Dark_Ai wrote:

H-HE?! D:
I'M not a guy DDD: I'm a GIRL

and what?

Gabe wrote:

Mod 4 Mod.
Looks like I have lots of thing to do here...

First of all, can you fullsubmit, please? There's missing the Insane difficulty. I had to download it manually.
Second, move the beatmap topic to Pending. So it could get bubbled and blablah ~

General
There's an inconsistency in Timing Points, The Kiai time and the Preview Point.
Every redtiming must be placed at 00:03:376, with a BPM of 143,000The PreviewPoint must be placed at 117502And for the Kiai time, every kiai times must be placed at these places:
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:57:082, ends on 01:23:514
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:57:502, ends on 02:10:929

Easy

Circle emplacement
Try to make something more natural and fun to play. Because only having straight sliders isn't really fun to play.
00:42:816 (5) - Align this circle with the previous circle. So x:408 y:128

Hitsounds
Try to look at your Hitsounds and try to keep the consistency.
00:20:159 - Add a clap here to keep the consistency
00:26:872 - Also add a clap here to keep the consistency
00:33:585 - ^
00:36:942 - Replace the whistle by a clap
00:37:362 - Delete the clap here if you decide to add a clap at ^
00:40:299 - Also add a clap here.
00:42:816 (5) - Add a whistle here to keep the consistency with your previous whistle.
00:47:012 - Add a clap
00:53:725 - ^
02:49:949 - Add a clap here to fit with the storyboard.

Normal

Circle emplacement
Try to make something more natural and fun to play. Because only having straight sliders isn't really fun to play.
00:26:872 (1,2) - Move these two circles, there are hitting the windows bar. (Well, almost. But move it.)

Hitsounds
Try to look at your Hitsounds and try to keep the consistency.

Hard
This is the funniest map on this mapset. This is my opinion.

New combos
00:52:046 - Delete the new combo?
01:02:116 - Also remove the new combo.
01:08:829 (3) - Remove the new combo
01:15:542 - Remove the NC. q.q
03:06:309 - Add a new combo here.

Circle emplacement
00:35:053 (6,7,8) - move these circles at x:188 y:60 to align it with the previous circles.
00:51:416 - Can you move the slider at x:256 y:76 and do something like this: it will just play better.
01:07:150 (1) - Align this with 01:05:472 (1) - .

Insane

New combos
00:46:990 - Add a new combo here and delete the combo to the next note.
00:55:381 - Add a new combo.
01:02:304 - Add a new combo
01:09:017 - Add a new combo
01:12:164 - ^
01:13:843 - ^
01:45:940 - Remove the combo
01:46:254 (1) - ^
01:47:618 - Add a combo
02:04:716 - Delete the new combo.
02:07:548 - New combo
02:08:072 (4) - Delete the new combo.

Circle emplacement
01:57:478 - Give us at least a warning for this speed ?

Hitsounds
what with these hitsounds...?
Try to make something consistent. Not random hitsounds placed randomly. o3o
01:33:982 - Delete the clap and add a finish
01:35:660 - Same as ^
01:37:339 - ^
01:39:017 - ^
01:40:695 - ^

Fight69 wrote:

Hi, sorry for the delay :<

EDIT : FU- Updated while modding ;~;

[General]

Add the epilepsy warning for this map, I think it's better to be careful about

it.
Also, only one break in Easy and Normal ?

[Easy]

00:22:676 (4) - This slider is weird o.o
03:28:131 (1) - What about a Soft-Finish here ?

[Normal]

00:56:243 (6,1,2) - You shouldn't make this pattern in a Normal
03:29:809 (1) - What about a Soft-Finish here ? The Custom Finish sound really

weird

[Pereira's Hard]

Meh, no custom hs D:

02:25:470 (4,1,2) - Actually, these beats are in 1/3, you have to make them like

that : http://puu.sh/GZMp
02:27:184 (5,6,7,1) - 1/3 here too : http://puu.sh/GZNm
02:28:862 (4,5,6,1) - Same here
02:30:540 (4,5,6) - ^
02:32:219 (2) - ^
02:33:897 (2,3,4) - ^
02:35:575 (2,3,4) - ^

Nice job Pereira :3

[Kiyoshi's Insane]

Please don't use Grid lvl 2 for your map, especially if it's an Insane, there is

huge spacing errors a bit everywhere like here 01:38:073 (5) or 01:38:807 (10)
Use at least grid lvl 3 or 4, then replace each circles/sliders one by one

00:39:648 (2,3,4,5) - The spacing...I highly recommend you to change this, or if

you don't want, you can at least add a new combo on 00:40:068 (5)
01:35:346 (10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This part is so confusing o.o
01:41:220 (4) - Why the spacing is suddently higher ?
01:45:940 (1) - No new combo
01:46:254 (1) - No new combo
01:46:569 (1) - No new combo
01:47:618 (8) - New combo

01:57:478 - I don't like the Speed up at all, but it's just my personal

opinion...

02:03:772 (3) - This slider moves in an abnormal way.
02:04:716 (1) - No new combo
02:07:128 (11) - This slider is way, too, weird
02:08:597 (5,6,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This part is just confusing as hell,

delete 02:09:226 (1,2), then add a circle at the end of the slider 02:08:911 (6)

(don't forget the clap !)
You should get something like that : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/365686

03:00:624 (2,3,4,5) - The spacing...I highly recommend you to change this, or if

you don't want, you can at least add a new combo on 03:01:044 (5)
03:17:197 (1) - Don't make weird sliders like that

Sorry, but I really don't like this diff :/

That's all, good luck !

espiritur00 wrote:

Dark_Ai wrote:

H-HE?! D:
I'M not a guy DDD: I'm a GIRL

and what?

nothing xD
are to the Epilepsy warning in the sb .
But i already make it

• 00:57:501 (2) - many time reversed slider may be a little hard for beginners. separate to some non-reversed sliders.
  00:59:599 (4) - ^
  01:02:117 (3) - ^
  01:58:341 - put some note
  01:58:760 - ^

• 00:42:711 (6,7) - blue tick - blue tick..it a little hard to read rhythm imo.

• 00:28:550 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - these notes don't have regular rhythm. but you arranged them as if they have regular rhythm. who can read the rhythm from these notes?
  00:32:956 (2,3,4) - the distance of previous stream is this:00:27:921 (4,5,6). and this stream has double of it. do you think that who can pass it?
  00:38:620 (6,1) - this distance is almost same as 00:39:669 (2,3), but rhythm is one-quarter. why?
  01:43:760 (1,2,3) - same as 00:28:550
  01:57:501 - why did you change SV so suddenly? it is just only confusing.
  03:18:480 (4,5,6) - same as 00:28:550
  03:19:424 (7,8,9) - ^
  03:24:040 (1,2,3) - ^
  
  overall, you must fix that too random placement whole of this diff.
  I recommend you to learn more about mapping from other ranked maps.
  and don't forget to consider whether players can enjoy your map.

h-728 wrote:

from PM

[Easy]

• 00:57:501 (2) - many time reversed slider may be a little hard for beginners. separate to some non-reversed sliders. Done ^^
  00:59:599 (4) - ^ Done ^^
  01:02:117 (3) - ^ Done ^^
  01:58:341 - put some note is to that in the "Ai Mod" show that is a "easy" lvl dont normal.
  01:58:760 - ^ same ^

[Pereira's Hard]

• 00:42:711 (6,7) - blue tick - blue tick..it a little hard to read rhythm imo.

