1. Running on Snow (4.81 stars, 438 notes)
2. Senbon's Standing on Snow (4.27 stars, 302 notes)
3. Ultimate's Walking on Snow (4.29 stars, 315 notes)
4. x3ns0r's Jogging on Snow (4.38 stars, 306 notes)
5. Yes Sleeps on Snow (2.46 stars, 132 notes)

Senbon wrote:

I give another star. XD

animask wrote:

Offset 20 might be better?
Add some hitsounds

x3ns0r wrote:

as said on IRC

Offset > 2
[checked in mediaplayer on - 0.05x speed (0:00:00:002 is the spot the song starts)]

my diff( very early version but to give the idea )
[attachment=0:5de2d]Jordin Sparks - Walking On Snow (naruti) [skiing on snow(x3ns0r)].osu[/attachment:5de2d]

Eddycted wrote:

Suggestions~
00:09:77 (1) - I would make the symetrical (like 00:13:67 (4))
00:51:47 (9) - New combo
01:38:55 (9) - ^
01:54:16 (8) - ^
Cool song, naruti. Have a star. <3

Ultimate wrote:

Here is the Storyboard you asked for. It's a verry smooth SB, couse its a slow song.
Can't wait for the diffs to be uploaded, lets hope Senbon hurry's up xD.
Oh p.s. i've also put in some sprites from my template. Hope you like them.

ATTACH[Ultimate's SB & template bits.zip]
Ttyl man,

Ultimate

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Agent Spin Here wrote:

Your storyboard is painful. PLEASE get rid of it. Isn't kiai good enough?
Why are there 2 normals? I think you should change difficulty names to:
'Senson's Standing on Snow'
'Ultimate's Walking on Snow'
'x3ns0r's Jogging on Snow'
'naruti's Running on Snow'

Senon's Normal
This is bad.
Claps are underused. When there is a clap in the music, put on one the note. I have done it every other clap in the beginning. I just removed some and fixed one.
00:19:28 - Is there meant to be a break here or something? ...there was a break there.
00:29:28 (4) - Remove one reverse? Sure
00:44:16 - Note here? Done
00:47:33 (1) - New combo Done
00:47:57 (2) - Start this 1/2 later No. It'd be so typical and boring.
00:49:52 (3) - ^ ^
00:53:43 (5) - ^ ^
00:56:60 (3) - 1/2 earlier Done
01:06:35 (1) - Remove the reverse and make the path 3/4 longer Done
01:35:62 (1) - New combo Sure
01:38:30 - Note here. Done
02:20:99 (9) - New combo Done
02:21:72 - Uh, what. lolwut who remove my breaks
02:34:65 (1,1,1) - Remove new combos. '1,2,3,4' in lyrics should have those numbers on the hitcircles :3 kay done
02:40:01 (5,6,7) - No 1/4 plz ;_; ????? triplet? I removed a note anyways.
02:53:91 (1) - New combo Done
02:54:65 - Note here to make it flow. Done
02:57:82 (5) - Kinda confusing, feels like it's going to reverse much less than it does. fixd

[Senbon]
Hi Senbon~
00:18:55 (5) - Add a break after this? done
or fill it up with something
00:34:40 (7,8) - Spacing is a bit weird here fixd (5) was too close
00:41:96 (9) - Add a clap on the 2nd repeat. done, but can't be single. :\
00:45:13 (3) - Remove clap done
00:45:38 (4) - Add clap at beginning of slider? I like the whistle..
02:21:47 (11) - Add a break after this? done
02:51:23 (9) - Add finish at the end done, but can't be single :\
02:58:79 (6) - Move this up a little? dunno what that is now since the other mod xP

Doomsday93 wrote:

nice map. that SB did a StrangeProgram on me though and made me miss in Running on Snow D:.

star'd

naruti wrote:

should i give a kudosu for that 0_o

Yes wrote:

standing on snow.
00:10:01 (6) - add clap at 00:10:25 Ok, ok.. I'll put these in before someone else complains.
00:13:67 (1) - ^ at 00:14:16 Done
00:12:21 (2) - clap Done
00:25:86 (7) - clap? Done
00:27:82 (2) - clap beginning of slider Done
00:29:28 (4) - clap at 00:29:77 Done
01:43:18 (3) - i think it would sound nice if you extend this to 01:43:67 Done
02:49:77 (4) - [nazi] allign with end of sliderrr? One of the ugly sliders.
02:59:04 (9) - too far? ^

naruti wrote:

Senbon wrote:

hey nooo it's graveyarded

JUst wait til my pc is fixed ^^ then its ungraveyarded

RemmyX25 wrote:

Revived

thx

Symbolic wrote:

[Running On Snow]

Make difficultyname Running on Snow so that "on" isn't capitallized (same as the other diffs).
fixed
02:54:40 (2,3) - Remove this jump, it doesn't fit, you could fix it by replacing 3 with 4.done
02:58:06 (5,1) - Jump doesn't fit, fix it.done
02:58:55 (2,3) - ^done


Why do x3ns0r's difficulty and Senbon's difficulty don't have the same sprite-image on the end as Ultimate's and naruti's?
euhm ultimate??
Very nice map and song,thank you
Starred *

ykcarrot wrote:

[General]
Set a preview time at every diffs.

[Senbon]
00:45:38 (5) - why include whistle?
01:38:06 (1) - no hard jump plz
02:40:01 (5,6,7) - these are a little bit close each other
02:53:91 (5) - spacing

[Ultimate]
Don't put audio timing point right on note. If player click it fast, it makes weird sound.

[x3ns0r]
01:06:23 - This timing point. Move to 01:02:69 ~ 01:05:37 in this section.
It will help to remove pulse effect. This is Kiai time tip.
02:05:13 - ^ same suggestion.
02:16:35 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - I suggest more separated gadually increasing volume.

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136233,-100,4,1,0,75,0,0
136721,-100,4,1,0,80,0,0
137209,-100,4,1,0,85,0,0
137696,-100,4,1,0,90,0,0
138184,-100,4,1,0,95,0,0
138672,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0

Other 2 diffs are seems good for me.
Nice song and maps!
star ^^

Azure_Kyte wrote:

The preview point is the point in each diff where the music starts when you select it. You know when you choose a beatmap from the song select screen and it usually starts playing at a certain point in the song? That's what the preview time does. I think it also determines the preview played on the website, as well.

So find a point in the song which would fit well and go to Timing (the program menu one, not the editor one) > Set Current position as preview. Save and repeat the process with the other difficulties.

ykcarrot wrote:

[General]
Set a preview time at every diffs.

[Senbon]
00:45:38 (5) - why include whistle? i dunno... i remove it then.
01:38:06 (1) - no hard jump plz fixed
02:40:01 (5,6,7) - these are a little bit close each other fixed
02:53:91 (5) - spacing fixed

Senbon wrote:

ykcarrot wrote:

[General]
Set a preview time at every diffs.

[Senbon]
00:45:38 (5) - why include whistle? i dunno... i remove it then.
01:38:06 (1) - no hard jump plz fixed
02:40:01 (5,6,7) - these are a little bit close each other fixed
02:53:91 (5) - spacing fixed

I'm kinda annoyed by some of the double claps I have and some that can't be there 'cause of the ugly doubles.. I dunno how to get rid of it because it selects two repeats instead of one all the time.

I also fixed more hitsounds~!

[General]

If you can add any tags if possible? o.o

[Yes Sleeps on Snow]

00:44:16 (1) - IMO, kind of bland without hit sounds and such many repeats. Maybe cut down by two repeats and fill in?
01:18:79 (3) - Clap on end?
01:20:25 (4) - ^

nice <3

Kytoxid wrote:

[Yes Sleeps on Snow] (man, that's gotta suck)< LOL

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00:58:55 (1) - I'd adjust this a bit to line up with 2.
01:42:45 (1,2,3,4) - Inconsistent spacing.

It's pretty good, in general just watch out for the 1/1 note spacing (sometimes it's 1 grid, sometimes 2, but it's not that big of a deal, as long as it's consistent within a phrase/combo/stream/whatever).

