Last Note. - Setsuna Trip [Osu|Taiko]‬ · forum‬

Smoothie

Joined August 2011

Smoothie 2012-08-15T14:55:36+00:00

Byakugan249 wrote:
Alright let's get started. mod requested by Laurier on #modreqs
SPOILER
Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. I'll give you my opinion, advice, or if i'm curious about something.

[Smoothie's Taiko Oni]
00:18:400 (2) - i'm feeling that a k should be here because of the instrumental changes. √
00:18:814 (1) - try adding a k here if you follow the suggestion above. it should follow the instrumental nicely in this part. √
00:54:814 (6) - this should be a D to match the cymbals, and to represent a new pattern for this. √
01:57:400 (1) - this note isn't needed since it's not following the drums, so remove it. √
03:27:503 (11) - this should be a K for consistency with 02:20:469. √
I guess that's it. GL

Thank you~

http://puu.sh/Vyx3

Ulysses

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Ulysses 2012-08-17T10:18:48+00:00

<3

Shizuroh

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Joined October 2010

Shizuroh 2012-08-18T09:16:42+00:00

btw I see that you put ''moment'' in the tags, but the translation of ''Setsuna'' is momentary, and the whole song is called a momentary trip, so put ''a momentary'' in the tags :3

Ulysses

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Joined September 2010

Ulysses 2012-08-18T13:23:00+00:00

SkyDevil wrote:
btw I see that you put ''moment'' in the tags, but the translation of ''Setsuna'' is momentary, and the whole song is called a momentary trip, so put ''a momentary'' in the tags :3

Are you sure this translation?
Since I found the title name was "A Moment Trip" Not"A Momentary Trip".

May you please link us where did you found this translation please?

zaczac

409 posts

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Topic Starter

zaczac 2012-08-18T18:29:54+00:00

haha XD

add a URL by Nold's Trip(Creater'word) =v=
sorry poor quality

ueshu

35 posts

Joined March 2011

ueshu 2012-08-18T19:56:18+00:00

nice map

Shizuroh

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Joined October 2010

Shizuroh 2012-08-18T20:20:46+00:00

nold_1702 wrote:
SkyDevil wrote:
btw I see that you put ''moment'' in the tags, but the translation of ''Setsuna'' is momentary, and the whole song is called a momentary trip, so put ''a momentary'' in the tags :3
Are you sure this translation?
Since I found the title name was "A Moment Trip" Not"A Momentary Trip".

May you please link us where did you found this translation please?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iOcw6GmQCe4 o3o and otherwise put both in tags xD

zaczac

409 posts

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Topic Starter

zaczac 2012-08-18T20:39:42+00:00

ueshu wrote:
nice map

thanks star!! (๑╹ω╹๑ )
arigato-!!

Snowy Dream

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Joined September 2009

Snowy Dream 2012-08-19T03:43:06+00:00

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
-------------------------------------------------
[Easy]
00:54:814 (1) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.

Perfect

[SkyDevil's Normal]
01:44:262 (1) - spacing?
02:01:848 (2) - should be close to the start of 02:01:227 (1) since (1) ends at its start.
03:26:055 (2) - ^

[Hard]
01:22:124 (5) - not stack completely

[Insane]
00:47:779 (6,7) - use 2 sliders instead of them?

[Lauriextra]
00:57:917 (1,2,1) - the jump is a bit large
01:47:572 (1,2) - ctrl+R
03:27:503 (2) - newcombo to distinguish it
--------------------------------------------------
Excellent Mapset
> < Good Job

zaczac

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Topic Starter

zaczac 2012-08-19T08:59:13+00:00

Snowy Dream wrote:
Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
-------------------------------------------------
[Easy]
00:54:814 (1) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner. oops...Fixed~!!

Perfect

[Hard]
01:22:124 (5) - not stack completely
hum?If this slider stacked,looks so ugly by auto stacking...(Game playing mode)

Manual stack
SPOILER

Auto stack
SPOILER
And those circle placement were copy＆paste by 01:21:090 (1,2,3) Ctrl+H and J. so sorry keeping

[Insane]
00:47:779 (6,7) - use 2 sliders instead of them? nice idea!!! fixed~

--------------------------------------------------
Excellent Mapset
> < Good Job

almost fixed!! =v=
wow!! Snowy Dream thanks your mod and star!!

Laurier

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Joined February 2011

Laurier 2012-08-19T13:07:12+00:00

>Snowy Dream

thanks for mod!!
all fixed (๑╹ω╹๑ )

http://puu.sh/WMMv

Shizuroh

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Joined October 2010

Shizuroh 2012-08-19T15:33:00+00:00

Snowy Dream wrote:
Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue

[SkyDevil's Normal]
01:44:262 (1) - spacing? ~whats wrong with it?
02:01:848 (2) - should be close to the start of 02:01:227 (1) since (1) ends at its start. ~~~sorry but i dont understand what you are saying ;3;~~ fixed
03:26:055 (2) - ^ ~~~ ;;~~ I think its not a big deal here >3<

Excellent Mapset ~ :OO
> < Good Job

lalalala~ https://www.dropbox.com/s/hcgmam7hykw1o4f/Megpoid%20GUMI%20-%20Setsuna%20Trip%20%28Lizsig%29%20%5BSkyDevil%27s%20Normal%5D.osu

69 posts XDDD

Leorda

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Joined June 2009

Leorda 2012-08-19T16:30:52+00:00

Oh hi there

[Easy]
03:31:227 (1) - Remove new combo for your combo pattern

[Sky Devil's Normal]
00:27:503 (2) - Overlapped by hitbursts and spinner-osu. It can be hidden for beginners while gameplay (sometimes beginners are slow to read)
00:38:262 (5) - Stack under slider can confuse beginners, because it overlapped by hitbursts
01:01:227 (5) - ^
01:25:848 (1) - Why new combo?
01:43:641 (5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Lots of 1/2 clicks are seems not beginner-friendly to me. Perhaps, change the pattern?
01:52:745 (1) - Too much repeating slider can confuse beginners, because it's hard to tell when the slider is end
02:30:814 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Same issue as 01:43:641 (5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4)
02:45:296 (1) - Why new combo?

[Hard]
00:43:848 (3) - Fix this spacing, the jump is doesn't fit to the song at all
00:52:124 (3) - ^
02:43:021 (3) - ^

That's all I got, hope it help!

Shizuroh

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Joined October 2010

Shizuroh 2012-08-19T17:04:01+00:00

Leorda wrote:
Oh hi there ~hi :O

[Sky Devil's Normal]
00:27:503 (2) - Overlapped by hitbursts and spinner-osu. It can be hidden for beginners while gameplay (sometimes beginners are slow to read) ~Okay, Fixed~
00:38:262 (5) - Stack under slider can confuse beginners, because it overlapped by hitbursts ~fixfixfix
01:01:227 (5) - ^ ~ill let it stay for now
01:25:848 (1) - Why new combo? ~the combo will get too long otherwise
01:43:641 (5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Lots of 1/2 clicks are seems not beginner-friendly to me. Perhaps, change the pattern? ~more fix~
01:52:745 (1) - Too much repeating slider can confuse beginners, because it's hard to tell when the slider is end ~deleted
02:30:814 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Same issue as 01:43:641 (5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) ~fixed
02:45:296 (1) - Why new combo? ~same as at 01:25:848 (1) -

That's all I got, hope it help!

thankss :3 https://www.dropbox.com/s/hcgmam7hykw1o4f/Megpoid%20GUMI%20-%20Setsuna%20Trip%20%28Lizsig%29%20%5BSkyDevil%27s%20Normal%5D.osu

EDIT: why did i get kudosu? ;; how can i deny?

zaczac

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Topic Starter

zaczac 2012-08-20T15:17:39+00:00

sorry mistake……
I can't use pc now...If mat/bat see here,denied kudosu please

Kiiwa

928 posts

Joined January 2010

Kiiwa 2012-08-25T04:07:38+00:00

Hi~

General
Turn off Letter-boxing during breaks so that the whole video can be seen
03:27:503 - Better to start final kiai time here instead of 03:27:710 -
00:14:676 - You could add note here

Lauriextra
Is this for APP? I don't think i can mod XD
But, it's hard to tell its extra diff. Please change name to 'LauriExtra' so we can see the word 'Extra'

Insane
00:54:400 (1) - Make it look nicer, try to make the ends not touch~
01:12:503 (5) - Delete note
02:03:090 (3,4) - Stack under 02:02:676 (2) -
02:09:503 (6) - Move to X:204 Y:104 to continue with 02:07:641 (3,4,5) - this pattern please
02:09:917 (7) - CTRL+R
02:18:814 (4) - Move up one grid
03:40:124 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - Make all one combo to match with 01:43:641 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - and 02:43:848 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -

Hard
00:36:814 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You can make hexagon to make all things fit into one pattern, because 00:37:848 (6) - position look akward xD
01:17:986 (1,2,3,4) - Increase spacing
01:24:814 (2,3) - Bad spacing, CTRL+R 01:25:227 (3) -
02:17:986 (2,4) - Move more right
02:31:848 (4) - New combo

Normal
02:19:331 (1) - Start at 02:19:227 - or add note at 02:19:227 - so make consistant with 01:19:641 (3,1) -

Easy
02:47:365 - 02:53:986 - Can you map between these parts the same as Normal diff?

zaczac

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Topic Starter

zaczac 2012-08-27T09:47:23+00:00

Kiiwa wrote:
Hi~

General
Turn off Letter-boxing during breaks so that the whole video can be seen okay,All diff Fixed
03:27:503 - Better to start final kiai time here instead of 03:27:710 - sorry,keep this. If other guest try to fix it,I will fix it too.
00:14:676 - You could add note here okay~ nice idea=v= My diff is all fixed.But Guest diff is not fixed.

