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Topic Starter
Hi!
These are suggestions, that can make sound better your map, lets see if you like :p
btw I like this song n_n
Normal
00:10:61 (1) - move to the next red tick
00:14:86 (8) - repeat one more time the slider
00:22:88 (6) - move to the next white tick
00:25:08 (1) - move to the next red tick (sounds better, imo)
00:31:85 (2) - remove and put a single note here
00:36:88 (2) - ^
00:40:97 (1) - ^
00:41:91 (3) - ^
00:52:77 (1) - move to the white tick erlier and reverse the slider one more time
00:56:86 (8) - I guess you forgot to silence the end point, am I wrong?
01:08:81 (2) - remove?
01:17:94 (8) - move to the next red tick
01:22:18 (7) - remove and place a single note
01:34:14 (2) - end point at 01:34:45
01:40:27 (5) - remove and start the next slider here, end point of the slider, just where it is
01:42:79 - add note
01:42:95 (4) - move to the next blue tick, end point at 01:43:26, remove the reverse
01:43:89 (1) - remove, and place a slider, start point 01:43:89, end point at 01:44:20, the reverse two times, the last reverse should end at 01:44:83
Star!
These are suggestions, that can make sound better your map, lets see if you like :p
btw I like this song n_n
Normal
00:10:61 (1) - move to the next red tick
00:14:86 (8) - repeat one more time the slider
00:22:88 (6) - move to the next white tick
00:25:08 (1) - move to the next red tick (sounds better, imo)
00:31:85 (2) - remove and put a single note here
00:36:88 (2) - ^
00:40:97 (1) - ^
00:41:91 (3) - ^
00:52:77 (1) - move to the white tick erlier and reverse the slider one more time
00:56:86 (8) - I guess you forgot to silence the end point, am I wrong?
01:08:81 (2) - remove?
01:17:94 (8) - move to the next red tick
01:22:18 (7) - remove and place a single note
01:34:14 (2) - end point at 01:34:45
01:40:27 (5) - remove and start the next slider here, end point of the slider, just where it is
01:42:79 - add note
01:42:95 (4) - move to the next blue tick, end point at 01:43:26, remove the reverse
01:43:89 (1) - remove, and place a slider, start point 01:43:89, end point at 01:44:20, the reverse two times, the last reverse should end at 01:44:83
Star!
Topic Starter
Thanks for your mod ~Lissette wrote:
Hi!
These are suggestions, that can make sound better your map, lets see if you like :p
btw I like this song n_n
Normal
00:10:61 (1) - move to the next red tick <<fixed
00:14:86 (8) - repeat one more time the slider <<It had matched the song's clap
00:22:88 (6) - move to the next white tick <<fixed
00:25:08 (1) - move to the next red tick (sounds better, imo) <<yeah,fixed
00:31:85 (2) - remove and put a single note here
00:36:88 (2) - ^
00:40:97 (1) - ^
00:41:91 (3) - ^ << ^ all fixed
00:52:77 (1) - move to the white tick erlier and reverse the slider one more time
00:56:86 (8) - I guess you forgot to silence the end point, am I wrong? <<fixed
01:08:81 (2) - remove?
01:17:94 (8) - move to the next red tick <<fixed
01:22:18 (7) - remove and place a single note <<fixed
01:34:14 (2) - end point at 01:34:45 <<fixed
01:40:27 (5) - remove and start the next slider here, end point of the slider, just where it is <<fixed
01:42:79 - add note
01:42:95 (4) - move to the next blue tick, end point at 01:43:26, remove the reverse
01:43:89 (1) - remove, and place a slider, start point 01:43:89, end point at 01:44:20, the reverse two times, the last reverse should end at 01:44:83
Star!
八错八错~我的培养果然是蛮到位滴~
为啥Ross的图就比别人时间长捏..不过捏,SB达人就素不一样!
[normal]
00:10:77(1)-缩短至00:10:93?
00:11:25(x)-加一个圈圈?
01:00:80(7)-去掉?
01:05:04(4)-改成条,从01:04:88开始?
01:21:56(5)-明白你把这里音效调低的用意,但是还是觉得有点奇怪啦...
01:34:14(2)-对齐?
01:42:79(4)-感觉用reavese slider怪怪的.直接用slider并保持原有的长度?
01:43:89(1)-缩短至01:44:37?
01:44:68(x)-加一个圈圈?
01:46:41(1)-把圈改成条,结束于01:46:57?
加油做哈~我还是蛮喜欢这歌的~
PS:不用刻意在里面画个"M"啦~我明白的~
为啥Ross的图就比别人时间长捏..不过捏,SB达人就素不一样!
[normal]
00:10:77(1)-缩短至00:10:93?
00:11:25(x)-加一个圈圈?
01:00:80(7)-去掉?
01:05:04(4)-改成条,从01:04:88开始?
01:21:56(5)-明白你把这里音效调低的用意,但是还是觉得有点奇怪啦...
01:34:14(2)-对齐?
01:42:79(4)-感觉用reavese slider怪怪的.直接用slider并保持原有的长度?
01:43:89(1)-缩短至01:44:37?
01:44:68(x)-加一个圈圈?
01:46:41(1)-把圈改成条,结束于01:46:57?
加油做哈~我还是蛮喜欢这歌的~
PS:不用刻意在里面画个"M"啦~我明白的~
Topic Starter
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
This was on my queue~ (which means it was still open on Firefox ^^)
And yay Breeze map.
The following are suggestions of course.
Modding starts here!
[General]
For timing sections silencing a beat at the end of a slider(or a repeat), set it directly on the end, it won't effect it.
Like in Normal: 00:14:54 - Move that silent section here. Do this only for slider repeats or ends. Circles or beginning of sliders, keep it early. (You did 00:51:82 (8) right.)
[Normal]
--Kiai
Why does it start 1/4th early?
--Beatmap
00:45:85 - A spinner(if placed right)would sound neat here!
01:24:07 - Spinner too? (Not too long, so they still get a break.)
[/Normal]
Feel free to PM in IRC if you make another difficulty, so I can mod again.
Star'd
And yay Breeze map.
The following are suggestions of course.
Modding starts here!
[General]
For timing sections silencing a beat at the end of a slider(or a repeat), set it directly on the end, it won't effect it.
Like in Normal: 00:14:54 - Move that silent section here. Do this only for slider repeats or ends. Circles or beginning of sliders, keep it early. (You did 00:51:82 (8) right.)
[Normal]
--Kiai
Why does it start 1/4th early?
--Beatmap
00:45:85 - A spinner(if placed right)would sound neat here!
01:24:07 - Spinner too? (Not too long, so they still get a break.
)[/Normal]
Feel free to PM in IRC if you make another difficulty, so I can mod again.
Star'd
Remember to wait for me~~~~ I am in the progress of making a difficulty for ya. :3 However, the timing still sounds a bit off... Anyone can help with timing ? :3 Thanks !
P.S. : Star first. =D
P.S. : Star first. =D
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hi!Breeze!
modding time!
[NORMAL]
00:44:27 (5) 确定在这里要设置连打？虽然这里的歌词对上了，但是作为normal，设置连打是不是有些困难？
嘛，不过也不是没见过normal下连打的图。（好吧，这个问题当我没说过，应该没什么问题。继续下面
00:55:76 (5) end of slider - clap
00:56:23 (6) clap
00:56:86 (8) whistle (end 不要加
great map and nice storyboard.
star for your map!
modding time!
[NORMAL]
00:44:27 (5) 确定在这里要设置连打？虽然这里的歌词对上了，但是作为normal，设置连打是不是有些困难？
嘛，不过也不是没见过normal下连打的图。（好吧，这个问题当我没说过，应该没什么问题。继续下面
00:55:76 (5) end of slider - clap
00:56:23 (6) clap
00:56:86 (8) whistle (end 不要加
great map and nice storyboard.
star for your map!
