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Kawayi Rika

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Topic Starter

Kawayi Rika 2012-10-05T15:50:44+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012년 10월 19일 금요일 at 오전 8:20:51

Artist: Black Raison d'etre
Title: INSIDE IDENTITY (TV Size)
Source: Chu-2 byo demo KOI ga shitai
Tags: Rikka ending cRyo[iceeicee] DarknessAngel tutuhaha Gabe
BPM: 186
Filesize: 17537kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:

cRyo's Insane (5 stars, 339 notes)
D.N.Angel's Hard (4.88 stars, 255 notes)
Gabe's Easy (1.84 stars, 71 notes)
Rika (4.98 stars, 410 notes)
TuNormal (3.62 stars, 116 notes)

Download: Black Raison d'etre - INSIDE IDENTITY (TV Size)
Download: Black Raison d'etre - INSIDE IDENTITY (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 34th Ranked beat map.

Chuunibyou demo Koi ga Shitai! ending,cooooooool song <333

Rika(Insane) by me.

2nd Insane by cRyo[iceeicee].

Hard by DarknessAngel.

Normal by tutuhaha.

Easy by Gabe.

Last edited by Kawayi Rika 2012-10-18T23:28:33+00:00, edited 39 times in total.

[Mahua]

702 posts

Joined November 2010

[Mahua] 2012-10-06T10:45:21+00:00

#1?

Beige

Elite Mapper

2,192 posts

Joined February 2011

Beige 2012-10-06T10:56:09+00:00

Chuu2 so many..!

tutuhaha

3,053 posts

Joined October 2010

tutuhaha 2012-10-07T23:49:28+00:00

osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: Black Raison d'etre HD - INSIDE IDENTITY.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 500
PreviewTime: 57780
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:INSIDE IDENTITY (TV Size)
Artist:Black Raison d'etre
Creator:Kawayi Rika
Version:TuNormal
Source:Chuunibyou demo Koi ga Shitai!
Tags:ending

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.06
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"Black Raison d'etre HD - INSIDE IDENTITY.avi"
0,0,"BG.jpg"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
438,322.58064516129,4,2,1,100,1,0
58341,-100,4,2,1,100,0,1
88018,-100,4,2,1,100,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 153,20,224
Combo2 : 24,162,220
Combo3 : 222,232,32
Combo4 : 209,54,202

[HitObjects]
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272,160,1083,2,0,B|316:188|376:176,1,106
352,280,1728,6,0,B|332:336|264:352|220:332,4,159
256,232,3986,1,0
152,240,4308,2,0,B|148:156|240:120,1,159
316,48,5115,1,0
316,48,5437,1,0
256,192,5518,12,0,6889
256,192,7534,5,0
68,288,8179,2,0,B|52:200|116:136,1,159
104,88,8825,2,0,B|156:120|216:96,1,106
300,52,9470,5,0
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288,260,11405,2,0,B|216:356,1,106
124,308,12050,6,0,B|24:256|40:112,1,212
124,64,13018,2,0,B|176:100,1,53
272,88,13502,2,0,B|324:124,1,53
332,224,13986,1,0
332,224,14308,1,0
348,328,14631,6,0,B|436:300|440:200,4,159
256,136,17212,6,0,B|204:168|192:216,1,106
132,304,17857,2,0,B|52:264|56:152,1,159
84,72,18663,2,0,B|144:72,1,53
208,152,19147,2,0,B|276:152|312:96,2,106
244,252,20115,5,0
280,352,20437,2,0,B|372:348|428:272,2,159
180,320,21728,1,0
180,320,22050,1,0
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72,60,24308,1,0
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108,140,27050,1,0
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228,256,30115,5,0
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452,236,33018,5,0
376,160,33341,1,0
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118,96,39792,1,0
224,116,40115,1,0
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320,128,42534,1,0
236,64,42857,6,0,B|60:64,1,159
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212,220,44308,2,0,B|224:308|308:340|380:316,1,212
436,236,45276,1,0
436,128,45599,5,0
236,64,46244,1,0
68,192,46889,1,0
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172,212,48825,2,0,B|136:128|32:132,2,159
220,308,50115,1,0
220,308,50438,1,0
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256,116,53018,1,0
176,44,53341,6,0,B|48:68|28:184,1,212
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216,148,55115,2,0,B|344:272,1,159
372,160,55921,6,0,B|252:32,1,159
156,60,56728,2,0,B|136:36|88:40,3,53
128,252,57857,1,0
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380,244,59147,2,0,B|340:172|240:168,2,159
464,180,60438,1,0
464,180,60760,1,0
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264,120,86889,6,0,B|432:100,1,159
452,204,87696,1,0
400,296,88018,1,0

