Fujiwara Marina - Daydream Syndrome (TV Size)‬ · forum‬

hi there! as requested

[General]
remove AudioLeadIn from [Easy]?
kiai seems to be unsnapped
tic rate 1 for all difs would be better

[Easy]
00:06:405 (3) - nazi: too close to hp bar. stress for beginners >3< also: put clap
00:14:997 (1) - whoa? beginners mostly slow at detecting new objects. spinner appears too fast after slider
00:53:590 (1) - better map this spinner properly
01:27:959 (5) - confusing for beginners.

[Normal]
use claps instead of finishes, fits better, imo o.o
00:05:531 (4,2) - don't like this overlap
00:26:502 (2,4) - ^
00:46:599 (3,1) - stack
01:06:988 (5) - new combo :/

[Hard]
good job. clear :3

[Insane]
00:08:007 (6) - new combo here or delete at 00:09:900 (1)
01:14:997 (4,5,6) - whistles/claps here

~~~~~~~

nice mapset!

Chewin

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Chewin 2012-06-22T16:39:24+00:00

[General]
Inconsistency in Audio lead-in. Set it 0 or 1000 in each diff

[Easy]
00:04:658 (2) - Finish at start, you can hear it
00:35:531 (1) - Move to x:184 y:280 to create a blanket with 00:33:784 (2). If you decide to follow this, move this circle 00:36:114 (2) to x:84 y:212 to fix the spacing

[Cilvery's Normal]
00:10:483 (5) - Add New combo, this combo is too long for a normal
00:27:959 (4) - New combo
00:48:347 (1) - Remove NC for consistency with 00:39:027 (7)
00:48:784 (2) - Add NC here instead
00:51:842 (2) - It almost touches hp bar. I suggest you to move it elsewhere
00:53:590 (5) - New combo

[Melo's Hard]
Fine

[Insane]
01:07:570 (3) - Move it down? It almost touches hp bar and it's bad çwç
01:15:434 (5) - ^
This map is awesome, especially for AR 9

That's all, good luck with rank ;3

Laurier

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Laurier 2012-06-22T18:15:27+00:00

http://puu.sh/CS5Q

Nyquill

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Nyquill 2012-06-22T21:30:31+00:00

[Easy]
00:44:269 (1) - You need to enter this section with the spacing you had before or else people are going to be confused. Whatever spacing you use can be done after this slider (A slider leading into a new spacing is pretty much needed).
01:03:930 (3) - rhythm like this in a normal should be passable, but in a easy is pushing it. You may want to remove a repeat on 01:02:328 (2) and have another slider start from 01:03:493 to where the note was before.
01:19:221 (1) - imo you should totally have finishes where the cymbals are in this section (completely achievable too).

[Normal]
00:27:959 (4) - stacks like these are especially frowned upon in normals. Consider unstacking them (distance snapped)
01:13:250 (5) - Just a little more to the right please.

[Hard]
00:27:667 (7) - suggest you remove two repeats, and have 00:28:104 (1,2) a 1/2 earlier. Then add a note to 00:28:396 . The 5 1/4 hitsounds just don't quite fit.
00:32:182 (8) - I also advise against doing stuff like this. Reverse sliders used to replace streams in hards are not that great either (especially at this bpm).

loving the use of whistles.

[Insane]
00:09:318 (1) - spacing jumps do not warrant NCs (I would some times say that combos should go strictly by measures).
00:25:483 (4) - I would definately suggest having 00:25:629 (5) go down again as opposed to go to the left as you have it right now. Got me twice when I wasn't paying attention.
00:26:065 (2) - I would recommend having 00:28:396 (2) sliders like these be like the reverse slider there. Having a slider go straight through a heavy snare is not that great.

Excuse me while I go wonder why I haven't seen this show yet.

Laurier

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Joined February 2011

Laurier 2012-06-23T10:03:26+00:00

http://puu.sh/D2LC

Mythol

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Topic Starter

Mythol 2012-06-23T12:43:08+00:00

thanks Nyquill

but I think you'll have to explain your mod in-game.. i didnt change anything

Melophobia

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Melophobia 2012-06-23T12:54:49+00:00

http://puu.sh/D3Zj
thx~

Frostmourne

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Frostmourne 2012-06-24T04:01:14+00:00

mod a bit only : 00:55:337 (4) - with soft hitsound

nice map as always \:D/ glgl

alacat

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alacat 2012-06-24T08:02:40+00:00

Hi :3 from my queue.

[General]
●change to mp3 bit rate . 320kbps → 192kbps
●Delete .osb file?
●add "Opening" to tag.

[Laurier's Easy]
●00:20:968 (2) - 1grid右?
●00:21:842 (1) - ^
●00:28:541 (4,2) - 少しだけ重なっているので、初心者は混乱してしまうと思います
●00:35:531 (1,2,3) - のvolumeが大きいと思います。50%~60%くらいに
●01:13:250 (1) - spinner後のタイミングが難しいと感じました。
このような音とりはどうでしょうかhttp://puu.sh/DgFH

[Cilvery's Normal]
●00:09:900 (4) - 00:12:231 (7) - New combo追加?　①~⑨の間に入れた方がいいと思います
●00:18:056 (3) - 始点にwhistle追加
●00:20:386 (5) - ^
●00:26:502 (2) - 終点にwhistle追加
●00:27:376 (3) - 始点にwhistle追加
●00:28:832 (5) - 終点にwhistle追加
●00:29:706 (6) - 始点にwhistle追加
●01:14:269 (7,1) - New combo 入れ替え?

[Melo's Hard]
●00:16:745 (3) - 終点にwhistle追加
●00:20:240 - note追加?
●00:20:386 (4) - whistle追加

[Insane]
●00:22:862 (6) - stack to 00:21:842 (3) -
●00:38:298 (4) - slider end at 00:38:735 -

very very nice map <3

shoot a star and favourite

good luck :3

Melophobia

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Melophobia 2012-06-24T08:08:15+00:00

no changes

Mythol

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Topic Starter

Mythol 2012-06-24T11:46:47+00:00

thx for star and favourite

all fixed! but mp3 is 174 kbps..

wmfchris

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wmfchris 2012-06-24T12:55:00+00:00

SPOILER

osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: Daydream Syndrome (TV Size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: -1
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 1
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8

[Metadata]
Title:Daydream Syndrome (TV Size)
Artist:Fujiwara Marina
Creator:Mythol
Version:Wmf's Taiko
Source:Yumekui Merry
Tags:dream eater

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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Fight69

1,639 posts

Joined January 2010

Fight69 2012-06-24T20:55:05+00:00

Hi !

[General]

Why [Melo's Hard]'s and [wmf's Taiko]'s slider tick are at 1, and not 2 like the others one ? o.o

[Insane]

00:13:396 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I know it's an Insane but this stream is a bit too overmapped.
00:50:677 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^

[Melo's Hard]

00:16:308 (1) - No new combo
00:16:599 (8) - New combo
00:20:095 (X) - Add a new circle here, or extend the previous slider ?

[Cilvery's Normal]

Why a x0.70 timing section at 00:35:095 and not at 00:44:269 ? :<
00:38:153 (5,6,7) - This pattern is a bit hard to read because the circles and the sliders are too close to each other

00:52:425 (3,4,5) - To be honest, those fading finishs sounds weird to me :/
From 00:55:774 to the end - Why don't you use a Normal Custom HS 1 : Clap instead of the custom hs in your diff ? I don't really like it, so I recommend you to change it.
01:11:357 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern is not nice at all orz, make it like that instead : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/351937 (yeah, this screenshot may be a bit confusing, sorry about that D:)

Well, that's all folks !
Good luck ! ;D

those

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those 2012-06-25T02:56:19+00:00

Taiko: Reason for CS4 and AR8? Should be defaulted to 5 if they aren't used to mess with star rating.

Hinsvar

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Hinsvar 2012-06-25T05:45:27+00:00

Yo.

Let's start modding.

*Note: Gold ones are a must-do. Everything in red are things that look awkward or wrong to me (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler and a bit better.

>General

Windows said the .mp3's bitrate is 320 kbps, but an audio converter software I occasionally use told me (lol 'told') that it's 175 kbps. lol. Ignore this.

>Laurier's Easy

Tick rate 1 should be enough. Tick rate 2 is pretty ridiculous and the ticks on the sliders will look a bit too dense.
00:00:944 (1) - Melo and Mythol placed a spinner here 1/4 beats earlier than you. Maybe you would want to do that too (in short: begin the spinner at 00:00:871).
00:04:658 (2) - I would like to split this into a 1/1 slider that repeats once plus another 1/1 slider, but eh, it's up to you.
00:06:405 (3) - Changing this into a 1/2 slider should be fine. It goes better with the music.

>Cilvery's Normal

00:00:871 - Add a spinner here like other diffs?
00:05:531 (4,1,2,3) - Not sure about this part, but I think you're making your own rhythm here instead of following the music.
00:11:065 (6) - NC? Nine objects in a combo on a Normal diff is... weird.
00:14:051 - You might want to place a break here.
00:16:308 (1) - Stack above 00:16:599 (2)'s beginning?
00:21:260 (6) - NC? And I think you shouldn't go off-grid if possible.
00:27:959 (4) - NC?

>Melo's Hard

00:32:182 (8) - Uh... don't know why, but after playing this repeating slider, I WILL be unable to proceed properly and will always have my combo broken a few seconds after.

>Insane

01:28:104 (2) - Remove Finish? I'm sure enough this isn't needed here.

Uh... yeah. I don't know what to say except that this map is already pretty good.

Good luck on the way

Last edited by Hinsvar 2012-06-25T13:29:56+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Scorpiour

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Scorpiour 2012-06-25T08:16:45+00:00

Hi there~~m4m

[General]

Difficulty setting in taiko really really doesn't matter like empty osb, don't worry about that.
About the starting point: 00:00:944 - in Easy diff and 00:00:871 - in Hard/Insane...emm...to myself i prefer the former one, and i suppose it's better to make it consisitent despite different creators.

[Easy]

Highly recommend to choose SliderTickRate 1, the sliders with str2 are looked weird...
00:16:745 - er...the beat from here to 00:22:716 - ...heard really weird because i don't know which part u selected to follow...vocal or drum? for example the slider 00:17:182 (1) - if u choose vocal the beat may look like

or drums , may look like

i'm really confused about the rhythm....cannot understand >.<
01:20:968 (1) - suggest to end at 01:21:551 -

Anyway..it's an arduous work to map an easy diff for such a song~~~

[Normal]

Similar to easy, STR 2 doesn't fit ... recommend to select STR 1
Audio Lead-in is unnecessary..please set it back to 0
And another suggestion: try to make your combos no longer than 6 :>
00:21:260 (6) - Out of play area in 4:3 mode. I confirmed this situation before with BAT so i suppose u need to fix it.
00:30:289 (7) - start next NC from here?
01:03:347 (7) - remove end finish?
01:12:231 (1,2,3,4) - continuing finishes are heard noisy..try to remove some?

[Hard]

This diff cannot play your video. The code in osu file should be
```
Video,-167,"Merry.avi"
```
Please fix it manually.
00:25:483 (6) - remove it?
00:26:065 (3) - i'd like to choose a 1/1 slider here~
00:28:396 (3) - ^

A nice diff~~ good job :>

[Insane]

Fine

Really a nice map~~star and good luck with rank :>

Laurier

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Laurier 2012-06-25T12:57:54+00:00

change a bit
http://puu.sh/Dy15

Melophobia

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Melophobia 2012-06-25T13:32:49+00:00

sorry but nothing to change in my diff.

>Mythol
help me fix video stuff on my diff~ thx!

Mythol

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Topic Starter

Mythol 2012-06-25T23:27:36+00:00

fix your diff melo~
ty for mods!!

Leorda

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Leorda 2012-06-26T08:18:58+00:00

Oh hi there

[General]
* Remove OSB files, duh

[Laurier's Easy]
* AR +1?

00:55:774 (1) - A bit overlapped by spinner-osu and hitbursts. So beginners are unable to see the path clearly
01:16:599 (4) - New combo?

[Cilvery's Normal]
* AR +1?