Insane
00:54:400 (1) - Make it look nicer, try to make the ends not touch~
01:12:503 (5) - Delete note
02:03:090 (3,4) - Stack under 02:02:676 (2) -
02:09:503 (6) - Move to X:204 Y:104 to continue with 02:07:641 (3,4,5) - this pattern please
02:09:917 (7) - CTRL+R
02:18:814 (4) - Move up one grid
03:40:124 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - Make all one combo to match with 01:43:641 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - and 02:43:848 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
ALL Fixed
Hard
00:36:814 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You can make hexagon to make all things fit into one pattern, because 00:37:848 (6) - position look akward xD
01:17:986 (1,2,3,4) - Increase spacing
01:24:814 (2,3) - Bad spacing, CTRL+R 01:25:227 (3) -
02:17:986 (2,4) - Move more right
02:31:848 (4) - New combo
ALL Fixed
Easy
02:47:365 - 02:53:986 - Can you map between these parts the same as Normal diff?
ALL Fixed

thanks Kiiwa~ =v= your mod is very helpful!!

Shizuroh

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Joined October 2010

Shizuroh 2012-08-29T08:40:29+00:00

THERES A PATCHOULI DIFF?! ./runs to osu

zaczac

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Topic Starter

zaczac 2012-08-29T13:17:58+00:00

SkyDevil wrote:
THERES A PATCHOULI DIFF?! ./runs to osu

yeah Patchouli's Setsuna Trip is Singed by Gero.

Let's play goooooooooo!! But so hard

Shizuroh

1,771 posts

Joined October 2010

Shizuroh 2012-08-30T06:06:13+00:00

Lizsig wrote:
SkyDevil wrote:
THERES A PATCHOULI DIFF?! ./runs to osu
yeah Patchouli's Setsuna Trip is Singed by Gero.

Let's play goooooooooo!! But so hard

I heard xD and its just as hard as laurier's extra ;-;

sherrie__fay

437 posts

Joined October 2010

sherrie__fay 2012-08-30T10:16:18+00:00

mod req from Scorpiour's queueΣ(･ω･ﾉ)ﾉ

[General]

remove all bookmarks o.o

[Easy]

00:51:503 (1) - finish(?

[SkyDevil's Normal]

01:38:262 (1) - remove NC
01:44:262 (1) - ^
01:44:469 (2) - NC
02:02:469 (3) - 1 grid(level 4) down
02:45:296 (1) - remove NC
02:48:710 (1,2) - hard to read; try put 02:49:021 (2) - a bit out
02:50:365 (1,2,1,2) - ^
03:13:641 (1) - change hitsound set to soft here o.o

[Lauriextra]

it should names “LauriExtra”(??
00:19:124 (4) - make it a bit far away from 00:18:710 (2) -
00:54:400 (2) - whistle(?
01:26:676 (4) - NC for read o.o
01:47:779 (3) - stack with the start of 01:46:745 (4) - (X:176 Y:192) will be better(?
02:15:503 (1) - 1 grid(level 4) up
02:20:883 (1) - make it stack with 02:19:227 (5) - better
02:25:227 (4) - NC
02:31:848 (4) - NC
02:33:814 (2,4) - exchange their positions.
03:18:193 (2) - NC
03:31:434 (4) - NC
03:56:262 (1) - remove NC

[Hard]

00:54:400 (1) - add whistle(?
01:12:503 (5) - I think it's a triple-hit >△<
01:21:917 (4) - make them stack
02:17:572 (1,2,3,4) - all clap(?
03:26:676 (2) - NC for slider speed changes

[Insane]

00:54:400 (1) - add whistle(?
00:51:193 - add note(?
01:44:365 (5) - NC
02:03:090 (3) - clap
02:07:227 (1,2) - 2 grids(level 4) left
02:17:572 (1,2,3,4) - all clap(?
02:21:503 (4) - 1 grid(level 4) down
03:13:848 - change hitsound set to soft(?
03:22:331 (2) - NC
03:38:055 (3) - NC
03:41:365 (7) - NC

Awesome beatmapΣ(･ω･ﾉ)ﾉ
I can pass 290BPM i'm pro(＊ﾟ∀ﾟ)っ(slap
good luck with rank(=ﾟωﾟ)人(ﾟωﾟ=)♪♪♪

Chewin

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Chewin 2012-08-30T22:08:16+00:00

Hi Lizsig, mod request from my modding queue :3
I'm going to mod just 3 diffs to follow my queue's rules sorry D:

[General]
You forgot to add "moment" in the tags of taiko diff

[Easy]
00:21:710 (5) - I'd add new combo here
00:31:641 (1) - What about to extend this slider by 1/1? In this way it'd fit the vocal's end here: 00:33:090 and the sound on 00:32:365 (where you can add a clap)
00:37:848 (1) - Finish on this slider's end? It is audible from the music too
00:46:124 (4) - ^ on the slider's repeat this time
01:13:848 (4) - New combo? New vocal is starting here and it'd make the map more flowing
01:19:641 (4) - Ugly slider's curve in test mode. You could improve it in this way;

SPOILER

84,120,79641,2,0,B|4:168|4:276|88:328,1,240.000003576278

01:19:641 (4) - Add clap on this slider's end and new combo. I was thinking and.. why not. I had got a good idea.
You could use some green lines during this slider so that every slider's point is increasing its volume with the song's one. It is just awesome.
Timing points to add:

79641,-100,4,1,1,40,0,0
79848,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
80055,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
80262,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0
80469,-100,4,1,1,80,0,0
80676,-100,4,1,1,90,0,0
80883,-100,4,1,1,100,0,0

01:21:296 (1) - Why don't you use 100% volume during kiai time? It's really boring with this 70% volume :\
02:03:917 (1) - Same of 00:37:848 (1)
02:17:986 (2,3) - You should to make a blanket here, something like this:

SPOILER

324,168,137986,1,8
404,128,138400,2,0,B|424:168|408:216,1,80.0000011920928,0|8

02:19:227 (4) - The same thing of 01:19:641 (4) *-*
02:20:883 (1) - Same about kiai time's volume :\
02:32:469 (3) - 02:19:227 (4) same
03:25:434 (3) - ^
03:31:227 (1) - You should remove new combo here to keep consistency
03:38:676 (3) - same
Good map, just suggestions :3

[Hard]
00:21:710 (7) - Same of Easy here?
00:32:883 (3) - I know you are keeping consistency with 00:31:641 (1,2) but.. following the vocal the rhythm should be so, it fits better:

00:59:365 (3) - ^
01:06:814 (1) - Remove new combo? I think it's useless since new combo should be set here 01:06:400, then..
01:17:572 (5) - Move further from 01:17:365 (4) to keep consistency with previous patterns please, it's a bit confusing :\
01:22:124 (5) - Improve the overlap like this one 01:21:296 (2)
02:40:331 (7) - Using distance snap move this circle in x:52 y:60
02:42:814 (2) - Move it further from the previous elements :\ You are always using the same spacing between a 1/2 and 1/1, and it is confusing..
02:47:565 - 02:49:221 - 02:50:876 - Remove these 3 breaks because the arrows appear during the player is still playing. Then yea, the break is really short you can avoid it xD
02:54:193 (1) - Following the vocal (as you are doing) this slider should start 1/2 earlier

[Insane]
00:29:055 (3) - Are you trying to make a blanket here? If yes you should to make it better in this way:

SPOILER

32,236,28745,2,0,B|72:272|124:260|124:260|116:280,1,110,0|8

00:59:366 (5) - Extend this slider by 1/2?
00:59:366 (5) - New combo
01:11:986 (4) - Move to x:448 y:308 in this way the slider 01:12:607 (5) is blanketted with it and 01:11:365 (3)
01:37:021 (6) - CTRL + R flows better
I liked the map with these patterns but.. you should follow more the music :\ I don't like the rhythm ç.ç

That's it :3
I wish you good luck with rank =w=

zaczac

409 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

zaczac 2012-08-31T06:00:32+00:00

thanks both .almost fixed

sherrie__fay wrote:
Awesome beatmapΣ(･ω･ﾉ)ﾉ
I can pass 290BPM i'm pro(＊ﾟ∀ﾟ)っ(slap
good luck with rank(=ﾟωﾟ)人(ﾟωﾟ=)♪♪♪

You can pass this song!? oh, you so pro ( ﾟДﾟ)yeah!!!

Chewin wrote:
[Insane]
I liked the map with these patterns but.. you should follow more the music :\ I don't like the rhythm ç.ç

That's it :3
I wish you good luck with rank =w=

I'm very worried about remake Insane.......=w=(already once remap insane diff.)

thanks sherrie__fay and Chewin!!

