kosiga wrote:

[kajiyatta's Insane]

1. 00:16:492 (4) - add NC and 00:17:439 (1) - remove NC. の方がきれいだと思います。 fixed
2. 00:19:650 (3) - リズムの提案: 00:19:334 (1,2) - と比べてここの音が目立たないので、これを移動させて00:19:808にした方が叩き易いかなぁなんて思います。なるほどそうですね。
3. 00:20:913 (7) - ^同様ですfixed
4. 00:41:439 (9) - NCの提案: 00:41:439 (9) - add NC and 00:42:071 (1) - remove NC and 00:43:334 (6) - add NC NCの間隔は見た目よりも白線重視で置いているので今のところそのままです。
5. 01:14:281 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - 01:14:913 (1) - の角度がストリームと合っていないので少し歪んで見えます。 私の場合↓ （変わらんと思ったらスルーで orz）　ここのところは正直どう配置するか迷っていたので、そのまま使わせて頂きます。
   
   SPOILER

   204,324,74281,1,4
   231,328,74360,1,0
   258,329,74439,1,0
   286,329,74518,1,0
   313,325,74597,1,4
   339,315,74676,1,0
   363,300,74755,1,0
   382,280,74834,1,0
   397,256,74913,6,0,B|426:229|426:185,1,80,4|0
   316,40,75229,2,0,B|287:67|287:111,1,80,8|0

6. 01:30:071 (1) - Ctrl+Rしてみては　ok
7. 01:32:597 (1) - easy同様 fixed

kosiga wrote:

P o M u T aさん こんにちは

遅くなりました

here my mod~

[General]

1. Source - from AIBat. 全て同一のものを使いましょう。（大文字、小文字、順序全てです）
   
   SPOILER

   - [Easy] : MAJOR
   - [Hard] : MAJOR
   - [Insane] : MAJOR
   - [kajiyatta's Insane] : Major 　⇒ 「MAJOR」
   - [Normal] : MAJOR
2. Tags - from AIBat. Source同様です。
   
   SPOILER

   - [Easy] : Opening kajiyatta rom
   - [Hard] : Opening kajiyatta rom
   - [Insane] : Opening kajiyatta rom
   - [kajiyatta's Insane] : Opening kajiyatta 　⇒ 「rom」 追加
   - [Normal] : Opening kajiyatta rom
3. Song folder - soft-slidertick.wav - sliderslideとtick両方を無音にするのは禁止なので、あまり気にならないtickの方を削除しましょう。
4. Song Setup - Storyboarding - Letterbox during breaks - break timeが無いので、チェック削除を推奨(削除する場合全diff　統一)
5. Song folder - normal-hitclap.wav - 少し響きすぎ&音量70~80%で使うには少しうるさいと感じます。 お試し http://puu.sh/1an0P ( 1は響き＆音量down, 2は音量downだけ)

All fixed.
[Easy]

1. 00:11:755 (1,3) - ほぼ対称のスライダーになってますが、もう少し丸みが欲しいところです ><! こんな感じ⇒ http://puu.sh/1alVy
   

   388,108,11755,6,0,B|460:124|484:192|460:260|388:276,1,240.000002384186,2|2
   300,192,13650,1,0
   212,276,14281,2,0,B|139:259|115:191|139:123|211:107,1,240.000002384186,2|2
   300,24,16176,1,0

   もう1つ言うなら、こういった形を使うなら真ん中に置いた方がかっこいいと思います。 http://puu.sh/1alXa
   最初~の配置をずらして真ん中にくるようにしてみてはどうでしょうか？
2. 00:45:860 (1,2) - ここからのリズムの変わり目が少し違和感。 もし使うのであれば、00:49:650 (1,2,3,4) ここのようにもう一つ前にリズムを作ったほうが良いと思います。
   提案としては: 00:42:071 (1) - のスピナーをやめてこんな感じに。 http://puu.sh/1am4J
   どうしてもスピナーをという場合には00:42:071~00:43:334だとスコア6000で少し短くお勧めできませんので、思い切って00:39:545~スピナーを使うとか。
3. 01:03:545 (4,1) - easyで1箇所しか使われていないタイミングで少し取りづらく思います。 ><;
   提案： http://puu.sh/1amaV スピナーendをvocal合わせで。うーん、ここにスピナー個人的に置たくないのと、赤線ひとつくらいは許容範囲だとも思われ、音とも合ってるので違和感は感じませんでした。スライダー少し長いだけなので、初心者でも？ってなる事は多分無いと思います。確かに音取りはスピナーの方が安定して、スライダー単発だととりにくいんですよね。しかし、スピナーの後の空きに自分は考慮してるため、今回はno changeでいきます。
4. 01:27:545 (3) - NCここに入れた方が好きです
5. 01:32:597 (1) - スピナー中の音量が80%⇒50%と差が大きいので、10%ずつくらい徐々に下げていくよう設定した方が良いと思います。

記載以外all fixed しました～。
[Normal]

