1) - Move to x:368 y:296 so that it's centered on the grid
4. 00:35:953 (2,3) - (nazi) You could make the (2) more curved to improve the blanket with (3)'s head, I mean something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/467075
5. 00:47:553 (5) - Oh this slider is ugly and it breaks the flow of your map çç What about, instead, to make it like this? It's better to play IMO
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   

   300,172,47553,2,0,B|312:96|256:44|172:56|132:124,2,240,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

6. 00:50:353 (1,2) - I don't understand why you decided to follow the vocal sound with (1) and then 1/1 rhythm with (2). Or the first or the second plz. I think it'd be better to follow the 1/1 rhythm since we are talking about easy diff. Then, according to this, extend the (1) by 1/2, till 00:51:153.
7. 00:51:953 (1,2,3,4) - Instead to make these 4 circles that also I don't like how you used them, what about to make two 1/1 sliders? 1/1 Sliders are more enjoyable to play for an easy diff IMO
8. 00:55:553 (3) - This slider is offscreen.
9. 01:24:153 (3) - Nah, this slider should be 1/2 later: http://puu.sh/1gyMM

1. 00:28:353 (1) - Instead to use one single circle you could make an 1/2 slider to fit the vocal sound here
2. 00:35:153 (2) - I'd follow this rhythm, it fits much better the music IMO: http://puu.sh/1gyPY
3. 00:42:353 (3) - New combo here according to the new vocal rhythm
4. 00:46:353 (4) - Whistle on the slider's head to keep consistency with the previous elements
5. 01:19:953 (2,2,2) - Add whistles on each sliders' reverse arrow. It'd emphasize the one in the music

1. 00:12:653 (3,4) - I think it would be better to use the same pattern you used for 00:11:953 (1,2) since the rhythm is the same. This pattern is also bothering to play IMO :\
2. 00:23:753 (5,6) - Is this bad overlap intentional? If not, you should improve this stack
3. 00:41:553 (3) - Maybe it's nazi but I always take care about slider's shape. I would make this slider more curved to improve the blanket with (2), something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/467098

1. 01:24:353 (3,4) - It's always bothering to play (especially with hidden) an overlapped circled with a previous 1/4 slider. I would remove the (4) adding a repeat on the (3) slider instead.
2. Overall the rhythm is good here but I think you can still to improve the flow of the map. I don't like so much the placement you used to be honest ç.ç

Chewin wrote:

Hi Flask, here's my mod from my m4m queue ;D
I'm very sorry for the late çç

[General]

1. Set AudioLeadIn: 2000 in all diffs, atm it's 2015 fixed

[Easy]

1. 00:05:553 (1,2,3) - Honestly I think that finishes on (1,2) and on (3)'s would sound pretty nice here ok o3o added
2. 00:24:353 (1,2) - According to the vocal sound remove new combo from (1) adding it on (2) instead k
3. 00:34:353 (1) - Move to x:368 y:296 so that it's centered on the grid k
4. 00:35:953 (2,3) - (nazi) You could make the (2) more curved to improve the blanket with (3)'s head, I mean something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/467075 k
5. 00:47:553 (5) - Oh this slider is ugly and it breaks the flow of your map çç What about, instead, to make it like this? It's better to play IMO k (thanks!)
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   

   300,172,47553,2,0,B|312:96|256:44|172:56|132:124,2,240,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

6. 00:50:353 (1,2) - I don't understand why you decided to follow the vocal sound with (1) and then 1/1 rhythm with (2). Or the first or the second plz. I think it'd be better to follow the 1/1 rhythm since we are talking about easy diff. Then, according to this, extend the (1) by 1/2, till 00:51:153. k
7. 00:51:953 (1,2,3,4) - Instead to make these 4 circles that also I don't like how you used them, what about to make two 1/1 sliders? 1/1 Sliders are more enjoyable to play for an easy diff IMO I changed (1,2) to a 1/1 slider, others are keep D:
8. 00:55:553 (3) - This slider is offscreen. k
9. 01:24:153 (3) - Nah, this slider should be 1/2 later: http://puu.sh/1gyMM

k

[Normal]