Laurier

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Joined February 2011

Laurier 2012-08-31T11:17:28+00:00

http://puu.sh/10DQn

Shizuroh

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Joined October 2010

Shizuroh 2012-08-31T13:53:32+00:00

sherrie__fay wrote:
mod req from Scorpiour's queueΣ(･ω･ﾉ)ﾉ

[SkyDevil's Normal]

01:38:262 (1) - remove NC ~sure
01:44:262 (1) - ^
01:44:469 (2) - NC ~no, she starts singing a new sentence at the new combo
02:02:469 (3) - 1 grid(level 4) down ~fix~~
02:45:296 (1) - remove NC ~kaykay
02:48:710 (1,2) - hard to read; try put 02:49:021 (2) - a bit out ~I'll see what other mappers say
02:50:365 (1,2,1,2) - ^ ~xD
03:13:641 (1) - change hitsound set to soft here o.o ~ill keep it for now :3
Awesome beatmapΣ(･ω･ﾉ)ﾉ
I can pass 290BPM i'm pro(＊ﾟ∀ﾟ)っ(slap ~LOL
good luck with rank(=ﾟωﾟ)人(ﾟωﾟ=)♪♪♪ ~kawaii....

Thanks for mod :3

SPOILER

osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: GUMI 2.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 207096
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Setsuna Trip
Artist:Megpoid GUMI
Creator:Lizsig
Version:SkyDevil's Normal
Source:Last Note.
Tags:vocaloid vocaloid2 Smoothie SkyDevil Laurier moment

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:0.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg"
Video,0,"movie.flv"
//Break Periods
2,41771,51958
2,107979,113200
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
15090,206.896551724138,4,1,1,70,1,0
39917,-100,4,1,1,25,0,0
40124,-100,4,1,1,32,0,0
40331,-100,4,1,1,40,0,0
40538,-100,4,1,1,47,0,0
40745,-100,4,1,1,55,0,0
40952,-100,4,1,1,62,0,0
41158,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0
41365,-100,4,1,1,85,0,0
41572,-100,4,1,1,100,0,0
53158,-100,4,1,1,30,0,0
53365,-100,4,1,1,40,0,0
53572,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
53779,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
53986,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0
81296,-100,4,1,1,70,0,1
107779,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0
114400,-100,4,1,1,40,0,0
119365,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
120193,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
120607,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0
137572,-100,4,2,1,100,0,0
140883,-100,4,1,1,70,0,1
167365,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0
193848,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
200469,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
201296,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
202124,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
202952,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
203779,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
204607,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
205434,-100,4,1,1,30,0,0
205641,-100,4,1,1,35,0,0
205848,-100,4,1,1,40,0,0
206055,-100,4,1,1,45,0,0
206262,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
206469,-100,4,1,1,55,0,0
206676,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
206883,-100,4,1,1,65,0,0
207090,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0
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terametis

1,140 posts

Joined April 2009

terametis 2012-09-01T08:14:19+00:00

はろーはろー
以下は全て提案です!

[Easy]

00:37:021 (3) - remove clap 直前までclapの置き方的に、ここに置くと00:41:986からの盛り上がりが欠けると思います　欲を言えば、00:36:607からスライダーで配置すると歌詞とあっていい感じになるかも

SPOILER

00:42:814 (3) - このパートの音付けがちょっと退屈に思えます。　りばーすあろーにfinish　適当に音量調整
00:46:124 (4) - ^
00:47:365 (5) - 開始にfinish　
00:49:434 (4) - りばーすあろーにfinish　
01:03:503 (3) - 00:37:021と同じ　ここもスライダーのほうが歌詞にあってそう
01:10:952 (x) - add note clap付きのnoteが欲しいです
01:13:848 (1) - add finish
01:16:331 (2) - 開始にfinish
01:17:986 (1) - ここから徐々に音量あげたらかっこいいかも
01:24:607 (1,2,3,4,5) - この曲で一番盛り上がる場所だと思うので、もっと盛り上がる音取りと音付けが欲しいです(曖昧　僕だったらたぶんこんな感じ
(4),(5)をstackして溜めて、(1),(2)スライダー、(3),(4),(5)もstack　(1),(2)の開始と(3),(5)にfinishつけて緑線で適当に音量調整、僕だったら55%ぐらい

SPOILER

368,208,84607,6,0,B|432:304,1,80.0000011920928,4|0
316,288,85434,2,0,B|304:328|256:340,1,80.0000011920928,4|8
184,292,86262,1,4
184,292,86676,1,8
184,292,87090,1,4

01:31:227 (1) - 開始にfinish　音量調整
01:32:055 (2) - ^　
01:32:883 (3) - ^　
01:37:848 (1) - ^　
01:38:676 (2) - ^
01:39:503 (3) - ^
01:44:469 (1) - finish　音量調整
01:45:296 (3) - ^
02:03:090 (3) - 00:37:021と同じ
02:03:917 (1) - 開始にclap
02:10:538 (x) - add note
02:13:434 (1) - add finish
02:15:917 (2) - 開始にfinish
02:17:572 (1) - ここから徐々に音量あげたらかっこいいかも
02:24:193 (1) - 開始にfinish　音量調整
02:25:021 (2) - ^
02:25:848 (3) - add finish　(3)に単発、(4)にスライダーだと少し歌詞にあわないような気がするので、出来れば別な感じがいいです!　finishつけるなら音量調整
02:26:262 (4) - ここは1番だとfinishついてたから多分付け忘れ？
02:28:331 (2) - 開始にfinish　音量調整
02:30:814 (1) - ^
02:31:641 (2) - ^
02:32:469 (3) - ^
02:37:434 (1) - ^
02:38:262 (2) - ^
02:39:090 (3) - ^
02:44:055 (1) - ^
02:44:883 (2) - ^
02:55:641 (1) - 開始と終わりにfinish
02:57:296 (x) - 歌詞にあわせると少し分かりづらい気がするので、ここからスライダー置いてみるのはどうですか!　もし変えるなら、開始と終わりにfinishついてると僕的に盛り上がります!

SPOILER

03:17:158 (1) - スライダーボディの音が若干気になります
03:18:814 (3) - ^
03:30:400 (1) - add finish　音量調整
03:31:227 (3) - 開始にfinish　音量調整
03:32:055 (4) - finish　音量調整
03:32:469 (5) - 終わりにfinish　音量調整
03:37:021 (1) - 開始にfinish　音量調整
03:37:848 (2) - ^
03:38:676 (3) - ^

[SkyDevil's Normal]

00:39:917 (x) - I feel reducing volume here is no need.
00:55:641 (2) -If you use jump here, 00:57:710 (5) may be mistaken to beginner. so I don't agree with this design.
01:26:986 (4) - hum, this is a difficult design to Normal. This is 01:04:745 (6) - , it is difficult to be a similar distance in different rhythms. If you want to use this rhythm, I think, there is a need to use the slider at least.
02:17:572 (x) - reduce volume please. If you want a big sound for emphasis, then you try increasing gradually in this way?　

SPOILER

[Hard]

00:18:193 (x) - Add note
00:18:400 (1) - 折り返してなるべく間作らないほうがかっこいいきがします　

SPOILER

00:20:055 (3) - ^
00:53:158 (1,2,3,4) - (5)以外全部にclapつけてもおもしろいと思います!
00:53:986 (5) - whistleつけてもおもしろいと思います
01:09:917 (4) - 開始にもclapつけると僕的にはgood パターン気にしなければ・・・!
01:16:124 (6) - 単調になるのでこのnote削除してみては
01:58:331 (2) - 終わりにclap
02:09:503 (4) - 01:09:917と同じ
02:54:090 (1) - でりーとのーと　やり辛いと思います　適当にこんなかんじにしてみては

SPOILER

[Insane]
初見プレイ時リプレイ　曲は元から知ってる状態です!

00:16:538 (8) - 見えなかった(発狂
00:53:158 (1,2,3,4) - Hardと同じ提案
00:53:986 (5) - ^
01:17:986 (1) - ここから徐々に音量あげたらかっこいいかも
01:27:607 (x) - ここに音あったらかっこよさそう
01:40:952 (1,2,3,4) - 違和感があるでござる
02:17:572 (1) - 徐々に(ry
02:27:193 (x) - ここに音ほしいです!
03:33:400 (x) - ^

[Lauriextra]

00:43:745 (3,4,1) - 流れが悪いとおもいます　4の位置変えたほうがいいと思います
01:01:641 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - なんですかあこれ(怒　

SPOILER

01:47:676 (2,3) - こんな感じはどうでしょうか!!

SPOILER

02:37:227 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - この(2)3つは難しすぎだと思うなあ(棒
02:40:331 (1,2) - Ctrl+R　
03:31:227 (3) - Add New combo
03:31:434 (1) - Remove New combo こっちのほうが分かりやすいと思います

Ranked期待してます!　がんばってください!

Laurier

1,786 posts

Joined February 2011

Laurier 2012-09-01T09:03:27+00:00

http://puu.sh/10VPg
ほとんどつかわせてもろた

edit:アプデもうおわってるんかな？

Last edited by Laurier 2012-09-02T11:04:18+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Naryuga

782 posts

Joined October 2010

Naryuga 2012-09-01T10:46:37+00:00

As requested! Naryuga's Taiko Muzukashii here~
1000 circles / 6 sliders / 1 spinner

http://puu.sh/10WHZ.osu

何かあったら気が変わったとかそういうことでも遠慮なくいってください! Thanks!

zaczac

409 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

zaczac 2012-09-01T11:01:16+00:00

Naryuga wrote:
As requested! Naryuga's Taiko Muzukashii here~
1000 circles / 6 sliders / 1 spinner

http://puu.sh/10WHZ.osu

何かあったら気が変わったとかそういうことでも遠慮なくいってください! Thanks!

Yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!!7diff!!!!!!!!!!!!!gooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!>w<
ありがとー！！！！！！！

Shizuroh

1,771 posts

Joined October 2010

Shizuroh 2012-09-01T13:53:05+00:00

Lizsig wrote:
Naryuga wrote:
As requested! Naryuga's Taiko Muzukashii here~
1000 circles / 6 sliders / 1 spinner

http://puu.sh/10WHZ.osu

何かあったら気が変わったとかそういうことでも遠慮なくいってください! Thanks!

Yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!!7diff!!!!!!!!!!!!!gooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!>w<
ありがとー！！！！！！！

YAY.

Shizuroh

1,771 posts

Joined October 2010

Shizuroh 2012-09-01T18:21:45+00:00

terametis wrote:
[SkyDevil's Normal]

00:39:917 (x) - I feel reducing volume here is no need. ~I think it sounds great :O
00:55:641 (2) -If you use jump here, 00:57:710 (5) may be mistaken to beginner. so I don't agree with this design. ~hmm, i think normal players should be able to handle this much
01:26:986 (4) - hum, this is a difficult design to Normal. This is 01:04:745 (6) - , it is difficult to be a similar distance in different rhythms. If you want to use this rhythm, I think, there is a need to use the slider at least. ~hmm,, i think i should put it a bit closer >3<
02:17:572 (x) - reduce volume please. If you want a big sound for emphasis, then you try increasing gradually in this way?　
SPOILER
~did the thing you did in the spoilerbox o3o

I feel so awkward when there's a full japanese mod until it gets combobreaked by me :c

SPOILER

osu file format v9

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[Metadata]
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Artist:Megpoid GUMI
Creator:Lizsig
Version:SkyDevil's Normal
Source:Last Note.
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zaczac

409 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

zaczac 2012-09-02T14:23:48+00:00

terametis wrote:
はろーはろー
以下は全て提案です!

[Easy]

00:37:021 (3) - remove clap 直前までclapの置き方的に、ここに置くと00:41:986からの盛り上がりが欠けると思います　欲を言えば、00:36:607からスライダーで配置すると歌詞とあっていい感じになるかも
SPOILER
00:42:814 (3) - このパートの音付けがちょっと退屈に思えます。　りばーすあろーにfinish　適当に音量調整
00:46:124 (4) - ^
00:47:365 (5) - 開始にfinish　
00:49:434 (4) - りばーすあろーにfinish　
01:03:503 (3) - 00:37:021と同じ　ここもスライダーのほうが歌詞にあってそう
01:10:952 (x) - add note clap付きのnoteが欲しいです
01:13:848 (1) - add finish
01:16:331 (2) - 開始にfinish
01:17:986 (1) - ここから徐々に音量あげたらかっこいいかも
01:24:607 (1,2,3,4,5) - この曲で一番盛り上がる場所だと思うので、もっと盛り上がる音取りと音付けが欲しいです(曖昧　僕だったらたぶんこんな感じ
(4),(5)をstackして溜めて、(1),(2)スライダー、(3),(4),(5)もstack　(1),(2)の開始と(3),(5)にfinishつけて緑線で適当に音量調整、僕だったら55%ぐらい
SPOILER
SPOILER
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01:31:227 (1) - 開始にfinish　音量調整
01:32:055 (2) - ^　
01:32:883 (3) - ^　
01:37:848 (1) - ^　
01:38:676 (2) - ^
01:39:503 (3) - ^
01:44:469 (1) - finish　音量調整
01:45:296 (3) - ^
02:03:090 (3) - 00:37:021と同じ
02:03:917 (1) - 開始にclap
02:10:538 (x) - add note
02:13:434 (1) - add finish
02:15:917 (2) - 開始にfinish
02:17:572 (1) - ここから徐々に音量あげたらかっこいいかも
02:24:193 (1) - 開始にfinish　音量調整
02:25:021 (2) - ^
02:25:848 (3) - add finish　(3)に単発、(4)にスライダーだと少し歌詞にあわないような気がするので、出来れば別な感じがいいです!　finishつけるなら音量調整
02:26:262 (4) - ここは1番だとfinishついてたから多分付け忘れ？
02:28:331 (2) - 開始にfinish　音量調整
02:30:814 (1) - ^
02:31:641 (2) - ^
02:32:469 (3) - ^
02:37:434 (1) - ^
02:38:262 (2) - ^
02:39:090 (3) - ^
02:44:055 (1) - ^
02:44:883 (2) - ^
02:55:641 (1) - 開始と終わりにfinish
02:57:296 (x) - 歌詞にあわせると少し分かりづらい気がするので、ここからスライダー置いてみるのはどうですか!　もし変えるなら、開始と終わりにfinishついてると僕的に盛り上がります!
SPOILER
03:17:158 (1) - スライダーボディの音が若干気になります
03:18:814 (3) - ^
03:30:400 (1) - add finish　音量調整
03:31:227 (3) - 開始にfinish　音量調整
03:32:055 (4) - finish　音量調整
03:32:469 (5) - 終わりにfinish　音量調整
03:37:021 (1) - 開始にfinish　音量調整
03:37:848 (2) - ^
03:38:676 (3) - ^

[Hard]

00:18:193 (x) - Add note
00:18:400 (1) - 折り返してなるべく間作らないほうがかっこいいきがします　
SPOILER
00:20:055 (3) - ^
00:53:158 (1,2,3,4) - (5)以外全部にclapつけてもおもしろいと思います!
00:53:986 (5) - whistleつけてもおもしろいと思います
01:09:917 (4) - 開始にもclapつけると僕的にはgood パターン気にしなければ・・・!
01:16:124 (6) - 単調になるのでこのnote削除してみては
01:58:331 (2) - 終わりにclap
02:09:503 (4) - 01:09:917と同じ
02:54:090 (1) - でりーとのーと　やり辛いと思います　適当にこんなかんじにしてみては
SPOILER

[Insane]
初見プレイ時リプレイ　曲は元から知ってる状態です!

00:16:538 (8) - 見えなかった(発狂
00:53:158 (1,2,3,4) - Hardと同じ提案
00:53:986 (5) - ^
01:17:986 (1) - ここから徐々に音量あげたらかっこいいかも
01:27:607 (x) - ここに音あったらかっこよさそう
01:40:952 (1,2,3,4) - 違和感があるでござる
02:17:572 (1) - 徐々に(ry
02:27:193 (x) - ここに音ほしいです!
03:33:400 (x) - ^

Ranked期待してます!　がんばってください!

terametis wrote:
02:28:331 (2) - 開始にfinish　音量調整

ここだけパターンが違ってたのでkeep!!　後はすべて直しました！！！！！！　All fixed!!

めてぃすさんありがとー！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！１

Ulysses

1,911 posts

Joined September 2010

Ulysses 2012-09-02T15:29:09+00:00

I saw a super pro modder.

zaczac

409 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

zaczac 2012-09-02T16:43:21+00:00

nold_1702 wrote:
I saw a super pro modder.

yes. pro modders modded many times this map.

But my map is bad =_= lol

kanpakyin

Global Moderator

4,236 posts

Joined June 2010

kanpakyin 2012-09-22T12:47:42+00:00

Hi. Taiko mod here.

[General]

Rename 'Naryuga's Taiko Muzukashii' to 'Naryuga's Taiko Oni' and 'Smoothie's Taiko Oni' to 'Smoothie's Taiko Inner Oni' because 'Naryuga's Taiko Muzukashii' is harder than muzukashii level.

[Naryuga's Taiko Muzukashii]

00:15:090 (1) - I would like to add a finish (big note) here if I were you because there is a strong accent.
00:41:055 (1) - Probably move this note to 00:41:158 - to follow the drum sound, also, I don't hear either vocal or drum sound at 00:41:055 -, so I don't see the point of putting a note there.
01:57:503 (3,4,5) - kkk here sounds much better.

[Smoothie's Taiko Oni]

00:15:090 (1,2,3,1,1) - I'm thinking a contrary way. I do think that kkkdk is much better than dddkd because the pitch of 00:15:400 (1) - is lower than others in this chain.
00:16:745 (1,2,3,1,1) - ^
00:23:365 (1,2,3,1,1) - ^
00:32:262 (4) - Remove the big note here because there are no any kind of accent or emotion so I don't think finish fits the music here.
00:32:883 (7,1) - ^
00:53:158 (1,2,3,4) - Change this to big kat instead of don is due to the high pitch there. After that remove the finish at 00:53:986 (5) - because virtually the accent are stopped at 00:53:779 - .
00:58:745 (4) - Remove the big note here, explain it before.
00:59:365 (7,1) - ^
03:43:021 (1) - ^

Smoothie

569 posts

Joined August 2011

Smoothie 2012-09-23T08:13:19+00:00

kanpakyin wrote:
Hi. Taiko mod here.

SPOILER
[General]
Rename 'Naryuga's Taiko Muzukashii' to 'Naryuga's Taiko Oni' and 'Smoothie's Taiko Oni' to 'Smoothie's Taiko Inner Oni' because 'Naryuga's Taiko Muzukashii' is harder than muzukashii level. renamed :3
[Smoothie's Taiko Oni]
00:15:090 (1,2,3,1,1) - I'm thinking a contrary way. I do think that kkkdk is much better than dddkd because the pitch of 00:15:400 (1) - is lower than others in this chain. √
00:16:745 (1,2,3,1,1) - ^ √
00:23:365 (1,2,3,1,1) - ^ √
00:32:262 (4) - Remove the big note here because there are no any kind of accent or emotion so I don't think finish fits the music here. √
00:32:883 (7,1) - ^ √
00:53:158 (1,2,3,4) - Change this to big kat instead of don is due to the high pitch there. After that remove the finish at 00:53:986 (5) - because virtually the accent are stopped at 00:53:779 - . √
00:58:745 (4) - Remove the big note here, explain it before. √
00:59:365 (7,1) - ^ √
03:43:021 (1) - ^ √

Sorry for the delay ._.

http://puu.sh/17MZP

Naryuga

782 posts

Joined October 2010

Naryuga 2012-09-23T08:49:05+00:00

kanpakyin wrote:
Hi. Taiko mod here.

