Norbi's part14:06:814 (2) - k ? - Sure.
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14:11:814 (1) - d ? - If the previous one is a kat, then this why shouldn't be? So nope.
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14:47:814 (2) - d - Ah, right.
14:48:564 (2) - d - Sure.
14:48:626 (1) - k - ^
14:48:689 (2) - k - The don is fine here.
14:49:439 (2) - k - ^
14:51:814 (2) - d - Be it.
Okay those suggestions are juste here to make your dons fit more the rhythm and be more diversified.
However, nothing were REALLY wrong on this part, so if you don't like it you can keep it like this. (Although I recommand you to fix it :3)
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14:53:814 (3) - d - Sure.
14:53:939 (1) - k - Nah.
14:54:064 (1) - d - Done.
Basically here you have to make the dons support the beat AND support the bar change. By adding those d d d d, you'll show clearly that you're are changing to another bar.
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14:55:814 (1) - d
14:56:001 (1) - k
14:56:064 (1) - d
14:56:251 (1) - k
14:56:314 (1) - d
14:56:439 (1) - k
14:56:564 (1) - d
14:56:626 (1) - k
14:56:689 (1) - d
14:56:876 (3) - d
14:56:939 - Add a d here
14:57:001 (1) - k
14:57:064 (1) - d
14:57:251 (1) - k
Wow wow wow... this was totally nonsense. Here you HAVE to apply those suggestion, which will add a real rhythm which fits the music instead of this random dons placement.
^Changed everything in there.
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14:57:501 (1) - k
14:57:564 (1) - d
14:57:689 (1) - k
14:57:814 (1) - d
14:58:001 (1) - k
14:58:064 (1) - d
14:58:189 (1, 2) - k, k
14:58:439 (2) - k
14:58:564 (1) - d
Same as 14:53:814 and 14:55:814, so do it :3
^Everything applied here as well.
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14:59:001 (2) - k
14:59:064 (1) - d
14:59:126 (1) - k
14:59:251 (2) - k
14:59:314 (1) - d
14:59:689 (2) - k
14:59:814 (1) - d
15:00:064 (3) - d
15:00:189 (1) - k
15:00:314 (2) - d
Same :3
^Changes everywhere. lol
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15:20:314 (1) - d, sounds better imo. - But not in mine. :3
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15:45:939 (1,2,1) - Make it dkd so that it'll follow the rhythm. - Done.
15:46:939 (1,2,1) - Make it dkk ^ - ^
15:48:939 (2,1, 2) - Same as 15:45:939 - Done.
15:55:064 (4) - d - This one is already a don.
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15:58:314 (1) - Maybe make it a little bit shorter ? :< - I like it this way. Btw I could put a break in here if needed.
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16:33:064 (1,2, 3) - delete those three notes, let the player have some rest xD (Plus there is no music/voice during this part, so those are useless) - Well, okay.
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16:52:439 (2,3,1) - Inverse those three. This ddk should be a kkd.
16:53:814 (2) - d
Basically those two suggestion help your map to fit to the ending climax. You heard the drum bass being heavy and persistant on every beat. You should renforce it with a don in every beat.
This will make the player feel the beat and the rhythm even more.
^Well, it plays nicely.
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17:04:564 (1) - k
17:04:689 (1) - d
17:04:876 (2) - k
17:05:189 (1) - d
17:05:314 (1) - k
17:05:439 (1) - d
17:05:626 (2) - delete this note
17:05:814 (2) - d
Same as above. This is the end of your song, the drum is showing it by this persistant dd dd dd dd just before comming to the final part. Here again, you should follow it.
^Followed.
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17:06:189 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1) - Okay, this stream doesn't totally fit the drum, but tbh I'm ok with it. So maybe if someone tell you to change it you should do it, but I don't mind keeping it.
^Yeah,I know it's hard, but the best stream I've ever mapped.
! I don't care it will approved or not - It must be done! D:
I'm kinda noobish at it tohugh, I warn you. 