1. 00:28:353 (1) - Instead to use one single circle you could make an 1/2 slider to fit the vocal sound here k
2. 00:35:153 (2) - I'd follow this rhythm, it fits much better the music IMO: http://puu.sh/1gyPY Sorry I'll keep it for now ;w;
3. 00:42:353 (3) - New combo here according to the new vocal rhythm k
4. 00:46:353 (4) - Whistle on the slider's head to keep consistency with the previous elements I don't add whistle at Insane or Easy so no here
5. 01:19:953 (2,2,2) - Add whistles on each sliders' reverse arrow. It'd emphasize the one in the music ^

[Insane]

1. 01:24:353 (3,4) - It's always bothering to play (especially with hidden) an overlapped circled with a previous 1/4 slider. I would remove the (4) adding a repeat on the (3) slider instead. k
2. Overall the rhythm is good here but I think you can still to improve the flow of the map. I don't like so much the placement you used to be honest ç.ç

That's all for now.
Probabily I will recheck it by myself after some other mods, I wish you good luck with it then ~

Dark Fang wrote:

Hi

[General]

The video was inactive(I dunno that's my error) I recommended to change the video to avi file. I have no problem on here, maybe will change if someone has the same ;n;[/color]

[Easy]

00:09:153 (2) - 1 grid down k
00:30:753 (4) - add Whistle k
00:34:353 (1) - move to (368,296) and adjust next notes OK o.o

[Normal]

00:15:153 (1) - remove Clap Ohhh I forget D:
00:19:953 (4) - move to (216,48) no
00:58:353 (5) - 1 grid up and try make like this? nope

28,172,58353,2,0,B|4:204|0:248|16:288|44:308,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

[Insane]

00:38:153 (4,5) - why don't you rhythm try make like this? good, k
00:58:653 (7) - why don't you start point move to 00:58:753 - ? end at 00:58:953 - okkkkkkkk I WILL CHANGE THIS THIS TIME.
01:10:353 (5) - add Whistle at start of slider k
01:13:153 (5) - remove this note
01:14:753 (5) - ^
01:16:353 (5) - ^ OKKKKKKKK. D:


Sorry for my poor mod..

Have a nice day

From our queue \( ^_^)/

1. I see many sliders here with middle point set asymmetric, especially on blankets. Could you set the middle point of those sliders right on the center of the slider (i mean, not too much to the left or right), so they looks better?
2. I know that countdown sucks but please set it here. You are mapping from the first downbeat of the song and it's rather hard to hit first note especially with Hidden.

1. I know that this is Easy but CS 4 is still okay here.
2. Slider Tick 2 is too much. How about 1? Don't worry the custom slidertick is undisturbed here
3. 00:45:153 - Add note here
4. 00:54:053 - & 00:54:253 - Useless slidertick inheriting section
5. 00:55:553 (3) - *nazi - Move second point to x:320 y:332 ?
6. 01:24:653 - Adding low volume here is rather awkward for the players. Why don't remove it and add finish to the slider end? Sounds better imo

1. Slider tick 1 also works better here and doesn't disturb the custom sliderticks.
2. 00:07:153 (4) - Why 2 reverses? Remove one and add a note after the slider maybe?
3. 00:27:553 (4,1,2) - Hmm maybe like this? http://puu.sh/1gZdu slider shape, hitsound, and placement is up to you
4. 00:40:153 (2,3,1) - Bad flow, move slider 1 to somewhere else so it flows smoother?
5. 00:32:753 (4) - Again, why 2 reverses? Fix please
6. 00:51:953 (5) - ^
7. 00:59:553 - Add mini break here?
8. 01:23:953 (1) - Move a little bit to the right please