[General]
Rename 'Naryuga's Taiko Muzukashii' to 'Naryuga's Taiko Oni' and 'Smoothie's Taiko Oni' to 'Smoothie's Taiko Inner Oni' because 'Naryuga's Taiko Muzukashii' is harder than muzukashii level. - yes... I asked some players to test mine and they say it's hard for "Muzukashii" diff because a lot of 1/4 rhythm patterns are used rather than 1/2. Renamed.
[Naryuga's Taiko Muzukashii]
00:15:090 (1) - I would like to add a finish (big note) here if I were you because there is a strong accent.
00:41:055 (1) - Probably move this note to 00:41:158 - to follow the drum sound, also, I don't hear either vocal or drum sound at 00:41:055 -, so I don't see the point of putting a note there.
01:57:503 (3,4,5) - kkk here sounds much better.
- All done

Thank you for modding~

@Lizsig
あぷでおなしゃす>u< http://puu.sh/17Nl1

@Smoothie
I have to say sorry for making you bother to rename your map ._. thanks

Aurele

Global Moderator

7,606 posts

Joined January 2011

Aurele 2012-09-23T18:21:07+00:00

Hi, sorry for the delay.
Reply to what you haven't fixed and why, thanks.

[Easy]
00:38:883 (2) - This slider shouldn't start here. Even if it fits with the vocal, it doesn't play good. I don't see any problem on moving it to 00:39:090. It plays pretty good and also, add a clap to the end of the slider.
01:17:986 (1) - You could add a finish here to keep the consistency with previous finishes.
01:18:814 (3) - This slider can confuse beginner players due to it's stack with 01:16:331 (2) - . So It could be hidden by this
01:25:021 - Forgot to add a clap here? Anyways, add one here to keep the consistency with claps.
01:34:124 - Add a clap here? Same reason as above.
02:04:952 (2) - I wonder why this slider starts here... look at 00:38:883 (2) for more information.
03:20:469 (1) - I don't know why I heard a whistle here and there's no whistle. Would you like to add a whistle here? Its sounds good imo.

[Normal]
00:15:089 (1,2,3,4,5) - This sounds really empty, not like this one 00:20:055 (3,4,5) - . You should do something to make it less empty.
01:00:193 (3) - Seeying this with the distance snap... the circle is too much close to these sliders and as I can see, these sliders are overlapping each others.
02:27:503 (1) - You should really add a finish here

[Hard]
AR-1.
01:18:400 (2,4) - You could add claps here. It sounds good and it keeps the consistency.
02:17:986 (2,4) - Same as above.

[Muzukaiishi]
There's alot of unsnapped circle here. Resnap all notes and add moment to the tags since it's missing.

here's a star since this beatmap is ready for ranking~

Shizuroh

1,771 posts

Joined October 2010

Shizuroh 2012-09-29T15:31:57+00:00

Gabe wrote:
Hi, sorry for the delay.
Reply to what you haven't fixed and why, thanks.

[Normal]
00:15:089 (1,2,3,4,5) - This sounds really empty, not like this one 00:20:055 (3,4,5) - . You should do something to make it less empty. ~hmm,,, ill keep it :c
01:00:193 (3) - Seeying this with the distance snap... the circle is too much close to these sliders and as I can see, these sliders are overlapping each others. õkay, ill move these sliders a little bit
02:27:503 (1) - You should really add a finish here ~sure

Note to Lizsig: Change Artist to Last Note. o3o

btw thanks for mod :3

SPOILER

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Artist:Megpoid GUMI
Creator:Lizsig
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96,56,86986,1,4
256,344,87710,5,0
256,288,87917,2,0,B|200:252|176:188,1,120,0|8
256,288,88745,2,0,B|312:252|336:188,1,120,0|8
356,140,89365,2,0,B|420:168|460:236,1,120
456,272,89986,1,8
416,344,90400,2,0,B|356:372|296:348,1,120,0|8
256,312,91021,5,0
208,272,91227,1,0
164,228,91434,2,0,B|164:164,2,60,0|8|0
124,272,92055,1,0
80,228,92262,2,0,B|80:164,2,60,0|8|0
256,192,92883,12,4,94538
256,48,94952,5,8
216,120,95365,2,0,B|168:168|96:180,1,120,0|8
112,220,95986,2,0,B|167:228|215:276,1,120,0|0
256,296,96607,1,8
344,272,97021,6,0,B|396:232|396:168,1,120,0|8
372,88,97848,1,4
304,32,98262,2,0,B|232:32,1,60,8|0
196,32,98676,1,0
156,120,99090,6,0,B|220:120,1,60,8|0
264,120,99503,2,0,B|280:188|212:256,1,120,0|8
168,280,100227,2,8,B|136:208|52:192,1,150,0|8
32,112,101158,5,4
92,56,101572,2,0,B|152:28|232:32,1,120,8|0
303,31,102400,2,0,B|360:28|420:56,1,120,8|0
476,128,103227,1,8
424,200,103641,2,0,B|376:240|300:244,1,120,0|8
252,232,104262,5,0
196,216,104469,1,0
144,192,104676,2,0,B|120:172|108:144,2,60,0|8|0
84,88,105296,1,0
36,136,105503,2,0,B|20:168|12:212,2,60,0|8|0
256,192,106124,12,4,107779
256,44,114400,6,0,B|120:60|48:172,1,240,4|0
40,244,115641,1,0
40,244,115848,1,0
80,324,116262,6,0,B|164:352|260:324,1,180
340,284,117296,1,0
340,284,117503,1,0
256,192,117710,12,0,119365
256,48,119779,5,0
232,124,120193,1,0
260,200,120607,1,0
260,200,120814,1,0
212,268,121227,6,8,B|184:332,2,60,0|8|0
128,276,121848,2,0,B|104:340,2,60,0|0|8
148,216,122469,1,0
148,160,122676,2,0,B|120:96|148:40,1,120,0|8
240,24,123503,2,0,B|256:92|320:124,1,120,0|8
396,160,124331,1,4
256,344,124952,5,0
240,288,125158,1,0
256,232,125365,2,0,B|304:136|252:44,1,180
168,36,126400,2,0,B|104:60|80:132,1,120,8|0
132,196,127227,2,0,B|140:236|124:268,2,60,8|0|4
256,52,128469,5,8
380,196,129296,1,0
256,348,130124,1,8
168,336,130538,1,0
100,280,130952,6,0,B|48:144|124:44,1,240,0|8
176,124,132193,1,0
224,204,132607,2,0,B|276:308|424:332,1,240,0|8
448,280,133641,1,0
460,224,133848,1,0
464,164,134055,1,0
456,104,134262,6,0,B|416:52|344:48,1,120,0|8
256,80,135090,1,0
158,48,135503,2,0,B|96:52|56:104,1,120,8|0
116,168,136331,2,0,B|184:188|212:256,1,120,8|0
306,242,137158,2,0,B|328:188|396:168,1,120,8|4
360,92,137986,5,4
280,56,138400,1,4
192,48,138814,1,4
256,192,139331,12,4,140883
256,44,141296,5,8
228,124,141710,1,0
216,208,142124,2,0,B|192:264|116:296,1,120,8|0
204,348,142952,1,8
308,348,143365,1,0
380,289,143779,2,0,B|320:264|296:208,1,120,8|0
252,136,144607,5,8
212,88,144814,1,0
156,68,145021,2,0,B|88:96,1,60
68,136,145434,1,8
52,184,145641,1,0
56,240,145848,2,0,B|56:308|128:352,1,120,0|8
172,308,146572,2,0,B|240:272|328:260,1,150,4|8
400,232,147503,5,4
380,148,147917,2,0,B|364:88|304:52,1,120,8|0
256,128,148745,1,8
204,56,149158,2,0,B|148:89|132:149,1,120,0|8
196,216,149986,1,0
256,232,150193,1,0
316,216,150400,1,8
420,232,150814,5,0
384,276,151021,2,0,B|364:304|336:316,1,60,0|8
284,344,151434,1,0
224,344,151641,2,0,B|188:328|160:296,1,60
128,272,152055,2,0,B|96:244|84:212,1,60,8|0
256,192,152469,12,4,154124
240,48,154538,5,8
172,104,154952,2,0,B|232:136|208:220,1,120,0|8
300,207,155779,2,0,B|280:136|340:104,1,120,0|8
408,176,156607,1,0
408,176,156814,1,0
408,176,157021,1,8
392,268,157434,6,0,B|328:320,1,60
288,336,157848,2,0,B|216:336,1,60,8|0
166,305,158262,2,0,B|120:268,2,60,0|0|8
136,176,159090,6,0,B|244:104|344:180,1,210,4|4
412,96,160538,5,0
412,96,160745,2,0,B|364:56|292:48,1,120,0|8
208,49,161572,2,0,B|148:56|100:96,1,120,0|8
48,176,162400,1,0
140,188,162814,2,0,B|208:216|216:296,1,120,8|0
298,276,163641,2,0,B|304:216|372:188,1,120,8|0
464,160,164469,5,8
432,104,164676,1,0
384,76,164883,1,0
272,52,165296,1,8
204,52,165503,1,0
144,76,165710,2,0,B|36:156|72:304,1,240,4|4
256,336,167365,5,0
112,192,168710,6,0,B|48:192,1,60
52,192,169021,1,0
256,84,170365,6,0,B|255:20,1,60
255,24,170676,1,0
364,192,172021,6,0,B|424:191,1,60
424,191,172331,1,0
256,192,172538,12,0,173986
256,48,174400,5,8
216,128,174814,2,0,B|200:168|164:196,3,60,0|0|8|0
152,228,175641,1,0
160,320,176055,1,8
256,344,176469,2,0,B|256:264,3,60,0|0|8|0
256,232,177296,5,0
312,152,177710,1,8
364,232,178124,2,0,B|424:232,3,60,0|0|8|0
480,228,178952,5,0
456,140,179365,1,8
388,72,179779,1,0
388,72,179986,2,0,B|300:40|188:32,1,180,0|4
156,56,180814,6,8,B|88:68|44:136,1,120
44,208,181641,1,8
92,248,181848,1,0
152,264,182055,2,8,B|212:252|256:196,2,120
212,344,183296,5,8
276,340,183503,1,0
336,320,183710,1,8
388,280,183917,1,0
416,220,184124,2,8,B|448:168|440:84,2,120
356,48,185365,5,8
256,32,185779,1,8
160,56,186193,1,8
88,124,186607,1,8
76,216,187021,1,8
88,272,187227,6,0,B|152:272,3,60,0|8|0|8
176,312,188055,2,0,B|236:312,3,60,0|8|0|8
268,352,188883,2,0,B|336:352,3,60,0|8|0|8
364,316,189710,6,0,B|364:248,3,60,0|8|0|8
408,232,190538,2,0,B|408:168,3,60,0|8|0|8
456,144,191365,2,0,B|456:76,3,60,0|8|0|8
412,52,192193,2,0,B|304:16|156:16,1,240
136,136,193641,5,0
136,136,193848,2,0,B|260:88|388:144,1,240,0|2
137,248,195503,2,0,B|261:296|372:248,1,240,0|2
256,32,197158,5,0
136,248,197986,1,2
380,248,198814,1,0
472,32,199641,1,2
256,32,200469,5,0
180,72,201296,1,2
132,144,202124,1,0
136,228,202952,1,2
196,288,203779,1,0
276,316,204607,1,2
364,312,205434,6,0,B|364:248,2,60
440,252,206055,2,0,B|440:320,2,60
396,188,206676,2,0,B|396:152,4,30
456,88,207503,5,4
384,44,207917,2,0,B|324:24|244:20,1,120,0|8
184,48,208745,1,0
112,100,209158,2,0,B|76:160|72:212,1,120,8|0
84,296,209986,1,8
160,340,210400,5,0
208,316,210607,1,0
256,280,210814,2,0,B|256:216,2,60,8|0|0
304,316,211434,1,0
352,340,211641,1,8
392,316,211848,1,0
436,280,212055,2,0,B|464:188|424:72,1,210,4|4
256,28,213710,5,0
196,96,214124,2,0,B|148:136|148:212,1,120,8|0
256,188,214952,1,8
363,202,215365,2,0,B|364:136|316:96,1,120,0|8
368,28,216193,5,0
432,96,216607,1,8
456,180,217021,1,0
464,232,217227,1,0
460,288,217434,2,0,B|448:324|420:344,1,60,8|0
372,352,217848,1,0
312,352,218055,1,0
248,336,218262,2,0,B|212:332|188:308,1,60,8|0
256,192,218676,12,4,220331
256,48,220745,5,8
252,136,221158,2,0,B|228:164|196:180,1,60
252,136,221572,2,0,B|276:164|308:180,1,60,8|0
368,224,221986,2,0,B|252:296|136:224,2,240,4|4|4

