Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from PM Request
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[General]
全部的音量建议再减低10% （0.0...因为还是感觉响）我也觉得有点想不过怕自己耳机的关系...还是降低一下好了
finish的sound effect..建议剪掉后面的 只取第一个音这个我都没发现~，我去搞一搞试了一下感觉还是现在这样好，不过有可能是我音效剪裁的不好OTL。

combo colour各diff颜色不一样呢0.0 是不是要调成一样的呢？这个倒是故意的lol。和原作有关的颜色梗
- [Eve] :
Combo1 : 255,255,0 (2)
Combo2 : 255,0,0
Combo3 : 128,128,192 (1)

- [Garry] :
Combo1 : 128,128,192 (1)
Combo2 : 255,0,0

- [Mary] :
Combo1 : 255,255,0 (2)
Combo2 : 255,0,0


[Mary]
00:11:316 - 降低音量 k


[Eve]
00:08:370 (1) - 这样放的slider真的大丈夫？应该没关系吧头尾清晰可见嗯
00:51:654 (2) - ^
01:18:964 (1) - ^
00:19:352 (5,6) - 建议删了之后把前面的slider延长一倍 k
01:47:485 (1) - spacing 大丈夫？确实是故意梗嘛再看看~
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Wonderful Mapset
:3 很和谐的音乐 (?)
没mod出什么东西
一些小建议w

1. 很好
   可以後慮OD-1 因為慢歌都不容易掌握節奏，容易打錯對於新手來說
2. 看一看發現Garry是Normal，那麼這個難度應該是Easy，這樣的話現在的數值稍高了

1. 02:24:202 (2) - reverse+1?

1. 00:11:584 (4) - 會誤導的錯誤距離；因為都重疊得很亂，很難靠那個收縮的圈圈辨認時間
2. 00:32:668 (4) - 第3點搬到 X160 Y104 ，重疊得比較好看
3. 02:18:053 (7) - 根據您的規則因該要NC

ertyukjh010 wrote:

Request from Game-pm

[Mary]

1. 很好
   可以後慮OD-1 因為慢歌都不容易掌握節奏，容易打錯對於新手來說
2. 看一看發現Garry是Normal，那麼這個難度應該是Easy，這樣的話現在的數值稍高了 OD-1

[Garry]

[rhythm]

1. 02:24:202 (2) - reverse+1? 因为SB的关系所以dameT_T

[Ib]

[Layout]

1. 00:11:584 (4) - 會誤導的錯誤距離；因為都重疊得很亂，很難靠那個收縮的圈圈辨認時間 应该问题不大吧这都Hard了ovo
2. 00:32:668 (4) - 第3點搬到 X160 Y104 ，重疊得比較好看 感觉好像不大顺的样子ovo
3. 02:18:053 (7) - 根據您的規則因該要NC 我就说怎么这个那么长lol

很好的圖~ GoodLuck

//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
Sprite,Background,Centre,"BG.jpg",320,240
 F,0,...

popner wrote:

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[General]
各难度用一样的combo color? combo color是跟着难度名的o3o特意梗

[SB]
由于SB load长时间保在4x左右，可以隐去BG优化一下：

//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
Sprite,Background,Centre,"BG.jpg",320,240
 F,0,...

结尾做个淡出吧. 直接加就可以了么？我SB新手真心不懂啊TUT其实SB Load高应该是图片大的关系？

[Mary]
挺好。。

[Garry]
AR-1? 谱面不难AR高一点应该不要紧
00:04:352 - 这里建议空拍，这样节奏比较一致 好像没太大必要嗯

[Ib]
00:57:600 (1) - 这里不可读，00:56:519 (2,3) 的300几乎完全遮住了00:57:600 (1)，导致其滑条在玩家看来出现较晚，会将00:57:600 (1)误判为是一个圈，然后紧跟着滑条。 http://puu.sh/ELhN 需要把00:56:519 (2)转个角度 有stack啊...我还特意为了stack调整了这里的位置OTL实在不行我自己做一套300（揍
01:47:485 (1) - 距离坑人啊确实坑了...嘛想了想还是改掉吧。

That's all I can find. GL~

Megurine Luka wrote:

popner wrote:

[SB]
由于SB load长时间保在4x左右，可以隐去BG优化一下：

//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
Sprite,Background,Centre,"BG.jpg",320,240
 F,0,...

结尾做个淡出吧. 直接加就可以了么？我SB新手真心不懂啊TUT其实SB Load高应该是图片大的关系？
Thanks!