[Senbon's Standing on Snow] (nice boots?)<they are realy warm

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00:12:69 - Consider adding a note here.
00:34:40 (7,8) - Move 7 one grid right, 8 one grid up.
00:54:65 (6,7,8,9,1) - Horizontal spacing is slightly smaller than vertical spacing.
01:19:52 (5,6) - Too close.
01:23:43 (1,2,3) - Spacing.
01:25:62 (6,7,8) - ^
01:51:47 (8) - New combo for consistency.
02:11:23 (6,7) - I'd consider moving these down and left a bit to make an equilateral triangle across 5,6,7.
02:18:06 (5) - Move down a bit to line up with 3?
02:34:16 (1) - Any reason for this timing section?

Same comment for Yes sleeping (must be really cold) applies here.

[Ultimate's Walking on Snow]

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01:06:35 (1) - Move this timing section ahead by 1/4 or so in case the player hits the note early.
01:40:25 (6) - Endpoint up by 1 grid to line up with 7?
02:34:16 (1,2,3,4,1) - Move the timing sections earlier.

I liked this beatmap a lot. Very smooth-feeling. Awesome.i like this map 2

[x3ns0r's Jogging on Snow]

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00:21:23 (1) - Fine in editor, weird in play mode.
00:44:89 (4,5) - Line up endpoints?
01:20:50 (6,7,8) - Unrankable.
01:38:79 (3,4) - Spacing throws you off a bit.
02:00:01 (10) - Up 1 grid.
02:05:13 (1) - Timing section needs to be earlier.
02:13:42 (1,1) - ^
02:16:35 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Too many claps, I think.

(felt pretty awesome too, this one):)

[Running on Snow] (oh no, we don't know who's running on snow! Everyone panic)
Who is running 0_o that guy must be realy stupid to run on snow 0_o

00:13:67 (4) - 1 grid right for symmetry with 3.fixed
00:30:98 (1) - 1 grid left to line up with 12?fixed
00:44:89 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Move the timing sections earlier.fixed
00:47:08 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Alignment's a bit weird.fixed
00:58:54 (1,2,3,4) - 2,3 significantly closer than others.fixed
01:10:25 (14) - 1 grid down.fixed
01:18:06 (2) - 1 grid right.fixed
01:42:20 (1,2,3,4) - Realign a bit.fixed
02:12:69 (3) - Move the timing section.fixed
02:43:18 (4) - 1 grid right.fixed
03:01:23 (5,6) - 1 grid left.fixed
03:03:42 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Timing sections.fixed
03:06:11 (3) - 1 grid right.fixed

Nice song overall, starred.

fartownik wrote:

The offset in Yes' and Senbon's difficulty (16) is different than in x3ns0r's, Ultimate's and naruti's (14).
I also noticed tags in x3ns0r's difficulty, "Jordan Sparks" (?), why "Jordan" and why only on x3ns0r's?
I got NOthing to do with that 0_o

[Senbon's]

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00:25:038 (5) - 1 tick up (spacing)
00:55:013 (8,9) - 1 tick right (spacing)
00:55:038 (9,1) - Swap new combo
01:25:062 (6) - New combo
01:28:030 (5) - Delete new combo

[Ultimate's]

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02:08:055 (1,1) - Swap new combo

[x3ns0r's]

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This difficulty sounds weird. Try to fix it following my notices.
00:10:050 (1) - Delete clap
00:12:020 (2,3,4,5) - Add clap
00:31:023 (2) - ^
00:32:069 (4) - ^
00:34:064 (8) - ^
00:36:059 (2) - ^
00:38:006 (4) - ^
00:38:794 (1) - ^
00:39:028 (3) - ^
00:40:050 (6) - ^
00:41:047 (1) - ^
00:42:020 (4) - ^
00:42:069 (5) - ^
00:44:089 (4) - Finish
00:45:037 (5) - ^
00:45:086 (6) - ^ (all of repeats)
00:47:033 (2) - Clap
00:48:006 (4) - Clap
00:58:006 (1) - Delete new combo
01:16:084 (9) - Finish
01:20:025 (5) - New combo.
01:31:047 (3) - Finish
01:31:096 (4) - ^
01:32:045 (5) - ^
01:32:094 (6) - ^ (on all repeats, delete the clap between)
01:59:028 (7) - 1 tick down, 1 tick right
01:59:052 (8) - 1 tick down
02:16:035 - The normal hitsounds type should beggin here and make louder by the next circles
02:19:003 (1) - End on 02:20:501
02:41:047 (3,4,5,6) - What's the point of this repeats?
02:45:086 (6) - 1 tick up, 1 tick left
02:46:011 (7) - ^
03:02:094 (5) - Expand this slider to 03:04:892. Finish on the end
03:05:379 - Copy the previous slider and paste it beggin here

You've made me tired.

