Mikarunoel131 wrote:

Nyan~ *sing like a cat* Nyan~
Hey Your =D Who me ? Yeah you =D God ? No your mod from modreqs xD
I am only making suggestions and hope you think about them ^^

General: Why is the video only in the Insane diff ? Oo The video doesnt work in the hard and normal diff I downloaded. thanks, fixd

Normal:
00:03:595 put it exaytly on the middle line ? ( and the copied one ) fixd
00:56:845 new combo no, i added nc on 00:54:595 (1)
00:57:970 delet new combo ^ so, no
01:16:720 add clap ? fixd

Thats it for normal ^^

Hard:
00:09:782 Die Zeiten würde ich auf jeden roten Strich setzen, musst du aber wissen.^^ zeiten? wie meinst du das?
00:14:282 maybe whistle ? no, like the other diffs too
00:17:282 ^ no ^
01:00:595 may add finish for the rythem an delet clap on next note. ok
01:09:595 maybe finish ? ok

Insane:
00:14:470 delet note to fit the song better ^^ ok
00:27:959 This one and the one befor are not symmetrical, try to change that =) you mean 00:27:595... no, i rotated that, they re symmetrical ^^
00:31:345 delet new combo , also at 00:32:845 and 00:34:345 ? no, because of slowdowns
00:39:595 delet clap and add finish ok
( Hört sich wieder nach nem schicken rythem an wenn du dies mit dem Vorschlag darunter verbindest, probiers ^^ )
00:39:970 delet clap ok
01:09:595 add finish Oo finish is already there...

That is it ^^ Hope i helped you a bit =D
See you x33

Kurokami wrote:

Hi. o/

Normal

1. 01:06:940 - useless inherited point ok, fixed
2. 01:18:501 - ^ no, because of kiai time >.<

Hard

1. 00:07:157 (2) - finish at 00:07:720 ? how do you mean this?
2. 00:07:907 - add note i changed some other things there :3

Insane

1. 00:36:595 - Kiai? Why? looks good (in my opinion, i like it :3)

This map is too good for me, I unable to mod it. :3 No kds, this is a part of my star~

Ylinestra44 wrote:

Heyho. Ist so ziemlich das erste mal, dass ich modde, also alles wahrscheinlich von nicht gerade hoher Qualität.
Sind sowieso alles nur Vorschläge~


[Generell]
Also ich muss sagen, dass mir das Lied nicht wie 160 BPM vorkommt, 80 passen meiner Meinung besser.
Mit der Kiai haut das dann auch immer noch hin (immer noch auf dem Downbeat).
Lediglich in der [Insane] wären dann einige Noten mit 1/8 gesnappt, aber dabei seh ich eigentlich auch kein Problem.
(Falls du es in Erwägung ziehst: Im Nachhinein nicht vergessen, die SV zu verdoppeln) hm, ich glaube, ich lasse das so >.<


[Normal]
(Die Vorschläge sind alle noch auf die 160BPM bezogen, nicht dass es zu Missverständnissen kommt)
00:01:720 - Ich würde hier einen Slider (mit Whistle auf dem Anfang) setzen, der entweder auf der derzeitigen (2) oder auf dem blauen Tick danach endet. Weil diesen Ton im Hintergrund lässt du außen vor, und ich hab eine Note auf dem vermisst. ok, habs gemacht, aber ohne whistle, wie in den anderen diffs auch
00:01:907 (2) - Falls du ^ gemacht hast: Die Note löschen ok
00:04:720 - Hier das Selbe wie oben. auch
00:07:720 - Ebenso ^
00:16:345 (2) - Wenn du den roten Wegpunkt auf x:332 y:296 verschiebst, liegt 00:15:595 (1) - schöner auf dem Slider. Den Unterschied zu 00:13:345 (1) - merkt man kaum, es sieht schöner aus, und mit dem Distance Snap ist auch alles in Ordnung. ok
00:24:595 (1) - Hier hast du auf einmal x1,19 Distance Snap. In der restlichen Diff ist durchgehend x1,00 (+- 0,02). Ich würde das anpassen. Ich finde, es spricht nichts dagegen, den Circle an die selbe Stelle zu setzen wie die 2 davor auch. oh, danke, habs garnicht gesehn ^^'
00:37:720 (2) - Ich würde das Ende weiter nach unten setzen (x:364 y:116 vielleicht), damit der Slider selber eine ähnliche Neigung bekommt wie der Slider davor, aber nicht an Länge gewinnt. habe es ein wenig nach unten gesetzt, wenn ich es noch weiter runter ziehe, wird der slider länger >.<
00:40:720 (2) - Hier das Selbe. ^
00:46:720 (2) - Den so ausrichten, dass er mit 00:46:345 (1) - eine Linie bildet. habs versucht xD
00:47:845 (4) - Den Wegpunkt eins nach oben. ok
01:02:470 (3) - Eins nach rechts und eins nach unten, sieht ein wenig schöner aus, finde ich. nein, ich lasse es so, weil das sonst mit spacing nich stimmt >.<
01:06:970 (1) - Eins nach oben. ok
01:09:970 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Die vielleicht so arrangieren, dass sie einen Bogen bilden? So etwa: http://puu.sh/y6kg ok
Was eher noch allgemein zu der Diff: Ich finde das Custom-Clap ist mit 40% ein wenig zu laut. Auch wenn es pingelig ist, 35% klingen meiner Meinung etwas besser. ok


