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Nichiyouki


Hi, kurohana

M4M request

Red = Unrankable
Biue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

  1. Fine

Normal

  1. 01:18:228 (5) - Remove clap in slider end, because it's too loud.

Hard

  1. Good diff

Insane

  1. 00:21:040 - I think that move a green line to 00:21:603 (1) - be better.
  2. 00:36:228 (4) - Add clap in slider begin and end be better.
  3. 00:41:290 (2) - Slider end at 00:41:478, and add a note in 00:41:665? But I suggest that add clap in slider begin.
  4. 00:47:103 (1) - Add clap in slider end?
  5. 00:53:103 (1) - Move to up 1 grid
  6. 00:53:853 (3,3) - Stack it.
  7. 01:12:040 (5,6) - Add clap in slider end of (5), and slider begin of (6). Because I heard something here.
  8. 01:14:853 (6,7) - The same reason with 01:12:040 (5,6) - Add clap in slider end of (6), and circle of (7).

That's all that I can find them.
nice map and song, give a star ;)

Good luck~
Topic Starter
kurohana
Thank you all for mod :) fixed a lot ^^
meiikyuu

sorry for the delay ><

Normal
  1. 00:47:861 (4) - sry a little nazi but, move the center point to x:268 y:328 for a perfect blanket around 3
pretty nice

Hard
  1. 00:19:923 (2) - remove whistle here because 00:16:736 (2) - (which is similar) doesnt have whistle
  2. 00:40:923 (3) - try putting a clap at the beginning of the slider instead
Insane
  1. 01:05:767 (2) - remove note , it will fit instruments more >< and also , i think the 2 triplets sound awkward next to each other

sorry x_x couldnt find much, its a good mapset ~ gl
Mikarunoel131_DELETED
Hope this is going to be ranked soon x3 Love the beatmap and the song and it all fits so well x333
Topic Starter
kurohana

meiikyuu wrote:


sorry for the delay ><

Normal
  1. 00:47:861 (4) - sry a little nazi but, move the center point to x:268 y:328 for a perfect blanket around 3 fixed
pretty nice

Hard
  1. 00:19:923 (2) - remove whistle here because 00:16:736 (2) - (which is similar) doesnt have whistle no
  2. 00:40:923 (3) - try putting a clap at the beginning of the slider instead fixed
Insane
  1. 01:05:767 (2) - remove note , it will fit instruments more >< and also , i think the 2 triplets sound awkward next to each other fixed

sorry x_x couldnt find much, its a good mapset ~ gl
Thank you for mod :3
Kanari
Halloww ~

I was hoping someone would map this song <3


[General]
- You can remove the bookmarks ~


[Normal]
00:01:736 (2) - Reverse.
00:02:861 - Add a circle.
00:04:736 (2) - Reverse.
00:05:861 - Add a circle.
00:07:736 (2) - Reverse.
00:08:861 - Add a circle.
00:48:798 (1) - Extend to 00:52:361 ?


[Hard]
00:48:798 (1) - Extend to 00:52:361 ?


[Insane]
00:48:798 (1) - Extend to 00:52:361 ?
00:54:611 (1) - Place where 00:53:111 (1) was.


Well mapped ~
Good luck and star! >w<
Topic Starter
kurohana

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Halloww ~

I was hoping someone would map this song <3


[General]
- You can remove the bookmarks ~


[Normal]
00:01:736 (2) - Reverse. no, because there aren't beats in the song
00:02:861 - Add a circle. ^
00:04:736 (2) - Reverse. ^
00:05:861 - Add a circle. ^
00:07:736 (2) - Reverse. ^
00:08:861 - Add a circle. ^
00:48:798 (1) - Extend to 00:52:361 ? it would be too difficult for beginners, and AImod says too ><


[Hard]
00:48:798 (1) - Extend to 00:52:361 ? there is a slider >.<


[Insane]
00:48:798 (1) - Extend to 00:52:361 ? already placed with notes
00:54:611 (1) - Place where 00:53:111 (1) was. fixed


Well mapped ~
Good luck and star! >w<
Thankyu for mod, Crystal :33
Mikarunoel131_DELETED
heyyy you ~ (^.^~) Want to help you again :D
Ich mach nen kleinen Soundcheck und schau einfach nochmal alles genau an =D
Ich will es einfach geranked sehen xD


So, nu gehts los ^^

Normal

00:40:923 da clap setzen und den bei 00:41:111 lösche. Hört sich besser an =)
01:17:111 folge der Stimme und setze dort in clap =) Hört sich gut an ^^

Hard

00:38:198 war da nicht mal ein clap an diesen Stellen? Mir persönlich fehlt es TTvTT
00:41:298 setz dort das clap und der danach löschen, passt perfekt x3
00:44:298 add clap ?
ab 00:55:923 fehlen mir die klatscher total TTvTT Du hattest alles ja so schön nach rythem gemapped TTvTT Nur wegen Anderen auf die zu verzichten wäre echt Schade. würdest du die wieder einfügen nach rythem ? Wenn es dir damals auch besser gefiel mit ihnen.

Insane

00:38:289 clap vergessen ? beim nächsten, der nach dem drum rythem geht hast du ein clap gesetzt ^^
00:42:236 clap hier , bei dem nächsten circle den clap einfach lassen dun anhören. ^^ Zusammen gehen sie nach dem rythem im HG ^^
00:44:298 hier wieder ein clap vergessen. Den nächsten bei 00:47:298 hattest du wieder mit clap besetzt . So würden alel wieder zsuammen passen ^^
Ab dem kiai fehlen mir wieder die ganzen clap, die im rythem zum HG waren, wie bei den anderen diff auch. Du musst wissen , ob du sie wieder einfügen möchtest =) Wenn sie dir auch fehlen ^w^

So das war es auch schon =D
Bis dahin ^^
Topic Starter
kurohana

Mikarunoel131 wrote:

heyyy you ~ (^.^~) Want to help you again :D
Ich mach nen kleinen Soundcheck und schau einfach nochmal alles genau an =D
Ich will es einfach geranked sehen xD


So, nu gehts los ^^

Normal

00:40:923 da clap setzen und den bei 00:41:111 lösche. Hört sich besser an =)
01:17:111 folge der Stimme und setze dort in clap =) Hört sich gut an ^^

Hard

00:38:198 war da nicht mal ein clap an diesen Stellen? Mir persönlich fehlt es TTvTT
00:41:298 setz dort das clap und der danach löschen, passt perfekt x3
00:44:298 add clap ?
ab 00:55:923 fehlen mir die klatscher total TTvTT Du hattest alles ja so schön nach rythem gemapped TTvTT Nur wegen Anderen auf die zu verzichten wäre echt Schade. würdest du die wieder einfügen nach rythem ? Wenn es dir damals auch besser gefiel mit ihnen.

Insane

00:38:289 clap vergessen ? beim nächsten, der nach dem drum rythem geht hast du ein clap gesetzt ^^
00:42:236 clap hier , bei dem nächsten circle den clap einfach lassen dun anhören. ^^ Zusammen gehen sie nach dem rythem im HG ^^
00:44:298 hier wieder ein clap vergessen. Den nächsten bei 00:47:298 hattest du wieder mit clap besetzt . So würden alel wieder zsuammen passen ^^
Ab dem kiai fehlen mir wieder die ganzen clap, die im rythem zum HG waren, wie bei den anderen diff auch. Du musst wissen , ob du sie wieder einfügen möchtest =) Wenn sie dir auch fehlen ^w^

So das war es auch schon =D
Bis dahin ^^
I change tomorrow

i'm ill, please wait
Mikarunoel131_DELETED
I change tomorrow
When is for you tomorrow ? xD 2 Weeks later xD ?
Topic Starter
kurohana

Mikarunoel131 wrote:

I change tomorrow
When is for you tomorrow ? xD 2 Weeks later xD ?
tut mir leid, mir gehts in letzter zeit echt schlecht, halsschmerzen und so... da hab ich halt keinen bock, das zu machen
Mikarunoel131_DELETED

kurohana wrote:

tut mir leid, mir gehts in letzter zeit echt schlecht, halsschmerzen und so... da hab ich halt keinen bock, das zu machen
Jo ,kenn dich doch ;D Mach dir man keinen Kopf ^-^ Gute Besserung :D
Topic Starter
kurohana

Mikarunoel131 wrote:

heyyy you ~ (^.^~) Want to help you again :D
Ich mach nen kleinen Soundcheck und schau einfach nochmal alles genau an =D
Ich will es einfach geranked sehen xD


So, nu gehts los ^^

Normal

00:40:923 da clap setzen und den bei 00:41:111 lösche. Hört sich besser an =)
01:17:111 folge der Stimme und setze dort in clap =) Hört sich gut an ^^

Hard

00:38:198 war da nicht mal ein clap an diesen Stellen? Mir persönlich fehlt es TTvTT
00:41:298 setz dort das clap und der danach löschen, passt perfekt x3
00:44:298 add clap ?
ab 00:55:923 fehlen mir die klatscher total TTvTT Du hattest alles ja so schön nach rythem gemapped TTvTT Nur wegen Anderen auf die zu verzichten wäre echt Schade. würdest du die wieder einfügen nach rythem ? Wenn es dir damals auch besser gefiel mit ihnen.

Insane

00:38:289 clap vergessen ? beim nächsten, der nach dem drum rythem geht hast du ein clap gesetzt ^^
00:42:236 clap hier , bei dem nächsten circle den clap einfach lassen dun anhören. ^^ Zusammen gehen sie nach dem rythem im HG ^^
00:44:298 hier wieder ein clap vergessen. Den nächsten bei 00:47:298 hattest du wieder mit clap besetzt . So würden alel wieder zsuammen passen ^^
Ab dem kiai fehlen mir wieder die ganzen clap, die im rythem zum HG waren, wie bei den anderen diff auch. Du musst wissen , ob du sie wieder einfügen möchtest =) Wenn sie dir auch fehlen ^w^

So das war es auch schon =D
Bis dahin ^^
ok, fixed all (i think...)
Mikarunoel131_DELETED
ok, fixed all (i think...)
Well than, here is my re-check for you^-^

General

Nothing x3

Normal

Nothing ;D

Hard

Nothing, too xD


Insane

00:42:423 add clap to follow rythem like in hard diff :D
00:57:798 delet clap
01:00:798 ^
01:03:798 ^ maybe , because you have no finish befor it, it doesn`t sound so bad like the others from befor.
01:09:798 delet clap
01:12:798 ^
good suggestion for end : maybe make this sound ? 01:15:236 ende slider 6, combo 7 and beginning if slider 1 clap .
Afterwards : 01:15:986 end of slider 1, combo 2 and start of slider 3 clap.
After that : 01:16:736 start and end of slider 4 and start of slider 5 clap. also clap at 01:18:423 ^^
It sounds really good for the end of the beatmap ^^ Just try it :D If you like my re check I made a good job (\^w^/)

That is all I can do ^-^

See you ~
Topic Starter
kurohana

Mikarunoel131 wrote:

ok, fixed all (i think...)
Well than, here is my re-check for you^-^

General

Nothing x3

Normal

Nothing ;D

Hard

Nothing, too xD


Insane

00:42:423 add clap to follow rythem like in hard diff :D fixd
00:57:798 delet clap fixd
01:00:798 ^ fixd
01:03:798 ^ maybe , because you have no finish befor it, it doesn`t sound so bad like the others from befor. fixd
01:09:798 delet clap fixd
01:12:798 ^ fixd
good suggestion for end : maybe make this sound ? 01:15:236 ende slider 6, combo 7 and beginning if slider 1 clap . no
Afterwards : 01:15:986 end of slider 1, combo 2 and start of slider 3 clap. no
After that : 01:16:736 start and end of slider 4 and start of slider 5 clap. also clap at 01:18:423 ^^ no
It sounds really good for the end of the beatmap ^^ Just try it :D If you like my re check I made a good job (\^w^/) what?

That is all I can do ^-^

See you ~
Mikarunoel131_DELETED
Oh yeah I am soo smart xD
I forgot one delet clap in Insane at 01:06:798 xD I will call him: The Lost One xD
And now :D Go Go get ranked soon x3
Wafu
Hi from your modding queue.

M4M

[Insane]

00:21:423 (6) - Really easy to do 100. I strongly recommend to move it on 00:21:236 (and stack with end of 00:20:673 (5) or simply resnap it)
01:03:048 (6) - This jump has not sense.. resnap it in regular snap (156;140 coordinates fits well)

Really not bad. I think this is ready for bubble.

[Hard]

00:00:611 (1) - I really don't like ugly sliders and this is terrible one. Solution: Move center point 5-8 points down
00:03:611 (1) - ^
00:12:611 (1) - ^
00:30:611 (1) - There it fits better, but not before ;)
01:09:611 (1) - Again ugly:D
01:13:361 (2) - Move on 456;196 to keep consistent distance between sliders
01:18:423 (6,7) - It's better to place notes linear than so weird :D (6) - 272;232 (7) - 244;272

[Normal]

00:29:861 (2,1) - This pattern is really cool, but it's bad to make those sliders so linear, try to make it more shaped
00:37:736 (2,3) - Distance between those notes is inconsistent.
01:12:986 (6) - Move on 260;268 to perfectly stack with 01:15:236 (3)

Really nice beatmap.
Topic Starter
kurohana

dragonxcz wrote:

Hi from your modding queue.

M4M

[Insane]

00:21:423 (6) - Really easy to do 100. I strongly recommend to move it on 00:21:236 (and stack with end of 00:20:673 (5) or simply resnap it) fixed
01:03:048 (6) - This jump has not sense.. resnap it in regular snap (156;140 coordinates fits well) fixed

Really not bad. I think this is ready for bubble. Thanks :D

[Hard]

00:00:611 (1) - I really don't like ugly sliders and this is terrible one. Solution: Move center point 5-8 points down fixed
00:03:611 (1) - ^ fixed
00:12:611 (1) - ^ fixed
00:30:611 (1) - There it fits better, but not before ;) fixed
01:09:611 (1) - Again ugly:D fixed
01:13:361 (2) - Move on 456;196 to keep consistent distance between sliders fixed
01:18:423 (6,7) - It's better to place notes linear than so weird :D (6) - 272;232 (7) - 244;272 fixed in another way (other numbers lol)

[Normal]

00:29:861 (2,1) - This pattern is really cool, but it's bad to make those sliders so linear, try to make it more shaped fixed
00:37:736 (2,3) - Distance between those notes is inconsistent. fixed
01:12:986 (6) - Move on 260;268 to perfectly stack with 01:15:236 (3) fixed

Really nice beatmap.
Thank you for mod ^^
Sallad4ever
Oh, this is quite an old song

