Yasora wrote:

m4m~

Normal

1. Difficulty Setting: I suggest to change the od -1 for balance with hp~ the current seems to fast too for this easier normal k
2. 00:01:016 (1) - why not add finish in the end for cymbal sounder? k
3. 00:07:152 (1) - remove new combo in here for make same combo set with pattern before. also, add finish in beginning for same reason with above. k
4. 00:10:561 (2) - add clap in beginning? the sound good with the bg music imo k
5. 00:11:243 (3) - replace clap in the end with finish sound? will fit with the cymbal sounder~ oh-- make this slider more symmetry with use this code: k
   

   444,182,11243,2,0,B|492:148|492:76|436:48,2,160,0|4|4

6. 00:20:789 (3,4) - add some whistle for trumpet sound? like in (3)'s end and (4)'s begin and end. imo the sounds fit with them.k
7. 00:23:175 (1,2) - uff-- circle (1) isn't fit nothing in the beat itself. maybe, try to remove slider (2) and move circle (1) into 00:24:198 (and add clap)... after that, add spinner at 00:22:323 until 00:23:516 and add finish after. the spinner follow the long vocal in music. don't forget to fix pattern for (1) and (2) k
8. 00:26:243 (1) - remove the new combo for make the previous combo set isn't too short k
9. 00:31:698 (4) - add finish in beginning. same reason for similar thing about this k
10. 00:45:334 (1) - ^ k
11. 01:00:334 (6) - hmm, can you remove the reverse and add some notes at 01:01:357 until 01:02:380 like this ? this way try to make same the 00:57:266 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - pattern similar with 01:02:720 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - don't forget to the pattern after you do this~
    avoid to repeat similar partten :>
12. 01:08:175 (2) - add clap in here? k
13. 01:08:516 (3) - same with 00:31:698 (4) -
14. 01:13:630 (1) - hurr-- try to remove this new combo and add in the next note, the last remove new combo at 01:15:675 (1) - ? for make the same combo set in both pattern~ k
15. 01:17:039 - what the-- try to add a spinner in here for long vocal.. not epic if ignored the long vocal with no spinner in here. add from here until 01:19:425 is better~ i miss it... orz
16. 01:27:607 (1) - same with 00:31:698 (4) - k
17. 01:35:789 (1) - ^ k
18. 01:43:289 - add a circle in here for following the vocal? also in here felt empty without a circle and the current pattern have too short combo set orz
    k
19. 01:46:698 (1) - add finish k
20. 01:48:061 (3) - ^ in the end k
21. 02:04:425 (2) - move the 2nd point into x:336 y:80 for more curve and symmetry k
22. 02:07:152 (2) - add finish in beginning k
23. 02:08:175 (1) - remove the new combo for make the previous pattern not have too short combo set k
24. 02:12:607 (1) - add finish in beginning k
25. 02:18:061 (2) - ... inconsistent spacing in here k
26. 02:21:130 - same wtih 01:17:039 - k
27. 02:32:039 (2) - add finish in beginning k
28. 02:42:607 (1) - ^ not in the slider lol k
29. 02:46:698 (3) - add clap in the end for consistency with (1) and (2)? k
30. 03:07:152 (3) - not sure if this slider shape is fit with the song. I guess be better if do something more curve like this for make the better flow this slider's shape follow with the lyric of the song
31. 03:10:902 (1) - remove this new combo and add in the next note? kiai time usually starting from new combo for moar nice effect k
32. 03:27:607 (4,5) - why not add clap in the end for consistency with (1,2,3)? k
33. 03:30:334 (1) - add finish for following an effect in bg music? k
34. 03:32:380 (4) - add clap in the end k