00:21:260 (6) - This slider is almost offscreen
00:27:959 (4) - New combo?
00:41:794 (5) - ^

[Melo's Hard]
00:32:182 (8) - Remove 1 repeating slider? So players are able to click the next note with prefect timed?

Sorry for my poor mod orz

-kevincela-

Elite Mapper

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-kevincela- 2012-06-27T14:50:39+00:00

Hi~

[Laurier's Easy]

There is an unsnapped inherited point at 00:43:953 (snap to 00:43:978)
00:24:464 (4) - Move the last waypoint here 2 grids right and down,just to make the blanket with 00:26:211 (1) - better
01:08:735 (1) - Move the new combo on 01:09:318 (2) - ?

[Cilvery's Normal]

00:27:959 (4) - Add a new combo here?
00:48:347 (1) - Move the new combo on 00:48:784 (2) - ?
01:16:308 (4) - Add a curve on the left on this slider? Here a blanket with 01:15:871 (3) - would fit pretty good! Here's an example

[Melo's Hard]

01:18:638 - Add a note here stacked with 01:18:201 (4) - ? if you do that,add here too a inherited point to use on this note some soft hitsounds

[Insane]

00:25:629 (5) - I know you are following the singer regarding the New combos,but i suggest you to put the new combo here instead of at 00:25:920 (1) - ,because it really fits with the pattern you are using and it fits pretty well with the starting drums,too
01:09:755 (2) - 1 grid left,just to fix the blanket with the end of 01:09:318 (1) - ?

And that's all. Pretty solid map,good luck on getting it ranked! ^^

Melophobia

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Melophobia 2012-06-27T16:27:15+00:00

http://puu.sh/E4j5

Kryptogram

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Kryptogram 2012-06-27T19:03:55+00:00

Hi Mythol

General

Offset -2 ?! i think that isn't possible
Combo 3 http://puu.sh/E6kP i think it doesnt't fit whit the bg and video try this code_
```
Combo4 : 128,0,255
```
Replace it in Combo 4 or it won't work

Laurier's Easy

Non-Downbeat Kiai Times:

Kiai #1: Starts on 00:39:464, ends on 00:39:536
Kiai #2: Starts on 00:48:784, ends on 00:48:857
Kiai #3: Starts on 00:55:774, ends on 01:05:022
Kiai #4: Starts on 01:05:095, ends on 01:14:269

00:04:658 (2) - I think that finish at the begin its unnescesary, maybe remove it
00:04:658 (2) - Also i think that adding a clkap in the reverse arrow sounds great and consistent
00:06:405 (3) - Add a clap for conistency in hitsounds ?
00:17:182 (1) - End this slider in x:256 y:232, 00:19:512 (1) make that slider a copy of the previous slider to stack the end perfectly whit 00:18:638 (2) http://puu.sh/E5lg
01:18:930 (7) - This como its too high in my opinion maybe add NC on 01:17:764 (1)
01:20:968 (1) - I think it will sound better if you end that slider on 01:21:551 (x) and add a note on01:21:988 (x) to follow the instrumental http://puu.sh/E5s8

Cilvery's Normal

Non-Downbeat Kiai Times:

Kiai #1: Starts on 00:55:774, ends on 01:14:561

Nice difficult !

Melo's Hard

Non-Downbeat Kiai Times:

Kiai #1: Starts on 00:55:774, ends on 01:05:022
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:05:095, ends on 01:14:561

00:11:648 (1) - I think that a finish at the begin there sounds good
00:20:531 (5) - Add a clap, it follows the drums in the song
00:20:823 (6) - ^
00:22:716 (5) - Add clap at the end, it follows the drums in the song
00:23:153 (1) - Add clap, same reason as above

Insane

Non-Downbeat Kiai Times:

Kiai #1: Starts on 00:55:774, ends on 01:05:022
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:05:095, ends on 01:14:269

00:57:959 (6) - I think its better to remove that whistle at the begin, it really sounds weird whit the whistle in 00:58:250 (1)
01:07:279 (7) - Same here, removing whistle sounds better
01:21:551 (1) - I think adding a finish at the begin sounds good, it fill the empty in this part
01:23:881 (1) - ^

The mapset its really cool, hope it was helpfull

Good Luck ! And Star !

Poggo

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Poggo 2012-06-28T08:09:35+00:00

hi from my mod Q ^.^

Hard

00:18:347 - add note here
00:20:677 - ^

Normal

00:10:483 - NC
00:39:027 - better replace on 2 notes bcz slider it is not visible and very confused
01:01:454(4) - make this slider double

Ahaahaha it's all for me

good luck~~

OnosakiHito

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OnosakiHito 2012-06-29T20:31:34+00:00

requested taiko mod from my queue~

[Taiko]

00:06:405 (21) - D?
00:10:264 (45) - I would suggest to you k here, because kdd d dosen't plays nice here and sounds not that well as kkd d does.
{
00:14:998 (76) - maybe it would be better to move the spinner to this point and delete the note (76)?
or
00:15:143 (1) - you delete this and add three kat sounds?
}
00:22:425 (26) - move to 00:22:570 ?
00:31:891 (76,77,78,79,80,81,82) - start here with this pattern 00:32:036 - D D ddd k d ...?
00:34:876 (97) - maybe ddkkk? ddkdk plays weird here.
00:39:609 (112) - I think k would fit here better and cooperate with the other kat's there well. Also D d d d dosen't look that nice here.
{
You should probably follow the high sound from the drum, since without it sounds akward I think
00:39:900 (114) - k, because of the sound in the song.
00:41:065 (121) - ^
00:42:231 (129) - ^
00:42:813 (132) - ^
}
00:44:269 (143) - d?
00:45:434 (145) - d?
{
woah... this is now really vague what you did here in the first seconds of the kiai time with this free style
00:59:269 (218) - honestly, this should be kat. It dosen't sound good when you listen to the whole part from 00:55:774 to 01:00:434
00:59:415 (219) - this should be moved to 00:59:561, also because of the reason above
}
01:00:871 (228) - better to use d, because you have begun to follow a don-beat before
01:01:163 (230) - move this to 01:01:308 if you took my suggestions bellow
01:08:735 (278) - moving to 01:08:881 sounds better (similiar to what I suggested above)
01:13:250 (303) - same case as before in 00:14:998 (76) -

I can't remember when I saw you the last time mapping in freestyle (if I ever saw you doing this before), but to be honest, this was misleading the sense. orz
Up to now, I still can't consider what your real plan was to map. By hearing the vocal to have freestyle mapping or by hearing the beat to have freestyle mapping? Sometimes certain main-beats which should be held, were just ignored and mapped by the other note or overmapped by 5-plets. There were even time-sections where nothing was. This leads to weird sounding pattern constalations.
Please correct me if I'm wrong, but this could be better. =w=

Mythol

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Topic Starter

Mythol 2012-06-29T21:59:29+00:00

ty most fixed!!

YTYuyu

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YTYuyu 2012-06-29T23:48:06+00:00

Looks like yesterday wasn't my day to mod. Been watching too much anime

. today i'll see what i can do to help. Mod requested on my queue. if you have any questions but my modding, or if you don't understand any of my suggestions, feel free to ask and i'll try my best to help out.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. I'll give you my opinion, advice, or if i'm just curious about something.

[General]
I think 1000 is a bit too sudden for players since the offset is at -2. i suggest 1500 or 2000 to give some time for players to get ready.

[Laurier's Easy]
00:04:658 (2) - this repeat slider doesn't fit with the guitar. when i saw the 4/1 slider, that followed the guitar pretty nicely, but this slider just killed it because of where the repeat is. remove (3) and make this a 4/1 repeat slider so that it'd follow the guitar nicely. i felt really comfortable when i did this pattern as it flows smoothly to the guitar.
00:10:483 (4,5) - when i hit (4), i hit this note too early which leads to a 100 or a late 300. remove this note and move back the slider by 1/1 to make it easier. if you ignore this, remove (4) and replace some of the 1/1 sliders for circles to give off a pattern. with this many sliders following the same thing, it'd look boring for players, especially for beginners IMO.
00:15:143 (1) - move this spinner back 1/2 and extend it by 1/2 because that's where the piano starts and holds.
00:21:842 (1) - remove this circle it doesn't follow anything, and it doesn't fit with the small clash in the cymbals. instead move the circle back by 1/2 and add a 2/2 slider starting at 00:21:988. if you ignore this, you have to do something else similar to what i said because this circle doesn't fit with this part.
00:27:959 (3) - add a finish here to match the cymbals in the song. you can clearly hear the sound of the cymbals here.
00:30:289 (1) - ^
00:32:036 - add a circle to follow the guitar in the song? it'd make a great starting point to the next 2 notes during gameplay, and it might avoid the player hitting that 1 note too early.
00:58:250 (1,2,3) - these 3 circles don't follow the instrumental that accurate. instead try something like this to follow the instrumental accurate. again if you ignore this, then you can do something similar to what i said because these circles doesn't feel like they belong in the song.
01:03:347 (3) - move this slider back by 1/2 to follow the long pause in the vocals. since it's at the kiai, it'd make a great challenge for beginners to know if they can clear this or not.
01:08:735 (1,2) - remove this and replace this for a 3/2 slider to follow the long pause accurately.here too, if you say it's hard, then feel free to do something similar to this.
01:14:269 - same as 00:32:046 but to follow the vocals in the song. again beginners might hit the next note too early mainly because they think that's where the vocals start.
01:16:599 (4) - make this a 1/1 slider to follow the long pause in the cymbals, also add a circle at 01:17:328 to follow the vocals in this song. this 2/2 slider doesn't fit with this part since there's a change in the downbeat.
01:20:968 (1) - reduce this slider by 1/1 because that's where the guitar riff ends and starts all over again.
2 things, you can add a few more finishes to match the cymbals in the song. i saw a few empty spots where the finish doesn't cover up the cymbals, also try to increase the star over 2-2.50 stars to keep the balance between easy and normal.

[Cilvery's Normal]
The settings don't fit with a song like this. increase everything except for the CS by 1 to give off a bit of a challenge. also i think it's too slow and too simple with settings like this IMO.
no spinner? at least add 1 spinner to keep the consistency with the other diffs in the map.
00:07:570 (2) - this overlap bothers me during gameplay because of the way it's touching (4) at the previous combo. instead move it down so that the gap between (1,4) are even. it should look like this.
00:11:065 (6) - remove the repeat on this slider, add a circle at the 1st downbeat and make that circle a NC because that's where the guitar changes in the song.
00:18:930 (4) - make this a NC. the lyrics in this song start to change.
00:23:298 (2) - with the BPM this with and the direction this slider is taking, it'd be hard for players to follow because of the wavy pattern. i suggest doing something simple but a bit hard for players to clear and to make it enjoyable for them.
00:38:153 (5,6,7) - this pattern might be hard because since (5) is shaped like that, i think it'd be hard to know when to hit the circle and slider between this note. again do something easier but not too hard so that it'd be fun and enjoyable for players.
00:48:347 (1) - same as 00:07:570 but move it up if you do this, also move (2) around so that it'd follow the DS to and from the next note.
00:53:590 (5) - Make this a NC. the guitar starts and the lyrics change in this part.
01:18:638 (1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - not good enough. with this many straight sliders, it might get boring for players, change up your pattern, or re-arrange this pattern to make it fun for players. for example if you change it up, then you do a smooth slider/circle pattern in which you and other players feel comfortable doing, but if you re-arrange it, then you could make some of the sliders curved sliders so give off that flowy feeling to the map. remember it has to flow to the map and it should give off some feeling to the person playing this.
there's a few things i like to mention: some of the combos are way too big and the lyrics change at some point. go back to the map and make those notes a NC because like i said, some of the combos are too long, and there's overlaps here and there. if you want, fix them so that it won't bother some players playing this diff.

[Melo's Hard]
00:02:328 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - how about giving off a pattern like a slider to circle pattern. you added circles at 00:05:531, so why don't you do it here? i think it'd make a great introduction for players who play this diff. if you ignore this, then you can do something similar to what i said.
00:15:434 (4,5,6) - make (4) a NC because it follows the small clash in the cymbals, also replace the whistles for finishes. the whistles aren't loud enough to match the sound of the cymbals.