Timing check on request~
Also:
00:17:06 (4,5) - Hmmm, you need to restack these. Know how? You can use a Distance Snap multiplier of 0.0x, and turning Grid Snap off. Try to move the note around and tada~
This difficulty looks good.
- BPM: 95.30
- Offset: 380
Also:
00:17:06 (4,5) - Hmmm, you need to restack these. Know how? You can use a Distance Snap multiplier of 0.0x, and turning Grid Snap off. Try to move the note around and tada~
This difficulty looks good.
Topic Starter
thanks, after your timing help, other diffculty will come soon, and when it has 30+SP, please check it againGens wrote:
Timing check on request~Yup, this seems like it's the real deal.
- BPM: 95.30
- Offset: 380
ah~thanks very much for timing help!
Also:
00:17:06 (4,5) - Hmmm, you need to restack these. Know how? You can use a Distance Snap multiplier of 0.0x, and turning Grid Snap off. Try to move the note around and tada~
This difficulty looks good.
Topic Starter
Alex0686 wrote:
This was on my queue~ (which means it was still open on Firefox ^^)
And yay Breeze map.
The following are suggestions of course.
Modding starts here!
[General]
For timing sections silencing a beat at the end of a slider(or a repeat), set it directly on the end, it won't effect it.
Like in Normal: 00:14:54 - Move that silent section here. Do this only for slider repeats or ends. Circles or beginning of sliders, keep it early. (You did 00:51:82 (8) right.)
[Normal]
--Kiai
Why does it start 1/4th early?
--Beatmap
00:45:85 - A spinner(if placed right)would sound neat here!
01:24:07 - Spinner too? (Not too long, so they still get a break.
[/Normal]
Feel free to PM in IRC if you make another difficulty, so I can mod again.
Star'd
Topic Starter
谢谢gdeath wrote:
hi!Breeze!
modding time!
[NORMAL]
00:44:27 (5) 确定在这里要设置连打？虽然这里的歌词对上了，但是作为normal，设置连打是不是有些困难？
嘛，不过也不是没见过normal下连打的图。（好吧，这个问题当我没说过，应该没什么问题。继续下面
00:55:76 (5) end of slider - clap
00:56:23 (6) clap
00:56:86 (8) whistle (end 不要加
great map and nice storyboard.
star for your map!
I love Friends ^^
*star* =]
*star* =]
Topic Starter
thanks very muchroxkyuubiforever wrote:
I love Friends ^^
*star* =]
You didn't tell me. *o*
Oh well, I'll mod what I can.
[Buddies]
01:23:48 (7) - Lengthen by 1/4th? (IMO, it fits more)
01:42:21 (3) - Lengthen by 1/8th?
02:10:46 (4) - Start 1/8th later? (And then fix the end and spacing)
02:55:09 (Timing Section) - Move 1/4th later.
02:58:08 (Timing Section) - ^
Nothing much. >_> Other than the ugly sliders(I can fix them up. n.n).
(I think some of them may be unrankable)
What bothers me is that it follows the lyrics. >_> That's really it
(Heh, soon there needs to be a TV Show Beatmap Pack, this and I'm making Cheap Trick - In The Street [That 70s Show theme])
Oh well, I'll mod what I can.
[Buddies]
01:23:48 (7) - Lengthen by 1/4th? (IMO, it fits more)
01:42:21 (3) - Lengthen by 1/8th?
02:10:46 (4) - Start 1/8th later? (And then fix the end and spacing)
02:55:09 (Timing Section) - Move 1/4th later.
02:58:08 (Timing Section) - ^
Nothing much. >_> Other than the ugly sliders(I can fix them up. n.n).
(I think some of them may be unrankable)What bothers me is that it follows the lyrics. >_> That's really it
(Heh, soon there needs to be a TV Show Beatmap Pack, this and I'm making Cheap Trick - In The Street [That 70s Show theme]
)Just a couple general comments
I got an offset of 374, which is only -6, so not a big deal.
Between the two difficulties, it's somewhat difficult to tell which is the easier difficulty and which is the harder one. Based on the HP drain, I'm guessing Buddies is Hard mode. The Difficulty sliders are rather similar between the two, and it blurs the line a bit.
[Friends]
Given that Friends should be the easier difficulty, my advice is to let go of the lyrics a bit. You really should be avoiding quarter-snapping at all costs (except perhaps in rare cases of short repeat sliders such as 00:14:85 (1) - this seems okay and very appropriate to me). The problem with lyric snapping in songs like this is that you need to basically know the song by heart to play it, and that distances the vast majority of players from following along. It should have a natural, fluid feel to it.
00:14:06 (7) - While I don't want to trample on creativity, I find the silent slider tails very off-putting. I can understand not wanting to trample over the rhythm of the song, but might I recommend briefly switching to the soft sampleset instead of pure silence? A nice little jingle sounds good, in my opinion.
00:32:95 (1) - Having these land off-beat sounds odd to me. You don't need to have a break in there, so you can extend spinners like this an extra half-beat.
Seems like you've got a decent feel for beatmapping otherwise, though if I were to be picky I'd mention the occasional trips I encountered on Buddies such as 00:34:85 (3) - (the activity prior to this makes me think something is happening on the half-beat when it isn't; quarter-beat mapping is tricky to do intuitively)
Buuuut I'll give you a coveted awpstar, since I think this map is reasonably well on its way. Also, I like the simple storyboard touches. I was hoping to see this song on osu! eventually.
I got an offset of 374, which is only -6, so not a big deal.
Between the two difficulties, it's somewhat difficult to tell which is the easier difficulty and which is the harder one. Based on the HP drain, I'm guessing Buddies is Hard mode. The Difficulty sliders are rather similar between the two, and it blurs the line a bit.
[Friends]
Given that Friends should be the easier difficulty, my advice is to let go of the lyrics a bit. You really should be avoiding quarter-snapping at all costs (except perhaps in rare cases of short repeat sliders such as 00:14:85 (1) - this seems okay and very appropriate to me). The problem with lyric snapping in songs like this is that you need to basically know the song by heart to play it, and that distances the vast majority of players from following along. It should have a natural, fluid feel to it.
00:14:06 (7) - While I don't want to trample on creativity, I find the silent slider tails very off-putting. I can understand not wanting to trample over the rhythm of the song, but might I recommend briefly switching to the soft sampleset instead of pure silence? A nice little jingle sounds good, in my opinion.
00:32:95 (1) - Having these land off-beat sounds odd to me. You don't need to have a break in there, so you can extend spinners like this an extra half-beat.
Seems like you've got a decent feel for beatmapping otherwise, though if I were to be picky I'd mention the occasional trips I encountered on Buddies such as 00:34:85 (3) - (the activity prior to this makes me think something is happening on the half-beat when it isn't; quarter-beat mapping is tricky to do intuitively)
Buuuut I'll give you a coveted awpstar, since I think this map is reasonably well on its way. Also, I like the simple storyboard touches. I was hoping to see this song on osu! eventually.
Just thought it's worth mentioning since no one else picked up on it (unless it's in the .osu and I'm only looking at thread title)
Please make sure you properly capitalize the song title.
Please make sure you properly capitalize the song title.
Topic Starter
thanks for taking a look at it again~Alex0686 wrote:
You didn't tell me. *o*
Oh well, I'll mod what I can.
[Buddies]
01:23:48 (7) - Lengthen by 1/4th? (IMO, it fits more)
01:42:21 (3) - Lengthen by 1/8th?
02:10:46 (4) - Start 1/8th later? (And then fix the end and spacing)
02:55:09 (Timing Section) - Move 1/4th later.
02:58:08 (Timing Section) - ^
Nothing much. >_> Other than the ugly sliders(I can fix them up. n.n).