1. 00:01:018 (1,2,3) - 遅く見せたいので簡単にしてるんだと思うのですが、easy見てからだとものすごくリズムが寂しいと感じます。 easyでこういうリズムを使うのであれば許容範囲だと思いますが、normalなのでもう少しvocalと合わせるよう音取りをした方が良いかと思います。 (最低でも00:05:439は音を取って欲しい)
   例: http://puu.sh/1amqd
2. 00:23:124 (1) - 勢いを付けるのであればサークルの方が私は好きです。
3. 00:23:755 (2) - リピート部のwhistleをclapに変更
4. 00:26:913 (1,2,3) - リズムの提案: http://puu.sh/1amA7
5. 00:33:229 (4,5) - ^ 同じようなリズムの提案: http://puu.sh/1amC7　確かに前の配置と一致してないかもしれませんが、音とも十分あってると思いますので一応保留という形で見ていきます。
   
6. 00:43:334 (3) - リピートスライダーを短くして、 00:43:966にサークルを置くリズムにしてはどうでしょうか？
7. 00:59:755 (1) - スピナー音量途中の50%はいらないと思います。 置くならスピナーのendに。
8. 01:04:018 (2,1) - 01:04:018 (2) - startにwhistle, endにfinishの代わりにwhistle. 01:04:808 (1) - startにfinishとした方が聞きやすいと思います。
9. 01:31:334 (1) - clap合っていないと思います。
10. 01:32:597 (1) - easy同様

記載以外All fixedです。
[Hard]

1. 00:03:545 (7)~ - vocalに合わせたNC: 00:03:545 (7) - add NC and 00:04:808 (1) - remove NC and 00:06:071 (3) - add NC and 00:07:018 (1) - remove NC and 00:09:545 (5) - add NC and 00:10:492 (1) - remove NC
2. 00:13:018 (3) - Ctrl+Rして流れを変えてみては?
3. 00:19:334 (1) - NCを置いていないのはわざと？ わざとじゃなければNC置きましょう。わざとって言われても・・・。勝手にncに入ってたのでそのまま見過ごしてました（汗）わざとする人は多分居ないでしょう・・　fixed.
4. 00:21:860 (5) - ^ 00:19:334 (1,2) . 00:20:597 (3,4) . 00:21:860 (5) . で↓↑↓という流れの方が良いと思ったので。
5. 00:23:124 (1) - 上と同じ理由で↑へ向かうスライダーにしては？ 00:23:439 (2,3) - はおまかせします　ここはこのままでもいいと思いましたのでno change.
6. 00:23:439 (2,3) - 00:23:439 (2) - endと00:23:755 (3) - リピート部にclap追加
7. 00:37:492 (2,3,1,2) - リズムの提案: http://puu.sh/1anI1 前の流れから見てこのままでも良いと思ったのでno change
8. 00:54:702 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - このpartもう少しリズムを抑えてみてはどうですか？(特に00:54:071 (1,2) - 00:54:702 (3,4,5,6) - のリズム差が少し違和感を感じました。) 例えば： http://puu.sh/1aEQ
9. 00:55:334 (5) - startにwhistleの代わりにclap
10. 00:56:597 (2) - clap追加
11. 00:57:545 (1) - endにclap
12. 00:59:124 (4) - startにwhistleの代わりにclap, endのclap削除 hitsound 上の00:55:334 (5)からセット。
13. 01:06:860 (1) - 01:07:018 (2) - これと重ねずに置いた方が良いと思います。 コンボカラーについても01:07:018 (2) - からNC
14. 01:10:650 (3,4,5) - 3,4がvocalとズレているのでこのようなリズムにしてはどうですか？ http://puu.sh/1aEXc
15. 01:14:439 (x) - ここにnote置いたらもっと勢いづくかなぁなんて思います。
16. 01:26:913 (5,6,7) - リズムの提案： 5,6サークル削除して01:26:913~01:27:545までのリピートスライダーに変更。ここはこれで十分かなと思いました。
17. 01:31:018 (2) - 統一性を出す場合、これが少しかっこ悪いと感じました。 例えば: http://puu.sh/1aF8h 少しわかりづらいと思うのでcode↓
    
    SPOILER

    256,192,88177,5,0
    184,236,88493,1,8
    112,192,88808,1,0
    256,192,89439,5,0
    328,148,89755,1,8
    400,192,90070,1,0
    256,192,90702,5,0
    184,148,91018,1,8
    148,72,91334,2,0,B|208:12|304:12|364:72,2,239.999980926514,8|8|4

18. 01:32:755 (1) - easy同様

code助かります。ありがとうございます。記載以外all fixed。
[Insane]