zaczac

409 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

zaczac 2012-10-03T10:43:03+00:00

Gabe wrote:
Hi, sorry for the delay.
Reply to what you haven't fixed and why, thanks.

[Easy]
00:38:883 (2) - This slider shouldn't start here. Even if it fits with the vocal, it doesn't play good. I don't see any problem on moving it to 00:39:090. It plays pretty good and also, add a clap to the end of the slider.
01:17:986 (1) - You could add a finish here to keep the consistency with previous finishes.
01:18:814 (3) - This slider can confuse beginner players due to it's stack with 01:16:331 (2) - . So It could be hidden by this
01:25:021 - Forgot to add a clap here? Anyways, add one here to keep the consistency with claps.
01:34:124 - Add a clap here? Same reason as above.
02:04:952 (2) - I wonder why this slider starts here... look at 00:38:883 (2) for more information.
03:20:469 (1) - I don't know why I heard a whistle here and there's no whistle. Would you like to add a whistle here? Its sounds good imo.

[Normal]
00:15:089 (1,2,3,4,5) - This sounds really empty, not like this one 00:20:055 (3,4,5) - . You should do something to make it less empty.
01:00:193 (3) - Seeying this with the distance snap... the circle is too much close to these sliders and as I can see, these sliders are overlapping each others.
02:27:503 (1) - You should really add a finish here

[Hard]
AR-1.
01:18:400 (2,4) - You could add claps here. It sounds good and it keeps the consistency.
02:17:986 (2,4) - Same as above.

[Muzukaiishi]
There's alot of unsnapped circle here. Resnap all notes and add moment to the tags since it's missing.

here's a star since this beatmap is ready for ranking~

sorry for late
all fixed~!! thanks Gabe!!!!!!

mintong89

3,699 posts

Joined July 2011

mintong89 2012-10-04T10:10:18+00:00

mint's Taiko Modding/Guest Diff Queues <3

d = don
k = kat
D = BIG DON
K = BIG KAT
re = remove

[Taiko Oni]
wow i like Naryuga taiko mapper style~

00:32:883 - k
01:01:021 - k k D (better than d d D)

[Taiko Inner Oni]
nothing wrong~

Naryuga

782 posts

Joined October 2010

Naryuga 2012-10-04T14:41:32+00:00

mintong89 wrote:

mint's Taiko Modding/Guest Diff Queues <3

d = don
k = kat
D = BIG DON
K = BIG KAT
re = remove

[Taiko Oni]
wow i like Naryuga taiko mapper style~ - !! Thank you, very encouraging words to me

00:32:883 - k - done~
01:01:021 - k k D (better than d d D) - k d D instead.

[Taiko Inner Oni]
nothing wrong~

Thanks for modding

I did a bit more changes. http://puu.sh/1bjRc.osu　さんくす

Shizuroh

1,771 posts

Joined October 2010

Shizuroh 2012-10-18T22:30:51+00:00

I want to have the 100th post but I want a reason to post sooo +star

EDIT: wow

zaczac

409 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

zaczac 2012-10-19T23:54:37+00:00

so cool !!!!

Satellite

Beatmap Nominator

3,703 posts

Joined June 2012

Satellite 2012-10-27T15:51:50+00:00

ぬーぶあいあーるしーもっど

zaczac

409 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

zaczac 2012-10-27T15:56:53+00:00

Dagger-Gazel wrote:
ぬーぶあいあーるしーもっど

IRC mod thanks~!!!!!!!!

22:58 Dagger-Gazel: りずしぐさんのかいせんｗ
22:58 Dagger-Gazel: りずしぐさんのかいせんｗ
22:58 Dagger-Gazel: りずしぐさんのかいせんｗ

"IRC mod"