What bothers me is that it follows the lyrics. >_> That's really it
(Heh, soon there needs to be a TV Show Beatmap Pack, this and I'm making Cheap Trick - In The Street [That 70s Show theme]
Topic Starter
awp wrote:
Just a couple general comments
I got an offset of 374, which is only -6, so not a big deal.
Between the two difficulties, it's somewhat difficult to tell which is the easier difficulty and which is the harder one. Based on the HP drain, I'm guessing Buddies is Hard mode. The Difficulty sliders are rather similar between the two, and it blurs the line a bit.
[Friends]
Given that Friends should be the easier difficulty, my advice is to let go of the lyrics a bit. You really should be avoiding quarter-snapping at all costs (except perhaps in rare cases of short repeat sliders such as 00:14:85 (1) - this seems okay and very appropriate to me). The problem with lyric snapping in songs like this is that you need to basically know the song by heart to play it, and that distances the vast majority of players from following along. It should have a natural, fluid feel to it.
00:14:06 (7) - While I don't want to trample on creativity, I find the silent slider tails very off-putting. I can understand not wanting to trample over the rhythm of the song, but might I recommend briefly switching to the soft sampleset instead of pure silence? A nice little jingle sounds good, in my opinion.
00:32:95 (1) - Having these land off-beat sounds odd to me. You don't need to have a break in there, so you can extend spinners like this an extra half-beat.
Seems like you've got a decent feel for beatmapping otherwise, though if I were to be picky I'd mention the occasional trips I encountered on Buddies such as 00:34:85 (3) - (the activity prior to this makes me think something is happening on the half-beat when it isn't; quarter-beat mapping is tricky to do intuitively)
Buuuut I'll give you a coveted awpstar, since I think this map is reasonably well on its way. Also, I like the simple storyboard touches. I was hoping to see this song on osu! eventually.
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Download: The Rembrandts - I'll be there for you (Breeze) [alvisto's Mates].osu
Download: The Rembrandts - I'll be there for you (Breeze) [alvisto's Mates].osu
irc mods for alvisto 
<3
<3
Breeze, this is the fixed version after yeahyeahyeahhh's IRC mod... ( I can't believe we both missed vital points ! )
And, also, yeahyeahyeahhh has some comments on your buddies difficulty. I well tell you later when you are online. =D
Cheers !
Download: The Rembrandts - I'll be there for you (Breeze) [alvisto's Mates].osu
And, also, yeahyeahyeahhh has some comments on your buddies difficulty. I well tell you later when you are online. =D
Cheers !
Download: The Rembrandts - I'll be there for you (Breeze) [alvisto's Mates].osu
Friends:
Please cut down on the number of short repeat sliders. So boring, and so difficult for newbies.
Mates: See if you can take out the slow-downs, they felt weird. And, the last slider seems too long to me.
Buddies:
The sliders at the end are, sorry to say, not pretty at all. Poorly done IMO. Also there's one part where the spacing is exactly 1/2 of the rest of the map. Fix that please.
Star!
Please cut down on the number of short repeat sliders. So boring, and so difficult for newbies.
Mates: See if you can take out the slow-downs, they felt weird. And, the last slider seems too long to me.
Buddies:
The sliders at the end are, sorry to say, not pretty at all. Poorly done IMO. Also there's one part where the spacing is exactly 1/2 of the rest of the map. Fix that please.
Star!
[quote="Ekaru"
Mates: See if you can take out the slow-downs, they felt weird. And, the last slider seems too long to me. Sorry, but I think those kinda fits the songs, and it's my way of expressing the emotion of the song. =P So, I will keep it. =D
[/quote]
Mates: See if you can take out the slow-downs, they felt weird. And, the last slider seems too long to me. Sorry, but I think those kinda fits the songs, and it's my way of expressing the emotion of the song. =P So, I will keep it. =D
[/quote]
Most of all, GIMME BACK MY SKIP BUTTON! I understand you want everyone to watch your SB, but thats just plain stupid.
[Friends]
00:12:49 (4) - 1/4 earlier?
01:17:18 (1) - unstack, it looks and plays bad.
01:18:28 (2) - 1/4 earlier, 1/4 shorter?
01:18:75 (x) - add note here, if you change the slider above.
01:19:70 (3) - maybe just circle?
01:32:13 (3,4,5) - ugh, thats really ugly and hard to read.
01:42:83 (4) - 2x longer, no repeats.
[alvisto's Mates]
IMO best diff.
01:15:61 (5) - I lol'd when I saw all those points in editor. Cute.
01:23:47 (6) - too slow (x0.25 *is* too slow).
01:36:38 (9) - there no music/lyrics, delete it?
01:48:50 (9) - too slow.
02:11:79 (10) - aaaah it's ugly. Make it a spiral.
02:50:04 (5) - uh, it's ugly too.
02:52:87 (6) - end it at 02:57:285. Also, it's too slow.
[Buddies]
I somehow do not like this diff, but I'm not able to say why D:
00:42:39 (6), 01:10:10 (5), 01:13:24 (4), 01:32:13 (3), - ugly. Fix the place where that loop appears.
01:23:47 (1) - ugly. Look, how alvisto made it: 01:15:61 (5).
02:02:068 - that caution hurts my eyes.
02:40:60 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - NO. Do not 2x it.
02:45:64 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
02:44:53 (6) - umm, flip vertically? Lol. It's gonna make people rage on Hidden.
02:49:57 (4) - ugly.
[Friends]
00:12:49 (4) - 1/4 earlier?
01:17:18 (1) - unstack, it looks and plays bad.
01:18:28 (2) - 1/4 earlier, 1/4 shorter?
01:18:75 (x) - add note here, if you change the slider above.
01:19:70 (3) - maybe just circle?
01:32:13 (3,4,5) - ugh, thats really ugly and hard to read.
01:42:83 (4) - 2x longer, no repeats.
[alvisto's Mates]
IMO best diff.
01:15:61 (5) - I lol'd when I saw all those points in editor. Cute.
01:23:47 (6) - too slow (x0.25 *is* too slow).
01:36:38 (9) - there no music/lyrics, delete it?
01:48:50 (9) - too slow.
02:11:79 (10) - aaaah it's ugly. Make it a spiral.
02:50:04 (5) - uh, it's ugly too.
02:52:87 (6) - end it at 02:57:285. Also, it's too slow.
[Buddies]
I somehow do not like this diff, but I'm not able to say why D:
00:42:39 (6), 01:10:10 (5), 01:13:24 (4), 01:32:13 (3), - ugly. Fix the place where that loop appears.
01:23:47 (1) - ugly. Look, how alvisto made it: 01:15:61 (5).
02:02:068 - that caution hurts my eyes.
02:40:60 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - NO. Do not 2x it.
02:45:64 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
02:44:53 (6) - umm, flip vertically? Lol. It's gonna make people rage on Hidden.
02:49:57 (4) - ugly.
[Friends]
Nothing.
[alvisto's Mates]
00:05:72 (2) - New combo.
00:06:35 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:06:98 (1) - ^
00:07:92 (1) - ^
00:08:24 (2) - New combo.
00:08:87 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:09:50 (1) - ^
00:25:71 (5) - Can't see where the slider will go, change the shape a bit.
01:15:61 (5) - ^
01:23:47 (6) - Shorten this 1 3/4, then make it a reverse slider.
02:11:79 (10) - This slider isn't rankable, can't see where the slider will go, can't see the endpoint, overlaps itself. Change the shape.
02:50:04 (5) - ^
02:52:87 (6) - Extend 1/2.
[Buddies]
Small spacing
Map would be more fun with 0,8x or 1,0x spacing.
The Double spacing wasn't what I expected actually, I expected huge spacing because of the big signs with CAUTION!! DOUBLE SPACING!!, if the spacing of the whole map would be bigger the signs would fit better imo.