[Kiyoshi's Insane]

• 00:28:550 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - these notes don't have regular rhythm. but you arranged them as if they have regular rhythm. who can read the rhythm from these notes?
  00:32:956 (2,3,4) - the distance of previous stream is this:00:27:921 (4,5,6). and this stream has double of it. do you think that who can pass it?
  00:38:620 (6,1) - this distance is almost same as 00:39:669 (2,3), but rhythm is one-quarter. why?
  01:43:760 (1,2,3) - same as 00:28:550
  01:57:501 - why did you change SV so suddenly? it is just only confusing.
  03:18:480 (4,5,6) - same as 00:28:550
  03:19:424 (7,8,9) - ^
  03:24:040 (1,2,3) - ^
  
  overall, you must fix that too random placement whole of this diff.
  I recommend you to learn more about mapping from other ranked maps.
  and don't forget to consider whether players can enjoy your map.

anyway, good luck

h-728 wrote:

[Kiyoshi's Insane]

• 00:28:550 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - these notes don't have regular rhythm. but you arranged them as if they have regular rhythm. who can read the rhythm from these notes? - Fixed
  00:32:956 (2,3,4) - the distance of previous stream is this:00:27:921 (4,5,6). and this stream has double of it. do you think that who can pass it? - Everyone.
  00:38:620 (6,1) - this distance is almost same as 00:39:669 (2,3), but rhythm is one-quarter. why? - Can't understand what you mean ;-;
  01:43:760 (1,2,3) - same as 00:28:550 - Fixed
  01:57:501 - why did you change SV so suddenly? it is just only confusing. - Warning SB will be added soon for this
  03:18:480 (4,5,6) - same as 00:28:550 - Fixed
  03:19:424 (7,8,9) - ^ - Fixed
  03:24:040 (1,2,3) - ^ - Fixed
  
  overall, you must fix that too random placement whole of this diff.
  I recommend you to learn more about mapping from other ranked maps.
  and don't forget to consider whether players can enjoy your map.

anyway, good luck

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

00:38:620 (6,1) - this distance is almost same as 00:39:669 (2,3), but rhythm is one-quarter. why? - Can't understand what you mean ;-;

Distance A

Distance B

1. why storyboard a warning when you can use the option lol
2. 02:13:753 - this storyboard volume falling down, try to fade out each column in different speed, or maybe grid by grid lol

1. I think grid 2 is too large, this makes some spacings look very bad
2. 00:28:550 (3,1,2) - why the spacing
3. 00:40:299 (2) - remove the whistle at slider end
4. 00:41:033 (4) - turn off gris snap, put in the middle of 3 and 5 0.0 this doesn't look good
5. 00:58:236 (3) - better move note (4) to next 1/4 beat http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/371253
6. 01:12:187 (1,2) - it's hard for me to get the rhythm here, maybe remove (2) and stack (1) at slider end ..?
7. 01:17:012 - I think adding 3 notes here is better to play, don't cut the one part in the music o.o http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot978.jpg
8. 01:22:257 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - gridsnap makes this stream weird, plz turn off grid snap and remake it
9. 01:36:837 (8,9,10) - 1/8 slider o.o http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot979.jpg
10. 01:38:096 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - spacing weird o.o
11. 01:41:243 (4,5,6,7) - what
12. 02:01:068 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - after you speed up the sliders, spacing needs to be larger for streams, otherwise it plays very awkward imo
13. I suggest you use a smaller grid size and make the stream spacings better...

1. 00:36:942 (1) - why don't make it end at 1/1 ..?
2. 00:38:620 (6) - ^
3. 00:55:403 (5) - you can make blanket better like this http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot980.jpg
4. nice diff o.o

1. 01:17:222 (1,3,1) - missing claps here..
2. 02:16:671 - you should break when it falls down... at least turn down volume gradually orz
3. 02:34:424 (1,2) - move up 3 grids
4. 02:41:977 (2,4) - this may be hard to read for beginners._.
5. 02:51:208 (1) - not centered o.o
6. 03:23:935 (4) - right 1grid
7. nice map :3

1. maybe use more 2/1 notes and long sliders, less 1/1 notes, making a better diff spread...
2. 02:16:671 - same with normal diff
3. nice map too :3

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

hi~

Pereira's Hard

1. 00:36:942 (1) - why don't make it end at 1/1 ..? sorry no, as this slider is fit
2. 00:38:620 (6) - ^ ^ no
3. 00:55:403 (5) - you can make blanket better like this http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot980.jpg well ok
4. nice diff o.o

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

hi~

Kiyoshi's Insane

1. I think grid 2 is too large, this makes some spacings look very bad - Tried. D:
2. 00:28:550 (3,1,2) - why the spacing - I don't get what's wrong with it
3. 00:40:299 (2) - remove the whistle at slider end - Fixed
4. 00:41:033 (4) - turn off gris snap, put in the middle of 3 and 5 0.0 this doesn't look good - Sounds better, fixed.
5. 00:58:236 (3) - better move note (4) to next 1/4 beat http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/371253 - Fixed
6. 01:12:187 (1,2) - it's hard for me to get the rhythm here, maybe remove (2) and stack (1) at slider end ..? - Fixed
7. 01:17:012 - I think adding 3 notes here is better to play, don't cut the one part in the music o.o http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot978.jpg - Fixed, I hope it's ok.
8. 01:22:257 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - gridsnap makes this stream weird, plz turn off grid snap and remake it - Did my best ;-;
9. 01:36:837 (8,9,10) - 1/8 slider o.o http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot979.jpg - No, It's really confusing '-'
10. 01:38:096 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - spacing weird o.o - Fixed
11. 01:41:243 (4,5,6,7) - what - Changed the distance, I hope it's easier to read now >.<
12. 02:01:068 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - after you speed up the sliders, spacing needs to be larger for streams, otherwise it plays very awkward imo - Fixed and did some changes as well
13. I suggest you use a smaller grid size and make the stream spacings better...

I think just the Insane diff needs more work, other diffs are good - ;-; I'm doing my best ;c Thanks.

Good luck~

1. 01:16:382 (5) - move last point to x: 292 y:104
2. 01:53:725 (5) - add finish?
3. 03:00:019 (4) - make slider more symmetrical looking? o.o..

1. 00:22:676 (5) - one grid up for neater placement next to 4..?
2. 01:01:278 (3) - try to make a neater blanket around 4: http://puu.sh/IWOO

1. 01:26:033 (2,4) - the claps on 2 and 4 don't sound very fitting imo
2. 01:29:389 (2,4) - ^
3. 03:04:424 (9) - try placing this on x:268 y:136 to look a bit neater o:

1. 00:30:229 (8) - NC here, new section of instrument starts , and then remove NC on next note
2. 00:36:732 (1) - remove NC here and place the NC on 00:36:942 (3) - instead
3. 01:08:830 (5) - NC here and remove NC on next note
4. 01:09:040 (1,2,3,4) - (a little nazi) their ends are not stacked perfectly
5. 02:05:683 (1) - remove NC here and NC on next note
6. 02:43:236 (7) - NC?