1. 00:01:650 (1) - remove NC. わざとだと思うんですが、00:01:018 (1) - を同じリズム、形でいくのならNCを1つで置くのはあまり見栄えが良くないなと思います。
2. 00:01:018 (1,1,2,3,4,5) - 00:06:071 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:11:755 (1,2,3,4) - DS一定にしてるとこなので同じようなDS使ったほうが良いかなと思います。今の流れでも大丈夫かなと思ったのでno changeでいきます。
3. 00:19:018 (4) - clap削除
4. 00:23:124 (1) - clap追加
5. 00:24:387~ - 00:24:387 (1,2) - のようなリズム嫌いではないんですが、私は青線で音量下げる必要無いと思いました。下げると逆にやり難い気がしました。
6. 00:46:097 (5) - note削除。 00:44:913 (1,2) - ここのリズムから見て、ここでの連打は少しオーバーかな思いました。
7. 00:49:334 (7,8) - 8の単発より、これを削除して7にリピート追加した方が私は好きです。
8. 00:54:071 (1) - start,end共にfinishのみに。
9. 00:54:702 (2) ~ - hitsound: 00:54:702 (2) - endのclap削除。( ここのスローパートはこの位置のclapは少し合わないです。) ↓以下同じ
   00:55:334 (3) - startにclap, endのclap削除
   00:55:966 (1) - endのclap削除
   00:56:597 (2) - startにclap, endのclap削除
   00:57:229 (3) - endのclap削除
   00:57:860 (4) - startにclap, endのclap削除
   00:58:808 (6) - clap削除
   00:59:124 (1) - clap追加
   00:59:439 (3) - clap削除
10. 00:59:124 (1,2,3) - リズムとNCの提案: http://puu.sh/1aG7y　提案リズムはとてもいいと思いますが、今の状態でいきます。ゆっくりから病み上がりの事もあって、単発離しでinsaneらしく音とも十分マッチしています。ただ単にこの配置が気に入ってるだけなのですがｗ
11. 01:09:860 (10) - add NC and 01:10:492 (1) - remove NC.
12. 01:10:808 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - whistle一定だったのにここは急に静かになるような印象を受けました。ここにも置くべきだと思います。
13. 01:29:281 (2,3,4,5) - 01:28:018 (2,3,4,5) - と同じ流れと3,4,5で同じ場所に重ねるといったのはここではあまり好ましくないと思います。別の位置を考えてみては？ 例えば 01:29:755 (3,4,5) - は反対側の01:27:545 (1) - start位置へ重ねるような流れにするとか。
14. 01:32:597 (1) - easy同様
    
    kiai timeのwhistleの置き方について
    他diffでは置いていないのであまりお勧めできませんが、もし置くのであれば常に一定に置くだけでなく強めたい部分にも置いた方が盛り上がるかなと思います。
    ↓置いた方が盛り上がるかなと思うtime
    01:06:387
    01:11:124
    01:11:755
    01:13:966
    01:19:018
    01:21:545
    01:24:071
    01:26:597 etc　
    記載されてない所は全てall fixedでございます。

申し訳ない。とても長いですorz

頑張って下さい~

Genshin wrote:

let's MOD

[Easy]

couldn't find anything. :3
[Normal]

from 00:44:597 - to 01:04:808 - keep the audio at 50% fixed
01:27:545 (1,2) - about these 2 sliders:
1st one's ticks: x188;y128 - x288;y132 - x288;y240
188,128,87545,6,0,B|288:132|288:240,1,159.999980926514

2nd one's ticks: x172;x340 - x72;y336 - x72;y228
172,340,88808,2,0,B|72:336|72:228,1,159.999980926514
Though it was slightly different from the reference, I made modifications.
[Hard]

OD 5　ok

00:01:966 (4) - just a suggestion: stack this on the begin of the next slider instead of this note 00:01:650 (3) - fixed
00:31:334 (3) - 1st tick x72;y100 2nd: x132;y68 3rd: x188;y104 sorry, no change.
00:50:281 (2) - 1st tick x156;y332 2nd: x184;y352 3rd: x212;y332 sorry no change.
00:55:966 (1) - 3 grid right, 3 grid up (level 4) 3grid up only ..
[Insane]

OD 6 sorry no change.

00:06:071 (1) - suggestion: flip this in both axis (ctrl + h then j) sorry, no change.
00:15:545 (3) - reverse this slider (ctrl +r or h) sorry no change.
00:34:176 (4) - reverse this slider (ctrl + r) ok.fixed.
01:08:597 (2) - this note sounds a bit out of rhythm no change... ._.　I look at the state.
01:09:229 (5) - same thing ^　^

good luck :3

p.s. nice map

Lally wrote:

(๑╹ω╹๑)/ hi from my Mod Queue~

[General]
all fine

[Easy]
01:03:545 (4) the slider should finish at 01:04:176 - sounds better for me I always worried about it. But fixed.

[Normal]

01:14:913 - useless 2nd point I like the same one.
01:15:545 - ^ ^
01:17:439 - ^ ^
01:18:071 - ^ ^
01:21:545 - ^ fixed ~

[Hard]

00:16:808 - add a circle sorry.. spin keep

00:17:124 - spinner start // spinner end -> 00:18:702 + finish finsh fixed

01:32:913 - better to start spinner here fixed.

Deni wrote:

----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Easy

No problem in this difficulty!

Normal

00:01:018 (1,2) - They are not on the same y-axis. I don't know if you did that on purpose.
00:33:229 (4) - Mhh maybe add a curve to this slider or make it look more interesting..