Hard

1. 00:01:016 (1) - if you want to follow the drum sound a bit more accurate, I suggest make the rhythm like this
   denied, reason is just imo.
2. 00:01:698 (3) - add finish in beginning for follow the cymbal sounder k
3. 00:03:914 (2) - I guess you're put the whistle in wrong place lol-- should in the reverse if want follow the current rhythm in music k
4. 00:09:368 (1) - this too, should in circle (3) k
5. 00:19:766 - add a circle plus clap in here for following the drum? the current seems really empty in there >_< k
6. 00:20:789 (4) - add new combo for this a bit huge jump k
7. 00:22:152 (1) - aa-- try to end this at 00:23:516 and add finish as I said in normal diff? of course remove slider 00:23:516 (1) -
   x
8. 00:27:607 (4,5,6,7) - huae-- this is too big jump for hard diff ;A; hard too catch k
9. 00:33:061 (1,2,3,4) - add whistle to follow the vocal? k
10. 00:40:220 (4,5) - ctrl + r this for make no jump between the (3) and (4)? too hard for this diff orz um... maybe that's okay.
11. 00:45:334 (1) - add finish in beginning k
12. 00:50:107 (1,2,3,4,5) - this star pattern seems weird-- I guess should something like this lol
    a little change
13. 00:54:880 (1,2,3,4) - well, these sliders is really-- hard-to-click for hard diff. especially after slider (4) into some 1/2 circles. I suggest to follow the bell sound in here more make readable-- something like this
    i will change if some modder mention this again, becosz, i think it's okay.
14. 01:02:039 (5,6,7) - how about change these circles into just one slider for follow the long vocal-- the current seems not fit with the song orz k
15. 01:08:516 (1) - add finish in beginning k
16. 01:12:607 (1,2,3,4) - inb4 this is 1/2 not 1/4. please use normal spacing in here for more readable-- the players will think this is 1/4 in first time ;~; k
17. 01:14:482 (1) - remove this new combo, add new combo at 01:15:505 (6) - if you want follow the music x, reason is just looking :3
18. 01:37:152 (1,2,3,4) - add whistle
19. 01:58:970 (1,2,3,4) - oh well, this again. same with 00:54:880 (1,2,3,4) - ^
20. 02:16:698 (1,2,3,4) - same with 01:12:607 (1,2,3,4) - k
21. 02:35:576 (3) - why this is on 1/3? this should in 02:35:448 k
22. 02:43:544 (5) - eto-- in the music is not available vocal or instrument what can follow this note.. in here should 1/2. but I think this is should in 02:43:374 for follow the fast vocal k
23. 02:44:908 (5) - same here, consider to remove this k
24. 03:09:198 (6,7,8,9) - omg-- this pattern is too confusing for hard diff try to not stack and jump like this--
    umm.... i will fix, if another modder mention it again.
25. 03:16:698 (1) - same with 01:14:482 (1) - ^
26. 03:17:209 (1) - why jump in here-- you no adding jump at 01:14:482 (3) - k
27. 03:28:118 (6) - add new combo for mini jump~ k
28. 03:31:953 (4,5) - why not stack all this at (3)'s end? seems not good when gameplay if like this avoid to need remember for playing hiddenr
29. 03:33:573 (1,2,3) - follow the drum sound more understanding instead like this.. so remove these all into white tick like this
    k
30. 03:36:982 (1) - remove this unecessary new combox

Insane

1. 00:06:641 (1) - move the whistle into (3)? k
2. 00:15:334 (5) - add clap in the end for consistency? k
3. 00:19:936 (6,7,8,9,10) - why not make this into star pattern instead jump like this? more have good flow and make this more readable? x
4. 00:21:641 (4) - add new combo because already different rhythm with pattern before? umm... k
5. 00:28:715 (2) - this circle was overmap-- not following the vocal or instrument-- consider to remove this.. also some triplet what I will mention after this:
   