1. Too wide difficulty spread from Normal, imo. Could you lower some difficulty settings?
2. Unlike Easy and Normal, can you set Slidertick settings to 2 here? So players can differentiate sliders that ends on blue tick with sliders that ends on red/white tick.
3. 00:12:653 (3) - Bad polarity >< previous slider ends on white tick while this starts on blue tick. Remove please
4. 00:13:453 (4) - ^
5. 00:14:619 (3,4) - unstack please
6. 00:22:953 (3,4,5,6) - Sort of... confusing flow. Fix please
7. 00:46:353 (2,1) - spacing?
8. 00:47:753 (2) - ...Is there anything happens here or my editor is just bugging? There's no hitsound I hear here.
9. 00:47:953 (3,2) - Bad overlap
10. 00:52:653 (6) - bad polarity, remove please
11. 00:55:153 (1,2) - Unstack please?
12. 00:56:753 (1,2) - ^
13. 00:59:353 (1,2,3) - Too inaudible imo, higher volume please
14. 01:08:253 (4) - Polarity's not too bad but, a slider that replaces 01:07:953 (3,4) - might be better

1. And... this diff's difficulty spread compared to Hard is too little. Higher diff setting maybe?
2. 00:47:453 (2) - Bad polarity. Remove please
3. 00:54:253 (3) - ^
4. 00:59:353 (1) - Unfitting hitsound and bad slider velocity, fix please
5. 01:13:353 - Add note here?
6. 01:24:353 (3) - A slider with a reverse here just, unfitting. Try just a slider without reverse and, please, do not lower the hitsound on the end, just add finish on it

inverness wrote:

From our queue \( ^_^)/

Red mods means must be fixed. Mods with question marks are only suggestion.

MY GOD WHAT SONG IS THIS
*but okay, let me try to mod (although I might not get a little bit down to it) and luckily this song is TV sized :/

[General]

1. I see many sliders here with middle point set asymmetric, especially on blankets. Could you set the middle point of those sliders right on the center of the slider (i mean, not too much to the left or right), so they looks better? Not a big problem, right?
2. I know that countdown sucks but please set it here. You are mapping from the first downbeat of the song and it's rather hard to hit first note especially with Hidden. Why I need? I got 300 with Hidden diff \:D/

[Easy]

1. I know that this is Easy but CS 4 is still okay here. nope.
2. Slider Tick 2 is too much. How about 1? Don't worry the custom slidertick is undisturbed here OK
3. 00:45:153 - Add note here K
4. 00:54:053 - & 00:54:253 - Useless slidertick inheriting section K
5. 00:55:553 (3) - *nazi - Move second point to x:320 y:332 ? K
6. 01:24:653 - Adding low volume here is rather awkward for the players. Why don't remove it and add finish to the slider end? Sounds better imo

That's all I can find. no, sounds really weird

[Normal]

1. Slider tick 1 also works better here and doesn't disturb the custom sliderticks. K
2. 00:07:153 (4) - Why 2 reverses? Remove one and add a note after the slider maybe? nope
3. 00:27:553 (4,1,2) - Hmm maybe like this? http://puu.sh/1gZdu slider shape, hitsound, and placement is up to you nope
4. 00:40:153 (2,3,1) - Bad flow, move slider 1 to somewhere else so it flows smoother? fixed something anyway
5. 00:32:753 (4) - Again, why 2 reverses? Fix please nope
6. 00:51:953 (5) - ^^
7. 00:59:553 - Add mini break here? no
8. 01:23:953 (1) - Move a little bit to the right please K

That's all.

[Insane]

1. And... this diff's difficulty spread compared to Hard is too little. Higher diff setting maybe? OD+1 for now
2. 00:47:453 (2) - Bad polarity. Remove please nope
3. 00:54:253 (3) - ^ nope
4. 00:59:353 (1) - Unfitting hitsound and bad slider velocity, fix please nope
5. 01:13:353 - Add note here? I'll add it if someone mention this...
6. 01:24:353 (3) - A slider with a reverse here just, unfitting. Try just a slider without reverse and, please, do not lower the hitsound on the end, just add finish on it nope

That's all.