00:43:104 (6,7) - hmm these 2 sliders look completely different. make them look the same as the other for a smoother flow to the next few notes. i felt uncomfortable when i reached this because the slider shapes are completely different.
01:19:221 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - same as 00:02:328. since were near the end of the song, it wouldn't hurt to do a jump here and there so that it'd be fun and interesting for players. again if you ignore this, then you can do something similar to what i said.
01:23:881 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - see? you did it here so why don't you do it on the other patterns?

[Insane]
00:10:774 (6) - this 1/1 slider breaks the flow and pattern in following the piano. replace this for a circle followed by a 1/2 slider so that it'd follow the piano in the song, and the flow and pattern would continue through that.
00:15:726 (2,3) - instead moving it there, stack this on (2,4) at the previous combo. that way, it'd look neater and a bit easier to follow during gameplay.
00:18:493 (4) - align this to (5,3) so that it'd give off a possible jump for players to clear. ik that there's a jump if you stack this on (2), but if you do this, it'll give off a triangle jump for this combo if you try it out.
00:29:415 (5) - remove this note because it doesn't follow anything at all. you're focusing on the guitar for this part, not the bass.
00:34:949-00:38:735 - You should add a slowdown on this part because this part only focuses on vocals. there's nothing in the instrumental that's loud. the guitar being 1 of them. with the regular SV rate, the flow for this is completely gone and it made me feel uncomfortable on why is this sped up.
00:43:978-00:48:201 - ^
01:14:997 (4) - Maybe a NC because of new lyrics.

I guess that's it. GL

Mixagji

625 posts

Joined March 2011

Mixagji 2012-06-30T15:39:23+00:00

sorry for late orz

[Insane]
00:40:629(5) - finish?
00:49:949(7) - ^
00:51:114(7) - ^
01:14:269(1) - put whistle all notes till 01:18:201 - if I were you :p

[Hard]
01:14:269 - same as Insane

[Normal]
00:32:036(1) - (8)と水平になるようにx:280 y:344

nothing to say all diffs orz

Mythol

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Topic Starter

Mythol 2012-07-01T13:08:13+00:00

>Byak first mod fixed
>Mix all finish added!
ty~

spboxer3

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spboxer3 2012-07-03T07:02:43+00:00

Taiko BG~

Laurier

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Laurier 2012-07-03T10:31:55+00:00

http://puu.sh/Fwjr

Mythol

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Topic Starter

Mythol 2012-07-03T11:43:23+00:00

ty spboxer3!

those

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those 2012-07-08T17:58:13+00:00

Safe. Remember to reply with reasons.

[Easy]

00:46:017 (2,3) - You have this and it looks messy http://puu.sh/GRrO
01:09:755 (3,1,2) - Looks very bland. You have many opportunities to anchor your sliders to fit the music much better.
01:21:551 (1) - Extend to 01:21:988 - red, similar to 01:19:221 (1) - and 01:23:881 (1) - .

[Normal]

00:41:794 (1) - You're going to have to break this up. Slider end should be at 00:42:522 - white, but you have it 1/4 too early. While I recognize you're doing this to make the kickback end 00:43:104 - , it is much more beneficial to break this kickback slider into two or more separate objects.
00:59:269 (7) - This is anchored at 00:59:488 - blue, which doesn't make much sense. The music doesn't call for a bump in the slider at that specific time just to be symmetrical. You can remove the anchor, or replace the anchor at 00:59:561 - red.

[Hard]

01:18:638 - Couldn't find anything for "daydream"?

[Insane]

00:50:677 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - An overmap. Music doesn't call for a stream and is clearly unneeded.

[Taiko]

A general thing about the Kiai that causes this map to need a few fixes:
Due to the nature of the rhythm, there are places in your map that are needlessly mapped, and some places that are unmapped. For example
1. The pattern should stop 00:59:269 (218) - but you have 00:59:415 (219) - .
2. On the other hand, you have 00:56:502 - left open.
3. You then have 01:06:405 (263) - when it should have stopped at 01:06:260 (262) - .
You just need to take care to see when it is right to stop on the 1/1 and when it's right to stop on the 7/2, based on the music.

Be back soon.

Laurier

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Laurier 2012-07-08T22:24:17+00:00

http://puu.sh/GVI9

Melophobia

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Melophobia 2012-07-09T03:20:12+00:00

> those
it's fine imo. putting no notes makes more sense for me, because background music disappears.

Xakyrie

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Joined February 2011

Xakyrie 2012-07-09T04:34:27+00:00

Just a few pointers:

Mythol you ignored my previous suggestions and you never told me why. I pointed them out for a reason.
The SV in normal is extremely annoying and so not right for a normal. Even if it's 1.00, it's a 200+ bpm song and it feels so off. I highly suggest you lower it to .80 or .90 so it's much easier to play and even more enjoyable. (If I get any excuse along the lines of: "It's 200 bpm and I can't make it lower than 4 stars", that's not a good reason. With one look you can just tell the normal SV is ridiculous, and the star rating will decrease this way.)
Sliders in the easy diff end on blue ticks. For beginner players, this will cause a lot of commotion and rage because it's so different from the rest of the map. Sure it fits, I'll tell you that, and you even silenced the end, but is this truly appropriate?

These things were noticed with one quick look through the editor. Do you want it to rank like this?

Mythol

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Topic Starter

Mythol 2012-07-11T12:32:14+00:00

Xakyrie wrote:
[Insane]
Beatmap Design/Arrangement
(The basis of the map, such as flow, consistency, and aesthetic design are found here.)
00:13:563 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - is not following anything, completely random to build up suspense for intro ending
00:46:766 (3) - this doesn't really fit this part of the song... your opinion
00:53:174 (3,4,1) - if you want to put streams in, here is the place. you're following the music incorrectly at times, for example, when a stream is indicated, you use sliders (which is fine if you're not so crazy with streams), but you place streams where it's not called for in the music and it becomes annoying to play... it is a rhythm game, no? your opinion, i think this is a terrible place for stream
Inherited Timing Points/Volume
(Overall volume of the beatmap to induce a certain style and effect on the player.)
I'm thinking the decrease in slider velocity where you use x0.80 should be decreased more? you can barely tell the difference and maybe a bit more of a slowdown would distinguish this part well amongst the fast-paced other parts in the map. your opinion
everything else was fixed during many remaps. this is why you should not mod wip maps unless asked

Xakyrie wrote:
Just a few pointers:

Mythol you ignored my previous suggestions and you never told me why. I pointed them out for a reason.
The SV in normal is extremely annoying and so not right for a normal. Even if it's 1.00, it's a 200+ bpm song and it feels so off. I highly suggest you lower it to .80 or .90 so it's much easier to play and even more enjoyable. (If I get any excuse along the lines of: "It's 200 bpm and I can't make it lower than 4 stars", that's not a good reason. With one look you can just tell the normal SV is ridiculous, and the star rating will decrease this way.) higher bpm should have higher sv its common sense. a hard song will not have a easy map thats just stupid. and x1.0 is a common sv for normal, again just your opinion
Sliders in the easy diff end on blue ticks. For beginner players, this will cause a lot of commotion and rage because it's so different from the rest of the map. Sure it fits, I'll tell you that, and you even silenced the end, but is this truly appropriate? why are you asking what you already know. he kept blue ticks because he feels they fit, again just your opinion
These things were noticed with one quick look through the editor. Do you want it to rank like this? I notice nothing wrong so yes o.o

if you want to ask why i responded in a rude manner, refer to tsubomi zakura where i clearly said pm me for issues like this. you did not learn >.>

Last edited by Mythol 2012-07-11T19:11:12+00:00, edited 5 times in total.

wmfchris

osu! Alumni

5,072 posts

Joined March 2008

wmfchris 2012-07-11T12:33:12+00:00

Nothing about regularity because this is rather a solo section under long vocal without following the drums. The core idea is to end every single sentence with k only.

EDIT: fixed ono's mod, too tired to response in detail, but the major rejection is about staying to have a note corresponding to the song.

SPOILER

osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: Daydream Syndrome (TV Size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 55337
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 1
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8

[Metadata]
Title:Daydream Syndrome (TV Size)
Artist:Fujiwara Marina
Creator:Mythol
Version:Wmf's Taiko
Source:Yumekui Merry
Tags:dream eater opening Laurier Melophobia Cilvery wmfchris

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Taiko BG.jpg"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,0,0,0

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74561,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0


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After the modder I asked modded let's see what can I do with the part that's a bit messy. Actually I was a bit lost when I mapped it orz

Low

2,006 posts

Joined July 2011

Low 2012-07-11T20:54:53+00:00

Hey, Mythol! Nice map you've got here.

General
(Issues or concerns with the map that has to do with the skin/SB elements, things in the folder, problems in all difficulties, etc.)

I believe that the BG is too NSFW. You might have to change it before it gets ranked.
Why are the kiai times in the standard difficulties so inconsistent? They really should be the same.

Difficulty modding
(Issues with each specific difficulty can be found here. They may have to do with flow, slider shapes, hitsounds, etc.)

Laurier's Easy

00:12:813 (2) - According to the whistle hitsound pattern you have going steady, a whistle shouldn't be at the beginning of this slider. Only at the end.
00:37:279 (4) - I don't see why you would mostly silence the end of this slider. There's audible vocals in the song at that point. You should raise the volume of it a bit.
00:46:599 (3) - Same concern as above.
There's barely any hitsounds during the kiai times. Why is this?

Cilvery's Normal

This is the only difficulty that doesn't have a spinner at the beginning of it. You should add one for consistency.
This is also the only difficulty that uses soft hitsounds rather than normal at the beginning. Just pointing it out!
00:23:298 (2) - This slider has really sharp curves that make it not very good looking. I suggest doing something like this.
00:38:298 (6) - Same thing with this slider.
01:04:658 (9) - In normal difficulties, it's better that combos stay in the low numbers. 9 is too high in my opinion.
01:09:027 (9) - Same as above.
01:12:813 (3,5) - These slightly overlap. You should make it so that they don't because it's a bit ugly.

I don't have time to finish the rest of the mod, so I'll continue when I get back on.

Last edited by Low 2012-07-11T22:23:23+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Xakyrie

667 posts

Joined February 2011

Xakyrie 2012-07-11T21:22:15+00:00

facepalm

I can't even pity your wrongful attitude and pure stupidity, that would just be so freaking horrible.

those

3,135 posts

Joined November 2010

those 2012-07-15T18:40:06+00:00

Before I step in here again, this issue were not addressed:
[quote="those":3857b][Normal]

00:59:269 (7) - This is anchored at 00:59:488 - blue, which doesn't make much sense. The music doesn't call for a bump in the slider at that specific time just to be symmetrical. You can remove the anchor, or replace the anchor at 00:59:561 - red.

Check with Jacob and see if he's gonna finish the mod by today. If not, he can post another time after the above issue is resolved.

Low

2,006 posts

Joined July 2011

Low 2012-07-15T19:06:39+00:00

Placeholder for finishing the mod goes here.

Yes, this is redundant, but oh well.

Edit: Here I am.

[Melo's Hard]

00:11:648 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - What happened to all of the claps in this area of the map?
00:43:978 (9,10) - This could be mistaken for a stream. I suggest that you either add a NC to (9) to signify an anti-jump, or space them out normally.
01:28:104 (2) - Having a finish on this note fits the music. It also works to emphasize the fact that this is the finale to the song.

[Insane]

00:38:298 (4) - Curve this slider more drastically to act as if it is blanketing 00:37:279 (2). Like this.

Nice.

Laurier

1,786 posts

Joined February 2011

Laurier 2012-07-16T13:40:07+00:00

http://puu.sh/J0aW

Melophobia

osu! Alumni

2,230 posts

Joined September 2011

Melophobia 2012-07-16T19:20:19+00:00

Jacob wrote:
00:11:648 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - What happened to all of the claps in this area of the map? oops, fixed
00:43:978 (9,10) - This could be mistaken for a stream. I suggest that you either add a NC to (9) to signify an anti-jump, or space them out normally. nah, it's fine imo because i dont use stream at all in whole this diff so it wont cause confusion, i guess. and this anti jump makes it easier to read the following slow down imo.
also newcombo on (9) doesnt help anything imo and looks messy to me
01:28:104 (2) - Having a finish on this note fits the music. It also works to emphasize the fact that this is the finale to the song. yeah sounds nice. added

thanks for modding

http://puu.sh/J48b

those

3,135 posts

Joined November 2010

those 2012-07-19T21:41:30+00:00

[Insane]

00:09:318 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - What kind of spacing are you using here, and how is it justified?