22:59 Lizsig: short ver.だけど感想を貰いたいからよかったらテストプレイお願いします！
23:00 Dagger-Gazel: もうちょっとまってね！
23:00 Lizsig: はい！
23:00 Dagger-Gazel: Ｉｎｓａｎｅ２？
23:00 Lizsig: yeah!
23:03 Dagger-Gazel: 次位にＦＣできそう！
23:03 Lizsig: 凄い
23:03 Lizsig: 難しくなってます！
23:05 Dagger-Gazel: ×なんてみえない
23:06 Lizsig: 圧倒的Accの裏に隠れた一個の×なんて見えない
23:06 Dagger-Gazel: ×なんてなかった
23:06 Dagger-Gazel: いいね！
23:06 Lizsig: ちょっとBPM290っぽくなった気がします
23:06 Dagger-Gazel: でもなんかちょくちょく
23:06 Dagger-Gazel: 極端に難しいところと
23:06 Dagger-Gazel: 簡単なところが・・・！
23:06 Lizsig: おしえて！
23:07 Lizsig: ください！
23:07 Dagger-Gazel: 00:18:193 - ここは余裕でした
23:07 Lizsig: そこ結構つなげません（
23:08 Dagger-Gazel: 00:39:917 - ここの３つ
23:08 Dagger-Gazel: 789をもうちょっとふくざつにしてもいいかも？
23:08 Dagger-Gazel: そのあと遅くなるし！
23:09 Dagger-Gazel: (遅くなるの一瞬だし)
23:09 Lizsig: ちょっと音が足りなさすぎた？若干おいてる途中に違和感があった場所です・・・
23:09 Dagger-Gazel: ちょっと物足りない感が
23:09 Lizsig: そこは結構違和感感じてた場所なので全力で直します！！
00:28 Dagger-Gazel: 00:26:469 (7) -
00:28 Dagger-Gazel: 特に配置気にしてないなら5　6後　7　で三角形にしたほうがいいかなーと
00:29 Lizsig: おっけー！そこは大体適当においてたので気になってたから修正！
00:30 Dagger-Gazel: 00:34:952 - ２のスライダーの流れ的に　２後の位置より上に来るより下にきたほうがいいかも？ｗ
00:31 Dagger-Gazel: で！
00:31 Dagger-Gazel: 00:39:710 - 言ってたここは　6と7の組み合わせ３回とも利用しちゃったら
00:31 Dagger-Gazel: だめなのかな
00:32 Lizsig: 多分そこは直します！
00:32 Lizsig: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/475155
00:33 Lizsig: これで大丈夫かな？（スペーシング x3.2(驚愕)
00:34 Lizsig: 繋げたからオールオッケー！！
00:35 Dagger-Gazel: 00:58:124 - Ｆｉｎｉｓｈ音小さくない？ｗ
00:35 Dagger-Gazel: どうなんだろう・・・ｗ
00:35 Dagger-Gazel: でもなんか音的には合ってると思う?けど
00:35 Dagger-Gazel: もうちょっとなんか欲しい感
00:36 Lizsig: そこのFinishだけちょっと音量あげたほうがいいかな？　10ぱーせんとあげました！
00:36 Dagger-Gazel: よくわかんないけどね！
00:37 Dagger-Gazel: 01:11:158 - x284 y296　ここがいいかも？
00:38 Dagger-Gazel: 01:12:814 - 4の終わりに近付けて6をジャンプさせるより
00:38 Dagger-Gazel: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/475165
00:38 Dagger-Gazel: こっちのほうが個人的には好き
00:39 Dagger-Gazel: ＞＜Ｌ
00:39 Dagger-Gazel: ＞＜
00:39 Dagger-Gazel: 01:16:124 - ここからなんかあってないきがする(
00:40 Lizsig: リズムはあってると思ったんだけどclapの入れ方が
00:40 Lizsig: どうもしっくりこない・・・
00:41 Dagger-Gazel: それだけでした・・
00:41 Lizsig: Kiai timeのところが一番言われると思ったのにｗｗ
00:42 Dagger-Gazel: 確かにバックメロディの最初のところより簡単に思うけど
00:42 Dagger-Gazel: Ｉｎｓａｎｅなら別によくね！Ｅｘｔｒａあるし！ってなんか脳裏過った・・・
00:42 Lizsig: ｗｗｗ
00:45 Lizsig: Modありがとおおおおおおおおお

Satellite

Beatmap Nominator

3,703 posts

Joined June 2012

Satellite 2012-10-30T05:23:33+00:00

PMから!!!

OD-6
Drain-6
しないと難しい!!!

zaczac

409 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

zaczac 2012-10-31T15:43:53+00:00

>>Dagger-Gazel
pro player!!!!
nice play Ins2

Insane remake and finished

Saten

Global Moderator

3,871 posts

Joined August 2010

Saten 2012-11-04T23:19:09+00:00

[General]
Normal-slidertick is too noisy. Take the ticksound from the soft set instead

[Lauriextra]
You understand that this is 290bpm right?

[Insane]
00:14:676 (1) - clap
01:07:331 - add something here, it feels like something is missing
01:45:296 (6,8) - I suggest you stack (8) on the tail of (6) instead. It seems too close otherwise
01:54:400 (1) - is this 1 grid off on purpose?

SPOILER

01:57:710 (1) - finish on head
01:57:710 - soft from here to 01:59:572 -
01:59:158 (4) - fix this if you changed to soft
02:09:917 (3) - this is kinda hard to see because of the hitburst of (2)

SPOILER

02:48:710 (1) - Finish isn't needed here imo. The (2) is giving enough effect
02:50:365 (1) - ^
02:52:021 (1) - ^
03:13:900 - from here to 03:25:434 - should be soft. It fit's better imo
03:25:434 (1) - finish

[Hard]
00:28:745 (2) - This should end at 00:28:952 - and the next should start at 00:29:055 - and a note on 00:29:365 - . just like 00:30:193 (1,2,3) -
01:32:883 (5,1) - space it with 1/2 instead so the players can react properly
01:46:124 (5,1) - ^
01:54:400 - remove break? And no, you wont die even with less than half HP

01:57:710 (1) - finish on head
01:57:710 - soft from here (same as before)
01:59:158 (4) - weird spacing
02:32:469 (4,1) - 1/2 spacing
02:45:710 (7,1) - ^
03:14:676 - same as other diff. Soft notes here
03:25:434 (1) - finish on head
03:38:676 (4,1) - 1/2 spacing

[SkyDevil]
Timing section bug use this to fix it (Taken from your previous fix post)

SPOILER

[TimingPoints]
15090,206.896551724138,4,1,1,70,1,0
39917,-100,4,1,1,25,0,0
40124,-100,4,1,1,32,0,0
40331,-100,4,1,1,40,0,0
40538,-100,4,1,1,47,0,0
40745,-100,4,1,1,55,0,0
40952,-100,4,1,1,62,0,0
41158,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0
41365,-100,4,1,1,85,0,0
41572,-100,4,1,1,100,0,0
53158,-100,4,1,1,30,0,0
53365,-100,4,1,1,40,0,0
53572,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
53779,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
53986,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0
81296,-100,4,1,1,70,0,1
107779,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0
114400,-100,4,1,1,40,0,0
119365,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
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00:36:607 (3,4) - space these more
00:54:400 (6) - finish on tail
01:14:676 (2) - finish on head
01:26:262 (3,4) - space more
01:29:986 (5,6) - too close imo
01:44:676 (3,4) - this is.. D:
02:02:469 (3) - 1 grid down
02:19:331 (1) - start this 1/2 earlier
02:48:710 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - stacking like this is really mean. Also pattern like this is not recommended on a Normal
03:13:848 (2) - finish on head
03:27:710 - double timing section

This is too hard for a Normal imo

[Easy]
00:59:986 (2) - this should start at 00:59:779 - instead. and extend it to 01:01:021 -
01:54:400 - soft from here to 01:59:572 -
03:14:676 - soft from here to 03:25:434 -

I guess that's all~~
Good luck!

zaczac

409 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

zaczac 2012-11-05T03:02:11+00:00

Saten wrote:
[Lauriextra]
You understand that this is 290bpm right?

lol

But this is true.

btw sorry skydevil Timing section bug……

EDIT: I can't use PC for now.(School) iphone~

EDIT:almost fixed!!!!! thanks a lot of help!

Shizuroh

1,771 posts

Joined October 2010

Shizuroh 2012-11-10T09:03:17+00:00

eehhh? you should tell me whenever there is a mod :c (did you already fix it or should i do it right now?

)

zaczac

409 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

zaczac 2012-11-10T15:56:00+00:00

SkyDevil wrote:
eehhh? you should tell me whenever there is a mod :c (did you already fix it or should i do it right now? )

oops,sorry.... I didn't fix your diff.
I never try to fix guest diff without asking.

Milkshake

532 posts

Joined August 2011

Milkshake 2012-11-16T05:12:15+00:00

poor sig D:
<3

zaczac

409 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

zaczac 2012-11-16T06:04:52+00:00

KeigoClear wrote:
i want moremoremore skill up go !

But I'm poor hummmm……(´-﹏-`；)
kawaii shake~
<3

Shizuroh

1,771 posts

Joined October 2010

Shizuroh 2012-11-17T09:53:29+00:00

Saten wrote:
[SkyDevil]
Timing section bug use this to fix it (Taken from your previous fix post)
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~Oh thanks
00:36:607 (3,4) - space these more ~Sure
00:54:400 (6) - finish on tail ~Okay :3
01:14:676 (2) - finish on head ~fixfix~
01:26:262 (3,4) - space more ~i made something else out of it :3
01:29:986 (5,6) - too close imo ~okaay
01:44:676 (3,4) - this is.. ~SUPERSEXY
02:02:469 (3) - 1 grid down ~I think this is already correctly placed
02:19:331 (1) - start this 1/2 earlier ~whoopss =3=
02:48:710 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - stacking like this is really mean. Also pattern like this is not recommended on a Normal ~I think they should be able to do this ><
03:13:848 (2) - finish on head ~okay :3
03:27:710 - double timing section ~ow ><

This is too hard for a Normal imo ~I want to challenge the players :<

Good luck!

thanks for your mod

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Kawayi Rika

osu! Alumni

3,635 posts

Joined December 2010

Kawayi Rika 2012-11-23T12:37:50+00:00

Hi ~ Lizsig ~

Mod time for my Queue ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

Inconsistent Artist/TitleUnicode,pls check osu file and fix.

[Insane]

OD+1 much better.
Missing add video in this diff.
01:21:090 (1) - Add new combo,follow with parttern.
02:20:676 (1) - ^

[Hard]

Missing add video in this diff.
00:39:090 (2) - Add new combo and Remove 00:38:883 (1).

[SkyDevil's Normal]

00:15:089 (1,3) - Missing make symmetry to here.
01:10:538 (1,3) - ^
03:17:986 (2,3) - ^
00:53:986 - Add finish,sound much better.
02:19:227 (1) - Should end to 02:20:883.
03:42:814 - Remove finish,sound better to me.

OK ~ This map is soo cool,but i don't think extra diff is acceptable.