Hard

00:03:229 (6) - Delete this circle it doesn't fit.
00:50:755 (4) - The form of this slider doesn't fit maybe try something like this :

Slider

01:16:808 (4) - Remove Whistle

Insane

00:49:966 (1,2) - Looks a bit strange maybe stack 2 on the tail of 1. sorry, keep is It is easy to do it.

If you have any questions contact me ingame or via PM.
Other All fixed

thanks for modding

hibarirailwayz wrote:

生放送で振られたので（仕方なく
There are my opinions, so you need not follow.
[General]
clear!

[Easy]
00:28:808 (4,1) - 配置が汚いです。３のスライダーの延長線上に４を持ってきて後の部分を調整してください。
00:34:492 (1,3) - 左右反対の方がスライダーの形と、AIMが一致して易しいかな？
01:03:545 (4) - スライダーの終点を01:04:334 - にすると、音と一番合うと思います。
01:24:387 (4,1,2) - ④と②の終点の若干のずれが気になるので、微調整のアドバイス。
④：296,204 ①：356,308 ②：184,204

[Normal]
00:23:124 (1,2) - 個人的にはスライダーでまとめた方が好きです。
00:45:229 (2,3) - 音取りの提案

SPOILER

01:30:071 (3) - スライダーの形が残念ｗ少しとんがりすぎかな

[Hard]
00:21:860 (1) - 単発でもいいと思いますが
00:25:018 (3,4,5) - ③のスライダーの延長線をイメージして⑤を配置していただきたい。

[Insane]
01:01:018 (1,2) - 00:59:755 (1,2) - と重ねてみては？少しずれていて気持ち悪いです 全部移動させてくっつけさせました。

全部修正しました～：Ｄ
Good luck!!全削除

神Modありがとう　

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Haii ~ Hi :3
You requested in my queue ~

[General]
- Music track lead-in 2 is a bit large, set it to 1 or inbetween 1 & 2? keep
- Bookmarks can be removed ~ Done.


[Easy]
00:35:755 (2) - Slider end stack with 00:33:860 (4)
01:26:281 (2) - Slider end stack with 01:24:387 (4)


[Normal]
- HP Drain Rate +1 ?


[Hard]
00:14:281 (1) - Make is like 00:13:018 (3) ?
00:55:018 (4) - Make is equal to (2), place it at x:164 y:192
00:55:650 (5) - Place where (1) was placed.
01:13:650 (5) - New combo here or at 01:13:966 (8)


[kajiyatta's Insane]
01:32:124 (2) - Stack at the end of 01:31:018 (6)


[Insane]
00:28:334 (7) - New combo?
00:47:439 (5) - ^

All fixed

Well mapped ~
Good luck! >w<

-Bakari- wrote:

hi! as requested

[General]
clear

[Easy]
00:02:913 (3) - since your sliders (at least some of them) feels off vocals. it strats at begining of one line and ends at start of another line.) try to replace them with circles. this way. note: if you'll do it - fix comboing also. o\you'll have to put new combos more often. i want you to do it bacause beginners following vocals while playing. Vocals are loud and they're easy to follow. fixed
00:32:281 - - if you don't want to put here circle with clap. at least make this tick louder than others (or add custom tick (custom tick hitsound = clap) for this line. slider will looks like this fixed
00:54:702 (1) - meh.. symmetrical flow is a great thing. untill it ruins rhythm. for example here you should try something like this. it's quite clear that slider ends at 00:55:334 - note. I in accord with a slow sound and an atmosphere do keep. However, I put clap in tick of the middle.
01:07:334 (3,4) - this shape could confuse some beginners because it's a bit hard to read. you can curve longer sliders but please don't curve shorter ones (at least for Easy)! Of course curved looks better but non-curved are much easier to read! no curve change.
01:18:071 (5) - there's a perfect place to put 2/1 slider with reverse! do it this way because it fits with vocals yeah
01:30:071 (1) - it's just wrong. (same mistake as 00:02:913 (3)) i'd like to see (1) without reverse and maybe something like this. (feel free to ignore (3) and my combo changes at this screenshot) maybe Fixed !