00:20:531 (2,4) - It would be in your interest to find a pattern where you can stack these two objects, based on how the drum sounds. Additionally, 00:18:201 (2,4) - is good, try to branch from there.
00:33:784 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - The degree of overlapping and the inconsistency in spacing makes it very hard to play, especially for a player with opaque or less transparent hitbursts. Additionally, combo pattern here doesn't make a lot of sense; (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) or (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) would make more sense.
00:40:629 (5) - If you flip this vertically, it flows better from (4), and allows you to create a more aesthetically pleasing pattern when you blanket (6).
00:44:706 (4,6) - What's in the music here that isn't at 00:45:871 - or 00:46:454 - (the empty spaces between 00:45:434 (1,2,3) - )?
00:57:959 (6,7,1) - Between this combo pattern and 01:07:425 (1,2,3) - , which is being mapped to the same music, which combo pattern are you going to be using? Try to pick a consistent pattern to use throughout the entire Kiai section; you have multiple instances of inconsistent combo patterns when it comes to a triple before a slider.
01:18:638 (1) - You may want to silence the slider tail at 01:18:930 - , since rhythm effectively falls to 0% volume at the end of "Daydream". Since sliderslide and slidertick both cannot be blank, I suggest a very low volume normal-sliderslide for the whole slider, and silencing the slider tick, and finally silencing the end of the slider, for full effect.
01:23:298 (1,2,3,4,1) - Knowing that 01:23:881 (1) - and onward is just copy and paste, you can work with the four earlier objects to fix up the spacing a little bit.

[Hard]

00:25:046 (5,6,1) - A 200% sv increase and some pretty large spacing makes this play really uncomfortably. Keep in mind, it's not only the spacing or the slider velocity that you've gotta fix here; both have to be changed.
00:43:687 (8,9) - Stacking here is not recommended. With the amount of speed and flow you have with 00:42:522 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - it's best if you turned this section into something more like 00:34:658 (4,5,1) - .
00:47:619 (3) - Ends a bit too late. Vocals stop at 00:48:056 - white. Additionally, 00:47:619 (3,4) - has a 2.40x spacing, which isn't that great in this context to change the pace.
00:58:104 - Perhaps you can add a circle here, so that 00:57:667 (6,7,8,1) - makes the melody in the Bass stand out.
01:06:988 (6) - Perhaps you can change this into two 1/2 sliders with 180 degree rotation, for the same reason as the above.

Xakyrie

667 posts

Joined February 2011

Xakyrie 2012-07-20T03:23:20+00:00

I thought I might as well mod the normal (and look at a few other things in the other diffs) before it gets bubbled. :v
Mythol, you're quick to get bubbles aren't you o.o

All of the following suggestions are made based on the most recent update for each colour-coded section.

[General]

Kiai times are inconsistent. While [Laurier's Easy] and [Insane]'s kiai ends at 01:14:269, [Cilvery's Normal] and [Melo's Hard] end at 01:14:561.
Lots of images are used to compensate for the non-native english speakers. Sorry if it's a lot for you to read ><

[Cilvery's Normal]

Song Setup
(Suggestions for appropriate difficulty based on the song to offer more fluent and comfortable playing.)

First of all, the SV is extremely high ._. I really would appreciate if you could maybe slow it down a bit >< It would make this map so much better :c
OD +1 to fit the density of the map and use of short sliders?

Beatmap Design/Arrangement
(The basis of the map, such as flow, consistency, and aesthetic design are found here.)

Mod is based off of the use of 1.00 SV for the time being (though I hope you consider changing it!)
00:03:201 (2,3,4) - The repeats don't follow the guitar as you might have thought... try removing the repeats on (2) and (4) and using a 1/1 slider to replace (2), and a note to replace (4) (since the 1/1 doesn't fit here) like this.
00:08:153 (3) - This doesn't start on any form of sound, and it's completely random. Since (1) and (2) before it are following something, it makes (3) unpredictable. I'll give you an example of something that follows the piano straightforward: Part 1 ; Part 2. This will look better and play better with a lower SV o:
00:09:900 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - The contrasting density here is strange. Previously you were keeping consistent, but then you have a bunch of blanks which are very inconsistent with your previous mapping. With (1,2,3,4), try making a symmetrical pattern for better aesthetics, kind of like this maybe? Or try following the piano (like I said before, try following the piano more instead of making random patterns), like so. (00:12:813 (3) - follows nothing. The previous red tick would be appropriate to start patterns on, not the downbeat in this case)
00:13:396 (4) - 00:16:308 (1) - Insert break? It's better than leaving some drain time T T
00:16:599 (2) - Should end on the previous red tick to be consistent with the following patterns after and with the fall in the vocals. For aesthetic purposes, make sure this slider, 00:18:930 (1) and 00:21:260 (3) are consistent. I suggest copying 00:18:930 (1) and pasting it to replace the sliders I mentioned.
00:20:386 (2) - How about moving it so we can create better flow, like 00:16:308 (1,2,3)? Then you can move (3) around freely, like this. :3
00:21:260 (3) - Add a repeat to follow the rise in guitar (shown in previous example). It fits better instead of leaving an open break that can confuse new players ><
00:23:007 (1,2) - If you want to keep the double repeat slider, I suggest you try this but I think you should create a better looking slider with one repeat so you can be lenient with spacing :<
code
```
172,120,20386,2,0,B|80:60,2,100,2|0|0
252,176,21260,2,0,B|308:184|356:268|312:348|252:364,2,250
212,268,23007,5,0
252,176,23298,2,0,B|204:152|152:184|152:184|104:212|52:184,2,200
420,64,25046,1,0
```
00:30:289 (4,5) - You should be consistent and continue to map to the guitar, like this o:
00:32:036 (1) - For better flow and aesthetics, you can sort of curve it to blanket the long slider like this
00:35:240 (1) - The slowdown here follows the melody since it goes quieter, however you were not consistent with it the second time between 00:44:269 (1) - 00:48:347 (1). Either add the slowdown of 0.70 to this listed section or remove it in general. (I'll come back and mod these sections when you look them over, since I can't predict which you'll chose to do. Personally, I believe the slowdowns should be eliminated from the normal, so it's less confusing. It's just a decrease in volume afterall, but it's up to you :3).
00:40:192 (2) - Short sliders in a normal are hard to play and very unfitting because of the difficulty it causes in reading and playing. I suggest you just accentuate the vocals here by just using a note where the short sliders would be, like this and this.
00:43:687 (4) - Since you've been following the vocals in this section, this repeat slider doesn't fit much :v It's much more fitting to use a 1/1 slider with a repeat, and the spacing still fits, like this. ^^
00:48:347 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same thing with the short sliders.
00:55:774 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Okay so, remove the short sliders because they are hard to play and read for new players (makes the map too dense), and replace it with a 2/1 slider like this so it fills the gap, timing, and sound of the previous sliders without disrupting flow. I guess the (5) seems fine since it's kiai but I would still suggest either merging (4) and (5) to make a 2/1 slider, or just making a 1/1 slider out of the repeat slider you have, something like this.
01:01:454 (4) - Just like before, I think you should try merging some sounds here. Not only does it make it easier to play, but it lowers the star difficulty using such long sliders. It starts on the rise of the vocals and still retains flow this way, so try something like this.
code
```
344,324,61163,1,0
256,276,61454,2,0,B|212:252|212:252|180:348|84:332,1,200
```
01:04:221 (7,8) - Fix this please :<
01:06:114 (3,4) - Why not just combine these to make one long, pretty slider? @ @ like this, maybe x.x
01:08:444 (7,8) - ^
01:10:774 (4) - Make this a longer slider instead, like this.
01:19:221 (1) - From here to the end is very uncreative, and that makes me sad ._. I know you can do creative things Cilvery so please change this :<
01:26:211 (1,2,3) - These should be flipped around. All sliders are constantly making the cursor movements go from up-down-up-down, except here where it's up twice. This also means you should ctrl + r (3), too.

Hitsounds
(Listed sounds can be used as an overture, feel free to ignore. Based on mapper's style.)

Why not use some whistles or claps @ @ I mean whistles would sound amazing when placed on rises in instruments and vocals, like on the repeat of 00:08:153 (3) and 00:09:900 (4) x.x
00:16:308 (1) - Finish.
00:36:697 (4) - No finish on repeat?
00:38:153 (5,6) - Whistle should actually be on the (5) to keep consistent.
00:39:464 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I wish you used more hitsounds, like whistles @ @
00:44:269 (1) - Finish at beginning, whistle on repeat.
00:46:017 (2) - Whistle.
00:46:599 (3) - Whistle on end.
01:13:104 (4) - Remove finish? Sounds too muddled.
This map is underhitsounded, when it could be so much better. The current hitsounds are mediocre as long as fixes are made.

Inherited Timing Points/Volume
(Overall volume of the beatmap to induce a certain style and effect on the player.)

No use of N:C1? ._.
00:32:036 - Volume change here (85% maybe)?
00:48:347 (5) - Shouldn't the volume change take place at 00:48:784 (1) to be consistent with the previous section? If not, I suggest you move 00:39:464 (1) to start at 00:39:027 (7).
00:52:425 (3,4,1) - Shouldn't it get increasingly louder instead of decreasing then increasing again?
01:05:022 - Useless inherited timing point.
01:12:813 (8) - Why the 10% lower volume? The volume of the song is still loud and consistent ._.
01:28:177 - No need for this volume point since you've finished mapping.

New Combos
(Used to introduce a new phrase and/or pattern, the following suggest consistency within your map.)

00:11:065 (1,2) - Remove new combo, new combo.
00:21:260 (3) - New combo.
00:30:289 (4) - ^
00:48:347 (1,2) - Remove new combo, new combo to be consistent.
00:53:590 (5) - New combo to indicate a musical change?
01:12:231 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:16:308 (5,1) - New combo, remove new combo?
Might need some extra new combos in-between phrases so the new combos aren't so long, but it's up to you o:

[Melo's Hard]

Beatmap Design/Arrangement
(The basis of the map, such as flow, consistency, and aesthetic design are found here.)

Just doing a quick look through. Let's see what we can find on the first go o:
00:21:988 (3,4) - Remove the (3) in order to be consistent with 00:18:930 (1,2,3)? Move the (4) back to where the (3) was.
00:27:667 (7) - Inconsistent with the rest of the sounds, since you've been using 1/2 sliders and notes. Replace with 2 notes to reflect the consistency with 00:29:706 (6,7).
00:30:289 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Up to you but I think it would be nice if you were consistent by making (1,2,3) a 1/2 slider then 2 notes, and the next section 2 1/2 sliders. :v
00:32:182 (8) - It might sound better and be easier to play and read if there was a note where this started (00:32:182) and you made it a kickback slider instead that started on 00:32:328.
01:18:638 - 01:19:075 - Fill in here? ;w;
01:26:211 (1,2) - It might be easier to predict and read if you switched (1) and (2). In fact, it would flow nicely if you switched them and then the pattern after, like this.

[Insane]

Beatmap Design/Arrangement
(The basis of the map, such as flow, consistency, and aesthetic design are found here.)

Quick mod (I only meant to mod the normal but oh well)
00:09:318 (1,2) - spacing = what?
00:16:308 (4) - For aesthetics, you should stack this on (1).
00:18:930 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - You should attempt to be more consistent with the previous section. For example, 00:20:386 (1,2,3,4,1) should be reflective of 00:18:056 (1,2,3,4,5).
00:18:056 (1,2,3,4,5) - Rearrange the pattern so that (4,5) goes from the top of the diamond to the bottom, so it creates a feeling for the flow into the next pattern, which is very similar in nature.
00:20:968 (1) - Why not just two notes instead of a slider where it begins and ends to accentuate the sounds here while retaining consistency?
00:33:784 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - How is this even possible to read :v You might want to fix the new combos too.
00:37:279 (2) - o_ob
00:40:629 (5) - Better flow if you flip. This will enable you to blanket the next slider, too.