[naruti's]

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Finally... I hear whistles
00:11:477 - Only a suggestion: you could add a circle here. It sounds better
00:15:379 - ^
00:54:040 (11) - Add a repeat with clap.
01:37:033 (8,1) - Swap new combo.

all fixed those extra notes are cool
Uhh, nice song. Good job guyz. ~Starry. Also my longest modding About 1 hour.

Kytoxid wrote:

[Senbon's Standing on Snow] (nice boots?)

00:12:69 - Consider adding a note here. Done
00:34:40 (7,8) - Move 7 one grid right, 8 one grid up. Done
00:54:65 (6,7,8,9,1) - Horizontal spacing is slightly smaller than vertical spacing. Fixed
01:19:52 (5,6) - Too close. Fixed
01:23:43 (1,2,3) - Spacing. ???
01:25:62 (6,7,8) - ^ Fixed, I guess...
01:51:47 (8) - New combo for consistency. Done
02:11:23 (6,7) - I'd consider moving these down and left a bit to make an equilateral triangle across 5,6,7. Fixed
02:18:06 (5) - Move down a bit to line up with 3? Done
02:34:16 (1) - Any reason for this timing section? I dunno.. removed it

Same comment for Yes sleeping (must be really cold) applies here.

fartownik wrote:

The offset in Yes' and Senbon's difficulty (16) is different than in x3ns0r's, Ultimate's and naruti's (14).
I also noticed tags in x3ns0r's difficulty, "Jordan Sparks" (?), why "Jordan" and why only on x3ns0r's?

[Senbon's]

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00:25:038 (5) - 1 tick up (spacing) why
00:55:013 (8,9) - 1 tick right (spacing) already done
00:55:038 (9,1) - Swap new combo Done
01:25:062 (6) - New combo done
01:28:030 (5) - Delete new combo done

Xgor wrote:

[Overall]

[Senbon's Standing on Snow]

02:47:033 (6) - I suggest that you make the slider one white tick lower and then add notes at 02:47:033 and 02:47:033. What? I'd be removing the whole slider then. I did something else

Lissette wrote:

Hi

Senbon's Standing on Snow
00:31:047 (2,3) - wrong spacing Done
01:19:052 (5,6) - ^ ^

Xgor wrote:

[Overall]
The SB lookt kinda odd but it's ok although i would love if you could make a snow SB snow eh...
if i can find a jordin sparks with snow or something i stil like the current 1

[Running on Snow ]

I don't like the whistles i this diff but it's ok otherwise...
i like them so i leave them there <3

[Senbon's Standing on Snow]

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02:47:033 (6) - I suggest that you make the slider one white tick lower and then add notes at 02:47:033 and 02:47:033.

[ Ultimate's Walking on Snow]


[ x3ns0r's Jogging on Snow ]

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01:39:052 (4) - This slider is impossible to predict.....
02:40:098 (2,3,4,5,6) - LAAAMME......

[Yes Sleeps on Snow ]


Pretty good map so a star for you
*star*

Lissette wrote:

Hi
hello
Senbon's Standing on Snow

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00:31:047 (2,3) - wrong spacing
01:19:052 (5,6) - ^

Ultimate's Walking on Snow

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00:21:047 - add note?

x3ns0r's Jogging on Snow

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02:54:064 (7,8,9) - this is a bit confusing

Running on Snow
01:29:028 (11) - move the start point half beat later, and add note here 01:29:028 (just like the others parts ^^)fixed
02:20:001 (12) - move half beat later and remove one repeatFixed
02:30:050 (1) - i like what you did with the volume here ^^ Glad some1 notices and likes it

Star I dont see it T_T

Thank you for your mod lissette
you pinpointed the problems and give a solution Thank you for that