RikiH_ wrote:

Hi from my queue o/ sorry for late

Kiyoshi's Insane

01:37:152 (11) - I don't like this slider's shape... - Sorry, not changing ;-;
01:40:299 (9) - ^ - Sorry, not changing ;-;
02:24:355 (x) - There is an unsnapped timing section, change its offset from 144331 to 144355 - Also, add a note here! - Le fixed
03:38:201 (x) - Volume: 5% in the end of this spinner - Le fixed

Nice map and storyboard, star!

meiikyuu wrote:

feel free to ignore anything you don't like~

Kiyoshi's Insane

1. 00:30:229 (8) - NC here, new section of instrument starts , and then remove NC on next note - Le fixed
2. 00:36:732 (1) - remove NC here and place the NC on 00:36:942 (3) - instead - Le fixed
3. 01:08:830 (5) - NC here and remove NC on next note - Le fixed
4. 01:09:040 (1,2,3,4) - (a little nazi) their ends are not stacked perfectly - Did my best ;-; can't stack them more precisely :c
5. 02:05:683 (1) - remove NC here and NC on next note - Le fixed
6. 02:43:236 (7) - NC? - Le fixed

nice job~ good luck ^^

1. "Elements" is jpg, change to png
2. inconsistency in preview time
   - Kiyoshi's Insane : 117478
   - Pereira's Hard : 117499
   - Normal : 117502
   - Easy : 117502

• 
  

  AIBat v3.0 wrote:

  Snapping Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
  02:50:029 - snap to 02:50:054
  02:51:078 - snap to 02:51:103
  03:17:197 - snap to 03:17:222
  03:18:036 - snap to 03:18:061
  03:29:784- snap to 03:29:809
  03:31:357- snap to 03:31:382

1. DR+1 i think better is this (6 is same to hard)
2. 00:29:250 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i think this distance are not so good, confuse to players. i think 1.20 is better
3. 01:17:222 (10) - concurrent notes - 01:17:222 (1)
4. 01:23:095 (3,4,5,6,7) - i think it doesn't follow the music well. how about this? http://puu.sh/JbEa
5. 01:57:501 (1,2,3) - i think this SV change is not so good, cant first play this. you should fix. i think (1) : x1.50 (2) : x1.75 (3) : x2.00 better is this
6. 02:17:641 (1) - too long
7. 02:50:054 - use volume 5% to slider, this is unrankable. you should raise up volume (10%~)
8. 03:31:487 (1) - too long

• 
  

  AIBat V3.0 wrote:

  Snapping
  02:25:508 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
  02:28:445 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
  02:30:124 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
  02:32:222 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
  02:35:369 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
  02:35:369 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
  02:35:369 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
  
  Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
  01:57:604 - snap to 01:57:606
  02:00:856 - snap to 02:00:858
  02:00:961 - snap to 02:00:963
  02:04:213 - snap to 02:04:215
  02:04:318 - snap to 02:04:320
  02:07:569 - snap to 02:07:571
  02:07:674 - snap to 02:07:676
  02:17:639 - snap to 02:17:641
  02:24:352 - snap to 02:24:355

1. 00:31:907 (4) - NC
2. 00:35:683 (9) - ^
3. 00:38:620 (6) - ^
4. 00:56:452 (6) - ^
5. 00:59:180 (8) - ^
6. 02:17:641 (1) - too long
7. 02:24:355 (1) ~ 02:35:369 (2) - i think this section is not sync with sounds, you should fix this section

2. 00:17:641 (1) - NC. this is unrankable
3. 02:16:802 (4) - too much reversing slider can confuse beginners player
4. 02:43:655 (4) - ^

1. Fine

Wreath wrote:

[Kiyoshi's Insane]

• 
  

  AIBat v3.0 wrote:

  Snapping Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: - Fixed
  02:50:029 - snap to 02:50:054
  02:51:078 - snap to 02:51:103
  03:17:197 - snap to 03:17:222
  03:18:036 - snap to 03:18:061
  03:29:784- snap to 03:29:809
  03:31:357- snap to 03:31:382

1. DR+1 i think better is this (6 is same to hard) - Fixed
2. 00:29:250 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i think this distance are not so good, confuse to players. i think 1.20 is better - Fixed
3. 01:17:222 (10) - concurrent notes - 01:17:222 (1) - Fixed
4. 01:23:095 (3,4,5,6,7) - i think it doesn't follow the music well. how about this? http://puu.sh/JbEa - nuh :c
5. 01:57:501 (1,2,3) - i think this SV change is not so good, cant first play this. you should fix. i think (1) : x1.50 (2) : x1.75 (3) : x2.00 better is this - It will kill the whole kiai :c nuh
6. 02:17:641 (1) - too long - I don't think it's a problem o:
7. 02:50:054 - use volume 5% to slider, this is unrankable. you should raise up volume (10%~) - Fixed
8. 03:31:487 (1) - too long - I don't think it's a problem o:

good luck

hibarirailwayz wrote:

from modding queues~
There are my opinions, so you need not follow.

[Insane]
02:17:641 (1) - fade out (volume down using Inherited Point) - Fixed :3
02:40:299 (1) - I suggest↓ - Fixed :3

SPOILER

03:31:487 (1) - too long... fade out. - Fixed :3
Good luck!!

Yoru-SAN wrote:

Hi! from Yoru-SAN's mod queue~

General:

Snep Divisor 1/8 is really needed?

Kiyoshi's Insane:

SPOILER

01:41:243 (4,5,6) - change please , 'cause now this is not Insane , now this is Extra or smtg. maybe try that http://puu.sh/JEGW
01:41:872 (8,9,10) - ^

01:42:501 (1) - need to end spinner a little earlier.

01:44:809 (3) - add note?

01:58:550 (4,5,6,7,8) - oh no. change please
02:06:417 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - hell no. ^ it's unrankble.

02:17:641 (1) - too long.
03:02:431 (6,7) - try this http://puu.sh/JESh
03:19:424 (7,8,9) - create problem , change disposition please.

03:28:131 (1,1) - too long.

Pereira's Hard:

SPOILER

Please always use Distance Snap,'cause sometimes popping defects. I like this Hard.

Normal: Fixed :3 Thx

SPOILER

00:26:872 (1) - hiden notes is bad for Easy/Normal diff, I recommend you change this moment and moments like this.

Good Luck!

Yoru-SAN wrote:

Hi! from Yoru-SAN's mod queue~

General:

Snep Divisor 1/8 is really needed?