Good luck Flask, nice map actually although I can't stand the song ><

eLtigreXXx wrote:

:3 mod4mod Request from eLtigreXXx's Modding queue~

[insane]
00:47:153 (1) finish nope
00:08:753 (1) - is not advisable to leave much of the grid 1.3x isn't much px
00:35:753 (5) finish nope
00:36:153 (6) ^ nope

[Normal]
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
01:24:255 - snap to 01:24:253 oh K


Inconsistency in AudioLeadIn:
- [Easy] : 2015
- [Insane] : 2000
- [Normal] : 2000
- [Regou's Hard] : 2000 !!K

that's all :3



http://osu.ppy.sh/s/61848

Gabe wrote:

Suprise! Here's a recheck for my Flask-chan♥
and a quick check for Hard and Insane.

Did I already told you to add spinner on every difficulties? If not, you should because if not, everyone is going to have the same exact score. Also, it's mostly recommended to add at least one spinner. OK I added D:::::

[Easy]

Hitsounds mod

This box is for hitsounds. When I look for hitsounds, I am mostly looking for the consistency. Sometimes I may give some suggestions
•00:23:353 (2,3) - By the song's whistles, add one to the end of the slider (2), and add one to the circle (3). It will actually sound better c: Added at (2)'s end :3
•00:24:753 - I don't know how to explain it but, you should try to add a finish here. sure...o3o
•00:26:753 - I'm sure you can add a slidertick-clap here to keep the consistency. B-but, someone told me I should use slidertick rate 1 and I use... so here's not slidertick D:
•00:29:953 - Same thing as above. Dx
•00:36:353 - Actually, this whistle doesn't fit well here since in the song, we don't hear any whistle here. The whistle you may hear it at 00:36:553 and 00:36:753. So delete the whistle at the slider's end.K
•00:39:553 - As said some points above, add a slidertick-clap here for the consistency.Dx
•00:42:753 - Same here, same reason.
•00:55:953 - As I can see here, you added claps because of the song, so actually, you should add one here too. It will sound good, and it will keep the consistency. sounds great, added!
•01:14:353 - Add a finish here to keep the consistency with the previous slider. Also, it sounds good because of the song.
•01:15:953 - Do the same thing here.fixed :3!

Objects mod

This box means that I am looking at flows and useless circle/slider that doesn't sound really good or even, doesn't fit well for the difficulty.
•00:33:553 (5) - Try to make a blancket with the next slider. Just like this. Well I'll try to improve D;
•00:34:353 (1) - I love these kind of sliders, but I think you should improve it. Look below for more information. k

SPOILER

388,280,34353,6,0,B|320:296|280:244|280:244|240:296|172:280,1,240,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

•01:07:153 (2) - Make this slider like this, it will mostly flows better.

k

Combo mod

This box is for new combos. If new combos are fitting well with the vocals or if they aren't too big (ex: 23combos)
•00:00:753 (1,2,3) - Just to let you know, on your Normal difficulty, you've added new combos to every sliders. Why don't you do the same here? (: I hate (1,1,1) so no D:
•00:47:553 - The combo seems to be long here. Add a new combo here, so it will be better for the vocal and the legth of the combo. k
•00:51:953 - Delete the new combo, it seems to be better without it because of the song. k
•01:15:953 - What do you think about deleting the new combo here? I'll say nope D:
•01:24:353 - On your normal difficulty, you actually added a new combo. You should do the same here. K

[Normal]

Hitsounds mod

This box is for hitsounds. When I look for hitsounds, I am mostly looking for the consistency. Sometimes I may give some suggestions

•00:17:953 - As said for the Easy difficulty, you could add a slidertick-clap here to keep the consistency. Since you're using Slidertick 2, it should work. no ticks here D:
•00:23:553 (3) - Seems like a whistle sounds great here become of the whistle in the song. There's no whistle I think.. I'll keep mine for now (:
•00:26:753 - Same as I said for the first point.
•00:29:953 - Same thing here.
•00:39:553 - Take a wild guess.. Yes, same thing as above.
•00:42:753 - Same thing here too :'D Dx
•01:05:153 (4) - To keep the consistency, add both start and end a clap. K (why I forget?)
•01:13:153 - Add slidertick-claps to these points:

1. 01:13:153
2. 01:14:753
3. 01:16:353

K!

