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Stefan

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Stefan 2012-09-26T22:11:59+00:00

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10:47 Stefan: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/178581 Eiffel 65 - Move Your Body (Nightcore Mix) [Smile]]
10:47 Lally: :3
10:49 Stefan: 00:16:531 (1) - I don't get why this Circle has soft Hitsounds.
10:49 Stefan: IMO you should make it as normal Hitsound with Finish.
10:50 Lally: ok
10:50 Lally: fixed
10:51 Stefan: About the Diff itself, is it a Normal Diff or a Easy Diff?
10:51 Stefan: Because Idk if you plan to add more Diffs to the Mapset.
10:52 Lally: easy / i wait for katty pie she is working on normal
10:52 Stefan: Good, the settings are fine then.
10:53 Stefan: 00:16:900 (2,3) - Spacing error.
10:54 Lally: http://puu.sh/18UEq now?
10:54 Stefan: yeah, this is fine now.
10:54 Stefan: 00:17:269 (3,1) - Also here, you have to move (1) for a bit.
10:55 Lally: uh fixed
10:55 Stefan: About the Grid Level, do you constantly use Grid Level 2?
10:56 Stefan: because (1) ist set, like you used Grid Level 3.
10:56 Lally: sometimes i need lev 4 but here i used 2
10:57 Stefan: Level 4 should ONLY be used for complicate Slider forms, but I guess you know that.
10:58 Stefan: However, try to keep the same GL at the whole Diff.
10:58 Lally: i used it in some parts of [Dance] for sistem some things on giO-'s mod
10:59 Stefan: Hmkay.
10:59 Stefan: 00:20:223 (4,1) - Spacing Error
11:00 Lally: hmm http://puu.sh/18UMW so?
11:00 Stefan: 00:21:700 (1) - If you use GL2, try to make such Sliders with these Sliderpoints: http://puu.sh/18UMS
11:01 Stefan: Yeah, but I see you're using GL3 here. xD
11:01 Lally: XD i use it now because of you >o< waaah
11:03 Stefan: Oh sorry then. xD
11:03 Lally: http://puu.sh/18UQ8 so?
11:03 Stefan: So do you use GL2 or 3 now?
11:03 Lally: 3
11:03 Stefan: GL3 is imo the Best one to create low Diffs.
11:03 Stefan: Because they should be not too complicated and that.
11:04 Lally: kay :3
11:04 Stefan: But keep in mind that you have to set the correct distance then.
11:05 Lally: ok
11:05 Stefan: You can ask the AI Mod about Spacing Errors.
11:05 Lally: AI Mod?
11:05 Stefan: It'll tell you if the Hitobject is too close or too far.
11:06 Stefan: Click at File -> Open AIMod.
11:06 Stefan: Also able to open: Ctrl+Shift+A
11:06 Lally: OwO so many ( / . \ )
11:06 Stefan: Yeah, it's not that problem to fix. o3o
11:07 Lally: uh ok u.u
11:08 Stefan: 00:28:347 (1) - Instead of Clap, you should add Finish at the Start Point.
11:09 Lally: done
11:10 Stefan: 00:26:131 (3) - Remove the Finish at the Start and Middle Point. End Point fits nice with Finish, so keep it there.
11:10 Stefan: 00:40:163 (3) - Also here, remove Clap and add Finish at the Start Point.
11:11 Lally: done
11:14 Lally: i dunno why but 00:26:131 (3) if i try to put the finish at end it comes at the start too D:
11:15 Stefan: You have to mark the Points at the Time Line.
11:15 Stefan: http://puu.sh/18V2T
11:16 Lally: ok done u.u
11:17 Stefan: 00:48:286 (1) - Drag the Spinner to 00:49:025 - 
11:17 Stefan: It should start there.
11:17 Lally: ok u.u
11:18 Stefan: And the End should be at 00:51:979 - , the reason is that it fits much better.#
11:19 Lally: ok done
11:19 Stefan: 00:48:286 -  and 00:48:656 - Now that you took my suggestion, you should set something here.
11:19 Stefan: Like a Slider or two Hitcircles.
11:21 Stefan: 01:06:749 (1) - Add Finish at the Start.
11:22 Stefan: 01:21:519 (1,2) - Spacing Error, not because it is too far, but it looks very awkward to be honest, when (2) is so close to (1).
11:23 Lally: i added 2 circles  and fixed and fixed
11:23 Stefan: Good.
11:23 Stefan: 02:06:014 - until 02:07:307 - The inherited Points are unsnapped and should be snapped.
11:24 Stefan: 02:30:939 - At here, you should start to use normal Hitsounds again.
11:25 Stefan: 02:42:764 - Also unsnapped IP.
11:25 Lally: uhm?^ it means?
11:26 Stefan: The green Line is unsnapped.
11:27 Lally: ok.. (how to fix it(?)
11:28 Stefan: Press F6
11:28 Stefan: http://puu.sh/18VhR Click at "Inherited Points".
11:29 Stefan: Scroll down, you'll see an empty part: http://puu.sh/18ViS
11:30 Stefan: Now left-click here and mark every point of the List.
11:31 Stefan: You'll see at the left side a new option called "Move selected offsets by:"
11:31 Lally: yap
11:31 Stefan: Type -9 and then click on "Set"
11:31 Stefan: *Move
11:32 Stefan: With this option, you can resnapp all green Lines.
11:32 Stefan: *resnap
11:33 Stefan: Show me some of the lines, when you're done.
11:33 Lally: should i move all points on -9 or only this?
11:34 Stefan: All points (green Lines)
11:36 Lally: http://puu.sh/18Vqk so?
11:37 Stefan: Exactlly, now click on move.
11:38 Lally: ok done
11:38 Lally: but here 02:42:764 should i insere a green line?
11:39 Stefan: No. lol
11:39 Lally: uh it's already one ò.ò
11:39 Stefan: Yeah, this.
11:39 Lally: *facepalm*
11:40 Stefan: At all, the Diff is okay, for the Begin. You should use some moar Finishes, mostly at the Begin of the Kiai Time (02:42:755 (1) - , etc)
11:40 Lally: ok i receck it then later :3
11:41 Stefan: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/179141 Eiffel 65 - Move Your Body (Nightcore Mix) [Dance]]
11:42 Lally: kay u.u
11:43 Stefan: 00:14:315 (1,1) - Spacing is a bit too far for a Hard Diff.
11:43 Lally: it's a insane o3o (i should write it on info =w= hard is a guest
11:44 Stefan: Ohh, ok, ignorethis. lol
11:44 Lally: :P orz sorry
11:45 Stefan: 00:28:347 - until the end of Kiai Time: It's funny how you use the Finish here, but let Claps here out. xD
11:45 Stefan: *Finishes
11:46 Lally: i edited it some hours ago now it's a whistle owo
11:47 Stefan: This means, that I actually like the Finishes how you use them here, you should use them at Smile too.
11:47 Lally: like 00:27:608 here
11:47 Lally: hmm ok i try to fix hitsounds better
11:48 Lally: at smile diff
11:48 Stefan: At all, your two Diffs are good for the Begin, but imo they lack on good Hitsounds, to be honest.
11:49 Stefan: Durrr..
11:49 Stefan: wb
11:50 Lally: ty little crsh o3o bancho <_< hmm yap i need to fix they :/ so hard to understand how =_=
11:52 Stefan: Ask around what people think about your Hitsounding, maybe it's only me what thinks about the Hitsounds.
11:53 Lally: ok :3
11:54 Stefan: Anyway, I promise you a Recheck for this Map. ;)

Revy

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Revy 2012-09-27T11:56:48+00:00

Here is my guest diff: http://puu.sh/19580 \o/

Pink Agate

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Pink Agate 2012-09-27T12:29:15+00:00

hi,from your M4M,thank you for modding my map

first,You should write tags,your map no tags

Smile

00:19:485 (3) - remove clap
00:22:808 (3) - ^
00:23:177 (4) - ^
00:26:131 (3) - ^
``````````
00:26:131 (3) - Change the position of this slider
the hitsound clap is too many,please remove some clap,than I think some slider is ugly

sorry
02:42:755 (1) - add clap
02:45:340 (2) - remove clap
02:45:709 (3) - add clap
if you don't remove some clap ,you need You should put in the right place。

Dance
01:30:843 (3) - remove circle
01:38:320 (8) - Lift up the circle
02:19:861 (1) - ~02:20:600 (3) - Keep out

Lally

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Lally 2012-09-27T12:57:07+00:00

Revy wrote:
Here is my guest diff: http://puu.sh/19580 \o/

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa \:D/

Lally

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Lally 2012-09-27T15:33:13+00:00

Pink Agate wrote:
hi,from your M4M,thank you for modding my map

first,You should write tags,your map no tags i know :3 i wait other guest diff to add all tags

Smile

00:19:485 (3) - remove clap
00:22:808 (3) - ^
00:23:177 (4) - ^
00:26:131 (3) - ^
``````````
00:26:131 (3) - Change the position of this slider yap i should fix it owo
the hitsound clap is too many,please remove some clap,than I think some slider is ugly sorry
02:42:755 (1) - add clap
02:45:340 (2) - remove clap
02:45:709 (3) - add clap
if you don't remove some clap ,you need You should put in the right place。
removed some :3
Dance
01:30:843 (3) - remove circle u.u done
01:38:320 (8) - Lift up the circle yap :3
02:19:861 (1) - ~02:20:600 (3) - Keep out just changed the position for me sounds good :/

Ty for your mod :3

Aurele

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Aurele 2012-09-30T03:19:46+00:00

You're waiting for the Normal difficulty, so I guess you should move it to Work In Progress until you have the Normal (:

Lally

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Lally 2012-09-30T03:35:54+00:00

Gabe wrote:
You're waiting for the Normal difficulty, so I guess you should move it to Work In Progress until you have the Normal (:

@@ waah can't understand anymore anything @@ one said one thing and again to WIP >u<

>o< awawawawawaw

Tari

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Tari 2012-09-30T19:12:42+00:00

moe request and request by me too

[Start]

00:23:177 (4) - Remove a reverse and then add add a note, More then 1 reverse can confuse beginners.
00:29:085 (2) - ^
00:46:809 (4) - ^
02:23:554 (3) - ^
01:17:608 - ^
00:32:039 (4) - Slider like this don't look very nice imo, you should curve it.
01:24:473 (1) - ^
01:06:749 (1) - This curve does not look so good for you, Make it look neater?
01:55:860 (1,2) - You should replace one of the sliders with a 1/4th reverse slider.
02:01:768 (1,2) - - ^

[Revy's Move]

00:29:824 (1) - Remove the new combo
00:41:640 (1) - ^
00:30:562 (2) - Add it here
00:42:378 (2) - ^
00:31:301 (3) - To be consistent with your combo pattern, Add a new combo here.
01:20:781 (1) - Remove new combo

[Dance]

00:10:253 (1) - Remove the new combo

Good Job moe Lally :3

Revy

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Revy 2012-10-02T17:25:03+00:00

Taris wrote:
moe request and request by me too
[Revy's Move]

00:29:824 (1) - Remove the new combo
00:41:640 (1) - ^
00:30:562 (2) - Add it here
00:42:378 (2) - ^
00:31:301 (3) - To be consistent with your combo pattern, Add a new combo here.
01:20:781 (1) - Remove new combo

http://puu.sh/1aJyR ^ all fixed :3

Lally

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Lally 2012-10-04T15:37:19+00:00

Taris wrote:
moe request and request by me too

[Start]

00:23:177 (4) - Remove a reverse and then add add a note, More then 1 reverse can confuse beginners.
00:29:085 (2) - ^
00:46:809 (4) - ^
02:23:554 (3) - ^
01:17:608 - ^
00:32:039 (4) - Slider like this don't look very nice imo, you should curve it.
01:24:473 (1) - ^
01:06:749 (1) - This curve does not look so good for you, Make it look neater?
01:55:860 (1,2) - You should replace one of the sliders with a 1/4th reverse slider.
02:01:768 (1,2) - - ^

[Revy's Move]

00:29:824 (1) - Remove the new combo
00:41:640 (1) - ^
00:30:562 (2) - Add it here
00:42:378 (2) - ^
00:31:301 (3) - To be consistent with your combo pattern, Add a new combo here.
01:20:781 (1) - Remove new combo

[Dance]

00:10:253 (1) - Remove the new combo

Good Job moe Lally :3

all done :3

moved finaly to Pending \( * w * )/

HakuNoKaemi

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HakuNoKaemi 2012-10-04T19:01:09+00:00

[Start]

OD-2 e la Star rating cala a 3,01, vabbe se non trovo niente di semplificabile, non penso si lamenteranno >.<
[Spacing]
1. 01:21:150 (4,1) - Qui c'è un piccolo salto...
2. 01:37:397 (2,3) - Qui diminuisce lo spacing...
3. Hai un bel pò di microvariazioni di spacing... ( del genere 0.9x e 1.1x) sistemale con Grid 4
[Graphic]
1. 00:34:255 (3,3) - Falli della stessa forma u,u
  SPOILER
2. 00:46:071 (3) - Fai in modo che sia simmetrico secondo quella linea
  SPOILER
3. 01:06:749 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Prova a migliorarne la grafica così
  SPOILER
4. 01:22:258 (2,3) - Sembra brutto l'overlap... muovili verso sinistra...
  SPOILER
5. 01:38:505 (1,2,3) - Curva i primi due in modo un pò diverso e fai si che l'inizio del (3) formi un triangolo con la fine dei primi due...
6. 01:58:814 (1,2) - Curvali meno...
  SPOILER

[Revy's Move]

Forse alcuni salti sono un pò difficilotti per una Hard...
usa AR7, è meglio...
Essendo uno dei tuoi primi tentativi di simmetria, le combo sono sconnesse, parecchio, dalla musica
1. 00:31:855 (x) - Aggiungi nota, e stackala sopra l'inizio di 00:32:039 (3) - (rispetta pure lo spacing che hai...) Stai giustificando i salti seguendo la voce, quindi non undermapparla
2. 00:43:671 (x) - ^
[Graphic]
1. 00:23:916 (1) - non simmetrico.
2. 00:25:023 (2) - ^
3. 00:26:500 (7) - ^
4. Tutti gli slider al centro non sono simmetrici, e per un mapping di simmetria è un pò parecchio brutto.
[Combo]
1. 00:34:993 (3) - stai mettendo NC seguendo i pattern ? aggiungilo qui
2. 00:37:578 (5) - ^
3. 00:46:809 (3) - ^
4. In genere, avrei preferito che seguissi di più la musica con le combo...

[Dance]

C'è un sottofondo da 1/2 e la mappa ha parechhio 1/2... quindi lo slider tick 2 dovrebbe funzionare meglio
[Rhythmn]
1. 00:17:269 (5,6,7,8) - Dal punto di vista del flow, due slider da 1/2 hanno un miglior flow
  SPOILER
2. 00:18:931 (4) - potresti farlo iniziare da 00:18:746 (3) -
3. 01:16:904 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Correggi il ritmo in questo modo ( lo stream 01:18:196 (2,3,4) viene ripetuto su 01:18:565 (5,6,1) a volume minore, quindi puoi diminuire il volume degli hitsound lì?
4. 02:05:830 (1) - Fallo finire su 02:07:307 (1), soprattutto perchè hai messo un Finish alla fine- e perchè dove finisce ora non ci sono suoni
[Spacing]
1. 01:03:610 (7,8,9) - Sei sicura di voler variare lo spacing all'interno dello stream ? non ne vedo ragioni...
[Graphics]
1. L'avevo già detto qualche giorno fà, visto che l'hai mappata in tempi diversi, alcune parti, soprattutto la finale, sembrano molto più "pulite"
2. Qui sotto metto degli esempi di come puoi "pulire" alcune parti
3. 00:02:499 (3) -
  SPOILER
4. 00:02:499 (3,4,1,2) -
  SPOILER
5. 00:03:976 (3,4) -
  SPOILER
6. 00:10:623 (1,2,3) -
  SPOILER
7. 00:12:284 (4,6) -
  SPOILER
8. 00:20:408 (4) - Puoi provare a blanketarlo allo stream? (fai aderire i bordi dello slider all'approach). Per il (5), copincolla e Ctrl+H→Ctrl+J
  SPOILER
9. 00:25:393 (3) - Non è una bella forma per uno slider (legandosi al contesto)
  SPOILER
10. 00:25:947 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Se ti serve fixare la combo dopo, questo pattern ha un ottimo flow
  SPOILER
11. 00:29:824 (1) - Visto che non è una sovrapposizione proprio carina, fai così?
  SPOILER
12. 00:32:778 (3) - Prova a fare uno slider con più punti....
  SPOILER
13. 00:33:516 (1,2) - Qualcosa di questo genere dovrebbe sembrare meno incasinata
  SPOILER
14. 00:35:732 (5) - In queste occasioni un blanket sembra meglio
  SPOILER
15. 00:38:132 (4) - Fai in modo che sia in linea con 00:37:209 (4) -
16. 00:43:117 (1) - Un pò in contrapposizione con 00:42:378 (5), curvalo così
  SPOILER
17. 00:57:887 (8) - Copincolla e specchia 00:57:518 (7) - con Ctrl+H
18. 01:05:087 (1,2,3,4) - Sistemali così? dovrebbe sembrare più ordinato
  SPOILER
19. 01:06:564 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - Per sistemare ciò che viene dopo ↑
  SPOILER
20. 01:10:996 (3) - Puoi stackarlo direttamente sotto 01:09:703 (1) -
21. 01:26:689 (2,3) - Puoi muoverlì in modo da formare un arco(insieme ai tre precedenti)
  SPOILER
22. 01:34:812 (8) - Completa la stella a 6 punte?
  SPOILER
23. 01:38:320 (8) - Stackalo direttamente sopra l'inizio di 01:38:505 (1) -
24. 01:41:090 (9) - Stackalo sotto 01:39:797 (3) -
25. 01:52:352 (3,1,2,1,2,3,4) - evita di stackare così a lungo, qui hai una suggestion sul ritmo, le combo corrette e un pattern che puoi provare per evitare quel genere di stack
  SPOILER
26. 01:57:337 (2,3,5) - Essendo il (5) solo curvato un pò fuori luogo, prova a fare il 2 davvero poco curvato, il 3 più curvato, poi copincolli il 3 e lo specchi orizzontalmente con Ctrl+H per il 5
  SPOILER
27. 02:20:969 (1,2,3,4,5) - Sistemali come un pentagono ( dovrebbe essere graficamente più bello, oltre che con un flow migliore)
  SPOILER
28. 02:22:631 (2,3) - Stackali spostando 1 pixel di grid size 4 sotto...
29. 02:23:000 (4) - 2 grid 4 a destra per allinearlo con il (5) e il (3)
30. 02:24:477 (1,2) - Stackali sotto 02:22:815 (3,4) -
31. 02:25:585 (5) - 2 grid 4 sopra
32. 02:26:139 (6,7,1) - Fai in modo che il (7)sia stackato sotto la fine del 02:25:585 (5) -
33. 02:27:062 (2,3) - il (2) sotto l'inizio del 02:25:585 (5) e il (3) sotto il 02:26:508 (7)
34. 02:38:509 (4,5) - Completa quel pattern... così
  SPOILER
35. 02:45:709 (4,5,6,7) - curva il (4) in modo da poter stackare lo stream sopra l'inizio di 02:47:186 (1)
  SPOILER
36. 02:52:171 (5,6,7) - Stackali meglio con il grid size 4 ( 1 pixel grid 4 a sinistra )
37. 03:03:987 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - finisci in modo più ... archico? (essendo l'ultimo slider curvo... )
  SPOILER
[Combo]
1. 00:06:192 (5) - New Combo (consistente con un new combo precedente)
2. 00:24:654 (5) - ^
3. 00:29:824 (1) - Dovresti muovere il New Combo su 00:30:378 (2)
4. 00:34:255 (1) - Questo NC sembra di troppo.. visto che non l'hai usato in altre occasioni
5. 00:35:732 (1) - ^ (e mettilo su 00:36:655 (6))
6. 00:39:794 (1) - Muovi NC su 00:39:609 (7) -
7. 00:43:117 (1) - Muovi NC su 00:42:378 (5) -
8. 00:46:071 (1) - Muovi NC su 00:46:809 (5) -
9. 00:49:579 (1) - Metti NC qui
10. 00:57:887 (1) - Muovi NC su 00:58:256 (2) -
11. 01:10:626 (1) - Muovi NC su 01:10:996 (3) -
12. 01:14:503 (5) - Aggiungi NC? ( Move )
13. 01:15:611 (1) - Sposta NC su 01:15:980 (2) -
14. 01:31:120 (4) - Aggiungi NC ?
15. 01:33:889 (3) - ^
16. 01:37:028 (3) - ^
17. 01:39:797 (3) - ^
18. 01:42:936 (5) - ^
19. 01:43:674 (1) - Sposta NC su 01:44:413 (2) -
20. 01:48:844 (5) - Aggiungi NC
21. 01:51:613 (5) - ^
22. 02:00:291 (1) - Sposta NC su 02:00:660 (2) -
23. 02:02:137 (5) - Aggiugi NC
24. 02:19:861 (1) - Rimuovi NC
25. 02:21:154 (1) - Sposta NC su 02:20:969 (9) -
26. 02:24:477 (1) - Sposta NC su 02:25:031 (4) -
27. 02:28:354 (6) - Aggiungi NC
28. 02:39:062 (1) - Sposta NC su 02:38:509 (4) -
29. 02:43:678 (1) - Aggiungi NC
30. 02:46:263 (5) - ^
31. 02:47:186 (1) - Sposta NC su 02:47:925 (3) -
32. 02:50:879 (3) - Aggiungi NC
33. 02:52:540 (1) - Sposta NC su 02:52:171 (3) -
34. 02:53:094 (1) - Sposta NC su 02:53:833 (2) -
35. 02:55:310 (4) - Aggiungi NC
36. 02:57:525 (1) - Sposta NC su 02:58:079 (2) -
37. 02:59:925 (1) - Sposta NC su 02:59:741 (6) -
38. 03:03:064 (3) - Aggiungi NC