[General]
  1. The quality of the mp3 is quite low imo. If you can please search for a better mp3, it's ok if you can't though as the current one is quite decent enough.
  2. Unlike the mp3, the video is horrid. Read this thread for better video converting or if you can give me the HD video, I could convert it for you.
  3. Any custom Spinner bonus & Spinner spin file in the map folder will override the default sound. That said it doesn't matter even if you use timing sections to lower/increase the sound (eg: 00:10:736 (1) on normal) are useless as the spinner will be soundless even if you default hit sample. If you intend to silent only one spinner, use timing section instead
[Normal]
  1. 00:48:798 (1) - This spinner is better with the spinner spin & spinner bonus sound, but try to add timing section on 00:48:798 with 40% volume. Anymore than that will overpower the song.
  2. 01:12:986 (6) - NC this
  3. 01:13:361 (1) - Remove NC
[Hard]
  1. 00:18:611 (1) - Because of this slider is tricky to read 00:19:923 (2,3,4) as these objects closely follow the vocal. Try a similar rhythm as on 00:06:611 (1,2,3,4) or try this rhythm below
  2. 00:40:736 (2,3) - For better playability, I suggest to unstack 00:40:923 (3). It'll be easier to read if you unstack them
  3. 00:48:798 (1) - Same as above
  4. 01:13:361 (2) - The 2 previous sliders are linear and they are parallel to this slider but the curve slider make those 2 looks bad, so I suggest to use linear instead a curve slider to make them look consistent and neat
Yup that's all, call back after you fix them for re-check
Topic Starter
kurohana

Sallad4ever wrote:

Oh, this is quite an old song

[General]
  1. The quality of the mp3 is quite low imo. If you can please search for a better mp3, it's ok if you can't though as the current one is quite decent enough. fixed
  2. Unlike the mp3, the video is horrid. Read this thread for better video converting or if you can give me the HD video, I could convert it for you. Pleease, convert it for me >.< i tried, but i failed D: better quality video: http://puu.sh/1fqCL
  3. Any custom Spinner bonus & Spinner spin file in the map folder will override the default sound. That said it doesn't matter even if you use timing sections to lower/increase the sound (eg: 00:10:736 (1) on normal) are useless as the spinner will be soundless even if you default hit sample. If you intend to silent only one spinner, use timing section instead deleted the 2 files
[Normal]
  1. 00:48:798 (1) - This spinner is better with the spinner spin & spinner bonus sound, but try to add timing section on 00:48:798 with 40% volume. Anymore than that will overpower the song. fixed
  2. 01:12:986 (6) - NC this fixed
  3. 01:13:361 (1) - Remove NC fixed
[Hard]
  1. 00:18:611 (1) - Because of this slider is tricky to read 00:19:923 (2,3,4) as these objects closely follow the vocal. Try a similar rhythm as on 00:06:611 (1,2,3,4) or try this rhythm below fixed, i tried something like the rhythm, only little change
  2. 00:40:736 (2,3) - For better playability, I suggest to unstack 00:40:923 (3). It'll be easier to read if you unstack them fixed
  3. 00:48:798 (1) - Same as above fixed
  4. 01:13:361 (2) - The 2 previous sliders are linear and they are parallel to this slider but the curve slider make those 2 looks bad, so I suggest to use linear instead a curve slider to make them look consistent and neat fixed
Yup that's all, call back after you fix them for re-check
Thank you for mod :3
Sallad4ever
Sorry for the late reply, I've some problem with the converting. So here's the video the offset for it is 0
As for the offset use 776 (+3 from current offset) also remove anime from the tags as it'll add latter in the genre by BAT
Topic Starter
kurohana

Sallad4ever wrote:

Sorry for the late reply, I've some problem with the converting. So here's the video the offset for it is 0
As for the offset use 776 (+3 from current offset) also remove anime from the tags as it'll add latter in the genre by BAT
Thanks, viddeo is great :D
Changed offset and removed 'anime' from tags, i'm ready now :)
Sallad4ever
[Insane]

This is why you should always double check your map after timing change
Topic Starter
kurohana

Sallad4ever wrote:

[Insane]

This is why you should always double check your map after timing change
Nrrgh, but i have resnapped TTATT okaay, fixed everything, NOW i'm ready, really xDD
Mikarunoel131_DELETED
Nrrgh, but i have resnapped TTATT okaay, fixed everything, NOW i'm ready, really xDD
I know that... After the updates edit is only full off bugs. My circle run berserk and my slider are sometimes making what they want, lol.
Also After I made new new timeing, resnapped everything but than chaneged my rythem, my circle and slider were unsnapped again...
Also the speed of my slider changed, but the circle had normal speed as befor orz...
Editing is no fun these days ... TTvTT