[Normal]
pleeease don't do it! this velocity changes for Normal diff is too much! it's so awkward and confusing when in the middle of the song sliders are getting FASTER without any notice. :< don't do it for Easy/Normal diffs!
00:45:229 (2) - oh man.. how about adding reverse arrow for this slider? it feels wrong when you're missing strong beat (00:45:545)
01:03:545 (1) - actually same mistake as above? if you aren't sure about beats use 25% playback rate and chack them. it's quite clear shows us that beat at 01:03:860 - is quite loud and should bbe mapped
all fixed
[Hard]
since there's noactual reason to keep HP Drain 6 use Hp Drain 5 because it fits here better. as for OD use OD6 because currently your diff is a bit too easy for Hard. (Overall Diff + 1/ HP Drain -1) Fixed
00:10:176 - actually there's a beat and vocals. that's why there's no reason to keep this beat empty. circle here would be a good idea, btw. fixed
00:19:334 (2) - NC bug. fix it by adding new combo. fixed
00:21:860 (1,2) - try to be more consistent! for example previous two doubles were unstacked. and this one is stacked. it looks awrkward and confusing while playing. so, please unstack them as you did it with previous doubles fixed
00:38:281 (1) - hey man! this new combo is off vocals/music and off your pattern. wh did you put it here? ;_; fixed
01:11:597 (6) - how about converting this one into slider? sounds good to me :3 umm.. vocal fit no change ~
01:13:650 (1,2,3) - 1/4 beats in this diff aren't really used a lot. so.. remove 1/4 beat here because it's off music and unfitting with your patternsokay
[Insane]
AR9 feels a bit too fast but it should be this way according to logic. just saying. AR9 is fun
00:47:439 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - do you realize that patterns like this one are hard to read with hidden (a specially hard with AR9). can you unstack them somehow to make readable flow? kick slider two change.
00:54:071 (3) - if slowdown starts here - there's should be a new combo. i don't feel like this part needs slowdown, btw. New combo fixed.
01:00:860 - there's a beat and circle will fi here but it won't hurt gameplay if you'll ignore this suggestion. sorry ;x; keep . My favorite part

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

would get more mods or not. anyway, map is good

-Bakari- wrote:

[kajiyatta's Insane]
some 1/4's are off (00:33:387 (6,7,8) - ) also they're looks random and i don't want to see them here, anyway, it's up to you. feel free to keep or delete them.
quite good diff with nice flow.
ok. avoiding this random 1/4 notes because I was mentioned this some times.

jamxx wrote:

kajiyatta
00:23:124 (3) - (1)と(2)でセットの配置になっているのと、曲調も変わるのでNC fixed.　統一性を持たせるため前の(5)にもNCを置きました。

jamxx wrote:

mod reqsより

Easy
00:01:018 (1) - 最低難易度なので、無音からのサークルは少し難しいと思うので、ここは削除してもいいかもです。う～ん、最初のnoteは全部統一したいのでここは削除しないことにします！スライダーという手もありますが、vocalにあわせて後は、音にあわせてる感じなのでサークルがしっくり来ます。insaneのスタートはスライダーですがそれはvocalを意識して難易度にあわせた音取りをしています。
00:03:545 (4) - whistle削除?ベース音に合わせてつけてあるのかもしれませんが、無いほうが一貫性があっていいと思いました。確かにそうですねfixedです
00:06:071 (3) - ^　此方も勿論修正完了です
00:31:966 (3) - ここは00:32:597のtickを鳴らしたほうがいいです。あとtickを鳴らす場合10%ほど音量を下げないと、通常のclapよりうるさく鳴ります。fmfm,tickに音付けが今回初めてなので勉強になりました
00:35:755 (2) - 始点のfinish削除 fixed.
00:37:018 (3) - 折り返しにclap fixed
01:03:545 (4) - 終点clap削除 fixed.

Normal
00:26:913 (1) - 終点clap
00:33:229 (4) - 終点clap削除
00:39:229 (4) - clap
01:08:597 (3,4) - ここは赤点使わなくてもいいと思いました
01:16:492-tickを鳴らす
All fixed

Hard
00:50:755 (4) - 終点clap
01:10:650 (3) - 終点clap
01:10:966 (4) - clap削除
01:11:439 (5) - clap
01:25:018 (1,2) - このスタックはスライダーの長さと、(1)と(2)の間隔が違うため、わかりにくいので重ねなくてもいいと思いました。
All fixedです

Insane
00:19:966 (3,6,9) - clap削除もしくは音量を絞る　一貫性を保つため音量を絞りました。
00:41:124 (2) - スライダーが半分近く隠れているので、わかりにくいかも知れません。　確かにそうかもしれませんね、しかし、色んな人からテストプレイしてもらってますが、この点に関しての指摘は無くテストのAutoで確認したら微かに薄く見えて全く分からなくも無いということが確認できました。(1)と(2)も近いので叩きづらいということも無いのでno changeでいきます。しかし、隠れている事に関しては事実なので教えていただきうれしいです
01:14:913 (1) - ～ 01:19:650 (4) - 面白い配置ですが、TVsizeの短い曲ではあまりコピペを使わない方が面白いです。確かにTV SIZEだとこのような配置のループは使われないかもしれませんね。自分は気に入ってますので、良い配置の提案が見つかる場合のみ検討していきます。
ゲスト以外のすべての難易度に言えることですが、全体的にhitsoundをもう少し丁寧に、一貫性を持たせてつけてあげるともっと面白い譜面になると思います。ありがとうございます
nice map<3

wantuole wrote:

hai~
from my queue
[General]
bg is too fuzzy,change this or all use kajiyatta's Insane bg　
combo colour (1,2) is a little dark,keep more than 2 of cokour light (L) same is butter
Reservation
[easy]
01:30:071 (1) - add clap fixed[nor]
[Hard]
00:54:071 (1) - remove whistle
01:21:229 (5) - ctrl+g(old is "ctrl+r")
all fixed

[Insane]
00:21:860 - green line audio 60% fixed
00:44:597 (9) - NC 00:44:913 (1) reNC fixed
01:00:229 (4) - remove note i think keep sound better
01:10:492 (2,3,4,5,6) - the left is too crowded 1 red line between ... i think no problem.