00:34:21 (1) - Not rankable to have notes 1/4 after a spinner. Shorten the spinner or remove the note.
00:39:25 (1) - ^
00:44:28 (1) - ^
01:17:02 (2) - Put this note 1 level 3 grid down so that the spacing is consistent.
01:17:18 (3) - ^
02:40:60 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You could better storyboard a sign here with BPM x2 or something, cause this is more unexpected as the double spacing thingy.
02:45:64 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
Very fun map to play and mod.
Starred *
Nothing.
[alvisto's Mates]
00:05:72 (2) - New combo.
00:06:35 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:06:98 (1) - ^
00:07:92 (1) - ^
00:08:24 (2) - New combo.
00:08:87 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:09:50 (1) - ^
00:25:71 (5) - Can't see where the slider will go, change the shape a bit.
01:15:61 (5) - ^
01:23:47 (6) - Shorten this 1 3/4, then make it a reverse slider.
02:11:79 (10) - This slider isn't rankable, can't see where the slider will go, can't see the endpoint, overlaps itself. Change the shape.
02:50:04 (5) - ^
02:52:87 (6) - Extend 1/2.
[Buddies]
Small spacing
Map would be more fun with 0,8x or 1,0x spacing.The Double spacing wasn't what I expected actually, I expected huge spacing because of the big signs with CAUTION!! DOUBLE SPACING!!, if the spacing of the whole map would be bigger the signs would fit better imo.
00:34:21 (1) - Not rankable to have notes 1/4 after a spinner. Shorten the spinner or remove the note.
00:39:25 (1) - ^
00:44:28 (1) - ^
01:17:02 (2) - Put this note 1 level 3 grid down so that the spacing is consistent.
01:17:18 (3) - ^
02:40:60 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You could better storyboard a sign here with BPM x2 or something, cause this is more unexpected as the double spacing thingy.
02:45:64 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
Very fun map to play and mod.
Starred *
Is it really too slow those part ? T_T If 1 more person complains about it, I might change, cause if I make the slider faster, the slider would be very big size and super ugly (to me, lol).Matma Rex wrote:
[alvisto's Mates]
IMO best diff.
01:15:61 (5) - I lol'd when I saw all those points in editor. Cute. Thanks, that took me a long time to do that. D:
01:23:47 (6) - too slow (x0.25 *is* too slow). >.<
01:36:38 (9) - there no music/lyrics, delete it? No, there is a whistle at the end of each lyric part, which makes this unwise to delete. =P
01:48:50 (9) - too slow. >.<
02:11:79 (10) - aaaah it's ugly. Make it a spiral. Remake.
02:50:04 (5) - uh, it's ugly too. Remake.
02:52:87 (6) - end it at 02:57:285. Also, it's too slow. >.<
Thanks ! =D Appreciate these mods.Symbolic wrote:
[alvisto's Mates]
00:05:72 (2) - New combo.
00:06:35 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:06:98 (1) - ^
00:07:92 (1) - ^
00:08:24 (2) - New combo.
00:08:87 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:09:50 (1) - ^
Actually all these new combos were designed to be played tag-co-op. Imagine 1 person hitting 1 finish, isn't that make you feel "mates" like ? :3
00:25:71 (5) - Can't see where the slider will go, change the shape a bit. D: I think it's visible, plus alvisto is a bit lazy in fixing slider right now (He just wasted another 20 minutes on doing the other sliders that matma suggested, so, forgive him... =P)
01:15:61 (5) - ^ Is it ? T_T
01:23:47 (6) - Shorten this 1 3/4, then make it a reverse slider. Hmmm....
02:11:79 (10) - This slider isn't rankable, can't see where the slider will go, can't see the endpoint, overlaps itself. Change the shape. No~~~ T_T
02:50:04 (5) - ^ No~~~ T_T
02:52:87 (6) - Extend 1/2. I think extend is too long... Sorry
About those slider, let's see how BAT says about it. =P
Download: The Rembrandts - I'll be there for you (Breeze) [alvisto's Mates].osu
Topic Starter
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
thanks for your great mod!Symbolic wrote:
[Friends]
Nothing.
[Buddies]
Small spacing
The Double spacing wasn't what I expected actually, I expected huge spacing because of the big signs with CAUTION!! DOUBLE SPACING!!, if the spacing of the whole map would be bigger the signs would fit better imo.
00:34:21 (1) - Not rankable to have notes 1/4 after a spinner. Shorten the spinner or remove the note.
00:39:25 (1) - ^
00:44:28 (1) - ^
01:17:02 (2) - Put this note 1 level 3 grid down so that the spacing is consistent.
01:17:18 (3) - ^
02:40:60 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You could better storyboard a sign here with BPM x2 or something, cause this is more unexpected as the double spacing thingy.
02:45:64 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
Very fun map to play and mod.
Starred *
Fwends~
00:58:61 (1) - Move farther from 2.
(01:08:68 (1,2,3) - I'd say this spacing is fine since they repeat this a few times throughout the song.)
alveesto's maties~
00:27:76 (5,6) - Move 5 a little closer to 4. ;_;
00:49:95 (6) - Suggestion: Stack on the fading 5.
01:07:11 (3) - Suggestion: Stack on fading 1.
02:50:04 (5) - It looks cool but won't this be unrankable? Looks fine to me but we'll see, go ahead and keep it ^.^
00:58:61 (1) - Move farther from 2.
(01:08:68 (1,2,3) - I'd say this spacing is fine since they repeat this a few times throughout the song.)
alveesto's maties~
00:27:76 (5,6) - Move 5 a little closer to 4. ;_;
00:49:95 (6) - Suggestion: Stack on the fading 5.
01:07:11 (3) - Suggestion: Stack on fading 1.
02:50:04 (5) - It looks cool but won't this be unrankable? Looks fine to me but we'll see, go ahead and keep it ^.^
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
[Friends]
01:14:19 (1,2,3) - Spacing lol
[alvisto]
02:11:79 (10) - I can't know which 方向 to slide this slider....... I mentioned this because you know how to use SB.
[Buddies]
00:28:39 ( ) - Add a note on here...?
Edit:
01:14:19 (1,2,3) - Spacing lol
[alvisto]
02:11:79 (10) - I can't know which 方向 to slide this slider....... I mentioned this because you know how to use SB.
[Buddies]
00:28:39 ( ) - Add a note on here...?
Edit:
Why~~~ T_T All you have to do is press and let it be there02:50:04 (5) - This is fine :p
Thanks minyeob for always answering my mod call !minyeob wrote:
[alvisto]
02:11:79 (10) - I can't know which 方向 to slide this slider....... I mentioned this because you know how to use SB. Why~~~ T_T All you have to do is press and let it be there.... Anyway, changed the slider since tons of people complaim. *.*
Edit : Forgot to upload the changed map. @.@
Download: The Rembrandts - I'll be there for you (Breeze) [alvisto's Mates].osu
Topic Starter
thanks for you mod!Mafiamaster wrote:
Fwends~
00:58:61 (1) - Move farther from 2.
(01:08:68 (1,2,3) - I'd say this spacing is fine since they repeat this a few times throughout the song.)
Topic Starter
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Friends
00:53:73 (1) - 1/4 later
01:39:69 (3) - 1/4 longer
alvisto's Mates
YES
Beddies
YES
Great map, star.
00:53:73 (1) - 1/4 later
01:39:69 (3) - 1/4 longer
alvisto's Mates
YES
Beddies
YES
Great map, star.
[Friends]
Nothing wrong about this one.
[Buddies]
01:23:47 (1) - Whistles maybe?
[alvisto's Mates]
01:15:61 (5) - I'm not too sure about this slider...its fine for me though.