[Hard]
00:19:907 (2) - Drei nach rechts, eins nach oben. Hier ist der Distance Snap ein wenig verrutscht. ok
00:31:720 (2) - Eins nach rechts. ok
00:39:595 (1) - Eins nach unten, eins nach links. ok
00:58:345 (2) - Endpunkt eins nach oben. ok
00:58:907 (3) - (Nur wenn du das oben gemacht hast) Eins nach links. ok
Hier auch wieder die Sache mit dem Custom-Hitclap. jo


[Insane]
00:06:970 (2) - Statt dem den 00:06:595 (1) - kopieren und horizontal und vertikal spiegeln. So etwa: http://puu.sh/y6sS ok
00:09:970 (2) - Hier das Gleiche. Sieht nachher schöner aus. ok
00:10:345 (3) - Auf den Ende ein Finish? habe dort ein whistle gesetzt, finish finde ich dafür... ein wenig unpassend >.<
00:18:595 (1,2,3) - Gefällt mir =) danke ^^
00:22:345 (2) - Hier auf das Ende ein Finish mit 40%? dasselbe wie bei 00:10:345 (3) >.<
00:23:095 (1,2,3,4) - und 00:26:095 (1,2,3,4) - Ich würde hier, da sie gleich singt und betont, auch den Abstand gleich machen. Bei dem Ersten ist er wesentlich kleiner. ok
00:53:095 (1) - Der Slow Down hier ist wirklich bösartig. Ich würde überlegen, ihn zu ändern. ok
01:03:970 (2) - Vielleicht ein Clap? hm, eher nicht >.<
Hier allerdings find ich die Lautstärke der Claps in Ordnung.


Das wär's soweit. Die map gefällt mir, ich find sie auch gut.
Deswegen hab ich wahrscheinlich auch nichts anderes als so kosmetische Kleinigkeiten gefunden. Ich hoffe mein mod hilft.

kurohana wrote:

Kurokami wrote:

Hi. o/

Hard

1. 00:07:157 (2) - finish at 00:07:720 ? how do you mean this?
2. 00:07:907 - add note i changed some other things there :3

Here is the screenshot:

Kurokami wrote:

I mean I hear two words there, the first one is finish at 00:07:720, that's why I finish the slider there. And the second one is starting at 00:07:907, where the slider is currently ends, BUT this is already a part of the second word, so I put here a note, instead of the slider's end.

Here is the screenshot:

Guy wrote:

hi! from #modreqs

　

Insane

　●　00:27:595 (2) - Form is bad. Like this? i tried something like on the picture, looks better now

SPOILER

　

Hard

　●　01:04:626 (3,4,5) - Some sense of incongruity. Like this? fixed

SPOILER

　

Normal

　●　00:25:345 (3) - 1grid left? (You make it even with the center line) no, because of spacing >.<
　●　00:28:345 (1) - 1grid left? (To put it together as above) fixed
　●　00:29:845 (2,1) - ^ ^

That's all! very nice mapset
Good Luck!

Shana Aisaka wrote:

Hi ~ M4M okay nyaan? >w<" sure :3 but i will mod it later or tomorrow, okay nyaan >.<?

[Normal]
Approach Rate + 1 fixed

[Hard]
Approach Rate + 1 fixed
Overall Difficult -1 fixed
00:13:720(x) = add note
00:16:720(x) = ^[/color] fixed
00:51:984 = I think you really should add some note here. It's a bit awkward not to have note here... fixed

[Insane]
00:48:782 = I think spinner doesn't necessary here for insane diff... Well, It's up to you.. >A<" i leave it this way :3

Hope This mod will be helpful . >w<"
That's all! Also star for you! Cause I love Shana the most! \o/
Go go rank it! >A<!!

Bobo wrote:

Hey there, from my queue ~

[General]

This bg feels really... empty... could you try find a bg that has more background to it? i leave it this way, because it's the same picture as in the video

[Normal]

00:55:720 (2,3,4) - Perhaps you could replace this with a simple repeat slider? In my opinion, you should try to avoid having 1/2 tapping in the easiest diff. fixed
01:07:720 (3,4) - To avoid the 1/2 tapping here, you could turn (3) into a hitcircle and start a 1/2 slider at 01:08:095 - :3 hm, i leave it this way :3
01:10:720 (3,4,5) - Same issue as 00:55:720, could you try use a repeat slider? fixed
01:17:657 (4,5) - And here you could use a slider instead of 2 hitcircles ~ fixed

All suggestions btw, it's just how I would map a [Normal].