that all
good luck

wantuole wrote:

[General]
[kajiyatta's Insane]
00:45:229 (2,3,4,5) - not make it straight line no fixed. still be I like.
01:04:018 (5) - middle change clap,end only finish fixed
01:19:334 (9) - ctrl+g I expect jump this pattern so no fixed.
01:21:545 (6) - NC no fixed. I put NC per 8 beats.
01:24:229 (1) - ^ ^

frost-b-spec wrote:

[Hard]
スペーシングがx1.2 x1.4 x1.5とあるのは意図的？意図的です。ゆっくりなところ、盛り上がるところにスペーシング変更行っています。しかし、hardは統一させた方が良いと自分でも思っており・・しかしながら、今回はこのままで行きます。
00:16:492 (8) - spacing
00:36:387 (7,8) - ^
00:40:176 (3) -
00:40:808 (1,2) - もう少し綺麗にできると良いです
01:20:597 (2,3,4,6,7,8,2,3,4,6,7,8) - x258 y193

[Easy]
00:31:966 (3) - spacing
00:37:018 (3) - ^
01:06:071 (2,3) - ^

all fixed です～。凄く良くなりました
mod 感謝です

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Tshemmp wrote:

[Insane]
00:24:387 (1,2) - I don't understand this. Why you end the slider 00:24:624? I here nothing in the music here x.x . If you'd end the slider 00:24:545 it would be more convinient to play (it doesn't support the music either, so why keep it?). If you change it, please do it also at these parts: 00:25:018 (4,5), 00:25:650 (1,2), 00:27:229 (2,3), 00:27:860 (5,1), 00:28:492 (3,4), 00:34:492 (1,2), 00:35:124 (4,5), 01:08:281 (6,1) and 01:08:913 (3,4).
00:24:387 - even if you don't apply the previous point, you should take a look at the time line here

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and now the same music part at 00:26:913

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. As you can see they are different although the music there is not. I would make these two parts equal.
00:45:387 - add a circle here? I feel the beat here is even stronger than at 00:45:545, so you could also move 00:45:545 (2) to 00:45:387 (and fix the spacing ofcourse).
00:59:281 (6) - not sure about this one, I would make it similar to 00:58:650, so maybe remove the circle?
01:17:439 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - meh. These are not good. The first two "slider-circles" were fitting because the music belonged together there, but the next two measures the music is different, so should be the pattern. Right now it is mapped as if 01:14:913 to 01:19:808 would be one part in the music but for me there starts something different at 01:17:439.
01:19:650 (4) - add a clap on the end since you did the same on the end of 01:19:018 (2) (it sounds very nice)?

insane delete.

[Hard]
00:02:281 (5) - is this slider really supposed to look like that? Why not

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384,96,2281,2,0,B|412:128|412:176|384:208,1,119.999990463257,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

(just ask if you don't know how to use code)
00:03:545 (1) - ^
00:45:387 - add a circle here? I feel the beat here is even stronger than at 00:45:545, so you could also move 00:45:545 (2) to 00:45:387 (and fix the spacing ofcourse).
00:50:755 (4) - this slider looks a bit strange for me, too. I think it should be more one line with the previous pattern like this:

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01:11:597 (6,7) - the spacing between these two is too low imo
01:25:018 - I feel the two measure from 01:25:018 to 01:26:202 and from 01:26:281 to 01:27:545 should be mapped more equal. At the moment the rhythm in the map is completely different whereas it isn't in the music. I think adding a circle at 01:26:755 would already solve the problem because it is mainly the syncope at 01:25:492 which makes it feel so different from the secon part.

[Normal]
00:16:808 (1,2) - add whistle on start and end? It is a bit strange when you do it all the time but not here.
01:19:176 - this repeat doesn't make sense. There is nothing in the music, so why do a repeat here? Either make the slider like this I keep. because guitar sound fit

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or like this

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[Easy]
01:11:124 (3,4) - these sliders are very quiet compared to all other objects. You always put a hitsound on all objects but not here although it is still kiai time. I don't see any reason of not adding a hitsound here aswell.
01:19:966 (1,3) - ^ with the end of (1) and both start and end of (3).

Tshemmp wrote:

[kajiyatta's Insane]
01:10:018 - why you suddenly use soft sample set here? This way you seperate this part from the previous part of the kiai time which shouldn't be since they somehow belong together. I see no reason for changing to soft here, normal seems fine for me (you can also try lowering the volume if you really want a difference between these two parts).
01:19:966 - ^
Apart from this really nice diff, nothing to point out for me.
well, I want to emphasize vocal but if all KIAI TIME has N:C:1 hit sounds, it will be noisy, so I put N:C:1 at beginning of vocal.
probably, using soft-hit sounds makes more better in all parts I suppose. but others mention that, I'll fix it.