CXu

osu! Alumni

3,560 posts

Joined March 2009

CXu 2012-10-08T22:41:10+00:00

Hey, I love some of the note-slider combinations, and the song is freaking great!
Have a star ww

Aurele

Global Moderator

7,605 posts

Joined January 2011

Aurele 2012-10-08T23:01:09+00:00

Going to be done tomorrow with the Easy.

DarknessAngel

2,237 posts

Joined May 2010

DarknessAngel 2012-10-09T04:51:06+00:00

日卡妳...真做完啦lol

cRyo[iceeicee]

1,885 posts

Joined May 2011

cRyo[iceeicee] 2012-10-10T07:47:12+00:00

oo!
http://puu.sh/1dhNt
I decided to use different BG, but if you prefer to have only 1 BG in this mapset just delete mine ww

Snowy Dream

2,195 posts

Joined September 2009

Snowy Dream 2012-10-10T12:22:25+00:00

Baka Rika!
Baka Rikka!

tutuhaha

3,053 posts

Joined October 2010

tutuhaha 2012-10-10T22:28:02+00:00

http://puu.sh/1drQ8
加好音效后发现咦...人呢....

Aurele

Global Moderator

7,605 posts

Joined January 2011

Aurele 2012-10-11T00:17:14+00:00

http://puu.sh/1dtCB

kdone.

Konei

2,959 posts

Joined March 2012

Konei 2012-10-12T00:22:31+00:00

Moe~

unrankable

recommend to change

think about it

suggestion

[General]

* Awesome~

[Gabe's Easy]

00:00:438 (1) - 2 Repeats with some kind of high SV are very hard for a beginner to read. I mean making 2 Sliders does feel much better for beginners. I think if you are newbie you would be very confused and be like "the hell, why should I know that this are 2 repeats Q.Q" And also you can use drum samplesets whistle for them, it sounds really nice~
00:10:115 (3) - NC? Fits pretty much to the music and I think that it's good for combo pattern.
00:39:792 (1,2,3) - This pattern doesn't looks as beautiful as your other ones imo. While it's not really an issue, you can change it for giving the whole diff a better look. Something like http://puu.sh/1dLFV looks like it would be the same niveau as your other patterns~
00:48:502 (1) - I think with a similar shape like 2 you can do a better pattern like http://puu.sh/1dLJJ
01:08:179 (1) - Changing back into KIAI by holding a Slider doesn't feel pretty good but whatever~
01:13:986 (1) - You could use 2 to blanket them~ http://puu.sh/1dLBU

[TuNormal]

* Hm, HD +1? Feels a bit better for me
00:00:438 (1,2,3,4) - Drum sampleset's whistle fits perfect for those 4 notes imo
00:01:728 (1) - Uhm, I don't think that this Slider is really a problem, but it's not that funny to play aswell, so maybe changing to some notes might be better
00:07:534 (1) - Beginning in the mid after a Spinner is actually not a good Idea because the approach circle is mostly not good seeable for beginners because it's hidden by Spinners hitburst. It's up to you to change, but I recommend :3
00:11:405 (3) - Finish on start? Sounds really fitting to me at this place~ I think finish instead of clap could be better on end aswell
00:13:986 (4,5) - I think they should be a repeating Slider
00:27:050 (2) - Finish?
00:32:050 (4) - Move a bit down for alligning with 3's start? And I think it should end on 00:32:373 because on 00:32:696 Should be NC imo
00:37:212 (3) - Clap to slider head and tail?
01:06:244 (1) - Missed clap on end~

[D.N.Angel's Hard]

* Feels very fast for a Hard diff :<
00:00:438 (1,2,3,4) - Drum sampleset's whistle fits perfect for those 4 notes imo
00:05:437 (1) - Really nazi, but not stacked perfectly lol
00:10:115 (2) - Place it perfectly on the previous 2
00:22:373 (1,2) - Reduce the spacing a bit? The jump feels too big for a hard
00:30:921 - Add note? Doesn't really feel good with the vocals to leave it empty

[Rika]

* AR 9 Feels too fast to me. I think AR 8 plays much better~
00:00:438 (1,2,3,4) - Same thing about the hitsounds with Hard~
00:05:115 (1,2) - How about an antijump? :3 http://puu.sh/1dMol
00:23:905 (3) - Move it a bit so that the start of the Slider touches the end of 2 :3 Flows better imo
00:27:050 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Reduce the spacing for this stream a bit? Not really fun to play streams with such spacing imo
00:34:873 (6,7,8,9,10) - ^
00:52:292 (8) - Whistle?
00:52:373 (9) - ^
01:08:825 (3) - Finish on start?
01:28:018 (2) - How about let it finishing the star? http://puu.sh/1dMt2

[cRyo's Insane]

* AR 9 Feels also too fast to me :3
* Slidertickrate 2? Much better imo~
00:00:438 (1,2,3,4) - Same thing as in other diffs~
00:17:212 - 00:37:373 - How about reducing SV a little bit for this part?
01:28:018 (3) - NC because of Slowdown?~

Ehh that's all :3~

Moe mapset, take my star!~

Good luck =w=

cRyo[iceeicee]

1,885 posts

Joined May 2011

cRyo[iceeicee] 2012-10-12T04:30:54+00:00

SPOILER

Konei wrote:
[cRyo's Insane]

* AR 9 Feels also too fast to me :3 AR9 is fun oo!
* Slidertickrate 2? Much better imo~ i prefer ST-1 o:
00:00:438 (1,2,3,4) - Same thing as in other diffs~ i think it sounds more like soft fininish then drums
00:17:212 - 00:37:373 - How about reducing SV a little bit for this part? i dont think so, this part doesnt sounds slow for me o:
01:28:018 (3) - NC because of Slowdown?~ this NC group already separated from previous sliders, i think NC is unnecessary here

Thx for mod !
made some changes
http://puu.sh/1dRab

BeatofIke

Beatmap Nominator

4,245 posts

Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2012-10-12T22:23:48+00:00

Possibly one of the hardest maps Kawayi Rika ever made.

wantuole

528 posts

Joined December 2010

wantuole 2012-10-13T06:36:08+00:00

hi rika
~~小芊 call mod this~~
[Gabe's Easy]
01:01:567 (2) - jump use 1.0 ds is butter
[TuNormal]
00:05:518 (1) - 在长白开始
00:55:115 (3,1,2) - 最好还是改改裸眼看出3 1没平行,改完还是能保持后面的正三角的
[D.N.Angel's Hard]
我懂得音效撞
tick 发音 kiai的口哨~
其他没什么好吐~
有个短kiai的喷泉效果不知道会不会被吐?
[Kawayi Rika]
01:21:083 (5,6) -

clap in blue,fix 6 start at white line
[cRyo's Insane]
00:52:696 (7) - NC
pro for me
rating 10↑11

that all
good luck

MoodyRPG

2,754 posts

Joined August 2010

MoodyRPG 2012-10-13T15:03:22+00:00

Let's try to mod this my lady ^_^

General

• 1500 in Lead-In is not a good idea because the song start too quick so adjust to 2000

Gabe's Easy

-- I think is much better if you put one tick in the OD
-- Long sliders, cool

TuNormal

- 00:05:437 (x) - This spinner is too close with (5) and is a little hard to read so the suggestion is delete (5) and move the spinner here 00:05:437

D.N.Angel's Hard

-- Good stuff

Rika

-- Lol, nice

cRyo's Insane

-- Slider tick rate 2 like the others diffs?

And that's it, good luck

DarknessAngel

2,237 posts

Joined May 2010

DarknessAngel 2012-10-14T04:24:12+00:00

MoodyRPG wrote:
- 00:05:437 (x) - This spinner is too close with (5) and is a little hard to read so the suggestion is delete (5) and move the spinner here 00:05:437
D.N.Angel's Hard
-- Good stuff

Konei wrote:
[D.N.Angel's Hard]

* Feels very fast for a Hard diff :< //o:
00:00:438 (1,2,3,4) - Drum sampleset's whistle fits perfect for those 4 notes imo //I do not intend to use drum sampleset in this diff though xD
00:05:437 (1) - Really nazi, but not stacked perfectly lol //k
00:10:115 (2) - Place it perfectly on the previous 2 //hmm seems fine (I don't wanna distroy symmetry lol)
00:22:373 (1,2) - Reduce the spacing a bit? The jump feels too big for a hard //...is that large ?
00:30:921 - Add note? Doesn't really feel good with the vocals to leave it empty //I followed vocals here.

wantuole wrote:
[D.N.Angel's Hard]
我懂得音效撞 //對lol，fixed
tick 发音 kiai的口哨~ //口哨不是:O
其他没什么好吐~
有个短kiai的喷泉效果不知道会不会被吐? //不會啊這很常見:3

Thank for mod ~

http://puu.sh/1eDIM

uh,I don't know why there is soft-slidertick in the beatmap ...
alright added many green lines for my diff :/

NoHitter

osu! Alumni

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Joined June 2009

NoHitter 2012-10-14T16:00:07+00:00

[Gabe's Easy]
- 00:00:438 (1) - I don't suggest adding a slider with more than one repeat on an Easy. It may be confusing for newer players.
- 00:04:792 (4,1) - Why not make this into a pre-spinner note by making this into a slider then placing the spinner at 00:05:599 instead? It sounds better IMO if you add a hitobject where the rhythm is strong.

[TuNormal]
- 00:56:728 (2) - A straight slider like this looks better IMO. The current one looks too clumped up.
- 01:18:663 (2) - This should be placed 1/2 later. It fits the rhythm better and there isn't lyrics or a strong rhythm at this part.

[D.N.Angel's Hard]
- 00:01:728 () - I don't think the kiai fountain here fits. IMO you should reserve it for the chorus instead :/
- 00:24:954 (1,1,1,1,1) - You can do away with the new combos here. It's up to you.
- 00:35:115 (8) - I wasn't expecting a note here given your current rhythm patterning.
- 00:37:696 () - Same as 00:01:728 () but it's more appropriate. I still suggest you remove though.
- 00:41:244 (4) - This jump personally plays weirdly for me. Maybe lessen the distance? I would suggest placing it here.
- 01:11:889 (1) - You could blanket this slider better.
- 01:12:696 (3,5) - The overlap of (3) and (5) here doesn't look that aesthetically good. I would suggest a pattern like this.
- 01:17:534 (1,2) - Increase the spacing of these a bit so they don't overlap?

[Rika]
- 00:25:115 (2,1) - I don't suggest you stack this. It plays really oddly with the triples.
- 00:43:663 (5) - I don't suggest you overlap this with the slidertrack of (1).
- 00:53:341 (3,4,5) - This part confusingly looks like two sliders. The hitburst of the first slider is also partially covering the approach circle for (5) making it more confusing.

[cRyo's Insane]
- 00:02:696 (1) - I don't see the need for a new combo here.
- 00:05:437 (1) - Why not make this into a pre-spinner note? It sounds better IMO if you add a hitobject where the rhythm is strong.
- 00:11:083 (4) - IMO don't stack this. It plays better spread out.

Aurele

Global Moderator

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Joined January 2011

Aurele 2012-10-15T00:28:17+00:00

Done, Almost done for everything. Thank you.

Here's the difficulty

Kawayi Rika

osu! Alumni

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Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

Kawayi Rika 2012-10-15T14:59:29+00:00

Konei

Konei wrote:
Moe~

unrankable

recommend to change

think about it

[Rika]

* AR 9 Feels too fast to me. I think AR 8 plays much better~ nope,AR8 is bad to read.
00:00:438 (1,2,3,4) - Same thing about the hitsounds with Hard~ Nah.
00:05:115 (1,2) - How about an antijump? :3 http://puu.sh/1dMol sorry looks bad..
00:23:905 (3) - Move it a bit so that the start of the Slider touches the end of 2 :3 Flows better imo Nah,bad spacing.
00:27:050 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Reduce the spacing for this stream a bit? Not really fun to play streams with such spacing imo Nah,it's funny.
00:34:873 (6,7,8,9,10) - ^
00:52:292 (8) - Whistle? Nah.
00:52:373 (9) - ^
01:08:825 (3) - Finish on start? Already added to 01:08:663 , so i guess no need.
01:28:018 (2) - How about let it finishing the star? http://puu.sh/1dMt2 changed to other.

Ehh that's all :3~

Moe mapset, take my star!~

Good luck =w=

wantuole

wantuole wrote:
hi rika

01:21:083 (5,6) - clap in blue,fix 6 start at white line i guess it's fiting here.

that all
good luck

MoodyRPG

MoodyRPG wrote:
Let's try to mod this my lady ^_^

General
• 1500 in Lead-In is not a good idea because the song start too quick so adjust to 2000 2000 is too long
And that's it, good luck

NoHitter

NoHitter wrote:
[Rika]
- 00:25:115 (2,1) - I don't suggest you stack this. It plays really oddly with the triples. so i added DS to nest triples DS.
- 00:43:663 (5) - I don't suggest you overlap this with the slidertrack of (1). not really hidden.
- 00:53:341 (3,4,5) - This part confusingly looks like two sliders. The hitburst of the first slider is also partially covering the approach circle for (5) making it more confusing. it's readble tested many times.

Thanks all and update ~

Last edited by Kawayi Rika 2012-10-16T06:38:08+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

cRyo[iceeicee]

1,885 posts

Joined May 2011

cRyo[iceeicee] 2012-10-16T06:32:55+00:00

NoHitter wrote:
[cRyo's Insane]
- 00:02:696 (1) - I don't see the need for a new combo here. i think it looks better oo!
- 00:05:437 (1) - Why not make this into a pre-spinner note? It sounds better IMO if you add a hitobject where the rhythm is strong. ussually using it but this time decided to do without pre-spiner note, i think only spinner plays better ==!
- 00:11:083 (4) - IMO don't stack this. It plays better spread out. why.....for me this stack plays better then http://puu.sh/1fnRD

Thanks !

DarknessAngel

2,237 posts

Joined May 2010

DarknessAngel 2012-10-16T14:27:40+00:00

NoHitter wrote:
[D.N.Angel's Hard]
- 00:01:728 () - I don't think the kiai fountain here fits. IMO you should reserve it for the chorus instead :/ //hmm okey
- 00:24:954 (1,1,1,1,1) - You can do away with the new combos here. It's up to you. //these NCs are good for emphasis,I wanna keep this :3
- 00:35:115 (8) - I wasn't expecting a note here given your current rhythm patterning. //I think it matches the music well :O
- 00:37:696 () - Same as 00:01:728 () but it's more appropriate. I still suggest you remove though. //it is good for me though ><
- 00:41:244 (4) - This jump personally plays weirdly for me. Maybe lessen the distance? I would suggest placing it here.
//ok,but I just decrease half spacing
- 01:11:889 (1) - You could blanket this slider better. //k,I tried.hope it is better now.
- 01:12:696 (3,5) - The overlap of (3) and (5) here doesn't look that aesthetically good. I would suggest a pattern like this. //fixed :O
- 01:17:534 (1,2) - Increase the spacing of these a bit so they don't overlap? //k

thanks for modding ~

Last edited by DarknessAngel 2012-10-16T16:38:02+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Kawayi Rika

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Kawayi Rika 2012-10-16T14:29:16+00:00

OK ~ Update all diff thank u ~

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those 2012-10-16T16:09:41+00:00

[cRyo]

00:30:437 (2) - Hitsound missing intentional? Doesn't seem so.
00:33:341 (4) - Overheld by 1/4. Should end at 00:33:502 - .
00:53:986 (3) - The same applies to this. And 01:04:954 (3) - and 01:11:405 (1) - .
00:55:599 (6,1,2,3,4) - Straighten this?
01:16:567 (1,2) - Can't seem to find what you're following with this. Should be a single slider.

[Rika]

Too many sliders extended by 1/4 when they shouldn't.
00:12:050 (1,2,3) - Patterns like this aren't present in the music.
00:27:050 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Streams would look better if all objects were in a straight line, or if it was all in a curved motion.

[Hard]

00:13:018 - Hitsound missing.
00:17:212 - S:C2 slidertick.wav doesn't fit in this section; with the way you have your sliders there's no uniform way of using slider ticks and it all sounds messy and random.

cRyo[iceeicee]

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cRyo[iceeicee] 2012-10-16T16:33:44+00:00

those wrote:
[cRyo]
00:30:437 (2) - Hitsound missing intentional? Doesn't seem so. it wasnt missing, i used N hit there, well lets try soft whistle if current one sounds like missing o:
00:33:341 (4) - Overheld by 1/4. Should end at 00:33:502 - . i wanted to follow vocal in that way
00:53:986 (3) - The same applies to this. And 01:04:954 (3) - and 01:11:405 (1) - . i think they fine
00:55:599 (6,1,2,3,4) - Straighten this? wanted to *Straighten* only notes
01:16:567 (1,2) - Can't seem to find what you're following with this. Should be a single slider. also think its fine o:

Thx for mod!
http://puu.sh/1ftxz

DarknessAngel

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DarknessAngel 2012-10-16T17:00:38+00:00

those wrote:
[Hard]
00:13:018 - Hitsound missing. //...I forgot I can use slidertick,ok added
00:17:212 - S:C2 slidertick.wav doesn't fit in this section; with the way you have your sliders there's no uniform way of using slider ticks and it all sounds messy and random.
//...I added green lines to avoid the situation but ... why they disappeared - -
fixed

thanks for modding :O

Kawayi Rika

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Kawayi Rika 2012-10-16T17:01:41+00:00

OK ~ All fixed my diff and update ~ thanks ~

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NoHitter 2012-10-16T17:20:14+00:00

Rechecked and bubbled!

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Sonnyc 2012-10-16T17:21:39+00:00

Good Luck :3

Aurele

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Aurele 2012-10-16T19:49:42+00:00

Kawayi Rika is now called Pro Rika!

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Konei 2012-10-16T20:17:39+00:00

So fast lol xD

Good luck Rika o/ ~~

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happy30 2012-10-16T21:04:03+00:00

[Gabe's Easy]

00:00:438 (1) - is there a reason why there should be a repeat at 00:00:921 - ? I can't hear it in the song.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/464170 - were you just lazy with creating a rhythm? did you want a low star rating? Is this a hidden language? please, this is a mystery to me.
01:01:567 (2) - this doesn't look good for my eyes, it's placed to close to the endpoint of the yellow slider.
01:19:147 (1,2) - looks like a mustache

[D.N.Angel's Hard]

00:07:373 (2,3) - this rhythm is buggin me a bit. try selecting these and hit ctrl+g. how does this rhythm sound?
Raise OD

[Rika]

00:10:276 (7,8) - this rhythm is quite trippy. Would you find this intuitive if you found it on another map? I would go for triples here for better playability.
00:12:696 (3,4) - startpoint(4) does not follow anything in the song. you should change this.
00:22:373 (1,2) - (2) is exactly the same as ^
00:23:502 (1,2) - again
00:28:502 (6,7) - again
00:29:631 (2,3,4) - once more
00:37:696 (1,2,3) - let the slider start at the red tick, don't place this triple there
00:38:825 (6,7) - this doesn't sound so great. you can make is sound better by having a "click" (sliderstart or regular beat) at 00:38:986 - try it out!
00:40:599 (2,3,4,5,6) - try playing the song while you map.
00:41:405 (8,9) - once more
00:42:857 (1,2,3) - see 00:37
00:43:986 (6) - make this 1/4 shorter, it will improve the rhythm here.
00:46:486 (5) - should start 1/4 later
00:47:212 (8) - why does it end on blue?
00:48:018 (2,3,4) - see 00:37
00:48:502 (5) - try making it 1/4 shorter
00:49:308 - sliderstart sounds better here instead of a triple.
00:58:341 (1,2,3) - this triple is a bit awkward here.
00:58:341 (1,2,3) - I feel like there should be a "click" at this position
01:03:341 (2) - make this 1/4 shorter
01:08:663 (1,2,3) - awkward triple
01:09:954 (8,9,1) - ^
01:11:083 (4) - Another place where I think a "click" should be
01:13:663 (2) - 1/4 shorter?
01:14:470 (1,2,3) - awkward triple
01:15:115 (5,6,1) - ^
01:16:567 (3) - make this 1/4 shorter! Also, the slowdown is a bit odd here.
01:17:050 (4) - 1/4 shorter
01:17:534 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - could you make this in a better pattern? instead of this cornerish square?
01:18:179 (1) - make this repeat slider start at 01:18:502 -
01:21:325 (6) - should start 1/4 later

[Cryo's Insane]
00:01:405 (4,1) - i would extend the slider instead of putting an extra note on 00:01:405 (4) -
00:04:792 (4,5) - same thing.
01:18:179 (6) - can you place this a bit closer to (5)?
Raise OD

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Aurele 2012-10-16T21:23:39+00:00

happy30 wrote:
[Gabe's Easy]

00:00:438 (1) - is there a reason why there should be a repeat at 00:00:921 - ? I can't hear it in the song. Normally, it was used to be a 1/1 slider with two reverse arrow to fit the song. So I delete a reverse and inscreased the slider's legth. Now I changed it for one long slider, which it could be better now.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/464170 - were you just lazy with creating a rhythm? did you want a low star rating? Is this a hidden language? please, this is a mystery to me. What's wrong here? q.q No actually, I like these sliders, It thook me some times to make this kind of sliders and it fited well with the ticksound I added (Which I don't know if Rika added it). Also, I thought it was easy compared to the whole difficulty. So I will keep it.
01:01:567 (2) - this doesn't look good for my eyes, it's placed to close to the endpoint of the yellow slider. Should be better now.
01:19:147 (1,2) - looks like a mustache Huehuehue.

Thanks for your mod, happy30.
Here's the Difficulty, Rika.

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Kawayi Rika 2012-10-17T01:51:00+00:00

happy30

happy30 wrote:
[Rika]

00:10:276 (7,8) - this rhythm is quite trippy. Would you find this intuitive if you found it on another map? I would go for triples here for better playability. fixed
00:12:696 (3,4) - startpoint(4) does not follow anything in the song. you should change this. i know not follow but play is ok. fixed
00:22:373 (1,2) - (2) is exactly the same as ^ fixed
00:23:502 (1,2) - again i want keep this.
00:28:502 (6,7) - again fixed
00:29:631 (2,3,4) - once more fixed
00:37:696 (1,2,3) - let the slider start at the red tick, don't place this triple there no,it's bored.
00:38:825 (6,7) - this doesn't sound so great. you can make is sound better by having a "click" (sliderstart or regular beat) at 00:38:986 - try it out!
00:38:825 (6) - i changed direction it's better.
00:40:599 (2,3,4,5,6) - try playing the song while you map. changed
00:41:405 (8,9) - once more i want keep this.
00:42:857 (1,2,3) - see 00:37
00:43:986 (6) - make this 1/4 shorter, it will improve the rhythm here. ok fixed
00:46:486 (5) - should start 1/4 later ok fixed
00:47:212 (8) - why does it end on blue? ok fixed
00:48:018 (2,3,4) - see 00:37
00:48:502 (5) - try making it 1/4 shorter ok fixed
00:49:308 - sliderstart sounds better here instead of a triple. ok fixed
00:58:341 (1,2,3) - this triple is a bit awkward here. ok fixed
00:58:341 (1,2,3) - I feel like there should be a "click" at this position sorry,play it's fine here
01:03:341 (2) - make this 1/4 shorter ok fixed
01:08:663 (1,2,3) - awkward triple ok fixed
01:09:954 (8,9,1) - ^ ok fixed
01:11:083 (4) - Another place where I think a "click" should be sorry,play it's fine here
01:13:663 (2) - 1/4 shorter? sorry,play it's fine here
01:14:470 (1,2,3) - awkward triple this sound fine to me.
01:15:115 (5,6,1) - ^ ok fixed
01:16:567 (3) - make this 1/4 shorter! Also, the slowdown is a bit odd here. fixed,but slowdown it's fine only 0.75.
01:17:050 (4) - 1/4 shorter ok fixed
01:17:534 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - could you make this in a better pattern? instead of this cornerish square? i want keep this.
01:18:179 (1) - make this repeat slider start at 01:18:502 - ok fixed
01:21:325 (6) - should start 1/4 later ok fixed

Last edited by Kawayi Rika 2012-10-17T16:10:43+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

