Here... I'll try a mod.
I'm kinda noobish at it tohugh, I warn you. 
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2:16:172 (3-10) Um, I think the beat spacing here gets a bit off by a few pixels or so. Revise maybe?
4:53:861 (6-9) I think those notes should be closer together given their speed.
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7:56:992 (-) I think that all of those stressed beats in the song (If you know musical notes it's those dotted qarter notes and then a sixteenth) with hitsounds. I would use cymbals (and I see you're already using them there) but I'd just like to point it out. You could also vary the histunds on those patterns if you get bored of the cymbals.
10:05:367 (-) Insert break.
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HOLY JESUS THIS IS A LONG SONG. ._.
Well, that's my opinion. I apologize if you agree with many of the points (XD) but... yeah.
So very nice map. I would star it, but I has no Kudosu atm. :3
-SMIC


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2:16:172 (3-10) Um, I think the beat spacing here gets a bit off by a few pixels or so. Revise maybe?
4:53:861 (6-9) I think those notes should be closer together given their speed.
4:54:611 (3-8) ^
4:55:429 (2-4) ^
4:55:975 (7-11) ^
4:56:793 (1-6) ^
4:58:975 (5-7) ^
6:48:172 (6-8) ^
6:48:485 (1-8) ^
7:56:992 (-) I think that all of those stressed beats in the song (If you know musical notes it's those dotted qarter notes and then a sixteenth) with hitsounds. I would use cymbals (and I see you're already using them there) but I'd just like to point it out. You could also vary the histunds on those patterns if you get bored of the cymbals.
10:05:367 (-) Insert break.
10:09:267 (-) ^
10:13:367 (-) ^
11:09:367 (-) ^
11:13:367 (-) ^
11:17:367 (-) ^
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HOLY JESUS THIS IS A LONG SONG. ._.
Well, that's my opinion. I apologize if you agree with many of the points (XD) but... yeah.
So very nice map. I would star it, but I has no Kudosu atm. :3
-SMIC