[Hard]

00:52:345 (1,2,3) - In my opinion, these sorts of patterns are too hard to read for a [Hard], but again it's your choice if you would like you change it. i leave it this wy :3

[Insane]

00:43:720 (6) - I found this a little hard to read when I testplayed because the custom 300 hitmarkers kinda covered up the hitcircle. How about placing it here so that it makes a bit of a square formation with the other endpoints and is easier to read?

SPOILER

fixed
01:06:595 (1) - Could you place a new combo here for the slider slowdown? This made me sliderbreak when I tested. there is new combo, i set new combo on 2
01:12:782 - I would place a note here to keep the flow. slider repeat :3

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Beautiful mapset, take a star. Good luck getting ranked >:D

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hello ~ kurohana ~

Ramdom check beatmap ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

1. Change AudioLeadIn : 2000(1000 is too short). fixed
2. Since you're using a custom hitcircle skin, it's strongly recommended that you enforce a sliderborder code in your osu file, under [colour] events:
   

   SliderBorder : 255,255,255(any RGB value you want)

   fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:13:345 (1) - Just putting a new combo to here. fixed

That's all ~ I can find ~ nice map :3

Hope this can help you ~ Good luck with rank ~

• Offset +8

• 00:41:470 - add note?
  00:53:095 - ^

• 00:52:345 (1,2,3) - covered with "Finished" of spinner display and itself a kickslider, it seems a little hard to read rhythm.
  how about not to separate them?
  01:17:470 (4) - it may be confusing because the time of reverse is different with 01:16:720 (3).
  how about reduce reversing and put note at 01:18:220 ?

• 00:31:345 - "I" don't like changing of SV, so it may prejudice of mine, but if I can say, don't change SV or reduce multiplier to 75%.
  it seems confusing, because 00:30:220 (3) and 00:31:345 (1) looks completely same length and the melody doesn't change so much.
  00:32:845 (1) - ^
  00:34:345 (1) - ^
  00:36:782 (2,3,4) - I think these notes doesn't follow the vocal, because the start of (2), there is nothing to emphasize in music. and the end of (3), there is accent of vocal. I prefer to put circle or start of slider on the accent of vocal or music, but if this is your rhythm, you don't have to change.
  00:59:657 (2,3,4) - ^
  01:04:157 (3,4) - ^
  01:06:595 (1) - I say no for this.
  01:12:407 (6,1) - according to the flow, how about make a little jump between these notes?
  01:14:470 (5,6) - ^
  01:17:938 (6) - it sounds noisy. I don't like this stream. how about separate these note like this?
  SPOILER

  

h-728 wrote:

Thank you for request

[General]

• Offset +8 fixed

[Normal]

• 00:41:470 - add note? fixed
  00:53:095 - ^ fixed

[Hard]

• 00:52:345 (1,2,3) - covered with "Finished" of spinner display and itself a kickslider, it seems a little hard to read rhythm.
  how about not to separate them? fixed
  01:17:470 (4) - it may be confusing because the time of reverse is different with 01:16:720 (3).
  how about reduce reversing and put note at 01:18:220 ? fixed

[Insane]

• 00:31:345 - "I" don't like changing of SV, so it may prejudice of mine, but if I can say, don't change SV or reduce multiplier to 75%.
  it seems confusing, because 00:30:220 (3) and 00:31:345 (1) looks completely same length and the melody doesn't change so much. no, i leave it like this ^^
  00:32:845 (1) - ^ ^
  00:34:345 (1) - ^ ^
  00:36:782 (2,3,4) - I think these notes doesn't follow the vocal, because the start of (2), there is nothing to emphasize in music. and the end of (3), there is accent of vocal. I prefer to put circle or start of slider on the accent of vocal or music, but if this is your rhythm, you don't have to change. no, i leave it like this ^^
  00:59:657 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
  01:04:157 (3,4) - ^ ^
  01:06:595 (1) - I say no for this. fixed
  01:12:407 (6,1) - according to the flow, how about make a little jump between these notes? fixed
  01:14:470 (5,6) - ^ no, i leave it like this ^^
  01:17:938 (6) - it sounds noisy. I don't like this stream. how about separate these note like this? fixed
  SPOILER

  

comment: I was puzzled if I should suggest you to make Hard more hard, for example, increasing SV.
but consider that the real BPM of this song is 80, I decided to cancel my opinion.
if you have a time, could you tell me how do you think to this?
anyway, good maps. good luck

Kert wrote:

[Insane]
00:03:415 (5) - Couldn't read that right on the first try
What do you think of putting it like this to improve readability? You may also stack it on the slider fixed

Clean =w= Have a star

1. Please add "anime" to the tags.
2. This kiai times on your Insane difficulty are slightly inconsistent. http://puu.sh/PPNl There are also many unsnapped timing sections, but that really doesn't matter.
3. 00:48:978 (1) - This spinner in all of the difficulties sounds rather odd to be silenced due to the fact that there's an audible beat at the end of it. Please un-silence it.