Objects mod

This box means that I am looking at flows and useless circle/slider that doesn't sound really good or even, doesn't fit well for the difficulty.
Nothing wrong here.
•00:34:353 (1,2) - I see what you did there 8D I think this is...great? maybe lol keep for now

Combo mod

This box is for new combos. If new combos are fitting well with the vocals or if they aren't too big (ex: 23combos)
Nothing wrong here.

[Insane]

•00:27:953 (5) - Add a new combo here.
•01:01:953 - I really think you should add something here. Mostly a circle to x:432 y:72 . It will sound better o_o
•01:08:353 (2) - Also add something here for the sound.
•01:13:153 - For these streams, its sounds like there's missing something. So actually add a circle here.
•01:14:753 - Same as above
•01:16:353 - Same here. All fix!!

kgood. Good luck Flask! ♥ ♥

Chewin wrote:

Hi Flask, here's my mod from my m4m queue ;D
I'm very sorry for the late çç

[General]

1. Set AudioLeadIn: 2000 in all diffs, atm it's 2015

[Regou's Hard]

1. 00:12:653 (3,4) - I think it would be better to use the same pattern you used for 00:11:953 (1,2) since the rhythm is the same. This pattern is also bothering to play IMO :\ I am not sure about this one. If I deleted 00:12:653 (3) it's just way too odd...
2. 00:23:753 (5,6) - Is this bad overlap intentional? If not, you should improve this stack As I explained before I am not going to change this, sorry! :C
3. 00:41:553 (3) - Maybe it's nazi but I always take care about slider's shape. I would make this slider more curved to improve the blanket with (2), something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/467098

Ok :3

That's all for now.
Probabily I will recheck it by myself after some other mods, I wish you good luck with it then ~

SPOILER

104,84,753,2,0,B|40:136|32:224|80:304,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
148,260,2353,2,0,B|181:335|264:365|354:340,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
328,264,3953,2,0,B|409:250|460:178|458:85,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

448,200,45553,6,0,B|472:248|464:288,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
388,260,46353,2,0,B|324:276|264:260|232:216,1,160

Flower wrote:

Hi~ queue and zhun-admin-qiupao-mission request~

[Regou]
难度跳跃略大 嘛,,我已經做的很簡單的啦;___;
00:04:553 (2) - 这个会stack变丑 把00:04:553 (2,3,4) - 往右下移几格???
00:11:053 (7) - 这个完全跟不上节奏 建议去掉 我再看看
00:12:653 (3) - 去掉？（音乐不是这样但是我觉得这样更好读一些 改不改随你XD）
00:13:453 (5) - ^
00:15:353 (1,2,3,4) - 打了半天还是一堆50 没懂 等后面的modder看吧 不科學啊我都拿300
00:23:553 (4,5,6) - 只偏了这么点还是会造成HD读图的困难 再向右下移动一格 這個...本來就沒打算弄給別人HD 233
00:43:153 (1) - 推荐手动stack ???
00:49:153 (3) - 我会告诉你该AR下这圈HD时完全看不见么 即使是none也几乎看不见approaching circle 话说回来这好像违反rules 00:48:953 (2) - 这个好一些不过也建议移走 這個改了
01:09:753 (2,3,4) - 个人觉得没有直接stack来的好看 Ok

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

[Regou's Hard]
There isn't any spinner here. Add at least 1 since it's unrankable without it.