Nice SB~
Nothing wrong about this one.
[Buddies]
01:23:47 (1) - Whistles maybe?
[alvisto's Mates]
01:15:61 (5) - I'm not too sure about this slider...its fine for me though.
Nice SB~
Topic Starter
thanks for your mod and star!Agent Spin Here wrote:
Friends
00:53:73 (1) - 1/4 later
01:39:69 (3) - 1/4 longer
alvisto's Mates
YES
Beddies
YES
Great map, star.
Topic Starter
thanks for your mod and star!animask wrote:
[Friends]
Nothing wrong about this one.
[Buddies]
01:23:47 (1) - Whistles maybe?
Nice SB~
Friends:
Mates:
Buddies:
Nice map. Star.
SPOILER
Combo mod:
01:10:88 (4) - new combo for consistency
01:10:88 (4) - new combo for consistency
Mates:
SPOILER
The slow sliders felt a little random and caused me to break my combos the first time I tried
Combo mod:
00:17:84 (6) - new combo?
00:33:11 (2) - new combo for instruments?
00:38:14 (2) - ^
02:16:83 (5) - new combo for consistency?
You did not seem to new combo for instruments if they were 1 beat long, so I did not mod that. Still, you might want to consider adding combos to those.
Combo mod:
00:17:84 (6) - new combo?
00:33:11 (2) - new combo for instruments?
00:38:14 (2) - ^
02:16:83 (5) - new combo for consistency?
You did not seem to new combo for instruments if they were 1 beat long, so I did not mod that. Still, you might want to consider adding combos to those.
Buddies:
SPOILER
I am not sure how easy slider stacks like 02:40:60 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) are to read for players
The rest of the diff is fine though.
The rest of the diff is fine though.
Nice map. Star.
Remember, some of the errors posted are suggestions, not directions. Edit to what you see fit.
Detailed Modding Go~
Osz. File Check (Done)
[Friends] (Done)
[alvisto's Mates] (Done)
[Buddies] (Done)
Overall: The map and the SB is good so far. Not overdone or lacking. Make sure to look into the errors and to also check for more to make things easier for you. Good job overall though and i'll drop my star in then.
Detailed Modding Go~
Osz. File Check (Done)
SPOILER
Video: No
SB (Story Board): Yes
Custom Skin: No
Background: Yes
[Current] Size: 5.56 MB / 10.00 MB
Source: Yes
Tags: Yes
SB (Story Board): Yes
Custom Skin: No
Background: Yes
[Current] Size: 5.56 MB / 10.00 MB
Source: Yes
Tags: Yes
[Friends] (Done)
SPOILER
Timing (BPM / Offset): 95.300 / 374 ms (Sounds good so far)
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: No
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 1 / 1.60
Distance Snap Average: x0.9 (Solid)
[Current] Objects: 130 ( 63 Circles / 60 Sliders / 7 Spinners )
[Current] Max Combo: 220
[Current] Max Score: 547,848
[Current] Star Rating: 3.39
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.5
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.1
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.4
01:26:20 (B) - Delete and replace break.
01:36:59 (B) - ^
Notes: Just need to check the breaks. The rest of the map seems fine.
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: No
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 1 / 1.60
Distance Snap Average: x0.9 (Solid)
[Current] Objects: 130 ( 63 Circles / 60 Sliders / 7 Spinners )
[Current] Max Combo: 220
[Current] Max Score: 547,848
[Current] Star Rating: 3.39
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.5
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.1
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.4
01:26:20 (B) - Delete and replace break.
01:36:59 (B) - ^
Notes: Just need to check the breaks. The rest of the map seems fine.
[alvisto's Mates] (Done)
SPOILER
Timing (BPM / Offset): 190.600 -> 47.650 -> 190.600 -> 47.650 -> 190.600 -> 47.650 / 374 ms -> 83,479 ms -> 88,515 ms -> 108,504 ms -> 110,864 ms -> 172,878 ms (Sounds good so far)
[Currently] with double BPM: Yes
[Currently] with altered timing sections: Yes
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 2 / 1.20
Distance Snap Average: x0.8 + Manual Spacing
[Current] Objects: 344 ( 316 Circles / 25 Sliders / 3 Spinners )
[Current] Max Combo: 476
[Current] Max Score: 3,842,518
[Current] Star Rating: 4.39
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.6
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.2
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.7
00:05:41 (1,2,1,1,1,1) - Might want to check into the spacing here. The (1) from the top looks a bit closer.
01:08:26 (B) - Delete and replace break.
01:15:61 (5) - If you can, try to get the swirl shape of this slider fixed and a bit more even.
01:51:07 (B) - Delete and replace break.
02:09:12 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - The shape looks a bit odd to me. The bottom seems to look like its sagging a bit.
02:25:49 (1,2,3,4,5) - The five-point star figure of this shape looks a bit off. (5) looks more like its wondering off from it.
02:27:69 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The accelerating jump here looks a bit odd in the shape. The notes don't look like it is lined up evenly.
02:45:21 (B) - Delete and replace break.
Notes: The map is nice so far. Just need to double check the spacing and shapes. That's all.
[Currently] with double BPM: Yes
[Currently] with altered timing sections: Yes
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 2 / 1.20
Distance Snap Average: x0.8 + Manual Spacing
[Current] Objects: 344 ( 316 Circles / 25 Sliders / 3 Spinners )
[Current] Max Combo: 476
[Current] Max Score: 3,842,518
[Current] Star Rating: 4.39
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.6
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.2
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.7
00:05:41 (1,2,1,1,1,1) - Might want to check into the spacing here. The (1) from the top looks a bit closer.
01:08:26 (B) - Delete and replace break.
01:15:61 (5) - If you can, try to get the swirl shape of this slider fixed and a bit more even.
01:51:07 (B) - Delete and replace break.
02:09:12 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - The shape looks a bit odd to me. The bottom seems to look like its sagging a bit.
02:25:49 (1,2,3,4,5) - The five-point star figure of this shape looks a bit off. (5) looks more like its wondering off from it.
02:27:69 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The accelerating jump here looks a bit odd in the shape. The notes don't look like it is lined up evenly.
02:45:21 (B) - Delete and replace break.
Notes: The map is nice so far. Just need to double check the spacing and shapes. That's all.
[Buddies] (Done)
SPOILER
Timing (BPM / Offset): 95.300 / 374 ms (Sounds good so far)
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: No
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 4 / 2.40
Distance Snap Average: x0.9 (Solid)
[Current] Objects: 316 ( 210 Circles / 89 Sliders / 17 Spinners )
[Current] Max Combo: 527
[Current] Max Score: 4,122,432
[Current] Star Rating: 4.67
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.7
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.2
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.6
00:10:76 (1,3) - The stack here looks a bit uneven. (3) is not under the end of (1).
00:11:54 (3,4) - Supposed to be closer or more farther apart?
00:53:57 (1,3) - Same problem like at@ 00:10:76. They don't seem evenly linked.
01:03:49 (5,6,7,8) - If you look at (8), you can see that the spacing is not even.
01:16:23 (2,1) - Maybe this can be under the slider end for the neatness?
01:21:27 (2) - ^
01:23:47 (1) - May want to fix up the swirl shape. It looks a bit odd.
01:26:20 (B) - Delete and replace break.
01:28:83 (1,2,3,4) - When I look at this again, it seems like (4) is closer than its supposed to be.
01:34:65 (3) - Looks a bit too closer to the slider end when you compare it to (4) at the other side.
01:36:59 (B) - Delete and replace break.
02:11:95 (1) - The spinner sounds 1/4 late. You can make it a bit shorter by 1/4 and it should be just about fine (Auto got just about got a 300 + 2000).
02:18:09 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Not sure if this really should be single note combos....
02:53:03 (1) - Try making it shorter by 1/4 to see that if it sounds better to you.