1. 00:26:853 (3) - Center this slider by moving it one grid to the left. You seem to be centering some of your patterns, so this makes sense.

1. Why is the HP drain only 4? This is much too easy; please raise it by one.
2. 00:23:103 (3) - This should be one grid up for a perfect triangle.

1. I can't find anything wrong. This is a wonderful difficulty.

Jacob wrote:

Hey there. Taking this from #modreqs.

[General]

1. Please add "anime" to the tags. fixed
2. This kiai times on your Insane difficulty are slightly inconsistent. http://puu.sh/PPNl There are also many unsnapped timing sections, but that really doesn't matter. resnapped all timing sections, baka me forgot that >w<
3. 00:48:978 (1) - This spinner in all of the difficulties sounds rather odd to be silenced due to the fact that there's an audible beat at the end of it. Please un-silence it. fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:26:853 (3) - Center this slider by moving it one grid to the left. You seem to be centering some of your patterns, so this makes sense. fixed

Wow. This difficulty is almost flawless; symmetrical sliders and nice patterns. Very nice job.

[Hard]

1. Why is the HP drain only 4? This is much too easy; please raise it by one. fixed
2. 00:23:103 (3) - This should be one grid up for a perfect triangle. fixed

[Insane]

1. I can't find anything wrong. This is a wonderful difficulty. T-thank you >////<

pyransc wrote:

[Normal]
00:43:353 (2) - end slider at 00:44:103 fixed
00:44:478 - add circle with finish fixed, but i didn't set finish
01:07:728 (3) - add reverse no
01:08:290 - remove circle i moved the circle, same effect as your suggestion

[Hard]
00:41:853 (4) - remove clap, add finish on first circle fixed

Konei wrote:

Mod =w=~~

General

Du musst die letterboxes während der Pausen deaktivieren, weil du ein video hast ok

Comboburst0.png ist ein bisschen NSFW, ich weiß nicht, ob das so schlimm ist :/ hm, ich werds ja sehen xD war halt so bei dem skin...


Normal


01:17:665 (4) Ich würde hier nur einen circle auf 01:17:853 benutzen, weil ich denke, dass das dem Lied mehr entspricht tatsache, habs geändert



Hard

00:24:603 (1) auf dem Start würde ein leichter finish gut passen hm, ich lasse es beim alten, mag ich so lieber <3

00:27:603 (1) ^ ? ^


Insane


01:16:728 (1,2,3,4,5,6) Diese Streams kommen mir ein bisschen overmaped vor, weil sie sich ein bisschen stark von der Musik abheben, denke ich >.< ich hab dafür sonst keine andere idee...



Ok, hab mir das jetzt ne Stunde angesehen und es ist so fehlerfrei, lol.

Hier hast du einen Stern

Viel Glück~

1. I think you should lower the 70% volume to 60 it's just too loud and i can't hear the song clearly~
2. plz make the clap consistent in 2 beats >< I think it's fits this song ~

1. 00:30:603 (1) - I think you should remove this NC the vocal is still going and it has it stopped~
2. 00:41:478 (3) - move this 1 grid up so it'll lined with the next slider~
3. 00:42:603 (5,1) - switch the NC here the vocal started on 5 not the 1 orz~
4. 00:44:853 (5) - move this slider 1 grid right and up, it'll be perfect like this ><
5. 00:44:853 (5) - lower this finish it's just too loud for this song~
6. 00:46:728 (2) - why the clap on red tick? I think you should remove it and add it at the end of this slider~
7. 00:55:728 (2) - move the 2nd slider point 2 grid right so it'll blanket the other slider~
8. 00:56:478 (x) - i think you missed a note here it's seems off to me >< /
9. 01:01:728 (2) - same with 00:46:728 (2) -
10. 01:12:978 (x) - Add note here, it'll be playable better imo~
11. 01:17:665 (4,5) - remove those finishes on red ticks and then but them on white one instead~

1. 00:26:103 (1) - it's hard diff so it's fine to make long combo so remove this NC i dont think it's fits here~

1. 00:34:353 (1) - useless NC here so remove it~
2. 00:52:353 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - WOW NICE SLIDER MIXED WITH BLANKET SLIDERS xD I loved this <3
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:01:728 (4) - move this last slider point 2 grid to the left, i think it'll be perfect after that~
4. 01:16:728 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - totally over mapped ;_; sorry to say that~