Anyway Good luck ~

Shizuroh

1,771 posts

Joined October 2010

Shizuroh 2012-11-23T14:28:30+00:00

Kawayi Rika wrote:
[SkyDevil's Normal]

00:15:089 (1,3) - Missing make symmetry to here. ~okay
01:10:538 (1,3) - ^ ~uhu
03:17:986 (2,3) - ^ ~sure
00:53:986 - Add finish,sound much better. ~hmm... sorry, I don;t want to spam finishes ><
02:19:227 (1) - Should end to 02:20:883. ~whoops DX
03:42:814 - Remove finish,sound better to me. ~

OK ~ This map is soo cool,but i don't think extra diff is acceptable. ~nooooooooo ;-;

Anyway Good luck ~thanks :3

Thaankksss :3

SPOILER

osu file format v10

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Title:Setsuna Trip
TitleUnicode:
Artist:Last Note.
ArtistUnicode:
Creator:Lizsig
Version:SkyDevil's Normal
Source:Vocaloid
Tags:Megpoid GUMI vocaloid2 Smoothie SkyDevil Laurier moment Naryuga
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zaczac

409 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

zaczac 2012-11-24T14:26:40+00:00

Kawayi Rika wrote:
Hi ~ Lizsig ~

Mod time for my Queue ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

Inconsistent Artist/TitleUnicode,pls check osu file and fix.

[Insane]

OD+1 much better.
Missing add video in this diff.
01:21:090 (1) - Add new combo,follow with parttern.
02:20:676 (1) - ^

[Hard]

Missing add video in this diff.
00:39:090 (2) - Add new combo and Remove 00:38:883 (1).

OK ~ This map is soo cool,but i don't think extra diff is acceptable.

Anyway Good luck ~

All Done!!

But I don't want to delete Extra diff... Insane diff is so easy

thanks mod Kawayi Rika~!!

zaczac

409 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

zaczac 2012-12-09T18:40:52+00:00

I forgot to tell you.... This song can pass........
thanks awesome players

SPOILER

wcx19911123

3,862 posts

Joined June 2010

wcx19911123 2012-12-21T13:57:37+00:00

here's your ticket, sorry for the delay

[General]
fine

[Easy]
00:35:158 (1,2) - the slider can blanket better with the circle
01:19:641 - I suggest use 60% or higher volume here, or the start of the slider is too quiet imo, doesn't fit the song well
01:30:607 (4) - I highly suggest to change this into only 1 circle at 01:30:814 - , 1/1 beat with 290 BPM is too hard to read/play in an Easy diff imo
01:37:227 (4) - ^
01:38:676 (2,3) - can blanket better here
01:43:848 (4) - same here
02:25:848 (3,4,5) - how about change them into a slider from 02:25:848 - to 02:26:572 - ? fit vocal here sound also nice
02:30:193 (4) - same as before
ok I'll ignore the same issues(^) from now on. please check and fix them by yourself
03:17:572 - I suggest not use clap here, sound too loud in such a soft part. maybe you can use soft hitsounds at this part
03:25:434 - same as before

[SkyDevil's Normal]
00:29:158 (2) - this slider repeat too many times, kinda hard to read when it end. also 00:29:365 - , 00:29:572 - and 00:29:779 - is following the vocal, but 00:29:158 - here's not vocal's starting, the vocal start at 00:29:055 - but slider start at 00:29:158 - , it's kinda confusing and don't fit the song well. I suggest repeat this slider 1 time less and move it to 00:29:365 - , sure you should fix the spacing if you fixed the slider
00:34:952 (1,2) - I suggest repeat each slider 1 time less, slider with 2 times repeating is kinda hard for newbies to read/play
00:38:883 (1,2) - why add a huge jump here? this is very confusing, it make newbies think 00:39:710 (2) - will start at 00:39:917 - . better to change a pattern here
00:53:158 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is too hard as a Normal diff imo, better change some of them into slider
00:55:227 (1,2,3,4,5) - the spacing is TOOOOOOOOOOOO confusing here, please use 0.8x spacing..
01:00:607 (4,5) - this 1/1 stack is really too hard to read, there's no same pattern or rhyme before this one, this's really confusing, hard to read it's 1/1 stack or 2/1 stack..
01:01:641 (1,2,3) - this pattern maybe is a bit hard
01:05:365 (1,2,3) - spacing issues again
01:26:262 (3) - I suggest change this into a circle, or the rhyme is kinda hard to read as a Normal diff
01:26:676 (4,1) - why here's a huge jump? it's hard to play for newbies
01:44:676 (3,4) - short sliders with different repeat times are really too hard to read/play, hope you can change a pattern and make them repeat the same times
02:00:607 (3,4,1,2) - what the spacing here? please fix them..
02:13:641 (4,5,6) - I suggest change them into a reapeat sliders, first the song here is a soft part(at least no kiai), second this pattern is hard to play as a Normal diff
02:17:158 (5,1,2,3) - I don't know why add so many finishes here, sound loud and noisy, also they don't fit the song at all. better to fix this(or at least volume down a bit)
02:19:227 (1,1) - I'd say the note is too far from the spinner, also the spinner is not a long one.. so it's really too hard to play, please fix this
02:24:607 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this pattern is too hard to play imo
02:48:710 (1,2) - 1/2 stack in a 290 BPM's Normal diff? this is impossible to read the rhyme
03:03:296 (1,2,3,4) - too hard to play imo, change to 2 sliders or reduce the spacing please
03:20:469 (1,2) - the spacing changed too suddenly.. it really hard to read the rhyme
03:25:434 (1,2,3) - this is hard to read the rhyme, cuz you use many sliders with 2 times repeating but here they only repeat 1 time. also the 1/2 repeat sliders is really too hard to read when it end
03:30:400 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - pattern too hard
03:40:745 (1) - too far form the spinner
this diff need much much more works now, there're many spacing issues and full of unreasonable rhyme/patterns. hope this diff can be much better in the future

[Hard]
HD+1, it's too low now
00:34:331 (3) - if you want to follow vocal, this note should be at 00:34:434 -
01:00:814 (3) - ^
01:12:503 (5) - ctrl+1, and 2 gird left and 1 gird up, to make the spacing looks like the same distance as the slider length, easier to read the rhyme
01:20:883 - I think here need to use normal hitsounds, right
01:55:227 - maybe you can add a break here, or add some objects here
02:12:090 (5) - same as 01:12:503 (5) -

[Insane]
00:34:021 (4,1) - I suggest 100% stack them, or the rhyme is hard to read. now it makes people think (1) start at 00:34:124 -
00:38:986 (3) - this slider is vocal off. change to 2 circle at 00:38:986 - and 00:39:090 - ?
01:00:503 (4) - same as before
01:05:469 (3) - ^
01:20:883 - same as Hard here
01:38:572 (5) - vocal off slider again, how about change to a circle at 01:38:572 - , a slider from 01:38:676 - to 01:38:883 - , and then change 01:38:883 (6) - into a circle at 01:38:986 - , like what you did at 01:45:193 -
01:55:227 - same as Hard
02:09:917 (3) - I strongly suggest not stack this short slider under other objects, it hard to read it's a slider or a circle now
02:18:917 - add note here and 02:19:021 - and 02:19:124 - ? fit the song imo
02:56:365 (3) - same as before
02:58:021 (3) - ^
03:41:986 - how about add a circle here at x:256 y:32, then spinner start at 03:42:090 - , will fit the song better imo

[Lauriextra]
I don't want to mod this diff.. but I'll give some suggestions about how to make a nice extra diff below
this diff is mostly like many 0108 maps, but this one play much worse than 0108's, there're many reasons

first, this diff has too many(more than 4) circles together, and some of their spacing is very large. for example, 00:19:641 (6,7,8,9) - 4 circles, and with bigger spacing than the sliders, 00:23:676 (2,1,2,3) - 4 circles, with huge jumps, 00:43:641 (2,3,4) - 3 circles, with huge jumps, 02:32:469 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - circles stack and circles with huge spacing. too many circles together makes the diff really too hard to play, unlike most of 0108 maps, 0108 usually use many 1/2 sliders, without repeating, this is a nice way to keep the map fun but not hard to play

second, this diff's pattern used too much overlap stuffs, and the jumps are not fit the song(or not fun to play). for example, 00:15:917 (5,6,7,8) - overlap 1/2 sliders, why not add small jumps on them? 00:39:710 (7,1) - overlap sliders, this looks kinda odd, and if you add a jump between the 2 sliders, will fit the song much better

third, use jumps to fit the song please but not on making the diff very hard to play. and remember to use more jumps between sliders but not between circles, this's because slider jumps is much easier to play than circle jumps, and slider is better to use nice flow than circles.

here's only my advice in this diff o.o
the whole mapset really need much more works now

zaczac

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zaczac 2012-12-22T01:10:28+00:00

thanks your mod!!
Last Note. - Setsuna Trip
Last updated 3 weeks ago now.

If Last updated 4 weeks ago and go graveyard, I'll delete.

people say "this song should be made by 0108. You shouldn't make this."
It was true.

Last edited by zaczac 2012-12-22T12:52:23+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Ryafuka

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Joined May 2010

Ryafuka 2012-12-22T06:13:08+00:00

Lizsig wrote:
thanks your mod!!
Last Note. - Setsuna Trip
Last updated 3 weeks ago now.

If Last updated 4 weeks ago and go graveyard, I'll delete.

people say "this song should be made by 0108. You don't should make this."
It was true.

I believe that mapping should be made freely. (Of course,also important thing is a for rankable..)

"whose map/mapper is the most fun". Yes,it is subjective things.
That is no reason why you shouldn't do the mapping this song.

I hope you will get to ranked this.

ganbatte ;__;

Shizuroh

1,771 posts

Joined October 2010

Shizuroh 2012-12-27T21:15:09+00:00

aaaaa nooo dont delete D:

Shizuroh

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Joined October 2010

Shizuroh 2013-01-01T16:22:41+00:00

ah im dissapointed :<

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