00:46:599 (3) - Can you justify your use of the squiggle? It doesn't fit at all ._.
00:48:638 (1,2,3) - The triple doesn't fit, maybe remove the (2)? It still flows nicely.
00:55:629 (1,2,3) - And this sounds silly even if it's silent. I suggest the same :<
01:02:910 (1) - Flip for better flow.
01:04:949 (3,4,1) - Again with the triple.
01:18:638 (1) - Justify the use of this please.
01:23:735 (4,1) - dat spacing

Hitsounds
(Listed sounds can be used as an overture, feel free to ignore. Based on mapper's style.)

00:02:328 (1) - Evident finish at the beginning? As well at 00:04:658 (1).
00:14:997 (6) - Finish at beginning?

Inherited Timing Points/Volume
(Overall volume of the beatmap to induce a certain style and effect on the player.)

00:48:784 (3) - Does any other difficulty have a kiai burst? Might want to look into that.

New Combos
(Used to introduce a new phrase and/or pattern, the following suggest consistency within your map.)

00:09:900 (1,2,3,4) - Remove new combo on (1), new combo on (4) to keep consistent with your new combos.
00:12:667 (4) - New combo.
00:20:386 (1) - Why the new combo?
00:22:425 (5) - New combo?
00:33:784 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - These new combos are so hard to read, can't you just keep consistent please? ;w;
00:40:629 (5) - New combo.
00:46:599 (3) - New combo? The combo is too long in comparison to your previous switches of the same section before.
00:49:512 (5,6,1) - New combo on (5), remove new combo on (1) to keep consistent with the vocals like it already is.
01:18:638 (1) - Remove new combo? Unless it's used to help with the drain since this section is less dense than others.

~~Makar will mod the easy~~ actually he decided to mod the whole set... sorry ;w;
If you have any questions, contact me in any form.

Last edited by Xakyrie 2012-07-20T20:16:00+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Makar

osu! Alumni

2,258 posts

Joined February 2011

Makar 2012-07-20T07:22:55+00:00

nomnomnom

[General]

nomnomnom

[Laurier's Easy]

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[Clivery's Normal]

nomnomnom

[Melo's Hard]

nomnomnom

[Wmf's Taiko]

nomnom- owait it went poof

[Insane]

nomnomnom

aren't I the best modder ever

I would love to look at this after those' and Xakyrie's mods are applied =w=

Frostmourne

osu! Alumni

3,737 posts

Joined November 2009

Frostmourne 2012-07-20T12:27:41+00:00

@Xakyrie

create your own diff and post here

be the guest diff for Mythol !

also , you are killing Mythol and Cilvery , I'd say

Gamu

Elite Mapper

2,606 posts

Joined December 2010

Gamu 2012-08-24T14:34:22+00:00

hi~

Request from in-game (Normal only)

[Normal]

●00:24:464 (2) - Remove whistle (00:24:464). and Add whistle (00:25:046) I thunk so.
●00:31:017 (2) - hmm... Remove slider. and 00:30:871~00:31:163 - Add slider. Will be easy to take the rhythm. http://puu.sh/YmI4
●00:46:017 (2) - whistle → finish change (00:46:599) [volume 40%]
●01:13:978 (3) - Move (x:440 y:160). I think it will be good.

That's all~

good luck~ :3

meiikyuu

1,704 posts

Joined August 2011

meiikyuu 2012-08-24T15:00:41+00:00

mod from request ~~

Frostmourne's Normal

00:10:774 (3) - place a whistle at the end so that it stays consistent with the whistles on 00:08:735 (4,5) -
00:23:298 (1) - place whistle at the beginning instead so that it matches the whistle at 00:24:464 (2) - ?
00:30:289 (1,2,3) - this pattern with these notes seemed a little funny on first play through (and i also noticed that 00:30:871 - has a beat but theres no note), so how about this pattern xD:
01:02:910 (3) - NC
01:14:269 (4) - not a big deal, but maybe you can make this curve neater (i posted a code too if you want):
```
452,272,74269,2,0,B|416:292|372:276,1,69.9999999999999,10|4
```
01:27:959 (2) - shorten to 1/2 slider ~ follows the rock instrument
If you followed the above suggestion, then remove the finish at the end (:

nice map and hitsounds, gl ~♥

Frostmourne

osu! Alumni

3,737 posts

Joined November 2009

Frostmourne 2012-08-24T15:41:48+00:00

-Gamu- wrote:
hi~

Request from in-game (Normal only)

[Normal]

●00:24:464 (2) - Remove whistle (00:24:464). and Add whistle (00:25:046) I thunk so. I think so o.o
●00:31:017 (2) - hmm... Remove slider. and 00:30:871~00:31:163 - Add slider. Will be easy to take the rhythm. http://puu.sh/YmI4 I fixed it with my way , don't know how to elaborate them =_=
●00:46:017 (2) - whistle → finish change (00:46:599) [volume 40%] a.. whistle becomes more epic so , keep it as it is
●01:13:978 (3) - Move (x:440 y:160). I think it will be good. emm, I prefer that pattern =_= sorry for that

That's all~

good luck~ :3

meiikyuu wrote:
mod from request ~~

Frostmourne's Normal
00:10:774 (3) - place a whistle at the end so that it stays consistent with the whistles on 00:08:735 (4,5) - okay !
00:23:298 (1) - place whistle at the beginning instead so that it matches the whistle at 00:24:464 (2) - ? did from previous mod
00:30:289 (1,2,3) - this pattern with these notes seemed a little funny on first play through (and i also noticed that 00:30:871 - has a beat but theres no note), so how about this pattern xD: so complicated so explain =.='' but I fixed some ~~

01:02:910 (3) - NC sure :3
01:14:269 (4) - not a big deal, but maybe you can make this curve neater (i posted a code too if you want): Thanks for code so much , I tried to fix it by myself as you guided from picture
452,272,74269,2,0,B|416:292|372:276,1,69.9999999999999,10|4
01:27:959 (2) - shorten to 1/2 slider ~ follows the rock instrument sure, my mistake Dx
If you followed the above suggestion, then remove the finish at the end (:
nice map and hitsounds, gl ~♥

Thank you guys for modding much

/ o:\

Frostmourne's Hard

osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: Daydream Syndrome (TV Size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 55337
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Daydream Syndrome (TV Size)
Artist:Fujiwara Marina
Creator:Mythol
Version:Frostmourne's Normal
Source:Yumekui Merry
Tags:dream eater opening Laurier Melophobia Frostmourne

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:0.699999999999999
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"daydream.jpg"
Video,-167,"Merry.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,0,0,0

[TimingPoints]
-2,291.26213592233,4,2,0,10,1,0
2328,-100,4,1,1,80,0,0
6988,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0
7061,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
15289,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
16308,-125,4,2,1,70,0,0
16381,-125,4,2,1,50,0,0
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32036,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
34949,-125,4,2,1,50,0,0
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55774,-100,4,1,1,100,0,1
55847,-100,4,1,1,70,0,1
65095,-100,4,1,1,100,0,1
65167,-100,4,1,1,70,0,1
74561,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,104,104
Combo2 : 255,128,192
Combo3 : 165,255,74
Combo4 : 234,0,234

[HitObjects]
256,192,580,12,12,2328
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Melophobia

osu! Alumni

2,230 posts

Joined September 2011

Melophobia 2012-08-24T15:44:36+00:00

[Normal]
00:00:580 (1) - start this at 00:00:871 - like other diffs!
00:20:677 (3) - i think this slider should start from 00:20:531 - since the beginning doesnt follow anything
00:25:629 (1,2) - use 1.2x here
00:26:794 (4) - try this rhythm~
http://puu.sh/YnkW
00:26:939 - whistle here cuz 00:29:269 - has it
00:31:454 (3,1) - why jump here..? yeah it suits the music very well but i think you shouldnt make jump in Normal
00:34:949 (1) - place this at 1.5x to make spacing look same as 1.2x
00:46:017 (2) - since 00:46:599 - is much louder than others. you shouldnt follow it with slider end. also feels the next section empty. so try this rhythm~
http://puu.sh/Ynta
00:55:774 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - i think you can make this section a bit easier since compared with next part(01:05:095 (1,2,3,1,2,3)) - it's too hard
01:11:939 (4) - mb this rhythm is better http://puu.sh/YnBH
01:27:959 (2) - i agree with meiikyuu but dont remove finish plz~ it fits music well and hard and insane have it

not a full mod>< maybe i will recheck after some mods

Frostmourne

osu! Alumni

3,737 posts

Joined November 2009

Frostmourne 2012-08-24T17:38:03+00:00

Melophobia wrote:
[Normal]
00:00:580 (1) - start this at 00:00:871 - like other diffs! ! ah my mistake =_=
00:20:677 (3) - i think this slider should start from 00:20:531 - since the beginning doesnt follow anything huh? it does actually follow keyboard sound in the music o_o!!
00:25:629 (1,2) - use 1.2x here ok !
00:26:794 (4) - try this rhythm~ ahh thanks for that but I want to follow guitar here o.o''
http://puu.sh/YnkW
00:26:939 - whistle here cuz 00:29:269 - has it added~~~~~~~~~
00:31:454 (3,1) - why jump here..? yeah it suits the music very well but i think you shouldnt make jump in Normal ahh it should not be made in normal diff but I want to keep 1.0SV part at 1.2x and 0.8SV at 1.4x so between these SV, I have already set it to 1.4x \:D/
This is totally for consistency of the diff ._.
00:34:949 (1) - place this at 1.5x to make spacing look same as 1.2x I don't really no how it is better but fixed
00:46:017 (2) - since 00:46:599 - is much louder than others. you shouldnt follow it with slider end. also feels the next section empty. so try this rhythm~ I have some.. idea about following the vocal as you have suggested me but I want to let it blank at this period , with almost maximum of volume here , it can emphasize its voice and fit it very well so leave it here~~ it's my intention in the first place
http://puu.sh/Ynta
00:55:774 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - i think you can make this section a bit easier since compared with next part(01:05:095 (1,2,3,1,2,3)) - it's too hard a.. Laurier's Easy is not that easy so I think I should distinguish this spread more clearly. That's why I make it harder than normal because your hard diff also almost becomes Insane diff xDxD , kidding , sorry for that , leave it as it is here~~~
01:11:939 (4) - mb this rhythm is better http://puu.sh/YnBH good rhythm :3 but my intention is to follow the vocal at (4) and change to follow bass sound after that so I will leave it here
01:27:959 (2) - i agree with meiikyuu but dont remove finish plz~ it fits music well and hard and insane have it fixed accordingly ~~

not a full mod>< huh?? isn't it full DxDx ??? maybe i will recheck after some mods

Thanks Melo for modding

Frostmourne's Hard

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Artist:Fujiwara Marina
Creator:Mythol
Version:Frostmourne's Normal
Source:Yumekui Merry
Tags:dream eater opening Laurier Melophobia Frostmourne

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Quilt

1,476 posts

Joined May 2010

Quilt 2012-08-24T18:06:34+00:00

frost!!!!!!!

SPOILER

00:18:347 (4) - http://puu.sh/Yn0O like this?

00:26:794 (4) - reverce slider?

01:18:638 -　add note?

01:18:930 - ^

01:27:959 (2) - 1/2 slider better~~

that's all~

fight mythol!!

Frostmourne

osu! Alumni

3,737 posts

Joined November 2009

Frostmourne 2012-08-24T18:23:59+00:00

Quilt wrote:
frost!!!!!!!

SPOILER
00:18:347 (4) - http://puu.sh/Yn0O like this? thank you xD but no =_=a

00:26:794 (4) - reverce slider? it might be harder ;o

01:18:638 -　add note?

01:18:930 - ^

I will consider it once again ^ :3

01:27:959 (2) - 1/2 slider better~~ yep, sure

that's all~

fight mythol!!

Thank you for modding Quilt

Mythol

1,420 posts

Joined March 2011

Topic Starter

Mythol 2012-08-24T20:18:33+00:00

Frostmourne wrote:
Quilt wrote:
frost!!!!!!!