-Sekai- wrote:

Hey kurohana >w<///

General:

1. I think you should lower the 70% volume to 60 it's just too loud and i can't hear the song clearly~ fixed
2. plz make the clap consistent in 2 beats >< I think it's fits this song ~ i put clap on every second white tick, because original bmp is 80

Normal:
I think you should move the HP +1 so it'll be ok with the diff~ fixed

1. 00:30:603 (1) - I think you should remove this NC the vocal is still going and it has it stopped~
2. 00:41:478 (3) - move this 1 grid up so it'll lined with the next slider~ fixed
3. 00:42:603 (5,1) - switch the NC here the vocal started on 5 not the 1 orz~ fixed
4. 00:44:853 (5) - move this slider 1 grid right and up, it'll be perfect like this >< fixed
5. 00:44:853 (5) - lower this finish it's just too loud for this song~ fixed
6. 00:46:728 (2) - why the clap on red tick? I think you should remove it and add it at the end of this slider~ no, because real bmp is 80, so i have to set clap on every second white tick ><
7. 00:55:728 (2) - move the 2nd slider point 2 grid right so it'll blanket the other slider~ fixed changed because of setting this note
8. 00:56:478 (x) - i think you missed a note here it's seems off to me >< / fixed
9. 01:01:728 (2) - same with 00:46:728 (2) - same answer xD
10. 01:12:978 (x) - Add note here, it'll be playable better imo~ fixed
11. 01:17:665 (4,5) - remove those finishes on red ticks and then but them on white one instead~ fixed

Hard:

1. 00:26:103 (1) - it's hard diff so it's fine to make long combo so remove this NC i dont think it's fits here~ fixed

Insane:
HP +1 works well in insane diff's so I think you should rise it~

1. 00:34:353 (1) - useless NC here so remove it~ fixed and removed the slowdowns ^^
2. 00:52:353 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - WOW NICE SLIDER MIXED WITH BLANKET SLIDERS xD I loved this <3 jsdfnksjdiusrj T-thank you TTATT
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:01:728 (4) - move this last slider point 2 grid to the left, i think it'll be perfect after that~ fixed
4. 01:16:728 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - totally over mapped ;_; sorry to say that~ fixed that :3

That's all I can find, Nice map >w< and good with raning~

KuronumaSawako wrote:

Starting like this song because of this map

[General]

1. Clear
   Edit: Artist is Ishida Youko - http://vgmdb.net/album/29782 fixed, thank you :3

[Hard]

AR & OD+1? fixed

1. 00:09:790 (1): Make rhythm same as you made in Insane? fixed

Sorry for poor mod, can't find anything beacuse this map is so good...

Good luck in ranking

TheVileOne wrote:

General
I would get the timing double checked, because the notes play more awkwardly than they should.


Normal

It's an okay mapping. The blankets could look better.

00:35:853 (4,1,2) - You should make these more parallel. I really dislike 2 as a repeat slider. You should follow the vocals more. http://puu.sh/QgLp fixed
00:42:603 (5) - This is part of the next combo. already fixed by -Sekai-'s mod
00:54:603 (1,2) - This looks better. http://puu.sh/QgOf added note after this slider, so i had to move it another way
01:11:478 (4,5) - They look too high in the pattern. fixed
01:18:228 (5) - You don't need to have this so vertical. http://puu.sh/QgSb fixed in another way

Hard

Pretty much fine. The slight curves on most of the sliders is just fine for this song. The rhythm was also good.

00:48:228 (6) - Maybe have this repeat straight up? no
01:09:415 (5,1) - Make exactly 1.0 fixed
01:10:728 (2,3,4) - This pattern could be better. Make it less straight and choose a different angle. fixed

Insane

I couldn't mod it that well. Sorry

00:19:353 (3) - Sounds better broken up IMO. ?
00:43:165 (4,5) - Not sure I like this jump. I won't change it

Conclusion

It's a decent mapset considering how little beat this song actually has.

-Sekai- wrote:

Btw you forgot to give kd to helpful mods :I

There wrote:

Normal:
00:00:603 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Extend all 2's end to white beat.

Hard:
00:41:290 (4) - Replace with a 1/2 tick slider like you have later in the song.

Insane:
Couldn't really find anything I didn't like.

shojimeguro wrote:

Normal
Try to use distance snap to rearrange your beats fixed, should be fine now

Hard
change slider tick rate 2 no, because easy and insane only got tickrate 1 too ><

Insane
nothing to say

all beats seems right in place

then i must take my leave
good luck and i'm sure ur beatmap will be ranked for sure!!!

• 
  
  [Hard]
  Rhythms
  
  1. 1. 00:40:915: add clap on the tail?
     2. 00:41:290: ^
     3. 00:41:853: ^
     4. 00:42:415: clap?
     5. 00:43:353: change the head to clap?
     6. 00:43:915: clap on the reverse?
     7. 00:53:478: whistle?
     8. 00:54:228: ^
     9. 00:55:915: clap on the head?
     10. 00:56:478: ^
     11. 00:58:915: ^
     12. 00:59:478: clap?
     13. 01:01:728: clap on the tail?
     14. 01:04:915: clap on head?
     15. 01:08:290: ^
     16. 01:14:290: ^
     17. 01:15:415: clap on the end?
  [Insane]
  

1. 00:47:861 (4) - sry a little nazi but, move the center point to x:268 y:328 for a perfect blanket around 3

1. 00:19:923 (2) - remove whistle here because 00:16:736 (2) - (which is similar) doesnt have whistle
2. 00:40:923 (3) - try putting a clap at the beginning of the slider instead

1. 01:05:767 (2) - remove note , it will fit instruments more >< and also , i think the 2 triplets sound awkward next to each other

meiikyuu wrote:

sorry for the delay ><

Normal

1. 00:47:861 (4) - sry a little nazi but, move the center point to x:268 y:328 for a perfect blanket around 3 fixed

pretty nice

Hard

1. 00:19:923 (2) - remove whistle here because 00:16:736 (2) - (which is similar) doesnt have whistle no
2. 00:40:923 (3) - try putting a clap at the beginning of the slider instead fixed

Insane

1. 01:05:767 (2) - remove note , it will fit instruments more >< and also , i think the 2 triplets sound awkward next to each other fixed

sorry x_x couldnt find much, its a good mapset ~ gl

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Halloww ~

I was hoping someone would map this song <3


[General]
- You can remove the bookmarks ~


[Normal]
00:01:736 (2) - Reverse. no, because there aren't beats in the song
00:02:861 - Add a circle. ^
00:04:736 (2) - Reverse. ^
00:05:861 - Add a circle. ^
00:07:736 (2) - Reverse. ^
00:08:861 - Add a circle. ^
00:48:798 (1) - Extend to 00:52:361 ? it would be too difficult for beginners, and AImod says too ><


[Hard]
00:48:798 (1) - Extend to 00:52:361 ? there is a slider >.<


[Insane]
00:48:798 (1) - Extend to 00:52:361 ? already placed with notes
00:54:611 (1) - Place where 00:53:111 (1) was. fixed


Well mapped ~
Good luck and star! >w<

Mikarunoel131 wrote:

heyyy you ~ (^.^~) Want to help you again
Ich mach nen kleinen Soundcheck und schau einfach nochmal alles genau an =D
Ich will es einfach geranked sehen xD

So, nu gehts los ^^

Normal

00:40:923 da clap setzen und den bei 00:41:111 lösche. Hört sich besser an =)
01:17:111 folge der Stimme und setze dort in clap =) Hört sich gut an ^^

Hard

00:38:198 war da nicht mal ein clap an diesen Stellen? Mir persönlich fehlt es TTvTT
00:41:298 setz dort das clap und der danach löschen, passt perfekt x3
00:44:298 add clap ?
ab 00:55:923 fehlen mir die klatscher total TTvTT Du hattest alles ja so schön nach rythem gemapped TTvTT Nur wegen Anderen auf die zu verzichten wäre echt Schade. würdest du die wieder einfügen nach rythem ? Wenn es dir damals auch besser gefiel mit ihnen.

Insane

00:38:289 clap vergessen ? beim nächsten, der nach dem drum rythem geht hast du ein clap gesetzt ^^
00:42:236 clap hier , bei dem nächsten circle den clap einfach lassen dun anhören. ^^ Zusammen gehen sie nach dem rythem im HG ^^
00:44:298 hier wieder ein clap vergessen. Den nächsten bei 00:47:298 hattest du wieder mit clap besetzt . So würden alel wieder zsuammen passen ^^
Ab dem kiai fehlen mir wieder die ganzen clap, die im rythem zum HG waren, wie bei den anderen diff auch. Du musst wissen , ob du sie wieder einfügen möchtest =) Wenn sie dir auch fehlen ^w^

So das war es auch schon =D
Bis dahin ^^

I change tomorrow

Mikarunoel131 wrote:

I change tomorrow

When is for you tomorrow ? xD 2 Weeks later xD ?

kurohana wrote:

tut mir leid, mir gehts in letzter zeit echt schlecht, halsschmerzen und so... da hab ich halt keinen bock, das zu machen

Jo ,kenn dich doch ;D Mach dir man keinen Kopf ^-^ Gute Besserung

Mikarunoel131 wrote:

heyyy you ~ (^.^~) Want to help you again
Ich mach nen kleinen Soundcheck und schau einfach nochmal alles genau an =D
Ich will es einfach geranked sehen xD