Notes: The map is nice so far, but the spacing feels a bit uneven. Make sure to check the spacing as best as you can (even comparing the space to the size of the notes can help). Also, make sure the shapes are not too uneven at least so that it doesn't effect the playability.
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: No
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 4 / 2.40
Distance Snap Average: x0.9 (Solid)
[Current] Objects: 316 ( 210 Circles / 89 Sliders / 17 Spinners )
[Current] Max Combo: 527
[Current] Max Score: 4,122,432
[Current] Star Rating: 4.67
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.7
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.2
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.6
00:10:76 (1,3) - The stack here looks a bit uneven. (3) is not under the end of (1).
00:11:54 (3,4) - Supposed to be closer or more farther apart?
00:53:57 (1,3) - Same problem like at@ 00:10:76. They don't seem evenly linked.
01:03:49 (5,6,7,8) - If you look at (8), you can see that the spacing is not even.
01:16:23 (2,1) - Maybe this can be under the slider end for the neatness?
01:21:27 (2) - ^
01:23:47 (1) - May want to fix up the swirl shape. It looks a bit odd.
01:26:20 (B) - Delete and replace break.
01:28:83 (1,2,3,4) - When I look at this again, it seems like (4) is closer than its supposed to be.
01:34:65 (3) - Looks a bit too closer to the slider end when you compare it to (4) at the other side.
01:36:59 (B) - Delete and replace break.
02:11:95 (1) - The spinner sounds 1/4 late. You can make it a bit shorter by 1/4 and it should be just about fine (Auto got just about got a 300 + 2000).
02:18:09 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Not sure if this really should be single note combos....
02:53:03 (1) - Try making it shorter by 1/4 to see that if it sounds better to you.
Notes: The map is nice so far, but the spacing feels a bit uneven. Make sure to check the spacing as best as you can (even comparing the space to the size of the notes can help). Also, make sure the shapes are not too uneven at least so that it doesn't effect the playability.
Overall: The map and the SB is good so far. Not overdone or lacking. Make sure to look into the errors and to also check for more to make things easier for you. Good job overall though and i'll drop my star in then.
Topic Starter
Topic Starter
whymeman wrote:
Remember, some of the errors posted are suggestions, not directions. Edit to what you see fit.
Detailed Modding Go~
Osz. File Check (Done)SPOILERVideo: No
SB (Story Board): Yes
Custom Skin: No
Background: Yes
[Current] Size: 5.56 MB / 10.00 MB
Source: Yes
Tags: Yes
[Friends] (Done)SPOILERTiming (BPM / Offset): 95.300 / 374 ms (Sounds good so far)
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: No
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 1 / 1.60
Distance Snap Average: x0.9 (Solid)
[Current] Objects: 130 ( 63 Circles / 60 Sliders / 7 Spinners )
[Current] Max Combo: 220
[Current] Max Score: 547,848
[Current] Star Rating: 3.39
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.5
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.1
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.4
01:26:20 (B) - Delete and replace break.
01:36:59 (B) - ^
Notes: Just need to check the breaks. The rest of the map seems fine.
[Buddies] (Done)SPOILERTiming (BPM / Offset): 95.300 / 374 ms (Sounds good so far)
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: No
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 4 / 2.40
Distance Snap Average: x0.9 (Solid)
[Current] Objects: 316 ( 210 Circles / 89 Sliders / 17 Spinners )
[Current] Max Combo: 527
[Current] Max Score: 4,122,432
[Current] Star Rating: 4.67
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.7
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.2
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.6
00:10:76 (1,3) - The stack here looks a bit uneven. (3) is not under the end of (1).
00:11:54 (3,4) - Supposed to be closer or more farther apart?
00:53:57 (1,3) - Same problem like at@ 00:10:76. They don't seem evenly linked.
01:16:23 (2,1) - Maybe this can be under the slider end for the neatness?
01:21:27 (2) - ^
01:23:47 (1) - May want to fix up the swirl shape. It looks a bit odd.
01:26:20 (B) - Delete and replace break.
01:28:83 (1,2,3,4) - When I look at this again, it seems like (4) is closer than its supposed to be.
01:34:65 (3) - Looks a bit too closer to the slider end when you compare it to (4) at the other side.
01:36:59 (B) - Delete and replace break.
02:11:95 (1) - The spinner sounds 1/4 late. You can make it a bit shorter by 1/4 and it should be jsut about fine (Auto got just about got a 300 + 2000).
02:18:09 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Not sure if this really should be single note combos....
02:53:03 (1) - Try making it shorter by 1/4 to see that if it sounds better to you.
Notes: The map is nice so far, but the spacing feels a bit uneven. Make sure to check the spacing as best as you can (even comparing the space to the size of the notes can help). Also, make sure the shapes are not too uneven at least so that it doesn't effect the playability.
Overall: The map and the SB is good so far. Not overdone or lacking. Make sure to look into the errors and to also check for more to make things easier for you. Good job overall though and i'll drop my star in then.
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Download: The Rembrandts - I'll be there for you (Breeze) [alvisto's Mates].osu
Download: The Rembrandts - I'll be there for you (Breeze) [alvisto's Mates].osu
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
[Friends]
00:51:21 (6,7,8) - Move 1 grid down
[alvisto's Mates]
02:11:32 (8,9,10) - Fix spacing
02:28:95 (5) - New combo
[Buddies]
02:58:07 (last spin) - end here
You got my star~
00:51:21 (6,7,8) - Move 1 grid down
[alvisto's Mates]
02:11:32 (8,9,10) - Fix spacing
02:28:95 (5) - New combo
[Buddies]
02:58:07 (last spin) - end here
You got my star~
Thanks for the modding ! This map need more attention ! XDGbL wrote:
[alvisto's Mates]
02:11:32 (8,9,10) - Fix spacing It was supposed to be stacked like that. =P
02:28:95 (5) - New combo I don't think so, it is consistent with the earlier part of combo as well !
Here's my mod ^^
Green = Suggestion Red = Check this
[Friends]
No Problems found
[alvisto's Mates]
No Problems found
[Buddies]
01:04:90 (9,10) - I might move these back 1/4 beat
01:23:55 (1) - end this at the white tick
02:45:64 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Love these things <3
02:52:96 (1) - Try moving this to the white tick for a cleaner end
Great beatmap, and I love the storyboards. Great job!
Starr'd
Green = Suggestion Red = Check this
[Friends]
No Problems found
[alvisto's Mates]
No Problems found
[Buddies]
01:04:90 (9,10) - I might move these back 1/4 beat
01:23:55 (1) - end this at the white tick
02:45:64 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Love these things <3
02:52:96 (1) - Try moving this to the white tick for a cleaner end
Great beatmap, and I love the storyboards. Great job!
Starr'd
Hello.
Everything looks fine... Just one thing: On [Friends], there are some short sliders that are way too confusing... Maybe you didn't noticed my thread about those, but here's an example: 01:02:86 (1) - It's impossible to know how many repeats there will be. It really affects playability and I'd change/remove them. It's partially fine to do this on harder difficulties, but I'd avoid them at all costs. (I think I already said this to you...)
Also, the 02:50:04 (5) slider on [alvisto's Mates] is totally unrankable.
Everything looks fine... Just one thing: On [Friends], there are some short sliders that are way too confusing... Maybe you didn't noticed my thread about those, but here's an example: 01:02:86 (1) - It's impossible to know how many repeats there will be. It really affects playability and I'd change/remove them. It's partially fine to do this on harder difficulties, but I'd avoid them at all costs. (I think I already said this to you...)
Also, the 02:50:04 (5) slider on [alvisto's Mates] is totally unrankable.