SPOILER
00:18:347 (4) - http://puu.sh/Yn0O like this? thank you xD but no =_=a

00:26:794 (4) - reverce slider? it might be harder ;o

01:18:638 -　add note?

01:18:930 - ^

I will consider it once again ^ :3

01:27:959 (2) - 1/2 slider better~~ yep, sure

that's all~

fight mythol!!
Thank you for modding Quilt

so where's the diff? ww

Frostmourne

osu! Alumni

3,737 posts

Joined November 2009

Frostmourne 2012-08-25T07:36:20+00:00

damn forgot -*-

NormallllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL

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Artist:Fujiwara Marina
Creator:Mythol
Version:Frostmourne's Normal
Source:Yumekui Merry
Tags:dream eater opening Laurier Melophobia Frostmourne

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Combo3 : 165,255,74
Combo4 : 234,0,234

[HitObjects]
256,192,871,12,12,2328
312,324,3201,6,0,B|196:338|119:264,1,210,2|2
200,60,4658,2,0,B|316:46|393:120,1,210,4|2
436,196,5823,2,0,B|472:216,1,35,0|2
364,284,6405,2,0,B|328:264,1,35,0|6
216,308,6988,6,0,B|168:240,1,69.9999999999999,4|8
92,248,7570,2,0,B|88:212|120:184,1,69.9999999999999,2|8
156,164,8007,2,0,B|204:132|256:148,1,105,2|8
332,188,8735,1,2
332,188,9027,1,10
408,220,9318,6,0,B|444:284,1,69.9999999999999,4|8
392,348,9900,2,0,B|332:364|292:320,1,105,2|2
248,208,10774,2,0,B|232:136,2,69.9999999999999,8|2|10
176,252,11648,6,0,B|140:276|96:252,1,69.9999999999999,4|8
136,176,12231,2,0,B|164:68,1,105,2|2
284,48,13104,1,0
364,72,13396,1,2
408,144,13687,1,10
372,220,13978,6,0,B|372:264,1,35,2|2
288,252,14415,2,0,B|288:296,1,35,2|2
204,292,14852,2,0,B|204:336,1,35,2|6
80,340,15434,6,0,B|36:328|24:284,2,69.9999999999999,2|2|2
112,260,16308,6,0,B|112:200,1,55.9999999999999,4|0
192,212,16891,2,0,B|228:160,1,55.9999999999999
264,160,17328,2,0,B|328:200|400:164,1,140,0|2
428,188,18201,2,0,B|472:112,1,83.9999999999999,0|2
412,64,18930,6,0,B|324:48,1,83.9999999999999,2|2
260,84,19658,2,0,B|188:112|124:72,1,140,0|2
48,52,20677,2,0,B|36:84|56:108,1,55.9999999999999,0|2
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52,300,21988,2,0,B|196:300,1,140,0|2
336,360,23298,6,0,B|388:332|380:260,1,112,0|2
480,144,24464,2,0,B|492:80|440:42,1,112,0|2
252,80,25629,5,4
168,100,25920,2,0,B|96:88,1,69.9999999999999,2|8
56,92,26357,2,0,B|40:128|64:168,1,69.9999999999999,2|2
80,196,26794,2,0,B|104:236,1,35,0|2
196,308,27376,2,0,B|268:320,1,69.9999999999999,2|2
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188,204,29997,1,10
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184,80,31599,2,0,B|304:72,1,105,2|2
460,152,32619,6,0,B|488:224|432:284,1,140,4|10
288,200,33784,2,0,B|220:180|152:216,1,140,2|0
232,364,34949,6,0,B|284:396|340:372,1,112,2|0
448,260,36114,2,0,B|468:144,1,112,2|0
312,116,37279,2,0,B|288:228|380:300,1,196,2|0
180,344,39027,2,0,B|160:312,1,28,2|0
84,304,39464,6,0,B|60:252|88:200,1,105,4|8
160,160,40192,2,0,B|208:148,1,35,0|2
256,208,40629,2,0,B|304:228|368:200,1,105,6|8
432,168,41357,2,0,B|460:196,1,35,0|2
460,276,41794,6,0,B|444:324|376:348,1,105,6|8
300,336,42522,2,0,B|240:300|164:324,2,140,10|2|10
348,212,44269,6,0,B|348:92,2,112,2|0|2
196,252,46017,2,0,B|136:260|96:208,1,112,2|2
288,64,48347,6,0,B|324:40|368:52,1,83.9999999999999,0|4
428,164,49221,2,0,B|448:276,1,105,10|2
380,320,49949,2,0,B|344:276|284:284,1,105,2|10
208,316,50677,2,0,B|168:316,1,35,0|2
92,336,51114,6,0,B|36:256|68:168,1,175,6|10
128,112,52133,1,10
208,136,52425,2,0,B|268:180|344:152,2,140,10|10|6
164,208,53881,6,0,B|168:288,1,69.9999999999999,10|10
244,308,54464,1,10
324,332,54755,2,0,B|372:332,2,35,10|10|10
116,356,55774,6,0,B|72:260,1,105,4|10
116,188,56502,1,0
184,240,56794,1,10
216,268,56939,2,0,B|300:316|388:268,1,175,0|2
440,208,57959,2,0,B|448:136,1,69.9999999999999,8|4
391,75,58541,5,10
312,104,58832,1,0
228,88,59124,2,0,B|192:76,1,35,10|0
136,136,59561,2,0,B|92:144,1,35,2|8
68,220,59997,2,0,B|96:268|164:264,1,105,2|4
272,212,60871,6,0,B|340:176|416:208,1,140,8|10
324,348,62036,2,0,B|256:384|180:352,1,140,10|10
108,328,62910,6,0,B|88:216,1,105,2|2
176,132,63784,2,0,B|200:100,1,35,10|2
272,68,64221,2,0,B|380:88,1,105,10|10
464,176,65095,6,0,B|484:268|424:340,1,175,4|0
340,328,66114,2,0,B|272:300|200:336,1,140,10|10
124,312,66988,2,0,B|88:236,1,69.9999999999999,2|8
12,264,67570,6,0,B|-16:192|12:124,1,140,4|0
92,156,68444,2,0,B|152:200|232:176,1,140,10|8
280,116,69318,2,0,B|320:76|380:96,1,105,2|4
428,212,70192,6,0,B|440:292,1,69.9999999999999,8|0
360,312,70774,2,0,B|337:276,1,35,8|2
232,344,71357,2,0,B|152:320,1,69.9999999999999,10|0
192,244,71939,2,0,B|272:268,1,69.9999999999999,10|4
304,192,72522,5,8
360,132,72813,2,0,B|388:80|448:72,2,105,10|10|8
408,200,73978,1,8
448,272,74269,2,0,B|416:292|380:276,1,69.9999999999999,10|4
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116,344,75871,2,0,B|168:368|216:344,1,105,10|2
296,308,76599,1,10
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352,80,80968,2,0,B|424:116,1,69.9999999999999
360,176,81551,6,0,B|244:212|148:152,1,210,4|0
324,348,83298,2,0,B|400:316,1,69.9999999999999
436,252,83881,6,0,B|456:144,2,105,4|0|0
204,348,85629,2,0,B|128:356|80:296,1,140,0|4
72,212,86502,6,0,B|72:72,1,140
324,80,87959,2,0,B|324:128,1,35,0|4

oh btw, Frostmourne's Hard is wrong. I am used to writing that from my previous guest diff in Darksonic's map -_-

those

3,135 posts

Joined November 2010

those 2012-08-25T11:41:35+00:00

A reminder you still have an outstanding mod(s) yet to be addressed.

Mythol

1,420 posts

Joined March 2011

Topic Starter

Mythol 2012-08-25T12:52:12+00:00

those wrote:
[Insane]
00:09:318 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - What kind of spacing are you using here, and how is it justified? normal 1.0 spacing..? ._.
00:20:531 (2,4) - It would be in your interest to find a pattern where you can stack these two objects, based on how the drum sounds. Additionally, 00:18:201 (2,4) - is good, try to branch from there. current is fine to me \o.o/
00:33:784 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - The degree of overlapping and the inconsistency in spacing makes it very hard to play, especially for a player with opaque or less transparent hitbursts. Additionally, combo pattern here doesn't make a lot of sense; (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) or (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) would make more sense.agree, fixed
00:40:629 (5) - If you flip this vertically, it flows better from (4), and allows you to create a more aesthetically pleasing pattern when you blanket (6). fixed
00:44:706 (4,6) - What's in the music here that isn't at 00:45:871 - or 00:46:454 - (the empty spaces between 00:45:434 (1,2,3) - )? fixed
00:57:959 (6,7,1) - Between this combo pattern and 01:07:425 (1,2,3) - , which is being mapped to the same music, which combo pattern are you going to be using? Try to pick a consistent pattern to use throughout the entire Kiai section; you have multiple instances of inconsistent combo patterns when it comes to a triple before a slider.fixed
01:18:638 (1) - You may want to silence the slider tail at 01:18:930 - , since rhythm effectively falls to 0% volume at the end of "Daydream". Since sliderslide and slidertick both cannot be blank, I suggest a very low volume normal-sliderslide for the whole slider, and silencing the slider tick, and finally silencing the end of the slider, for full effect. lowered vol. a little
01:23:298 (1,2,3,4,1) - Knowing that 01:23:881 (1) - and onward is just copy and paste, you can work with the four earlier objects to fix up the spacing a little bit.sure.

Mod turned out pretty helpful despite its true intentions, ty~

Xakyrie wrote:
I thought I might as well mod the normal (and look at a few other things in the other diffs) before it gets bubbled. :v
Mythol, you're quick to get bubbles aren't you o.o

All of the following suggestions are made based on the most recent update for each colour-coded section.

[General]
Kiai times are inconsistent. While [Laurier's Easy] and [Insane]'s kiai ends at 01:14:269, [Cilvery's Normal] and [Melo's Hard] end at 01:14:561. really its all preference~
Lots of images are used to compensate for the non-native english speakers. Sorry if it's a lot for you to read ><

[Insane]
Beatmap Design/Arrangement
(The basis of the map, such as flow, consistency, and aesthetic design are found here.)
Quick mod (I only meant to mod the normal but oh well)
00:09:318 (1,2) - spacing = what? don't know == fixed
00:16:308 (4) - For aesthetics, you should stack this on (1). feels better being further away than the rest, actually nc'd it too
00:18:930 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - You should attempt to be more consistent with the previous section. For example, 00:20:386 (1,2,3,4,1) should be reflective of 00:18:056 (1,2,3,4,5). eh..
00:18:056 (1,2,3,4,5) - Rearrange the pattern so that (4,5) goes from the top of the diamond to the bottom, so it creates a feeling for the flow into the next pattern, which is very similar in nature. current flow feels much better to the song
00:20:968 (1) - Why not just two notes instead of a slider where it begins and ends to accentuate the sounds here while retaining consistency? boring~
00:33:784 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - How is this even possible to read :v You might want to fix the new combos too. yeah fixed from those
00:37:279 (2) - o_ob ><b
00:40:629 (5) - Better flow if you flip. This will enable you to blanket the next slider, too.yup fixed from those
00:46:599 (3) - Can you justify your use of the squiggle? It doesn't fit at all ._. sounds like her voice is squirming to get out of a small space~
00:48:638 (1,2,3) - The triple doesn't fit, maybe remove the (2)? It still flows nicely. fine as current
00:55:629 (1,2,3) - And this sounds silly even if it's silent. I suggest the same :< ^
01:02:910 (1) - Flip for better flow.what that's not good x.x
01:04:949 (3,4,1) - Again with the triple.
01:18:638 (1) - Justify the use of this please. voice going up and down, why not have slider do the same \o.o/
01:23:735 (4,1) - dat spacingis fine
Hitsounds
(Listed sounds can be used as an overture, feel free to ignore. Based on mapper's style.)
00:02:328 (1) - Evident finish at the beginning? As well at 00:04:658 (1). yup~
00:14:997 (6) - Finish at beginning?nah
Inherited Timing Points/Volume
(Overall volume of the beatmap to induce a certain style and effect on the player.)
00:48:784 (3) - Does any other difficulty have a kiai burst? Might want to look into that.kiai burst is my preference
New Combos
(Used to introduce a new phrase and/or pattern, the following suggest consistency within your map.)
00:09:900 (1,2,3,4) - Remove new combo on (1), new combo on (4) to keep consistent with your new combos.
00:12:667 (4) - New combo.