Kurorhana you can make it ! :) Go go Bubble xD
Topic Starter
kurohana

Mikarunoel131 wrote:

Nrrgh, but i have resnapped TTATT okaay, fixed everything, NOW i'm ready, really xDD
I know that... After the updates edit is only full off bugs. My circle run berserk and my slider are sometimes making what they want, lol.
Also After I made new new timeing, resnapped everything but than chaneged my rythem, my circle and slider were unsnapped again...
Also the speed of my slider changed, but the circle had normal speed as befor orz...
Editing is no fun these days ... TTvTT

Kurorhana you can make it ! :) Go go Bubble xD
Thankuu ~~ <33 baka Horst-Leon :3
Sallad4ever

Mikarunoel131 wrote:

Nrrgh, but i have resnapped TTATT okaay, fixed everything, NOW i'm ready, really xDD
I know that... After the updates edit is only full off bugs. My circle run berserk and my slider are sometimes making what they want, lol.
Also After I made new new timeing, resnapped everything but than chaneged my rythem, my circle and slider were unsnapped again...
Also the speed of my slider changed, but the circle had normal speed as befor orz...
Editing is no fun these days ... TTvTT

Kurorhana you can make it ! :) Go go Bubble xD
That's probably because when you re-snapped the objects, they will be automatically snapped to the beat snap divisor you're currently using.
Anyway everything are checked and everything good for me so here's your BUBBLE!!
Topic Starter
kurohana
Thank you <33
Mikarunoel131_DELETED
Go Go ! :) Get it ranked my baka x3
Topic Starter
kurohana

Mikarunoel131 wrote:

Go Go ! :) Get it ranked my baka x3
AWWWW MY BAKA <333 yes i will get it ranked :3 for sure!
Sakura
OD6 on Insane? really? that's the same OD as Hard, please raise OD by 2 on Insane and i'll rank this.
Topic Starter
kurohana

Sakura wrote:

OD6 on Insane? really? that's the same OD as Hard, please raise OD by 2 on Insane and i'll rank this.
Fixed :3
Sakura
Alright Ranked then
Topic Starter
kurohana
Thank you <33
jesse7419
Congratz :3
Topic Starter
kurohana
Thanks :3
Mikarunoel131_DELETED
Congratz my Baka :D Your beatmap is awesome so I hope for a good rating x3
http://puu.sh/1gp4i
http://puu.sh/1gp3X
Hardrock Doubtime and Hidden XD Happy :3
Nichiyouki
Congrats ;)
Topic Starter
kurohana

nich95 wrote:

Congrats ;)
Thanks :3

Mikarunoel131 wrote:

Congratz my Baka :D Your beatmap is awesome so I hope for a good rating x3
MY BAKAAAAA THANKUUUU ~~~~ <333
Mangafan204
Congratz to your second ranked beatmap Kurohana alias Horsto~ XDD Like the song and the beatmap~ =)
Topic Starter
kurohana

Mangafan204 wrote:

Congratz to your second ranked beatmap Kurohana alias Horsto~ XDD Like the song and the beatmap~ =)
Thank you Gehorstetes :3
Sekai
Gratz :3
Reisen Udongein
FINALLY! congratz :D
haigawdy
This rythm... awful ;c
Kanari
Congrats ~ >w<
Topic Starter
kurohana
@ xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx, Reisen Udongein, Sekai-nyan: Thank you <333
Sallad4ever
Oh it's ranked quite fast after bubble. Well congratz for the rank
Topic Starter
kurohana

Sallad4ever wrote:

Oh it's ranked quite fast after bubble. Well congratz for the rank
Thank you :)
Sure
grats but insane diff was too overmapped :(
kikones34
Congrats :3!
Topic Starter
kurohana
Thank you :3

@ykcarrot: Sorry >.<
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