//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background) ————————背景层 (BG是默认在背景层的)
Sprite,Background,Centre,"BG.jpg",320,240 ————————对BG这个元件做动作
 F,0,...————————改变Fade值(透明度)

_F,变化类型,初始时间,结束时间,初始透明度,结束透明度

//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background) 
Sprite,Background,Centre,"BG.jpg",320,240 
 F,0,200,400,1,0

//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)

Sprite,Background,TopLeft,"BG.jpg"320,240

1. 00:02:477 (3) - Maybe place this more upper (~x:293 y:58)? imo your next (1) is better encircled like this (:
2. 00:13:727 (1,2,3) - Also this, would be much better imo if you can place (3) slightly higher to (1,2,3)'s angle isn't very narrow xD
3. 00:24:977 (1) - Add note here (with finish) and start spinner 1/4 after? Feels quite weird having the finishes discontinued here ._.
4. 00:32:127 (2,1) - (optional) I personally quite disliked how the red (1) and (2) almost overlaps... imo you can move (2) higher and arrange like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:39:166 (3,4) - For this, I suggest to put (4) slightly more to the left compared to (3), to tell players that (1,2,3,4) is an arc~
6. 00:52:735 (2) - (optional) Hmm, imo you can create something like this here for a better encircle effect:
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:59:222 (3) - Also an optional thing here, I'd rather rotate this by 35° (selection centre) to let it flow better together with (1) :3
8. 01:03:006 (2,3,1,2,3) - Uhm... Personally I prefer something moving before the spinner instead of stacking (2,3)... Maybe try this?
   

   179,266,63006,1,0
   231,351,63546,1,0
   322,323,64076,6,0,B|375:309|419:341,1,100,4|0
   478,260,65187,1,0
   437,168,65742,1,4

9. 01:23:873 (3) - Put in ~x:261 y:71 instead and make it encircle your (2)'s start? xD
10. 01:28:237 (4,1) - Just a minor stuff here, put these two more to the bottom-left to emphasize the previous arc? Won't hurt to imply, I guess (:
11. 01:32:055 (x) - Same as before, add circle with finish (because the music continues here) and start spinner 1/4 after? You can also extend (4) as a slider, I think (:
12. 01:32:055 (1) - Finish or whistle really fits here >_<
13. 01:51:810 (1,2) - (optional) Create a continuous flow here maybe? Like this:
    
    SPOILER

    
14. 01:56:675 (2) - Hmm, for better flow I'd rather curve this to the upper-left instead, and:
15. 01:58:357 (3) - Place this slightly higher than (2)'s start (:
16. 02:14:780 (3) - Uhm, encircle (2) better? Compared to your other blankets, this one is very obviously untidy because the repeat is too close to (2) >_<
17. 02:23:037 (1) - Hmm, before the spinner, (again) I prefer something continuous here:
    
    SPOILER

    
18. 02:24:784 (1) - Same as before, add note here and start spinner 1/4 after? Also it's highly recommended to use a lower volume on the spinner as the music isn't strong at all ._.

1. 00:04:352 (2,3) - Uhm, is this rhythm intentional? Due to how the piano sounded, I prefer to put the 1/2 slider first... I can't suggest a better placement though >_<
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:12:655 (3) - Hum, no whistle on slider's end here? It fits the high-pitched piano imo (:
3. 00:15:334 (3) - I think it won't hurt if you curve this slightly to the left so it will somewhat encircle (2), it flows good with (4) as well though~
4. 00:21:227 (3,4) - (optional) About this, imo it's better to rotate (3) about 25° selection centre and adjust (4) so (3) will continue the angle from (1,2)... Not a must, though >_<
5. 00:24:977 (1) - Start spinner 1/4 after and add a circle here? Also, whistle fits a lot for spinner's end here~
6. 00:39:166 (3) - (optional) Perhaps put the endpoint in ~x:405 y:103, to let it flow together with (4)? (you can curve this slightly as well)
7. 00:42:714 (3) - I'd rather stack this above (4) instead, considering this is a Normal diff it would be much easier to read if placed so (:
8. 00:50:033 (5) - Just stating here - you can put the endpoint more to the right, as it won't be offscreen in play mode~
9. 00:52:735 (3) - Minor stuff, but... Move to ~x:197 y:283 to create a better triangle on (3,4,5)? xD
10. 01:01:925 (3,4) - (optional) Considering (3) is a straight slider... Maybe try this? :3
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 01:15:159 (6,1) - I think it's best to put these two slightly lower than (5)'s end because of (5)'s curve >_<
12. 01:19:782 (5,6,1,2,3) - Hmm, the angle on (4,5,6) is quite forced imo... Maybe try this formation? xD
    