   SPOILER

   1. 00:31:272 (5) -
   2. 00:39:624 (2) -
   3. 00:42:181 (9) -
   4. 01:43:715 (2) -
   5. 01:54:453 (2) -
   6. 01:54:794 (4) -
   7. 02:08:601 (5) -
   8. 02:13:203 (3) -
   9. 02:20:192 (3) -
   10. 03:03:658 (6) -
6. 00:49:084 (5) - move this into x: 84 y:72 for make this circle symmetry between (4) and (1)? k
7. 00:49:255 (1,2) - I think more better if follow the vocal in here-- remove these notes, then make a slider from here until 00:49:595 k
8. 00:56:414 (2,3,5) - seems random pattern in here-- how about this pattern? also, this way is make the space between (5) with 00:57:266 (1) - because the current seems too near.liitlt fix angle
9. 00:57:266 (1) - remove this new combo and add in the next note for follow the kiai time begin? k
10. 01:27:607 (1) - add finish in beginning? k
11. 01:35:362 (9) - listen the music in 50%, this is should 1/2 not 1/4-- so remove this slider and add a circle in white tick
12. 01:46:272 (9) - ^
13. 01:52:664 (2,3,4) - huae-- this is not 1/4 imo.. try to follow the music with remove circle (3), and ctrl + r (2) and (4)? in the timeline will become like this
14. 02:00:675 (3) - ngg-- this is overlap with the current streams (01:59:823 (3,4,5) - ) try to move this circle into another place for more visible little change angle
15. 02:49:084 - add an note in here for follow drum sound x
16. 02:51:811 - ^ x
17. 02:55:902 (5) - this is 1/4 slider-- try to make this more near at (4)'s slider for more easier read x
18. 02:56:243 (1) - would be better if remove circle 02:59:993 (1) - and make this spinner end in there x
19. 03:20:789 (3) - add finish in beginning k
20. 03:31:953 (4) - same with 01:35:362 (9) -
21. 03:33:573 (2,3,4) - follow the drum sound-- these note is not really readable orz-- move this all into white tick k
22. 03:34:425 (1,2,3,4) - reduce the spacing in here-- this 1/4 is hard if has huge spacing like this x
23. 03:36:982 (1) - remove this unecessary new combo x

Good luck desu~

-Bakari- wrote:

i'm so sorry. ;_; i've got a headache from your song (i don't like it at all)

but if you really want here's unfinished short check

[box=~]Yasora's mod isn't finished yet. I'm unable to mod insane now.
Note: i modded Normal/Hard when Yasora got kd from you.

[General]
use same tickrate for all diffs

[Normal]
your flow is inconsistent, imo
patterns looks messy, imo
00:01:016 (1) - try to use finish on slider-hear (and for slider tail also) fits with music and 1st note should be a bit louder
00:04:425 (4,1) - missing beats isn't really good idea for mapping. personally i suggest you removing 00:04:425 (4,1) and using 1/1 reverse slider at 00:04:425 + circle at 00:05:448 to make good flow and follow music. http://puu.sh/11dqw
00:05:789 (2) - this one feels offbeat for me. try to make slider 1/1 shorter and start it at 00:06:130 http://puu.sh/11dqw
00:07:152 (1) - use same pattern as i suggested you to use at 00:05:789 (2). current slider sounds totally of for me or you can start (2) 1/1 later and add reverse to (1)
00:12:607 - it's better to put here new green line with 55% volume (N) and separate this beat from slider. example.
00:18:061 (1) - it would be much better if you use same pattern as 00:15:334 (2) (i mean add reverse to 00:18:061 (1) and put circle at 00:20:107
00:21:641 (4) - try to use 2 circles (with finish hitsound) instead. i can clearly hear 2 beats and slide-hitsound doesn't fit here at all.
00:23:175 (1) - using cicrle with clap in the note when there's NO ANY BEATS AT ALL isn't fun and unplayable. remove this circle

[Hard]
much better than Normal
00:41:243 (4,5) - random stack whichis hard to read (and impossible with hidden, imo) it's enough readable. (by some people's test play)

Neverend Story wrote:

Hi, intoon.
Mod this beatmap by your request.