-Bakari- wrote:

hi-hi!

recheck time? /

[General]
enable Epilepsy Warning for all diffs Fixed
make same preview time for all diffs Fixed

eh.. ask some pro's for timing check. i think it's 1/3. ( DO NOT CHANGE SNAP DIVISOR! Find someone to check timing sections!) I try it ^^

[Easy]
finish every big white line? listen to music, sounds good :3 No srry ^^
01:00:438 (6,1) - move NC to (6) remove it from (1) Fixed
01:03:795 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - do not skip beats. put sliders here, or something. but do not skip beats. it'll confuse beginners i think that no srry ^^
02:41:977 (2,3) - cahnge into slider. to avoid +6 on circle. Fixed

[Normal]
finish every big white line? listen to music, sounds good :3
AR +1?
00:15:124 (1) - new combo here. it's a bug Fixed
00:45:753 (3) - stack with 4. plays better Fixed
01:37:606 (2,3) - spacing I dont understand this ._.

[Hard]
unsnapped objects/green lines

[Insane]
HP Drain + 2
02:50:578 - add another green line and make volume louder here!
03:17:222 (3) - NC for SV changes!
03:28:131 (1,1) - 1/8 here? rly?
03:31:487 (1) - end earlier.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

much better.

Yoru-SAN wrote:

Hi! from Yoru-SAN's mod queue~

General:

Snep Divisor 1/8 is really needed?

Kiyoshi's Insane:

SPOILER

01:41:243 (4,5,6) - change please , 'cause now this is not Insane , now this is Extra or smtg. maybe try that http://puu.sh/JEGW - It's ok as it is.
01:41:872 (8,9,10) - ^ - ^

01:42:501 (1) - need to end spinner a little earlier. - No, ruins the beat. Listen in slow motion.

01:44:809 (3) - add note? - Added between 2 & 3

01:58:550 (4,5,6,7,8) - oh no. change please - Just a bit. No more than that.
02:06:417 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - hell no. ^ it's unrankble. - It is rankable but made it a straight stream instead.

02:17:641 (1) - too long. - Doesn't matter, the HP Drain is ok for it.
03:02:431 (6,7) - try this http://puu.sh/JESh - Fixed
03:19:424 (7,8,9) - create problem , change disposition please. - Which dispotision? It's just the rhythm change LUL.

03:28:131 (1,1) - too long. - Same as above.

Good Luck!

-Bakari- wrote:

hi-hi!

[Insane]
HP Drain + 2 - Fixed
02:50:578 - add another green line and make volume louder here! - Fixed, 40% then 80%
03:17:222 (3) - NC for SV changes! - Fixed
03:28:131 (1,1) - 1/8 here? rly? - Cause sounds good? ;3
03:31:487 (1) - end earlier. - No need.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

much better.

• 
  I think than Easy and Normal needs more whistles

• 
  01:08:830 (1) - add clap?
  01:59:180 (1) - ^
  02:26:452 (3) - i think that this whistle needn`t here
  02:58:760 (2) - ^(end of slider)
  03:00:858 (5) - ^
  03:02:536 (3) - ^(begin of slder)
  ^and another moments like this

• 
  00:17:641 (2) - play bad, seriously.I tried to do this for three times but but received 100 points on (3)
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:23:515 (1,2,3) - this stacks in normal diff? huh... okay
  00:25:194 (1) - clap?
  00:56:243 (3,2) - like in 00:23:515 (1,2,3)
  01:39:879 (5,3) - to many repeats on sliders for normal difficulty
  01:58:341 (1) - May you place this note not in the center after spinner? It isn`t good in Normal and in alldiffs, seriously
  02:07:571 (1) - clap to the end?
  02:08:830 (3) - clap?
  02:55:823 (3) - hm... 2\1 slider in 1\1 pattern?
  03:18:900 (2) -
  
  SPOILER

  

• 
  01:08:830 (3,1) - i think that this pattern looks hard in not most hardest difficulty in mapset
  02:06:103 (1) - Why so? There are 1\2 music beats and 1\2 pattern
  02:57:921 (1) -
  
  SPOILER

  
  03:04:634 (1) -
  
  SPOILER

  
  03:11:348 (1,4) - ^

Fenya wrote:

Hi hi :3

Kiyoshi's Insane:
01:17:327 (1) - end to 01:20:159 or 01:20:369 ? - Fixed
01:57:501 - ... I think this is unkawaii, also, you should put a alert of SB with a x2~ - Soon
02:24:355 (1) - Add Finish? - Fixed

That's all, sorry for my Nazi mod u.u
Sorry for my bad English, I hope you serve something.
Good song, good luck~

Fenya wrote:

Hi hi :3

Easy:
En mi opinion, no me gusta mucho los whistle en esta cancion (En el audio Normal) :/
00:29:389 (4) - Quita ese whistle, suena un poco molesto :<
00:41:977 (4,5) - Y si pones un timing point de soft para estos dos circles?
02:07:571 - Desde aqui los finish suenan un poco molestos :<

Normal:
01:02:956 (5) - Quita este whistle? o.o

Pereira's Hard:
Fine

Kiyoshi's Insane:
01:17:327 (1) - end to 01:20:159 or 01:20:369 ?
01:57:501 - ... I think this is unkawaii, also, you should put a alert of SB with a x2~
02:24:355 (1) - Add Finish?

That's all, sorry for my Nazi mod u.u
Sorry for my bad English, I hope you serve something.
Good song, good luck~

tiper wrote:

So many mods... But i`m trying to do my best

[General]

• 
  I think than Easy and Normal needs more whistles

[Easy]

• 
  01:08:830 (1) - add clap?
  01:59:180 (1) - ^
  02:26:452 (3) - i think that this whistle needn`t here
  02:58:760 (2) - ^(end of slider)
  03:00:858 (5) - ^
  03:02:536 (3) - ^(begin of slder)
  ^and another moments like this

[Normal]

• 
  00:17:641 (2) - play bad, seriously.I tried to do this for three times but but received 100 points on (3)
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:23:515 (1,2,3) - this stacks in normal diff? huh... okay
  00:25:194 (1) - clap?
  00:56:243 (3,2) - like in 00:23:515 (1,2,3)
  01:39:879 (5,3) - to many repeats on sliders for normal difficulty
  01:58:341 (1) - May you place this note not in the center after spinner? It isn`t good in Normal and in alldiffs, seriously
  02:07:571 (1) - clap to the end?
  02:08:830 (3) - clap?
  02:55:823 (3) - hm... 2\1 slider in 1\1 pattern?
  03:18:900 (2) -
  
  SPOILER

  

[Hard]

• 
  01:08:830 (3,1) - i think that this pattern looks hard in not most hardest difficulty in mapset
  02:06:103 (1) - Why so? There are 1\2 music beats and 1\2 pattern
  02:57:921 (1) -
  
  SPOILER

  
  03:04:634 (1) -
  
  SPOILER

  
  03:11:348 (1,4) - ^

Glass wrote:

hello

[Kiyoshi's Insane]
00:29:180 (1) - this note should be snapped on a 1/2 red tick instead of 1/3, and stack this on the slider end of 00:28:550 (3). it would look like this: - Fixed

SPOILER

01:57:816 (2) - I suggest reversing the slider start and slider end, I feel it plays better - Nah, too easy xD

that's all~

- t e n n y a - wrote:

[Kiyoshi's Insane]

slider shape, circle placement
nothing

Rhythms

1. 01:12:396: remove clap?