00:20:386 (1) - Why the new combo?
00:22:425 (5) - New combo?
00:33:784 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - These new combos are so hard to read, can't you just keep consistent please? ;w;
00:40:629 (5) - New combo.
00:46:599 (3) - New combo? The combo is too long in comparison to your previous switches of the same section before.
00:49:512 (5,6,1) - New combo on (5), remove new combo on (1) to keep consistent with the vocals like it already is.
01:18:638 (1) - Remove new combo? Unless it's used to help with the drain since this section is less dense than others.
combos are fine now, so no changes~
~~Makar will mod the easy~~ actually he decided to mod the whole set... sorry ;w;
If you have any questions, contact me in any form.

thx~

Melophobia

osu! Alumni

2,230 posts

Joined September 2011

Melophobia 2012-08-28T04:38:19+00:00

sorry for the late reply ><!

those wrote:
[Hard]
00:25:046 (5,6,1) - A 200% sv increase and some pretty large spacing makes this play really uncomfortably. Keep in mind, it's not only the spacing or the slider velocity that you've gotta fix here; both have to be changed. remapped there. 00:25:774 (2) - is a repeating slider so they are readable enough imo o.o
00:43:687 (8,9) - Stacking here is not recommended. With the amount of speed and flow you have with 00:42:522 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - it's best if you turned this section into something more like 00:34:658 (4,5,1) - . agreed
00:47:619 (3) - Ends a bit too late. Vocals stop at 00:48:056 - white. Additionally, 00:47:619 (3,4) - has a 2.40x spacing, which isn't that great in this context to change the pace. ok~
00:58:104 - Perhaps you can add a circle here, so that 00:57:667 (6,7,8,1) - makes the melody in the Bass stand out. the current one is more rhythmic for me. so I'd like keep my own rhythm as it is here
01:06:988 (6) - Perhaps you can change this into two 1/2 sliders with 180 degree rotation, for the same reason as the above. ^

thanks for the mod~
http://puu.sh/Zxuc

cRyo[iceeicee]

1,885 posts

Joined May 2011

cRyo[iceeicee] 2012-08-29T18:03:11+00:00

evil \(▼□▼メ)/

~~wc3 sword's~~ [Frostmourne's Normal]

bpm is high !
star rating also high!
theoretically AR-5 would be better ^^
y not use blanket sample for sliderticks, some of them sounds weird /x.x\

00:06:988 (1) - body whistle ?
00:08:007 (3) - remove whistle from head and add body whistle (+previous sounds funny \o.o/)
00:09:318 (1) - body w
00:11:648 (1) - body w
00:10:774 (3,1,2) - cute placement o: http://puu.sh/ZYqd
00:18:201 (4) - clap !
00:20:677 (3) - hmm, maybe make similar pattern like 00:17:328 (3,4) - to follow beat sound
00:23:007 - note !
00:23:298 (1) - i think better to place whistle on head cause you can hear some loud sound that appears in music on big white tick, also this 00:24:464 (2) - whistle head + clap tail (clap surely following music better! )
00:27:959 (1,2,3,4) - hmm http://puu.sh/ZYxh
00:30:289 (1,2,3) - hmm http://puu.sh/ZYzG or maybe this http://puu.sh/ZYAC (i just think that you shouldnt skip this 00:30:871 tick, both sliders dont follow perfectly vocal or music for me and its hard to catch pattern rhytm, placing both sliders on white tick also not perfectly following music/vocal but at least its easier to play it ww)
00:33:784 (2) - maybe also clap o:
00:39:464 (1) - also whistle !
00:48:347 (1,2,3) - maybe same rhytm with small sliders ? i think it sounds good ! http://puu.sh/ZYFI
00:59:997 (5,1) - hmmm http://puu.sh/ZYHb
01:04:221 (3) - small slideeeeerssss \oo/ http://puu.sh/ZYIK
01:18:638 - you can add note with S sound
01:19:221 - until end - sound similar with begining part, so you can add same whistles there
01:25:629 (2,1) - ~~and last hmm~~ maybe this ? http://puu.sh/ZYP5

not evil (◕‿◕✿)

Frostmourne

osu! Alumni

3,737 posts

Joined November 2009

Frostmourne 2012-08-30T12:36:48+00:00

cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:
evil \(▼□▼メ)/

~~wc3 sword's~~ [Frostmourne's Normal]

bpm is high !
star rating also high!
theoretically AR-5 would be better ^^ , oh wow , it does work very well
y not use blanket sample for sliderticks, some of them sounds weird /x.x\ nah, I don't think it's a big problem much , fixed some anyways
00:06:988 (1) - body whistle ?
00:08:007 (3) - remove whistle from head and add body whistle (+previous sounds funny \o.o/)
00:09:318 (1) - body w
00:11:648 (1) - body w
orz sorry for not body whistle , I hate adding whistle or hitsound element on the body of slider =.='' so leave it here (I can't listen to those sound clearly also o_oa)
00:10:774 (3,1,2) - cute placement o: http://puu.sh/ZYqd thank you for that but I think my current is also good too !. I intended to let 00:12:231 (2) - far from 00:10:774 (3) - with main distance (1.2) around x:192 y:136 approximately
00:18:201 (4) - clap ! didn't notice that it has soft custom 1 there o_o , added
00:20:677 (3) - hmm, maybe make similar pattern like 00:17:328 (3,4) - to follow beat sound ahh sorry , I prefer keyboard sound as I already told Melo , sorry for not fixing it ..
00:23:007 - note ! added !
00:23:298 (1) - i think better to place whistle on head cause you can hear some loud sound that appears in music on big white tick, also this 00:24:464 (2) - whistle head + clap tail (clap surely following music better! ) added ~~
00:27:959 (1,2,3,4) - hmm http://puu.sh/ZYxh no -.-
00:30:289 (1,2,3) - hmm http://puu.sh/ZYzG or maybe this http://puu.sh/ZYAC (i just think that you shouldnt skip this 00:30:871 tick, both sliders dont follow perfectly vocal or music for me and its hard to catch pattern rhytm, placing both sliders on white tick also not perfectly following music/vocal but at least its easier to play it ww) fixed by emm... starting the slider at 00:30:871 (2) - and extended it 1/2 beat
00:33:784 (2) - maybe also clap o: not maybe but sure !
00:39:464 (1) - also whistle ! kk , both head and tail
00:48:347 (1,2,3) - maybe same rhytm with small sliders ? i think it sounds good ! http://puu.sh/ZYFI emm, harder ? , I prefer current rhythm so leave it here ~~
00:59:997 (5,1) - hmmm http://puu.sh/ZYHb the current is ok =.= !! but thank you for suggestion again !
01:04:221 (3) - small slideeeeerssss \oo/ http://puu.sh/ZYIK !!!!!
01:18:638 - you can add note with S sound added slider o.o''
01:19:221 - until end - sound similar with begining part, so you can add same whistles there tried to add accordingly from first part
01:25:629 (2,1) - ~~and last hmm~~ maybe this ? http://puu.sh/ZYP5 I... think it's ok so leave it here (I try to follow the sound that makes more interesting and sounds good to me)

not evil (◕‿◕✿)

I'm not evil xDxDxDxD

Thank you for modding cRyo !

Frostmourne's Normal

osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: Daydream Syndrome (TV Size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 55337
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Daydream Syndrome (TV Size)
Artist:Fujiwara Marina
Creator:Mythol
Version:Frostmourne's Normal
Source:Yumekui Merry
Tags:dream eater opening Laurier Melophobia Frostmourne

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:0.699999999999999
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"daydream.jpg"
Video,-167,"Merry.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,0,0,0

[TimingPoints]
-2,291.26213592233,4,2,0,10,1,0
2328,-100,4,1,1,80,0,0
6988,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0
7061,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
15289,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
16308,-125,4,2,1,70,0,0
16381,-125,4,2,1,50,0,0
25629,-100,4,1,1,40,0,0
32036,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
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55847,-100,4,1,1,70,0,1
65095,-100,4,1,1,100,0,1
65167,-100,4,1,1,70,0,1
74561,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0
78565,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
79075,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,104,104
Combo2 : 255,128,192
Combo3 : 165,255,74
Combo4 : 234,0,234

[HitObjects]
256,192,871,12,12,2328
312,324,3201,6,0,B|196:338|119:264,1,210,2|2
200,60,4658,2,0,B|316:46|393:120,1,210,4|2
436,196,5823,2,0,B|472:216,1,35,0|2
364,284,6405,2,0,B|328:264,1,35,0|6
216,308,6988,6,0,B|168:240,1,69.9999999999999,4|8
92,248,7570,2,0,B|88:212|120:184,1,69.9999999999999,2|8
156,164,8007,2,0,B|204:132|256:148,1,105,2|8
332,188,8735,1,2
332,188,9027,1,10
408,220,9318,6,0,B|444:284,1,69.9999999999999,4|8
392,348,9900,2,0,B|332:364|292:320,1,105,2|2
248,208,10774,2,0,B|232:136,2,69.9999999999999,8|2|10
176,252,11648,6,0,B|140:276|96:252,1,69.9999999999999,4|8
136,176,12231,2,0,B|164:68,1,105,2|2
284,48,13104,1,0
364,72,13396,1,2
408,144,13687,1,10
372,220,13978,6,0,B|372:264,1,35,2|2
288,252,14415,2,0,B|288:296,1,35,2|2
204,292,14852,2,0,B|204:336,1,35,2|6
80,340,15434,6,0,B|36:328|24:284,2,69.9999999999999,2|2|2
112,260,16308,6,0,B|148:148,1,112,4|2
264,160,17328,2,0,B|328:200|400:164,1,140,0|2
428,188,18201,2,0,B|472:112,1,83.9999999999999,8|2
412,64,18930,6,0,B|324:48,1,83.9999999999999,2|2
260,84,19658,2,0,B|188:112|124:72,1,140,0|2
48,52,20677,2,0,B|36:84|56:108,1,55.9999999999999,0|2
104,164,21260,6,0,B|128:204|104:248,1,83.9999999999999,0|2
52,300,21988,2,0,B|196:300,1,140,0|2
260,336,23007,1,0
336,360,23298,6,0,B|388:332|380:260,1,112,2|2
480,144,24464,2,0,B|492:80|440:42,1,112,2|8
252,80,25629,5,4
168,100,25920,2,0,B|96:88,1,69.9999999999999,2|8
56,92,26357,2,0,B|40:128|64:168,1,69.9999999999999,2|2
80,196,26794,2,0,B|104:236,1,35,0|2
196,308,27376,2,0,B|268:320,1,69.9999999999999,2|2
344,352,27959,6,0,B|388:364|416:336,2,69.9999999999999,4|2|8
316,320,28687,2,0,B|304:248,1,69.9999999999999,2|2
364,192,29269,2,0,B|324:152|268:172,1,105,2|2
188,204,29997,1,10
104,212,30289,6,0,B|24:212,1,69.9999999999999,4|2
16,128,30871,2,0,B|104:60,1,105,10|2
184,80,31599,2,0,B|304:72,1,105,2|2
460,152,32619,6,0,B|488:224|432:284,1,140,4|10
288,200,33784,2,0,B|220:180|152:216,1,140,2|8
232,364,34949,6,0,B|284:396|340:372,1,112,2|0
448,260,36114,2,0,B|468:144,1,112,2|0
312,116,37279,2,0,B|288:228|380:300,1,196,2|0
180,344,39027,2,0,B|160:312,1,28,2|0
84,304,39464,6,0,B|60:252|88:200,1,105,6|10
160,160,40192,2,0,B|208:148,1,35,0|2
256,208,40629,2,0,B|304:228|368:200,1,105,6|10
432,168,41357,2,0,B|460:196,1,35,0|2
460,276,41794,6,0,B|444:324|376:348,1,105,6|8
300,336,42522,2,0,B|240:300|164:324,2,140,10|6|10
348,212,44269,6,0,B|348:92,2,112,2|0|2
196,252,46017,2,0,B|136:260|96:208,1,112,2|2
288,64,48347,6,0,B|324:40|368:52,1,83.9999999999999,0|6
428,164,49221,2,0,B|448:276,1,105,10|2
380,320,49949,2,0,B|344:276|284:284,1,105,6|10
208,316,50677,2,0,B|168:316,1,35,0|2
92,336,51114,6,0,B|36:256|68:168,1,175,6|10
128,112,52133,1,10
208,136,52425,2,0,B|268:180|344:152,2,140,10|10|6
164,208,53881,6,0,B|168:288,1,69.9999999999999,10|10
244,308,54464,1,10
324,332,54755,2,0,B|372:332,2,35,10|10|10
116,356,55774,6,0,B|72:260,1,105,4|10
116,188,56502,1,0
184,240,56794,1,10
216,268,56939,2,0,B|300:316|388:268,1,175,0|2
440,208,57959,2,0,B|448:136,1,69.9999999999999,8|4
391,75,58541,5,10