Topic Starter
Tnanks for the mod!Azure_Kyte wrote:
[Buddies]
01:04:90 (9,10) - I might move these back 1/4 beat
01:23:55 (1) - end this at the white tick
02:45:64 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Love these things <3 arrow: Thanks
02:52:96 (1) - Try moving this to the white tick for a cleaner end
Great beatmap, and I love the storyboards. Great job!
Starr'd
~Star.
Why isn't the title capitalized? Should be "I'll Be There for You"
Topic Starter
ThanksLuigiHann wrote:
Why isn't the title capitalized? Should be "I'll Be There for You"
When first time submit, I foget to capitalize title, so...
Hi hi :3
Here are some suggestions for your map. Of course you don't have to fix them if you're not agree with me
~Friends~
00:10:076 (1) - Make it end at blue tick.
00:22:252 (x) - Add a note here? It feels empty oxo.
00:45:086 (1) - Make it end at 00:47:908, the next circle is too close in time.
01:06:048 (6) - Fix spacing :3
~alvisto's Mates~
01:22:069 (4,5,6) - Fix spacing :3
02:11:032 (8,9,10) - This spacing is intentional, right? If it isn't, fix it please :3
02:50:004 (5) - OMG such a strange and cool slider!!
02:52:087 (6) - Make it end at 03:00:439 and maybe silence it? or at least the end of it oxo
~Buddies~
00:19:026 (1) - Make it end at 00:20:206, it sounds better (and of course move the timing sections oxo)
01:05:006 (9,10) - Move them 1/4 earlier.
I loooove this song and Friend's too
Good map and so cool StoryBoard!!! You win my little shiny star!
Here are some suggestions for your map. Of course you don't have to fix them if you're not agree with me
~Friends~
00:10:076 (1) - Make it end at blue tick.
00:22:252 (x) - Add a note here? It feels empty oxo.
00:45:086 (1) - Make it end at 00:47:908, the next circle is too close in time.
01:06:048 (6) - Fix spacing :3
~alvisto's Mates~
01:22:069 (4,5,6) - Fix spacing :3
02:11:032 (8,9,10) - This spacing is intentional, right? If it isn't, fix it please :3
02:50:004 (5) - OMG such a strange and cool slider!!
02:52:087 (6) - Make it end at 03:00:439 and maybe silence it? or at least the end of it oxo
~Buddies~
00:19:026 (1) - Make it end at 00:20:206, it sounds better
(and of course move the timing sections oxo)01:05:006 (9,10) - Move them 1/4 earlier.
I loooove this song and Friend's too
Good map and so cool StoryBoard!!! You win my little shiny star!
Topic Starter
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
>_>. Now all my weird sliders are gone. Changed to a spinner. ^.^Gens wrote:
Also, the 02:50:04 (5) slider on [alvisto's Mates] is totally unrankable.
Thanks for the mod.Beuchi-chan wrote:
~alvisto's Mates~
01:22:069 (4,5,6) - Fix spacing :3 Sure
02:11:032 (8,9,10) - This spacing is intentional, right? If it isn't, fix it please :3 It's stacks, so no spacing to be fixed there..
02:50:004 (5) - OMG such a strange and cool slider!!
02:52:087 (6) - Make it end at 03:00:439 and maybe silence it? or at least the end of it oxo Too long, anyway, tone down the volume
To Breeze : I won't be on osu as often as before, so whenever you receive any mod on my diff, can I ask your help to fix it for me ? XD Unless it's a really major mod, any other small mods (like alignment, combo, and spacing), can you help me fix them ? :3 Except hitsounds and map design, which I will fix by my own. :3
Download: The Rembrandts - I'll Be There For You (Breeze) [alvisto's Mates].osu
几点建议
1，map做的太跟歌词了，比较无聊。
2，18个spinner...这也太太太太多了吧。。。
3，
hitsound，主要加到白线上，因为重音都是在白线，音效加到白线上才会好听。
自己做下节奏试试。
1，map做的太跟歌词了，比较无聊。
2，18个spinner...这也太太太太多了吧。。。
3，
hitsound，主要加到白线上，因为重音都是在白线，音效加到白线上才会好听。自己做下节奏试试。
Topic Starter
osu_CN_yaya wrote:
几点建议
1，map做的太跟歌词了，比较无聊。
2，18个spinner...这也太太太太多了吧。。。
3，
自己做下节奏试试。
感谢modSuprising bubble attack~
EDIT: Why this map is in pending lolol
If you want, I'll move this to pending.
EDIT2: orz.
EDIT: Why this map is in pending lolol
If you want, I'll move this to pending.
EDIT2: orz.
Topic Starter
lol Suprising bubble attack...Thanks for it but...
In fact I'm not finished edit it yet, I'm sorry maybe I would broke the bubble in few days lol
edit: I'm so sorry lol now it finished and ready for RANK
wait for check
In fact I'm not finished edit it yet, I'm sorry maybe I would broke the bubble in few days lol
edit: I'm so sorry lol now it finished and ready for RANK
wait for check
Moddy mod mod mod~
Friends:
alvisto's Mates
Buddies
Nice SB you got there. :3
Friends:
SPOILER
00:14:006 (7) - Suggestion: Unsilence.
00:32:095 (1) - Extend spinner.
00:37:099 (1) - ^
00:51:084 (8) - Suggestion: Unsilence.
00:32:095 (1) - Extend spinner.
00:37:099 (1) - ^
00:51:084 (8) - Suggestion: Unsilence.
alvisto's Mates
SPOILERILY ALVIS. <3
General: Decrease slider tick rate to 1. It sounds better for me. :3
01:20:064 (1) - Silence this spinner.
02:45:000 (5) - Put a break after this.
General: Decrease slider tick rate to 1. It sounds better for me. :3
01:20:064 (1) - Silence this spinner.
02:45:000 (5) - Put a break after this.
Buddies
SPOILER
00:32:079 (1) - Unsilence
00:45:070 (5) - Suggestion: Put a spinner after this, in place of the break
00:51:084 (10) - Unsilence
01:04:059 (8) - Add another beat after this
01:04:059 (8,1,2) - Suggestion: Either stack or make it a stream
02:52:040 (9) - Suggestion: Delete this or replace it with something that doesn't sound like it
00:45:070 (5) - Suggestion: Put a spinner after this, in place of the break
00:51:084 (10) - Unsilence
01:04:059 (8) - Add another beat after this
01:04:059 (8,1,2) - Suggestion: Either stack or make it a stream
02:52:040 (9) - Suggestion: Delete this or replace it with something that doesn't sound like it
Nice SB you got there. :3
Topic Starter
jockeytiyan wrote:
Moddy mod mod mod~
Friends:SPOILER00:14:006 (7) - Suggestion: Unsilence.
00:32:095 (1) - Extend spinner.
00:37:099 (1) - ^
00:51:084 (8) - Suggestion: Unsilence.
alvisto's MatesSPOILERILY ALVIS. <3
General: Decrease slider tick rate to 1. It sounds better for me. :3
01:20:064 (1) - Silence this spinner.
02:45:000 (5) - Put a break after this.
BuddiesSPOILER00:32:079 (1) - Unsilence
00:45:070 (5) - Suggestion: Put a spinner after this, in place of the break
00:51:084 (10) - Unsilence
01:04:059 (8) - Add another beat after this
01:04:059 (8,1,2) - Suggestion: Either stack or make it a stream
02:52:040 (9) - Suggestion: Delete this or replace it with something that doesn't sound like it
Nice SB you got there. :3
Thanks XDThanks for your mod!
Topic Starter
Thanks for your star XDMystearica wrote:
Wow Friends lol, love that show.
orz check.
[Buddies]
00:51:084 (10) - Only this object has a lol spacing(Just asking)
That's all.
[Buddies]
00:51:084 (10) - Only this object has a lol spacing(Just asking)
That's all.