Last edited by HakuNoKaemi 2012-10-04T23:58:07+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

Lally

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Lally 2012-10-04T20:37:54+00:00

fino a qui ho sistemato tutto >u< comunque non è gia ar 8? :V

?

sistemato tutto ho cambiato la pattern invece di stalkare molto in ceri punti spero vada meglio ora \( ^ u ^ )/ graziiiiiieee :3
nella start ho sistemato tutto ^_^

<3

HakuNoKaemi wrote:
[Start]
OD-2 e la Star rating cala a 3,01, vabbe se non trovo niente di semplificabile, non penso si lamenteranno >.<fatto
[Spacing]all done
01:21:150 (4,1) - Qui c'è un piccolo salto...
01:37:397 (2,3) - Qui diminuisce lo spacing...
Hai un bel pò di microvariazioni di spacing... ( del genere 0.9x e 1.1x) sistemale con Grid 4
[Graphic]uguu u.u
00:34:255 (3,3) - Falli della stessa forma u,u
SPOILER
00:46:071 (3) - Fai in modo che sia simmetrico secondo quella linea
SPOILER
01:06:749 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Prova a migliorarne la grafica così
SPOILER

01:22:258 (2,3) - Sembra brutto l'overlap... muovili verso sinistra...
SPOILER
01:38:505 (1,2,3) - Curva i primi due in modo un pò diverso e fai si che l'inizio del (3) formi un triangolo con la fine dei primi due...
01:58:814 (1,2) - Curvali meno...
SPOILER
[Dance]
C'è un sottofondo da 1/2 e la mappa ha parechhio 1/2... quindi lo slider tick 2 dovrebbe funzionare meglio
[Rhythmn]fatto
00:17:269 (5,6,7,8) - Dal punto di vista del flow, due slider da 1/2 hanno un miglior flow
SPOILER
00:18:931 (4) - potresti farlo iniziare da 00:18:746 (3) -
01:16:904 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Correggi il ritmo in questo modo ( lo stream 01:18:196 (2,3,4) viene ripetuto su 01:18:565 (5,6,1) a volume minore, quindi puoi diminuire il volume degli hitsound lì?
come dice card viene una torre di pisa ._. ma credo sia meglio una torre di pisa che rovinare uno stream :V cioè il primo cabio era una torre di pisa poi l'ho cambiata cosi come mi ha detto gio ; ma mi sa che torno alla torre di pisa =3=
02:05:830 (1) - Fallo finire su 02:07:307 (1), soprattutto perchè hai messo un Finish alla fine- e perchè dove finisce ora non ci sono suoni
[Spacing]done
01:03:610 (7,8,9) - Sei sicura di voler variare lo spacing all'interno dello stream ? non ne vedo ragioni...
[Graphics]yup
L'avevo già detto qualche giorno fà, visto che l'hai mappata in tempi diversi, alcune parti, soprattutto la finale, sembrano molto più "pulite"
Qui sotto metto degli esempi di come puoi "pulire" alcune parti
00:02:499 (3) -
SPOILER
00:02:499 (3,4,1,2) -
SPOILER
00:03:976 (3,4) -
SPOILER
00:10:623 (1,2,3) -
SPOILER
00:12:284 (4,6) -
SPOILER
00:20:408 (4) - Puoi provare a blanketarlo allo stream? (fai aderire i bordi dello slider all'approach). Per il (5), copincolla e Ctrl+H→Ctrl+J
SPOILER
00:25:393 (3) - Non è una bella forma per uno slider (legandosi al contesto)
SPOILER
00:25:947 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Se ti serve fixare la combo dopo, questo pattern ha un ottimo flow
SPOILER
00:29:824 (1) - Visto che non è una sovrapposizione proprio carina, fai così?
SPOILER
00:32:778 (3) - Prova a fare uno slider con più punti....
SPOILER
00:33:516 (1,2) - Qualcosa di questo genere dovrebbe sembrare meno incasinata
SPOILER
00:35:732 (5) - In queste occasioni un blanket sembra meglio
SPOILER
00:38:132 (4) - Fai in modo che sia in linea con 00:37:209 (4) -
00:43:117 (1) - Un pò in contrapposizione con 00:42:378 (5), curvalo così
SPOILER
00:57:887 (8) - Copincolla e specchia 00:57:518 (7) - con Ctrl+H
01:05:087 (1,2,3,4) - Sistemali così? dovrebbe sembrare più ordinato
SPOILER
01:06:564 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - Per sistemare ciò che viene dopo ↑
SPOILER
01:10:996 (3) - Puoi stackarlo direttamente sotto 01:09:703 (1) -
01:26:689 (2,3) - Puoi muoverlì in modo da formare un arco(insieme ai tre precedenti)
SPOILER
01:34:812 (8) - Completa la stella a 6 punte?
SPOILER
01:38:320 (8) - Stackalo direttamente sopra l'inizio di 01:38:505 (1) -
01:41:090 (9) - Stackalo sotto 01:39:797 (3) -
01:52:352 (3,1,2,1,2,3,4) - evita di stackare così a lungo, qui hai una suggestion sul ritmo, le combo corrette e un pattern che puoi provare per evitare quel genere di stack
SPOILER
01:57:337 (2,3,5) - Essendo il (5) solo curvato un pò fuori luogo, prova a fare il 2 davvero poco curvato, il 3 più curvato, poi copincolli il 3 e lo specchi orizzontalmente con Ctrl+H per il 5
SPOILER

02:20:969 (1,2,3,4,5) - Sistemali come un pentagono ( dovrebbe essere graficamente più bello, oltre che con un flow migliore)
SPOILER
02:22:631 (2,3) - Stackali spostando 1 pixel di grid size 4 sotto...
02:23:000 (4) - 2 grid 4 a destra per allinearlo con il (5) e il (3)
02:24:477 (1,2) - Stackali sotto 02:22:815 (3,4) -
02:25:585 (5) - 2 grid 4 sopra
02:26:139 (6,7,1) - Fai in modo che il (7)sia stackato sotto la fine del 02:25:585 (5) -
02:27:062 (2,3) - il (2) sotto l'inizio del 02:25:585 (5) e il (3) sotto il 02:26:508 (7)
02:38:509 (4,5) - Completa quel pattern... così
SPOILER
02:45:709 (4,5,6,7) - curva il (4) in modo da poter stackare lo stream sopra l'inizio di 02:47:186 (1)
SPOILER
02:52:171 (5,6,7) - Stackali meglio con il grid size 4 ( 1 pixel grid 4 a sinistra )
03:03:987 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - finisci in modo più ... archico? (essendo l'ultimo slider curvo... )
SPOILER
[Combo]
00:06:192 (5) - New Combo (consistente con un new combo precedente)
00:24:654 (5) - ^
00:29:824 (1) - Dovresti muovere il New Combo su 00:30:378 (2)
00:34:255 (1) - Questo NC sembra di troppo.. visto che non l'hai usato in altre occasioni
00:35:732 (1) - ^ (e mettilo su 00:36:655 (6))
00:39:794 (1) - Muovi NC su 00:39:609 (7) -
00:43:117 (1) - Muovi NC su 00:42:378 (5) -
00:46:071 (1) - Muovi NC su 00:46:809 (5) -
00:49:579 (1) - Metti NC qui
00:57:887 (1) - Muovi NC su 00:58:256 (2) -
01:10:626 (1) - Muovi NC su 01:10:996 (3) -
01:14:503 (5) - Aggiungi NC? ( Move )
01:15:611 (1) - Sposta NC su 01:15:980 (2) -
01:31:120 (4) - Aggiungi NC ?
01:33:889 (3) - ^
01:37:028 (3) - ^
01:39:797 (3) - ^
01:42:936 (5) - ^
01:43:674 (1) - Sposta NC su 01:44:413 (2) -
01:48:844 (5) - Aggiungi NC
01:51:613 (5) - ^
02:00:291 (1) - Sposta NC su 02:00:660 (2) -
02:02:137 (5) - Aggiugi NC
02:19:861 (1) - Rimuovi NC
02:21:154 (1) - Sposta NC su 02:20:969 (9) -
02:24:477 (1) - Sposta NC su 02:25:031 (4) -
02:28:354 (6) - Aggiungi NC
02:39:062 (1) - Sposta NC su 02:38:509 (4) -
02:43:678 (1) - Aggiungi NC
02:46:263 (5) - ^
02:47:186 (1) - Sposta NC su 02:47:925 (3) -
02:50:879 (3) - Aggiungi NC
02:52:540 (1) - Sposta NC su 02:52:171 (3) -
02:53:094 (1) - Sposta NC su 02:53:833 (2) -
02:55:310 (4) - Aggiungi NC
02:57:525 (1) - Sposta NC su 02:58:079 (2) -
02:59:925 (1) - Sposta NC su 02:59:741 (6) -
03:03:064 (3) - Aggiungi NC

è stato un dramma cercare di sistemare tutto non immagino quanto lo sia stato per te moddarla D: grazie davvero :3

Pink Agate

497 posts

Joined September 2011

Pink Agate 2012-10-05T15:50:30+00:00

MOD again

General
your map no tags

Start

Was better than ever

01:22:258 (2) - move here 01:22:258 (2) - ?
02:02:506 (2) - add whistle

Revy's Move

00:49:579 (2) - move here 00:49:763 - and behind the need to make corresponding changes
02:50:879 (3) - nc
02:59:741 (2) - nc

Dance

sorry, I can't find any mistake on this, i just feel it's bit hard to play.
For example here 00:37:763 (1) - ,00:39:701 (2) - and here00:40:071 (5) -

good luck

Lally

3,176 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

Lally 2012-10-05T16:10:25+00:00

Pink Agate wrote:
MOD again

General
your map no tags i added they but dunno why they compair not QWQ

Start

Was better than ever

01:22:258 (2) - move here 01:22:258 (2) - ? uh what ?
02:02:506 (2) - add whistle ok

Dance

sorry, I can't find any mistake on this, i just feel it's bit hard to play.
For example here 00:37:763 (1) - ,00:39:701 (2) - and here00:40:071 (5) -
hmm i look what i can do but it's ok for me
good luck

ty for your mod again :3

Revy

380 posts

Joined June 2011

Revy 2012-10-05T21:07:21+00:00

http://puu.sh/1bK7y fixed everything i guess D:

Starz0r

197 posts

Joined March 2012

Starz0r 2012-10-05T21:40:25+00:00

This is my first mod

, anyway

AIBat v3.0 wrote:
[All .osu Files]
General and Metadata

Inconsistency in Countdown:
- [Dance] : 0
- [Revy's Move] : 1
- [Start] : 0

Inconsistency in Tags:
- [Dance] : Revy remix
- [Revy's Move] :
- [Start] :

Kiai
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [Dance] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:28:356, ends on 00:50:880
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:30:390, ends on 01:52:915
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:42:764, ends on 02:59:565

- [Revy's Move] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:28:356, ends on 00:50:880
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:30:390, ends on 01:52:915
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:42:764, ends on 03:06:387

- [Start] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:28:347, ends on 00:50:871
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:30:381, ends on 01:52:906
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:42:746, ends on 02:59:556

[Dance]
Audio Lead-In
There is only 1761 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms.

Breaks
Consider adding a break before 01:31:761.

General
Changed Approach Rate to 9

Non-Downbeat Kiai Times
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:28:356, ends on 00:50:880
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:30:390, ends on 01:52:915
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:42:764, ends on 02:59:565

Snapping

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:13:375 - snap to 00:13:392
00:14:856 - snap to 00:14:869
00:28:356 - snap to 00:28:347
00:50:880 - snap to 00:50:871
01:30:390 - snap to 01:30:381
01:52:915 - snap to 01:52:906
02:42:764 - snap to 02:42:755
02:59:565 - snap to 02:59:556

Spinner New Combo
02:42:755 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.

[Revy's Move]
Non-Downbeat Kiai Times
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:28:356, ends on 00:50:880
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:30:390, ends on 01:52:915
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:42:764, ends on 03:06:387

Snapping

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:16:631 - snap to 00:16:623
00:28:356 - snap to 00:28:347
00:50:880 - snap to 00:50:871
01:03:066 - snap to 01:03:057
01:03:250 - snap to 01:03:241
01:03:435 - snap to 01:03:426
01:03:619 - snap to 01:03:610
01:03:804 - snap to 01:03:795
01:06:175 - snap to 01:06:195
01:30:390 - snap to 01:30:381
01:52:915 - snap to 01:52:906
02:06:023 - snap to 02:06:014
02:06:208 - snap to 02:06:199
02:06:393 - snap to 02:06:384
02:06:577 - snap to 02:06:568
02:06:762 - snap to 02:06:753
02:06:946 - snap to 02:06:937
02:07:131 - snap to 02:07:122
02:07:316 - snap to 02:07:307
02:42:764 - snap to 02:42:755

[Start]
Non-Downbeat Kiai Times
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:42:746, ends on 02:59:556

Snapping

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
02:30:930 - snap to 02:30:939
02:42:746 - snap to 02:42:755

[ModTrace]
Dance
00:32:039 (1) - Add a whistle on the start, add a whistle on the end, add a whistle on the entire slider.
00:32:409 (2) - Add a whistle on the start, add a whistle on the end, add a whistle on the entire slider.
00:32:778 (3) - Add a whistle on the start, add a whistle on the end, add a whistle on the entire slider.
00:35:178 (2) - Add a whistle.
00:35:363 (3) - Add a whistle.
00:35:547 (4) - Add a whistle.

Lally

3,176 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

Lally 2012-10-06T00:53:21+00:00

Starz0r Ty for your mod u.u <3

i'll fix all tomarraw :3

@Revy i update tomorrow :S

Aurele

Global Moderator

7,605 posts

Joined January 2011

Aurele 2012-10-06T01:17:12+00:00

Actually, all your difficulty must start at the same time. I will take Revy's example since it's the best.
On every difficulty, start with a spinner on 00:13:577 and end it to 00:15:792. So with what I told you on IRC, delete it.

Lally

3,176 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

Lally 2012-10-06T01:23:42+00:00

ok i fix it tomorror all ty Gabe :3

B2IN

B2IN 2012-10-06T09:39:54+00:00

Hi~ Lally :3

[General]
You used the tag in the Dance diff, therefore other diff also use the tag

[Start]
00:35:363 (2) - try this moving to 00:35:732, then add the note to 00:35:363

[Revy's Move]
you should resnap the timing point
00:27:608 (1,2) - you should increase this to 25%
00:31:301 (1) - remove NC
00:40:163 (3) - use the finish sound to beginning
01:03:066 (T) - this Inherited points don't need. plz remove.
01:03:250 (T) - ^
01:03:435 (T) - ^
01:03:619 (T) - ^

[Dance]
00:28:347 (2) - NC for kiai time
01:13:211 (1) - try move to x : 180 y :128
02:05:830 (1) - end the spinner till 02:07:307
02:23:000 (4,5,1) - try this arrangement for smoothly flowing. x : 336 y : 224

gl !