312,104,58832,1,0
228,88,59124,2,0,B|192:76,1,35,10|0
136,136,59561,2,0,B|92:144,1,35,2|8
68,220,59997,2,0,B|96:268|164:264,1,105,2|4
272,212,60871,6,0,B|340:176|416:208,1,140,8|10
324,348,62036,2,0,B|256:384|180:352,1,140,10|10
108,328,62910,6,0,B|88:216,1,105,6|2
176,132,63784,2,0,B|200:100,1,35,10|2
280,80,64221,2,0,B|328:68,1,35,0|10
396,92,64658,2,0,B|440:100,1,35,0|2
464,176,65095,6,0,B|484:268|424:340,1,175,4|0
340,328,66114,2,0,B|272:300|200:336,1,140,10|10
124,312,66988,2,0,B|88:236,1,69.9999999999999,2|8
12,264,67570,6,0,B|-16:192|12:124,1,140,4|0
92,156,68444,2,0,B|152:200|232:176,1,140,10|8
280,116,69318,2,0,B|320:76|380:96,1,105,2|4
428,212,70192,6,0,B|440:292,1,69.9999999999999,8|0
360,312,70774,2,0,B|337:276,1,35,8|2
232,344,71357,2,0,B|152:320,1,69.9999999999999,10|0
192,244,71939,2,0,B|272:268,1,69.9999999999999,10|4
304,192,72522,5,8
360,132,72813,2,0,B|388:80|448:72,2,105,10|10|8
408,200,73978,1,8
448,272,74269,2,0,B|416:292|380:276,1,69.9999999999999,10|4
268,228,74997,6,0,B|216:204|168:228,1,105,10|6
116,344,75871,2,0,B|168:368|216:344,1,105,10|2
296,308,76599,1,10
268,228,76891,6,0,B|304:184|364:196,1,105,6|10
452,284,77764,2,0,B|472:176,1,105,14|2
408,72,78638,2,0,B|372:52|336:76,1,69.9999999999999
300,144,79221,6,0,B|252:248|136:256,1,210,6|2
388,284,80968,2,0,B|432:216,1,69.9999999999999,2|0
360,176,81551,6,0,B|244:212|148:152,1,210,6|2
324,348,83298,2,0,B|400:316,1,69.9999999999999,2|0
436,252,83881,6,0,B|456:144,2,105,6|0|2
204,348,85629,2,0,B|128:356|80:296,1,140,2|4
72,212,86502,6,0,B|72:72,1,140,0|2
324,80,87959,2,0,B|324:128,1,35,2|4

wonders

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wonders 2012-08-31T15:15:32+00:00

hi
[insane]
00:34:949 i think volume to 30％ is better

Mythol

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Mythol 2012-08-31T16:04:33+00:00

angelfix wrote:
hi
[insane]
00:34:949 i think volume to 30％ is better

wow didn't notice this D:
fixed to 35% for both slow parts~~
ty

Chewin

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Chewin 2012-09-04T19:12:53+00:00

Hi Mythol, here's my mod from my special queue :3

[General]
Maybe It can be just me but I dislike the huge difficulty jump from the Easy and Normal diff. I think the actual Normal is too hard to be just the second diff of the mapset :\

[Laurier's Easy]
00:04:658 (2) - I'd use finish to match the cymbals in the song
00:13:978 (3) - New combo according the new rhythm?
00:23:298 (3) - I think new combo here would flow better because you are starting to map following the vocal while during the previous part: 00:17:182 (1,2,1,2) you were mapping following the music
00:37:279 (4) - You should reduce this slider by 1/4 like the normal diff to fit the vocal sound
00:51:842 (1,3) - Claps?
01:04:658 (1) - I can hear a sound similar to the custom hitclap, add it then?
01:26:211 (3) - New combo to keep consistency with 01:21:551 (1)

[Frostmourne's Normal]
00:05:823 (3) - To use just a whistle on the slider's end could be confusing or at least I think it is.
I'd add whistle on the head too like you did for 00:03:201 (1)
00:06:405 (4) - ^
The map is really flowing but there is the problem I wrote above in General :\

[Melo's Hard]
00:15:434 (4) - I'd new combo according the new sound
00:25:629 (1,2) - This sudden increase of speed between 2 elements snapped by 1/2 is enough confusing and unexpected during gameplay. Honestly, I'd move this slider 1/2 later to fit the vocal's sound
01:14:561 (1,3,5,6) - I think that some whistles on (1), (3), (5,6)'s heads would be awesome
01:16:891 (1,3) - ^
01:21:551 (1) - Finish to match the cymbals in the song
01:23:881 (1) - ^
01:26:211 (1) - ^

[Insane]
00:16:308 (1) - Overlap with 00:16:308 (1)?
00:17:182 (3) - I would remove this circle to keep consistency with 00:19:803. It seems so overmapped to me
00:21:842 (3) - ^

That's all, good luck mythol ;3

Mythol

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Mythol 2012-09-22T00:51:29+00:00

Chewin wrote:
Hi Mythol, here's my mod from my special queue :3 Sorry for late reply :<

[General]
Maybe It can be just me but I dislike the huge difficulty jump from the Easy and Normal diff. I think the actual Normal is too hard to be just the second diff of the mapset :\ Agree Easy and Normal difficulty spread is big.. but I think it is even with other diffs (E>N, N>H, H>I) All diffs are very hard ;~;

[Frostmourne's Normal]
00:05:823 (3) - To use just a whistle on the slider's end could be confusing or at least I think it is.
I'd add whistle on the head too like you did for 00:03:201 (1)
00:06:405 (4) - ^
The map is really flowing but there is the problem I wrote above in General :\
All fixed~

[Insane]
00:16:308 (1) - Overlap with 00:16:308 (1)?
00:17:182 (3) - I would remove this circle to keep consistency with 00:19:803. It seems so overmapped to me
00:21:842 (3) - ^
No changes here.. ;_;
That's all, good luck mythol ;3

ty ^^/

Frostmourne

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Frostmourne 2012-09-25T13:16:23+00:00

why are you so slow mapper like this Mythol !!! ;_;

Mythol

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Mythol 2012-09-25T22:52:19+00:00

Frostmourne wrote:
why are you so slow mapper like this Mythol !!! ;_;

sorry.. ;_;

YTYuyu

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YTYuyu 2012-09-26T00:22:14+00:00

hmm...alright i'll see what i can do to help out.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. I'll give you my opinion, advice, or if i'm just curious about something.

[General]
CLEAR!

[Laurier's Easy]
00:04:658 (2) - remove the repeat on this slider and add a 1/1 slider beside this slider for a smoother flow in the guitar. i'm not feeling the flow in this repeat slider at all during gameplay.
00:27:959 (3) - i'm feeling a soft finish here, but at the same time, add a timing point to reduce the volume of the finish because without it, it sounds too loud IMO.
00:30:289 (1) - ^
00:37:279 (4) - i'm sorry but this is unrankable. silent notes are a no no in mapping. increase the volume to at least 20% to make it rankable.
00:46:599 (3) - ^
00:59:997 (4) - i'm feeling a finish at the end for emphasis in the vocals and guitar.
01:03:493 (3) - reduce this slider by 1/2 because that's where the vocals end, and there nothing but the hold in the guitar that follows that end.
01:26:211 (3) - make this a NC for consistency in the combos in this part of the song.

[Ahh Frosty~]
maybe it's just me, but perhaps you can increase the HP and OD by 1 for a bit of a challenge for players since the BPM in this is high?
00:56:939 (4) - this slider should be reduced by 1/1 and a circle should be there to follow the instrumental accurately. as well as the flow. i feel that by doing this, it'll increase during gameplay IMO.
hmm i like this diff. nice use of hitsounds, flow can be better but what can you do

.

[Melo-chan~]
00:02:328 (1) - i'm feeling a finish at the beginning to give off a nice start to the song, and also i think this plays nicely with the guitar during gameplay IMO.
00:04:658 (1) - ^
00:15:434 (4) - NC here. it follows the mini clashes in the cymbals.
00:16:017 (3) - missing a whistle here? add it because the clash is still going.

[Insane]
00:55:629 - change this to a soft sampleset and remove the claps because it gets in the way in the vocals during gameplay IMO.

i'll be honest i'm hesitant in bubbling this because the gap from easy to normal is too big...if Laurier can get the diff to 2 stars, then i'll be happy to re-check this mapset.

Mythol

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Mythol 2012-09-26T01:20:41+00:00

Mine and Frost diff all fixed~
I'll ask Laurier about Easy.. :<

Melophobia

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Melophobia 2012-10-01T13:32:49+00:00

> byaku
Fixed everything, thanks a lot!

YTYuyu

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YTYuyu 2012-10-16T00:42:04+00:00

ok re-check~. no kd for this post.

[Laurier's Easy]
01:16:599 (1) - replace this for a circle and a slider ending at the red tick as it follows the vocals accurately. this slider doesn't fit in the change of the lyrics because the lyrics change at the downbeat, and the hold ruins the flow in the vocals.

[Insane]
00:10:337 (4) - try to make this a 4 point slider so that it'd look parallel to (6)...something like this

SPOILER

208,212,10337,2,0,B|248:176|248:80|176:40,1,180,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

00:39:464 (1) - can you stack this on (5) perfectly? i think doing this would make the transition look smoother in this part IMO.

and that's all for now.

Laurier

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Laurier 2012-10-16T10:42:49+00:00

http://puu.sh/1fpVu
It's mean this ...?

YTYuyu

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YTYuyu 2012-10-16T19:59:41+00:00

yes like that and also, can you add a whistle at the beginning for consistency with the other parts since they follow the cymbals?

EDIT:alright now that it's added, i think it's ready, so here you go~

Yuzeyun

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Yuzeyun 2012-10-16T21:06:08+00:00

/rage

Why didn't I know about that map to make two taiko diffs... ;______;

Mythol

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Mythol 2012-10-17T01:21:32+00:00

;_;

Yuzeyun

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Yuzeyun 2012-10-17T06:49:30+00:00

I can make them but reallly it is a dilemma since you got bubbled and I would only slow down the ranking of your map. ;_______;

If you are really confident and and trust me I can make them but you will wait a little longer for the ranking... /cryMoely

Mythol

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Mythol 2012-10-17T14:18:01+00:00

sorry can't wait..
this map took much longer than I hoped already :<

Andrea

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Andrea 2012-10-17T23:45:06+00:00

IRC Modded.

SPOILER

01:33 *Andrea is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/162682 Fujiwara Marina - Daydream Syndrome (TV Size) [Laurier's Easy]]
01:34 Mythol:
01:35 *Andrea is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/174229 Fujiwara Marina - Daydream Syndrome (TV Size) [Frostmourne's Normal]]
01:35 Andrea: OD +1?
01:35 Mythol: ok
01:37 *Andrea is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/161224 Fujiwara Marina - Daydream Syndrome (TV Size) [Melo's Hard]]
01:38 Andrea: 00:25:629 (1) - remove new combo and add it on next note?
01:38 Mythol: I think current is better..
01:39 Andrea: 01:14:269 (7) - new combo and remove on 1?
01:39 Andrea: 01:16:308 (5) - same
01:39 *Andrea is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/159335 Fujiwara Marina - Daydream Syndrome (TV Size) [Insane]]
01:40 Mythol: same for those.. orz
01:41 Andrea: 00:55:337 (4) - new combo
01:41 Mythol: kk
01:42 Andrea: 01:16:308 (7) - same and remove on next note
01:42 Mythol: er.. thats the same suggestion as hard
01:42 Andrea: 01:27:959 (1,2) - place them at the center?
01:42 Mythol: i prefer this combo o:
01:42 Andrea: kk
01:42 Andrea: nothing else