464,216,39545,6,0,B|396:160|421:63,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
340,52,40018,1,0,0:0:0
340,52,40176,2,0,B|268:84,1,80
108,52,40492,2,0,B|180:84,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
148,160,40808,1,0,0:0:0
192,228,40966,1,0,0:0:0
272,228,41124,1,8,0:0:0
308,156,41281,1,0,0:0:0
308,156,41439,2,0,B|380:124|464:156,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

Flower wrote:

Hi~ mod from the queue~

[Easy]
00:37:018 - add finish?
00:39:545 - ^
All fixed
[Normal]
00:01:018 (1,2,3,4,5) - did you forget the whistles like in Easy? :3 thanks~
00:35:124 (2) - this does not quite follow the song. maybe change to 2 stacked notes? fixed
00:40:018 (2,5) - difficult to handle in this level? fmm, keep ,no change,,
01:03:545 (1,2) - ^. better change the kick sliders to 2 non-repeated sliders ^
01:19:018 (4) - add N:C2? ok
01:31:334 (1,2) - both finish and remove clap may be better? fixed

[Hard]
honestly the Hard and Insane spread too close. make a Normal+ or Extra may look better but... ok you can ignorethis.
00:19:334 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - each set looks better if you stack them, imo 0 0 i think no stack better ><
00:25:492 (4) - unrankable. you have to stack it to the left bottom direction. (5) stack,,
01:16:808 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - add whistles like the previous 1,2,3. if you accept so, then following 2 are further suggestions. ok
01:19:018 - add whistle ok
01:19:650 (7) - ^ ok01:31:334 - 01:31:966 - better finishes than claps fmm,, add finished (3)

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hope my mods be useful _(:3」∠)_

Flower wrote:

Hi~ mod from the queue~

[Insane]
only suggestions.
00:05:124 - add 30% S:C1, add clap. I put whistle in consistant sorry no fixed.
00:08:913 (6) - ^ ^
00:12:702 - ^ ^
00:39:545 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I think this way is a bit better? (minor adjust) fixed

464,216,39545,6,0,B|396:160|421:63,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
340,52,40018,1,0,0:0:0
340,52,40176,2,0,B|268:84,1,80
108,52,40492,2,0,B|180:84,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
148,160,40808,1,0,0:0:0
192,228,40966,1,0,0:0:0
272,228,41124,1,8,0:0:0
308,156,41281,1,0,0:0:0
308,156,41439,2,0,B|380:124|464:156,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

00:47:913 - better add a note here. I know you mean but I don't feel good adding a note. if others mention that, I'll fix it.
01:04:808 - why not try adding some whistles at kiai time it's so passionate :3 btw if you add whistles feel free to make some note whistle+clap which sounds cool hmm, I don't follow this suggestions...clap fits better I hear.
01:29:439 (4,3) - better use finish + clap fixed
01:31:334 (1) - ^ fixed
01:32:281 (3) - better use clap than finish? fixed

Teru21 wrote:

Hi xD from Its just a tiny Modding Team

Lets start xD

[Easy]
Overall.. good xD
00:01:018 (1) - this is so upbeat.. >< suggest u, if u follow the music , move it 00:01:334 - .. if u follow the vocal, add 1/1 slider i keep like..
00:06:071 (3) - move it x:224 y:232? because the circle will looks good with 00:04:176 (1) - and.. if u follow this, then u should make change to 00:06:702 (1) - http://puu.sh/1g2SL
00:26:913 (3) - how bout the slider look like http://puu.sh/1g2Tv ? why? I think it will look more good with 00:25:650 (2) and it fits the vocal too imo
00:40:808 (2,3) - delete (3) and end the (2) 00:42:071 . add a circle 00:42:702 . (3) is circle
00:48:387 (4) - actually, add 1 reverse, but remembering its an Easy, remove and add a 4/1 slider.. Its more fit with the song and add custom 2 keep
00:53:439 (4) - ^ keep
01:13:650 (5) - ^ or, add 1/1 slider twice keep
other fixed
[Normal]
00:01:018 (1) - same as easy but, no change
00:16:808 (1) - remove reverse and end it 00:17:439 - . Why? it more fits with the music and the vocal sure. but,I think that there is not the trouble as now.sorry
01:14:281 (4) - remove reverse and end the slider 01:14:597 - stack circle change .

[Hard]
00:06:071 (1,5) - (1) and (5) doesn't looks good >_> so, (5) recopy from (1) then, ctrl + H and ctrl + J xD will look better
00:10:176 (3) - x:88 y:112 , will look better spacing,,, no change.
00:24:387 (1,3) - doesn't looks good each other.. so, (1)'s 3rd point(the last point) 1 grid down.. don't forget to restack (2) beautiful~
00:31:176 (2,3) - doesn't looks good each other.. Dx curve (3) more to make it symetrical with (2)
01:14:439 (4,5) - stack them? because previously (01:13:650 (1,2) - ) you stack them too.. so, I think It will be good if you stack (4,5) change
other change.
the insane is good xD

thats all

Alternative wrote:

Here my mod via my modding queue

大したmodが出来てないと思ったらkudosuを投げなくても結構です
指摘点があまりないのでSuggestionメイン
小姑みたいな指摘 綺麗なスライダーになることはとてもうれしいです：３