So, nu gehts los ^^

Normal

00:40:923 da clap setzen und den bei 00:41:111 lösche. Hört sich besser an =)
01:17:111 folge der Stimme und setze dort in clap =) Hört sich gut an ^^

Hard

00:38:198 war da nicht mal ein clap an diesen Stellen? Mir persönlich fehlt es TTvTT
00:41:298 setz dort das clap und der danach löschen, passt perfekt x3
00:44:298 add clap ?
ab 00:55:923 fehlen mir die klatscher total TTvTT Du hattest alles ja so schön nach rythem gemapped TTvTT Nur wegen Anderen auf die zu verzichten wäre echt Schade. würdest du die wieder einfügen nach rythem ? Wenn es dir damals auch besser gefiel mit ihnen.

Insane

00:38:289 clap vergessen ? beim nächsten, der nach dem drum rythem geht hast du ein clap gesetzt ^^
00:42:236 clap hier , bei dem nächsten circle den clap einfach lassen dun anhören. ^^ Zusammen gehen sie nach dem rythem im HG ^^
00:44:298 hier wieder ein clap vergessen. Den nächsten bei 00:47:298 hattest du wieder mit clap besetzt . So würden alel wieder zsuammen passen ^^
Ab dem kiai fehlen mir wieder die ganzen clap, die im rythem zum HG waren, wie bei den anderen diff auch. Du musst wissen , ob du sie wieder einfügen möchtest =) Wenn sie dir auch fehlen ^w^

So das war es auch schon =D
Bis dahin ^^

ok, fixed all (i think...)

Mikarunoel131 wrote:

ok, fixed all (i think...)

Well than, here is my re-check for you^-^

General

Nothing x3

Normal

Nothing ;D

Hard

Nothing, too xD

Insane

00:42:423 add clap to follow rythem like in hard diff fixd
00:57:798 delet clap fixd
01:00:798 ^ fixd
01:03:798 ^ maybe , because you have no finish befor it, it doesn`t sound so bad like the others from befor. fixd
01:09:798 delet clap fixd
01:12:798 ^ fixd
good suggestion for end : maybe make this sound ? 01:15:236 ende slider 6, combo 7 and beginning if slider 1 clap . no
Afterwards : 01:15:986 end of slider 1, combo 2 and start of slider 3 clap. no
After that : 01:16:736 start and end of slider 4 and start of slider 5 clap. also clap at 01:18:423 ^^ no
It sounds really good for the end of the beatmap ^^ Just try it If you like my re check I made a good job (\^w^/) what?

That is all I can do ^-^

See you ~

dragonxcz wrote:

Hi from your modding queue.

M4M

[Insane]

00:21:423 (6) - Really easy to do 100. I strongly recommend to move it on 00:21:236 (and stack with end of 00:20:673 (5) or simply resnap it) fixed
01:03:048 (6) - This jump has not sense.. resnap it in regular snap (156;140 coordinates fits well) fixed

Really not bad. I think this is ready for bubble. Thanks

[Hard]

00:00:611 (1) - I really don't like ugly sliders and this is terrible one. Solution: Move center point 5-8 points down fixed
00:03:611 (1) - ^ fixed
00:12:611 (1) - ^ fixed
00:30:611 (1) - There it fits better, but not before fixed
01:09:611 (1) - Again ugly:D fixed
01:13:361 (2) - Move on 456;196 to keep consistent distance between sliders fixed
01:18:423 (6,7) - It's better to place notes linear than so weird (6) - 272;232 (7) - 244;272 fixed in another way (other numbers lol)

[Normal]

00:29:861 (2,1) - This pattern is really cool, but it's bad to make those sliders so linear, try to make it more shaped fixed
00:37:736 (2,3) - Distance between those notes is inconsistent. fixed
01:12:986 (6) - Move on 260;268 to perfectly stack with 01:15:236 (3) fixed

Really nice beatmap.

1. The quality of the mp3 is quite low imo. If you can please search for a better mp3, it's ok if you can't though as the current one is quite decent enough.
2. Unlike the mp3, the video is horrid. Read this thread for better video converting or if you can give me the HD video, I could convert it for you.
3. Any custom Spinner bonus & Spinner spin file in the map folder will override the default sound. That said it doesn't matter even if you use timing sections to lower/increase the sound (eg: 00:10:736 (1) on normal) are useless as the spinner will be soundless even if you default hit sample. If you intend to silent only one spinner, use timing section instead

1. 00:48:798 (1) - This spinner is better with the spinner spin & spinner bonus sound, but try to add timing section on 00:48:798 with 40% volume. Anymore than that will overpower the song.
2. 01:12:986 (6) - NC this
3. 01:13:361 (1) - Remove NC