- Fixed^PRO DIFF OMG - Omfg thank you <3 XD

that's all I can find, rank good luck ^o^)//

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Peri]
00:35:054 (6,7,8) - these triplets are difficult in comparison with the rest of your map and feel like they are overmapped. sorry keep it i don't feel is overmapped i listen on playback 25% they are follow melody not drums i guess is fit song imo somebody say again this part i will change
00:56:452 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^ yes change and fix
00:58:131 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ yes change and fix
00:59:809 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - ^ yes change and fix
01:47:641 - feels like there should be a note here or 1 should be moved to here fix

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Easy]
looks ok

[Normal]
I guess there isn't anything particularly wrong with this difficulty, but the rhythm you have mapped is very monotonous and gets boring after a while when 90% of the notes are exactly one beat after the previous note. You might do well to add a little more variety to your patterns (and I see you already have some and it's very good so I'm certain that if you mix it up a little bit more it will be even better )

[Peri]
00:35:054 (6,7,8) - these triplets are difficult in comparison with the rest of your map and feel like they are overmapped.
00:56:452 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^
00:58:131 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
00:59:809 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - ^
01:47:641 - feels like there should be a note here or 1 should be moved to here

[Kiyo]
00:34:529 (2) - space this evenly between 1 and 3
00:58:445 (4) - why the hitsounds on a blue tick?
01:17:327 (1) - could you end this half a tick earlier to go with the drums in the background?
01:32:536 (1) - this note is very soon after the spinner's end and might require some players to stop spinning before the spinner actually ends in order to be able to hit it
01:43:795 (1) - ^
01:57:501 (1) - it might be nice if you could sb a warning that its about to speed up here since there's no indication by the music itself that this is going to speed up. I honestly don't think having it speed up like this makes any sense at all but I'm willing to compromise for a sb warning
02:45:334 and 02:45:334 - it'd be nice if you could either make these into very short breaks or lower your drain to 7
03:22:117 (2) - this jump doesn't make very much sense
03:28:131 (1,1) - is this really necessary?

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Kiyo]
00:34:529 (2) - space this evenly between 1 and 3 - No need cause of the rhythm :c
00:58:445 (4) - why the hitsounds on a blue tick? - Removed
01:17:327 (1) - could you end this half a tick earlier to go with the drums in the background? - Fixed
01:32:536 (1) - this note is very soon after the spinner's end and might require some players to stop spinning before the spinner actually ends in order to be able to hit it - Makes it a bit harder to read :3 Also if I end it earlier it goes off-beat, so no.
01:43:795 (1) - ^ - ^
01:57:501 (1) - it might be nice if you could sb a warning that its about to speed up here since there's no indication by the music itself that this is going to speed up. I honestly don't think having it speed up like this makes any sense at all but I'm willing to compromise for a sb warning - We are waiting for Dark_Ai's SB already :c
02:45:334 and 02:45:334 - it'd be nice if you could either make these into very short breaks or lower your drain to 7 - It's fine as it is, it doesn't drop your health that much
03:22:117 (2) - this jump doesn't make very much sense - It does :3
03:28:131 (1,1) - is this really necessary? - Yes.

Dark_Ai wrote:

Insane here we go
Just change it~
And also it's with warning

SPOILER

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160,160,96837,1,2
128,192,96942,1,2
96,224,97047,1,2
64,256,97152,2,2,B|64:304|64:304|112:304,1,95,2|6
224,304,97571,5,2
256,304,97676,1,2
384,304,97886,1,2
352,304,97991,1,2
320,304,98096,1,2
320,256,98201,2,2,B|320:160,1,95,10|2
320,120,98515,1,2
320,80,98620,1,2
320,40,98725,1,2
320,40,98830,2,2,B|368:40,2,47.5,2|2|6
128,32,99250,5,2
160,32,99355,1,2
208,192,99564,1,2
176,192,99669,2,2,B|128:192,1,47.5
96,192,99879,1,10
48,192,99984,1,2
16,224,100089,1,2
48,256,100194,1,2
96,256,100299,2,2,B|96:304|96:304|144:304,1,95
176,304,100613,1,2
224,304,100718,5,6
320,304,100928,1,2
368,304,101033,1,2
240,192,101243,1,2
304,192,101348,1,2
272,144,101452,1,2
208,120,101557,2,2,B|160:120,2,47.5,10|2|2
240,72,101872,1,2
272,24,101977,1,2
304,72,102082,1,2
336,120,102187,2,2,B|400:120,2,47.5,2|2|10
256,192,102501,12,2,103655
256,48,103795,5,2
256,128,103935,1,2
256,208,104075,1,10
256,304,104285,6,2,B|352:304,1,95
416,208,104704,1,2
416,208,104809,1,0
416,208,104914,1,10
256,208,105124,2,2,B|176:208,4,47.5
256,48,105753,5,10
160,128,105963,1,2
160,128,106068,1,2
352,128,106278,1,2
352,128,106382,1,2
256,208,106592,6,2,B|256:256,4,47.5,10|2|2|2|2
448,192,107222,2,2,B|352:192,1,95,2|10
400,272,107641,6,2,B|336:272,1,47.5
240,336,107956,2,2,B|288:336,3,47.5,2|2|2|10
368,336,108480,2,2,B|416:336,4,47.5
288,336,109110,6,2,B|224:336|224:336|192:304,1,95,10|2
288,336,109529,2,2,B|288:272|288:272|256:224,1,95
200,312,109949,2,2,B|136:312|136:312|104:280,1,95,10|2
272,248,110369,2,2,B|272:184|272:184|240:136,1,95
192,224,110788,5,10
256,160,110998,2,2,B|256:112,1,47.5
112,288,111313,2,2,B|64:288,3,47.5,2|2|2|10
112,128,111837,1,2
112,128,112047,1,2
112,128,112257,1,2
112,128,112466,5,10
256,32,112676,2,2,B|320:80,1,47.5
256,224,112991,2,2,B|320:176,1,47.5
336,128,113306,2,2,B|384:128,6,47.5,10|2|2|2|2|2|2
336,128,114145,5,10
112,128,114355,2,2,B|160:128,1,47.5
112,128,114669,2,2,B|112:176,3,47.5,2|2|2|10
160,176,115194,2,2,B|208:224,4,47.5
160,176,115823,5,10
480,176,116033,1,2
480,176,116138,1,2
480,176,116348,1,2
480,176,116452,2,2,B|432:112|432:112|400:112,1,95,2|10
480,176,116872,2,2,B|432:240|432:240|400:240,1,95
384,176,117292,1,2
328,176,117396,1,2
272,176,117501,6,0,B|128:16,1,190,10|2
240,232,117816,2,4,B|104:80,1,190
208,288,118131,2,0,B|56:120,1,190,2|10
4,232,118550,1,0
4,288,118655,1,0
60,288,118760,1,8
116,288,118865,1,0
116,344,118970,1,0
256,336,119180,6,0,B|448:336,1,190,10|2
352,272,119494,2,4,B|144:272,1,190
240,208,119809,2,0,B|448:208,1,190
480,208,120124,1,0
480,144,120229,1,0
480,88,120334,1,0
480,32,120438,2,0,B|288:32,1,190,10|2
32,64,120858,5,8
32,208,121068,2,0,B|32:304,2,95,2|2|10
32,152,121382,1,0
88,152,121487,1,0
144,152,121592,1,0
192,152,121697,2,0,B|224:104|224:104|256:84|256:84|288:104|288:104|336:184,1,190
368,152,122012,1,0
424,152,122117,1,8
480,152,122222,1,0
480,208,122327,1,0
256,192,122536,5,8
256,192,122746,2,4,B|256:304,1,95
256,352,123061,1,4
256,352,123166,1,4
160,336,123375,2,0,B|112:256,1,95,10|2
352,336,123585,2,0,B|416:256,1,95
256,284,123795,2,0,B|256:256|256:256|272:228|256:200|256:200|236:168|256:136|256:136|256:112|256:76,1,190
256,100,124110,1,0
256,100,124215,1,0
160,48,124424,5,0
160,48,124529,1,4
336,48,124739,1,4
336,48,124844,1,0
336,48,124949,1,0
336,48,125054,2,0,B|416:96|416:96|416:224,1,190,10|2
416,240,125369,1,0
416,288,125473,1,8
416,336,125578,1,0
416,336,125683,2,0,B|320:360|256:312|256:312|256:272,1,190
256,184,126103,5,0
304,152,126208,1,4
384,68,126417,1,4
332,68,126522,1,0
280,68,126627,1,0
228,68,126732,1,8
176,68,126837,1,0
124,68,126942,1,0
72,68,127047,1,0
20,72,127152,2,0,B|-12:120|36:120|0:160|0:160|36:200|-12:200|20:248,1,190
16,300,127466,1,0
16,352,127571,5,0
144,256,127781,1,0
144,192,127886,1,0
256,72,128096,1,4
256,128,128201,1,0
256,184,128306,1,0
256,240,128410,2,0,B|256:352,1,95
336,264,128620,2,0,B|416:344,2,95,2|2|10
176,264,128935,2,0,B|96:344,2,95
256,240,129250,5,8
256,184,129355,1,0
184,144,129459,6,0,B|104:64,1,95
256,96,129669,2,0,B|256:0,1,95,10|2
320,144,129879,2,0,B|400:64,2,95,2|2|10
256,160,130194,5,0
256,224,130299,1,0
256,280,130403,1,0
256,336,130508,1,8
256,32,130718,5,0
256,32,130823,1,0
256,32,130928,1,8
256,192,137641,12,2,143935
256,192,144355,5,4
288,32,157781,6,0,B|400:32|448:144,1,190
320,112,158410,2,0,B|272:80|208:128,1,95
272,240,158830,2,0,B|272:288,1,47.5
272,240,159145,2,0,B|272:176,1,47.5
144,144,159459,2,0,B|80:224|144:320,1,190
208,89,160299,1,0
208,208,160508,6,0,B|208:272,2,47.5
320,192,160928,2,0,B|352:144|320:80,1,95
256,80,161348,2,0,B|288:16|368:16,2,95
256,112,161872,5,0
256,192,162082,1,0
256,224,162187,1,0
256,256,162292,1,0
256,288,162396,1,0
352,240,162606,2,0,B|384:192,2,47.5
256,320,163236,5,0
256,320,163550,1,0
160,240,163760,2,0,B|128:192,3,47.5
256,144,164285,6,0,B|256:96,2,47.5
256,32,166173,5,4
448,320,167851,5,10
48,320,168271,1,10
256,288,168585,2,2,B|288:240|224:240|272:176,1,95
256,144,168900,1,2
272,96,169005,1,2
320,80,169110,1,10
384,192,169320,5,2
432,208,169424,1,2
432,256,169529,2,2,B|384:320|352:224|224:304,1,190,2|10
256,208,170054,2,2,B|256:176,20,23.75,2|2|2|2|2|2|2|2|2|2|2|2|2|2|10|2|2|2|2|2|2
256,288,171208,6,2,B|256:336|256:336|336:384|400:288,1,190,2|10
256,48,172047,1,2
112,128,172257,2,6,B|80:176,1,47.5
416,128,172571,2,6,B|448:176,1,47.5
253,311,172886,1,2
256,128,173306,6,2,B|208:224|304:224|240:336,1,190,10|2
256,48,173935,1,2
304,64,174040,1,2
336,112,174145,2,2,B|304:192|320:224|352:192|336:320,2,190,10|2|10
336,112,175299,5,2
448,80,175508,1,2
480,192,175718,1,2
480,192,175823,1,10
416,320,176033,1,2
384,320,176138,1,2
352,320,176243,1,2
112,272,176662,2,2,B|16:288|16:384,2,142.5,10|2|2
160,272,177396,1,2
208,272,177501,1,10
272,176,177711,5,2
320,176,177816,1,2
368,176,177921,2,2,B|448:176|448:176|480:208|480:208|480:304,2,190,2|10|2
304,288,178970,2,6,B|256:336,1,47.5
304,64,179285,2,6,B|256:32,1,47.5
160,176,179599,2,2,B|96:192|96:192|64:224|64:224|64:304,1,190,2|10
64,304,180438,5,2
208,304,180648,1,2
208,240,180753,1,2
272,240,180858,1,10
352,304,181068,5,2
448,352,181278,2,2,B|480:304|448:256,1,95
352,304,181697,2,2,B|320:240|368:192,1,95,10|2
384,176,182012,1,2
432,144,182117,2,2,B|432:80|352:80,1,95
324,80,182431,1,2
276,80,182536,1,10
224,192,182746,5,2
192,240,182851,1,2
160,288,182956,2,2,B|144:336|80:336,1,95,10|2
400,80,183376,2,2,B|464:112|464:176,1,95,10|2
464,208,183690,1,2
464,256,183795,2,2,B|464:304|400:336,1,95
368,336,184110,1,2
320,336,184215,1,10
368,80,184424,1,2
320,80,184529,1,2
272,80,184634,6,2,B|224:80|224:128|224:128|96:128,1,190,2|10
320,192,185473,1,2
320,368,185683,2,6,B|320:320,1,47.5
320,32,185998,2,6,B|320:80,1,47.5
176,192,186313,2,2,B|80:191,2,95,2|2|10
288,192,186942,5,2
288,192,187152,1,2
496,192,187362,1,2
464,192,187466,1,2
432,192,187571,1,10
176,192,187781,1,2
384,112,187991,2,2,B|448:96|448:16,2,95,2|2|10
320,176,188620,5,2
256,256,188830,1,2
192,176,189040,1,2
128,240,189250,2,2,B|64:256|64:336,2,95,10|2|2
192,176,189879,5,2
256,96,190089,1,10
320,176,190299,1,2
384,240,190508,2,2,B|432:272|432:336,2,95,2|2|10
256,320,191138,1,2
256,272,191243,1,2
256,224,191348,6,2,B|208:224|208:224|160:272,1,95
256,224,191767,2,2,B|304:224|304:224|352:272,1,95,10|2
256,32,192187,1,2
384,144,192396,2,6,B|352:96,1,47.5
128,143,192711,2,6,B|160:96,1,47.5
256,352,193026,1,2
256,32,193445,1,10
256,304,193865,5,10
256,304,194075,1,2
208,304,194180,1,2
160,304,194285,1,10
256,192,194494,1,2
352,48,194704,6,2,B|432:48|432:128,2,95,2|2|10
256,240,195334,1,2
160,48,195543,2,2,B|80:48|80:128,2,95,10|2|2
208,48,196068,1,2
256,64,196173,1,2
272,112,196278,1,2
272,160,196382,6,2,B|272:272,1,95,10|2
336,128,196802,2,2,B|336:240,1,95
200,120,197222,6,0,B|200:160|200:160|184:176|200:192|200:192|184:208|200:224|200:224|184:240|200:256|200:256|200:304,1,190
448,192,198480,1,0
256,192,198900,1,0
352,64,199180,1,0
352,336,199424,1,0
304,336,199529,1,0
256,336,199739,1,0
96,336,200159,5,0
16,192,200578,1,0
176,192,200893,1,0
176,192,200998,1,0
96,64,201313,1,0
96,64,201417,1,0
256,64,201837,5,0
464,64,202117,1,0
256,64,202396,1,0
304,64,202536,1,0
352,64,202676,2,0,B|416:128|352:208,1,142.5
312,132,203096,2,0,B|264:196|320:268,1,142.5
368,208,203515,2,0,B|416:272|336:352,1,142.5
192,344,204075,5,0
152,344,204215,1,0
112,344,204355,1,0
48,272,204634,6,0,B|48:192,1,63.3333333333333
48,96,205054,1,0
48,96,205194,2,0,B|96:64|144:64|192:64|240:112,1,190
224,272,205893,1,0
224,272,206173,2,0,B|304:272,2,63.3333333333333
48,272,206872,5,0
48,96,207292,1,0
224,96,207606,1,0
224,96,207711,1,0
400,96,208026,1,0
400,96,208131,6,0,B|400:128,30,23.75
400,96,209809,6,0,B|352:96,30,47.5
256,192,211487,12,0,218201