    SPOILER

    
13. 01:51:269 (1) - (optional) Perhaps add a slight curve downward here? It can somewhat give an encircle effect on (4)'s end here~
14. 01:59:478 (2) - Perfect place for whistle imo (:
15. 02:18:053 (2) - Hmm, I suggest a 1/1 slider here instead - because your previous rhythm isn't hectic, suddenly go hectic with 1/2 repeating slider isn't good imo - better to use 1/1 first to let players adapt with the rhythm~
16. 02:24:784 (1) - Start spinner 1/4 after and add a note here? (you can just add a repeat on (2) though :3) - Also same as Mary about the volume >_<

1. 00:05:691 (4,5) - How about adding a slight curve (downward for (4) and leftward for (5)) here, to let it flow together with (3)? Won't hurt, I guess xD
2. 00:13:727 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - (optional) Here also, it would be a lot cuter imo if (1,3,5) and (2,4,6) are both an arc~
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:22:566 (5,1) - Rather than stack I prefer another jump here to give more power to your next jump, perhaps stack (1) to (3)'s start and put (5) in ~x:413 y:287?
4. 00:34:022 (6) - CTRL+R? Better rotating like this imo (: (or you can CTRL+R (5) as well :3)
5. 00:43:805 (4) - (optional) Stack to (3) instead? The pattern will be more sophisticated this way imo~
6. 00:46:789 (5) - I'd rather put this to the far right (~x:477 y:258) here, but of course it's not a must (:
7. 00:55:168 (4,5,6) - Hmm, I'd rather put (4) in the left, (5) in the top, and (6) in the bottom of this triangle instead, because imo it would fit the song more if (6,1) is a jump >_<
8. 00:58:141 (2,3,4,5) - Uhm, to be honest I don't really get the pattern here... Perhaps try this? (yes, with this diamond (4) will be stacked to your yellow (6)~)
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 01:07:974 (2,3) - Just a minor stuff here, to emphasize the accelerated spacing I'd rather put these two more to the right ((2) in ~x:256 y:181, (3) in x:158 y:143)
10. 01:23:601 (5,6,7) - (optional) Uhm, I prefer an arc here ((2,4,5) is set into a triangle : )
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 01:30:419 (4,5,6) - Hmm, I prefer CTRL+R-ing these three one by one, as the flow created will be more unique imo (:
12. 01:33:189 (3) - Would be really nice if you add a curve here to fit the music, for example put a waypoint on ~x:270 y:190 and put the endpoint in x:226 y:172 xD
13. 01:38:296 (6) - (optional) Unstack and put this in ~x:309 y:74 to keep it flowing?
14. 01:40:458 (6,7,8) - Hmm, I personally feel it's better to put the triangle here on a sparser distance to help players sightread:
    
    SPOILER

    
15. 01:53:431 (6) - CTRL+R this? I personally feel better this way >_<
16. 02:01:690 (5,6,7) - On pattern like this, it would be better if you put these three more to the upper-right to emphasize the arc - I'd put (5) in ~x:292 y:189 and adjust the two circles (:
17. 02:23:619 (3) - Just a minor stuff here, I'd rotate this ~18° selection centre to create a more continuous arc xD
18. 02:24:784 (1) - Same as Mary about the volume suggestion >_<

Niva wrote:

Alright, I think it's time for a full-mod~ o3o

[General]

-> I'd rather use "kouri" as the artist's name as "Ib Original" is not a valid artist name imo... (not sure yet though >_<) I'm not sure if it is kouri who wrote this piece of music, but I find here : http://vgboy.dabomstew.com/other/ib.htm In the music list, the source is written as Original so that's why :3
-> Set the preview time 1/4 earlier for more accurate preview time (on your case, 01:08:977) Fixed
-> As your first note starts in 00:00:870, I don't think you need lead-in time 1500, 1000 is enough imo (: fixed

[Mary]