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DarknessAngel 2012-10-17T03:21:54+00:00

happy30 wrote:
[D.N.Angel's Hard]

00:07:373 (2,3) - this rhythm is buggin me a bit. try selecting these and hit ctrl+g. how does this rhythm sound? //good :O,so changed ~
Raise OD //OD6 is enough though lol

thanks for mod ~

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cRyo[iceeicee] 2012-10-17T03:53:50+00:00

happy30 wrote:
[Cryo's Insane]
00:01:405 (4,1) - i would extend the slider instead of putting an extra note on 00:01:405 (4) - added extra notes to emphasise, i think they fine o:
00:04:792 (4,5) - same thing. emphasise
01:18:179 (6) - can you place this a bit closer to (5)? kkkk
Raise OD OD7 mapper

Thanks !
http://puu.sh/1fFPV

Kawayi Rika

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Kawayi Rika 2012-10-17T05:51:11+00:00

Thanks for mod ~ update all diff ~

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xsrsbsns 2012-10-17T15:30:51+00:00

irc

23:14 xsrsbsns: 01:20:921 (4,5,6) -
23:14 xsrsbsns: 这是不是有错误
23:15 Kawayi Rika: ...是
23:15 Kawayi Rika: miss
23:15 Kawayi Rika: orz
23:16 Kawayi Rika: 把5 删掉了
23:19 xsrsbsns: 其他都好
23:19 xsrsbsns: 只有个地方还是觉得不好打
23:19 Kawayi Rika: 哪？
23:20 xsrsbsns: 00:40:599 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) -
23:20 Kawayi Rika: 00:40:841 (5) -
23:20 Kawayi Rika: 所以我把这个弄长了
23:20 Kawayi Rika: 把circle去掉
23:20 Kawayi Rika: 简单了很多吧？
23:21 xsrsbsns: 我会把它弄短再移后一tick
23:22 xsrsbsns: 00:41:486 (8) - 这个建议你也弄短 end在white tick
23:22 Kawayi Rika: http://puu.sh/1fMAh
23:22 Kawayi Rika: 这样？
23:22 xsrsbsns: 嗯嗯
23:23 Kawayi Rika: 好
23:24 Kawayi Rika: 还有什么不舒服的地方指出来我看看
23:26 xsrsbsns: 00:41:405 (7,8) - http://puu.sh/1fMDj
23:26 Kawayi Rika: 改了啦
23:27 Kawayi Rika: 我说别的
23:27 xsrsbsns: 那就没了
23:27 Kawayi Rika: 好谢谢>w<

fun

good luck~

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Kawayi Rika 2012-10-17T15:34:07+00:00

Thanks for mod xsrsbsns ~

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spboxer3 2012-10-18T15:55:13+00:00

Recheck (Re-bubble) request (popped MAT permitted):

[Gabe's Easy]
01:28:018 - Have unused green line.

[Normal]
01:28:018 - Have unused green line.

[D.N.Angel's Hard]
Why don't have video for this diff?

remove unused green line: 00:16:567 - 00:16:728 - 00:34:792 -

00:04:792 (4,1) - Those color are very analogous. Recommend to used other NC color because it's too confuse for player (change speed issue)

01:17:050 (2,1) - same issue^

[Rika]
duplicated timeline: 01:19:147

[cRyo]
duplicated timeline (you can used red line to make those sound effects) :
00:00:438 -

00:06:889 (1) - forget add NC i think... It's should add NC because it's start at paragraph.

~

EDIT: OK~ bubble back... good luck

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Kawayi Rika

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Kawayi Rika 2012-10-18T16:07:47+00:00

01:17:050 (2,1) - same issue^ >> this looks fine, other all fixed ~

Thank you sp3 ~

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wcx19911123 2012-10-18T16:58:51+00:00

just little minor thing here
the source in english wiki is Chuunibyou demo Koi ga Shitai!
and in official website and japanese wiki, it's Chu-2 byo demo KOI ga shitai
I think you'd better to use the official one as source and add the english wiki one into tags, to make sure everyone can search this song
no kd plz

Kawayi Rika

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Kawayi Rika 2012-10-18T20:58:10+00:00

No,i didn't change source,english wiki is better and i want keep same with my ranked ver.

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