Revy

380 posts

Joined June 2011

Revy 2012-10-06T16:04:48+00:00

B2IN wrote:
[Revy's Move]
you should resnap the timing point
00:27:608 (1,2) - you should increase this to 25%
00:31:301 (1) - remove NC
00:40:163 (3) - use the finish sound to beginning
01:03:066 (T) - this Inherited points don't need. plz remove.
01:03:250 (T) - ^
01:03:435 (T) - ^
01:03:619 (T) - ^

http://puu.sh/1bYJV fixed everythiing ~

Lally

3,176 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

Lally 2012-10-06T17:16:56+00:00

^-^

Starz0r wrote:
This is my first mod , anyway

AIBat v3.0 wrote:
[All .osu Files]
General and Metadata

Inconsistency in Countdown:
- [Dance] : 0
- [Revy's Move] : 1
- [Start] : 0

Inconsistency in Tags: fixed
- [Dance] : Revy remix
- [Revy's Move] :
- [Start] :

Kiai
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [Dance] :fixed
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:28:356, ends on 00:50:880
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:30:390, ends on 01:52:915
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:42:764, ends on 02:59:565

- [Revy's Move] :fixed
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:28:356, ends on 00:50:880
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:30:390, ends on 01:52:915
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:42:764, ends on 03:06:387

- [Start] :fixed
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:28:347, ends on 00:50:871
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:30:381, ends on 01:52:906
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:42:746, ends on 02:59:556

[Dance]
Audio Lead-In
There is only 1761 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms.fixed

Breaks
Consider adding a break before 01:31:761.added

Generalyap done
Changed Approach Rate to 9

Non-Downbeat Kiai Timesfixed
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:28:356, ends on 00:50:880
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:30:390, ends on 01:52:915
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:42:764, ends on 02:59:565

Snapping

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:13:375 - snap to 00:13:392
00:14:856 - snap to 00:14:869
00:28:356 - snap to 00:28:347
00:50:880 - snap to 00:50:871
01:30:390 - snap to 01:30:381
01:52:915 - snap to 01:52:906
02:42:764 - snap to 02:42:755
02:59:565 - snap to 02:59:556
fixed some
Spinner New Combo
02:42:755 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
done

[Start]
Non-Downbeat Kiai Timesfixed
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:42:746, ends on 02:59:556

Snapping

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
02:30:930 - snap to 02:30:939
02:42:746 - snap to 02:42:755
uguu
[ModTrace]
Dance
00:32:039 (1) - Add a whistle on the start, add a whistle on the end, add a whistle on the entire slider.ok
00:32:409 (2) - Add a whistle on the start, add a whistle on the end, add a whistle on the entire slider.ok
00:32:778 (3) - Add a whistle on the start, add a whistle on the end, add a whistle on the entire slider.
00:35:178 (2) - Add a whistle.ok
00:35:363 (3) - Add a whistle.nope
00:35:547 (4) - Add a whistle.nope to much wistles for me @@

ty Starz0r :3

Gabe wrote:
Actually, all your difficulty must start at the same time. I will take Revy's example since it's the best.
On every difficulty, start with a spinner on 00:13:577 and end it to 00:15:792. So with what I told you on IRC, delete it.

fixed all all diff started at the same time :3

:3

B2IN wrote:
Hi~ Lally :3 hi \( * w * )/

[General]
You used the tag in the Dance diff, therefore other diff also use the tag

[Start]
00:35:363 (2) - try this moving to 00:35:732, then add the note to 00:35:363
i changed a little bit but not like this ^_^

[Dance]
00:28:347 (2) - NC for kiai time fixed :3
01:13:211 (1) - try move to x : 180 y :128 yap
02:05:830 (1) - end the spinner till 02:07:307 fixed
02:23:000 (4,5,1) - try this arrangement for smoothly flowing. x : 336 y : 224 changed a little bit but not so ^-^

gl !

ty B2IN :3

update :3

Hikisaku

Hikisaku 2012-10-06T22:17:15+00:00

[General]
Revy's move has +1 break time 01:54:014 to 02:05:830
and countdown
[Start]
01:01:949 - clap
01:02:687 - clap
01:03:426 - clap
01:04:164 - clap
01:25:581 - clap
01:27:058 - clap
01:27:797 - clap
01:28:535 - clap
01:28:904 - finish
01:30:381 - whistle
01:31:858 - whistle
01:33:335 - whistle
01:34:812 - whistle
01:36:289 - whistle
01:37:766 - whistle
01:39:243 - whistle
01:42:197 - whistle
01:45:151 - whistle
01:48:106 - whistle
01:49:583 - whistle
[Revy's Move]
00:50:687 - remove slider and add a circle here 00:50:871
01:12:657 - new combo
01:14:134 - remove new combo
01:14:319 - new combo
01:39:428 - it sounds better so :

01:39:797 - new combo
01:41:459 - new combo
01:44:413 - new combo
01:45:151 - remove new combo
01:45:705 - new combo
01:50:321 - new combo
01:51:429 - remove new combo
01:51:798 - new combo
01:52:721 - remove finish
02:13:215 - new combo
02:13:584 - remove new combo
02:15:430 - new combo
02:17:646 - new combo
02:18:754 - remove new combo
02:38:509 - new combo
02:44:971 - new combo
02:45:709 - remove new combo
02:57:525 (1,2) - do a better stalkin with 02:59:002 (1)
02:59:002 - remove new combo
03:01:218 - new combo
03:02:695 - new combo
[Dance]
00:43:671 - new combo
00:47:548 - new combo
02:54:571 (2,3) - do a jump here

Starz0r

197 posts

Joined March 2012

Starz0r 2012-10-07T16:14:57+00:00

Also for Dance change Approach Rate to 9 and Overall Difficulty to 8.

Lally

3,176 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

Lally 2012-10-07T17:38:02+00:00

Starz0r wrote:
Also for Dance change Approach Rate to 9 and Overall Difficulty to 8.

ok :3 i update later :3 ty

RikiH_

1,149 posts

Joined February 2011

RikiH_ 2012-10-07T18:10:31+00:00

Modding :3

Start

Perchè nella lista delle section verdi non arrotondi i volumi? Ti faccio un esempio: da 81 metti 80, da 49 metti 50 e da 84 metti 85, forse è una cazzata ma così mi sembra più ordinato xD

00:24:654 (1) - Fallo più tondo

00:27:239 (x) - Aggiungi una nota o una ripetizione allo slider, con volume più basso o addirittura silenziata, non ci sta tanto male
00:37:947 (3) - Arrotonda un po' anche questo, così ha una forma "disturbante" D:
00:43:855 (3) - Aggiusta anche questo

00:45:702 (2) - Riesci a spostare questa nota in modo da non essere stackata? Siccome è la difficoltà più semplice del mapset è meglio evitare questi stack ;~;
00:50:871 (x) - Qua c'è una timing section non snappata xD Cambia l'offset da 50880 a 50871
00:49:025 (1) - Silenzia la fine di questo spinner o abbassa il volume
01:11:180 (2,1,2,3,4) - Mettile in questo modo, così il primo slider è simmetrico con quello precedente! Le quattro note non sono messe benissimo, però lo slider ti conviene metterlo come ti dico xD

28,116,71180,2,0,B|300:116,1,270.000001788138,0|8
388,124,72657,5,0
472,88,73026,1,0
416,16,73396,1,0
336,44,73765,1,8

Spero che il code sia giusto e di non avere fatto cazzate xD
01:34:074 (4) - Aggiungi una NC, dato che dalle altre parti c'è
01:38:505 (1,2) - Stessa cosa di prima con lo stacking
01:39:982 (3) - Così:

01:42:197 (3) - Finish all'inizio? Se nella song ci sono parti simili a questa aggiungi il finish anche lì
01:52:906 (x) - Un'altra section non snappata xD Cambia l'offset da 152915 a 152906
01:55:491 (4) - Whistle
01:55:860 (1) - Whistle alla fine
01:58:814 (1,2) - Per diminuire la difficoltà sostituisci questi due con un unico slider e metti un whistle alla fine, se non segui il mio consiglio metti lo stesso il whistle alla fine del secondo slider :O
02:01:768 (1) - Whistle alla fine
02:22:077 (1) - Non stackarlo con il 4, già sono difficili da leggere gli stack dai "nabbi", in più di due colori diversi è ancora peggio xD
02:33:893 (1) - Lo stesso di prima
02:39:801 (1) - Silenzia la fine dello spinner
02:59:741 (1) - Non sarà un po' troppo lungo? o.o

Ti consiglio di controllare bene se ci sono delle timing section non snappate :O Io sono troppo pigro per farlo xD

Revy's move

Anche qua arrotonda i volumi, così sono disordinati D:

00:25:023 (2) - CTRL + R?
00:25:762 (3) - AAARGH! Togli quel 3, è messo contemporaneamente alla fine dello slider!
00:38:317 (4) - CTRL + R? Così flowwa meglio
00:42:378 (1) - Questa NC mi sembra superflua...
00:47:548 (2,3) - CTRL + R Su tutti e due gli slider, così flowwa meglio
00:49:394 (1) - Ti consiglio di stackarla con l'inizio di 00:49:579 (2) Ora come ora crea un po' di confusione
00:51:056 (1) - Silenzia la fine dello spinner
01:03:057 (x) - Qua c'è una timing section non snappata, fixa!
01:03:795 - ^
01:06:195 - ^
01:12:657 (6) - Questo slider potrebbe confondere, sostituiscilo con 5 note oppure così: (ti consiglio la seconda)

01:14:873 (4) - Fai questo slider curvo come il 2 precedente
01:16:165 (2) - Stackalo bene con la fine dello slider!
01:16:904 (2) - Lo stesso ^
01:22:073 (x) - Aggiungi una nota qui
01:32:597 (6) - Sostituiscilo con questo:

368,336,92597,2,0,B|464:304|432:192,1,150.000006616115,0|8

01:33:335 (1) - Se hai cambiato lo slider precedente CTRL + R qui per un flow migliore
01:40:536 (7) - Stackala bene con la fine del 4
02:45:709 (1) - CTRL + R, flowwa meglio. Se lo fai avvicina un po' il 2 seguente per non avere uno spacing enorme

Anche qua controllate bene tutte le sections verdi :V

Dance

Stessa cosa dei volumi anche qui!

00:07:299
00:13:207
00:13:392

Non capisco a cosa servano queste sezioni verdi dato che non ci sono note xD Se non servono a nulla eliminale
00:20:408 (4) - x:172 y:208
00:22:254 (2) - Stackalo bene con la fine dello slider precedente e l'inizio di quello successivo
00:27:239 (7) - Stacka bene l'inizio con la fine del 5
00:29:085 (3,4,5) - Whistle sull'inizio del 3 e del 4, whistle su tutto il 5
00:31:301 (3,4,5) - Whistle sul 3 e sul 5.
Continua così a mettere i whistle sulle linee bianche xD
00:32:778 (3) - Ti prego, sistemalo xD Fallo più tondo
00:41:271 (2) - Stacka bene la fine del 2 con la fine del 3
00:46:071 (3,4) - Sarebbero più carini se stackassi le loro due code
00:48:286 (1,2,3) - Prendi tutta la combo e spostala due grid in su (grid level 4)
00:50:502 (4) - Fallo curvo, così è un po' legnoso. Inoltre occhio alla timing section non snappata alla fine dello slider
00:51:056 (x) - Aggiungi uno spinner, fallo partire qui e finiscilo a 00:51:979 e silenzia la fine
01:22:258 (3,4) - Stackali bene con la fine del 2
01:24:473 (1) - Confonde, sostituiscilo con uno stream di 5 note
01:26:320 (6) - Stackalo bene con la fine dello slider precedente
01:30:935 (3) - ^
01:45:705 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Prendi tutta la combo e spostala 4 griglie a destra (grid level 4)
01:50:321 (1) - 2 griglie a sinistra
01:51:613 (1) - Lo stesso ^
02:05:460 (1) - Magari togli questa NC, dato che non è correlata col pattern precedente dove le hai usate e crea un po' di confusione
02:05:830 (1) - Silenzia la fine dello spinner?
02:25:031 (1) - Sostituisci con 5 note xD
02:29:277 (1) - 4 griglie a destra
02:30:570 (6,7,8) - 2 griglie a sinistra :V
02:31:308 (4,5,6) - Cosa ne dici di stackare le code di questi tre slider?
02:42:755 - Da questo punto in poi in alcune parti mancano dei whistles, ti consiglio di controllare
02:57:341 (5) - 4 grid up
03:03:433 (2) - Allora, vai allo slider a 03:01:956 Lo copi e lo incolli in questo punto 03:03:433 Poi togli il repeat
03:03:987 (1,2,3) - Se fai quello che ho detto prima prendi queste note e mettile in x:216 y:240

Anche qua controlla che le sections verdi siano snappate!

Mi hai fatto sgobbare di brutto xD La mappa non è male ma dovresti migliorarla molto, ti do una stellina intanto, buona fortuna!

-kevincela-

Elite Mapper

2,858 posts

Joined February 2010

-kevincela- 2012-10-07T18:24:19+00:00

Ohai

[Start]

00:20:223 (4,5) - Dividere questo slider con uno slider e una nota 00:21:331 - imho suona molto meglio. Ecco un esempio di un pattern che potresti fare per far ciò:
SPOILER
Ecco il code per cambiare,ti ho anche migliorato il flow nelle precedenti creando un pattern ad arco
```
240,352,18746,5,0
328,344,19115,1,8
388,280,19485,2,8,B|412:236|388:192,1,90.000000596046,0|8
352,112,20223,2,0,B|340:64|292:52|292:52|244:64|232:112,1,180.000001192092,0|0
208,200,21331,1,0
```
Ah,e adda anche un clap su 00:21:331 (5) - . Mi son scordato di farlo >_<
00:21:700 (1,2,3,4) - Che ne diresti di fare qui invece un pattern che circonda completamente 00:21:331 (5) - ,creando un altro pattern ad arco? Ha un flow decisamente migliore di quello attuale:
SPOILER
```
124,228,21700,6,8,B|140:280|196:288,1,90.000000596046
276,272,22439,1,0
300,184,22808,1,8
240,116,23177,2,8,B|190:93|147:130,2,90.000000596046
```
00:21:700 (1) - Non è necessario il clap all'inizio in quanto non segue nulla,rimuovilo
00:28:347 (1) - Dovresti invertire il clap con il finish,ci sta decisamente meglio con il bg.

00:39:424 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Uhh, questo pattern tutto lineare potrebbe flowware meglio... Cosa ne pensi piuttosto di uno un po' più curvo?

SPOILER

20,292,39424,5,0
100,336,39794,1,8
168,276,40163,2,4,B|212:256|264:272,1,90.000000596046,0|4
340,300,40901,5,8
384,220,41271,1,8
312,160,41640,2,4,B|268:180|224:164,1,90.000000596046,0|4
176,88,42378,6,4,B|220:68|264:84,1,90.000000596046,0|8
340,32,43117,2,0,B|376:64|388:112,1,90.000000596046
408,196,43855,2,8,B|448:300|336:384|245:289,1,270.000001788138,0|8

00:45:332 (1,2,3,4) - Come 00:21:700 (1,2,3,4) -,potresti farli in modo da circondare 00:45:332 (1,2) - ,come questo esempio...
01:17:088 (4) - Il whistle nello sliderbody non si può proprio sentire x.x Ti direi di rimuoverlo...
01:22:627 (3) - Un clap dovrebbe essere aggiunto qui per seguire gli instuments nel bg.
01:21:150 (4,1,2,3) - Che ne dici di cambiare questo pattern per trasformarlo in un "arco discendente"? Secondo me ci sta decisamente meglio,poi vedi tu...
SPOILER
```
272,276,81150,1,0
200,332,81519,5,8
108,332,81889,2,0,B|56:332|28:296,1,90.000000596046
100,244,82627,1,8
```
01:27:797 (2,4) - Che ne diresti di aggiungere dei clap qui per rinforzare il ritmo in quanto si è un attimo prima del ritornello?
01:34:074 (4) - Dovresti mettere un New Combo qui,per mantenere la consistenza con gli altri patterns.
01:37:028 (1,2,3) - Qui ancora dovresti usare un pattern ad arco per poter continuare propriamente il flow con 01:35:551 (1,2,3) - ...
01:55:860 (1) - Imho,è molto meglio rimpiazzare questo slider con uno slider 1/2 con un repeat. Segue molto bene il sintetizzatore,e suona molto bene sopratutto con 01:56:598 (2) -
01:57:337 (3) - Rimuovi i whistle da inzio slider e dallo sliderbody,suonano piuttsto male là,e per quanto mi riguarda basta soltanto il whistle alla fine.
02:28:539 - Per seguire la voce direi di aggiungere una nota qui. Non dovrebbe essere troppo difficile da giocare,e suona molto bene :3
02:36:847 (1) - Uhm,cosa centra il waypoint bianco qui? xD Visto che ci sei,per far girare questo slider meglio con 02:36:108 (5) - ti direi di fare lo slider in questo modo.
02:58:264 (4,5,6,7) - In quanto 02:59:002 (6) - è overlappato parzialmente da 02:57:525 (3) - ,questo pattern non è poi così bello da vedere. Potresti ruotare questo pattern in modo da farlo quadrare per bene con lo slider precedente:
SPOILER
```
268,224,178264,1,0
342,270,178633,1,8
390,194,179002,1,0
314,147,179371,1,8
```

[Revy's Move]

OD+1 e AR+1? La mappa ora come ora non scorre tanto bene a causa dell'AR basso >_<
00:13:577 (1) - Il finish qui ci sta davvero malissimo,potresti invece silenziarlo con un inherited section con 10% di volume. Ci sta decisamente meglio...
00:25:762 (3) - Cos...Perchè si trova allo stesso tempo della fine di 00:25:023 (2) - ? Non ha senso! Per risolvere dovresti rimuovere il repeat di 00:25:023 (2) - o rimuovere questa nota direttamente
00:34:993 (1,2) - Saran pure giocabili,ma cosa c'entra questo antijump? La musica da quanto vedo qui non lo richiede,e imho spezza un pochetto il flow creato con 00:34:255 (2) - . Che ne diresti di spaziarli un po'? Una possibilità sarebbe usare questo pattern,che imho ci sta abbastanza bene... Che ne pensi?

SPOILER

176,192,34993,5,0,0:0
96,96,35363,1,8,0:0
192,32,35732,2,0,B|256:128|320:16,1,150.000006616115,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0

00:47:548 (2) - CTRL+G qui per reversare questo slider? Trovo decisamente migliore il flow qui con 00:46:809 (1) - .
00:51:056 (1) - Boh,questo spinner qui mi sembra un po' fuori luogo anche se alla fin fine ci sta. Che ne diresti di sostituirlo con questo pattern? Imho,ci sta piuttsto bene qui!

SPOILER

257,289,51056,5,0,0:0
176,336,51240,1,0,0:0
189,229,51425,1,0,0:0
323,229,51610,1,0,0:3
336,336,51795,1,0,0:3
257,289,51979,5,0,0:0

01:10:257 (3) - Che ne diresti di aggiungere una nota qui a x:333 y:369? Segue bene il comprato vocale e si gioca molto volentieri con 01:10:442 (4) -
01:12:657 (7) - Dovresti aggiungere un New Combo qui per seguire ancora le vocali
01:31:674 (4) - Nota non spaziata bene con 01:31:489 (3) - ,la dovresti posizionare a x:256 y:48
01:37:028 (4,1) - Come 00:34:993 (1,2) -
01:45:151 (1) - Ancora antijump con 01:45:521 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ,potresti posizionarlo a x:256 y:280 per rimediare
01:52:906 (1) - Come 00:51:056 (1) - ti direi di sostituire lo spinner con un altro pattern...