Topic Starter
You are so careful, thanks for rechecking!minyeob wrote:
orz check.
[Buddies]
00:51:084 (10) - Only this object has a lol spacing(Just asking)
That's all.
[Friends]
00:17:005 (3) - I'm not sure about this slider, can confuse new players for sure. Change it.
00:26:034 (4) - ^
01:00:097 (6) - ^
01:32:013 (3,4,5) - A bit hard too see and to read for new players.
[alvisto's Mates]
Set a preview point.
Why have you used another BPM here? Use the same BPM for all difficulties, please.
02:10:085 (7,8) - Spacing.
02:09:027 (2) - Unsnapped.
02:10:022 (5) - ^
02:10:053 (6) - ^
02:11:032 (8) - ^
02:11:079 (10) - ^
02:12:058 (11) - ^
02:13:037 (1) - ^
02:13:068 (3) - ^
02:14:094 (8) - ^
02:16:004 (3) - ^
02:16:083 (1) - ^
02:17:030 (4) - ^
02:17:062 (1) - ^
02:18:056 (4) - ^
02:18:088 (1) - ^
02:19:019 (3) - ^
02:19:035 (4) - ^
02:19:066 (1) - ^
02:20:045 (1) - ^
02:22:034 (5) - ^
02:23:028 (3) - ^
02:23:060 (4) - ^
02:24:086 (8) - ^
02:25:017 (9) - ^ And more... (See AIMod for more info).
[Buddies]
Seems fine.
00:17:005 (3) - I'm not sure about this slider, can confuse new players for sure. Change it.
00:26:034 (4) - ^
01:00:097 (6) - ^
01:32:013 (3,4,5) - A bit hard too see and to read for new players.
[alvisto's Mates]
Set a preview point.
Why have you used another BPM here? Use the same BPM for all difficulties, please.
02:10:085 (7,8) - Spacing.
02:09:027 (2) - Unsnapped.
02:10:022 (5) - ^
02:10:053 (6) - ^
02:11:032 (8) - ^
02:11:079 (10) - ^
02:12:058 (11) - ^
02:13:037 (1) - ^
02:13:068 (3) - ^
02:14:094 (8) - ^
02:16:004 (3) - ^
02:16:083 (1) - ^
02:17:030 (4) - ^
02:17:062 (1) - ^
02:18:056 (4) - ^
02:18:088 (1) - ^
02:19:019 (3) - ^
02:19:035 (4) - ^
02:19:066 (1) - ^
02:20:045 (1) - ^
02:22:034 (5) - ^
02:23:028 (3) - ^
02:23:060 (4) - ^
02:24:086 (8) - ^
02:25:017 (9) - ^ And more... (See AIMod for more info).
[Buddies]
Seems fine.
Unsnapped notes already pointted by osuplayer111. So I don't point it.
Anyway, all diffs are seems good. Star~
Anyway, all diffs are seems good. Star~
After much consideration, I decided to remap the whole difficulty. Sorry Breeze,coz I make you wait, but I wanna use my current mapping style to improve this difficulty. Hope you can give me 1-3 days. ^.^
I will post here once it's done.
EDIT : Done. Hopefully it will be errorless... ;_; Don't worry, I will call a few people to mod this new diff, and as usual, you can mod it too and change whatever you want except big stuff... xD
P.S. : This song is so hard to map... Lyrics all fall on blue tick... ;_;
Download: The Rembrandts - I'll Be There For You (Breeze) [alvisto's Mates].osu
For those who want old diff of mine, I will attach here too.
Download: The Rembrandts - I'll Be There For You (Breeze) [alvisto's Old Mates].osu
I will post here once it's done.
EDIT : Done. Hopefully it will be errorless... ;_; Don't worry, I will call a few people to mod this new diff, and as usual, you can mod it too and change whatever you want except big stuff... xD
P.S. : This song is so hard to map... Lyrics all fall on blue tick... ;_;
Download: The Rembrandts - I'll Be There For You (Breeze) [alvisto's Mates].osu
For those who want old diff of mine, I will attach here too.
Download: The Rembrandts - I'll Be There For You (Breeze) [alvisto's Old Mates].osu
Topic Starter
osuplayer111 wrote:
[Friends]
00:17:005 (3) - I'm not sure about this slider, can confuse new players for sure. Change it.
00:26:034 (4) - ^
01:00:097 (6) - ^
01:32:013 (3,4,5) - A bit hard too see and to read for new players.
[alvisto's Mates]SPOILERSet a preview point.
Why have you used another BPM here? Use the same BPM for all difficulties, please.
02:10:085 (7,8) - Spacing.
02:09:027 (2) - Unsnapped.
02:10:022 (5) - ^
02:10:053 (6) - ^
02:11:032 (8) - ^
02:11:079 (10) - ^
02:12:058 (11) - ^
02:13:037 (1) - ^
02:13:068 (3) - ^
02:14:094 (8) - ^
02:16:004 (3) - ^
02:16:083 (1) - ^
02:17:030 (4) - ^
02:17:062 (1) - ^
02:18:056 (4) - ^
02:18:088 (1) - ^
02:19:019 (3) - ^
02:19:035 (4) - ^
02:19:066 (1) - ^
02:20:045 (1) - ^
02:22:034 (5) - ^
02:23:028 (3) - ^
02:23:060 (4) - ^
02:24:086 (8) - ^
02:25:017 (9) - ^ And more... (See AIMod for more info).
[Buddies]
Seems fine.
ykcarrot wrote:
Unsnapped notes already pointted by osuplayer111. So I don't point it.
Anyway, all diffs are seems good. Star~
Thanks for your star!Single diff mod:
alvisto's Mates:
Normal mod:
00:58:296 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - this part get pretty repetitive and boring. Please change the pattern after one reflection
02:18:883 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - make this section curvier because 1-4 forms a straight line
Combo mod:
00:33:270 (4) (and any section similar to it in the song) -make these sections consistent in combos because here there is no new combo, but at 00:43:186 (1) and at the end of the song, there are new combos.
Timing section mod:
00:10:60 - unneeded timing section, please remove
00:37:84 - ^
01:50:86 - ^
02:20:45 - ^
(Just wondering, does buddies have a higher slider tick rate because of score?)
===
Nice revised diff.
alvisto's Mates:
Normal mod:
00:58:296 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - this part get pretty repetitive and boring. Please change the pattern after one reflection
02:18:883 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - make this section curvier because 1-4 forms a straight line
Combo mod:
00:33:270 (4) (and any section similar to it in the song) -make these sections consistent in combos because here there is no new combo, but at 00:43:186 (1) and at the end of the song, there are new combos.
Timing section mod:
00:10:60 - unneeded timing section, please remove
00:37:84 - ^
01:50:86 - ^
02:20:45 - ^
(Just wondering, does buddies have a higher slider tick rate because of score?)
===
Nice revised diff.
xD Thanks for the good mod Yoshi ! =D Fixed everything except the stated one.blissfulyoshi wrote:
Single diff mod:
alvisto's Mates:
Normal mod:
00:58:296 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - this part get pretty repetitive and boring. Please change the pattern after one reflection. Because I use gradual spacing increase, thus a constant pattern is essential imho. xD
02:18:883 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - make this section curvier because 1-4 forms a straight line
Combo mod:
00:33:270 (4) (and any section similar to it in the song) -make these sections consistent in combos because here there is no new combo, but at 00:43:186 (1) and at the end of the song, there are new combos. I used no combo for these patterns.
Timing section mod:
00:10:60 - unneeded timing section, please remove
00:37:84 - ^
01:50:86 - ^
02:20:45 - ^
(Just wondering, does buddies have a higher slider tick rate because of score?)
===
Nice revised diff.
<3
Download: The Rembrandts - I'll Be There For You (Breeze) [alvisto's Mates].osu