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

I LOVE YOU.

jonathanlfj wrote:

[Kiyoshi's Insane]
AR-1, AR8 plays much better - I choosed 9 cause the Double speed part has some overlap that looks bad and confusing with AR 8 >.> So I'll leave it as it is :c
01:16:697 (6,7) - raise 6 and lower 7? kinda hard to hit - Fixed
That sudden change in velocity...give a sb warning? nvm just noticed the warning lol. maybe make it brighter and place it so 01:57:501 (1) doesn't block it? - The given place was the best cause it only blocks the S.. Other parts are blocking the whole image D:
02:09:250 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - lol i died here first time testing, hitbursts blocked me from seeing notes below. Consider overlap 02:10:194 (1,2,3,4) with 02:09:250 (1,2) so its easier to predict where to hit - Fixed
03:06:942 (1,2) - put these overlapping with 03:05:473 (2) - Fixed
Nicely done this was so intense

Great mapset! Good luck on the rank~~

SPOILER

(╯°□°）╯︵

jonathanlfj wrote:

[Pereira's Hard]
00:56:872 (7) - add finish to slider end ho yeah i forget, Espiritur00 do it this for me pleasse
Everything else is fine

Pereira006 wrote:

jonathanlfj wrote:

[Pereira's Hard]
00:56:872 (7) - add finish to slider end ho yeah i forget, Espiritur00 do it this for me pleasse Ok man C:
Everything else is fine

thank you mod

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Nyaa ~
You requested in my queue ~


[General]
- Bookmarks can be removed ~


[Easy]
- HP Drain rate +1 ?


[Normal]
02:19:320 (2) - Place where 02:16:802 (4) was.


[Kiyoshi's Insane]
00:28:550 (3) - Stack the end of the slider.


So pro! ><
Sorry for my poor modding. ;w;
Good luck and star ~

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Peri]
because you have so many sliders that last for 1.5 beats, you should change the slider tick rate to 2; this will make the ticks evenly spaced on your 1.5 beat sliders. I konw i just scary spread difficult, Espi do it for me pleasse is fine inconsistent tick rate because my diff is guest. so pleasse do it me tick 1 to 2

Pereira006 wrote:

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Peri]
because you have so many sliders that last for 1.5 beats, you should change the slider tick rate to 2; this will make the ticks evenly spaced on your 1.5 beat sliders. I konw i just scary spread difficult, Espi do it for me pleasse is fine inconsistent tick rate because my diff is guest. so pleasse do it me tick 1 to 2

thank again

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

[Kiyoshi's Insane]
00:28:550 (3) - Stack the end of the slider.


So pro! ><
Sorry for my poor modding. ;w;
Good luck and star ~

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Easy]
looks good

[Normal]
looks good

[Peri]
because you have so many sliders that last for 1.5 beats, you should change the slider tick rate to 2; this will make the ticks evenly spaced on your 1.5 beat sliders.

[Kiyo]
00:34:529 (2) - make this the same distance from 1 as it is from 3: http://puu.sh/PIx7
01:57:501 (1) - this speed up is quite a bit faster than is necessary, try 1.5x or 1.75x instead. Alternately, add a warning to the sb

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

03:19:459 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - you have some notes in here that should be snapped to 1/3 and arent I change this for other thing
03:25:054 (2,3,5,4,7,6,8,9) - duplicate notes Fixed
03:27:606 (5,4,7,6) - ^ Fixed
I think you tried to snap to 1/4 in this section or something and your notes got all messed up. Just go back and resnap them all orz I make another thing

espiritur00 wrote:

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

03:19:459 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - you have some notes in here that should be snapped to 1/3 and arent I change this for other thing
03:25:054 (2,3,5,4,7,6,8,9) - duplicate notes Fixed
03:27:606 (5,4,7,6) - ^ Fixed
I think you tried to snap to 1/4 in this section or something and your notes got all messed up. Just go back and resnap them all orz I make another thing

Sorry Kiyoshi For mod it but i wait & wait that you connect but you dont connect Sorry ..

[Te][Amo] wrote:

OMG OMG
GO ESPIRI GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO !!

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Kiyo]
rechecked and bubbled

Pereira006 wrote:

I glad this bubbled but sorry need popped because

[Kiyoshi's Insane]

03:31:487 (1,1) - Have 2 spinner same time this unrankable go test play you will see have 2 spinner same time again you need remove 1 spinner sorry

this need popped don't not wait bat post when this popped go ask SFG or mat to rebubbled, don't give me kudosu

Sorry!

espiritur00 wrote:

yay
Re-bubbled ;3

Pereira006 wrote:

espiritur00 wrote:

yay
Re-bubbled ;3

wooow that was faster re-bubbled

go rank go

Charles445 wrote:

Wait, this got rebubbled? By who?

I don't see any mod post. Somebody edited their post and now I need to find out who

Charles445 wrote:

Wait, this got rebubbled? By who?

I don't see any mod post. Somebody edited their post and now I need to find out who

h-728 wrote:

Charles445 wrote:

Wait, this got rebubbled? By who?