Ora devo andare,domani moddo le altre diffs e credo aggiungerò qualcosa su questa diff...

wantuole

528 posts

Joined December 2010

wantuole 2012-10-09T09:25:56+00:00

formyour queue
for M4M
[General]
OK
dif‘s name Start→Move？→Dance。
[Start]
00:23:177 (4) - Straight line feel bad rotate -60°
00:39:055 (4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - lol do somework this place
tired to say you do straight
01:38:505 (1,2) - so ugly cover

01:56:598 (2) - remove whistle
[Revy's Move]
look is ok, but play not comfortable，all out of dissnap
00:25:023 (2,3) - what's this,you get so many mod , nobady play once?unrankable
00:43:486 (2) - cover 00:43:671 (3) is butter ,strange for play
01:38:505 (3) - ctrl+g (old of "ctrl+r")
[Dance]
remove no use green line before start
00:17:638 (5) - 4 is up ,follow this ,you need butter for play start.

SPOILER

00:31:116 (2,3,4,5,6) - strange jump,4 is new combo is butter

I don't want jump this twice
00:38:870 +1 note ,nothing tell you stop this place
01:07:488 (1) - why this one is back?01:08:226 (3) is ok . this one is so ugly look and bad for play
03:01:956 (2) - don‘t lazy.do somework
yeah，may be you do your bast. but it's not dance，only stiff。
maybe Start→Move→Machine is good for difficult name

HakuNoKaemi

3,828 posts

Joined October 2009

HakuNoKaemi 2012-10-09T10:21:09+00:00

Gabe wrote:
Actually, all your difficulty must start at the same time. I will take Revy's example since it's the best.
On every difficulty, start with a spinner on 00:13:577 and end it to 00:15:792. So with what I told you on IRC, delete it.

wrong word, it's "should", since it's a guideline, neither that effective since different mappers have different tastes on when to start/end

Lally

3,176 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

Lally 2012-10-09T16:48:31+00:00

HakuNoKaemi wrote:
Gabe wrote:
Actually, all your difficulty must start at the same time. I will take Revy's example since it's the best.
On every difficulty, start with a spinner on 00:13:577 and end it to 00:15:792. So with what I told you on IRC, delete it.
wrong word, it's "should", since it's a guideline, neither that effective since different mappers have different tastes on when to start/end

hmm :/
i'm a noob mapper so i follow what other says not everytime

@wantuole ty for your mod :3

i'll fix all in this days >o<

I'll change in the next update:
- Bg
- combo colours
- fix (ty all)

UnderminE

osu! Alumni

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Joined August 2010

UnderminE 2012-10-10T15:26:59+00:00

Looks like you have some MAT-BAT friends* hm. Since you improved instantly in weeks lol

Here are some suggestions:

Use bookmarks until your map get ranked. Bookmarks are useful for modders since the song is long enough.

[Start]
00:43:855 (3) - Ugly slider
01:31:858 (4) - x: 336 y: 228
01:39:982 (3) - Ugly slider

[Revy]
01:37:766 (2,3) - Ugly sliders, make them look more symmetrical according to 01:37:028 (4) -
01:48:844 (4) - ugly slider. Especially that ending
02:38:509 (7) - too close
I see some ugly sliders again. Dunno at least make them symmetrical to make the map look delicious.

bah bored that's all, good luck

Last edited by UnderminE 2012-10-10T22:42:19+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Lally

3,176 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

Lally 2012-10-10T19:35:19+00:00

UnderminE wrote:
Looks like you have some MAT-BAT maps hm. Since you improved instantly in weeks lol

lol ? wtf XD

Use bookmarks until your map get ranked. Bookmarks are useful for modders since the song is long enough.

hmmkay o3o

bah bored that's all, good luck

lol ty for your help :3

i'll fix all soon ^-^

UnderminE

osu! Alumni

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UnderminE 2012-10-10T22:42:00+00:00

whopsie, my bad; MAT-BAT friends* p:

Roxas

osu! Alumni

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Joined August 2011

Roxas 2012-10-12T12:23:15+00:00

[Revy's Move]

00:23:916 (1) - simmetria orizzontale dai :V uguale per il (2)
00:35:732 (3) - falli un po' meglio, il secondo punto dello slider è meglio metterlo a x:256, uguale per il (4)
00:37:578 (1) - clap
00:38:317 (4) - ^
00:44:225 (5) - ^
01:30:381 (3) - uguale come 00:23:916 (1) -
01:34:258 (3) - clap (ti sei dimenticato qualche clap? D: ricontrolla gli hitsounds xD)
02:13:215 (6) - togli NC e mettilo al beat dopo

non ho trovato altro, le altre diff moddate in IRC

Genshin

228 posts

Joined July 2009

Genshin 2012-10-15T15:26:40+00:00

a new star is born

Lally

3,176 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

Lally 2012-10-15T15:27:57+00:00

Genshin wrote:
a new star is born

awwww >\\\\\< <3

yanlu

749 posts

Joined November 2010

yanlu 2012-10-17T05:40:06+00:00

Hi~ for M4M mod~

[Dance]

00:07:299 - dele the green line,i don't see you make change..
(no note here so no need to change sound~
00:13:392 - ^
00:13:207 - ^
00:15:423 - this dele and 5% 00:15:792 - here
00:18:008 (6) - nc
00:18:562 (1) - dele NC
00:19:300 (6) - nc here
00:20:039 (1) - dele nc
00:21:146 (8) - nc
00:22:439 (3) - ^
00:21:700 (1) - dele nc
00:23:177 (1) - ^
*(..hmm plz NC in the long white line or you shonld change the offset ~;3 )

00:27:608 (1) - dele nc
*your note some all hide inside the silders,
it will be some hard with open Hidden mod,you may put note on the next space :3
like this..:
00:24:470 (6) -
00:28:901 (2) -
00:30:378 (6) -
00:42:194 (4) -
00:42:932 (2) -
01:26:320 (6) - hide
01:15:427 (7) - hide

00:50:317 (3) - move to x:332 y:152 ?
01:15:980 (2,3,4) - too jump ._.
01:22:627 - add note here?
01:38:043 - dele note
03:01:956 (2) - move to x:112 y:296 ?
03:04:079 - dele note

[Normal]

00:34:993 (1) - no nc
00:40:901 (1) - ^
01:37:028 (1) - ^
01:42:936 (1) - ^
01:48:844 (1) - ^
02:49:402 (1) - ^
02:55:310 (1) - ^
02:59:741 (1) - this spin too long...you should be change some~

hmm~good luck!

Lally

3,176 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

Lally 2012-10-17T18:05:53+00:00

Update:

-NEW BG
-NEW DIFF NAMES
-FIXES

RikiH_ : sistemato tutto :3

kevin : sistemato tutto e fixato gli hit sound e modificato certe pattern

Hikisaku : fixato gli hit sound

wantuole : fixed all , changed diff names , mapped the ''lazy part''

UnderminE : fixed all

Roxas : fatto tutto in irc :3

yanlu : fixed all except the new combo because i'm following the vocal

waiting Revy's update

HakuNoKaemi

3,828 posts

Joined October 2009

HakuNoKaemi 2012-10-18T14:24:15+00:00

UnderminE wrote:
Looks like you have some MAT-BAT friends* hm. Since you improved instantly in weeks lol

I think she actually hasn't that many MAT-BAT friends ...

She simply learned from mods u,u (good job, lally :3)

Lally

3,176 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

Lally 2012-10-18T16:20:17+00:00

HakuNoKaemi wrote:
UnderminE wrote:
Looks like you have some MAT-BAT friends* hm. Since you improved instantly in weeks lol
I think she actually hasn't that many MAT-BAT friends ...

She simply learned from mods u,u (good job, lally :3)

yap.. no bat or mat posted here <.< so u.u nya :foreveralone:
ty haku <3

Nemis

854 posts

Joined May 2012

Nemis 2012-10-18T18:28:27+00:00

[Normal]
00:20:223 (4) - E' abbastanza old come pattern e personalmente non mi piace nemmeno un po', sta comunque a te decidere se lasciarlo o no
00:23:177 (4) - Rendi più aderente la forma con 00:22:808 (3) -
00:32:039 (4) - Centrata renderebbe di più.. ma soprattutto cerca di renderla perfettamente simmetrica
01:06:749 (1) - Renderei la forma più aderente con 01:07:857 (2) -
01:09:703 (1) - E' abbastanza old come pattern e personalmente non mi piace nemmeno un po', sta comunque a te decidere se lasciarlo o no #2
01:13:396 (3,4,5) - Migliora gli spacing
01:24:473 (1) - E' abbastanza old come pattern e personalmente non mi piace nemmeno un po', sta comunque a te decidere se lasciarlo o no #3
01:45:890 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Non sono un po' troppi beat consecutivi per una normal?
02:32:416 (3) - E' abbastanza old come pattern e personalmente non mi piace nemmeno un po', sta comunque a te decidere se lasciarlo o no #4
02:34:631 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing
02:36:847 (1) - E' abbastanza old come pattern e personalmente non mi piace nemmeno un po', sta comunque a te decidere se lasciarlo o no #5

[Revy's Hard]
00:17:823 (4,1) - Jump eccessivo per una hard!
00:19:485 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same ^ o-o
00:23:916 (1) - Rendilo simmetrico
00:25:023 (2) - ^
00:25:947 (4,5,6,7) - Altro jump eccessivo per una hard...
00:29:085 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:35:732 (3,4) - Rendili simmetrici
00:40:901 (1,2,3,4,5) - Jump troppo troppo
00:47:548 (2,3) - Rendili simmetrici
00:48:286 (3) - Centralo

Da qui non tengo più conto dei jumps, sono davvero troppo difficili per una hard ç-ç Questa diff è paragonabile alle insane di Andrea (insane, appunto!)

01:15:611 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Stacka
01:18:381 (1,2,3) - Troppo difficile per un'hard
01:21:519 (1,2) - Centra questi sliders
01:30:381 (3) - Rendilo simmetrico
01:31:674 (4) - 1 square to left nella griglia
01:37:766 (2,3) - Rendili simmetrici
01:40:536 (7) - Stacka
01:48:844 (4) - Simmetrizza
01:50:321 (7) - Same
02:18:754 (1,2) - Spostali di un quadrato verso destra nella griglia
02:30:939 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Troppo difficile per un'hard
02:38:509 (7,8,9) - Distanziali di più da 02:37:585 (6) - , basterebbe anche un reflect horizontally
02:42:755 (3) - Simmetrizza
02:50:140 (2,1) - Simmetrizza
02:52:171 (3,4) - ^
02:57:895 (2,3,4,5,1) - Simmetrizza il tutto
03:01:218 (3) - Simmetria
03:02:695 (6) - ^
03:04:172 (8) - ^

Troppi jump troppo difficili per una hard diff... a questo punto ti consiglierei di rinominarla in Revy's Insane, ma hard proprio non mi sembra...
Trovo comunque una pessima idea utilizzare una grid level 1 in una hard, soprattutto quando la mappa è simmetrica

[Insane]
00:17:638 (5) - Stacka la coda con 00:16:531 (1) -
00:18:746 (3) - Stacka con 00:19:300 (5) -
00:20:408 (4,5) - Rendili aderenti con 00:20:039 (1,2,3) -
00:21:700 (1,2,3) - Stacka meglio
00:24:470 (4) - stacka
00:25:393 (3) - E' abbastanza old come pattern e personalmente non mi piace nemmeno un po', sta comunque a te decidere se lasciarlo o no
00:26:500 (5,6) - Migliorerei le forme
00:29:085 (3,4) - Li simmetrizzerei
00:39:609 (1,2,3) - stack con coda 00:39:055 (7) -
00:41:640 (3) - stack con 00:41:271 (2) -
01:25:212 (2,3,4,5) - stacka tutto meglio
01:30:381 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - Centrerei il tutto
01:37:951 (3,4,5) - Non amo molto questo stream, non ti dico di stackare il primo beat con la coda di 01:37:028 (1) - perchè io lo sposterei proprio da li
01:43:674 (7) - Stacka con 01:43:305 (4,5,6) -
01:45:798 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Non è simmetrico
01:47:367 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Centra il tutto
02:02:506 (2) - Lo sposterei da li
02:33:893 (1,2,3) - Renderei più aderenti gli sliders qui
02:45:709 (4,1,2,3,4) - Spacing
02:56:787 (2,3,4,5,6) - Perfeziona il rettangolo

Sono quasi tutti errori di stacking, alcuni vanno fixati perchè non possono essere letti correttamente. altri giusto per migliorare l'estetica della mappa
Il ritmo è fantastico, è davvero ottimo *-* e la mappa è davvero divertente

Mi piace, buona fortuna col rank

Lally

3,176 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

Lally 2012-10-18T20:23:42+00:00

Nemis wrote:
[Normal]
00:20:223 (4) - E' abbastanza old come pattern e personalmente non mi piace nemmeno un po', sta comunque a te decidere se lasciarlo o no lo lascio mi piace :3
00:23:177 (4) - Rendi più aderente la forma con 00:22:808 (3) - ok
00:32:039 (4) - Centrata renderebbe di più.. ma soprattutto cerca di renderla perfettamente simmetricaok
01:06:749 (1) - Renderei la forma più aderente con 01:07:857 (2) - ok
01:09:703 (1) - E' abbastanza old come pattern e personalmente non mi piace nemmeno un po', sta comunque a te decidere se lasciarlo o no #2 lo lascio mi piace :3 #2
01:13:396 (3,4,5) - Migliora gli spacingok
01:24:473 (1) - E' abbastanza old come pattern e personalmente non mi piace nemmeno un po', sta comunque a te decidere se lasciarlo o no #3 lo lascio mi piace :3 #3
01:45:890 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Non sono un po' troppi beat consecutivi per una normal?messi slider
02:32:416 (3) - E' abbastanza old come pattern e personalmente non mi piace nemmeno un po', sta comunque a te decidere se lasciarlo o no #4 lo lascio mi piace :3 #4
02:34:631 (1,2,3,4) - Spacingok
02:36:847 (1) - E' abbastanza old come pattern e personalmente non mi piace nemmeno un po', sta comunque a te decidere se lasciarlo o no #5 lo lascio mi piace :3 #5

[Insane] sperro di aver stalkato meglio le cose QWQ
00:17:638 (5) - Stacka la coda con 00:16:531 (1) -ok
00:18:746 (3) - Stacka con 00:19:300 (5) - ok
00:20:408 (4,5) - Rendili aderenti con 00:20:039 (1,2,3) - ok
00:21:700 (1,2,3) - Stacka megliook
00:24:470 (4) - stackaok
00:25:393 (3) - E' abbastanza old come pattern e personalmente non mi piace nemmeno un po', sta comunque a te decidere se lasciarlo o nolo lascio mi piace :3
00:26:500 (5,6) - Migliorerei le formeok
00:29:085 (3,4) - Li simmetrizzereiok
00:39:609 (1,2,3) - stack con coda 00:39:055 (7) - ok
00:41:640 (3) - stack con 00:41:271 (2) - ok
01:25:212 (2,3,4,5) - stacka tutto megliook
01:30:381 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - Centrerei il tuttook
01:37:951 (3,4,5) - Non amo molto questo stream, non ti dico di stackare il primo beat con la coda di 01:37:028 (1) - perchè io lo sposterei proprio da li a me piace molto invece :3 quindi non lo tolgo :V
01:43:674 (7) - Stacka con 01:43:305 (4,5,6) - ok
01:45:798 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Non è simmetricook
01:47:367 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Centra il tutto
02:02:506 (2) - Lo sposterei da liok
02:33:893 (1,2,3) - Renderei più aderenti gli sliders quiok
02:45:709 (4,1,2,3,4) - Spacingok
02:56:787 (2,3,4,5,6) - Perfeziona il rettangolook

Sono quasi tutti errori di stacking, alcuni vanno fixati perchè non possono essere letti correttamente. altri giusto per migliorare l'estetica della mappa
Il ritmo è fantastico, è davvero ottimo *-* e la mappa è davvero divertente Mi piace, buona fortuna col rank

grazie mille nemis per la mod *-* <3

update
waiting for Revy :V

p3n

osu! Alumni

947 posts

Joined June 2009

p3n 2012-10-18T20:43:24+00:00

Sorpresa! Lo farò pugno Loctav...oh wait. Non parlo italiano!

[General]
Difficulty spread is too wide. N-I-I is not a very good choice. You could map an [Easy] with ~2 stars to please all the MATs that will complain about the spread

[Normal]
00:17:269 (3) - the beatplacement in the beginning feels weird. I missed 00:16:531 (1) - and 00:18:746 (1) - because I was expecting a notefollow. The notes after the spinner are OK because they fit the concept and later parts. I suggest you change 00:17:269 (3) into two 1/2 sliders to match the vocals and not leave that weird gap: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/465917
01:55:860 (1) - add a repeat? The 1/2 slider alone feels awkward but the repeated slider should feel "right" for beginners
02:22:077 (1,2) - (2) is 1/2 late for a vocal follow and this seems to be the main concept of this map. To achieve a much better vocal follow you can replace (1,2) with a 1x repeat slider that turns on the vocals @02:22:631 - : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/465906 (ignore the note placement - you'll have to adjust the spacing yourself)
02:55:310 (1,2,3) - try to place thise while holding shift (with gridsnap) to get them in one line, or hold ctrl if you don't use grid snapping.

Hitsounding:
A few places to add whistles:
00:17:269 (3) - add a whistle on the beginning of the slider (only select the starting circle twice, until it appears red)
00:18:746 (1) - whistle
00:20:223 (4) - whistle on beginning
00:21:700 (1) - whistle on beginning
00:23:177 (4) - whistle on beginning
00:24:654 (1) - whistle on beginning
See the pattern? For this part of the song and the later parts were this is simply repeated you can add those whistles on the middle white tick of every bar if you think it fits.

00:28:347 (1) - add a finish to the beginning of the slider, remove it from the slider body.
Personally I don't mind the finish spamming in the KIAI but it might get you in trouble later (most ppl don't like it). You could use soft finishes instead or look for a less impactful custom finish to use.

01:42:936 (1) - add whistle to ending point
01:46:628 (3) - add whistle
01:54:383 (2) - and 02:00:291 (1) - don't use whistles on red ticks >< they will always appear off-beat except for very rare cases of 1/2 repeated ones. You can use a whistle on the ending point (middle white tick in the bar)
01:55:491 (4) - maybe remove this whistle...seems too spammy
01:57:337 (3) - use whistle only on ending point and remove it from the body
01:58:445 (5) - again maybe remove this whistle
01:58:814 (1) - whistle on ending?

[Revy's Hard]
00:25:023 (2,3) - 2 notes at the same time...how can this go unnoticed?

02:13:215 (6,1,2) - spacing between those 3 notes makes no sense at all. If you go for a jump here at least keep it consistent for before and after 02:13:584 (1) -
02:57:525 (1,2,3,4,5) - take the whole combo and move it to the center, then fix the allignment of 02:58:448 (4), remove (5) and replace it with a copy of (3) which you ctrl+h and ctrl+g :http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/466003

At first I thought "what the hell is with this spacing???" but after some time I got the concept. The spacing is not messed up if you take this map as a whole. It is a pretty unique approach to mapping. Much copy paste with minor changes but it still feels like a thought-out concept. It might not please everyone but whatever. I don't have to "like" this map but I DO like when mappers try something unique. And that you did. Overall not bad for a unique concept!