[General]
fine

[Easy]
・00:01:018 (1) - 個人的に00:02:913 (3) - とy座標を合わせた方が良さそうだと思いました
・00:29:439 (1) - スライダーの真ん中の点が微妙にずれてます　真ん中に合わせましょう

[Normal]
・00:29:439 (1) - 真ん中の点がきっちり真ん中にないのが気になりました　あとEndpointのx座標が始点とあってないのも
・00:31:334 (5) - 真ん中の点を調整
・00:31:966 (1) - ＾
・00:51:545 (4) - ＾
・00:52:808 (3) - ＾
・00:53:439 (4) - ＾
・01:11:124 (3) - ＾

[Hard]
・00:06:071 (1) - 真ん中の点を調整
・00:08:597 (5) - 先ほどの指摘を受け入れるならここも調整
・00:30:071 (3) - 始点と終点のy座標がずれてるのが気になりました
・00:30:702 (1) - 微妙に斜めになってるのでまっすぐにしましょう
・00:41:124 (3) - もう一個折り返すのはどうでしょう　3回折り返しにしました～
・00:59:124 (4) - 真ん中の点を調整
・01:06:071 (5) - ＾
・01:07:018 (1) - ＾
・01:09:860 (1) - 始点と終点のy座標
記載以外All fixed !! しかし、完璧に直っているか自分で保障できないという恥ずかしい現実・・・(｀・ω・´)
配置に関しては問題ないと思いましたので、下手するとどうでもいいと思われる場所しかmodできませんでしたすみません。
Shoot a star~

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ P o M u T a ~

Mod time for my Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

1. Why no add 'TV Size' in tittle? fixed!

[Hard]

1. 00:16:808 (1) - Remove finish. fixed!
2. 00:23:755 (3) - I guess change to 1/4 repeat sldier is better to here fixed!
   (00:23:755 - 00:23:913 - 00:24:071 - Add clap). fixed!
3. 00:41:124 (3) - Try change to rhythm,like this. fixed!
   
4. 01:32:913 (1) - Start on 01:32:676. fixed!

[Normal]

1. 00:09:229 (3,4) - Try change to rhythm,like this. fixed!
   
2. 00:45:545 - Missing Add clap to here. :o! thnaks! fixed!
3. 00:46:176 - Why whistle? should change to clap. fixed!
4. 01:04:018 (2) - Change a 1/1 slider more easy playable. ok~ fixed!
5. 01:22:492 (1) - Change curved slider,same as 01:21:545 (5). ok fixed!

[Easy]

1. 01:27:545 (1) - Remove new combo. fixed ~!
2. 01:31:334 (1) - ^ fixed~!
   beautiful new combo

That's all ~ Good job on newbies mapper ~
Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

all fixed ~
thanks for modding check ~ !

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Recheck ~ No ks pls ~

Pls change Insane file name 'Road of Major - Kokoroe (TV Size) (P o M u T a) [kajiyatta_'s Insane]' to >>> 'Road of Major - Kokoroe (TV Size) (P o M u T a) [kajiyatta's Insane]' (don't forgot full submit). ok changed !

[Normal]

1. 00:10:492 (5) - Should change a 2/1 slider not 1/1 repeat slider. fix and 00:11:124 - circle put.

[Easy]

1. 01:31:650 - Remove this green line. fixed!
2. 01:32:597 (4) - Remove clap and Add finish.fixed!

Kawayi Rika wrote:

OK ~ Looks all fine now ~

Here you go :3

MMzz wrote:

Modding as requested! Just a few little things before we rank.~

[Hard]
00:31:334 (3) - Remove the finish from the head. There is no reason for it to be there, it sounds really out of place.
00:54:702 (3) - Add a finisher to this note, I hear a finish sound in the song here.
00:57:229 (4,1) - New combo on 4, remove from 1. Just like I said for insane, this combo will follow the music better because it's following the downbeat.
01:09:860 (1) - Add a finisher to the head? I hear a finish sound in the song here.
01:17:439 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - All this sudden whistle hitsounding doesn't make much sense seeing as you don't do it again after this point. I suggest you clean it up and just keep the whistles like you had them before. (01:14:913 (1,2,3,4) - )
01:25:018 (1) - Add a finisher to the head? I hear a finish sound in the song here.
01:26:913 (6) - Add a finisher to the tail? I hear a finish sound in the song here.

[Normal]
01:09:860 (1) - Add a finisher to the head? I hear a finish sound in the song here.
01:18:702 (3) - Make the first slidertick a clap so you keep the rhythm.
01:24:702 (1) - Add a finisher to the tail? I hear a finish sound in the song here.
01:27:545 (1) - Add a finisher to the head? I hear a finish sound in the song here.

[Easy]
00:44:597 (1) - Add a finisher to the head? I hear a finish sound in the song here.

All fixed ~
That's all! Sorry it's mostly hitsound stuff, your placement is pretty good so I didn't have any issues with it! I just noticed these small hitsound things.

Call me back when you've applied this and I'll rank!~

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Omedeto on your first rank