Flower wrote:

Hi~ queue and zhun-admin-qiupao-mission request~

[General]

[Easy]
00:00:753 (1,2,3) - 做成这种螺旋形如何？ 沒很喜歡耶O3O

SPOILER

104,84,753,2,0,B|40:136|32:224|80:304,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
148,260,2353,2,0,B|181:335|264:365|354:340,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
328,264,3953,2,0,B|409:250|460:178|458:85,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

00:13:553 (3) - 没摆准 左移一格 .左移一格不美觀
00:21:553 (1) - 可以在00:22:753 结束 然后后一个slider时间不变 想配whistle嘛
00:45:553 (1,2) - 这个container没有完美地包好 把00:45:553 (1) - 弧度增大（曲线的顶点改到476,236），然后00:46:353 (2) - 移到388,256 然后别忘了后面的note就顺移 總之用了你的code ._.

448,200,45553,6,0,B|472:248|464:288,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
388,260,46353,2,0,B|324:276|264:260|232:216,1,160

01:09:553 (1) - 没放准？調了下4 謝謝啊~~

[Normal]
00:31:953 (2) - 是不是放在00:31:853 好一些？如果这么做的话在 00:32:153 加一个note stack在后面那个上 放藍線不理智吧 照rhythm比較好
00:42:353 (1,2) - 感觉没有强调重音 先slider后note比较好？ 換slider

[Insane]
我更觉得Hard要改读图的问题……这难度感觉比Hard简单 ...
00:15:353 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 做成串多好【PIA 本來是串的說 被shore吐槽就改了 我比較喜歡現在的嘛
00:16:753 (1,2,3,4) - 听半天觉得这里还是1/3的节奏 no
00:21:253 (7) - 去掉？ 我愛三連(?)
00:21:953 (2) - 缩短到00:22:253 然后原来的滑条尾处加note 善良一点嘛/.\ 有人在吐我會fix
00:47:953 (4) - 延长到00:48:253 或者在这里加note no

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

[General]
Regou's Hard has 2015ms of lead-in instead of 2000 (like the other diffs). I suggest to fix it. OK
No video? I can provide one if you want. I have already added...

[All Diffs]
01:24:953 - Add a green line with 5% volume? It's better I think. Chewin says 5% is unrankable & I've added 15% vol. on 01:24:619 -

[Regou's Hard]
There isn't any spinner here. Add at least 1 since it's unrankable without it. This is NOT UNRANKABLE.


Only this. Sorry for poor mod

Mikarunoel131 wrote:

Please get it ranked soon x3 Song and beatmap are awesome ~(^w^~)

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

[General]
Regou's Hard has 2015ms of lead-in instead of 2000 (like the other diffs). I suggest to fix it. OK
No video? I can provide one if you want. I have already added...

[All Diffs]
01:24:953 - Add a green line with 5% volume? It's better I think. Chewin says 5% is unrankable & I've added 15% vol. on 01:24:619 - Did Chewin said that? I don't see anything about in his mod and I think it's strange that 5% is unrankable, because rules says you can silence a spinner. But since you removed spinners it's not a problem anymore.

[Regou's Hard]
There isn't any spinner here. Add at least 1 since it's unrankable without it. This is NOT UNRANKABLE. Ok, no spinner is not a rule now, I really didn't know it, sorry.

1. Red - Important or Issue
2. Blue - You'd better fix them
3. Black - Normal Suggestions

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue

1. Red - Important or Issue
2. Blue - You'd better fix them
3. Black - Normal Suggestions

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[Easy]
00:11:953 (1,2) - I may place them like this k

00:34:353 (1) - Why not ends at 00:35:753? and then 00:35:953 (2) starts at 00:36:153 (2) 这樣比較順嘛



[Normal]
00:27:553 (4) - NC here and remove NC from 00:28:353 (1) k


[Regou's Hard]
00:49:953 (4) - stack with 00:49:153 (2) completely?