[Insane]
AR-1, AR9 is so weird for this kind of mapping style

Overall note placement can be improved. Many notes that seem like they should be in a straight line are a bit off. If you hold shift while moving them you can snap them in a perfect line. Just go through the whole map and look what you can fix (also keep in mind to NOT mess up the spacing)

01:07:488 (5) - remove NC here
01:39:797 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this pattern feels unintuitive. Maybe go for something more flowing without stacking following notes, like this:

256,144,99797,5,0,0:0:0
316,212,99982,1,0,0:0:0
256,144,100167,1,0,0:0:0
196,212,100351,1,0,0:0:0
256,144,100536,1,0,0:0:0
256,272,100720,1,2,0:0:0
256,144,101090,1,4,0:0:0

02:04:353 (1,1,1,1) - just pair them in (1,2) combos: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/465996

Wow. I'm impressed. Even with all the rough edges ("unique" hitsounding) and not-so-perfectly placed hitobjects this map is 100% playable (SS first try even with the unfitting AR9). It is fun to play, too!

This mapset is still a bit rough and especially note placements can be improved (if you aim for perfect appearance).
OK, the [Insane] was impressive. If you keep polishing it you will get this ranked eventually! So have a cookie....and a star~

Lally

3,176 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

Lally 2012-10-18T20:49:08+00:00

p3n wrote:
Sorpresa! Lo farò pugno Loctav...oh wait. Non parlo italiano!

LOOOL X)

Wow. I'm impressed. Even with all the rough edges ("unique" hitsounding) and not-so-perfectly placed hitobjects this map is 100% playable (SS first try even with the unfitting AR9). It is fun to play, too!

glad to hear it :3

This mapset is still a bit rough and especially note placements can be improved (if you aim for perfect appearance).
OK, the [Insane] was impressive. If you keep polishing it you will get this ranked eventually! So have a cookie....and a star~

ty for your mod :3 i'll fix all later :3

edit:

p3n mod

p3n wrote:
Sorpresa! Lo farò pugno Loctav...oh wait. Non parlo italiano!

es wehre besser gewesen eine german mod zu haben hatte ich besser verstanden Q_Q

[General]
Difficulty spread is too wide. N-I-I is not a very good choice. You could map an [Easy] with ~2 stars to please all the MATs that will complain about the spread

*coff* *coff* stuf like this then? http://osu.ppy.sh/s/22201 i don't think i need a easy :S

[Normal]
00:17:269 (3) - the beatplacement in the beginning feels weird. I missed 00:16:531 (1) - and 00:18:746 (1) - because I was expecting a notefollow. The notes after the spinner are OK because they fit the concept and later parts. I suggest you change 00:17:269 (3) into two 1/2 sliders to match the vocals and not leave that weird gap: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/465917added the sliders
01:55:860 (1) - add a repeat? The 1/2 slider alone feels awkward but the repeated slider should feel "right" for beginnersfixed in the other update :3
02:22:077 (1,2) - (2) is 1/2 late for a vocal follow and this seems to be the main concept of this map. To achieve a much better vocal follow you can replace (1,2) with a 1x repeat slider that turns on the vocals @02:22:631 - : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/465906 (ignore the note placement - you'll have to adjust the spacing yourself)done
02:55:310 (1,2,3) - try to place thise while holding shift (with gridsnap) to get them in one line, or hold ctrl if you don't use grid snapping.
yap done
Hitsounding:i have much to work on hitsounds T_T i'll work tomorrow on it better
A few places to add whistles:
00:17:269 (3) - add a whistle on the beginning of the slider (only select the starting circle twice, until it appears red)
00:18:746 (1) - whistle
00:20:223 (4) - whistle on beginning
00:21:700 (1) - whistle on beginning
00:23:177 (4) - whistle on beginning
00:24:654 (1) - whistle on beginningbis hier alles gemacht
See the pattern? For this part of the song and the later parts were this is simply repeated you can add those whistles on the middle white tick of every bar if you think it fits.

00:28:347 (1) - add a finish to the beginning of the slider, remove it from the slider body.
Personally I don't mind the finish spamming in the KIAI but it might get you in trouble later (most ppl don't like it). You could use soft finishes instead or look for a less impactful custom finish to use.

01:42:936 (1) - add whistle to ending point
01:46:628 (3) - add whistle
01:54:383 (2) - and 02:00:291 (1) - don't use whistles on red ticks >< they will always appear off-beat except for very rare cases of 1/2 repeated ones. You can use a whistle on the ending point (middle white tick in the bar)
01:55:491 (4) - maybe remove this whistle...seems too spammy
01:57:337 (3) - use whistle only on ending point and remove it from the body
01:58:445 (5) - again maybe remove this whistle
01:58:814 (1) - whistle on ending?

[Insane]
AR-1, AR9 is so weird for this kind of mapping style
hmm i dunno i think is actually good :X

Overall note placement can be improved. Many notes that seem like they should be in a straight line are a bit off. If you hold shift while moving them you can snap them in a perfect line. Just go through the whole map and look what you can fix (also keep in mind to NOT mess up the spacing)

01:07:488 (5) - remove NC hereyap
01:39:797 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this pattern feels unintuitive. Maybe go for something more flowing without stacking following notes, like this: ok
256,144,99797,5,0,0:0:0
316,212,99982,1,0,0:0:0
256,144,100167,1,0,0:0:0
196,212,100351,1,0,0:0:0
256,144,100536,1,0,0:0:0
256,272,100720,1,2,0:0:0
256,144,101090,1,4,0:0:0
02:04:353 (1,1,1,1) - just pair them in (1,2) combos: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/465996ok

Wow. I'm impressed. Even with all the rough edges ("unique" hitsounding) and not-so-perfectly placed hitobjects this map is 100% playable (SS first try even with the unfitting AR9). It is fun to play, too!

\( ^ u ^ )/ pro and ty :3

This mapset is still a bit rough and especially note placements can be improved (if you aim for perfect appearance).
OK, the [Insane] was impressive. If you keep polishing it you will get this ranked eventually! So have a cookie....and a star~ ty for cookie °\( * u * ) om nom nom :3 and for star too >\\\\\\\\<)/

Last edited by Lally 2012-10-18T23:03:46+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

OnosakiHito

osu!taiko Paragon

6,864 posts

Joined March 2010

OnosakiHito 2012-10-18T20:54:48+00:00

Hey Lally,
do you would like to have a Taiko diff. as well?
The taiko is allready tuto completo. lol

GoOoM

98 posts

Joined May 2010

GoOoM 2012-10-18T21:25:10+00:00

08:44 GoOoM: 03:04:356 (4,5,6) - rendile piu occhiabili
08:45 GoOoM: sembrano note messe random
08:45 GoOoM: (è l'insane)
08:46 Lally: ah aspetta
08:46 GoOoM: quelle 3 note
08:46 GoOoM: sembrano messe random
08:47 Lally: sulla 03:04:910 (6) - non ci sono problemi perche fa da blanket allo slider
08:47 Lally: ma su 03:04:356 (4,5) - si ci faccio un pensierino
08:48 Lally: faccio un quadrato
08:48 GoOoM: http://puu.sh/1g9VX
08:48 GoOoM: cosi sembra carino
08:49 GoOoM: poi scegli tu ^^
08:49 Lally: si e vero è carino
08:50 Lally: faro http://puu.sh/1g9Yd
08:50 GoOoM: 03:04:356 (4) - 318 270
08:51 GoOoM: 03:04:541 (5) - 192 256
08:51 GoOoM: 03:04:726 (6) - 212 132
08:53 Lally: la 6 non la sposto
08:53 GoOoM: 00:22:808 (3) - spostalo un pochetino verso destra in modo che sia centrale tra i 2 slidder 00:21:700 (1,4) -
08:53 GoOoM: 00:21:700 (1,4) -
08:54 Lally: gia fixato poco fa con la mod di nemis
08:54 GoOoM: ook ^^
08:54 GoOoM: nn le ho lette le mod ^^
08:55 GoOoM: 01:48:844 (1,2,3) -
08:56 GoOoM: probblema nello spacing
08:56 Lally: ok ora fixo
08:56 GoOoM: avicina queste 2
08:56 GoOoM: 01:48:844 (1,2,3) -
08:57 Lally: si si fixato
08:57 GoOoM: 01:55:860 (1) - qui puoi far ripetere lo slidder
08:57 GoOoM: cioe... nn so bene come si dice...
08:57 GoOoM: quando torna "indietro" sorry per la mia ignoranza
08:58 Lally: quello no non li è uno slider a 1/4 che segue la musica se noti
08:59 GoOoM: mmm.. se noti...
08:59 GoOoM: c'e una nota
08:59 GoOoM: deversa dalle altre 2
08:59 GoOoM: ma comunque c'e
08:59 Lally: cioè?
09:00 GoOoM: http://puu.sh/1gaaU
09:00 GoOoM: io mi ritrovo questo
09:00 GoOoM: e a me suona male
09:00 Lally: hmm ora guardo se ci sta meglio uno slider a recversearrow
09:00 Lally: slider a 1/4 si chiama ò3ò
09:00 GoOoM: http://puu.sh/1gabI
09:01 GoOoM: suona melto meglio se lo fai così
09:01 GoOoM: sisisisi
09:01 GoOoM: ecco
09:01 GoOoM: lo slidder reversaiefhghrujhnbdjssdf
09:01 GoOoM: devi fare quello
09:01 Lally: si suona meglio lo slider a reverse arrow hai ragione o3o
09:01 GoOoM: come ho fatto nel push
09:03 GoOoM: 02:42:755 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) -
09:03 GoOoM: senza fantasia?? XD
09:03 GoOoM: sono un po monotoni
09:04 GoOoM: in alcune song stanno bene... ma da player nn mi aspetterei questo stile in una canzone del genere
09:04 Lally: veramente a me piace la simmetria
09:04 GoOoM: mmm.. nn fa nulla sono gusti ^^
09:04 Lally: infatti
09:05 GoOoM: comunque... in generale è fatta molto bene...
09:05 Lally: ty

Lally

3,176 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

Lally 2012-10-18T21:58:28+00:00

OnosakiHito wrote:
Hey Lally,
do you would like to have a Taiko diff. as well?
The taiko is allready tuto completo. lol

Hmm i dunno

darf ich die erst sehen? > u <)//

edit:

GoOoM

GoOoM wrote:
08:44 GoOoM: 03:04:356 (4,5,6) - rendile piu occhiabili
08:45 GoOoM: sembrano note messe random
08:45 GoOoM: (è l'insane)
08:46 Lally: ah aspetta
08:46 GoOoM: quelle 3 note
08:46 GoOoM: sembrano messe random
08:47 Lally: sulla 03:04:910 (6) - non ci sono problemi perche fa da blanket allo slider
08:47 Lally: ma su 03:04:356 (4,5) - si ci faccio un pensierino
08:48 Lally: faccio un quadrato
08:48 GoOoM: http://puu.sh/1g9VX
08:48 GoOoM: cosi sembra carino
08:49 GoOoM: poi scegli tu ^^
08:49 Lally: si e vero è carino
08:50 Lally: faro http://puu.sh/1g9Yd
08:50 GoOoM: 03:04:356 (4) - 318 270
08:51 GoOoM: 03:04:541 (5) - 192 256
08:51 GoOoM: 03:04:726 (6) - 212 132
08:53 Lally: la 6 non la sposto
08:53 GoOoM: 00:22:808 (3) - spostalo un pochetino verso destra in modo che sia centrale tra i 2 slidder 00:21:700 (1,4) -
08:53 GoOoM: 00:21:700 (1,4) -
08:54 Lally: gia fixato poco fa con la mod di nemis
08:54 GoOoM: ook ^^
08:54 GoOoM: nn le ho lette le mod ^^
08:55 GoOoM: 01:48:844 (1,2,3) -
08:56 GoOoM: probblema nello spacing
08:56 Lally: ok ora fixo
08:56 GoOoM: avicina queste 2
08:56 GoOoM: 01:48:844 (1,2,3) -
08:57 Lally: si si fixato
08:57 GoOoM: 01:55:860 (1) - qui puoi far ripetere lo slidder
08:57 GoOoM: cioe... nn so bene come si dice...
08:57 GoOoM: quando torna "indietro" sorry per la mia ignoranza
08:58 Lally: quello no non li è uno slider a 1/4 che segue la musica se noti
08:59 GoOoM: mmm.. se noti...
08:59 GoOoM: c'e una nota
08:59 GoOoM: deversa dalle altre 2
08:59 GoOoM: ma comunque c'e
08:59 Lally: cioè?
09:00 GoOoM: http://puu.sh/1gaaU
09:00 GoOoM: io mi ritrovo questo
09:00 GoOoM: e a me suona male
09:00 Lally: hmm ora guardo se ci sta meglio uno slider a recversearrow
09:00 Lally: slider a 1/4 si chiama ò3ò
09:00 GoOoM: http://puu.sh/1gabI
09:01 GoOoM: suona melto meglio se lo fai così
09:01 GoOoM: sisisisi
09:01 GoOoM: ecco
09:01 GoOoM: lo slidder reversaiefhghrujhnbdjssdf
09:01 GoOoM: devi fare quello
09:01 Lally: si suona meglio lo slider a reverse arrow hai ragione o3o
09:01 GoOoM: come ho fatto nel push
09:03 GoOoM: 02:42:755 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) -
09:03 GoOoM: senza fantasia?? XD
09:03 GoOoM: sono un po monotoni
09:04 GoOoM: in alcune song stanno bene... ma da player nn mi aspetterei questo stile in una canzone del genere
09:04 Lally: veramente a me piace la simmetria
09:04 GoOoM: mmm.. nn fa nulla sono gusti ^^
09:04 Lally: infatti
09:05 GoOoM: comunque... in generale è fatta molto bene...
09:05 Lally: ty

grazie per la mod (btw baka o3o la nostra grammatica è la migliore) ^-^)/

Update

waiting for revy..

Revy

380 posts

Joined June 2011

Revy 2012-10-19T18:06:56+00:00

Sorry if i am in late , i was busy in those days

00:25:762 , Sorry for this but my editor bugged and i don't know why a circle is there...

btw , i fixed something... http://puu.sh/1gv2N thanks to everyone but im not good with the symmetry things , so, sorry if i mistake something..

Lally

3,176 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

Lally 2012-10-20T00:16:12+00:00

Revy wrote:
Sorry if i am in late , i was busy in those days

00:25:762 , Sorry for this but my editor bugged and i don't know why a circle is there...

btw , i fixed something... http://puu.sh/1gv2N thanks to everyone but im not good with the symmetry things , so, sorry if i mistake something..

and

update \:D/

Nemis

854 posts

Joined May 2012

Nemis 2012-10-20T13:08:47+00:00

Aggiungo che nella hard 00:17:269 (1) - sarebbe meglio spostarlo di un quadrato verso sopra

Nemis

854 posts

Joined May 2012

Nemis 2012-10-20T13:10:38+00:00

Revy certo però che se modifichi tipo 1/597548739483 delle cose moddate la mappa non migliora più di tanto.. ci sono davvero troppe imperfezioni

Scusate il doppiopost ma sono abituato a scrivere su altre piattaforme °>° Di solito il doppiopost viene unito se ha una distanza breve

Revy

380 posts

Joined June 2011

Revy 2012-10-20T17:24:21+00:00

Nemis wrote:
Revy certo però che se modifichi tipo 1/597548739483 delle cose moddate la mappa non migliora più di tanto.. ci sono davvero troppe imperfezioni

Scusate il doppiopost ma sono abituato a scrivere su altre piattaforme °>° Di solito il doppiopost viene unito se ha una distanza breve

Si ma certe modifiche non mi piacciono , e non vedo problemi di spacing D:

ririco

6,376 posts

Joined February 2011

ririco 2012-10-20T18:20:18+00:00

small irc mod =w=//

20:37 Lally: can you mod this? çWç
20:37  *Lally is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/179690 Eiffel 65 - Move Your Body (Nightcore Mix)]
20:37 Sekai-nyan: irc mod maybe
20:37 Lally: ok :3
20:37 Sekai-nyan: dling :3
20:37 Lally: \:D/
20:38  *Sekai-nyan is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/179690 Eiffel 65 - Move Your Body (Nightcore Mix) [Normal]]
20:38 Sekai-nyan: o3o
20:38 Lally: uguu
20:38 Lally: btw i need to fix hitsound good = 3 =
20:39 Sekai-nyan: 00:18:008 (4) - this can you make it lined with other slider
20:39 Sekai-nyan: it'll better
20:39 Sekai-nyan: and dont forget spacing
20:39 Lally: yap sure
20:40 Lally: ok fixed 
20:41 Sekai-nyan: 00:18:746 (1) - remove whistle?
20:41 Lally: yap
20:41 Sekai-nyan: :3
20:44 Sekai-nyan: your hitsounds are good 
20:44 Sekai-nyan: not that bad to me
20:44 Sekai-nyan: o.o
20:45 Lally: insane are not so good çWç
20:45 Sekai-nyan: 00:46:071 (2) -  maybe change it like this http://puu.sh/1gP1Q ?
20:47 Lally: yap fixed
20:47 Sekai-nyan: then copy it and past it here 00:48:286 (4) - 
20:47 Sekai-nyan: :3
20:47 Sekai-nyan: pest it*
20:47 Sekai-nyan: orz w/e to the typos lol
20:48 Lally: good idea :3
20:50 Sekai-nyan: maybe change this 01:11:180 (2) -  like this http://puu.sh/1gP8i
20:51 Sekai-nyan: double sliders?
20:52 Lally: yap sounds better
20:53 Sekai-nyan: 01:17:088 (4) -  why this whistles D:
20:54 Lally: sounds weird  @@ i remove it
20:56 Sekai-nyan: 01:21:519 (1) - since you added a nc on this better stick it on the slider
20:56 Sekai-nyan: o.o maybe 
20:56 Lally: uh yap
20:57 Sekai-nyan: 01:30:381 - this kiai maybe use some curved sliders stright once might get boring 
20:59 Lally: ok i try to fix 
21:01 Sekai-nyan: 02:34:631 (1) - remove nc
21:01 Lally: yap
21:01 Sekai-nyan: 02:46:448 (3) - change this slider to curver one?
21:02 Sekai-nyan: and that's for normal :3
21:03 Lally: yap i'll cange it  later must fing a good form o3o:3
21:03 Sekai-nyan: o3o
21:03 Sekai-nyan: sure
21:04 Lally: revy's hard emh maybe post the mod in the forum for this ^^
21:04 Lally: diff*
21:04 Sekai-nyan: lol i can't hear anything on insane's hitsounds
21:05 Lally: lol :S
21:06 Sekai-nyan: 00:16:623 - change this green timing point to N:C1
21:06 Sekai-nyan: change volume to 69% too
21:07 Lally: yap i had some problems yesterday with it
21:07 Sekai-nyan: orz
21:08 Lally: oh got... why why why 
21:09 Lally: fixed all for 2dn time @@
21:09 Sekai-nyan: :3
21:10 Sekai-nyan: maybe submit so i can check
21:10 Lally: ok brb submit
21:10 Sekai-nyan: sure :3
21:11 Lally: ok done :3 update
21:12 Lally: fuu wtf normal again 3.1 stars =_= uffiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiih
21:12 Sekai-nyan: btw
21:12 Sekai-nyan: if you want easy diff
21:12 Sekai-nyan: ask Bakari since he likes nightcore
21:12 Sekai-nyan: xD
21:13 Lally: i asked some weeks ago but he was busy o3o
21:13 Sekai-nyan: o3o
21:13 Sekai-nyan: he's baka yeah
21:15 Lally: uguu o3o
21:16 Sekai-nyan: your insane is good
21:16 Sekai-nyan: o.o
21:16 Lally: :D ty \( > u < )/
21:17 Sekai-nyan: nothing much to say yeah ><