[Normal]
00:24:198 (1,2,3) - 개인적으로 노말에서 이런식으로 두는 노트는 안좋다고 생각합니다. 1번과 2번을 겹쳐보는건 어떤가요?some fix

[Hard]
02:18:572 (1) - Remove New Combo k
02:41:243 (3) - New Combo k
03:17:209 (1) - Remove New Combo k
03:31:527 (3,4,5) - 4, 5번 노트를 3번 슬라이더 꼬리(?)에 스택시키는건 어떤가요? k
03:36:982 (1) - Remove New Combo x

[Insane]
- 난이도를 어렵게 만드는건 좋은데 다음 스트림들은 개인적으로 별로 안어울린다고 생각됩니다. Hard에서 했던 것처럼 1 / 4 리피트 슬라이더를 사용해보는건 어떤가요? ㅈ로 시작하는 모더가 하드랑 인센 별반 차이없다고 까서 다는 안되고 좀 섞어 보려했는데 잘 안되네요 일단 보류

00:43:970 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4)
01:37:152 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4)
01:37:152 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4)
01:48:061 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4)

02:11:755 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 02:31:527 (2,3,4,5,6,7) 하고 비슷하게 살짝 곡선을 그리듯이 배치해보는건 어떤가요? 시도는 해봤는데 기분탓인지.. 모양이 예쁘게 안잡히네요,,, 그래서 x
02:18:573 (3) - Remove New Combo k
02:41:243 (3) - New Combo k
03:10:391 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 마찬가지로 살짝 곡선을 그리듯이 스트림 배치 같은이유로x
03:17:209 (1) - Remove New Combo k
03:22:664 (1) - Remove New Combo k
03:36:982 (1) - Remove New Combo x

I like this song & beatmap! Good luck!

Hinsvar wrote:

Uh... hi.

Here, a mod.

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants.

>Normal

1. Just use Slider Tick Rate 1 for this. I seriously can't see why should you use 2. i hope that. but.. ah.. consider score spread......
2. 00:24:539 (2) - Why is this note overlapping 00:24:880 (3)? Just place this at (376,64) (or anywhere you want, as long as it won't overlap (3)). some change
3. 00:26:243 (4) - Move the second anchor point to (56,240), then move the third one to (80,296), and then the fourth to (136,238). This should make the blanketing on 00:26:243 (4,5,6) look better. k
4. 00:45:334 (1,2,3) - Actually, just ignore the spacing consistency (it will only be broken by ~0.05x anyway) and use this code to make the blanket-ish pattern look better: k
   

   92,188,45334,6,0,B|140:196|152:240,1,80,4|8
   160,312,46016,2,0,B|208:304|224:256,1,80,0|8
   228,188,46698,2,0,B|272:192|296:240,2,80,0|8|0

5. 00:48:061 (1,2,3) - Just do something similar to what I have suggested above. (Look for similar cases in this diff and fix them.)
   k
6. 00:50:789 (1,2,3,4) - ...I also don't really like the overlap here. Heck, I think you should use 1.0x DS for the entire mapset, but what's done is done, I guess. Just avoid the overlap here. (Remember, I tolerate and don't care about overlaps between a slider's head and tail, but I'll complain about the overlaps that involve a slider's path/body. Just avoid to overlap a slider's body.) k

>Hard

1. AR+1? Right now everything looks a bit clustered. The song's fast enough to tolerate AR8 in a Hard diff, anyway.
   AR7 is better for me
2. HP Drain+1. Drain 5 is too easy for a Hard diff. eh.... it's fine for me
3. 00:37:664 (2) - Move the first anchor point to (128,340)? The curve on 00:37:152 (1,2) should look more natural like this.
   k
4. 02:12:948 (2,3,4) - Use the code below instead? I think the previous object placement is pretty weird, so I did a bit of experiment around. eh..... denied
   

   220,212,132948,1,8
   220,212,133118,2,0,B|292:236|368:216,1,148
   432,170,133630,2,0,B|432:96,1,74,8|0

>Insane

1. 00:21:811 - Consider adding a circle at (256,216) to follow the beat here. Won't get your score above 20 millions, so don't worry. eh.......sorry
2. 00:32:720 (4) - Move this slider to (368,352) and then move the last anchor point to (412,352)? I think it looks much better now.
   just moved placement

Uh... Normal was somewhat of a mess, but Hard and Insane were actually pretty good.