[Insane]
00:06:153 (3,4,5) - what about this? It fits the vocal better 先暫時保留>_>

01:24:353 (3) - Wrong beats.This slider should start at here and end at 01:23:753 then a note at 01:24:653 (4) k
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Wonderful Mapset
:3 GL

-[NYAN]- wrote:

喵~小峰峰啾个~

Easy

easy用1/2编辑吧，能好些

00:02:353 (2) - 这个滑条第二个点出格子了没问题么... 有問題么
00:11:953 (1,2) - 节奏感觉怪怪的，像下面那样比较好吧 no

00:25:553 - 少个note的感觉...
00:28:753 - ^ 都故意的
00:34:353 (1) - 这样修改节奏上会好点 不喜歡這樣的

00:55:553 (3) - 喂喂，这个明显出格子了吧 一点問題都沒有吧
01:22:753 (1,2,3) - 推荐改成下面这个 no

Normal

00:10:353 (4) - 挪到296|208 也太nazi了吧 總之fix
00:03:953 (1) - 滑条按照这样改改吧，红点位置注意就行，节奏 no

00:25:153 (2) - 弄好看点，包好 . 已經不錯了
00:47:953 (3) - 挪到492|136 k
01:14:353 (1) - 旋转下，和下一个note保持位置上的一致，比如旋转18°然后挪到412|372 不
01:15:953 (1,2) - 像这样 k

01:23:953 (1) - 尾巴加上finish？ no


Insane

00:08:753 (1) - 又出格子了 你去test看看就知道
00:17:553 (4) - nc no


差不多就这样了:3

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Flask ~

Mod time for my Lucky Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

1. I guess source should be : Shinryaku!! Ika Musume
   (you can check with video). k

[Insane]

1. HP-1 is better. k
2. 01:13:053 (4) - Move 1 grid up,looks better. k
3. 01:14:353 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make more curved stream,same as 01:12:753 (1,2,3,4,5). k
4. 01:15:953 (1,2,3,4,5) - I guess change to straight is better. k

[Normal]

1. 00:09:553 (3,4) - Make more blanket.動了下> >

That's all ~ Not bad map for newbies mapper ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Recheck ~ no kds pls ~

[Regou's Hard]

1. 00:13:453 (4) - Still no remove this circle.

MMzz wrote:

Hellooooooo.

[Hard]
00:07:353 (2,3) - Make this all a 1/3 kickback slider. Like I told Flask in the insane this part is 1/3 and needs to be mapped as such. You can hear that 3 is extremely late because it's not snapped to 1/3 beats. Alright,fixed (Although it sounds really weird to me, I checked it and it's really a 1/3 rhythm...orz)
01:24:653 (4) - This slider has no purpose because it's landing on no beat, just make a circle instead. I want to show the 'lasting' feeling... it just sound so odd if I use a circle instead.Sorry.

Look this over and call me back. And I can give you your bubble back.

MMzz wrote:

Hellooooooo.

[Insane]
00:07:353 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This is 1/3 not 1/4 and should be mapped as such. Look at the taiko for example, it's in 1/3. (Also listen at 25% you'll hear it) k
00:34:353 (1) - This needs to be 1/3 aswell [/color]


[Easy]
01:24:353 (1) - This slider needs to end on the blue tick! That's where the last beat in the music lands. [/color]

[Taiko Oni]
00:23:053 (82,83) - Delete these two notes then make 00:22:953 (81) - a finisher. You really should follow the powerful vocal section right here and this resembles it perfectly.
00:35:853 (152,153) - ^ Do the same thing here.
01:01:353 (255) - Make this a k? Will establish some better flow for the 3/4 beat.
01:07:753 (14) - ^

[Taiko Muzukashii]
00:11:953 (14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29) - I don't think dddk is a good patternt o use for muzukashii, especially on 1/3. Try doing a simple type of pattern like: dddd kkkk dddd kkkk. Would work nicely.

Look this over and call me back. And I can give you your bubble back.

Andrea wrote:

~Regou's Hard~

01:23:453 (3) - This slider looks ugly compared to the rest of the map. Change to a nice slider :3

Just that and I'll go ahead with ranking this (: