160,180,60508,6,0,B|182:127|126:64|71:81,1,160,0|8

168,168,70304,6,0,B|111:191|57:112|100:68,1,160,0|8

164,24,70916,2,0,B|220:0|275:78|232:122,1,160,0|0

104,32,40916,6,0,B|72:84|84:164|140:208,1,180,2|8

238,296,76834,6,0,B|258:360|356:360|376:296,1,180,0|8

268,20,25406,2,0,B|200:48|184:164|276:204,1,200,2|4

1. 00:05:814 (2) - Not sure about this clap here, I prefer to remove it personally to emphasize your upcoming clap...
2. 00:05:814 (2,1) - These two aren't made symmetrically, is this intentional?
3. 00:11:120 (2) - I really recommend to move this upward a bit so (1,2,3) will form an arc here (it won't hurt, though~)
4. 00:22:548 (4,1) - Is it intentional to put them both in a same height? Doesn't flow really well imo, perhaps try this instead: (yes, I put (1)'s endpoint a bit downward)
   
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5. 00:25:406 (4) - What happened to this slider's curve o.o
   

   260,24,25406,2,0,B|196:60|192:144|250:192,1,200,2|4

6. 00:37:651 (3) - (optional) Put this more to the left (~x:311 y:121) so (1,2,3)'s angle will be less narrow?
7. 00:40:508 (2) - I'd rather put this upward (~x:186 y:270) instead... Currently you're trying to create an arc on (1,2,3) but the angle on (1,2,3) is not sufficient >_<
8. 00:47:038 (2) - ...closer to (1) compared to (3)? Minor stuff though...
9. 00:49:079 (1,2,3) - (optional) Considering this is made of three sliders... Why not try something like this xD
   
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10. 00:54:793 (1) - Hmm, I'd put the whistle only on the slider's end to emphasize the whistle there~
11. 01:02:140 (1) - Again, can't really get the slider's shape here... Why not a slider wave instead? Plays a lot smoother this way~
    

    120,48,62140,6,0,B|171:24|216:48|216:48|263:72|314:50,1,200,4|0

12. 01:13:161 (2) - To fit the music more, split this slider into a 1/2 slider continued with another 1/2 slider on 01:13:773?
13. 01:28:263 (1) - Try to put this in ~x:213 y:330, and play around with rotation - stacking this slider's end under (2) will make the end much tidier~

1. 00:02:548 (4) - Perhaps curve this downward instead? Flows better to my eyes because your previous (2) is curved upward already ._.
2. 00:05:814 (4) - Same as previous diff, remove clap here for the same reason?
3. 00:11:528 (1) - I think this is how the crumpled slider should be here - upward and downward section should have an exact balance and your last red waypoint should be placed equally in height with your slider's start...
   
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4. 00:12:548 (2) - Perhaps try to use soft-hitwhistle on slider's start or end here? xD
5. 00:19:079 (x) - Add note here to fit the vocals? Feels quite empty without it...
6. 00:22:957 (1) - Uhm, put it in ~x:60 y:219 to form an isosceles triangle here? Plays tidier in test mode~
7. 00:27:855 (4,5) - Curving this directly doesn't give the desired effect imo - try to implement elbow slider here perhaps? :3
   

   145,296,27855,2,0,B|177:328|216:328|216:328|255:328,1,120,2|8
   367,296,28671,2,0,B|335:328|296:328|296:328|257:328,1,120,2|8

8. 00:42:548 (1) - (optional) Add a slight curve encircling (2) here? Won't hurt imo~
9. 00:51:528 (5) - Drag both the midpoint and endpoint upper here? Currently it still looks like a parallel slider ._.
10. 00:55:406 (2) - Move the whistle from (1)'s end here? The vocals hits the higher note here~
11. 01:00:508 (4) - (optional) Here, I think it's best to create a continuous flow with (5) here while you can xD
    
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12. 01:07:242 (5) - Clap on slider's end here? I personally think the vocals here are strong enough to be emphasized more...
13. 01:23:773 (4) - Hmm, I don't think curving this upward flows good with (3)... I'd rather do something like this here:
    
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14. 01:27:038 (5) - I highly recommend to curve this encircling (4) from the upper side instead of from the right side - the flow to (1) will look nicer as the clustering is reduced~

1. 00:01:018 (3) - ...are you sure that the whistle should be on slider's end here? It's clear enough that the guitar emphasizes on the slider's start instead - do this for your next (3)s ~
2. 00:04:997 (1,2,3,4) - Wby no jump here? Even the simplest jump fits the part's atmosphere! xD
3. 00:09:895 (1,2,3) - Hmm, this kickstream can be made tidier imo: (and prettier also, if you want to add a slight curve like this :3)
   
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4. 00:11:528 (1) - Try to use a bunch of soft-hitwhistle here? Blends better compared to normal hitsample imo ._.
5. 00:13:671 (2) - Delete this note - actually the vocals you're trying to follow falls in 1/6, and forcing it into 1/4 feels abrupt...
6. 00:21:936 (2,3,4) - Move all to ~x:352 y:244 - due to stacking's nature... ah yes, you should see in play mode~
7. 00:31:732 (2,3,4) - (optional) I'd rather put (3) in the right to make the arc rightward... It'll flow continuously better to (5)'s start imo ._.
8. 00:37:242 (3,1) - ...actually if you want to be consistent with hitsounding, there should be a whistle on (3)'s end and 00:37:855 xD
9. 00:38:161 (2,3,4,5) - (optional) Perhaps try this to make the flow more continuous? Also it's tidier than your current arrangement imo:
   
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10. 00:39:895 (2) - imo a slider wave flows better here (as you can also encircle (3)'s start with your wave xD)
11. 00:43:263 (3) - Hmm, put in ~x:382 y:244? (currently it's unclear whether you're going to put (2,3,4) in an arc or not)
12. 00:49:691 (2,3,4) - A triangle jump like this flows really fancy here, really >_<
    
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13. 00:54:793 (3) - Remove whistle on repeat here? You don't have it on your previous diff ._.
14. 01:00:099 (3) - Put in ~x:328 y:256 - yes, it won't follow the proper spacing, but it looks much, MUCH better than forcing a proper spacing here...
15. 01:10:916 (2,3,4) - To be honest, I don't really get why you arranged (2,3,4) in a straight line... I don't mind if you placed (3) more to the bottom-right to form a slight jump here, straight line really kills flow here imo >_<
16. 01:21:732 (1) - imo to create a continuous flow the arrangement should be:
    
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1. 00:01:324 (6,7) - Uhm... I quite don't get the spacing here, I think it's better to make it more patterned (such as placing (7) stacked to (1)'s start and (6) in ~x:64 y:278 to create a triangle jump)
2. 00:04:793 (5,1) - Again, why the spacing suddenly decreases here o.o
3. 00:07:753 (6,1,2,3) - Hmm, I think it's best to put clap/whistle on where the vocal goes strong to emphasize it ((6)'s start, (3), (4)'s end))
4. 00:11:528 (1) - Same as the previous difficulty, use a bunch of whistles here?
5. 00:13:671 (2) - Delete this note as well (same reason as previous difficulty)
6. 00:17:038 (5,6,7) - Hmm, I wonder, you've curved (5) to the right previously, why curving (6) to the right again? imo it's better to curve it leftward instead to create a continuous flow (therefore (7) can be arranged as following: )
   
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7. 00:21:324 (1) - (optional) The overlap with (5) doesn't feel right imo... Perhaps use this "grumd-style slider"?
   

   308,316,21324,6,0,B|316:280|316:280|280:242|288:196|288:196|241:160,1,180,2|8

8. 00:24:283 (6) - Triples, if any, should be on 00:24:487 - there are no triple here from the song!
9. 00:27:242 (3,4) - I highly recommend to switch their position (don't CTRL+R! Just switch their position in the timeline) to create a circular movement around here~
10. 00:32:344 (6) - Minor stuff, move the midpoint to ~x:319 y:221 to encircle (1) better? It won't hurt :3
11. 00:45:406 (7) - (optional) This curve is quite weird for me, in any way simple copy-paste like this flows better for me:
    
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12. 00:49:895 (3) - Missing whistle on slider's start here? >_<
13. 00:57:038 (4) - (optional) Stack to your orange (3)'s end to make it tidier?
14. 01:19:079 (2) - Just a minor stuff... Move the endpoint to ~x:46 y:220?
15. 01:20:304 (2) - ...are you sure with the slider here? The vocal goes really, REALLY strong here - I imagined a jump with two circles, with the second circle stacked to (3)~
16. 01:27:855 (7) - I really recommend this for the ending: start spinner 1/4 after, then create a triangular jump like this:
    
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Nothing to say

01:14:589 A note will probably sound good here

01:07:038 This note would be better if it starts at 01:07:242

Nothing to say

1. Add "SliderBorder : 255,255,255"(Pure white), "SliderBorder : 225,225,225"(Less Pure White) or so to add a border since you have a custom skin. (By rules it's enforced if I remember, though)

1. Easy and fun, nothing to say

1. [Rhythm]
   
   1. Some white ticks seems forced, to make them less forced:
   2. 00:15:610 (5) - Make it start 1/2 before?
   3. 00:18:059 (1) - ^
   4. 00:24:589 (4) - ^
   5. 00:48:263 (2) - ^
   6. 01:01:324 (5) - ^
   7. 01:10:712 (5) - Make it 1/2 long and
   8. 01:11:324 (x) - Add a note here
      

1. There are a lot of red ticks, so it'll be better to use Tick Rate 2
2. [Rhythm]
   
   1. 00:12:140 (2) - As the (1) drumroll slider followed the voice, it isn't intuitive so Delete and add a Circle at 00:12:242 (x) to really follow voice.
   2. 00:23:977 (5,1) - It isn't so natural, like this flow better (try)
      
   3. 00:38:161 (2,3,4,5) - like this shall feel better for the flow. You did use longer slider, right?
      
3. [Graphic]
   
   1. 00:35:406 (5) - I don't know why not a blanket, it'll look better
      
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   2. 01:28:263 (1) - The D sliderart doeesn't feel that consistent.... though I don't know consistent sliderarts, because I should read the manga....

1. There are a lot of red ticks, so it'll be better to use Tick Rate 2
2. [Rhythm]
   
   1. Idk why I don't feel this is so much overmapped, differently from others...(2-3 notes in all the map, it isn't that much)
   2. Some vocals are actually 1/6, but it should be acceptable mapping them as 1/4 streams
   3. 00:08:569 (x) - 00:08:977 (x) - Vocal note, add if you want since you're following vocals
   4. 00:08:671 (5) - you can make it end on the blue tick, to only follow vocal
   5. 00:24:385 (6,7) - Since it is a mantained vocal, it'll feel better as a slider
   6. 00:33:263 (2) - Deletable, the note before end on -to and the one after is ni, so this doesn't follow the vocals
   7. 00:37:446 (4,5) - delete (5)(since it isn't really a vocal note) or make a slider to fit the gorgheggio
   8. 01:22:651 (5) - There is a guitar note in 01:22:855 (6), differently from there, so I suggest to move it there?
   9. 01:24:487 (x) - Same guitar node, so add it there?
   10. 01:27:651 (x) - Same here
3. [Graphic]
   
   1. 00:16:630 (2,3,4) - Let's lover this by a few pixels... to make it.... ummm.... less pointy?
   2. 01:18:467 (1) - It'll be better to be a slider-blanket?
      
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Yasora wrote:

wait, why 2 "run" diff your mod? 0.0
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• 00:09:880 (1) - move to x:400 y:36, cover (4)'s approach circle.
  but I know that 00:09:880 (1,3) - are symmetrical.It's up to you.
  00:40:493 (2,3) - suggestion.

• 01:28:248 (1) - rotate,clocwise,selection centre,-13.01:28:044 (5,1) - make a triangle.

RoxasGrylls94 wrote:

Omg now it's bubbled anyway I tried to mod the map, -30ms offset for the video imo Good Job Yasora

Garven wrote:

[General]
The end of the mp3 cuts off rather suddenly. The general quality is also fairly poor despite the 192 kbps rating. Do you think you can find a better mp3 please? that's not cutting orz in the anime is end like that... btw, I already try to find better mp3 in some web, but seems hard to find that.. altough if I find the better mp3 but that is the full ver. *sad nee, some modder not notice so I think it's fine..
The comboburst image looks drastically different from the bg image in terms of style and quality. Looks weird. I guess it's fine too because from the same source (•̯͡.•̯͡) using chrome in bg because the singer is girl orz
Speaking of, the hitcircle looks really aliased. Why not just use the default one? This one doesn't seem to add much at all to the map visually. but I like this hitcircle and usually using this..so, no removed sorry.
Tick rate 2 fits this song best. okay

[Easy]
00:52:329 (1) - This feels better ending at 00:53:758 - and audible. ok
01:13:146 (2,3) - I'm not a fan of these short stubbly sliders in Easy difficulties. changed into another pattern

[Normal]
00:52:329 (1) - This feels better ending at 00:53:758 - and audible. ok

[Hard]
00:07:738 - I wish there was a hit object here to go with "time!" ok
There were a ton of unnecessary 1/4 rhythms throughout the map that really took away from an otherwise good map, to me. removed some (•̯͡.•̯͡)

[Insane]
00:07:431 (3,1) - Why such a fast rhythm? They're just noisy right now. Also 1/6 snap? That's just incorrect. ok ok
00:16:615 (2) - Again, why? removed.. try to follow the vocal, but seems that not work orz
There are a ton of these. Remove them. They're going against the rhythm of the music and just sound bad without adding anything to the map since you're not even moving for them. removed some too (•̯͡.•̯͡) hope now more better orz