Good luck on the way

TicClick wrote:

First of all, I should say I'm sorry for this delay.

Normal

1. 00:09:880 (1) - it looks better when bended to another side: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/432884 k
2. 00:11:243 (3) - add finish to the end and whistle (optional) k
3. 00:18:061 (1) - switch to grid4 and try to get its beginning stacked better with the repeat of previous slider x
4. 00:18:061 (1) - add finish to beginning k
5. 00:20:789 (5) - (optional) x
6. 00:28:970 (2,3) - I would add finish to repeats, too x
7. 00:39:880 (2,3) - ^ x
8. 00:45:334 - starting from here, you have sliders overlapped. If you temporarily increase spacing up to 1x, you'll get rid of them. Try it! x
9. 01:13:970 (1) - add finish to beginning k
10. 01:14:993 (2) - make it curvy to match 01:16:016 (4): http://puu.sh/15i79 k
11. 01:33:061 (2,3) - what I said about finish on repeat earlier x

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1. 01:43:970 (1,3) - finish for beginning k
2. 01:48:061 (3) - finish to the end k
3. 01:50:789 (2,3) - bad overlap again, 1x will fix it k
4. 02:39:198 (2,3) - I'd fix this overlap too (also fix the big slider a little to make an ideal beat blanket: http://puu.sh/15icu) k
5. 02:48:061 (1) - add finish to beginning x
6. 02:50:789 (1) - ^ x
7. 03:05:789 (2) - here's a good suggestion: make everything between the spinner (don't touch the spinner itself) and this slider sound in soft sampleset to follow music (return normal sampleset back on this slider) um.................... x
8. 03:11:243 (1) - add finish to beginning k
9. 03:16:698 (2) - ^ k
10. 03:22:152 (1) - ^ k
11. 03:24:880 (1) - ^ k

Hard

1. To follow the music better, add whistle to the end of 00:18:402 (2) and to 00:19:255 (5,2,1,3) (also, to the end of 00:21:641 (4)) k
2. 00:33:061 (1,2,3,4) - increase volume level x
3. 00:39:880 (2,5) and 00:41:243 (4,7) - add finish (for slider, add to beginning only) x
4. 00:52:152 (1) - add finish k
5. 00:55:220 (2,4) - add clap to the beginning x
6. 01:04:084 (3) - make it curvy to fit the curvy sliders around? k
7. 01:16:698 (1) - remove finish. Also, try adding a note with finish on the big white tick and start spinner 1/4 after it k
8. 01:27:607 (1) - add finish to beginning k
9. 01:33:061 (2,5) - add finish (and so on.. to follow the music) x
10. 01:37:152 (1,2,3,4) - again, make them louder x

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1. 01:59:311 (2,4) - add clap to the beginning (if you followed the same suggestion before)? x
2. 02:31:527 (2) - I don't know why, but it's really hard to catch from the first time. Think about it eh........look like okay.
3. 02:48:061 (1,1) - I'd add finish here x
4. 03:05:789 (1) - here's a good suggestion: make everything between the spinner (don't touch the spinner itself) and this slider sound in soft sampleset to follow music (return normal sampleset back on this slider) x

I am, as a whistle lover, a bit disappointed that you added whisthes only when hitsounding the intro and outro of the song. It's too few!
orz, i have no idea about this.