1. 00:02:477 (3) - Maybe place this more upper (~x:293 y:58)? imo your next (1) is better encircled like this (: Fixed
2. 00:13:727 (1,2,3) - Also this, would be much better imo if you can place (3) slightly higher to (1,2,3)'s angle isn't very narrow xD Fixed
3. 00:24:977 (1) - Add note here (with finish) and start spinner 1/4 after? Feels quite weird having the finishes discontinued here ._. Fixed
4. 00:32:127 (2,1) - (optional) I personally quite disliked how the red (1) and (2) almost overlaps... imo you can move (2) higher and arrange like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
   Fixed
5. 00:39:166 (3,4) - For this, I suggest to put (4) slightly more to the left compared to (3), to tell players that (1,2,3,4) is an arc~ Fixed
6. 00:52:735 (2) - (optional) Hmm, imo you can create something like this here for a better encircle effect:
   
   SPOILER

   
   Fixed, also shorten the slider o3o
7. 00:59:222 (3) - Also an optional thing here, I'd rather rotate this by 35° (selection centre) to let it flow better together with (1) :3 Fixed
8. 01:03:006 (2,3,1,2,3) - Uhm... Personally I prefer something moving before the spinner instead of stacking (2,3)... Maybe try this?
   

   179,266,63006,1,0
   231,351,63546,1,0
   322,323,64076,6,0,B|375:309|419:341,1,100,4|0
   478,260,65187,1,0
   437,168,65742,1,4

   I changed the circle into a slider
9. 01:23:873 (3) - Put in ~x:261 y:71 instead and make it encircle your (2)'s start? xD Fixed
10. 01:28:237 (4,1) - Just a minor stuff here, put these two more to the bottom-left to emphasize the previous arc? Won't hurt to imply, I guess (: hmm, I might keep this :3
11. 01:32:055 (x) - Same as before, add circle with finish (because the music continues here) and start spinner 1/4 after? You can also extend (4) as a slider, I think (: Fixed
12. 01:32:055 (1) - Finish or whistle really fits here >_< added
13. 01:51:810 (1,2) - (optional) Create a continuous flow here maybe? Like this:
    
    SPOILER

    
    Fixed, also changed the style of the following
14. 01:56:675 (2) - Hmm, for better flow I'd rather curve this to the upper-left instead, and: ^
15. 01:58:357 (3) - Place this slightly higher than (2)'s start (: ^
16. 02:14:780 (3) - Uhm, encircle (2) better? Compared to your other blankets, this one is very obviously untidy because the repeat is too close to (2) >_< Ooops, how does this happened lol
17. 02:23:037 (1) - Hmm, before the spinner, (again) I prefer something continuous here:
    
    SPOILER

    Fixed
18. 02:24:784 (1) - Same as before, add note here and start spinner 1/4 after? Also it's highly recommended to use a lower volume on the spinner as the music isn't strong at all ._. Fixed. Actually someone mentioned this one before, but I was considering the Storyboard lol.

[Garry]

1. 00:04:352 (2,3) - Uhm, is this rhythm intentional? Due to how the piano sounded, I prefer to put the 1/2 slider first... I can't suggest a better placement though >_< ><yes it's intentional, I might keep this :3
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:12:655 (3) - Hum, no whistle on slider's end here? It fits the high-pitched piano imo (: added
3. 00:15:334 (3) - I think it won't hurt if you curve this slightly to the left so it will somewhat encircle (2), it flows good with (4) as well though~Fixed
4. 00:21:227 (3,4) - (optional) About this, imo it's better to rotate (3) about 25° selection centre and adjust (4) so (3) will continue the angle from (1,2)... Not a must, though >_< Fixed
5. 00:24:977 (1) - Start spinner 1/4 after and add a circle here? Also, whistle fits a lot for spinner's end here~ Fixed
6. 00:39:166 (3) - (optional) Perhaps put the endpoint in ~x:405 y:103, to let it flow together with (4)? (you can curve this slightly as well) Fixed
7. 00:42:714 (3) - I'd rather stack this above (4) instead, considering this is a Normal diff it would be much easier to read if placed so (: Fixed
8. 00:50:033 (5) - Just stating here - you can put the endpoint more to the right, as it won't be offscreen in play mode~
9. 00:52:735 (3) - Minor stuff, but... Move to ~x:197 y:283 to create a better triangle on (3,4,5)? xD I might keep this :3
10. 01:01:925 (3,4) - (optional) Considering (3) is a straight slider... Maybe try this? :3 Fixed
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 01:15:159 (6,1) - I think it's best to put these two slightly lower than (5)'s end because of (5)'s curve >_< Fixed
12. 01:19:782 (5,6,1,2,3) - Hmm, the angle on (4,5,6) is quite forced imo... Maybe try this formation? xD Fixed
    