Lally

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Topic Starter

Lally 2012-10-20T18:21:00+00:00

Revy wrote:
Nemis wrote:
Revy certo però che se modifichi tipo 1/597548739483 delle cose moddate la mappa non migliora più di tanto.. ci sono davvero troppe imperfezioni

Scusate il doppiopost ma sono abituato a scrivere su altre piattaforme °>° Di solito il doppiopost viene unito se ha una distanza breve
Si ma certe modifiche non mi piacciono , e non vedo problemi di spacing D:

ci sono troppi jump come ti ho detto prima :X

Sekai-nyan wrote:
small irc mod =w=//
20:37 Lally: can you mod this? çWç
20:37 *Lally is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/179690 Eiffel 65 - Move Your Body (Nightcore Mix)]
20:37 Sekai-nyan: irc mod maybe
20:37 Lally: ok :3
20:37 Sekai-nyan: dling :3
20:37 Lally: \:D/
20:38 *Sekai-nyan is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/179690 Eiffel 65 - Move Your Body (Nightcore Mix) [Normal]]
20:38 Sekai-nyan: o3o
20:38 Lally: uguu
20:38 Lally: btw i need to fix hitsound good = 3 =
20:39 Sekai-nyan: 00:18:008 (4) - this can you make it lined with other slider
20:39 Sekai-nyan: it'll better
20:39 Sekai-nyan: and dont forget spacing
20:39 Lally: yap sure
20:40 Lally: ok fixed
20:41 Sekai-nyan: 00:18:746 (1) - remove whistle?
20:41 Lally: yap
20:41 Sekai-nyan: :3
20:44 Sekai-nyan: your hitsounds are good
20:44 Sekai-nyan: not that bad to me
20:44 Sekai-nyan: o.o
20:45 Lally: insane are not so good çWç
20:45 Sekai-nyan: 00:46:071 (2) - maybe change it like this http://puu.sh/1gP1Q ?
20:47 Lally: yap fixed
20:47 Sekai-nyan: then copy it and past it here 00:48:286 (4) -
20:47 Sekai-nyan: :3
20:47 Sekai-nyan: pest it*
20:47 Sekai-nyan: orz w/e to the typos lol
20:48 Lally: good idea :3
20:50 Sekai-nyan: maybe change this 01:11:180 (2) - like this http://puu.sh/1gP8i
20:51 Sekai-nyan: double sliders?
20:52 Lally: yap sounds better
20:53 Sekai-nyan: 01:17:088 (4) - why this whistles D:
20:54 Lally: sounds weird @@ i remove it
20:56 Sekai-nyan: 01:21:519 (1) - since you added a nc on this better stick it on the slider
20:56 Sekai-nyan: o.o maybe
20:56 Lally: uh yap
20:57 Sekai-nyan: 01:30:381 - this kiai maybe use some curved sliders stright once might get boring
20:59 Lally: ok i try to fix
21:01 Sekai-nyan: 02:34:631 (1) - remove nc
21:01 Lally: yap
21:01 Sekai-nyan: 02:46:448 (3) - change this slider to curver one?
21:02 Sekai-nyan: and that's for normal :3
21:03 Lally: yap i'll cange it later must fing a good form o3o:3
21:03 Sekai-nyan: o3o
21:03 Sekai-nyan: sure
21:04 Lally: revy's hard emh maybe post the mod in the forum for this ^^
21:04 Lally: diff*
21:04 Sekai-nyan: lol i can't hear anything on insane's hitsounds
21:05 Lally: lol :S
21:06 Sekai-nyan: 00:16:623 - change this green timing point to N:C1
21:06 Sekai-nyan: change volume to 69% too
21:07 Lally: yap i had some problems yesterday with it
21:07 Sekai-nyan: orz
21:08 Lally: oh got... why why why
21:09 Lally: fixed all for 2dn time @@
21:09 Sekai-nyan: :3
21:10 Sekai-nyan: maybe submit so i can check
21:10 Lally: ok brb submit
21:10 Sekai-nyan: sure :3
21:11 Lally: ok done :3 update
21:12 Lally: fuu wtf normal again 3.1 stars =_= uffiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiih
21:12 Sekai-nyan: btw
21:12 Sekai-nyan: if you want easy diff
21:12 Sekai-nyan: ask Bakari since he likes nightcore
21:12 Sekai-nyan: xD
21:13 Lally: i asked some weeks ago but he was busy o3o
21:13 Sekai-nyan: o3o
21:13 Sekai-nyan: he's baka yeah
21:15 Lally: uguu o3o
21:16 Sekai-nyan: your insane is good
21:16 Sekai-nyan: o.o
21:16 Lally: ty \( > u < )/
21:17 Sekai-nyan: nothing much to say yeah ><

ty moe moe <3

Lilu_old

Lilu_old 2012-10-20T19:15:46+00:00

[kiai time fix :]

insane :
now is:
00:28:356 - 00:51:979 hard diff too
01:30:390 - 01:52:915 normal hard diff too
02:42:764 - 03:06:387 normal diff too

should be how in the other diff:
00:28:347 - 00:51:979
01:30:381 - 01:52:906
02:42:755 - 03:06:387

Revy

380 posts

Joined June 2011

Revy 2012-10-20T20:14:40+00:00

http://puu.sh/1gS0G update :3

Lally

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Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

Lally 2012-10-21T02:14:20+00:00

Revy wrote:
http://puu.sh/1gS0G update :3

update ^D^)/

edit

move to wip again:

-waiting:
~[Te][Amo]'s ~ Hard

Last edited by Lally 2012-11-03T02:58:54+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

XinCrin

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Joined January 2012

XinCrin 2012-11-01T18:23:25+00:00

;_; W.I.P.

Lally

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Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

Lally 2012-11-01T19:09:18+00:00

uguu i did some changes :/ now only wait of GD U.U

PrivatHansi1

164 posts

Joined December 2011

PrivatHansi1 2012-11-02T14:59:50+00:00

Some fixes in [Insane]

I may did some changes u dont want to for example the space between some parts
i showed in my mod. if u dont want to change them just ignore them.

01:05:087 (1) - spacing is between 0.9x and 1.0x
01:06:934 (2,3,4) - spacing does not fit u can change it to:
01:06:934 (2) - at x280/y108
01:07:118 (3) - at x344/y44
01:07:303 (4,5) - at x412/y104
01:07:857 (1) - at x280/y28
01:08:226 (2) - at x232/y100
01:08:595 (3) - at x88/y172
01:08:780 (4) - at the same position as 01:08:965 (5) -
01:22:442 (4,1) - try to place a not between this space because it stop you a little when u are in the rythm
02:05:830 (1) - the green lines are 00:00:009 sec offbeat and dont snap
02:48:478 (3,4) - place one note between them two notes or use a longer slider
01:56:044 (1) - wrong space
02:23:369 (1) - place it at x260/y276 for the right spacing
02:25:585 (2) - wrong space to 02:25:031 (1) -
02:30:570 (6,7,8) - you can place 2 extra notes before the triple starts because its better to play then
02:35:185 (4) - space it on 1.0x
01:03:980 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - also dont fit to the right spacing
02:59:556 (5,1) - at x348/y264 and 02:59:925 (2,3) - at x255/y296 and remove 03:00:295 (4) -

i hope i can help with those little fixes i enjoy your map so far
keep the good work on!

Aurele

Global Moderator

7,605 posts

Joined January 2011

Aurele 2012-11-03T03:47:27+00:00

Here's the rehitsound for Insane.

http://puu.sh/1lOAj

Go moe-Lally!

Lally

3,176 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

Lally 2012-11-03T13:29:31+00:00

Gabe wrote:
Here's the rehitsound for Insane.

http://puu.sh/1lOAj

Go moe-Lally!
<3

they are just awsome ty moe >u< <3

PrivatHansi1

PrivatHansi1 wrote:
Some fixes in [Insane]

I may did some changes u dont want to for example the space between some parts
i showed in my mod. if u dont want to change them just ignore them.

01:05:087 (1) - spacing is between 0.9x and 1.0x fixed
01:06:934 (2,3,4) - spacing does not fit u can change it to:
01:06:934 (2) - at x280/y108 no because is stalked with 01:06:564 (3,4)
01:07:118 (3) - at x344/y44
01:07:303 (4,5) - at x412/y104
01:07:857 (1) - at x280/y28
01:08:226 (2) - at x232/y100
01:08:595 (3) - at x88/y172
01:08:780 (4) - at the same position as 01:08:965 (5) -
fixed this part
01:22:442 (4,1) - try to place a not between this space because it stop you a little when u are in the rythm i follow the vocal here so no
02:05:830 (1) - the green lines are 00:00:009 sec offbeat and dont snap ok
02:48:478 (3,4) - place one note between them two notes or use a longer slider nah
01:56:044 (1) - wrong space fixed
02:23:369 (1) - place it at x260/y276 for the right spacing changed a little bit
02:25:585 (2) - wrong space to 02:25:031 (1) - ok
02:30:570 (6,7,8) - you can place 2 extra notes before the triple starts because its better to play then i think about but atm no
02:35:185 (4) - space it on 1.0x ok
01:03:980 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - also dont fit to the right spacing they are good no changes
02:59:556 (5,1) - at x348/y264 ok
and 02:59:925 (2,3) - at x255/y296 ok
and remove 03:00:295 (4) - no

i hope i can help with those little fixes i enjoy your map so far
keep the good work on!

ty for your help <3

UPDATE

UnderminE

osu! Alumni

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UnderminE 2012-11-10T08:36:57+00:00

Glasses.

Lally

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Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

Lally 2012-11-30T17:12:01+00:00

and pending again \o3o/
btw sexy glasses o3o

Deni

Deni 2012-12-01T18:58:59+00:00

General

Hi M4M ! (＾∇＾)

Normal

Some hitsound modding:

00:20:223 (4) - Remove whistle here.
00:19:485 (3) - Add whistle at the head of the slider, to keep the consistency with 00:17:269 (3) -
00:26:131 (3) - Add whistle at the head
01:39:243 (2) - Add whistle at the head
01:50:321 (1) - Remove this finish here since there's no finish in the song or just turn the volume of the finish down.
01:55:491 (4) - Remove whistle here
01:55:860 (1) - Add whistle at the repeat like you did here 01:54:383 (2) -
01:57:337 (3) - Remove whistle from the sliderbody and add whistle to the head of the slider.
02:02:506 (2) - Remove whistle from sliderbody and add it on the end.

General modding:

00:30:562 (3) - Add new combo here, like you did at 00:33:516 (1) -
01:12:657 (4) - Add new combo
02:36:847 (1) - Move this to x:448 , y:144 looks better.
02:52:356 (1) - I don't like this slider why dont you add a nice looking curve?

TeA's Hard

Please add some more hitsounds, I can only hear a few.

02:43:124 Add a circle here please it feels very blank

Nice difficulty!

Insane

No real problems in this diff, sorry.

That's it! If you have any questions ask them via PM or ingame!

Lally

3,176 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

Lally 2012-12-01T21:11:33+00:00

Deni wrote:

General

Hi M4M ! (＾∇＾) :3 nyuu

Normal

Some hitsound modding:

00:20:223 (4) - Remove whistle here. fixed
00:19:485 (3) - Add whistle at the head of the slider, to keep the consistency with 00:17:269 (3) - yap o3o
00:26:131 (3) - Add whistle at the head yap
01:39:243 (2) - Add whistle at the head yap
01:50:321 (1) - Remove this finish here since there's no finish in the song or just turn the volume of the finish down.yap it sound strange o3o removed
01:55:491 (4) - Remove whistle here yap it is better without
01:55:860 (1) - Add whistle at the repeat like you did here 01:54:383 (2) - yup yup good idea :3
01:57:337 (3) - Remove whistle from the sliderbody and add whistle to the head of the slider. yap some first fail with hitsounds XD
02:02:506 (2) - Remove whistle from sliderbody and add it on the end.^

General modding:

00:30:562 (3) - Add new combo here, like you did at 00:33:516 (1) - ok
01:12:657 (4) - Add new combo ok
02:36:847 (1) - Move this to x:448 , y:144 looks better. fixed
02:52:356 (1) - I don't like this slider why dont you add a nice looking curve? done

Insane

No real problems in this diff, sorry. ^^

That's it! If you have any questions ask them via PM or ingame!
tu for your help was very helpfull :3

To [Te][Amo]:

i dunno but bakari said that maybe ar +1 is better what do you think about? :U

update for atm my diffs :3

edit:

updated Tea's diff to ar +1 and fixed all :3

yurunneram

682 posts

Joined January 2012

yurunneram 2012-12-06T12:43:22+00:00

Easy:
02:20:600 (3) - move the middle point to x416 y224 cuz it doesn't look very round.
other than that, nothing much w/ easy

Hard:
01:07:488 (1) - Shouldn't you fill this gap
That's about it sry

Lally

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Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

Lally 2012-12-06T23:08:46+00:00

fixed ty for give a look :3

XinCrin

2,845 posts

Joined January 2012

XinCrin 2012-12-07T02:36:11+00:00

Hi Lally , really I Love your map

[Normal]

• 00:13:577 (1) Consider adding 3 or 4 inherited point that begins to reduce the volume of spinner slowly because the song like that down the volume

• 00:20:223 (4) The shape of this slider as this symmetrical and not going well with your patterns straight and circular sliders .
Use the sliders creation system with only three points

• 00:22:808 (3) Maybe this circle might be a bit hard to find for beginners because they do not have a diff. easy, try to move away to avoid being blocked by the previous hitburst
• 00:24:654 (5) Same , use the system of three points , looks better
• 00:32:039 (3) This way I feel like a little ugly and very random, so do not you like ?, in my opinion looks much better

• 01:06:749 - 01:28:904 Prefer you to reduce the volume to 60% because in this part the music sounds lower and not as strong as in the choir
• 01:09:703 (1) You could do it some other way? , I see a bit random, just a 3-point slider you could make the most beautiful
• 01:00:133 Unsnapped Break , Fix it , Move to 01:00:103
• 02:01:029 (2) Move this circle to x:140 y:152 because this slider end : 01:59:552 (2) This above this circle, and the slider hitsburst hides the circle
• 02:22:077 (1) This slider you had lost the rhythm , I prefer to follow the rhythm you were having

• 02:36:847 (1) Try to give this way a better pattern will continue and become more funny and cute

[Insane]

• 00:18:654 (2) Delete this note because no follow the music and also when the play does not sense the rhythm and made me very boring
• 00:27:608 (1) I'm not sure if you should remove the NC that I leave to your decision
• Change the position of the slider because the slider is touching above and also this is ugly when you play, considers move this slider to x:144 y:224

• 01:28:904 (3) Because the volume came down to 10% ? Increase the volume to 40% and adds a soft finish to the start of the slider as it follows the music
• 01:30:381 (1) Add NC to be consistent with what you mentioned before or just do not do and follow what I told you before 00:27:608 (1)
• 02:07:491 Unsnapped Break , Please Fix this
• 02:27:985 (1) Place an NC, because your patterns are not long combos, but short

Sorry for my poor mod

Good Luck <3

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

2,568 posts

Joined February 2010

jonathanlfj 2012-12-07T02:44:05+00:00

Hi modding upon request
this song made me lol the whole time i was listening to it

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
all fine, slider multiplier looks kinda scary though

[Normal]
00:21:331 (5) - clap
00:48:286 (4) - 2 grid down
01:09:703 (1) - is that very loud green section necessary? i think using a finish or simply leave it at the same volume is more reasonable
01:18:565 (1) - add finish on head?
01:39:243 (2) - finish on end
02:01:029 (2) - this overlap with 01:59:552 (2) looks a bit ugly due to the low ar, consider moving this to somewhere else
02:29:462 (3,1) - placing two repeat sliders beside each other with different number of repeats is pretty tricky on normal, consider splitting the first one into repeat slider + note
02:50:879 (1,2) - try this, and add finish to the end of 02:52:356 (2)

SPOILER

[TeA's hard]
consider utilizing the custom normal-clap in this diff more~
00:47:917 (7) - stack this on 00:48:286 (8) is better flow wise imo
01:09:703 (1) - same as easy
01:45:705 (1,2,3,4,5) - star can look better, its kinda squished atm
02:19:123 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - move the whole combo down 1 grid for symmetry on x-axis
03:06:387 (1) - remove the NC, kinda makes the circle flow look weird; or you can try this

SPOILER

[Insane]
when i was checking clap consistency i was actually moving my body
00:34:255 (3,4,5,6) - center these on the y-axis
01:12:288 (3) - clap on start
01:30:381 (2) - add NC here and take off NC at 01:31:120 (1) to follow the NC pattern u did before the first kiai
01:47:367 (1,2) - stacking these perfectly seems to have better aesthetics and playability imo (if you agree then bring 01:49:583 (3,4) closer for equal spacing)
01:59:552 (5) - clap on start
02:03:614 (1) - 1 grid right
02:05:091 (1,2) - ^
03:02:695 (1) - take off NC, or move this NC to 03:02:879 (2) instead, looks awkward on the last note of a triplet stacked under a slider

Thats it, great mapset and good luck on ranking ^_^

Lally

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Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

Lally 2012-12-07T08:59:40+00:00

XinCrin wrote:
Hi Lally , really I Love your map

[Normal]

• 00:13:577 (1) Consider adding 3 or 4 inherited point that begins to reduce the volume of spinner slowly because the song like that down the volume
done
• 00:20:223 (4) The shape of this slider as this symmetrical and not going well with your patterns straight and circular sliders .
Use the sliders creation system with only three points
done u.ù
• 00:22:808 (3) Maybe this circle might be a bit hard to find for beginners because they do not have a diff. easy, try to move away to avoid being blocked by the previous hitburst hmm i dunt really know but for the moment i keep it
• 00:24:654 (5) Same , use the system of three points , looks better yap XD when i mapped it the system existed not XD
• 00:32:039 (3) This way I feel like a little ugly and very random, so do not you like ?, in my opinion looks much better
did a better slider <3
• 01:06:749 - 01:28:904 Prefer you to reduce the volume to 60% because in this part the music sounds lower and not as strong as in the choir done
• 01:09:703 (1) You could do it some other way? , I see a bit random, just a 3-point slider you could make the most beautiful
• 01:00:133 Unsnapped Break , Fix it , Move to 01:00:103 done i hope
• 02:01:029 (2) Move this circle to x:140 y:152 because this slider end : 01:59:552 (2) This above this circle, and the slider hitsburst hides the circle fixed
• 02:22:077 (1) This slider you had lost the rhythm , I prefer to follow the rhythm you were having
hmm i dunno i think about but i like this part for now no changes
• 02:36:847 (1) Try to give this way a better pattern will continue and become more funny and cute
[Insane]

• 00:18:654 (2) Delete this note because no follow the music and also when the play does not sense the rhythm and made me very boring yap you're right removed
• 00:27:608 (1) I'm not sure if you should remove the NC that I leave to your decision
• Change the position of the slider because the slider is touching above and also this is ugly when you play, considers move this slider to x:144 y:224

i can't find this point >.<
• 01:28:904 (3) Because the volume came down to 10% ? Increase the volume to 40% and adds a soft finish to the start of the slider as it follows the musicok done
• 01:30:381 (1) Add NC to be consistent with what you mentioned before or just do not do and follow what I told you before 00:27:608 (1)
• 02:07:491 Unsnapped Break , Please Fix this i dunno if i fixed it or not i tryed o.o i ask you in game again if i did it right ò3ò
• 02:27:985 (1) Place an NC, because your patterns are not long combos, but short added :3

Sorry for my poor mod

Good Luck <3
ty for yout hel was very helpfull <3

jonathanlfj's mod

jonathanlfj wrote:
Hi modding upon request
this song made me lol the whole time i was listening to it

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
all fine, slider multiplier looks kinda scary though o3o why?