1. 00:18:611 (1) - Because of this slider is tricky to read 00:19:923 (2,3,4) as these objects closely follow the vocal. Try a similar rhythm as on 00:06:611 (1,2,3,4) or try this rhythm below
   
2. 00:40:736 (2,3) - For better playability, I suggest to unstack 00:40:923 (3). It'll be easier to read if you unstack them
3. 00:48:798 (1) - Same as above
4. 01:13:361 (2) - The 2 previous sliders are linear and they are parallel to this slider but the curve slider make those 2 looks bad, so I suggest to use linear instead a curve slider to make them look consistent and neat

Sallad4ever wrote:

Oh, this is quite an old song

[General]

1. The quality of the mp3 is quite low imo. If you can please search for a better mp3, it's ok if you can't though as the current one is quite decent enough. fixed
2. Unlike the mp3, the video is horrid. Read this thread for better video converting or if you can give me the HD video, I could convert it for you. Pleease, convert it for me >.< i tried, but i failed D: better quality video: http://puu.sh/1fqCL
3. Any custom Spinner bonus & Spinner spin file in the map folder will override the default sound. That said it doesn't matter even if you use timing sections to lower/increase the sound (eg: 00:10:736 (1) on normal) are useless as the spinner will be soundless even if you default hit sample. If you intend to silent only one spinner, use timing section instead deleted the 2 files

[Normal]

1. 00:48:798 (1) - This spinner is better with the spinner spin & spinner bonus sound, but try to add timing section on 00:48:798 with 40% volume. Anymore than that will overpower the song. fixed
2. 01:12:986 (6) - NC this fixed
3. 01:13:361 (1) - Remove NC fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:18:611 (1) - Because of this slider is tricky to read 00:19:923 (2,3,4) as these objects closely follow the vocal. Try a similar rhythm as on 00:06:611 (1,2,3,4) or try this rhythm below fixed, i tried something like the rhythm, only little change
   
2. 00:40:736 (2,3) - For better playability, I suggest to unstack 00:40:923 (3). It'll be easier to read if you unstack them fixed
3. 00:48:798 (1) - Same as above fixed
4. 01:13:361 (2) - The 2 previous sliders are linear and they are parallel to this slider but the curve slider make those 2 looks bad, so I suggest to use linear instead a curve slider to make them look consistent and neat fixed

Yup that's all, call back after you fix them for re-check

Sallad4ever wrote:

Sorry for the late reply, I've some problem with the converting. So here's the video the offset for it is 0
As for the offset use 776 (+3 from current offset) also remove anime from the tags as it'll add latter in the genre by BAT

Sallad4ever wrote:

[Insane]

This is why you should always double check your map after timing change

Nrrgh, but i have resnapped TTATT okaay, fixed everything, NOW i'm ready, really xDD

I know that... After the updates edit is only full off bugs. My circle run berserk and my slider are sometimes making what they want, lol.
Also After I made new new timeing, resnapped everything but than chaneged my rythem, my circle and slider were unsnapped again...
Also the speed of my slider changed, but the circle had normal speed as befor orz...
Editing is no fun these days ... TTvTT

Kurorhana you can make it ! Go go Bubble xD

Mikarunoel131 wrote:

Nrrgh, but i have resnapped TTATT okaay, fixed everything, NOW i'm ready, really xDD

I know that... After the updates edit is only full off bugs. My circle run berserk and my slider are sometimes making what they want, lol.
Also After I made new new timeing, resnapped everything but than chaneged my rythem, my circle and slider were unsnapped again...
Also the speed of my slider changed, but the circle had normal speed as befor orz...
Editing is no fun these days ... TTvTT

Kurorhana you can make it ! Go go Bubble xD

Mikarunoel131 wrote:

Nrrgh, but i have resnapped TTATT okaay, fixed everything, NOW i'm ready, really xDD

I know that... After the updates edit is only full off bugs. My circle run berserk and my slider are sometimes making what they want, lol.
Also After I made new new timeing, resnapped everything but than chaneged my rythem, my circle and slider were unsnapped again...
Also the speed of my slider changed, but the circle had normal speed as befor orz...
Editing is no fun these days ... TTvTT

Kurorhana you can make it ! Go go Bubble xD

Mikarunoel131 wrote:

Go Go ! Get it ranked my baka x3

Sakura wrote:

OD6 on Insane? really? that's the same OD as Hard, please raise OD by 2 on Insane and i'll rank this.

nich95 wrote:

Congrats

Mikarunoel131 wrote:

Congratz my Baka Your beatmap is awesome so I hope for a good rating x3

Mangafan204 wrote:

Congratz to your second ranked beatmap Kurohana alias Horsto~ XDD Like the song and the beatmap~ =)

Sallad4ever wrote:

Oh it's ranked quite fast after bubble. Well congratz for the rank