1. 00:09:880 (1) - it looks better when bended to another side: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/432884
2. 00:11:243 (3) - add finish to the end and whistle (optional)
3. 00:18:061 (1) - switch to grid4 and try to get its beginning stacked better with the repeat of previous slider
4. 00:18:061 (1) - add finish to beginning
5. 00:20:789 (5) - (optional)
6. 00:28:970 (2,3) - I would add finish to repeats, too
7. 00:39:880 (2,3) - ^
8. 00:45:334 - starting from here, you have sliders overlapped. If you temporarily increase spacing up to 1x, you'll get rid of them. Try it!
9. 01:13:970 (1) - add finish to beginning
10. 01:14:993 (2) - make it curvy to match 01:16:016 (4): http://puu.sh/15i79
11. 01:33:061 (2,3) - what I said about finish on repeat earlier

1. 01:43:970 (1,3) - finish for beginning
2. 01:48:061 (3) - finish to the end
3. 01:50:789 (2,3) - bad overlap again, 1x will fix it
4. 02:39:198 (2,3) - I'd fix this overlap too (also fix the big slider a little to make an ideal beat blanket: http://puu.sh/15icu)
5. 02:48:061 (1) - add finish to beginning
6. 02:50:789 (1) - ^
7. 03:05:789 (2) - here's a good suggestion: make everything between the spinner (don't touch the spinner itself) and this slider sound in soft sampleset to follow music (return normal sampleset back on this slider)
8. 03:11:243 (1) - add finish to beginning
9. 03:16:698 (2) - ^
10. 03:22:152 (1) - ^
11. 03:24:880 (1) - ^

1. To follow the music better, add whistle to the end of 00:18:402 (2) and to 00:19:255 (5,2,1,3) (also, to the end of 00:21:641 (4))
2. 00:33:061 (1,2,3,4) - increase volume level
3. 00:39:880 (2,5) and 00:41:243 (4,7) - add finish (for slider, add to beginning only)
4. 00:52:152 (1) - add finish
5. 00:55:220 (2,4) - add clap to the beginning
6. 01:04:084 (3) - make it curvy to fit the curvy sliders around?
7. 01:16:698 (1) - remove finish. Also, try adding a note with finish on the big white tick and start spinner 1/4 after it
8. 01:27:607 (1) - add finish to beginning
9. 01:33:061 (2,5) - add finish (and so on.. to follow the music)
10. 01:37:152 (1,2,3,4) - again, make them louder

1. 01:59:311 (2,4) - add clap to the beginning (if you followed the same suggestion before)?
2. 02:31:527 (2) - I don't know why, but it's really hard to catch from the first time. Think about it
3. 02:48:061 (1,1) - I'd add finish here
4. 03:05:789 (1) - here's a good suggestion: make everything between the spinner (don't touch the spinner itself) and this slider sound in soft sampleset to follow music (return normal sampleset back on this slider)

1. 00:21:130 (3,2) - add whistle
2. 00:28:970 (3,6,1,4) - the same thing with the finishes as on Normal and Hard
3. 00:33:061 (1,3,3,1,3,3) - add whistles? They fit the music, in my opinion
4. 01:16:698 - I still hope you will add a note here
5. 01:27:607 (1) - doesn't fit at all, better use a 1/2 slider with no repeat
6. 01:37:152 (1,3,3,1,3,3) - add whistles?
7. 01:49:425 (1) - move it 2 grids down to match the stream's shape
8. 01:54:794 (4,5) - unstack please, plays better
9. 02:01:016 (5) - I wouldn't add a slowdown here to avoid sliderbreak (but it's personal). However, if you keep it, at least mark it with a new combo
10. 02:20:789 (7) - aha, you forgot the finish!
11. 03:05:789 (1) - here's a good suggestion: make everything between the spinner (don't touch the spinner itself) and this slider sound in soft sampleset to follow music (return normal sampleset back on this slider)
12. 03:28:459 (8) - add whistle
13. 03:34:425 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - (personal opinion) ewwwwww this pattern looks disgusting, also it's kinda uncomfortale to play. What if you change it to note stream?

Leorda wrote:

Annyeonghaseyo


[Normal]
00:09:880 (1) - Add clap at repeating slider. Also, the repeating slider seems going to be offscreen (just a warning)
00:24:198 (1,3) - Overlapped by spinner-osu, can be hidden for beginners while gameplay (sometimes, beginners are slow to read)
01:43:630 (4) - Add clap? You probably forgot
03:01:357 (1,2) - Same issue as 00:24:198 (1,3), also hitbursts is overlapped this note too


[Hard]
02:31:527 (2) - Remove 1 repeating slider, so players are able to click the next note with perfect timed
02:33:061 (1) - Remove finish at head slider?


[Insane]
00:19:936 (6) - New combo for your combo pattern?
00:57:266 (6) - New combo? Since it's calm part? prevent NC spam


That's all~

1. 00:07:152 (4) - New combo.
2. 00:18:061 (1,3) - I suggest you to add some finishes on (1)'s end and (2)'s tail and head to emphasize the cymbals in the song
3. 00:20:789 (5) - New combo
4. 00:36:470 (2) - Wrong hitsounds here. Remove clap from tail adding it on the head instead
5. 00:37:152 (3) - Following my suggestion above, add clap on this slider's end removing it from (4)
6. 01:05:789 (6) - Clap on the slider's tail
7. 01:07:152 (1) - Finish at the beginning to match the cymbals
8. 01:13:970 (1) - I'd add a finish on the slider's end too
9. 01:37:152 (3) - Clap on the reverse arrow?
10. 01:51:470 (3) - Clap on the head
11. 01:53:516 (2,3) - Clap on the tails?
12. 02:01:357 (1) - Clap?
13. 02:36:130 (2,4) - Claps
14. 03:34:425 (1) - I think a whistle on this slider's head would sound very nice

1. 00:27:948 (6,7) - Make this pattern symmetric. Move the (6) to x:268 y:340 and (7) to x:336 y:280
2. 00:40:220 (4,5) - Select them and ctrl + r?
3. 00:40:732 (1,2,3,4) - I think this pattern with this low AR and this sudden jump between (1,2) is could be enough confusing to play
4. 00:43:970 (6) - New combo?
5. 02:32:039 (3) - New combo and remove from 02:33:061 (1)
6. 03:05:448 (7) - Clap

1. 00:28:630 (1) - Remove new combo
2. 00:28:970 (3) - Add new combo
3. 00:39:539 (1) - Remove new combo
4. 00:39:880 (3) - Add new combo
5. 00:41:243 (4) - ^
6. 00:50:789 (5) - Move to x:136 y:268? To make a bigger spacing with the next element
7. 01:43:630 (1,3) - You already know. Please follow the same combo pattern I wrote above
8. 02:01:016 (5) - To advice player about the SV changes I'd use new combo here
9. 02:32:039 (8) - Same of hard

Normal

Insane

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Normal]
00:21:641 (2,3) - change to a slider? k (something like http://puu.sh/1bvc4)
01:32:039 (6) - clap? um....k
03:32:039 (3) - remove? sounds good
Honestly a bit boring... frankly speaking, i agree this.......

[Hard]
00:05:959 (1) - add whistle? (in fact just think some way to make the 2 sliders different) k
00:18:061 (1) - i think you could stop the 2/4 clap here. k
00:19:766 (1) - and move this 1/2 earlier. k
00:40:220 (4,5) - switch them and then make it like http://puu.sh/1bvq9 good
02:00:334 (1,2,3,4,5) - manually move it a bit... now after stack it's a bit too close to the previous slider. k

[Insane]
00:05:959 (1) - whistle? k
00:05:959 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/1bvvm <<also what i may think for this part... k
00:11:584 (5,7,8) - if you have a good clap you could add it here...= = meh. try some custom sound in the future. ok
00:33:061 (1) - as you're using a really colorful stream... maybe think of better way to place them..? just a straight line seems the easiest way to do this. hmm... try something.
00:43:970 (1) - ^
00:47:380 (5) - a little disapointted that nothing is designed for the echo effect. huu...... i have no idea about new partten.
00:56:925 (5,6) - make them farther because i worry this would still be considered a jump after the previous jumps... fixed
02:47:294 - add a note? i don't know whether this part need note or not. but as you say and you may be right....

Lizellota wrote:

Thanks Rin !!
<3

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ intoon ~

Random mod bubbled map ~ just few thing.



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[Insane]

1. 02:08:175 (3,5,6) - Try change parttern,like this. nice
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 03:36:982 (1) - Move to center?
   pure pure in my heart this note use pink color for some reason.
   

oops..... puush is trolled now
this note placed follow BG (if you see this note with BG, you know what i say)

[Hard]

1. 00:21:470 - Add a circle sound much better,have drum here. k
2. 03:34:084 (3,1) - Change same spacing? k
3. 03:36:982 (1) - Same as Insane.

[Normal]

1. Some weird claps,pls fix this. fix
   
   SPOILER

   02:02:039 - Add clap.
   02:02:720 - ^
   02:03:402 - ^
   02:05:448 - ^
   02:04:084 - ^
   02:06:811 - ^
   02:02:380 - Remove clap.
   02:03:743 - ^
2. 02:18:061 (2,3) - Try more better rhythm,like this. god
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 03:16:698 (2,3) - Same as above. k
4. 03:22:152 (1,2) - ^ k
5. 02:42:266 (4) - Move to X:204 Y:296 looks better. k

That's all ~ Moe song and awesome map ~ thanks you~~ > <

Call me back recheck ~

Gabe wrote:

Hi, random mod like Kawayi Rika.
Maybe some things has been already mentionned on Rika's mod.

[Normal]

Hitsounds mod

This box is for hitsounds. When I look for hitsounds, I am mostly looking for the consistency. Sometimes I may give some suggestions
•00:27:948 (5) - For the consistency, add a clap here.
•00:44:993 - Same as above
•01:48:743 - You could add a clap here to keep the consistency.
•01:55:220 - For the consistency once again, add a clap here.
•03:14:311 - Add a clap here for all the reasons above.

Objects mod

This box means that I am looking at flows and useless circle/slider that doesn't sound really good or even, doesn't fit well for the difficulty.
•00:13:970 (3,4) - This may be confusing for beginner players since the second slider has a reverse arrow and the second is just, normal. So I am suggesting you to delete the reverse arrow and add a circle at 00:16:698.no.... it's not confuse i tink.

[Hard]

Hitsounds mod

This box is for hitsounds. When I look for hitsounds, I am mostly looking for the consistency. Sometimes I may give some suggestions
•00:03:232 (1,2) - You did something completly different with Insane. In Hard, you added a whistle on 00:03:573 and 00:04:084 while on Insane you added a whistle to 00:03:573 and 00:03:914 (1) - . So for here, a whistle will be better at 00:03:914 then 00:04:084. Make difficulties hitsounds consistent please.
•00:05:959 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Same thing as I said above. add a whistle to 00:06:641 (1) - and 00:06:811 also, delete the whistle at 00:06:982
•01:02:039 - Add a clap here to keep the consistency.
•01:52:152 - To keep the consistency with your finished, add a finish here.

Objects mod

This box means that I am looking at flows and useless circle/slider that doesn't sound really good or even, doesn't fit well for the difficulty.
I guess I have nothing to say here o__o ...

Combo mod

This box is for new combos. If new combos are fitting well with the vocals or if they aren't too big (ex: 23combos)
•00:01:698 (1) - Since the song is starting there, add a new combo.
•00:06:641 (3) - Delete the new combo here since you haven't added a new combo to 00:03:914 (2) - which is the same thing.
•00:09:368 (1) - Same as above.
•01:04:936 (1) - Delete the new combo here and add a new combo to the next object.
•02:03:061 (4) - It will be better if you delete the new combo because at this point 02:08:175 (4,5,6) - , it looks the same and you haven't added any new combos. So I guess you should delete it.
•02:15:334 (7) - Add a new combo here for the vocal.

[Insane]

Hitsounds mod

This box is for hitsounds. When I look for hitsounds, I am mostly looking for the consistency. Sometimes I may give some suggestions
•02:51:130 - I really think you should add a clap here like this combo 02:53:516.
•03:08:516 - I though you added a finish here to keep the consistency with the previous finishes.
•01:14:993 - Add a clap here to keep the consistency.

Objects mod

This box means that I am looking at flows and useless circle/slider that doesn't sound really good or even, doesn't fit well for the difficulty.
•02:08:175 (3,4,5,6) - I agree with Kawayi Rika for this point because (3,4) seems to be far and it looks like (3,6) are touching each others
•02:09:880 (4) - This sliders form could have been improved to make it more curved and also, it's not the same spacing as the circle (2,3). By moving the slider's start to x:136 y:272, you could be able to change the slider's form like this. After you make the change, make sure that the next slider has the same spacing!

Combo mod

This box is for new combos. If new combos are fitting well with the vocals or if they aren't too big (ex: 23combos)
•01:31:698 (1) - You could add a new combo here to fit the vocal and you did the same thing there 01:42:607 (1) -
•01:53:516 (6,7,8,9,1,2,3) - I think this should be a combo because of the vocal, it's saying the same thing.
•01:57:607 (6) - A new combo here because the previous four sliders are a pattern, so it's better to keep them as a combo.

Hope it was helpfull ~

Gabe wrote:

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THANKS ANDREA QAQ <3

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