I don't see any mod post. Somebody edited their post and now I need to find out who

oh...anyway good luck for rank

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

Bah sorry, I wasn't supposed to rebubble this map. Popped orz

Chewin wrote:

Hi Tur00 o.o/ Hi o.o/
Mod request from my special queue here ;3

[General]

Are you trying to use some silenced .mp3 custom hitsounds? If yes you should use some with at least 44 bytes large. Fixed
There are 2 .osb files in your folder, remove one and full submit your mapset Fixed
You are using a SB, it is recommended to remove letterbox during breaks Fixed
First kiai time should end on 01:23:935 Fixed

[Easy]

00:17:222 (2) - There should be a clap on 00:18:061 then I think that a rhythm like this would fit the music much better:

As I said before don't forget to add clap on the slider's end
00:18:900 (4) - Following the song's rhythm you should remove finish from here adding a clap instead
00:19:320 (5) - Clap on slider's end
00:20:159 (1) - Still to keep hitsounding pattern consistency remove clap from the start adding finish instead. Add clap on slider's end.
00:22:676 (4) - You should make this slider more curved so that you can blanket it with 00:21:837 (3) better to have a better flow:

SPOILER

332,204,22676,2,0,B|376:232|436:220,1,100,0|0

00:20:998 (2,3,4) - Claps on each sliders' end
00:25:613 (4) - Clap instead of finish
00:27:711 (2) - Clap on slider's reverse arrow
00:37:781 (2,3,4) - Same of 00:20:998 (2,3,4)
00:49:110 (3) - Why this whislte? D: Remove it
00:51:208 (3) - Clap on slider's end
00:52:466 (5) - Clap instead of finish
00:52:886 (6) - Same of 00:51:208 (3)
00:57:082 (1) - Add finish here
00:57:501 (2) - Clap on slider's head
00:58:341 (3) - ^
00:59:599 (5) - Clap on slider's end..
01:01:697 (3) - Clap
01:02:956 (5) - Same of 00:59:599 (5)
01:10:508 (1) - Finish
01:11:348 (3) - Same of 00:59:599 (5)
01:14:704 (2) - ^
01:44:075 (1) - Finish + clap sounds better imho here ;3
02:17:641 (1) - Finish on slider's head
02:24:355 (1) - ^
02:36:103 (3) - New combo for new rhythm
02:54:145 (6) - Clap
02:55:823 (2) - ^
02:57:501 (5) - ^
02:58:760 (2) - Make this slider more curved to blanket better with (1):

SPOILER

128,140,178760,2,0,B|176:120|176:60,1,100,0|0
264,36,179599,1,0

02:58:760 (2) - Still here, add clap on slider's end
03:00:858 (5) - Clap
03:02:536 (3) - ^ on head
03:03:795 (5) - Clap on slider's end
03:04:634 (1) - Finish on slider's head
03:05:893 (3) - Clap on the head
03:07:152 (5) - Clap on slider's end
03:08:830 (2) - ^
03:10:508 (4) - ^
03:12:187 (2) - ^
03:14:285 (5) - clap
03:15:543 (2) - ^
Meh, so much suggestions about hitsounds. You should follow them because it's to keep a hitsounding pattern consistency

I use the pattern of Claps in 2/1 only in the "kiai time" in the other parts i use a different pattern
Sorry but i think that is better :3

[Normal]
About hitsounding follow same suggestions I wrote above please
00:29:389 (5) - I'd use new combo here according new rhythm Fixed
00:40:299 (1) - It could be nazi but move the 2nd waypoint to x252 y:296 please to have a better blanket with (2) Fixed
00:57:082 (1) - Finish Fixed
01:01:278 (3) - To have a better blanket with 01:02:117 (4) move the last waypoint on x:240 y:220 Fixed
02:24:774 (2,3,4,5) - I'd add finishes on each elements here to emphasize the cymbals in the song. Sorry but no
02:37:781 (1) - Finish Fixed
02:51:208 (1) - This circle is enough confusing with to play for beginners for the spinner's approach circle , consider to move it further from center to make it more enjoyable to play Fixed
03:00:438 (5) - This slider with so much repeats is unexpected and it could give some problems during gameplay to beginners. I would remove a repeat adding a circle on 03:01:697 instead to fill the empty sound Fixed

I make the same pattern of Easy diff :3

Chewin wrote:

Hi Tur00 o.o/
Mod request from my special queue here ;3

[Pereira's Hard]
00:34:215 (2) - This circle is confusing in my opinion.. remove it? keep it sorry, is not confusing, still fit music because is follow guitar like another
00:35:264 (8) - New combo also to avoid this long combo. If you don't like new combo with overlapped circle consider to make it no overlapped Tur00 do it for me only new combo pleasse
00:41:977 (5) - I think this rhythm fits better here o.o no sorry, because the Slider (7) still fit follow melody and the slider repeat is fit melody because melody is too much strong than guitar that why i use this also is not too much harder because just slider still easy, sorry keep it

Chewin wrote:

Hi Tur00 o.o/
Mod request from my special queue here ;3

[Kiyoshi's Insane]
00:29:547 (5) - Try to listen the music with 25/50% playback rate and you can see that this circle should be snapped 1/8 earlier on the blue tick- Fixed
00:29:966 (8) - ^- Fixed
00:39:459 (1) - This spacing is confusing, you should move it furter from previous element- Fixed
01:37:047 (10) - Remove this circle, to fit the right rhythm you should end the stream on 01:36:942 (9)- Fixed
03:19:180 (4) - This circle should be snapped with 1/8 divisor- Fixed
03:19:459 (5,6,7) - Same here, use 1/4 snap divisor moving the stream on the previous blue tick- Fixed

That's all.
This map needs some more work to get a bubble restore here.
I wish you good luck -w-

Armin wrote:

[Hard]

02:35:403 (2) - where is finished the clap patter? add it on the white tick please fix add clap in tick white
00:43:655 (1) - I think that sliders like these should have their end on downbeat S: similar sliders are present at the beginning and they make the rhythm a bit hard to follow no sorry, keep it because I did red point on downbeat that really fit with melody and i don't think is not hard to follow, in my opinion. this slider is really fit melody, sorry keep it

Armin wrote:

[Insane]
In general I don't understand your 1/2 rhythm. I mean, it's okay but this song is very catchy sometimes and just a simple 1/2 doesn't give the complexity that this rhythm have. Just to make an example, this part 01:02:327 (1,2,3,4) - could be mapped in another way, instead of simple 1/2 bsd slider and so on V:
01:11:557 (4,5) - claps in these and in the next parts are just too heavy and gives a bad effect..consider to decrease the voulme or to find another hitsound- I'll fix the volume issues but the placing will stay same.

00:29:389 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - these should be snapped on 1/3, also that's not a good distance spacing for a 1/3 section, it kills the flow- It's not that fast to kill the flow, it's more than easy >.>
00:47:641 (2,3,4) - i'd follow doublets here V:- I didn't got this one :c
01:22:257 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I'd change this whole part with 1/4 bsd long sliders or something like that (like you did at 01:23:515 (7) - )- Nope, it's ok.
01:41:452 (6,7) - readjust the spacing here- It's more than ok for the most people who tried it, it's not hard to read e.e
01:43:813 (1,2,3) - different position in the timeline with the same spacing. Please fix it- Fixed.
02:09:355 (2) - quite hidden - Ok?