Punishment:
00:28:17 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,1,1) - Need to be moved 1/4 earlier
The 1/3 large notes aren't actually supposed to be on the 1/3 lines - They should be on the 1/4:

^ Sounds much better
00:28:17 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,1,1) - Need to be moved 1/4 earlier
The 1/3 large notes aren't actually supposed to be on the 1/3 lines - They should be on the 1/4:
^ Sounds much better