Insane

1. 00:21:130 (3,2) - add whistle k
2. 00:28:970 (3,6,1,4) - the same thing with the finishes as on Normal and Hard x
3. 00:33:061 (1,3,3,1,3,3) - add whistles? They fit the music, in my opinion um.... x
4. 01:16:698 - I still hope you will add a note here k
5. 01:27:607 (1) - doesn't fit at all, better use a 1/2 slider with no repeat k
6. 01:37:152 (1,3,3,1,3,3) - add whistles? x
7. 01:49:425 (1) - move it 2 grids down to match the stream's shape k
8. 01:54:794 (4,5) - unstack please, plays better fix
9. 02:01:016 (5) - I wouldn't add a slowdown here to avoid sliderbreak (but it's personal). However, if you keep it, at least mark it with a new combo x
10. 02:20:789 (7) - aha, you forgot the finish! k
11. 03:05:789 (1) - here's a good suggestion: make everything between the spinner (don't touch the spinner itself) and this slider sound in soft sampleset to follow music (return normal sampleset back on this slider) x
12. 03:28:459 (8) - add whistle
13. 03:34:425 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - (personal opinion) ewwwwww this pattern looks disgusting, also it's kinda uncomfortale to play. What if you change it to note stream? k

Generic Insane, now with 7% more jumps. I mean, there's nothing outstanding, just one more difficulty to pass.

Anyway, you did a good job, and most of elements flow nice.

wantuole wrote:

[General]
It's my first see paly before red line , it's fine? I don't konw fine desu~
a lot of idea not be use in [Normal]
try to use more things at next map
[Normal]
00:21:641 (6,7) -at middle is OK, but 5→6 is look's so bad x
[Hard]
00:40:902 (2,4) - ctrl+r k
01:16:186 (3,5) - ^ x
01:44:141 (3,4) - ^ x
02:20:448 (3,4) - not good for look x
03:13:630 (3) - ctrl+r x
03:15:675 (3) - at x:228 y:204 is butter foe play x
[insane]
00:57:266 (6,1) - ctrl+h x
02:38:175 (4) - ctrl+r x
03:36:982 (1) - at middle,no same end like hard is butter x

that all good luck

Chewin wrote:

Hi intoon, m4m from my modding queue.

[Normal]

1. 00:07:152 (4) - New combo. k
2. 00:18:061 (1,3) - I suggest you to add some finishes on (1)'s end and (2)'s tail and head to emphasize the cymbals in the song
   add 1's start and 3's start
3. 00:20:789 (5) - New combo k
4. 00:36:470 (2) - Wrong hitsounds here. Remove clap from tail adding it on the head instead k
5. 00:37:152 (3) - Following my suggestion above, add clap on this slider's end removing it from (4) k
6. 01:05:789 (6) - Clap on the slider's tail k
7. 01:07:152 (1) - Finish at the beginning to match the cymbals k
8. 01:13:970 (1) - I'd add a finish on the slider's end too k
9. 01:37:152 (3) - Clap on the reverse arrow? k
10. 01:51:470 (3) - Clap on the head k
11. 01:53:516 (2,3) - Clap on the tails? k
12. 02:01:357 (1) - Clap? k
13. 02:36:130 (2,4) - Claps k
14. 03:34:425 (1) - I think a whistle on this slider's head would sound very nice k and slider's body too

[Hard]

1. 00:27:948 (6,7) - Make this pattern symmetric. Move the (6) to x:268 y:340 and (7) to x:336 y:280 eh..... i like it as it is now.
2. 00:40:220 (4,5) - Select them and ctrl + r? x.x
3. 00:40:732 (1,2,3,4) - I think this pattern with this low AR and this sudden jump between (1,2) is could be enough confusing to play k
4. 00:43:970 (6) - New combo? k
5. 02:32:039 (3) - New combo and remove from 02:33:061 (1) k/color]
6. 03:05:448 (7) - Clap k

[Insane]