    SPOILER

    
13. 01:51:269 (1) - (optional) Perhaps add a slight curve downward here? It can somewhat give an encircle effect on (4)'s end here~ I make it upward :3
14. 01:59:478 (2) - Perfect place for whistle imo (: added
15. 02:18:053 (2) - Hmm, I suggest a 1/1 slider here instead - because your previous rhythm isn't hectic, suddenly go hectic with 1/2 repeating slider isn't good imo - better to use 1/1 first to let players adapt with the rhythm~ Fixed
16. 02:24:784 (1) - Start spinner 1/4 after and add a note here? (you can just add a repeat on (2) though :3) - Also same as Mary about the volume >_< Fixed

[Ib]

1. 00:05:691 (4,5) - How about adding a slight curve (downward for (4) and leftward for (5)) here, to let it flow together with (3)? Won't hurt, I guess xD added
2. 00:13:727 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - (optional) Here also, it would be a lot cuter imo if (1,3,5) and (2,4,6) are both an arc~ I like the current one ><
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:22:566 (5,1) - Rather than stack I prefer another jump here to give more power to your next jump, perhaps stack (1) to (3)'s start and put (5) in ~x:413 y:287? OK
4. 00:34:022 (6) - CTRL+R? Better rotating like this imo (: (or you can CTRL+R (5) as well :3) Fixed the 6
5. 00:43:805 (4) - (optional) Stack to (3) instead? The pattern will be more sophisticated this way imo~ Yep, and fit the feeling of the song
6. 00:46:789 (5) - I'd rather put this to the far right (~x:477 y:258) here, but of course it's not a must (: Fixed
7. 00:55:168 (4,5,6) - Hmm, I'd rather put (4) in the left, (5) in the top, and (6) in the bottom of this triangle instead, because imo it would fit the song more if (6,1) is a jump >_< yep
8. 00:58:141 (2,3,4,5) - Uhm, to be honest I don't really get the pattern here... Perhaps try this? (yes, with this diamond (4) will be stacked to your yellow (6)~) Fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 01:07:974 (2,3) - Just a minor stuff here, to emphasize the accelerated spacing I'd rather put these two more to the right ((2) in ~x:256 y:181, (3) in x:158 y:143) fixed
10. 01:23:601 (5,6,7) - (optional) Uhm, I prefer an arc here ((2,4,5) is set into a triangle : ) fixed.
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 01:30:419 (4,5,6) - Hmm, I prefer CTRL+R-ing these three one by one, as the flow created will be more unique imo (: Nope cuz I need to turn in flow for 3&4
12. 01:33:189 (3) - Would be really nice if you add a curve here to fit the music, for example put a waypoint on ~x:270 y:190 and put the endpoint in x:226 y:172 xD I think staight is fine :3
13. 01:38:296 (6) - (optional) Unstack and put this in ~x:309 y:74 to keep it flowing? Fixed
14. 01:40:458 (6,7,8) - Hmm, I personally feel it's better to put the triangle here on a sparser distance to help players sightread: OK
    
    SPOILER

    
15. 01:53:431 (6) - CTRL+R this? I personally feel better this way >_< Fixed
16. 02:01:690 (5,6,7) - On pattern like this, it would be better if you put these three more to the upper-right to emphasize the arc - I'd put (5) in ~x:292 y:189 and adjust the two circles (: Fixed
17. 02:23:619 (3) - Just a minor stuff here, I'd rotate this ~18° selection centre to create a more continuous arc xD
18. 02:24:784 (1) - Same as Mary about the volume suggestion >_< Fixed

I hope this helps... Sorry if my suggestions aren't much helping here, it's hard to mod this map, really >_<
I think that's it for now, really have to overview the artist's name atm...

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hello ~ Megurine Luka ~

Random check map ~

2 osb file in osz,remove 'kouri - Memory (Megurine Luka).osb' and full submit please.

Also normal and easy diff AR-1 much better with play.

That's all ~ other stuff looks fine ~ good job ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

Ksaice wrote:

i just love this game.....
why there is no real happy end!
why only two ppl can come back from that world!!
why they three can not be together!!!


.....

KyrieMelancholy wrote:

Where can I get the game? :>

Mercurial wrote:

wut

Lazy_SOS wrote:

這是什麼ˊ動畫@@

Mercurial wrote:

wut

CoroQuetz wrote:

An Ib remix? Wow~

slithien wrote:

im downloading the game now. is there any way of playing it in english?