[Normal]
00:21:331 (5) - clap done
00:48:286 (4) - 2 grid down done
01:09:703 (1) - is that very loud green section necessary? i think using a finish or simply leave it at the same volume is more reasonable fixed with lover volume
01:18:565 (1) - add finish on head? done
01:39:243 (2) - finish on end done
02:01:029 (2) - this overlap with 01:59:552 (2) looks a bit ugly due to the low ar, consider moving this to somewhere else fixed
02:29:462 (3,1) - placing two repeat sliders beside each other with different number of repeats is pretty tricky on normal, consider splitting the first one into repeat slider + note changed u.u
02:50:879 (1,2) - try this, and add finish to the end of 02:52:356 (2)
SPOILER
yap done

[Insane]
when i was checking clap consistency i was actually moving my body XD i really lol'd Gabe did a good work with hitsounding i have really much to thatnk him :3
00:34:255 (3,4,5,6) - center these on the y-axis ok
01:12:288 (3) - clap on start ok
01:30:381 (2) - add NC here and take off NC at 01:31:120 (1) to follow the NC pattern u did before the first kiai done
01:47:367 (1,2) - stacking these perfectly seems to have better aesthetics and playability imo (if you agree then bring 01:49:583 (3,4) closer for equal spacing) i like it atm no changes but i think about
01:59:552 (5) - clap on start ok
02:03:614 (1) - 1 grid right ok
02:05:091 (1,2) - ^ ok
03:02:695 (1) - take off NC, or move this NC to 03:02:879 (2) instead, looks awkward on the last note of a triplet stacked under a slider yap all fixed >.<

Thats it, great mapset and good luck on ranking ^_^

ty very much >u<

updated normal and Insane :3 ty all
XinCrin your mod don't wanted to be in a box o3o

XinCrin

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XinCrin 2012-12-07T12:03:11+00:00

Lally wrote:
XinCrin your mod don't wanted to be in a box o3o

Why ? o . O

Lally

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Topic Starter

Lally 2012-12-07T12:34:43+00:00

i dunno o3o maybe to many boxes owo dunno @3@

Lucyii

588 posts

Joined March 2012

Lucyii 2012-12-08T13:53:13+00:00

[Normal]
00:34:255 (3) - Brutto, fallo curvo
00:35:363 (2) - ^
00:37:947 (3) - Lol bruttissimo da vedere, cerca di cambiarlo in qualche modo. Anche così se ti va bene: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/519065
01:06:749 (1) - Rifallo con il nuovo algoritmo che c'è ora che ti esce mooolto meglio
01:24:473 (1) - Allora, è difficile da spiegare lol. Insomma, fallo in modo che la sliderball non "faccia il giro", se non mi hai capito dimmelo in game lol
01:26:320 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/519072
01:38:505 (1,2,3) - Anche questi da rifare che ora ti escono meglio.
01:46:259 (2,1) - ^
01:58:814 (1,2) - ^
02:32:416 (7) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/519081
02:39:062 (4) - Dritto?
03:01:956 (5) - Rifallo.
03:02:695 (1) - Fallo finire in 03:04:910

[Insane]
00:16:531 (1) - Da rifare
00:18:746 (2) - ^
00:22:439 (3) - ^
00:23:177 (5,7) - ^
00:25:393 (3) - ^
00:26:500 (5,6) - ^
00:27:239 (7) - Difficile da leggere, mettici due beat al posto dello slider
00:29:824 (5) - Da rifare
00:31:116 (2,3,4,5,6) - Lol pattern storto, fallo bene
01:08:965 (5) - Togli un reverse e metti un beat stackato alla fine dello slider
01:12:288 (3) - Da rifare
01:23:735 (7) - ^
01:25:212 (2,3,4) - Pattern fatto male, miglioralo
01:43:674 (7) - Da rifare
01:55:306 (4) - Fallo meglio
01:55:675 (5) - Dritto
02:00:291 (1,2,3,4,5) - Da rifare
02:45:709 (4) - ^
02:57:525 (6) - ^
02:59:002 (4) - ^
03:01:956 (2) - ^
03:03:433 (3) - ^

Scusa se ho moddato quasi solo gli slider ma il resto va bene così secondo me.

Lally

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Lally 2012-12-08T15:31:29+00:00

grazie della mod sistemo piu tardi <3

how you said in irc you didn't mod Tea's diff because you didn't find anything ty :3
edit:

Kiyro mod

Kiyro wrote:
[Normal]
00:34:255 (3) - Brutto, fallo curvo fixato
00:35:363 (2) - ^ idem
00:37:947 (3) - Lol bruttissimo da vedere, cerca di cambiarlo in qualche modo. Anche così se ti va bene: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/519065 no perche se no toccherebbe il drain life o3o almeno credo ed è una cosa unrankabile da quanto ne so o3o
01:06:749 (1) - Rifallo con il nuovo algoritmo che c'è ora che ti esce mooolto meglio done
01:24:473 (1) - Allora, è difficile da spiegare lol. Insomma, fallo in modo che la sliderball non "faccia il giro", se non mi hai capito dimmelo in game lol l'ho fatto in un solo slider curvo non mi piaceva quello slider o3o
01:26:320 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/519072 fixato in un altro modo
01:38:505 (1,2,3) - Anche questi da rifare che ora ti escono meglio. done
01:46:259 (2,1) - ^ questi no
01:58:814 (1,2) - ^ non ne vedo necessità
02:32:416 (7) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/519081 fixato in un altro modo
02:39:062 (4) - Dritto? ja
03:01:956 (5) - Rifallo. megusta quindi no
03:02:695 (1) - Fallo finire in 03:04:910 no perche finisce come nella insane voglio che le diff finiscano nello stesso punto.

[Insane]
00:16:531 (1) - Da rifare kay
00:18:746 (2) - ^ fatto
00:22:439 (3) - ^ non ne vedo il motivo anche se sono fatti con 4 white point sono degli slider fatti bene
00:23:177 (5,7) - ^ same^
00:25:393 (3) - ^ no changes
00:26:500 (5,6) - ^ nope
00:27:239 (7) - Difficile da leggere, mettici due beat al posto dello slider non ne vedo necessità
00:29:824 (5) - Da rifare fixato
00:31:116 (2,3,4,5,6) - Lol pattern storto, fallo bene è fatto apposta per essere stackkato con il prossimo slider se noti
01:08:965 (5) - Togli un reverse e metti un beat stackato alla fine dello slider no o3o non trovo un motivo valido ma non mi piace semplicemente :V
01:12:288 (3) - Da rifare ok
01:23:735 (7) - ^ fixed
01:25:212 (2,3,4) - Pattern fatto male, miglioralo fixato un po
01:43:674 (7) - Da rifare ok
01:55:306 (4) - Fallo meglio fixato
01:55:675 (5) - Dritto no perche ho fixato in un modo differente lo slider di prima e quindi questo rimane cosi
02:00:291 (1,2,3,4,5) - Da rifare no perche gli ho fixato di recente e non vedo nulla di male
02:45:709 (4) - ^ non ne vedo necessità
02:57:525 (6) - ^ fixato
02:59:002 (4) - ^ kay
03:01:956 (2) - ^ no
03:03:433 (3) - ^e no o3o
Scusa se ho moddato quasi solo gli slider ma il resto va bene così secondo me.

mi è stato molto utile grazie della mod :3

update ^_^)/ need to update Tea's diff, i'm going to do that later :3

Genshin

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Genshin 2012-12-10T02:54:33+00:00

hey sto BG si sposa da dio col mio section pass

Lally

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Lally 2012-12-10T13:08:44+00:00

LOOOOOOOL XD ci sta da dio XD

riffy

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riffy 2012-12-10T13:47:27+00:00

hi~

quick re-check. I can write an ultra-picky mod but I won't. it's your map and i'll check only for BIG mistaes.

[General]

only two tags? add members? Jeffrey Jey Maurizio Lobina Gabry Ponte it will help us to find your map

[Normal]

AR is a bit too slow. I'd try AR 4 instead. (OD/HD + 1, too)
00:16:531 (1,2,3) - overlapped with spinners hitburst! May become a problem for EASIEST diff in mapset.
00:27:239 - this break feels awkward. At least add reverse to 00:26:131 (3) - try to avoid big empty space
01:54:383 - le wid 1/2s apper here. Why there wasn't any in previous parts? :V Try to be more consistent!
02:46:448 (3) - not during kiai! You can be creative here, don't kill your creativity with dull sliders! :3

[TeA's Hard]

02:20:784 (4,5,6,7,8) - try to make star-shaped-patterns jumpy? Just to make diff funnier.

me gusta el diff.

[Insane]

01:03:057 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - they're not even close to screen center during testplay! fix it
02:25:031 (1) - totally unexpected and feels weird. I'd replace it with stream. usuually you don't use this kind of sliders with SO MANY repeats.

just work a bit more on your patterns. It's pretty rankable.

~~~~~~

doesn't worth kd because it wasn't even a complete mod. >.</

Lally

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Lally 2012-12-10T16:09:01+00:00

-Bakari- wrote:
hi~
hi C:
quick re-check. I can write an ultra-picky mod but I won't. it's your map and i'll check only for BIG mistaes.

[General]
only two tags? add members? Jeffrey Jey Maurizio Lobina Gabry Ponte it will help us to find your map
but but i dunno what to add D: really
[Normal]
AR is a bit too slow. I'd try AR 4 instead.no ar changes (OD/HD + 1, too) ok
00:16:531 (1,2,3) - overlapped with spinners hitburst! May become a problem for EASIEST diff in mapset. hope fixed
00:27:239 - this break feels awkward. At least add reverse to 00:26:131 (3) - try to avoid big empty space done
01:54:383 - le wid 1/2s apper here. Why there wasn't any in previous parts? :V Try to be more consistent! this part is different because after the 1st kiai time i put a break and here after the 2nd kiai (where music is the same as this break) i decided to do it a little bit different like the other parts
02:46:448 (3) - not during kiai! You can be creative here, don't kill your creativity with dull sliders! :3
changed

[TeA's Hard]
02:20:784 (4,5,6,7,8) - try to make star-shaped-patterns jumpy? Just to make diff funnier. ai ai u.u

me gusta el diff.
[Insane]
01:03:057 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - they're not even close to screen center during testplay! fix it i know and that is sad but this is because of stack leniency ;w;
02:25:031 (1) - totally unexpected and feels weird. I'd replace it with stream. usuually you don't use this kind of sliders with SO MANY repeats. streaaaaaam o3ob

just work a bit more on your patterns. It's pretty rankable.
~~~~~~

doesn't worth kd because it wasn't even a complete mod. >.</

ty >u< one more time <3

jonathanlfj wrote:
TeA asked me to check his mod so i do it for he
[TeA's hard]
consider utilizing the custom normal-clap in this diff more~
00:47:917 (7) - stack this on 00:48:286 (8) is better flow wise imo i think is ok like now
01:09:703 (1) - same as easy fixed
01:45:705 (1,2,3,4,5) - star can look better, its kinda squished atm fixed
02:19:123 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - move the whole combo down 1 grid for symmetry on x-axis ok
03:06:387 (1) - remove the NC, kinda makes the circle flow look weird; or you can try this
SPOILER
i like it how it is

and update <3

Genshin

228 posts

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Genshin 2012-12-11T15:09:01+00:00

e moddiamo:

[Easy]

OD calalo a 2

00:17:269 (3) - fixa il blanket cosi' >

68,136,17269,2,0,B|40:180|56:228,1,90.000000596046,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

00:23:177 (4) - stessa cosa qui >

366,185,23177,2,0,B|350:129|282:133,3,90.000000596046,2|8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

00:28:347 (1) - inverti gli hitsound
00:31:301 (2) - il finish mettilo all-inizio dello slider
00:32:039 (3) - il quadratino centrale (rosso) 2 grid in giu'
00:34:255 (3) - stessa cosa
00:35:363 (2,3) - qui invece mettilo alla fine dello slider anziche' sul 3
00:37:947 (3) - fixato pure questo >

44,60,37947,2,0,P|4:124|72:180|72:180|4:232|44:300,1,270.000001788138

il resto e' okay

[TeA's Hard]

nulla da dire

[Insane]
allora:

pls od 6 ç_ç

00:45:886 (2) - questo nn stackarlo con lo slider successivo, mettilo un pò prima, tipo qui: http://puu.sh/1zL5c
01:30:381 (1) - fixed

342,252,90381,6,0,B|256:289|135:236,1,180.000000596046,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

il resto è ok

[Commento]

tirando le somme, la mappa e' pronta, ho fixato qualche cosina qui e la in fatto di estetica degli sliders. a mio parere potrebbe esser rankata tranquillamente.

がんばって！！！

Lally

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Lally 2012-12-11T16:33:31+00:00

uuuh 100 post o3o

fixo tutto più tardi grazie <3

edit:

Genshin

Genshin wrote:
e moddiamo:

[Easy]

OD calalo a 2

00:17:269 (3) - fixa il blanket cosi' >
68,136,17269,2,0,B|40:180|56:228,1,90.000000596046,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
k
00:23:177 (4) - stessa cosa qui >
366,185,23177,2,0,B|350:129|282:133,3,90.000000596046,2|8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
k
00:28:347 (1) - inverti gli hitsoundk
00:31:301 (2) - il finish mettilo all-inizio dello sliderk
00:32:039 (3) - il quadratino centrale (rosso) 2 grid in giu'k
00:34:255 (3) - stessa cosak
00:35:363 (2,3) - qui invece mettilo alla fine dello slider anziche' sul 3k
00:37:947 (3) - fixato pure questo >
44,60,37947,2,0,P|4:124|72:180|72:180|4:232|44:300,1,270.000001788138
k

il resto e' okay

[TeA's Hard]

nulla da dire \o3o/

[Insane]
allora:

pls od 6 ç_ç how i expained you i think is to low for a insane it's good atm :3

00:45:886 (2) - questo nn stackarlo con lo slider successivo, mettilo un pò prima, tipo qui: http://puu.sh/1zL5c i don't like it i keep it how it's atm :3
01:30:381 (1) - fixed
342,252,90381,6,0,B|256:289|135:236,1,180.000000596046,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
k

il resto è ok

[Commento]

tirando le somme, la mappa e' pronta, ho fixato qualche cosina qui e la in fatto di estetica degli sliders. a mio parere potrebbe esser rankata tranquillamente.

がんばって！！！

grazie mille \:3/

update :3

XinCrin

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XinCrin 2012-12-12T01:32:35+00:00

Go ! Lally ><

Genshin

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Genshin 2012-12-12T17:54:54+00:00

e bollatela ç_ç

Flask

Beatmap Nominator

3,473 posts

Joined July 2011

Flask 2012-12-13T14:03:53+00:00

Hey MOVE YOUR BODY !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Mod Request from Nightcore Modding Queue :3

Red: Must be fixed.
Blue: Highly recommended.
Black: Just suggestion/nazi stuff.

[General]

Clear o3o/

[

Normal]

Well I agree with bakari D: AR+1 fits the SV/song/diff best imo
00:21:700 (1) - (end) missing clap :3
00:31:301 (2) - (end) ^
Well, I'm not sure you're missing claps on purpose or not, so I won't write anymore missing clap or something balabala check by yourself -w-
00:29:085 (2) - Remove the clap at the sliderbody, it's annoying
00:48:286 (1) - (end) finish makes me feel annoying and unfit >:
01:14:134 (1) - what, wrong spacing makes the beginner confuse >: please change it
01:46:259 (2,1) - These sliders is pretty ugly than other sliders. Remake them by using stupid new slider system ~
Check the hitsounds :v!

[

TeA's Hard]

This diff needs AudioLead In for 500mms (even you can set 750).
00:51:056 (2,3,4) - Try to make a circle like this by doing copying (2) and rotate 120°
02:43:124 (1,2) - why not use 1.0 DS to prove this is 1/1 rhythm? It makes me confuse or even the players since I don't see you reduce the spacing at the same part before :v
The placement is great and clear, but no claps or something? Really empty \--/

[

Insane]

00:23:177 (5,7) - Remake these sliders by using new slider system is nicer to me o-o
00:26:500 (5,6,7) - ^
00:26:500 (5,7) - please do not overlap these sliders ;; you can NC here or move (7) down/up few girds
01:12:288 (3,4,5,6,7) - Use 1.0 DS to them. It's like 1/2 now o3o
03:04:172 (3,4,5,6,7) - Make a polygon placements? I like them, and your placement now is a bit ugly p3p

Sorry I can't only find these few things, star~~~~

Lally

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Topic Starter

Lally 2012-12-13T14:23:23+00:00

ty for your moe mod :3 i'll fix all later <3

edit:

flask

Flask wrote:
Hey MOVE YOUR BODY !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Mod Request from Nightcore Modding Queue :3

Red: Must be fixed.
Blue: Highly recommended.
Black: Just suggestion/nazi stuff.