1. 00:28:630 (1) - Remove new combo now is looking for good....... this NC partten divide only note(no slider) part....
2. 00:28:970 (3) - Add new combo
3. 00:39:539 (1) - Remove new combo
4. 00:39:880 (3) - Add new combo
5. 00:41:243 (4) - ^
6. 00:50:789 (5) - Move to x:136 y:268? To make a bigger spacing with the next element k
7. 01:43:630 (1,3) - You already know. Please follow the same combo pattern I wrote above
8. 02:01:016 (5) - To advice player about the SV changes I'd use new combo here k
9. 02:32:039 (8) - Same of hard k

That's all

Dark Fang wrote:

Hi in 약장수모딩
Let's go~

[General]

NM diff and HD diff's spread is not good. why don't you make new map, or adjust that maps? x

[Normal]

OD +1 [b] x
HP +1[/b] x
AR +1 x
00:38:516 (5) - add Clap at tail of slider
01:27:607 (1) - ^
01:28:970 (2) - ^
01:47:380 (2) - add Clap
01:50:789 (2) - add Clap at tail of slider
01:51:470 (3) - same as above and Remove Clap at head
01:56:925 (3) - Why don't you move to (180,264) second of slider point?
02:12:607 (1) - add Clap at tail
02:13:289 (2) - add Calp at arrow
02:15:334 (2,3) - same as above
02:17:720 (1) - add Calp
02:18:061 (2) - add Finish at head, and add Clap at arrow

[Hard]

This diff looks like Insane maybe.. > < ;;;
01:01:527 (4) - When play is FC, this slider's arrow coverd by Combo number like this just suggestion x
01:33:061 (2) - add Finish x
01:33:573 (5) - ^ x
01:34:425 (4) - ^ x
01:34:936 (6) - add Finish at head x
01:43:970 (2) ~ 01:45:845 (5) - same as above. If you feels sound bad on Finish, you use Whistle instead Finish x
02:09:880 (4) - add Whistle at head for HL 'chu~' ... just joke
02:53:516 (1,2,3,4) - Can you make bigger jump than now? ( I like gradually bigger jump )

[Insane]

AR -1? NVM if you don't want that x
01:35:362 (9) - Can you make notes instead slider? x
01:46:272 (8) - ^ x
02:14:993 (2,3,4) - Why don't you make jump in this part instead triple notes?
03:31:953 (4) - same as 01:35:362 (9) x
03:33:402 (2) - add Clap
03:34:084 (4) - ^


Sorry for my poor modding

Have a nice day, Enjoy~

nich95 wrote:

Hi, intoon

My mod from your request

Red = Unrankable
Biue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

1. Fine

Normal

1. 00:01:016 (1) - Slider repeat at 00:01:357, and end at 00:01:698 be better. k
2. 00:08:516 (2) - Remove clap in slider end. It may not be appropriate to put any sound. just follow regular partten
3. 00:18:061 (1) - Move to up 1 grid. (stack with slider repeat of (4).) k
4. 00:28:630 (1,2,3) - Move to left 1 grid? k
5. 02:50:789 (1,2) - Spacing is too far. Please reduce spacing of it. k
6. 03:06:470 (3) - Remove NC? k

Hard

1. 03:31:527 (3,4,5) - Try to stack it. fix

Insane

1. 02:55:561 (4,5) - Reduce the spacing. it's fine

That's all that I can find them.
nice map, give a star

Good luck~

Lally wrote:

[general ]

*-* looks all great

[Normal]

01:17:039 - finish

02:21:130 - finish

02:56:243 - finish

[Hard]

01:16:868 - finish

02:20:789 - finish

[Insane]

00:22:152 - whistle

02:20:874 - finish

02:54:880 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/1aIi1 maybe (?)

02:56:243 - finish

kurohana wrote:

Thank you for request \(^^)/
Sorry for delay ^^'

Normal

1. 01:32:039 (6) - Forgot clap? um.....no

Insane

1. 02:17:720 (5) - Stack correctly eh..........this is no problem... but, fixed

Good map :3 Good luck ^^