[General]
Clear o3o/
[ Normal]
Well I agree with bakari D: AR+1 fits the SV/song/diff best imok u.u
00:21:700 (1) - (end) missing clap :3k
00:31:301 (2) - (end) ^k
Well, I'm not sure you're missing claps on purpose or not, so I won't write anymore missing clap or something balabala check by yourself -w- will recheck >.<
00:29:085 (2) - Remove the clap at the sliderbody, it's annoying ups D:
00:48:286 (1) - (end) finish makes me feel annoying and unfit >:k
01:14:134 (1) - what, wrong spacing makes the beginner confuse >: please change it >.< fixed
01:46:259 (2,1) - These sliders is pretty ugly than other sliders. Remake them by using stupid new slider system ~done o3o
Check the hitsounds :v!
[ TeA's Hard]
This diff needs AudioLead In for 500mms (even you can set 750). will fix it later
00:51:056 (2,3,4) - Try to make a circle like this by doing copying (2) and rotate 120° k
02:43:124 (1,2) - why not use 1.0 DS to prove this is 1/1 rhythm? It makes me confuse or even the players since I don't see you reduce the spacing at the same part before :vit was my mistake from prev mod ò3ò fixed
The placement is great and clear, but no claps or something? Really empty \--/
[ Insane]
00:23:177 (5,7) - Remake these sliders by using new slider system is nicer to me o-o o3o k
00:26:500 (5,6,7) - ^ k
00:26:500 (5,7) - please do not overlap these sliders ;; you can NC here or move (7) down/up few girdschanged a little bit the pattern
01:12:288 (3,4,5,6,7) - Use 1.0 DS to them. It's like 1/2 now o3o fixed
03:04:172 (3,4,5,6,7) - Make a polygon placements? I like them, and your placement now is a bit ugly p3pchanged this pattern it looks more cuter now o3o
Sorry I can't only find these few things, star~~~~

ty for your help *-* and star <3

update

Gero

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Joined March 2012

Gero 2012-12-16T21:08:52+00:00

Mod Request :3

Okay Movew your body ~o3o~

[Normal]

01:14:134 (1) - This part can put it elsewhere as new players will be very confusing

01:13:396 (3) - this circle being covered by 01:11:919 (3) - this slider

01:21:150 (4) - You can move this circle to X: 260 Y: 279 gives consistency to your patterns :3 since they form a straight line on these notes 01:21:519 (1,2) -

01:38:505 (1,2) - these sliders you could make them more circular :< look better so

02:39:801 (5) - note no snap distance, please review it

I hope to serve you my little mod , is all I found I :3! I want to see it ranked: < TWT

Buona fortuna Lally O3O

Lally

3,176 posts

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Topic Starter

Lally 2012-12-17T19:06:54+00:00

i'll fix all later C: ty

Kawayi Rika

osu! Alumni

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Kawayi Rika 2012-12-21T14:26:15+00:00

Hi ~ Lally ~

Mod time for my Queue ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[Insane]

00:31:301 (3) - If you make jump to here is better,follow with lyrics.
00:33:516 (1,2) - Why not make a symmetry to here?
00:48:286 (1,3) - ^
01:50:690 (2,4) - ^
01:54:014 (1,3) - ^
03:04:172 (3,4,5,6) - ^
00:39:978 (2,3,4) - Move 1 grid down,symmetry with 00:39:055 (7).
00:50:502 (4) - The slider isn't symmetry.
01:06:195 (2) - Increase volume at least 30% pls.
01:14:873 (6) - Slider repeat point hidden by 01:13:765 (3)'s hitburst,so pls don't stack these,it's unrankable.
01:18:104 (2) - Remove this circle,sound much better.

[TeA's Hard]

Oh,I love this diff,Good job :3
OD+1 is better.
Add a AudioLeadIn to 500 in this diff pls.
00:51:979 - Increase volume and change to fisish.
02:37:401 (2) - I guess you missing this,move 1 grid down pls.

[Normal]

01:09:703 - This finish sound really noisy.
01:39:982 (3) - The slider isn't symmetry.
01:54:014 - Add finish,sound much better.
03:00:110 - Missing Add clap to here.
03:00:848 - ^
03:01:587 - ^
03:02:325 - ^

OK ~ Hope this can help you ~

Good luck with rank ~

Kryptogram

600 posts

Joined December 2010

Kryptogram 2012-12-21T19:35:44+00:00

Thanks for those who have modded >.< ~ Fixed all thanks Kawayi (Also added claps)

SPOILER

osu file format v11

[General]
AudioFilename: Eiffel 65 - Move Your Body (Nightcore Mix).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 500
PreviewTime: 89833
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Move Your Body (Nightcore Mix)
TitleUnicode:Move Your Body (Nightcore Mix)
Artist:Eiffel 65
ArtistUnicode:Eiffel 65
Creator:Lally
Version:TeA's Hard
Source:
Tags:remix [Te][Amo]
BeatmapID:195834
BeatmapSetID:59602

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
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//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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TheVileOne

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TheVileOne 2012-12-24T20:17:58+00:00

I've finally have some time to manage my mod requests. I'm sorry for the huge delay. I've had to deal with finals.

Normal

There seems to be multiple imperfect blankets in this map. Example of a blanket http://puu.sh/1EP1I If it ends up uneven then it doesn't look good. You should make it so that blankets are the same distance are an equal distance apart at every point of the slider from the object in the center.

Hitsounds are missing in areas. I tried to suggest ways to make it better, but it was difficult to determine exactly what kind of hitsound style you were using when this song could be hitsounded in so many different ways. I think there are too many finishes in spots, but I will leave that mod for the recheck.

Off blankets
00:16:900 (2,3) - Move 3 to x 69 y 131 to fix it. This will offset the transition into the next slider/pattern. you can fix this by moving the start of this combo to compensate for the change in position. (Move 00:16:531 (1,2,3) - until spacing is the way it was before).
00:21:700 (1,2,3,4) - (The center circle is not perfect on both sliders). Try to get the blanket perfect. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/540311
00:28:347 (1,2) - Blanket is slightly off here. Moving 2 to x 417 y 243 seems to fix it. (The gap after can be resolved in different ways.)

00:30:562 (1) - I think i prefer a curved slider here. http://puu.sh/1EPmr
00:36:470 (1,2,3) - Grid snap off, make this spacing exactly 1.0 or 1.01. Equal spacing will make things more uniform even if it is barely noticeable. The blanket at 2,3 is also slightly off, but i dislike the shape of 3. Personally I think it's too long, but if you must remain consistent, it's shape is not exactly like 00:32:039 (3) - . You should replace it with a copy of this slider rotated 90 degrees clockwise, although that creates further note conflicts. Do you realize how much nicer this looks and plays if you reduced this to the long white tick and add a note on the dee sound? It would even make a nice square pattern.
00:46:809 (3,1) - Blanket is off. (May want to consider breaking distance snap just slightly to fix this one. Although it's not terribly important that this one be fixed if you don't want to fix it.
01:08:226 (3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Low on hitsounds. I suggest using claps to create a beat here.
01:08:226 (3,4) - Ends could be claps, because start started with a clap on 2.
01:11:180 (2,3) - ^
01:12:657 (1,3) - Claps here too, because it sounds better on 1,3 at this point and you follow 1,3 later. I highly suggest having some form of hitsounds here.
01:14:134 (1) - I would have claps on both ends of these. This is nightcore, the hitsound rhythm shouldn't have odd holes in it.
01:19:673 (2) - You should place this exactly where 5 ends.
01:20:042 (3) - I suggest moving the middle slider point more to the left, so that the curve doesn't start so far to the right. I advise you to do this, because your pattern is intended to be a right-corner transition from the top, so there shouldn't be as wide of a curve here. Something like this http://puu.sh/1EQaQ Adjust spacings as necessary.
01:21:150 (4) - Clap? I rather like the double claps. Another alternative is adapting more 2,4 here 01:21:519 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I believe this hitsound gap needs to be filled, because nightcore.
01:25:950 (2,3) - Blanket is imperfect
01:38:505 (1,2) - Softer curves look better IMO. http://puu.sh/1EQk7 So much nicer.
01:39:982 (3) - Just need a clap on the end of this
01:57:337 (3) - New combo.
02:19:123 (1) - I think this should start with a hitsound either finish or clap.
02:36:108 (5,1) - Blanket could be better but it's not that big of a deal.
02:37:955 (2) - Clap on start
02:39:801 (5) - New verse > new combo. also spiral could be better. However I can't help you figure out how to fix it. If you agree, try asking a MAT for help.

tea's Hard

Soft hitsound start was less engaging than the custom hitsounds that were in Easy. That isn't such a big deal, but when you change to Normal hitsounds, you don't use claps. Everything is the same unhitsounded rhythm.You need more rhythm than this.

00:09:330 (2) - This is a weird shape. It just should be changed to something that better reflects the shapes you are using. Perhaps just not have a slider here. Notes are more flexible.
00:17:269 (4,5,6) - Spacing difference bothers me.
00:19:485 (3,4) - Uneven blanket doesn't look good. Same for the mirror. 1.04 should be the distance on all edges of the blanket.
00:25:762 (4,5,6,7) - Why is the spacing increasing with every note here? 00:26:685 (7,1) - And you lower the snap afterwards? Don't lower the snap just to start a pattern in a certain area of the screen. 1.0 is better.
00:27:239 (1,2,3,4) - This is too loud. I think you should lower the volume here to complement the change in volume in the song. Doesn't need to be that drastic (10-20% would do)
00:28:347 (1) - Why do you not have a clap on the end of this? (and subsequent hitsound pattern?)
00:44:040 (5,6,7) - Spacing.
01:00:841 - You should start mapping here. It's weird when you start in the middle of a measure. It would also make this pattern 01:01:580 (1,2,3) - look less random (not the kind of pattern you should start a sequence with)
01:08:411 (2,3) - Two sliders is a bit boring IMO. It's also not rhythmically perfect. I came up with this http://puu.sh/1FCL2 2 is a repeat slider. If you don't like feel free to ignore.
01:15:980 (2) - This seems to play more naturally if it were moved to the right more. It doesn't look good in it's current position. It should be moved around x 391 y 254 IMO.
01:20:411 (5,6) - Ugly blanket, please make it better.
01:24:473 (1,2) - Personally I dislike when you use these types of sliders for symmetry. I just don't like the style. There's nothing technically wrong, but meh.
01:33:705 (4,5) - Should be exactly 1.0.
02:19:123 (1) - This seems to play better broken up into a slider note pattern. Just an opinion.
02:23:369 (4,5,6,7,8) - Just bland monotoned hits. A nightcore song shouldn't sound this repetitive. 5,6,7 could make a single slider to break up the beat. I suggest doing so. (Hitsounds would also be an improvement).
02:24:292 (1,2) - I expected more of a mirror here. At least make the slider look similar if you're not going to have a mirror.
02:38:324 (4,5,6) - Please fix these blankets
02:43:124 (1) - again i don't know why there isn't a clap here and a clap rhythm for that matter.
02:46:263 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't think increasing the spacing is necessary and the spacing isn't consistent.

Insane
00:16:631 Unsnapped line
01:03:066 ^
01:03:804 ^
01:06:175 ^

00:35:547 (4,5) - I expected a larger gap here, because it follows those stack jumps.
00:35:732 (5,1) - This spacing would be better increased too.
01:06:195 - Volume lowers for no reason
01:06:934 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - I don't like the clustering effect and the close flow here. Consider unstacking that slider, and then having some form of jump section here 01:07:488 (5,1,2) - so that the notes aren't so close together.
01:11:919 (1,2,3) - Isn't straight :/
01:16:719 - It plays more naturally when there's a note here.
01:22:627 - Why did you skip this note?
01:41:459 (1,2,3) - transition isn't straight.
02:36:478 (4) - Stack is really displacing this. You might want to move the whole stack lower so that it appears at about the same level as the other notes. Testplay to see the difference.
02:37:401 (1,2) - Gap between these sliders is wider than the other sliders.
03:00:295 (4,5) - Why is the spacing different here?

Conclusion

I will shoot a star, but Tea's difficulty just needs a more involved hitsound pattern.

Last edited by TheVileOne 2012-12-26T22:26:39+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Lally

3,176 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

Lally 2012-12-25T23:39:08+00:00

i'll fix all in this days ty for your help :3

don't mod this map atm :3

edit:
[Normal]
@Rika: fixed all
@TheVileOne: fixed all only this not:

02:39:801 (5) - New verse > new combo fixed. also spiral could be better. However I can't help you figure out how to fix it. If you agree, try asking a MAT for help.

[Hard]
@Rika: tea fixed all i think
@TheVileOne:

00:09:330 (2) - This is a weird shape. It just should be changed to something that better reflects the shapes you are using. Perhaps just not have a slider here. Notes are more flexible.not fixed because i think it's ok atm
00:17:269 (4,5,6) - Spacing difference bothers me.spacing is ok here

[Insane]
@Rika:
01:18:104 (2) - Remove this circle,sound much better. it will be difficult to read it
@TheVileOne:

00:35:547 (4,5) - I expected a larger gap here, because it follows those stack jumps. what should i do here?
01:06:934 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - I don't like the clustering effect and the close flow here. Consider unstacking that slider, and then having some form of jump section here 01:07:488 (5,1,2) - so that the notes aren't so close together.dunno about this like it somehow
01:22:627 - Why did you skip this note?i follow the vocal here

update <3

Roddie

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1,468 posts

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Roddie 2013-01-04T00:50:36+00:00

IRC modding for Normal, TeA's Hard, and Insane. Here's the chatlog below.

Chatlog

02:47 Roddie: hey
02:47 Lally: ya? :3 hai
02:47 Roddie: I wanted to let you know that gabe wanted me to mod your map
02:48 Roddie: so, i'll start later today when I'm ready
02:48 Lally: uh >.< thats nice but i have 2 mod to fix before ;3; i was very busy in last week
02:48 Lally: if you give me 1 hour i fix they :3 
02:49 Roddie: alright, let know 'till then
02:49 Lally: ok ty >.< very nice from you and from gabe :3
02:50 Roddie: no problem
04:23 Lally: pokes o3o
04:51 Roddie: hi
04:52 Lally: :3 hi i finished to fix the last mods u.u
04:53 Roddie: ah okay
04:53 Lally: ^_^ it's really nice from you çwç <3
05:23 Roddie: do you have time for irc modding
05:23 Roddie: ?
05:23 Lally: sure :3
05:25 Roddie: we'll start off on normal
05:27 Roddie: 00:17:269 (3)-I'm pretty sure you forgot to add a clap on the end
05:28 Lally: added, hitsounding on normal is not so nice :/ it's my first map even if i worked much on it still have problems here :/
05:28 Lally: :/
05:29 Roddie: its cool, i'll take a listen to them as we progress
05:29 Roddie: anyway
05:30 Lally: uhu
05:30 Roddie: 00:35:363 (2)-forgot to add a clap on the beginning here, huh?
05:31 Lally: added
05:31 Roddie: 00:36:101 (3)-A clap is missing here
05:32 Lally: added
05:33 Roddie: 00:36:470 (1)-A clap is missing on the repeat
05:33 Lally: added
05:34 Roddie: 00:37:578 (2)-A finish doesn't sound fitting honestly. I suggest replacing that with a clap
05:34 Lally: added clap
05:34 Roddie: 00:37:947 (3, 4)-Both slider ends are missing claps, deary ):
05:34 Lally: added >.<
05:35 Roddie: 00:40:163 (3)-A finish on the beginning sounds a lot better than one the end. switch them
05:36 Lally: ok
05:41 Roddie: hm. actually, the slider I pointed out from 00:40:163, you can leave it back the way it was
05:41 Lally: oh ok i change it back then
05:42 Roddie: there are sliders that have finishes on the end points like that which sounds good really haha
05:42 Lally: ^_^ better so then
05:43 Roddie:  in the 2nd kiai time, there are notes that do need claps ):
05:43 Roddie: there are a bunch
05:44 Lally: hmm try to use more now
05:47 Lally: i added 01:31:489 (3)- 01:32:966 (2)- 01:34:443 (2)- 01:35:920 (2)-  for now
05:47 Lally: 01:39:243 (2)- removed on the beginn
05:48 Roddie: 01:48:844 (6)-A new combo would be fitting
05:48 Lally: yup added
05:49 Roddie: 02:30:939 (1)-How about a finish on the beginning? :D
05:50 Lally: ya :3
05:56 Roddie: 02:39:801 (1)-Try adding a finish on the end and tell me what you think
05:57 Lally: yup it should be a finish there 
05:57 Lally: ah btw one thing:
05:57 Lally: 02:39:801 (5)- New verse > new combo fixed. also spiral could be better. However I can't help you figure out how to fix it. If you agree, try asking a MAT for help.
05:57 Lally: to fix it. If you agree, try asking a MAT for help.
05:57 Lally: froma a other mod
05:57 Lally: what do you think about
05:59 Roddie: oh that slider
05:59 Roddie: do you want it to go around like a circle?
06:00 Lally: not relly i wanted to do it like a you do a spinner   not like rotate a circle o.ò
06:01 Lally: but i was a little bit scary to place it more in the centre because it may touch 02:37:955 (2)-
06:01 Roddie: ah, the swirl, right?
06:02 Lally: yap
06:15 Roddie: okay, I think this should do the trick
06:15 Lally: hmm
06:15 Roddie: http://puu.sh/1J8Pw
06:16 Lally: oi oi can you gimme the code? ç_ç
06:17 Roddie: sure hold on
06:17 Lally: oh ty C:
06:20 Roddie: http://puu.sh/1J8XH
06:22 Lally: ty <3
06:22 Roddie: yup
06:23 Lally: hmm have some problem with this code
06:23 Roddie: yeah something is going on here ):
06:24 Lally: http://puu.sh/1J94a ._.
06:25 Roddie: the vertical bar is missing
06:25 Roddie: many of them
06:25 Roddie: in the code lol
06:25 Roddie: its okay, i'll get that fixed
06:25 Lally: i can fix it alone i think
06:26 Lally: not XD
06:26 Roddie: try it now
06:26 Roddie: http://puu.sh/1J97t
06:29 Lally: ok have it now :3
06:29 Lally: and added finish at the end
06:36 Roddie: we're done with normal
06:36 Roddie: moving on to Insane
06:36 Lally: ok :3
06:36 Lally: oh you can do hard too because tea is much afk
06:36 Lally: i'll mod for him since log time >.<
06:36 Lally: he is very busy ;3;
06:36 Roddie: ah okay
06:36 Roddie: I understand
06:37 Roddie: we'll start on hard then
06:37 Lally: ok :3
06:43 Roddie: 01:34:812 (1)-I don't think a new combo here is needed imo.
06:44 Lally: on the next slider right?
06:45 Lally: i added nc here 01:35:551- 
06:45 Roddie: yes, that too
06:45 Roddie: i was just about to say lol
06:45 Lally: u.u
06:48 Roddie: okay, moving on to insane now
06:48 Lally: ok :3
06:56 Roddie: 02:01:768 (5)-I think you forgot to add a clap on the beginning
06:56 Lally: added
06:58 Roddie: 00:38:963 (x)-Add a note here. that well, it'll form up to be a note triple. trust me, its going to sound good
06:59 Lally: added :3
07:00 Roddie: one last thought I'd like to share
07:00 Roddie: a letterbox during the breaks just looks bad no offense
07:00 Roddie: its probably a good idea to remove it
07:00 Lally: ok i remove it now from all diff
07:00 Roddie: okay good
07:01 Lally: ok removed from all diff
07:02 Roddie: and that's it
07:02 Lally: ^_^
07:02 Lally: good i update now
07:02 Roddie: okay